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Penname: Ashes Falling [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 01/06/2009
Membership status: Member
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Obviously, I love BtVS, and my favourite 'ship is spuffy. I have an account at ff.net and Elysian Fields under the same penname.
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Published: 12/31/1969 Updated: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: None

There's nothing worse than a poopy baby. Even Spike ran for cover. Poor Giles.

Summary: Spike and Buffy are thrust together when Giles finds himself a reluctant and sudden father. The two humans know nothing about raising children and find themselves strangely dependent on a vampire to show them the ropes. Giles asks Buffy to be the babysitter and learn from Spike. Will feelings develop in the work place?
Categories: General Fics Characters: None
Genres: Romance Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 50149
Published: 02/04/2005 Updated: 01/20/2006
Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Aww, poor Scoobs. None of them know what to do with a baby. And I just adored Willow's reaction--as if Giles were some sort of holy virgin. it was incredibly cute.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3

I agree with your A/N. I knwo a girl who literally gave up her custody to her children to her mother--this was after she hadnt' seen either of her children for years. I really feel for Giles, because I'm currently going through something similar. My brother's best friend's mom seriously signed custody of her son (my brother's best friend) to my dad. Not all women get gushy over babies. Sadly.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4

Good for Giles. He deserves more than a knock and a baby thrust into his arms.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5

There is nothing more frustrating than a crying baby, I agree entirely. Especially when it won't stop crying. Because you have no idea what to do, what it wants, how to make it stop crying, and you feel so horrible for not knowing, and worse for being angry.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6

Yes, Spike's fingers were "stuck." Poor Spike. It is ever so horrible what happened to him. However will he cope with that? *shakes head*

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7

Poor Spike! Finally gets to have sex and she smacks him! Aw, well. That's Buffy for ya.

Gonna say, I'm not really a huge fan of how fast they got together in your story. I'm kinda one of those people who enjoy the build-up. Still, the sex scene you wrote is probably one of the hottest, best written sex scenes I've read recently.

Oh, and regarding your author's note--I didn't really find it squicky that he fingered Buffy while they were bathing Ophelia. It's not like the baby will remember, and there wasn't anything sexual INVOLVING the baby, so I don't know if that's why people were offended but I wasn't. It didn't even occur to me that it would be.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8

Aww, Buffy decided to not be so much of a bitch. Yay.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9

The redhead had her arms full of baby when Buffy rushed from the bathroom, steam and faint fruity smells drifting out behind her. Spike hovered at Willow’s elbow, attempting to act all cool and evil, but Buffy felt stunned by the look of protective concern for the little girl that clouded the clear blue. His eyes were trained on Willow like a hawk, ready to spring to action should he not approve of any of the witch’s moves. Buffy didn’t know whether to smile affectionately or gulp in horror.

That embodies Spike so well in my mind! Spike would totally do that. "Yeah, I totally don't give a rat's arse 'bout the baby . . . hold her wrong an' I'll tear your throat out! I mean, not that I care or anythin' . . ."

It may have been Buffy's first with Spike, but it wasn't her first time with sex. Come on. Their first time in the show was not so dissimilar.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10

Yay baby shopping is of the good.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 11: 11

Oh, I forgot to mention in the last chapter--I really don't get why all the words were changed. Are you British? because you use British words perfectly, but you also use American words properly too. But I agree--it really doesn't make sense that the words have changed? (I'm American, by the way. But then again, vocabulary changes from state to state over here, so i guess it makes sense . . .)

Anyway, good chapter.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 12: 12

So they finally make love. Aww. How cute.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13

It was slightly weird to read that I will admit, however I've never been a mother so I guess I really have no reason to complain. I didn't find anything about it paedophilish (it wasn't the baby either of them wanted sexually) so I dont' see anything wrong with it, just weird. Because, you know . . . baby sucking nipple while Spike sucks the other. But nothing gross. Just odd. I don't even know if I made any sense.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14

Xander's so funny. And Anya is as well. Lol.

Summary: Happy Valentine's Day, Everyone. Here's a little 14 chapter Valentine's present for you. Season 3, off-canon, and fluffy. Buffy is getting presents everyday leading up to Valentine's Day. Who could this mysterious person be?
Categories: General NC-17 Fics Characters: None
Genres: Romance Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 21815
Published: 02/01/2006 Updated: 02/14/2006
Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: February 1, 1999 Saturday

Even a pig needs a mate. Lol, that's funny. I love how Joyce totally knew who the secret admirer was.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 2: February 2, 1999 Sunday

That poor boy and his poetic tendencies, Joyce thought to herself. I love Joyce. She's so funny.

I love how obvious the clues are, and poor Buffy is like "la la la, I"m totally oblivious." *chuckles*

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 3: February 3, 1999 Monday

Aww, Buffy played matchmaker with Faith. Cute!

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 4: February 4, 1999 Tuesday

Lol, Wesley's such a geek. I'll admit Cordy seemed a bit OoC, though. But yay for Doyle. He's a cutie-pie, all right.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 5: February 5, 1999 Wednesday

Lol, Anya and Tucker. I can safely say that's a ship I've never encountered.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 6: February 6, 1999 Thursday

Who is this Will fellow? He sounds like a classy bloke, if I do say so myself. Lol, very tricky, that. And cute, too.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 7: February 7, 1999 Friday

I used to have a teacher who would give us treats and order pizza in the middle of class. It was awesome.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 05/04/2009 Title: Chapter 10: February 10, 1999 Monday

Aww, cute! Ice skating! I was wondering when that was going to show up.

Summary: New Summary: A vampire Spike sired tracks him down and vows to enact revenge against him, along with every woman in his life that he cares about. A dark fic set in early season 5. *Dead Things Award Runner-Up and Becoming Award Winner at the Breathless Awards, Best Angst Runner-up at Love's Bitch Awards, and Tragedy Storm Runner-up at Spike Threw the Heart Awards! Nominated at the Shadows and Dust Fanfiction Awards and the Burst Into Flame Awards!*
Categories: General NC-17 Fics Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Rape
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 41209
Published: 02/28/2006 Updated: 04/06/2006
Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 01/17/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Surrounded By Blondes

I actually have a story I've been working on for months with a very similar premise to this. I was hoping to post it eventually, but if your story is too similar, then of course, I won't.

I just thought I should let you know ahead of time, so as not to make you think I ripped it off from you.

It's a very interesting idea, and I can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 01/17/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Budding Alliances

Okay, it's different than how I'd planed. Cool.

I enjoy the fact she's only twelve. It's disturbing, but in a good way.

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked
Date: 01/17/2009 Title: Chapter 3: When Youth Attacks

Dude, poor Dawnie! That's horrible. I hate Tessa now. Which is a good thing, seeing as we're supposed to hate the villains.