Reviewer: GutterDaisy
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:41 am
Title: Chapter Four
I really like this story and hope you continue it. I'm very curious about the situation that Spike is in and about the little girl. Who is the father? Spike? I really want to find out.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/19/2007 - 03:53 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Spike's soul is taking the form of William when talking to him, telling him he had done wrong.
So Spike received the call; that was the easy part, not so hard like fighting the temptation to call another number.
Oh bugger indeed. I hope Spike didn't get himself in trouble now. Evil cliffhanger *nods*
Author's Response: He's being pulled different ways: the soul, the demon, then himself. Kind of makes you wonder who he really is... thanks so much!
Reviewer: Pin Signed
Date: 11/19/2007 - 07:54 am
Title: Chapter One
This looks very interesting. I like the way youportray Xander as much more mature and thoughtful. He's usually far from a favorite character of mine, so this is nice change. The new location and passage of time lets SunnyD be in the past, which is also very nice. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks.
Author's Response: I've always believed Xander could a more mature character, even though he wasn't always portrayed as such on the show. I am glad you're enjoying this. Thankyou!
Reviewer: Pin Signed
Date: 11/19/2007 - 07:52 am
Title: Chapter One
Very nice start to a new idea. I like the way you portray xander as actually having matured. He's usually nto a favorite of mine, so this is a really nice change. Like the new location and the way you approach their meeting. As if SunnyD is far behind them. Looking forward to more. Thanks!
Author's Response: He's usually not a fav of mine either. I'm so glad you're liking this story : ) Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Katkin
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2007 - 03:47 am
Title: Chapter Four
Nooooo you can't leave it there!!!
Hey hun! glad I found you again really love this fic so please hurry and write more... hope none of my readers read this, they'd cock an eyebrow and make a tsking sound ! lol (haven't updated) Hope that your muse continues to inspire you because this is bloody brilliant! xxx
Author's Response: I always do hate cliffhangers myself ... especially if the next chapter isn't up. But I was feeling particularly evil : ). I will try to get up the next chapter soon. Thanks so much for the review : )
Reviewer: TwilightChild
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2007 - 10:05 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Yes, yes YES! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! Been looking everywhere for this fic, LOVE seeing more of it! Very true to character, and the story line snags and doesn't let go. MWHAHAHAHA!
Author's Response: I seriously giggled when I read this review. I am so glad you still like this ... I try to stay true to character, but I don't always know if I am. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: jennifer
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2007 - 08:43 pm
Title: Chapter Four
i really like this story! I'm looking forward to much more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you continue to like it : )
Reviewer: dicecanntcry
Anonymous
Date: 11/04/2007 - 09:04 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Love it! ;)
Author's Response: yay! Thankyou!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/31/2007 - 02:01 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Naw, don't tell. I like 'guessing' a lot :-D
Seems Spike has found a promising lead. But trials... well Spike is a grown vamp he should be able to manage it if Don did ;-)
When Spike gets in this should help a lot. ~ Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Things are not always what they seem ... but it does seem a promising lead, doesn't it? Time will only tell ... thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 10/30/2007 - 09:30 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Definitely love it. Of course, as you no doubt intend, I am full of theories about the baby and why they're all in NY without Giles... and whether the lawyers are something to do with W&H and Angel...
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you're enjoying this : ) I won't say what's going to happen ... part of not knowing is what makes it fun, yeah? Thanks!
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2007 - 06:36 pm
Title: Chapter Three
still lovin it-want to know more about Buffys baby but I am sure that will come
Author's Response: It will come ... soon, perhaps. mwhahah. Anyways, thanks!
Reviewer: dureeena
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2007 - 05:46 pm
Title: Chapter Three
fucking great
you better continue ;-)
Author's Response: I fucking will! Thanks for the review : )
Reviewer: Jenn
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2007 - 12:46 pm
Title: Chapter Three
I just read the first three chapters and I'm loving it. I love that you have Xander as the main character. I also love that you have him seriously growing up. I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really wanted to show Xander in a different light than he is usually portrayed ... I'm glad you like it : )
Reviewer: sour
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2007 - 04:35 am
Title: Chapter Three
Still loving it!!! Still wondering about the kid and how Buffy and Spike will meet!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for loving it : ) All questions will be, eventually, answered :)
Reviewer: TwilightChild
Anonymous
Date: 10/29/2007 - 08:58 pm
Title: Chapter Two
LOVE IT! So very real. I love how you flesh out the characters. Little things from Spike sniffing around, then at himself, to the little problems at with Buffy and Willow. There's detail, there's background, and there's good character voices. I'm definitely enjoying it so far, please continue when you can.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing : ) I love that you're catching the little things. I've always felt the little things are important in a story...sometimes they're relevant, sometimes not. Thanks again : )
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 10/29/2007 - 07:32 pm
Title: Chapter Three
read first three chapters and I'm hooked
hope Buffy doesn't think Spike is really one of the Newblood and i bet the child is spikes
really looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it : ) I can't say what's gonna happen ... but I hope I don't dissapoint : )
Reviewer: Katkin
Anonymous
Date: 10/22/2007 - 09:22 am
Title: Chapter Two
Next chapter please!
And who is the baby girl?
I wanna know now!!!!!
Lol please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You'll find out about the little girl before too long. I'm glad you like it : )
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Great chapter, so when does Spike meet his child?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! You think it's his kid, huh? Well...time will only tell.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter Two
Great fic so far, was all ready to hate Xander for not telling anyone about Spike then I find out he's doing it to protect him from what he thinks will be the wrath of Buffy an Dawn, Oh and I so know the kid is his, can't wait for the big reunion.
Author's Response: I was a bit worried that I wouldn't be able to pull off Xander as a nicer character than is usually portrayed (not that is a bad thing; I've read many fic's where a prick-like Xander is perfect : )
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter Two
love it-had me going there about the little girl, thought she must be xander & anya's but she's obviously buffy & spike's--yes?
Author's Response: She is definitely not Anya and Xander's. That's all I'll say : )
Reviewer: jan
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:26 am
Title: Chapter Two
Really like it. Glad Xander is a good guy in this... too often he's the scapewgoat meanie. Keep going.
Author's Response: That's was my thought too. I wanted to write Xander in a better light. I see potential in his character (though he pissed me off on the show quite frequently).
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 07:27 am
Title: Chapter Two
Buffy with baby-hmm? Like it better when Xander is not with the jealous Spike hate.
Enjoying.
Author's Response: I know what you mean here. While in a lot of fic's the whole Xander hating Spike thing works, and it works well, sometimes I like to read a story where Xander isn't all jealous and spiteful. Not that I can promise he'll always be so good throughout this fic.
Reviewer: Inarra Signed
Date: 10/18/2007 - 06:50 am
Title: Chapter Two
My curiosity is piqued, is she Spikes? I do hope so... Xander is still a sop , sorry not a Xander fan... he needs to stop playing god with peoples lives... nothing really changes with him... still knowing what's best for Buffy...
Update soon... great story!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. I think Xander will always have a slight god complex. Trying to control people, even if he doesn't always realize it. But don't write him off too quickly : )
Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed
Date: 10/18/2007 - 06:40 am
Title: Chapter Two
Yeah liked it! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Bernardette
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2007 - 06:20 am
Title: Chapter Two
love the chapter. need more info cant wait to read more
Author's Response: I'm very happy you loved it : ) Thanks so much
