Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/2009 - 01:40 pm
Title: Lovesick Melody
Oh just to add, I just read your author's note. I think your writing is very good even without a beta, but if you do want one there are a list of betas on the site side-bar.
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/2009 - 01:38 pm
Title: Lovesick Melody
That was so good! Very cute. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: does it matter?
Anonymous
Date: 08/19/2008 - 12:46 pm
Title: Lovesick Melody
WOW, great begining! I can't wait to read more. William is just so cute! And there really weren't that many mistakes.
Reviewer: Nicka
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/2008 - 01:19 am
Title: Lovesick Melody
Interesting premise, I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Hopefully it will go in an intresting direction. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/2008 - 03:57 pm
Title: Lovesick Melody
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, even simple straight to the point reviews make my day. :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/11/2008 - 08:55 am
Title: Lovesick Melody
I can live with only a tinsy bit of xx/others so I'll give the story a try; I can always back out and wait till it's finished. :)
I like the start; too bad that Buffy took the easy way out for the sake of avoiding to fight. Now she regrets it, huh? But she can say she went to school with him.
Author's Response: Very tinsy bit! Itty bitty bit. I went with the pre slayer Buffy from 'becoming' (I think it was) Besides she was always stupid when it came to Angel. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Pet Signed
Date: 08/11/2008 - 07:58 am
Title: Lovesick Melody
How sad. Poor William. Anyway, I really like the beginning of this story and I hope you'll continue. I would love to read more of this.
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter, but I will probably try to finish a few before I post the next one, so I can start posting regurarly.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 08/11/2008 - 12:27 am
Title: Lovesick Melody
You can never have too many stories where Spike is a rock star. Spike just has that look to him. :)
Oh Buffy, being popular in school isn't everything. I don't see how Buffy can love a jerk like Angel. I wouldn't have mind Spike writing songs about me. I would love it if a guy wrote songs about me. LOL
Do you listen to James Marsters music? He has a sexy voice, doesn't he.
Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Good, I don't think it has been done to death, but I'm just glad someone else agrees.
Buffy was always an idiot when it came to Angel. It dosn't really matter, karma loves to show its face after these kinds of events.
I only like one or two of his songs, I prefer his acting, but yes he does.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dre
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2008 - 10:18 pm
Title: Lovesick Melody
Good job! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, more soon...maybe a week or so, depending on how much mercy my job gives me. I will update as soon as possible.
