Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/11/2013 - 10:51 pm
Title: Taken
Cute!
Reviewer: Mer24
Anonymous
Date: 07/24/2007 - 12:09 pm
Title: Taken
Beautifully written, The characters of Buffy and Spike in this story were spot on.
Perfect Spuffy.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's such a nice compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: saradane
Anonymous
Date: 07/15/2007 - 12:58 am
Title: Taken
COnsidering there was no sex, that was a hot story. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. Yes, I totally chickened out. Oh well, maybe next story. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 04:19 pm
Title: Taken
oh you need to write more.
Author's Response: I'm not sure if there is more yet. Maybe. I'm sorry if you think it ended too fast. I wondered about that. Not too many happy Spuffy chapters, it's true. I'd have to get several chapters written before I could convince myself there's a sequel here and that there'd be enough plot not to be horrible :) Thanks for reviewing throughout, it's much appreciated.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 04:04 pm
Title: More Apologies
what will they do with it fill it with money.
Author's Response: Well, the idea of those things is if you have trouble apologizing, which some people REALLY do for some reason, you write it down and put it in the jar. That way, you've apologized, but somehow it's easier to admit you're wrong. Don't know, I have no trouble with "I'm sorry" most of the time! Lol, my stepmother bought one for my father to use. He did too. I think he could have used a larger model than the tiny one they had. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:54 pm
Title: The 'We Hate Spike' Club
oh that was not very nice of Xander
Author's Response: Well, he's always on Buffy's side no matter what. Especially since there was a little friction in high school with Spike. To his credit, he did mention that he couldn't believe Spike would do that. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:45 pm
Title: Talking
so are they back together or not
Author's Response: More talking to do yet. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:34 pm
Title: Misunderstandings and Misgivings
so now we talk and yay for Dawn
Author's Response: Yes, go Dawn for finally shoving them into a room together and making them talk! Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:26 pm
Title: Revelations at the Opera
Oh know now Buffy want to know what did happen.
Author's Response: Finally, right? lol. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:15 pm
Title: Poetic Penance
Oh this is good, wonder what Spike will do with Buffy dating.
Author's Response: I'm sure he will react in a calm and mature manner. *coughs*
Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2007 - 03:05 pm
Title: Shopping Therapy
Oh this is not good.
Author's Response: No, just a teensy bit awkward. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2007 - 02:52 pm
Title: Wings and Sympathy
So he owned up to it with Dawn and then went back to work with her, but Buffy wouldn't stay so now we play the avoido game.
Author's Response: Yes, Spike told Dawn everything. Buffy has other plans for the afternoon and they don't include seeing Spike. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2007 - 02:43 pm
Title: All Wrong
Buffy monogloge at the end was good.
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Buffy is all conflicted and her emotions are going every which way. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2007 - 02:31 pm
Title: Tossing and Turning
oh I don't know if i like this, but I was warned.
Author's Response: No, it's bad! But it'll be ok in the end, I promise, if you can make it through the next chapter.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2007 - 12:05 pm
Title: Just Fine
oh they are not doing good. Hope Dawn can help.
Author's Response: No, they aren't! Dawn's pretty persistent thought, so there's hope. Thanks so much for the review! :)
Reviewer: Katkin Signed
Date: 07/12/2007 - 03:13 am
Title: Taken
Hiya hun... I can't remember if I gave you a review for this chap, so if I did, you get another one! lol I liked this, the whole story is sweet... ok there is a little angst thrown in but besides that, it really is a stress free read, unlike some others! lol thank you so much and congrats on finishing your first Spuffy fic! xxx
Author's Response: Hi Kat! Nope, just this one. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Right! No heavy torture here.
Thanks so much for your encouragement and for reading over this chapter for me.
It's funny, I saw your update last night, but when I went to read it the test site wasn't there and I thought noooo! I think I saw that you put it up here now. Off to read it!
Reviewer: demona424
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2007 - 10:53 am
Title: Taken
Such a fun fabulous story, I really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I don't think you need a "love scene" to complete this story, it's all about the connection of the characters, plus your writing is wonderful enough without it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping the lack of a love scene wouldn't annoy people too badly. You're right, I meant for the story to be about their emotional connection and the things that were broken with it. Thanks very much for the review and the compliment. I'm glad you liked the story!
Reviewer: ochit duzon
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2007 - 01:01 am
Title: Taken
Yes i enjoyed it! Thank you so much for writing and making my days less boring.
Hope you will find time to write another one soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and encouragement throughout. I'm glad you liked it! I have another one going right now. :)
Reviewer: zoe
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2007 - 12:33 am
Title: Taken
that was your first spuffy story?! your writing is wonderful, i loved the dialogs, hope to see more of you :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have another one going now. This is kind of addictive :)
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/2007 - 11:04 pm
Title: Taken
I thought the ending was perfect, especially her confrontation with Melanie. I couldn't see it going beyond their reconciliation , although i'm definitely up for a sequel . Thanks for writing this deliteful fic.
Author's Response: No, I couldn't see what would happen too clearly either, so I suspected anything that followed would be pretty bad. Thanks for reviewing straight through, it was very encouraging :) I'm glad you liked the ending.
Reviewer: Sandy
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:39 pm
Title: Taken
Really enjoyed your story, Thanks..
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Raspy_Luv
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:41 pm
Title: Taken
Great job! Buffy reacted almost how I would have to Melanie. Additionally, I would have ripped her head off. Just kidding actually (but seriously, there is no way Melanie and Spike can remain friends. I totally understand and back that assesment). It's Spike I would have attacked when I found out (about the casual sex). It would have taken me a lot longer to get past the fact that Spike had sex with someone so quickly after a misunderstanding and breakup. To be fair to Spike, there is no way I would have not talked to him about the whole Dru scene. This whole sitch could have been avoided if Buffy gave Spike a chance to do some 'splainin'. But, if she'd done that, we would have no story, right? Right. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! No, there's no way they could be friends. That just would not work.
Yeah, it would be tough for anyone to get over that, I'd imagine. In my mind, the one drunken night counterbalances with the entire month Buffy froze him out completely and made him miserable, but everybody has different points of view on things like that. I'd forgive Spike, so my Buffy forgave him.
Yes, no story is a bad, bad thing! Had to have the angst to have a story because that's what came to mind for a plot, but yes, sometimes you just want to shake 'em and make them listen to each other. So I had Dawn do that. She's my stand-in. Hehe. Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for sharing your thoughts on it.
Reviewer: Raspy_Luv
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:22 pm
Title: More Apologies
I actually get kinda tired of authors and reviewers "beating up" on Buffy. For the record, I do not feel that you, the author, are doing that in this story (though a few reviewers are getting a bit nasty with her). Buffy walked in at an incredibly unfortunate time. Why not direct the anger at the person responsible (Dru) and have sympathy for both our beloved characters, Spike AND Buffy. She was hurt too, not just Spike, ya'll. ; )
Author's Response: That's true! Neither one deserves the full blame here. There are mutual mistakes made. Dru is certainly the true culprit. Sometimes I think there may be residual backlash from season 6 hovering in the back of our minds and that's why people tend to be harder on Buffy. Her character was just so brutal and merciless most of that season. However, on the flip side, everyone was REALLY angry at Spike for even contemplating moving on both in the show and this story, so...maybe it's even.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dicecanntcry
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/2007 - 02:09 pm
Title: More Apologies
Lovely chapter! Only question I have is... when is he going to 'break up' with Melanie?
Author's Response: Well, he's not with Melanie...but soon :) hehe.
Reviewer: Katkin
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2007 - 11:45 am
Title: More Apologies
Awwww!!!!!!
I like this fic! xxx
there's going to be a huge dose of angst coming up isn't there?!
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I'm having an attack of the fluffies. I'm written out on crying scenes for the moment! Sad Buffy, sad Dawn, sad Buffy redux etc...lol.
I think there may be only one more chapter left to this, tops two, and unfortunately, it keeps coming out sappy instead of fluffy (just like the sappiness seeped into this chapter a little). Thus the little break to make myself a banner until the chapter writes itself better!
But Dru's still out there, so maybe there will be a return to angst in a sequel. I'm sure she didn't intend to help their relationship!