Reviewer: Mars
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2014 - 04:32 am
Title: Chapter One, The Grass
Kinda confused. Spike is from regular timeline but was a gladiator?
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 05:18 pm
Title: Light on the Grass
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2006 - 07:05 am
Title: Light on the Grass
Rotting liver? Ewww indeed (comes from someone that doesn't like liver at all *g*).
Guess you needed me more than she did, pet We don't know why Spike is there with this other Buffy but this is still a very good explanation, that Spike got sent because this version needed him more.
And now Spike is angry on Buffy's behave because of what has happened to her.
Oh bad! Xander got caught... after he prepared everything. I wonder if the cannons will still be out of the game now. Depends on starting the spark to set them on fire. Ah.. Oz. He took is courage and acted, this way saving Xander.
And Spike wants them go back to Buffy's cottage? I wonder if it is still there, got set on fire or if somebody else is living in there.
Good to see the update :) I saw it at LJ but didn't have time to read before.
Author's Response: glad you liked it.
Forrest is living in Buffy's cottage now. So we'll see how well that goes over.
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2006 - 12:16 pm
Title: Light on the Grass
I'm so happy to see a new update for this story! Loved Spike and Buffy's conversations. Can't wait for the fireworks to start when Spike gets to town.
The Xander/Oz scenes were fantastic. My heart really goes out to both Xander and Oz. I hope things get better for them eventually. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think that Spike is going to cause quite a stir in town.
Poor Xander and Oz. Pretty confused, both of them. But Xander did the right thing.
Reviewer: Pin
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:30 am
Title: Light on the Grass
Glad to see a new chapter in this very intriguing story. Thanks!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
Reviewer: sirc
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2006 - 11:30 am
Title: Chapter One, The Grass
ooooh!.. interesting :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2006 - 07:44 pm
Title: The Siege
Another interesting chap. Xander is pretty hero-ee in this tale so far. Can't wait for more. thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, he is very much a hero and a friend here. It's a nice change, that he supports Buffy and doesn't make things harder for her, since sometimes he does.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2006 - 04:18 pm
Title: The Siege
Awe, how chivalrous of Spike.. to defend Buffy he asks her to marry him (and claims that it is his baby). Always the defender (like his names says). And Oz isn't used to be cared for any longer.. that's sad. Being cared for will do him good too.
Author's Response: He'll protect Buffy and her baby with his unlife. That's our Spike. He's wonderful. My knight in this story.
Oz doesn't know how to be cared for, but Xander is being a good friend to him...
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2006 - 03:40 pm
Title: The Siege
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2006 - 04:43 am
Title: The Siege
I'm really enjoying how the story is progressing. The interaction between the two couples just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter. Oz's line about Xander out taciturning him was brilliant. The scene in the Inn was awesome, I just love how you're portraying Spike. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel the same way, as if they are more and more fun to write as they get closer.
Reviewer: Vette
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2006 - 12:31 am
Title: The Siege
Spike is such a chivalrous gentleman despite being a demon. When he struck that woman for insulting Buffy, it made my heart swell with admiration for his character. To have someone care for you when there is nothing in it for them is noble and Spike's humanity out-shines those of humans possessing their souls.
The same could be said for Xander in his treatment of Oz and it makes you wonder why Buffy and Oz feel like they do not deserve to be treated with respect, kindness and consideration. Their souls are wounded and it will take tender care to heal them. Good chapter, am so looking for ward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh there are nasty people in this story, but Xander and Spike will work hard to give the comfort and confidence back to these two wounded people.
Reviewer: Toni
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/2006 - 06:50 pm
Title: The Champion
I love this story, Keep going please!
Author's Response: Glad you do, thank you!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/2006 - 06:02 pm
Title: The Champion
Very informative chapter. Even though so many questions have been answered, I just love how many new questions have popped up. This Giles sure is dark, I enjoyed his conversation with Spike. The Oz/Xander interaction continues to sparkle. The dialogue between the two was fantastic. Wonderful update!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. I truly think that this will be a very rewarding story for those who peek in at it.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/2006 - 06:02 pm
Title: The Champion
More questions! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, more questions. ;)
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/2006 - 05:36 pm
Title: The Champion
Wow.. dark secret (not the werewolf of being gay), he, Oz, let the demons in the city. I wonder what brought him to do it? ~ Oh, Giles knows more about the pregnancy but he isn't telling *pouts* well I have to read on then ;-) Well Spike has a lot of work to do to protect Buffy and her unborn baby :)
Author's Response: Yep, to all questions. We find out Buffy is in more trouble then we thought. Giles is secretive, but Spike will eventually know who fathered Buffy's baby.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2006 - 07:42 pm
Title: Betrayed
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I think it won't be too long. I'm tinkering with it now. Thanks!
Reviewer: Burnz
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2006 - 05:31 pm
Title: Betrayed
A snarky zombie Giles! And what is Oz's deal boppin' poor Xander on the head??? The mystery deepens!
Author's Response: Yeah, just what Spike needs. A sarcastic Giles to bugger things further.
Oz bopping will be explained next chapter!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2006 - 02:51 am
Title: Betrayed
I loved Buffy and Spike's scene, you really captured their personalities well. The info about vampires working with humans was really interesting. Poor Xander... I hope he doesn't live to regret helping Oz. Whoa! That was quite an entrance Giles made into the fic. Can't wait to read more! Wonderful update!
Author's Response: Giles has a gift for Spike that I don't think he'll want to take, but we'll see.
Yeah, that was rough on Xander, but Oz has his reasons, and we'll see what they were next!
Reviewer: katakata
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2006 - 02:05 am
Title: Betrayed
Okay I don't know how this fic slipped past me but I've only just found it now...and MAN am I glad I did. This is some engrossing stuff - so our souled Spike's found entry to an alternate dimension via Lurky's caves huh? What's up with everybody in this other dimension getting with the Buffy-hating though? And while happy to see Giles arrive on the scene (this would normal signal some forthcoming exposition on BtVS) this has got to be alternate-dimension Giles right? Oooh and who got Buffy pregnant and was she a willing participant? Oh and FINALLY, is it just me or are the Oz/Xander scenes tender and warming in a low down tickley kind of way, LOL! Love it when a fic makes me ask so many questions. Can't wait for your next update to (hopefully) get some answers.
Author's Response: Well, they hate her because she's an independant woman. I mean, it's been implied they hate gays, so a strong woman like Buffy, especially unmarried and pregnant, is not going to be popular. I think they also fear her.
I'm really glad you like it and have all these questions. Next chapter will answer some, I promise. *g* Oz/Xander are sort of sweet and sexy together, when Oz isn't whumping Xander on the head.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2006 - 05:40 pm
Title: Betrayed
I had to grin about Spike's banter with Buffy. :) But she really doesn't know a thing about Spike. It doesn't look like as if there (in Buffy's world) is another Spike she knew before. ~ Huh? What is Oz secret that he hits Xander with a rock? *reads on* ~ Another huh? Giles is there too and he brought gifts. I hope this is a 'good present' and no trap. ~ Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: It depends on how you look at Giles offering. You'll see. It offers something Spike has always wanted...
Oz has some secrets.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Vette
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2006 - 03:00 pm
Title: Betrayed
Spike must be very confused. Poor Giles, this dimension has not been kind to him or anyone else.
Author's Response: Yeah, he is, and he's about to be offered something he always wanted. Will he take it?
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2006 - 04:58 am
Title: Artemis
Oh I forgot.. this Buffy doesn't know Spike. Therefore she is so surprised. So there still a secret around Oz? Wonder what it was. (Is he part wolf here, too? If yes maybe that was the reason.) Maybe it will clear to Spike very soon that Buffy is too different for being his Buffy. She even doesn't know his name...
Author's Response: I think Spike will slowly see that. I got up the new chapter just now.
Oz is hiding something very painful.
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 05/20/2006 - 04:52 am
Title: Artemis
I love how the story keeps getting more intriguing with each new chapter. The dialogue between Spike and Buffy was wonderful. I'm guessing in this universe Xander doesn't know Oz is a werewolf, (that is to say if Oz even is a werewolf in this world) well whatever is up with Oz it must be pretty awful if he feels the need to keep it a secret. Fantastic chapter... I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. I actually just put up the new one I did yesterday, so you get a bit more sooner.
Yeah, Oz has some dark things he's hiding.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:25 pm
Title: Vignettes in Tenderness
Xander works on bracletts? This sounds as if he knows what he does (sounds pretty). And Xander is really caring for Oz. Good to see he was able to save him later too. ~ And Buffy? I'm glad she didn't loose her baby because I think she wants it. At last Spike was able to get someone take care of Buffy. This one doesn't know him yet. ~ Till next chapter :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Really this is a big old h/C story where we get to see comfort and love showered on people who are hurting. It's what I love most to write about!
Reviewer: Jess Marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2006 - 09:26 pm
Title: Vignettes in Tenderness
Fantastically inventive. I'm very excited about this story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are!
