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| jl1980 | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 05/25/2006 12:58 am |
hmmm...wonder what doc's plan is...poor spike, at least they're all rallying to help him...excellently written, please don't have abandoned this awesome story! i need to know how it ends!  |
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| Wilder | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 03/06/2006 12:36 am |
| this story is riviting, Doc is such an interesting character, and you have set the story up really well, there is alot you can do with it and i am looking forward to seeing where it goes. by the way, Dawn's reaction was perfect in my mind... is she summoning things with her key powers, and that is why there is more paranormal activity and stuff around her? just a thought. |
| Thank you! As for dawn, you'll just have to wait and see. I'm actually working on this story again! |
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| just_sue | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 02/10/2006 01:51 pm |
Well, I just found this and consumed in anticipation - only to find you seem to have stopped writing it. Darn!
I'm really enjoying this and want to know what happens next. Please tell me it's not one of those discarded or forever WIP fics - that would be such a shame.
Hoping to read more - like now. Thanks ever so. |
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| Lorias | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 11/20/2005 04:50 pm |
| I am on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love the take on the Doc. Full of questions but I will have to wait to get them answered. Thanks for writing it. |
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| Confused Muse | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/26/2005 07:27 pm |
| Original take on the Doc's character, and a great change of heart from Xander - not before time!
And while I'm not squeamish? Can I say ewwwww on Spike's tortured appearance? Keep going |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/25/2005 04:29 am |
| Is this gonna be like a 'first' sleeper trigger bomb, or a 'you left me there to die, now you suffer,' sort of bomb??? |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/24/2005 10:54 pm |
| Poor Spike. I'm glad they're helping him as best they can. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/24/2005 09:50 pm |
| oh sneaky to leave it there! Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/24/2005 09:45 pm |
| Poor Spike. I hope Tara and Anya can help him. Will Buffy get past her stupidity and offer him Slayer blood? More story please. |
| Actually, Giles established in this chapter that Slayer blood is no different than regular human blood. The miraculous qualitites of Slayer blood is actually Fanon (fan fic based and not actually in canon) which I have no problem with but have chosen not to use in this fiction for character development reasons. So Buffy's blood *would* help him but no more than Xander's or Tara's. |
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter 5 - For All the Good He Didn’t Do | 10/24/2005 09:11 pm |
| I am so very glad that our hero is not dust...i was gonna put dead, but in spike's case, that would be redundant...love the way the scoobies, even xander, are rallying around him...and doc's bomb? god, what a cliffie.... |
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| jl1980 | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 05/25/2006 12:55 am |
oh poor spike...  help him, buffy, you've got a lot to make up for now!! great chapter, on to more |
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| romero | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/25/2005 07:26 am |
| Poor Spike. Hope the gang begin to appreciate him more. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/24/2005 09:46 pm |
| I'm just getting around to catching up on this fic. Poor Spike! |
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| Tamara | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/22/2005 12:55 am |
| Where it says review story doesn't click.
I like the idea that Spike has hardened his heart because of being left behind and that Buffy feels guilty once she found . I can't wait to see thier reactions to the damage done to Spike. |
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| Laura | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/21/2005 11:44 pm |
| Great story. I'm really enjoying it |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/21/2005 02:30 pm |
| Poor Spike. What is Docs evil plan??? |
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/20/2005 11:42 pm |
| wonderful! more please! |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter Four - Who Escapes Duty | 10/20/2005 10:10 pm |
| I feel so sorry for Spike. Let's get him some slayer's blood and a nice rest. Great chapter, I like your backstory for Doc. |
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| jl1980 | Three - The Wisdom of Crocodiles | 05/25/2006 12:52 am |
| ugh...how ghastly...what is he planning? buffy, you better get your butt moving and find him!!! |
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| Chanel 5 | Three - The Wisdom of Crocodiles | 10/19/2005 01:38 pm |
| I hope Spike does get away, and then does go kill them all except Dawn. Buffy better redeem herself fast!!! |
| Well if she does it too fast I'll run out of story...%^> |
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| MarzBar | Three - The Wisdom of Crocodiles | 10/17/2005 08:05 pm |
| ACK!! Poor Spike. Nice that Buffy saved Dawn and herself but the fact that she totally forgot about Spike and just assumed the worst is not a good sign. |
| Well if she didn't do something wrong she'd have nothing to regret and I'd have looked, that nifty quote up for mothing. ;^> Things will get rough for our intrepid couple, but fear not!!! |
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| Pin | Three - The Wisdom of Crocodiles | 10/17/2005 06:56 pm |
| Another excellent story. I'm really intersted to see what you do with this. What does that energy ball really do to Dawn? And Spike - waht can I say - neglected, regected, forgotten and now tortured! Looking forward to more & thanks. |
| I'm a huge fan of happy endings but I like a lot of pain in the middle parts. Makes the happy ending part happier! |
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| ComedyofErrors | Three - The Wisdom of Crocodiles | 10/17/2005 05:22 pm |
| Continuing strong, please keep going! |
| THANK YOU! I will try to avoid the evil writers block that got me in its clutches last week. |
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| jl1980 | Two - We Band Of Buggered | 05/25/2006 12:49 am |
| oh no!! buffy, how could you leave him!!! no!!! i'm hooked now, though... on to read more |
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| ComedyofErrors | Two - We Band Of Buggered | 09/30/2005 07:15 pm |
| Oh, poor Spike. I hope Doc suffers before the end. Please continue. |
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| Chanel 5 | Two - We Band Of Buggered | 09/30/2005 06:54 pm |
| I'm not even going to review until you get Buffy's ass back to finding Spike!!! |
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| jl1980 | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 05/25/2006 12:47 am |
| very good insight into the feelings of the characters going into this battle...looking forward to where you take this |
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| Confused Muse | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 10/26/2005 07:09 pm |
| Good chapter, great juxtaposiotion of Dawn's fellings and Buffy's...
Only one downside - the change to present tense in the last scene kinda threw me! |
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| Lou | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 10/24/2005 11:25 pm |
| God that was painful. How our poor Spike suffers! And I fear there's worse to come. Buffy needs a smack in the kisser. |
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| romero | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 10/22/2005 11:10 am |
| Thanks for a great story. Please update soon! |
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 10/18/2005 12:49 am |
| OMG, you're evil! you can't just leave it there! More, Please! |
| I'll try to have more by the end of the week. |
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| jane | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 10/17/2005 08:00 pm |
| Oh bloody hell things don't look good. I was a bit pissed off by Buffys' blase attitude to Spikes' disappearance. Now she knows the truth I hope she can make it right. |
| Great! You were supposed to be pissed off! %^> Thanks! |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone | 09/29/2005 07:20 am |
| Saving the world with superglue. Good line. Like to see more. |
| Thank you. It's what I was screaming at the screen during The Gift when Buffy took her very eager jump so I guess it's not surprising it grew into a plot bunny. |
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