Reviewer: Jenn
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/2006 - 04:06 pm
Title: Ch. 10 (cont..) Lost in the Stars
Great job with the "scene". You did a great job going with the emotions.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/2006 - 08:32 am
Title: Ch. 9 (Entry 8) We're in Heaven
Angel to the rescue... seems he is familiar with the name Buffy. Should Spike have told something? The chapter was good the way it was written (and it delays the character death (Spike) in this one. Too bad for Buffy non of her family members came.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 03/15/2006 - 11:52 pm
Title: Ch. 9 (Entry 8) We're in Heaven
great update cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Rachael
Anonymous
Date: 03/15/2006 - 11:42 pm
Title: Ch. 9 (Entry 8) We're in Heaven
I'm insanely curious as to why Spike isint there for Buffy now...am I gonna hate him for this? Is he gonna come back for her? Hope so. I'm lovin this story and I cant wait to see what you do next with it....and what was up with Angel's reaction...
Reviewer: Noelle Signed
Date: 03/15/2006 - 06:55 pm
Title: Ch. 9 (Entry 8) We're in Heaven
Gah cliffhanger! Thanks for the quick updates, looking foward to the next one.
Reviewer: messy
Anonymous
Date: 03/15/2006 - 01:33 pm
Title: Ch. 9 (Entry 8) We're in Heaven
despite the sadness, I'm liking your story so far; but I'd like to know, just for the sake of it, if it will have a happy ending or not :-)
hugs,
messy
Author's Response: Well, the ending's not happy but it's not over the top cry-your-eyes-out sad. It's just really bittersweet. That's all i'll give you for now :)
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 03/15/2006 - 01:28 am
Title: Ch. 8 (7th entry) Founder's Festival
keep up the good work
Reviewer: Noelle Signed
Date: 03/14/2006 - 09:40 pm
Title: Ch. 8 (7th entry) Founder's Festival
Magic? Can't wait.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:16 pm
Title: Ch. 8 (7th entry) Founder's Festival
For her decision not wanting to see Spike again Buffy gets very distracted. ;-) Well we now how it ends *sigh*
Reviewer: DaniD
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 03:49 pm
Title: Ch. 8 (7th entry) Founder's Festival
Well aren't we special :) We get two updates in one day!
Wonder who Spike's friends are...characters that we may reconize or original characters? Looking forward to the next update..Will it be more of the Founders Day Fesitval, or on to the next encounter?
Thanks!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 11:51 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
You're right; I wish for a happy ending here, a living one on both sides and it makes me sad that that won't happen. I'm reading on (for now). Loved the dream at the begin... very sad though. I think Buffy dreamed of committing suicide when Spike was there.
Reviewer: Noelle Signed
Date: 03/14/2006 - 11:00 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
I'm sticking with it, even though there won't be a happy ending. Nice update.
Reviewer: DaniD
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 09:09 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
At the beginning when Buffy was talking about seeing Spike..and he was smiling at her...For some reason that really got me. I actually teared up! I am wondering about something though..You need not reply...because I am sure all will be clear eventually. Anyway, Is Buffy in a mental instituion or jail? Just curious because of the bars on the window reference..
I love this fic so much,and I am very happy that you are feeling the muse. Though, I do hope that you can get past your writers block on "Stronger". That is another FANTASTIC story that I am really missing ! Anyway, you are fast becoming one of my favorite writers : D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It means a lot to me that the scene touched you like that. Buffy's in something that can be concidered a mental institution, or a rehab. And don't worry, you wont be waiting that much longer on Stronger. I have it all laid out, i just need to find a way to word things. Thanks!!
Reviewer: bellefleur29
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 08:26 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
I really like this story...I'm intrigued and I like the way the words flow. It feels and sounds like it could be a movie.
Author's Response: Thanks! I actually had it all played out in my head like it was a movie... I tried wording it so the reader could get the same images, so it's nice to hear that i'm not doing too bad of a job!
Reviewer: jeanie
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 02:42 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
good story! very emotional,
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2006 - 01:18 am
Title: Ch. 7 (6th) It's a damn cold night
more please
Reviewer: Saya
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:36 am
Title: Ch. 6 (5th entry) Wish upon a star
great story. i think you're a very talented author and this story just draws me in. I love it...
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/2006 - 04:31 am
Title: Ch. 6 (5th entry) Wish upon a star
Yeah *sigh* Spike tried to do 'the right thing'. Yet it didn't work out at the end. And I don't think Buffy's wish did come true... or turned into another direction after that.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 03/11/2006 - 10:57 pm
Title: Ch. 6 (5th entry) Wish upon a star
good update
Reviewer: Lau
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/2006 - 10:36 pm
Title: Ch. 6 (5th entry) Wish upon a star
This is the most original and unique story I`ve ever ever read since Pepperlandgirl stop writting fics.
Wow, you`ve got some talent girl!!!!!
I promise from now on I will read all your stories.
I`m wondering, how could Spike restrain himself to Buffy`s charms? Most men can`t do that, but he`s a special one. I`ll pretend I never read the first chapter, otherwise I could not bring myself to read this amazing fic.
Please, update soon.
Laura, from Argentina.
Reviewer: Dirktavian
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:33 am
Title: Ch. 5 (4th entry) Playing with Fire
I wasn't too fond of the banter Spike & Buffy were trying to make up for their hurt feelings at being rejected. But I love the brazen tone Buffy takes in this journal-- even hounding Giles about polishing his glasses. Sounds like she's one tough cookie who goes after what she wants-- And what's not to want? Looking forward to seeing what's around the bend on this story.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2006 - 03:42 pm
Title: Ch. 5 (4th entry) Playing with Fire
*Sigh* a bit bittersweet indeed because we know the end, right? I so wished for their sake they had made it *sniff* I wonder what happened. But that will come late, right? Till then.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2006 - 03:26 pm
Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
Oh ... truth to be told: If I had knew it from the start I wouldn't have read it (I don't read stories with character death very often). It makes me to sad. I'll only continue because I started. I'm stubborn sometimes. If it gets too much I'll tell you. ~ R.J. .. too bad he didn't get his coke by himself ;-) But Buffy would have gone anyway. That was lovely, the talking. Too bad it ended bad.
Reviewer: orchid
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2006 - 08:07 am
Title: Ch. 5 (4th entry) Playing with Fire
so glad you updated, I'm in love with this story. So if you feel the need to post some more...I forgive you, so much so that I'll read it quickly once and slow another time. LOL thanx for the update.
Reviewer: Saya
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/2006 - 04:01 am
Title: Ch. 5 (4th entry) Playing with Fire
Your story rocks. It's so good, cn't wait for the next chapter.