Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2013 - 03:06 pm
Title: Part Two
I adore this story. Will we ever get the last chapter? please...
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/2013 - 01:37 pm
Title: Part Two
More Please
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/2013 - 06:37 pm
Title: Part Two
Love this! Will it be finished?
Reviewer: Peggy
Anonymous
Date: 03/21/2012 - 06:01 am
Title: Part Two
Oh, I love this fic! It's so sweet/hot... Please continue : )
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/02/2011 - 10:39 pm
Title: Part Two
Awe - things are definitely going somewhere - seems as if William got himself a girlfriend. :)
Maybe their parents have an inkling.... looking forward to more.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/02/2011 - 06:52 pm
Title: Part One
Ah High school - a special kind of hell. That will make an interesting holiday (camping trip).
So it was a misunderstanding that caused them apart...
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 09/24/2011 - 04:53 pm
Title: Part Two
Your right, shy William is just adorable in the eat him up like chocolate way.
The parents are not worried because shy William is responsible. At least they don't care cause they are probaly reliving their youth again. and than someone will mention them being gone so long, and the word sex. Then someone else will say as long as she does not get pregnant. And than Hank will get all red faced.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/24/2011 - 03:26 am
Title: Part Two
Yeah, that crossed my mind about the time they were heading down the pier. No question that was going to take a while. ;) Love all their timid adoration, and nearly died when he told her he gave her his first kiss. I suspect she nearly did, too. Eh, their parents are probly drunk, I remember beach trips like that. Only nothing I ever did was this sweet. I love it. Hopefully it's not too long before an update. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Photographynut Signed
Date: 09/23/2011 - 10:23 pm
Title: Part Two
Totally loving this! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed
Date: 09/23/2011 - 08:46 pm
Title: Part Two
Guh!!! HOT! My brain has turned into a big pile of mush! Very steamy and intimate scene, plus I love how well written your stories always are. The characters always have depth and insecurities, which makes them even more real.
Hee... really wondering what their parents are thinking. God, I hope none of them has went to search for Buffy and Spike only to see them in such a compromising situation. Although, it might be fun to see the parents pretend like nothing's going on. *g*
LOVE your William stories. You're definitely not the only one with William kink. ;) I love how vulnerable he is.
Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 09/23/2011 - 06:59 pm
Title: Part Two
LOVE!
Reviewer: Melly
Anonymous
Date: 09/23/2011 - 03:46 pm
Title: Part Two
I hope Buffy & William aren't too traumatized by their parents when they finally return to the campfire! Thanks for another wonderful update to such an enjoyable story! More soon please!
Reviewer: Minx DeLovely
Anonymous
Date: 09/23/2011 - 02:29 pm
Title: Part Two
I just assumed their parents were high again. This was lovely, and I agree, there is something so compelling about William. He's the broken heart at the center of this iconic character that makes Spike real.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/2011 - 02:56 am
Title: Part One
They are too damn cute. I love her being all concerned about his virginity, and slipping hers in there too. This will be a life changing summer. And I love all the trouble the parents are getting into. I always want to hold onto at least some of those moments when I get old, er, older. Love it, update soon!
Reviewer: Mooseshug
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/2011 - 02:41 am
Title: Part One
This story is perfection so far and I really like this edgier spin on William. The insecure flashes of anger and meanness feel so realistic.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 10:38 pm
Title: Part One
Absolutely love it! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Buffy and William.
Reviewer: Darkest Night
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 09:43 pm
Title: Part One
I love it!! I hope there will be more to the story soon, its very endearing and I'm excited to read more.
Reviewer: gopher101
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 09:02 pm
Title: Part One
Loved your version of the parents, funny.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 07:16 pm
Title: Part One
LOL .. love it .
Poor Spike the nerd and Daddy is an old hippie dope head of sorts..
Waiting for Buffy and Spike's next night out.. enjoyed..
Reviewer: Minx DeLovely
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 06:58 pm
Title: Part One
This was so adorable it brought tears to my eyes. It was seriously like fifty babies. This story was fifty babies worth of adorable.
Reviewer: Melly
Anonymous
Date: 09/20/2011 - 06:05 pm
Title: Part One
Just when I think I can't love you and your work anymore than I do - you gift us with this wonderful story! I especially love how you're writing their parents - it brings back many memories!!
Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed
Date: 09/20/2011 - 06:04 pm
Title: Part One
Oh merciful Zeus, this was so freaking adorable!! And amazing! And every other positive adjective you can think of! I totally giggled at your AN and the mention of 'popping a high school cherry.' LOL Loved how you always make the story so real and cliche-free, and that you mentioned the cliches in the story to boot. ;) I'm a sucker for William and yours always makes me melt in my fluffy socks. Thank you, awesome writer. :D
