Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/22/2013 - 04:10 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Still very, very hot.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 01/03/2013 - 06:41 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Wow, so hot, I'm throbbing.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/31/2010 - 11:41 am
Title: A Little Light Reading
Liked ur story.
Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed
Date: 02/24/2009 - 08:42 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Awesome one shot. I think that you should write a sequel to this. Keep up the great work.
Dani
Reviewer: buffymon
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2006 - 04:12 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
wow..that was...wow
I think i have to go to the library tomorrow
Reviewer: Pipergirl
Anonymous
Date: 09/19/2006 - 01:24 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Whoa... I really have work to do, but...
Man, this really took precedence.
VERY hot fic--loved it!
Reviewer: AbbyLou Signed
Date: 09/15/2006 - 05:02 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
LOVED IT!!!
Reviewer: Darling_Violetta
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 05:11 am
Title: A Little Light Reading
great! Please continue this!!! it would make a fantastic story. heres hoping!
tara
Reviewer: Heidi
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 02:08 am
Title: A Little Light Reading
Wow.... That was hot.
Really loved the chapter. Hope you'll continue with this.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 09/14/2006 - 04:44 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
I love the start of this one.. That was bad luck that Buffy was trapped there; and she managed to trap Spike too. The fire alarm was a quick reaction and did give them more time :) A hot begin. And because it isn't marked finished yet I hope we'll get more.
Reviewer: SBLuver
Anonymous
Date: 09/14/2006 - 01:06 am
Title: A Little Light Reading
Ooh, this is a fun story! I soo wanna read more. I love how it's kind of light but still very well written. Excellent job! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:47 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Well, wasn't that just the best fire drill ever. Damn, why didn't we have a room like that in my library in high school. Possibly for reasons similar to that. And Buffy seems to have made a new friend already. Quite the pair. Looking forward to more. Marvelous start.
Reviewer: Ari
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:41 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Cool you didn't make Buffy a virgin in this, I'm assuming anyway. And she's kind of loose right? Not Faith level slutty, but enough to make her drop trou without much fanfare and resistance, .because otherwise? It's not going to make much sense characterization wise if you continue with this story. Sorry, bit of a stickler when it comes to characterization -- and I do prefer even fantasy AU Buffy and Spike to resemble their tv alter egos to a certain degree (yes even in PWP smut fics).
I mean no offense but even though I think you have potential (usually IMO the majority of newcomers are beyond salvageable) your writing, including the porn, does need some work. If you haven't read her Spike/Buffy fics already, I suggest visiting nautibitz.com and checking out her porny fantasy AU offerings.
namely " Older": http://www.nautibitz.com/fic/older/index.html
and "Crash and Burn http://nautibitz.com/fic/cb/crash01.html
If you're willing and interested in improving your skills, I think it might help to do a little compare and contrast with stories written by someone who has more experience with this kind of fic. :)
Reviewer: Jessica
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:28 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Damn. Amazing chapter. Very much looking forward to more. ; )
Reviewer: blondiebear Signed
Date: 09/13/2006 - 08:21 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
loved it!!! wish i got greeted that way on MY first day of school!!!! lol. post again soon.
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 07:16 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
I wish Spike would've gone to my highschool (sigh). Totally hot opening chap - cant' wait for more.
Reviewer: *bite me*
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 05:53 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Holy shit, that was hott. please update soon
Thanx
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 05:27 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
Wow! Great chapter!
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 09/13/2006 - 04:52 pm
Title: A Little Light Reading
terrific story so far please continue