Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 06/02/2014 - 09:47 am
Title: One-Shot
So hot, so loving. Wonderful.
Reviewer: tammy
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2007 - 07:37 am
Title: One-Shot
Oh God, this was hot. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: NautiBitz Signed
Date: 09/27/2007 - 06:33 pm
Title: One-Shot
That was HOT.
Author's Response: *gasp* Coming from you, Ms. Queen of Smut, that is a compliment! Thanks!
I used to read your stories back in the day, so it's wonderful seeing you active again, and making the rounds. I met up with Herself a few weeks ago and she said that you paid her a visit for a project you were working on. "You MET NautiBitz!?" *faints* Hee, I totally admire you, lady.
Reviewer: bitchee
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 01:15 pm
Title: One-Shot
Whooee... I'm bloody glad I do smoke cos after that I needed one... er... three.
Loved the place you've taken them, the honesty in her feelings for him. Your Buffy is one that I really like and it's not often I can say that.
Thoroughly enjoyed the security that you managed to convey with Spikes actions, the fact that finally he got the girl and has no doubts or problems expressing himself with her made me just as hot as your finely worded erotica.
It's nice to see Spuffy without the boat load of shame that S6 brought with it.
You are now officially one of my favorite smut writers, expect to see me lurking more.
Author's Response: Ah, I see you friended me at LJ. Welcome aboard the CoC train, hun. And thanks for this lovely and thoughtful review. The honesty, lack of shame, etc. were all plot points that only_passenger (who is a truly gifted Spuffy writer herself) requested, and I really liked shaping her idea into this fic.
I very much like this Buffy, too. She's a bit older, wiser, and comfortable with who she is and what she wants. Based on what we saw on the show, only an older Buffy could reach this state. I also really like writing Buffy sympathetically, while keeping her true to character. We ALL love Spike. That's a given, but I think Buffy gets some unfair knocks. She has an utterly terrible life, and the key to empathizing with her is understanding why she says and does things that are hurtful, distant, and abusive.
I also very much like writing them in mundane, unextraordinary situations where I can explore who they are as people at an emotional level. I think this particular fic summarizes a lot of my work as a whole.
If you like my smut, you might want to check out "Why Won't You Go," and "Window-Dressing" over at LJ. "Drive it Home" is also pretty darn extreme in terms of kink.
Reviewer: time of change
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 10:54 am
Title: One-Shot
Words fail me. I'll be in my bunk.
Author's Response: Hee. I take it you liked it, then. Just remember to wash your hands when you're through!
Reviewer: fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 07:37 am
Title: One-Shot
Hey Claw,
Just literally catching onto who the author is, after catchin' my own breath, and thoughts!
Usually see ya over on BSV, I believe, and tag there sometimes, long time since, what w/my laptop probs, mostly just read tag when I caught a few, had kept up w/fics I could on my cell phone's browser, which luckily will read java enhanced, and can do some html pages if not too big or huge graphics....and I rant on...
Anyhoo, gal, you gotta way with the smut! Your words run fluidly (none, and all puns intended!) , and smoothly, and smoothly segue into one scene from another.
You sure can write descriptive porn, both softly and sweetly, hotly, and then hard and brash or rough as well ( Driving It Home, etc). Well diversified. Just able to turn on the words (along with our motors) and let the run, not glossing over a thing (again, no pun intended) , literally NOT missing a thing, descriptive to a T and narrative, interactive, observative, realistic and romantic when needed with beautiful, loving and lovely observation when warranted or needed to bring a scene to life as we'd wish we could see it (or had seen it, Joss be damned to Quar'toth sometimes!).
You are a lovely Wordsmith in this genre, Claw!
Kudos!
Just had to append this!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Yup, I do a lot of chilling at BSV. Its got a real great group of people over there. They're great to bounce ideas off of. It's how I met my wonderful beta.
Very many thanks for your compliments about my writing style and content. I came into the fandom (as a writer) about 6 months ago really wanting to tackle smut and subversive content, while still sending a message about the characters. Although I do so with all the pairings I write (which does go beyond Spuffy), I like to emphasize how Spike and Buffy rely on non-verbal communication as a result of what they are - violent creatures. In my fics, I like to the description realistic, but I also want there to be some insight about the characters through the sex acts they perform. I'd say they are notorious for with holding the truth, and so their bodies speak greater truths than they ever could. Depending on the emotional set-up and context of the fic, the messages can vary, as you pointed out.
Thanks again for your musings. It's a rare thing for someone to take the time to delve so thoroughly into what they like about an author's work.
Reviewer: fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 07:23 am
Title: One-Shot
Poor Giles....at least they didn't do anything to deter Dawn's morning omelet! That would have unleashed a terrible wrath!
HOT!!! With a capital HOT!!!
MORE!!! Not a request (well, yeah!) but a demand!
Got MY mornin' motor running, I tell ya! Gotta go wake up my Mr. Frisky now, maybe...(snicker!)
Seriously, MORE! Like I said, was HOT, HOT, HOT!
Did you get that, that I thought it was HOT?
I gather Spike might be human-ish, but more still than Human? Just maybe more of a human-ish leash on the demon, but still having preternatural (a little A. Blake-ish language goin' there, eh?) attributes, powers/strengths??? Obviously something more human as he's been able to knock up the Slayer with babies (of course PLURAL, his swimmers would not settle for just ONE, when he could have MORE! to prove his point! Peaches made ONE, his little swimmers would have to do HIM proud to make at least TWO just to piss Peaches off and one up him!!!)...
Yet they've settled into an apartment (and still with Dawn) and routine domesticity...I gather the plethora of slayers round two or three has freed Buffy up to where she doesn't HAVE to daily attend to the grind or put her life on the line (unless she HAS or wants to, Giles's meetings be damned---it's ALWAYS some prophecy and/or some apocalypse). She has finally been able to take time out for her, for him, for them, for her family and family to BE ... to be quiet (Ha! With Spike around....hell, with Dawn's squeal !! around!), to have moments, to have FUN, to have babies, get laid, be sexy, look her lover in the eyes and fall into them, to be with him in public comfortably, to look after her home and notice things about it, to EAT food til she is plumper and filled out, to have that roundness of her cheeks so pretty when she was 16 filled out again, to SMILE, and cause smiles and laughs; to feel joy and cause it...when Spike feels his babies in her belly.
Poor Giles will indeed just have have to wait (she jumped to it to many, many times in the past and missed to many, many moments)....Will WE??? Will WE have to WAIT for more? Say NO! Just say NO! Hurry with more for US!!! NOW!!!! (impatient, much? Me? Nah!)
Thanks! A Great way to start a mornin'!!!
GREAT!!!
(Where're them nomination sites...just got my laptop back after several more months fightin' with Dell over repairs...warranty, hell....warranty HELL....will have to hunt thru my saved fav'rites for nom sites cos this sure warrants it....)
Thx,
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: Hi Fyre. Thanks for taking the time to leave such thorough feedback. I'm mad impressed! You were able to suss out the backstory of this 'verse quite well, actually. I believe I linked to the story at my LJ if you're interested in getting the full details of how they ended up in this situation. Long story short though, post-NFA Spike shanshus but something has gone terribly wrong with it so that he wavers between being human and being a vampire. His body literally dies, and re-animates, and the process is excruciating and maddening for him. Dawn is also coming to pieces as she reverts to the Key. In this fic, he's human, though it hardly matters. Just means I get to add that he sweats and breaths in the description! As for showing up Angel, I've only planned for there to be one baby. I think that's all this pair can really handle.
Sorry to say, but this is a one-shot, so there will not be a continuation to this particular moment. But, it's part of the larger verse of All Wrong, which I'm actively working on, and there will be more porny bits in that fic. I've been posting that on my LJ and BSV if you want to check it out.
Thanks for your enthusiasm! I was hoping this one would be a real panty-wetter. *snerk*
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 02:30 am
Title: One-Shot
really enjoyed this glimpse into their lives. love the way you write
clever and well paced, and i just wish I smoked:)
thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and the lovely comments. I've been on a bit of a dry spell for the last month since school started up again, so I'm very happy that Pass gave me this prompt. The quieter, in-between moments of the Spuffy relationship are my favorite ones to write.
