Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 08/07/2012 - 01:10 pm
Title: 1
Disturbing, but hot. Very hot.
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Signed
Date: 07/20/2008 - 12:59 am
Title: 1
I remember a similar plot in the movie Secretary; with Maggie Gyllenhaal and James Spader. You seemed to capture the same freaky relationship that they had.
Reviewer: vampyreskitten
Anonymous
Date: 06/20/2008 - 07:35 am
Title: 1
ok how friggin hot was that... can't wait for part 2, shame its not a 30 Chapter story :)
Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/2008 - 09:23 pm
Title: 1
wow that was so wonderful and beautiful and amazing and sexy and a million other compliments I can't think of the words for. You should be so proud of this fic, it is simply brilliant
Reviewer: Bleachit
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2008 - 12:09 am
Title: 1
guh. great adaptation. completely different and yet the same
secratary is so sexy. mmmhhmm
Reviewer: burnkitty
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 06:38 am
Title: 1
All I can say at the moment is *Gah!* That was so damn HOT!!! I beg you write another! More more more!! PLEASE????!!!!! Good thing I decided to read this after the kiddies went to bed coz DAMN! Going to have a cold shower now....
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 01:12 am
Title: 1
LOVED IT!!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 10:48 pm
Title: 1
That was fun. Loved the lack of speech and how very subtly they played their game. I do hope they have a fun weekend, and if you wanted to share, I would totally be game. Amazing dynamic. Fabulous story. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: arianne
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 04:20 pm
Title: 1
Oh well done... just really really good. Perfect from start to finish!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/04/2008 - 03:20 pm
Title: 1
HOT, Spike playing naughty games :) And the story worked well without dialog.
Reviewer: Claire
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 02:26 pm
Title: 1
Oh, wow! That was totally steamy. And now I want to know what happens next, how they get to know each other, how they would talk if there were dialogue. You have to stop doing this to me. First Corruption, now this. You're doing to drive me absolutely bonkers. Well done!
Reviewer: Edgehead
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 11:24 am
Title: 1
Good God Beth....what have you done...now I have to look for my hubby....damn it...that was hot
Reviewer: Aly
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 10:01 am
Title: 1
I really love this story. It's kind of sweet and oh so hot the same time :) I so hope you consider writing a sequel I would love to know what happens between them on that weekend.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:06 am
Title: 1
Damn girl that was hot , i would like you to write more , this is really good , but then all your fics are.
Reviewer: buffy2k
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 07:15 am
Title: 1
Ooh this is hot, is there going to be a chapter 2 of the weekend spent together?
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 06:30 am
Title: 1
*very hot* have you ever seen the movie "Secretary"?
Reviewer: Alissa Signed
Date: 06/04/2008 - 06:03 am
Title: 1
Goodness gracious me. That was yummy. It reminded me so much of the deliciously bad "The Secretary". But whilst that film was always a bit much for me, this fic is, somehow, so tender. Amazing, really, considering your story content.
Loved it whole-heartedly. Bring on more one shots.
Reviewer: Katkin Signed
Date: 06/04/2008 - 04:34 am
Title: 1
*Boneless puddle of Zoe * I got to get me a Spike!xxx
Reviewer: luxferi
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 04:13 am
Title: 1
*fans self* Goodness gracious woman! You're killing me here with the non-dialog. It's like... It's like... erm, being stimulated without cumming. *LOL* Bad analogy, I know. :D But it reflects how I'm feeling at the moment.
GAH, there's no question about it. This fic is unusual AND hot! It goes without saying I want more!! :D
Reviewer: Sarah Aless
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 04:03 am
Title: 1
*whimpers* Beth? I think I love you! Can I please be your bitch for all eternity??
THAT was so..............so...........I don't even have the words but I know that I could cry!! Wow! SO much I want to say about it but my brain is actual mush right now. JEEEZUS!!! That may be the hottest thing I ever read!
Of course, I love the film The Secretary but next to this it doesn't even seem that hot! I think the director was in some places mixed up in The Secretary about the dynamics and feelings on both sides of this kind of relationship but DAMN if you didn't just get it down to a T!!!
Honestly, I read most of this with my mouth hanging open (not nice when you start uncontrollably panting and drooling lol). I fear I may end up having to email too because I think my brain needs a little 'settling' time before I can fully process the absolute wonder of this fic!
As far as pulling off the whole thing without dialogue?? Good fricking job hun!! Amazing.
Ooo there's a thought - how about a sequel/follow up with ONLY dialogue? Not sure it would work for this couple but it'd a challenge to think about eh?
And finally, again, I love you, please can i be your bitch for eternity!
Sarah
x
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 03:21 am
Title: 1
That was truly an amazing piece of writing.
Reviewer: Melissa
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 03:06 am
Title: 1
Wow. Like, seriously, Wow! And how much more do I love The Secretary now that there is a Spuffy twist to it! The was tres hot! And damn, my internship would have been FAR more interesting and worth the time and gas money if there was something that hot going on! Talk about working for 'the experience!"
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 02:47 am
Title: 1
wonderful story and so cleverly written, no dialogue but so hot...would like to see more of this couple....congrats
Reviewer: Devin
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 12:33 am
Title: 1
WOW!!! That was really very impressive! As a huge fan of "The Secretary," the subject was interesting in an of itself, but the way you emphasized the nature of their connection -- which had some lovely subtle explantion (Dru's infidelity, the "wrongness" of the situation, Spike's occasional shyness and insecurity -- was just incredible. Very, very masterfully written. :) I loved it! You should be extremely proud; there was a depth to this that is oftentimes missing from the fanfiction genre.
Reviewer: RB
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/2008 - 12:30 am
Title: 1
Wow! That was great! I enjoyed that story very much. Thanks for sharing. I'm looking forward to reading more.
