Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/04/2013 - 02:01 pm
Title: chapter 2
Fun and sweet.
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Brett
Anonymous
Date: 02/23/2009 - 06:29 pm
Title: chapter 2
Oh this was very funny. The Beta Bug, will F your Grammar up good and proper.
Author's Response: hubby's revenge on my grammar..
Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed
Date: 12/19/2008 - 09:36 pm
Title: chapter 2
hahaha!...that was fun!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: serinah
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/2008 - 03:07 pm
Title: chapter 2
lol, I can imagine B explaining the whole thing to Olivia! :) And the what? cyber sex? will that work? lol
Author's Response: blimey I didn't think I'd get any more reviews for this one, it went up ages ago. welcome to my fic...and thanks for the review
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 02/10/2008 - 07:42 am
Title: chapter 2
That was amusing :)
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 02/10/2008 - 07:25 am
Title: Chapter 1
Very funny! You made me laugh :) I hope the punctuation monster stays away from my computer ;)
Author's Response: my poor husband ( who wrote this and Beta's all my work) swears it livs in my computer:)
Reviewer: ZLB Signed
Date: 01/31/2008 - 02:40 am
Title: chapter 2
Interesting solution to this particular problem... but highly entertaining. ~ZLB
Author's Response: thanks glad you enjoyed
hrolf
Reviewer: greyangel
Anonymous
Date: 01/29/2008 - 01:42 pm
Title: chapter 2
PS: So why aren't you writing more spuffy????? And I can't be the only person asking that question...hmm ;)
Author's Response: Actually, yes you are the only one asking so far! As to why not more, it's not my main area of interest. I do other stuff on other sites and I'm trying to sell books :-)
I wrote this as another writer's Beta-reader, and the strain of grammar corrections just got to me :-D
Best Wishes,
Hrolf
Reviewer: greyangel
Anonymous
Date: 01/29/2008 - 01:36 pm
Title: chapter 2
OMG!!! What a scream!!! Whacky computer virus hellmouth style...this would've made a great episode in the show, and a great counterpoint to 'Hush' but without the screams of terror and more orgasmic screams for the gang...LOL. I uvd et...
Author's Response: Many thanks; glad you enjoyed it!
Hrolf
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1
clever concept
Author's Response: Born of desperation :-)
Thanks,
Hrolf
Reviewer: sirc
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 03:29 pm
Title: chapter 2
Now, that was fun :)
Author's Response: Lots of dark, brooding stories around here: I thought something lighter might be good.
Thanks,
Hrolf
Reviewer: sirc
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 03:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1
That's a very unique idea. I'm loving this story to bits! :D
Author's Response: Many thanks. I do other stuff elsewhere...
Hrolf
Reviewer: Roby
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/2008 - 10:47 am
Title: chapter 2
FUNNY!!! This should be a required reading in English Comp classes! :-)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Life as a Beta reader ain't easy :-)
Hrolf
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:06 am
Title: chapter 2
*edit* what i meant was i got the storyline but it ended really fast so...but i did like it!
Author's Response: Lots of you seem to have missed the second part... then found it... the PC won't apologise (beast) so I will. Glad you liked it; I do other stuff elsewhere, too.
Hrolf
Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:04 am
Title: chapter 2
i really don't get the ending but good job. interesting story!
Author's Response: thanks!
Hrolf
Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed
Date: 01/19/2008 - 08:08 pm
Title: chapter 2
Oh that was good... Sorry, I thought you had ended the story on the last chapter! My bad! That was an awesome little fic! Well done!
Author's Response: Thankyou! I do other stuff as well, but not here. Wrote this 'cos my Alpha (well I'm the Beta reader...) does this for real and I just couldn't take much more! Glad you enjoyed.
Hrolf
Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed
Date: 01/19/2008 - 07:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god... you have to finish this!!!! Don't leave us hanging! Please say this isn't the end! *cry profusely* This was a brilliant idea hun, I giggled all the way through it!
Author's Response: Don't cry too much, you'll get water in the keyboard and then it all comes true :-)
Hrolf (more answer coming)
Reviewer: MrsP
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2008 - 08:48 am
Title: chapter 2
You're storie maid me laff.
Their arr sum righters hear what cud benyfit buy reeding!
Author's Response: Ah, you reely got the joke!
Glad you enjoyed; I have other stuff on other sites too.
Hrolf
Reviewer: Sotia Signed
Date: 01/19/2008 - 07:57 am
Title: chapter 2
This was really original! I liked it!
XXX
Author's Response: Many thanks. I write other stuff as well...
Hrolf
Reviewer: Heidi
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2008 - 01:54 am
Title: chapter 2
Funny!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hrolf
Reviewer: Heidi
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2008 - 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 1
At first I thought you were making lots of spellingmistakes - until my thick head caught on ; ) Wonder what the virus will do if left unchecked. Fun concept.
Author's Response: Ah: got it right, did I? Glad you enjoyed.
Hrolf
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 01/18/2008 - 11:55 pm
Title: chapter 2
Funny read :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I have other styles and other subjects on other sites...
Hrolf
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 01/18/2008 - 10:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1
This is really funny. Oh, the horrors of lost punctuation!
I did get a little confused where Buffy is talking to Spike and then is at Tara's door, thinking maybe something got cut, but maybe it was intentional: Buffy shook her head. “sOmeth;in'g wi,erd mustf iNd Wil;Ler come in,” said Tara, taking the slayer's elbow and guiding her gently to a settee. “What is it?”
Author's Response: Having Beta'd so many, I just couldn't hold it in any more :-)
Yes, you missed a bit: we had to re-post so it might be worth checking again. Not a lot in between and nothing you can't work out from what you have got...
Regards,
Hrolf
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/18/2008 - 06:13 pm
Title: chapter 2
That's a last another way to fight an enemy: Make love not war ;-)
Enjoyed the read.
Author's Response: Ah, you found the rest of it then!
I have other sites if you like the style (although this isn't typical me)
Regards,
Hrolf
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/18/2008 - 05:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was fun. *on to the next part*
Author's Response: Unless you got the goofed-up version, that was all there is... might be worth checking.
Many thanks,
Hrolf
