Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 08:40 am
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: Silver
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2013 - 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Really when the hell did she even start having feeling for him? I think you missed a few chapters, all if a sudden he's sleeping in her bed?
Reviewer: Red
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2013 - 10:15 pm
Title: Chapter 2
You should have had someone proofread this the crammed and spelling is horrible and dusracting, you also go way to fast in the story and jump around to much
Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed
Date: 07/15/2012 - 12:13 am
Title: Epi
Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.
Dani
Reviewer: Spikeluverfan101 Signed
Date: 10/08/2010 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter 29
Bonnie Tyler sings the original..just thought you'd want to know
Reviewer: Anne
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 05:32 pm
Title: Epi
I'm sorry, but you really can't write! Your ideas were good but there are too many typos and other grammar mistakes; even I (English is not my language) noticed. You should have used a beta reader.
Reviewer: seductive danger
Anonymous
Date: 02/02/2007 - 09:52 pm
Title: Epi
I love the basic idea and plot for this story, but it was horribly written. I’m not trying to be mean, just tell you the truth. Problems: Number one- you pulled the characters too far out of character (that’s just my opinion, not something that is really wrong with your story). Number two- you skip whole scenes then talk about them as if you had written, it is confusing as HELL. Number three- you skip words and mix up words ALL THE TIME. Number four- you misspell A LOT.
As I said before I’m not trying to be mean, I think you could be a great writer; you just need someone to read over your work before you post.
Author's Response:
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/2006 - 06:36 pm
Title: Epi
Loved this fic! Will be looking forward to the sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/16/2006 - 06:23 pm
Title: Epi
Oh a time jump. Love when a story ends this way. ~ So there is a prophecy about Buffy becoming pregnant? I'll try to look out for a sequel. :)
Author's Response: Never even relised til it was complete that I left room for a sequel. Most likely a short one.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/16/2006 - 06:17 pm
Title: Chapter 32
Mmm it would be convenient if they had the ring :)
And the food being sometimes bland? A disadvantage to be connected to Spike now.
And only one more chapter left.
Author's Response: Thanks. never thought of a ring.
Reviewer: anon
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2006 - 08:39 pm
Title: Chapter 32
lame
Author's Response:
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2006 - 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 32
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2006 - 09:51 am
Title: Chapter 32
yeah, there all immortal! almost to the end, which is very sad. :(
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2006 - 03:26 pm
Title: Chapter 31
Yes, you know that Buffy, Spike, Angel, Cordelia, Rupert and Drusilla are now totally immortal, nothing can kill them. = Cordelia and Rupert are immortal now? If they had the option or not, as I read it they are immortal now. *scratches head confused ~ I think I misunderstood your comment*
Hehe Anya is fun :) Even Whistler thinks that *gg*
If they get to be immortal they can still be together as a family / friends in the future. Normal people (friends) that are no vamps will die. So it's a good thing.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2006 - 07:10 pm
Title: Chapter 31
Loved the chapter! Will be sorry to see this fic end.
Author's Response: I know me to, I typed the last 2 chapters last night.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 12/09/2006 - 10:30 am
Title: Chapter 31
great update, wow they can be immortal, but does awn really want to stay that same age for her whole existince? anyway can't wait for the next udate!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/2006 - 05:32 pm
Title: Chapter 30
Unfortunaly they didn't have the option of being immortal. I did read it this way: By the time this is done Buffy, Rupert and Cordelia will all be immortal, are there any questions. And your summary of the last chapter says it too: The Ritual comes to an end, Buffy Giles and Cordelia become Immortal *is confused*
Awe, good old times ;-) Another "Welcome to Sunnydale" sign is down *gg*
But Xander doesn't know when to be quiet ;-)
Author's Response: No unfortunaly they did not get the choice like everyone else. At first it was just going to be Buffy but then I realized she needed a higher power with knowledge to help her out and if you we inculding Angels team, might as well give Angel someone he loves for life, So the original mating of Dru an Angelus was voided guess there is a way for divorce
Reviewer: jane
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/2006 - 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 1
Super update.
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:28 pm
Title: Chapter 30
yeah, xander never knows when to keep quiet. great update and i can't wait to see more spuffy stuff like this it was adorabl with them on the sofa.
Author's Response: Thanks, not sure how much more spuffy like the sofa with be there are only a few more chapters.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:18 pm
Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/29/2006 - 04:27 pm
Title: Chapter 29
So Buffy is immortal at last. Thought so that Giles and Cordelia would take the option (being immortal) too.
Author's Response: Unfortunaly they didn't have the option of being immortal. ThaNKS
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2006 - 06:58 pm
Title: Chapter 29
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:06 am
Title: Chapter 29
great chapter, yeah she would be sore and tired. loved the par about her being tight and Spike not so big. that added really well. what will happen now since there mated?
Author's Response: Thanks.
I know I channelled Anya for that on. I believe next is Sunnydale been a while since I read it.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/2006 - 12:31 am
Title: Chapter 28
second part done and one more left til the ritual is done. 14 hours straight! wow she has got to be tired. and yeah to no more childe/sire bond cause that would cause a problem in there relationship.
Author's Response: The Ritual but not the full Prophecy yer.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2006 - 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
