Home | New/Updated | Completed | Authors | Titles | Search | Sweet Temptation | TopTen | Betas | Challenges | Tools | Chat | Help | Login Something Blue, Something More by Opal   Araedhel Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 08/04/2006 10:20 am Please update soon. I love this story and can't wait to read more!   Rebelbaby Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 08/03/2006 03:46 pm OMG I love it. Update please!!   Dom Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 08/02/2006 09:31 am i really really really like this story but you have to update more im all edgy waiting for the next part of this awesome story   BerMH Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/28/2006 04:04 am I'm hoping for an update soon! You've managed to implement all of the qualities I love into this one story, so I can't wait!   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/24/2006 02:52 am I *really* hope it's the baby peeing on the couch...   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/22/2006 04:19 pm Oh my gosh ... what a closing line. I was in stitches. ROFLMAO!!! Good bonding moments with William, Spike and Buffy. it does make sense that William wouldn't be there if he wasn't needed in some way. Good way to go about it. Enjoyed this update.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/21/2006 08:05 am lol one assumes thats baby william??   vladt Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 08:48 pm another great update, thank you. and what a way to end a chapter. hilarious.   Cordykitten Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 05:21 pm Mmm change of plans again. So William will go in as Willow. The bonding time was cute But who is there that is ready to pee on the couch? Cliffhanger again ;-) Loved reading the chapters :-D   MarzBar Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 09:32 am Nice little interlude for some family WAFF. Who's peeing on the couch? More story please.   Karyn Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 07:59 am lmao! cool, loved the interaction between the family! awesome update!   sirc Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 03:42 am Loved this   Verda Ch 35 - Attack of the Pig 07/20/2006 01:42 am Nice that they're spending family time together. Stake Travers huh? Deserves to be tortured instead, but as long as he's dead guess it doesn't matter much. Another good chapter, thanks for the update.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/22/2006 04:14 pm oooo ... good twists and turns here. Perfect! What a dastardly way to deal with Harmony. LOL. I like this plan.   Cordykitten Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/20/2006 05:14 pm Anya (Anyanka more precisely) knew Dru too? It's a small world. Quentin Travers? Unexpected turn So Buffy is right, he is evil. (I like the twist) And Harmony will play the trap and she won't know it. *on to the next chapter*   Diane-01 Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/19/2006 03:46 pm Grate fic hope 2 see more frome you and this fic keep up the grate work.   vladt Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/11/2006 05:20 pm are you sure dru is sane? harmony! that is hilarious or insane. maybe both. great update, thanks for the read.   sirc Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/11/2006 12:09 pm great chapter   Verda Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/10/2006 01:57 am Finally got caught up on my reviews. It's nice having a sane Dru for a change, she's been quite helpful. Nice going with the evil Travers, Miss Edith's father. All kinds of nice surprises. Good job, really like how it's coming along.   Jackofspikes Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/10/2006 12:43 am Brilliant as usual...i patiently await more.   MarzBar Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/09/2006 11:57 pm OMG! Things are pretty dire if they have to rely on Harm to go through with a plan, start to finish. More story soon please.   Spikes Slayer2 Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/09/2006 09:32 pm hehe.. thats so cunning!!   Karyn Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/09/2006 08:53 pm cool chapter opal!! very neat!   Elizabeth Anne Summers Chapter 34 - What a Madman Wants 07/09/2006 08:19 pm heehee, using harmony as bait, i likey   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 07/22/2006 04:10 pm Always a pleasure for an update, Opal. Only thing I'm slightly confused about is that Angel and Dru were in the car with Cordy? I thought Dru kind of left on her own a couple chapters ago to get there without Angel? It's been so long that I'm probably messed up in the head with what I remember. I just love reading this story. {Smiles}   Cordykitten Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 07/20/2006 04:50 pm Oh I missed reading some chapters again... Ah, Dawn didn't know William? Anyway, the begin was fun *gg*. And it seems Dru brought some answers with her. And :-p to the cliffhanger, but only this time. Because I can read on. Good if you miss some chapters ;-)   sirc Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 07/03/2006 04:59 am great chapter   Aonadharcach Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/30/2006 06:26 pm Loving the story so far! I really like the new group dynamics you have put into place. Looking forward to the next chapter! :-)   deedo Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/30/2006 03:37 pm “Damn.” Dawn mumbled a girl can hope, can't she? I'm curious to find out what they're gonna do against the council, now that everyone is there   MarzBar Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/30/2006 01:30 am I went away and got a treat of two chapters to read tonight! What are Dru and Miss Edith going to reveal? This story is lots of fun. More please.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 11:08 pm oooh.. love these chapters! cant wait for more!!!   Gillypod Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 02:40 pm Consider your muse fed - get the next chappie up before I crack. Just loving this   Ariel Dawn Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 02:05 pm another great chapter!   Verda Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 01:28 pm Thanks for explanation of the infamous Miss Edith. I don't think anyone's done that before. Good chapter, have a fun and safe 4th.   vladt Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 12:41 pm have to love a tale that has dru and miss edith suppling the answers. fun read, thanks   Karyn Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 11:37 am great update opal!!   Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 06:56 am   SpaceLord Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 06:12 am Gotta love the whole gang thing and the nice sane Dru.   Lou Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 04:43 am The gang's all together!   Athenewolfe Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 04:35 am giggles Ms Edith is real! I love it! Great chapter!   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 33 - Breakfast on the Hellmouth 06/29/2006 12:20 am Ew, crushing on the nephew *giggles*   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 07/22/2006 04:04 pm Whew ... so glad it was William Jr there that grabbed Buffy. I can practically see Spike fuming. ROFL on the whole binky/diaper thing. LOL. Now how weird is that paradox ... changing your own diaper? Therapy needed after that task. LOL   sirc Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/27/2006 01:39 pm well done   Verda Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/27/2006 02:49 am Started this from the beginning, reviewed half way through and just finished reading it 'til now. Just had to tell you how much I've enjoyed it. It's very interesting and quite different from most. Hope you can update again soon. Thanks for the intriguing story.   vladt Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/26/2006 05:46 pm good update, thanks. love,", you are going to take care of yourself! Goodnight son.”   Cordykitten Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/26/2006 03:16 pm Phew! Thank god is was William. Uh-huh.. and there I thought "What!" Spike let Baby-William drop? All right..nothing happened you are going to take care of yourself Well if that isn't totally new version of taking care of yourself :-D   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/26/2006 01:01 am Spike can be such a wanker, lol   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 10:43 pm that would be freakin weird if you had to change your own diaper!! LOL   Athenewolfe Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 05:06 pm AHHHHH how sweet - I loved how spike is upset cause he dropped william lol   margaret Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 04:14 pm thanks for the update love the story   Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 03:37 pm lol, funny!   Karyn Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 01:59 pm lmao, great update, poor william having to change his own diapers!   letitia Ch 32 - Lessons from Dad 06/25/2006 01:46 pm wow. it has been a while but it was definitely worth the wait. glad that William was able to help and save Buffy again. Hoping this will be the last time they have to face danger from the Council.   Verda Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 07/10/2006 01:43 am Dru on a motorcycle? Wonder if she was wearing one of her long dresses, now that would be funny. William shouldn't scare his mom so. Thanks for the good story.   Athenewolfe Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 06/04/2006 06:27 pm oh you are mean - what an evil cliffy!   Cordykitten Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 05/27/2006 11:19 am A truly enormous task William Jr. has again, kind of saving the future and creating a haven too. Awe: Drusilla did notice the absence of William? Well, they have the family bond in the future. And she did notice that something big would happen. Though Drusilla on a bike would be a sight I would love to see too. Tease! icy cold hands grasp hers and pull her into the darkness of the crypt Though I think (hope!) it was William Jr. Looking forward to the next chapter, I hope I won't miss it. Well I took care of it. Added you LJ. :-D   Melissa Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 05/03/2006 03:15 am OMG I read the whole story in one sitting. Keep it coming this is a truly amazing story and piece of great imagination and I love it. More Please   Ineke Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/18/2006 03:36 am I love it. Please, please let everything turn out OK.   Bridget Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/17/2006 10:43 am Good chapter. I really like Drusilla in this story. I hope that William will be successful in his mission with little angst.   Lou Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/16/2006 02:30 am Hopefully friendly vamp hands!   sirc Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/14/2006 03:52 am great chapter   vladt Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/14/2006 01:33 am i really hate to repeat myself. you are EVIL. and i love it. thanks for the fun.   MarzBar Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/14/2006 12:22 am GAH!! I'm hoping that was William grabbing her. He has a huge job if he's going to save, Buffy, Dawn, Joyce, Spike and himself. Can he do something horrible to Travers? If you don't want to soil him with such revenge, write me in and I'll do it. WEG More story please.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 08:57 pm omg!!! was it william!?!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 07:18 pm I am soooo going to hope that it was William that grabbed Buffy. Excellent chapter update. Can't wait to see Dru again in this. She really fits in with it all. I like how you've written her, and I look forward to more.   maryperk Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 05:10 pm good chappy, Opal.   Jackofspikes Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 03:55 pm oooh....bet it's William...is it??? More Please   SpaceLord Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 03:53 pm Well this story sure takes some twists and turns....just when you think it's reaching it's conclusion it speeds up again. Honestly I thought that after getting revenge on Riley that the story wound wind down but I was wrong and I'm glad I was. This is just so much fun to read.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 31 - Icy Cold Hands 04/13/2006 03:37 pm bad William for scaring your mommy, yeah? hehe   Verda Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 07/10/2006 01:26 am Well why didn't the Powers stop it in the first place, stupid Powers. Now poor William must go back again, sooo not fair. Good chappie.   Athenewolfe Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 06/04/2006 06:23 pm whimpers no no no   Cordykitten Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 05/27/2006 10:39 am Uh-huh.. what happened to William Jr.? He isn't back. *reads on* Oh my.. this is truly bad. Things didn't get better, things got worse. That's why nobody is there (except the ghost of Joyce). The PTBs wants William to make things better? Good I can read on, well even for one chapter, then I've caught up with the story..   sirc Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/11/2006 01:36 pm great chapter   Spikes Slayer2 Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/11/2006 05:34 am omg.. that is soo sad... i was crying..   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/11/2006 12:22 am Oh my gosh ... {Stares at the screen with a gaped open mouth} ... that was more than evil, Opal. I do hope that your muse has inspired you to write more ... and hopefully soon. I can't wait to see what Joyce and the PTB are going ot have him do to make it right. Damn that jerk travers. He peeves me off to no end. Him and his self-righteous ways. {growls} Excellently written chapter.   vladt Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 08:50 pm yes you are evil. deliciously evil. love the update. thanks   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 03:36 pm *runs off back to her room to cry*   kim Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 12:58 pm Evil? Yes! The PTBs think it can be fixed, eh? Oh, boy.   GoldenBuffy Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 12:34 pm Gr, yes u are evil, with two E's and two I's,lol. You can give Dr. Evil a run for his money. Now get to work on the next chappie.   rayan Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 11:54 am uh ooh....and the plot thickens hehe...anyway im lovin this story!! even with all the evil cliffies you have been throwing around like rice....*grins*...good job...keep it up!   Jackofspikes Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 11:37 am oh you truly are evil...I really need more...PLLLLLEEEAASE Brilliant as usual!   Karyn Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 10:49 am ack!! whimpers...*looks around for the biggest thing i can throw* rofl...you weren't kidding when you said angst!   MarzBar Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 09:47 am Hmmmm. Pretty wretched happenings that Joyce described. What can William do to change all those bad events? Can he off Travers first? More story please.   Oracleholly Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 09:36 am yes, you are very evil! But that's okay, I am too. Such an interesting development. Looking forward to more. Write fast!   SpaceLord Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 09:32 am Ohh that Travers needs to die...and die slowly and painfully....lets get Angelus and Dru to play with him...I'm sure Dru would love to have him over for a nice Tea party   Bridget Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 09:27 am Well I am glad that the Powers will give William the opportunity to fix this mess. Can't wait to read what he will have to do.   letitia Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 08:53 am Oh you so need to write faster. I can't believe you just left it off like that for me. Wonder what Joyce is going to tell him?   maryperk Ch30 - Cuppa Hot Cocoa 04/10/2006 08:05 am Evil Opal. Good chapter. Darn that Travers. He needs to be staked over and over again.   Verda Ch 29 - Something New 07/10/2006 01:18 am Great job with William being mad at his dad and throwing his pacifier in agreement with the girls. I forgot about Dawn. Funny chapter.   Cordykitten Ch 29 - Something New 05/27/2006 10:29 am Hehe Spike tried to make fun of Buffy but this could have gone terribly wrong. Spike was lucky... *grins* And Cordelia was busy ..had managed to find a way to lock him out of changing his own ring tones. ~ Sister? Seems the big change coming was Dawn.   sirc Ch 29 - Something New 04/05/2006 09:55 am great chapter   Lou Ch 29 - Something New 04/05/2006 03:46 am I suppose it was too good to last - no you-know-who on the scene! Maybe she won't be as big a pain this time round.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 29 - Something New 04/05/2006 02:40 am ROFL !! Sister!! That's funny. Oh, and I did a perky up when I heard the waitresses name. Sure it was random, but it still made me smile {Smiles} I like Dru and Buffy trying to get Angel to eat food. Cordy changing his ring tone to the Muppets was hysterical to me. The only thing funnier would have been the Fragglerock theme. LOL. loved the update.   GoldenBuffy Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 09:49 pm Great update, u had me in stitches over the blood drinking. Can't wait till the next update!   vladt Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 09:40 pm very funny read. buffy's memory has not been updated to her "sister"? looking forward to next chapter. thanks for the excellent tale.   kim Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 06:55 pm Ah! Dawn the Key has shown up.   Athenewolfe Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 06:11 pm Ohhh wonderful chapter - I love the whole "my sister" bit and cant wait to see what william went back to. I did find two typo's and since I like mine pointed out figured you would want the same - you have "and managed to through his pacifier out of his car seat at his dad. " through - should be threw and "what William wet back to!" wet should be went. *hugs* and great updates! Oh thank goddess you caught those! I'm under so much pressure at work, but my must just forced me to write! *hugs* Opal   Bridget Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 11:33 am Good update. It is nice that everyone is getting along for a change.   MARGARET Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 10:47 am THANKS FOOR CONTINUING THE STORY, I LOVE SANE DRUCILLA   MarzBar Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 10:03 am How is Dawn a surprise? Pretty sloppy work by the monks. More story please.   Ariel Dawn Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 09:40 am oooh sister! *giggle* good chappie!   letitia Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 09:29 am Buffy has a sister now??? Wonder what else has changed since they have been away for a few days???? Love the story and how all of them ganged up on SPike in the limo. Even little William got into the act.   oracleholly Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 08:59 am And so it begins.... Dawn's arrival. I'm loving the sane Dru. It's good to have the "gang" almost all back together.   Karyn Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 08:59 am great update, opal! loved it...and ohhhh dawnie's here! lol   SpaceLord Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 06:11 am Hmm how come Buffy don't remember her sister? I thought the monks would make sure of that. Should be fun to find out.   Jackofspikes Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 06:01 am thanks for another fantastic update...really need more though! Soon...please???   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 29 - Something New 04/04/2006 05:49 am Oh noes, not DAWN.... and omg, Xander has a dark side??? I will not stop laughing uproariously at that for DAYS!!   Verda Ch 28 - Nourishment 07/10/2006 01:03 am Definately laughing,You know Dru likes to push buttons. Good read Thanks.   Cordykitten Ch 28 - Nourishment 05/27/2006 10:10 am Loved the reclaiming. Does Dru know that Cordelia will have a child (or a baby whose diapers she had to change) soon? Well, we'll see when it comes to that. Apparently Cordelia has enough of babies for now, she choose Angel's car ;-)   Athenewolfe Ch 28 - Nourishment 04/04/2006 06:06 pm lmao- I really enjoyed that last section - that was so funny - dirty minds indeed - does happy dance of reading opal ficcie   sirc Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/31/2006 12:32 pm great chapter   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/29/2006 09:13 pm I'm of the laughing my butt of variety. Vampires aren't so squeamish about genders. Heck Willow shouldn't have such a problem with it either. LOL. I love Dru with her sanity and such. She is such a riot the way you have written her now. I love it! Sorry to hear about work being a bear. I hope it eases up for you in a good way.   Bridget Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/29/2006 11:34 am Good update. I really like Drusilla in this story. I did not like her on the show.   letitia Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 07:19 am Great to see this chapter. I just love this story and will continue whenever I get the chance. Wonderful how they are all trying to make it as some sort of family. wonder what the rest of the group will think when they all show back up?   Lou Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 06:51 am Nice one, Dru!!   SpaceLord Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 04:05 am Oh yeah this chapter was good. Now I'm really looking forward to reading about joyce, hope nothing bad happened to her. I really like her and that would just be sad.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 03:27 am lololololololol eww.. hahah   MarzBar Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 12:29 am I am laughing at Dru's remarks. I am looking forward to their arrival in Sunnyhell. I hope you find time for your fans in the near future.   Karyn Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/28/2006 12:10 am lol, great update! bites nails over Joyce! still nervous!   Jackofspikes Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 11:17 pm still loving this and waiting eagerly for more!   maryperk Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 11:06 pm great chappy   vladt Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 10:43 pm laughing. great update. loved it. thanks   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 10:06 pm I said gross AND laughed, so there! rofl   GoldenBuffy Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 09:48 pm Loved this chappie, can't wait for the next update. Blood milkshakes, hee hee hee.   Ariel Dawn Ch 28 - Nourishment 03/27/2006 09:23 pm Another great chapter!   Verda Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 07/10/2006 12:52 am Maybe she did learn her lesson, hope so. Another good chapter.   Cordykitten Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 05/27/2006 09:57 am Awe, so Spike didn't get his soul, he lost the chip if I read it right but he didn't get a soul that made him feel guilty, he get something better: The feeling of being loved. ~ And Willow really needs training from the coven. Dru started the lesson and Willow needed it.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/23/2006 11:24 pm I can't wait for you to be inspired by this one again. Such a cliffhanger. Evil Opal. We love you, but you are still evil. LOL   Lynda Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/11/2006 12:27 am I so regret not telling you how much I love and follow you story. I will wait for the next chapter impatiently. P.S. Chapter 26 had me in tears.   sirc Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/09/2006 11:45 am great chapter   Kelci Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/08/2006 04:44 pm i love it!!! keep writing!!! NEED MORE!!!   lilmamaday Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 06:24 pm You are just mean! You love to leave us hanging! Great update! I really love sane Dru!   Lou Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 01:04 pm All very cryptic about Joyce - spill!!   Athenewolfe Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 12:55 pm I can't wait to find out what is going to happen - thank goodness willow seems to be responding well to Dru - I can;t wait to find out about Joyce and WIlliam and how will everyone react to spike's chip being out and dru's new sanity. greta story   daisy Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 10:40 am wow. i cant' wait for more. i hope that teaches willow a lesson. and please let joyce be okay. more soon please   Bridget Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 10:30 am Who would have thought that Dru would be the sane one in the bunch. Good chapter.   Jackofspikes Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 10:27 am still loving it...go you!   PyroChilde Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 05:45 am I like this new and improved Drusilla. Very kewl. Great chapter, I'm so glad for the update and can't wait for the next.   meli1_77 Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 02:49 am I love this story, but you already know that. *HUGS*   SpaceLord Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 02:18 am Hmm all the questions are good. I hope joyce is allright, could be fun to see the 2 grandmothers bond over their grandchild   Pulchra Nex Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 01:01 am This story is great! (said that a thousand times already) I really love it and hope you'll update soon!   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 12:43 am aarrghhh lol.. that was hilarious how willow thought she pee'd her pants.. lol   vladt Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/07/2006 12:07 am good update,love dru. was going to whine about the brevity of the update... ok, i am whining a bit. but this is such a good read that i will quietly await the next chapter. thanks for the fun read.   GoldenBuffy Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/06/2006 11:46 pm Sneaky Dru, loved her lesson to Willow!   Karyn Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/06/2006 11:29 pm hopefully willow's learned her lesson, but i'm still worried about Joyce...great update!   MarzBar Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/06/2006 11:24 pm Good illusion Drew did for Willow. She's pretty powerful, especially now that she's sane again. More story pleas.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/06/2006 09:32 pm Where's Dru going to send her?   maryperk Ch 27 - Lessons Learned 03/06/2006 08:42 pm Lovely chappy, Opal. Very good work.   Verda Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 07/10/2006 12:42 am Great, how will they ever know if something happened or not. Xander does have to get over his little crush. Good chappie.   Cordykitten Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 05/27/2006 07:54 am *gg* Dru had fun with Angel in the spa. Pink tooth-nails? Huh? Dru knows about unexpected changes they will find at home? That doesn't sound so good. I'll try and read the rest later!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 03/23/2006 11:19 pm Uh oh ... Dru knows what is up. I hope it isn't all bad. {whimpers} Excellently written chapter. Here you have us still on the edge of our seats.   Athenewolfe Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 03/07/2006 10:30 am I loved this chapter - it was really wonderful heheh. I love you characterizations!   GoldenBuffy Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/27/2006 11:22 pm OPAL... whines and rants. Ok, I can't wait for your next update. What happened to Joyce, and the gangs futures, I can't wait!!!   stephanie Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/27/2006 06:21 pm cliffhangers bad, more writing good! thanks for the great story. write more soon! i need to know what happens!   PyroChilde Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/25/2006 10:27 am This is a really kewl fic. I love Dru in it. What's to come next? Can't wait to find out.   redwulf50 Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/24/2006 07:04 pm Excellent chappie   letitia Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 09:48 pm Come on now Dru... What does she know??? Love the update.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 05:47 pm What was that last thought from Dru about??? Is she evil??????   Oracleholly Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 03:55 pm *shakes fist vigorously* OPAL!!!!! GRRRR with the evil cliffie. I want to know about Joyce. But I will admist the vision of Angel getting a mani/pedi with Drusilla is hilarious.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 03:22 pm arrrgfhhhh!! evil cliffie!! great chap tho..   vladt Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 03:09 pm sane dru is a lovely touch. good chapter. thanks   kim Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 02:55 pm So is that why Joyce hasn't called/isn't around? Though, the major consequences should be for William's time, everything he knew, has the potential to be drastically different. That spell shouldn't randomly pick something for an immediate change. Magic seems to work on the physics rule of equal and opposite reaction, if anything. It's always odd seeing Dru be sane..LOL   sirc Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 01:32 pm great chapter   Bridget Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 12:28 pm I can't believe it. The chapter starts off nicely and then a cliffhanger. How can you do that. Great chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next. I hope it is not bad.   MarzBar Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 12:22 pm Lots of allusions to the consequences but no concrete evidence or information about said consequences yet. More story please.   Athenewolfe Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 12:19 pm excellant update sweetie! I am enjoying the story!   maryperk Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:59 am Good chappy, Opal!   SpaceLord Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:56 am How come I think that these consequenses have something to do with Joyce. Hmm that would be sad but I guess that might be what it would cost.   daisy Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:39 am evil cliffy. more soon please. i hope joyce is okay.   lilmamaday Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:16 am Wow! Its really wierd to see a Sane Dru and I am dying to know what she knows! I love how accepting that Willow is being to going to get trained, hopefully this means that we won't see Evil Willow, she was just plain scary! Still loving the story!   Karyn Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:15 am great chappie! *bites nails* wonder what's next...ugh! lol   Jackofspikes Ch 26 - An Eye-Opening Realization 02/23/2006 11:08 am oh cruel! finishing like that...and people say I'm evil! lol   Cordykitten Ch 25 - Magic 05/27/2006 07:45 am Uh-huh.. they forget to tell Giles and Joyce, but Joyce didn't question where Buffy was? This sounds indeed bad. ~ And the consequences of the magic, I hope they won't be too bad. But we'll see.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 25 - Magic 03/23/2006 11:16 pm Oh my gosh ... you have me biting me nails again. I have faith in your happy endings, but eeek ... I'm scared now. Where is Joyce?   Lou Ch 25 - Magic 02/23/2006 04:47 am Just when I was getting ready for the pipe and slippers scene! Fabtastic!   Oracleholly Ch 25 - Magic 02/23/2006 12:49 am Maybe my nerddom foresaw the magic with consequences thread of your plot??? And yeah, where is Dru and Angel... Cordy's out shopping I'm thinking. Love that it's still going on... and that chapter wasn't the end. I do hope Joyce is okay.   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 25 - Magic 02/23/2006 12:38 am oooh.. oh no.. i wonder whats up with joyce.. and yeh.. OMFG.. lol   vladt Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 05:49 pm glad to see "consequences" being addressed. should make for very enjoyable reading. thanks for the fine read.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 05:28 pm B-But... he did it for a good reason! *pouts*   MarzBar Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 02:06 pm Glad to see more of this story. Where's Joyce? I hope the Initiative isn't using her to get to Buffy, et al. More story please.   Athenewolfe Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 12:26 pm wonderful story - I am enjouing this greatly - keep wondering where the heck is Joyce. Good story sweets. The only thing I am not sure of is Willow's use of “I’ll have to remember that as he pontificates to me.” I am not sure she would use that - it seems to me to be more of a Giles or Wesley word. However, the rest of the story feels perfect to me. Great writing! Thanks for the awesome chappie!   maryperk Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 12:17 pm lovely chappy.   Bridget Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 11:11 am I hope the consequences won't be so dire. Great chapter.   SpaceLord Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 10:54 am Ohhh more excitement before the end how very nice   daisy Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 10:51 am oh i hope joyce is okay. more soon please. i can't wait   Karyn Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 10:50 am angst is nothing to feel bad about...every story needs some angst, and Spike and Buffy usually have their fair share...lol   sirc Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 09:52 am You're totally right about pointing out the consequenses line. No matter how horrified Willow seems to be, it's still a big possibility that she will take the easy way first when she doesn't think things through. Or when Giles decides on a lecture after all, she may get angry or upset again. I hope Joyce is alright, but I have a feeling that that's not completely true. Great chapter   letitia Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 09:13 am I can and will take your angst any day that I can get an update to this story. I just hope Joyce is okay. Love how mature Spike sounds.... just love the update.   lilmamaday Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 09:06 am Great update! I am just really worried about what they will have to face next and I am hoping that Joyce is ok! Please update soon!   Ariel Dawn Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 08:13 am lol, of course I'm not saying 'OMFG...etc" I like angst (points at LV) another great chapter, you are just motoring along with this fic. Yay!   Jackofspikes Ch 25 - Magic 02/22/2006 08:09 am lol...I'm really enjoying this fic. Keep up the good work!   Verda Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 07/10/2006 12:03 am William doesn't need to be turned Buffy's there to be a bone marrow donor. Good chapter.   Cordykitten Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 05/27/2006 07:40 am It was sad to see William Jr. go, but it was necessary. Lets hope that his life is better for him now too. Maybe even his mother will be alive for him now because he prevented Buffy's death.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 03/23/2006 11:12 pm {whimpers softly} That was so wonderful. I can feel the heart clutch of the tears, but it is so happy at the same time. I really hope Willow listens.   Oracleholly Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/23/2006 12:45 am Love the note left behind. So, he will continue to be a vamp in the future... even though Buffy could have cured him. Interesting. Great Cordy ending to the chapter   sirc Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/19/2006 07:45 am great chapter   vladt Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 05:48 pm letter was a nice touch to william's exit. thanks for the read.   lilmamaday Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 01:31 pm Loved this chapter! It was beautiful! I can't wait to see what happens next!   Bridget Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 12:40 pm Just lovely.   letitia Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 11:28 am I am just glad that William finally got this chance to be with his family all happy at least for a little while. I hope that Spike and Buffy will take all of this to heart. Willow better follow through on her promise. And love Cordy with the timing... Great update.   daisy Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 10:09 am sweet chapter. cant wait for more. soon please   Athenewolfe Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 08:01 am ahhhhh - sweet ficcie - I am really enjoying this and can't wait to see how you conclude this ficcie!   Spikes Slayer2 Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/15/2006 05:16 am awww.. omg i just read ur story from begining to end and i love it!! please update soon!!!   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/14/2006 10:56 pm Ohhhh baaaaby *huggles William*   MarzBar Ch 24 - Make Evey Moment Count 02/14/2006 10:08 pm Beautiful WAFF for this chapter!   Verda Ch 23 - Mommy? 07/09/2006 11:55 pm How sweet for Spike to watch his family sleeping. Hope Willow will go to the coven and get the help she needs. Nice try William if you think you parents are going to let you have a girl sleep over. Enjoyed this alot. Thanks   Cordykitten Ch 23 - Mommy? 05/27/2006 07:34 am Awe, Jr. was like William Sr. before. Yeah, children can be nasty. But it seems killing Riley was the best in the long run, so hard it sounds. And Jr. did save Willow too. Or maybe Xander and Tara which she would have hurt.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 23 - Mommy? 03/23/2006 11:03 pm Yippee! Maybe Willow won't go all magic crazy on us now. Plus with Spike being so close to her, I doubt that Buffy will die at Glory's hands. {bounces in her seat with joy}   Oracleholly Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/23/2006 12:41 am I'm going to hate to see future William go; he was cool. You know that he will create a time paradox when he goes back... cause the him of the future because of the events he just created will have altered everything... he will no longer be a vampire --- seeing as how Buffy will be alive to cure him. Oh well, that's the nerd in me, going off. lol   Athenewolfe Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/15/2006 07:59 am oh this was a super fab chapter - I really enjoyed reading it and love the tidbits of what is to come - EXCELLANT!   sirc Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/12/2006 04:05 am great chapter   vladt Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 09:15 pm good update, thanks. wonder which was more important to william? bike, dog, mel?   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 06:52 pm awwww, he's so sweet   MarzBar Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 06:42 pm Glad William is sending Willow away in time. Love the wishes he made.   lilmamaday Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 12:39 pm Awwww....that was such a fluffy fun chapter! Hopefully William's visit back in time will really make a difference and the future will be better! Please update soon!   letitia Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 10:57 am I am just so happy that William got a chance to see and spend time with Buffy and Spike together for a while. I am hoping that when he does return that things will be so much better for all of them. And what types of schemes does Spike have in mind for the little family?? Nicknames are what parents have for all kids...HA.. Hoping Willow takes all of what William had to say honestly and truly. Great chapter.   maryperk Ch 23 - Mommy? 02/06/2006 10:26 am Nice chappy.   Verda Ch 22 - Healing Power 07/09/2006 11:46 pm William's a vamp because Buffy killed herself, well now they can change his furture. Dru sane? Angel deserved that punch. Another good chapter.   Cordykitten Ch 22 - Healing Power 05/27/2006 07:25 am Well I hope it was worse it, William Jr. torturing Riley. Not that killing him will influence him in a bad way too. Seems as if William Jr. healed Dru. (Maybe gave her a soul back?) Oh, and Buffy will see her son now   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 22 - Healing Power 03/23/2006 10:59 pm Wow ... awesome chapter. I have 23-27 still to go to catch up, but hot diggity dog I'm excited about reading every one. The back story, or rather future story, that you have for them was so full of pain. I'm glad that it will change now. Dru hitting Angel in her first moment of clairty was HILARIOUS!   Oracleholly Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/23/2006 12:36 am Opal- I feel like a shmuck (sp?) - I had caught up earlier to Chap 21, but that was before these past four weeks of hell! lol So, now I've re-recaught up, and I'm loving this chapter. So much goodness. William giving Drusilla back her mind -- she said "spark" does that mean soul? or just her clear thinking? Then with the future William and Spike bonding. OH and Dru knocking Angel clear across the room... very nice.   Athenewolfe Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/15/2006 07:50 am Ohhh me likey - I like Dru's first action to punch out the angel beast lol - sweet!   Pulchra Nex Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/03/2006 07:15 am okay... where's the rest of it? come on... I know you wrote it... no one can write that and not write further... come on... pretty please? with Spike on top?   Jessica Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/03/2006 12:12 am Very evil place to leave it. ; ) Please update again soon.   v ladt Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/03/2006 12:05 am great update to a fantastic fic. i'm not even upset with the ending of the chapter. thanks for a great read. ok, i lied about not being upset, please, update soon.   lilmamaday Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 04:14 pm I bet Buffy really wasn't expecting that! I can't wait to hear what he tells Buffy! Please update soon!   daisy Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 02:17 pm i hope buffy is okay. great story and i'm glad riley got what he deserved. mroe soon please.   Cheryl Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 10:59 am This is a fabulous story - I have been copying it to a word document so I can periodically go back and re-read (saves on connection time as well). Can't wait for the next chapter. Warm regards, Cheryl   seraiza Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 09:41 am lets hope that future william didnt go back into the past fo nothing... waiting for more!   letitia Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 09:02 am What a way for William to be fully turned. I just hope that he gets a chance to really spend some quality time with Buffy and Spike before he leaves. And GO DRU..   kim Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 07:23 am Ah, so Dru has her soul and sanity back, Will has a lot to explain to Buffy, and hopefully everyone can keep Angel from doing something stupid in the future. Good show.   sirc Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 06:11 am great chapter   meli1_77 Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 05:53 am Thank you. *HUGS* You know you are evil, right? *giggles*   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 22 - Healing Power 02/02/2006 05:52 am Oh noes, Dru sane?   Verda Ch 21 - Vengeance 07/09/2006 11:41 pm That was pretty dark but he deserved every bit of it! Spike cheated on Buffy? and she went insane and killed herself? Yeeek, that's pretty bad maybe now things will be better. Very good chapter.   Cordykitten Ch 21 - Vengeance 05/27/2006 07:18 am Spike had changed? Maybe because of the aftereffects of the punishment? Interesting.. well, William junior should know (coming for the future). *sigh* Oh I see, it got bad indeed. Wow... William Jr. took the revenge he had Riley marked for all by himself. Hopefully it will end well now.   Athenewolfe Ch 21 - Vengeance 02/15/2006 07:45 am all vengence like wow - what a heartbreaking back story - excallnt chappie!   sam Ch 21 - Vengeance 02/02/2006 02:26 pm so gross, no one deserves that, not even riley.   sam Ch 21 - Vengeance 02/02/2006 01:56 pm so gross, no one deserves that, not even riley.   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 21 - Vengeance 02/01/2006 11:01 pm {staring with her mouth agape} HOly crap! Wow! That was one heck of a torture scene. Spike cheated on Buffy in the future? I am glad that won't happen now. Spike was always so loyal and true. I look forward to the next update.   letitia Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/26/2006 09:18 am I am just glad that William was able to stop Buffy. This was her defining moment and he helped to stop his family from imploding. Willam really made his "vampire" family proud. I hope Buffy realizes what she was stopped from doing. Love grown William   vladt Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 05:48 pm strong update. probably not as dark as you thought, because, well it's riley, come on, rejoice. i think you can see that anything done to riley or xander would seem mild to me. (that was a terrible sentence) thanks for the chapter   lilmamaday Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 03:03 pm Definately a dark chapter but I am glad that Riley is no longer a danger to them! I wasn't expecting to see William come from the future to fufill his call for vengeance but it was good that he did after hearing about the horrible life he lived. I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy wakes up! Please update soon!   daisy Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 02:58 pm wow. mroe soon please. i cant wiat. poor william losing his mother like that, but now everything will be okay, right? cant wait for more.   Jessica Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 02:52 pm Ooh! I love this story. So glad that Riley got what was coming to him. Looking forward to more.   MarzBar Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 12:42 pm YAY! Riley torture! William did it so well it almost seems he had prior experience. I hope Spuffy can live together now and provide William a good home.   Pulchra Nex Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 11:18 am oooh Perrrrfect ending for this perrrfect night... hope you update soon! I'm of to bed!   Oracleholly Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 09:40 am oooo child!!! I've finally caught up and so glad that I did. That was some real sweet vengeance!!! LOVE IT. Cool how I picture William looking very much like Connor -- they could be brothers. Must be the "family" thing.   Ariel Dawn Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 08:28 am OMG...That was cringe worthy...literally, I had to leave the computer for a moment there. YOU ARE EVIL. LOL. Bring on the next chapter   idk5743228 Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 08:24 am creative little sprog, isn't he? I feel so much better now that Riley has been dealt with. Great chapter   sirc Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 07:41 am great chapter   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 07:23 am Yay! Riley torture! *dances*   maryperk Ch 21 - Vengeance 01/25/2006 06:45 am OUCH. That had to hurt.   Verda Ch 20 - Appearances 07/09/2006 11:28 pm Couldn't send a review for the last chapter, it Fatal Errored on me. Hope this one gets to you. Grown William, now that's interesting. Woner wants that's about. Thanks for the good read. You're welcome...thanks for reading.   Athenewolfe Ch 20 - Appearances 06/25/2006 04:57 pm Sigh - I love auntie willow and cordy in this fic - great story! Thanks!   Cordykitten Ch 20 - Appearances 05/27/2006 07:10 am Mmm Cordelia had a vision that Willow had to stop Buffy? Well, she was there in time but who is the man in the shadows? Awe, not so little William any more. What happened? *reads on*   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 20 - Appearances 02/01/2006 10:56 pm OOOOOOO .... running to the next chapter that I see here, boy howdy. William is there ... all grown up? Nice twist.   kim Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 11:29 pm That was certainly a surprise, but Buffy did need to be stopped. She would cease to be the good person still inside if she went through with torturing Riley.   Piper Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 11:02 pm ohhh!!! interesting twist. update asap please!   Lou Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 10:37 pm Loved the reveal!   idk5743228 Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 09:10 pm I was promised pain to Riley. Really, I remember distinctly asking for pain to be inflicted. You promised. *whining and pouting*   letitia Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 06:01 pm YEA...... more story. Great update. Can't wait for grown William to explain.   Tamara Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 05:59 pm I hope that William from time traveling because growth spurts that fast are never good.   gaillee Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 05:39 pm Life does tend to happen...Thanks for the fine update. Will be watching..   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 04:59 pm No Riley torture??!! You tease!!   maryperk Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 04:27 pm Don't let Wulfie harass you, Opal. Perfect cliffy ending there! Good chapter.   Ariel Dawn Ch 20 - Appearances 01/24/2006 04:14 pm Hehehehe, fun! Looking forward to Riley torture! Short but good! More!   Cordykitten Ch 19 - Playing Games 05/27/2006 07:06 am Yay, they are there. And thanks to Riley's winnings there is some money that Buffy and Spike can use for good ~ And Dru was right about the cheese *gg* And now Riley will get what he deserves.   Athenewolfe Ch 19 - Playing Games 02/15/2006 07:41 am what is going on? Looks confused and runs to the next chappie - I love time travel!   Athenewolfe Ch 19 - Playing Games 02/15/2006 07:41 am what is going on? Looks confused and runs to the next chappie - I love time travel!   gaillee Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/29/2005 07:31 pm Good story. Am really liking it a lot...will be watching for updates   bubble_blunder Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/29/2005 02:44 am Lovely update! More soon, please! With lots of tortured Riley on top? -Lisa   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/26/2005 01:55 am So awesome that Buffy is following Angel, Dru and Spike instead of chastising. I LOVE this Buffy. I hope Spike's friends are going to take care of Willow nicely. Maybe they can take her up to Cordy's room. I look forward to the next chapter after the new year.   vladt Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/25/2005 03:33 am good update, thanks for the christmas present. merry christmas   ComedyofErrors Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/24/2005 05:59 pm Happy Holidays and thank you for the chapter!   Lou Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/24/2005 12:27 am Heee! I hope he's a goner!   redwulf50 Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/23/2005 07:14 pm *snort* I so need more Riley torture for Christmas   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 19 - Playing Games 12/23/2005 06:28 pm YAY!! MAIM CORNFED!!   Verda Ch 18 - Las Vegas 07/09/2006 11:12 pm At least everything seems to be going better for them now. Can't wait for Spike and Angel to get there. Good read. Thank you!   Cordykitten Ch 18 - Las Vegas 05/27/2006 06:54 am Dru will need cheese? I think she knows of the rats. Why shouldn't she want cheese otherwise? Yet the rats aren't there. Oh *gg* Dru changed the ringing tone ;-) And Riley felt for Buffy's play, that's good. Will give Spike and the other time to get there.   Oracleholly Ch 18 - Las Vegas 02/23/2006 12:22 am *snickers* love the techno savvy Dru; Stupid Riley - the most idiotic man ever invented fic/television wise - I mean how daft do you have to be to fall for Buffy's little scam. LIke she would actually appreciate being kidnapped by him. Grrr.   Athenewolfe Ch 18 - Las Vegas 02/15/2006 07:39 am how stupid is riley? Shakes head...   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/20/2005 10:57 pm YEAH!!! {cheers} Getting ever closer to Riley getting his ass handed to him on a platter. Awesome! Loved Buffy's act. That really had to kill her to do. Excellent work all around.   vladt Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/18/2005 09:08 pm good updated.really enjoying this fic. thanks   ComedyofErrors Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 05:29 pm Happy to see a new chapter, but completely understand about RL obligations! Thanks for writing and sharing this with us.   SpaceLord Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 03:02 am Nice update, been a while but this story is good and I can't wait for the next chapter. I also love Dru in this story she is always good fun.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 02:56 am I'm getting so nervous!! Hehe!   maryperk Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 02:53 am good chappy, Opal. Love that Dru changed Angel's cellphone ringer. LOL   MarzBar Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 02:52 am Great chapter!! I love Buffy's acting; she's almost as good as Cordelia. Will you let the baby bite Cardbored? He deserves a little vengeance of his own. More story soon please.   Ariel Dawn Ch 18 - Las Vegas 12/17/2005 02:20 am Wooo hooo! update! Loved Dru being a playful...wonder what she's got programmed into Angel's cell phone...hehehehe   Verda Ch 17 - Challenges 06/26/2006 10:36 pm Was starting to wonder when William was going to feed. Good to know that Amy was going to have new friends to play with. Lol...happy fun in the little cage for Amy!Thanks for leaving feedback. *hugs*   Cordykitten Ch 17 - Challenges 05/27/2006 06:47 am On the way again. But the rest of the Scoobies knows now where Riley is going to go to   Oracleholly Ch 17 - Challenges 02/23/2006 12:16 am First Walsh becomes a rat and now Forrest... lmao.   Athenewolfe Ch 17 - Challenges 02/15/2006 07:37 am LOL they are going to have a collection of rats arn't they? LOL good update!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 17 - Challenges 11/16/2005 05:36 am I feel bad that Cordy had to zap Buffy, but she had to do something to save them all. Cute part about Will and the nursing. More friends for Amy ... YEAH! Loved the chapter update.   Lou Ch 17 - Challenges 11/14/2005 02:28 pm Poor Buffy's been out of it a bit long now -- baby needs her to be awake! Where's Spike at?   ComedyofErrors Ch 17 - Challenges 11/14/2005 12:38 am I love your Cordelia. So perfect. Naughty Willow. Thanks! I thought it was time to start getting Willow in trouble.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 17 - Challenges 11/14/2005 12:21 am LoL, loved the baby biting whatever's in reach... I did that to my dad when I was a baby. I was his first and boy did he learn quick after that, rofl Ouch! Well I bet your teeth didn't hurt as much as Williams. Thanks for the review!   MarzBar Ch 17 - Challenges 11/14/2005 12:15 am Oooh goody! Another rat friend for Amy and Maggie! When the baby nurses, what does he drink? Milk and blood together? More story soon please. Thanks! I'm not done with Forrest and Walsh yet, even though they are rats. I have something in mind for them. I haven't quite decided if he should drink something other then milk yet.   SpaceLord Ch 17 - Challenges 11/13/2005 11:44 pm Well I'm still waiting for the action. That should be fun, give Riley to Dru, I'm sure she can have a tea party with him I promise, action soon!!! Mayhem coming up! All the fun stuff to write about and read.   spike_spetslayer Ch 17 - Challenges 11/13/2005 11:30 pm Loved the update, and eagerly awaiting something more.... Thank you!   bubble_blunder Ch 17 - Challenges 11/13/2005 11:17 pm Great update! I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update. -Lisa Thank You!   jane Ch 17 - Challenges 11/13/2005 11:03 pm I liked how Cordelia went from knocking Buffy out. To tending to the baby to berating Riley about his musical taste. All without missing a beat. The girls smooth. Excellent chappie. Thank You!   Ariel Dawn Ch 17 - Challenges 11/13/2005 10:55 pm lol, Forest's a rat? fun! Great update! *hugs* Thanks for the review! I have evil evil evil plans for those little rats!!!*hugs*   Verda Ch 16 - Changes 06/26/2006 10:24 pm Hell hath no fury as a pissed off mommy slayer! Good reading. Don't piss ma off!   Cordykitten Ch 16 - Changes 05/27/2006 06:41 am Too bad... Willow (and the others) good caught! Even the hacking.. but what did Willow do? Another spell to turn Maggie into a rat *gg* Oh, did she deserve it? With all the plans she had I think yes. ~ Wonder what vision Cordelia had. And YAY for little William *gg* Good boy indeed. *smile* Oh, even better! Riley is marked for doing wrong. So William had a purpose when he bit him.   Athenewolfe Ch 16 - Changes 02/15/2006 07:33 am Super fab chapter- I loved the marked for vengence thingy that the sprog made. Really sweet detail! Maggie as a rat was priceless as well... but still marking as vengence was fab!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 16 - Changes 11/11/2005 08:45 am Slayer is going to kick RIley's arse. Love the bite of Little William. That was just adorable and perfect for him to mark Riley like that. Look forward to more.   Pulchra Nex Ch 16 - Changes 11/06/2005 08:38 pm oh yeah! :sings: Someone's going to get you...! :evilchuckle: I hope Riley and Forrest live long enough for some good old fashioned torture!   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 16 - Changes 11/06/2005 01:35 am Go William!! And go Buffy, maim him! Maim him! lol   SpaceLord Ch 16 - Changes 11/05/2005 08:39 pm ohh vengance can't get enough of that.....this is going to be good   seraiza Ch 16 - Changes 11/05/2005 08:27 pm riley being marked for vegence.. thats good.... waiting for more!   jane Ch 16 - Changes 11/05/2005 07:01 pm Oooooh I'm so excited I can't wait for the next chappie.   ComedyofErrors Ch 16 - Changes 11/05/2005 05:19 pm Ha, Walsh the rat! Great idea. I love Little William getting in on the act with his bite.   MarzBar Ch 16 - Changes 11/05/2005 05:05 pm Teeheehee!! Walsh is a real rat now! I hope Willow just leaves her out in the wild to fend for herself. Gotta love William's vengeance bite. More soon please.   Verda Ch 15 - Conversations 06/26/2006 10:07 pm Love it when the Aurelian clan comes together for a good purpose. Another good chapter. Thank you.   Cordykitten Ch 15 - Conversations 05/27/2006 06:29 am Oh, Riley found that kind of hotel! And too bad: Riley made the wrong decision after he spoke with Forrest. Good! Buffy was able to speak with Spike.   Oracleholly Ch 15 - Conversations 02/23/2006 12:09 am Go Cordy with the mating knowledge and her helpful suggestions.   Athenewolfe Ch 15 - Conversations 02/15/2006 07:30 am I love the bond - hopefully he can rescure them before they meet with forest and walsh. Eeek!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 15 - Conversations 11/11/2005 08:44 am Dying to find out too if Dru is friend or foe. She can go either way depending on the situation. Love the update. Thanks Tasha! I love writing Dru...but I"ve tried to keep her at a minimum in this fic. She will be coming up in more future chappies though.   MarzBar Ch 15 - Conversations 11/05/2005 03:54 am Thank you Dru! I hope she continues to help her family. And I am looking forward to somebody kicking Cardbored's ass all over the desert.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 15 - Conversations 11/05/2005 03:47 am Ooooo, can't wait for more. Riley needs to be bashed in the head.   jane Ch 15 - Conversations 11/05/2005 12:50 am Aaaargh that double crossing snake Riley, I so hope he gets the kicking he deserves.   SpaceLord Ch 15 - Conversations 11/05/2005 12:32 am Well this story is rapidly moving towards a nice big conflict. Can't wait for the next chapter.   BerMH ch 14 - Revalations 07/28/2006 01:07 am I LOVE this story! I think that the whole idea of Spike, Angel, and Drusilla working together to save their unlikely family members is fantastic. I'm a sucker for irony, and given all of the history, this story is chocked full of it!   Vreda ch 14 - Revalations 06/26/2006 09:58 pm Dru showing up to help was a surprise but then again she to Spike about his son in the first place. Go team! So glad you reviewed! I know I'm late at providing feedback, but since you were so kind to review each chappie, I'm determined to get author's response on each of your reviews.   Cordykitten ch 14 - Revalations 05/27/2006 06:17 am Willow does what she can too. Thank good for Lifejournals (blogs), huh? Now Willow knows a bit more, even it is not clear. Riley is not sure either. But Spike is awake now and he, and Order of Aurelius, will seek revenge. Hopefully they are able to save them soon!   Oracleholly ch 14 - Revalations 02/23/2006 12:06 am I love your Drusilla in this piece... so great to have most of the gang all back together again. I would almost wonder if Darla were there, would she feel the same or try to persuade Drusilla astray. And Riley is such a putz.   Athenewolfe ch 14 - Revalations 02/15/2006 07:27 am go Angel, go Due, go Cordy... die Riley die! Bloody please let it be bloody! *giggles* great chappie!   seraiza ch 14 - Revalations 11/04/2005 08:32 pm love the story!!! very interesting!!! waiting for more!!! update soon!!   sirc ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 04:04 pm I almost feel sorry for Riley. He can be pretty stupid sometimes and gullible, too. But not always. Hence the almost. And even if he was brainwashed, that doesn't make me feel sorry for him.   ComedyofErrors ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 03:55 pm I do so love family reunions!   Lou ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 01:45 pm Let the hunt commence - I only hope the result is painful in the extreme for Reilly.   SpaceLord ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 08:44 am Good update, wish it was longer but hey short and sweet works too. Looking forward to the next chapter.   ~*~Tasha~*~ ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 08:38 am Very good chapter update. Angsty, but not tearing out my hair and crying my eyes out angsty. That's definitely of the good. Riley needs to go down. Totally down! I'm afraid for Buffy and William. Glad that she has a little ally in Cordy though.   MarzBar ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 07:07 am OMG!! Will Riley get offed soon! What a shithead! His friends are even worse if that's possible. Buffy will need to get strong enough to break those bonds. I hope you will give us more story soon.   Elizabeth Anne Summers ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 06:11 am Oooo yay! Can't wait to read more   Ariel Dawn ch 14 - Revalations 11/03/2005 05:18 am oooh! so exciting!   Verda Ch 13 - Help Arrives 06/26/2006 09:49 pm Good for Cordy, she'll handle him the idiot. Good reading. Thanks!   Cordykitten Ch 13 - Help Arrives 05/27/2006 05:32 am *trying to catch up a bit* Good that Dru knew where Riley took Buffy and the others. Even better that she can help with waking Spike up again. ~ And even better that Riley is underestimating Cordelia *grins*   Athenewolfe Ch 13 - Help Arrives 02/15/2006 07:23 am I absolutly adore Dru in this fic - what a wonderful characization - she is truly an underdeveloped character in a lot of fics.. What can I say - I love my Dru!   vladt Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/24/2005 11:46 pm great story. great update, even if a little too short (whines). thanks for the update.   Lou Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/17/2005 03:56 pm Excellent Riley - what a tosser!   romero Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 10:57 pm Riley doesn't stand a chance with Cordy and Dru in the mix. I always like reading about Dru when she's in a protective mood for her family.   romero Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 10:57 pm Riley doesn't stand a chance with Cordy and Dru in the mix. I always like reading about Dru when she's in a protective mood for her family.   ComedyofErrors Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 08:57 pm Brilliant Cordy speech. I can't wait to see what she and Buffy do to Riley. Nice of Dru to arrive!   jane Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 03:28 pm It's bloody brilliant keep it coming.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 03:02 am *pouts* Riley better have a very painful and bloody death...   letitia Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/15/2005 02:36 am more more more. Riley really doesn't know what he has gotten himself into. He has never really been up against the Aurelius family and he has just taken the two newest members of it. They will all be after his blood. Great updates.   SpaceLord Ch 13 - Help Arrives 10/14/2005 10:27 pm ohh just keeps getting more and more interesting now, keep the chapters coming   Verda Ch 12 - Kidnapped 06/26/2006 09:43 pm Very exciting chapter. Can't wait to see what Buffy is going to do to Riley when she wakes up and we know that Cordy's mouth won't stop either. I'm glad your liking!   Oracleholly Ch 12 - Kidnapped 02/22/2006 10:33 pm you know I think I've already reviewed this chapter, but I didn't see it & I'm trying to reread this story to catch back up. I really have enjoyed how you've made Riley the villian... cause I just detest the bastard. And I do like this last scene with the phone call between Giles and Angel.   Athenewolfe Ch 12 - Kidnapped 02/15/2006 07:20 am Can't wait to find out what happened - evil evil riley. Bad man - bad man!   Cordykitten Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/15/2005 11:13 pm Yay - Dru came to the rescue - again. And it seems Cordelia is working to get them out there, too ;-) Looking forward to read on!   spike_spetslayer Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/15/2005 04:14 am good chappie, opal, and not too angsty yet. keep em coming....   MarzBar Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/14/2005 05:44 pm Still loving this story. Surprised that Buffy got fangs from the claiming. Cordelia and her stupid visions. I hope Riley is going to get some serious ass kicking when Buffy comes to. More story soon please.   ComedyofErrors Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/14/2005 05:04 pm Oo, oo! Can Spike kill Riley? Or can Buffy just kick his ass? Pleeeeease? Good chapter.   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/14/2005 02:54 pm Bad Riley, bad *beats him with a stick*   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/14/2005 09:05 am By all that is holy ... I hope that Spike rips Riley to shreds!! What an idiot. He even went after Cordy with a taser. Stupid Riley. Look forward to more for sure.   SpaceLord Ch 12 - Kidnapped 10/14/2005 08:30 am Oh come on don't leave me hanging, I need more.....more I tells ya   Verda Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 06/26/2006 09:33 pm Excellent! she claimed him. Now for the fallout. Good chapter. Thanks!   Athenewolfe Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 02/15/2006 07:17 am oh that was cruel and unusal punishment. What an evil cliffhanger. I wonder why Cordy had that strange vision - Buffy is so not in danger from Spike.   Cordykitten Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/15/2005 11:04 pm Grrr to Riley - he really did it - took Buffy (and Cordelia) and little William with him. But I hope Spike will be able to find out through the bond where he is taking them! Wonder what Giles will find out.   Pulchra Nex Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/14/2005 11:25 am Great chapter! Love William... awww!   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/11/2005 06:16 am Okay ... yes you are evil for the cliffhanger, but ... you are also an excellent story weaver. So we love you for it. {grins} I look forward to the next chapter.   vladt Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/09/2005 11:25 pm you are an evil author. fortunately, your a very talented, evil author, thanks for the update.   Chanel 5 Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/09/2005 12:58 pm dun dun dun... more please   SpaceLord Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/09/2005 10:36 am Very interesting, can't wait for the next chapter. Please make it soon   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/09/2005 02:57 am AHHHHHH!!!!!!! I want to know what happened!!! TELL ME!! I'm Italian AND Irish... there has to be mafia in my family somewhere!! LMAO   Cordykitten Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/08/2005 11:42 pm Riley was too good too long, huh? Now he is plotting to go against Angel and Spike. Oh - they did more - Buffy initiated a full claim - with her own fangs Too bad tat there is an evil cliffhanger now I hope I'll catch the update.   letitia Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/08/2005 10:17 pm WOW... that was such a great twist. I can't wait for Buffy to come back to conscious and kick the crap out of Angel and Riley... Love the udpate.   vicki Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/08/2005 09:43 pm Had trouble leaving this review. Great chapter though didn't like the cliffy much. Can't wait for more   ComedyofErrors Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/08/2005 06:26 pm Very nice claim. Stupid Riley.   maryperk Ch 11 - Visions of Blood 10/08/2005 05:44 pm Great chappy. I will be back for the next one.   Verda Ch 10 - Family 06/26/2006 09:20 pm A family mark, good alternative to a claim or mating.Glad you're not having Angel be the poofer he usually is. Good read. I'm glad that you like that...usually I like to bash the crap out of Angel..but it just didn't seem to fit (yet anyways - who knows If I change my mind).   Athenewolfe Ch 10 - Family 02/15/2006 07:15 am ahhh how sweet   ~*~Tasha~*~ Ch 10 - Family 10/11/2005 06:11 am I so enjoy rereading the last chapter of a story before moving on to the next. This was an awesome chapter the first time I read through, and it still is coming back to it later. {heards off to read Ch. 3}   Elizabeth Anne Summers Ch 10 - Family 10/09/2005 02:31 am Ahhhhh, how sweet.   Cordykitten Ch 10 - Family 10/08/2005 11:34 pm Awe Two chapters to read, not only one. I love this story. So Buffy will get the mark of family - I wonder how it will work (what the family bond means)   Tasha Ch 10 - Family 10/03/2005 11:18 am Awww ... so sweet. I love this story, and I look forward to more. I like how Spike isn't pushing to make it a mating claim until Buffy is ready (loved the crumb she tossed him by the way, very nice), but he wants to have a familial claim to be able to protect and take care of Buffy and William. I liked your explanation for why his eyes turned from one color to another. Nice work. Oh and just to let you know, when I clicked on the first post here, it was blank like a lot of others. Don't know if it will pop up again later or not. Just wanted to let you know.   Verda Ch 1 through 9 06/26/2006 06:24 pm This is a great story. Glad you updated, hate to begin a story only to have it abandoned. This is going to be interesting to see all that testosterone around Buffy and how they're going to deal with Walsh and the Initiative. Thanks for the read. Thank you. I'm so glad that you like!   Kyra Storm Ch 1 through 9 04/10/2006 02:21 pm This just sucks! Talk about totally stupid and mellodramatic. Why do people waste their time with such rot.   Athenewolfe Ch 1 through 9 02/15/2006 07:13 am Excellant story - I enjoyed the beginning very much. I think Riley is a sleaze bag and that Buffy seriously doesn't give Spike enough credit. Although at least she is starting to come around. Looking forward to the next chapters.   spike_spetslayer Ch 1 through 9 11/06/2005 01:29 am wonderful! love little baby william...and mom's fangs are pretty cool too....   ZoeGrace Ch 1 through 9 11/04/2005 03:37 am Very good! Can't wait to see what happens next!   Cordykitten Ch 1 through 9 10/08/2005 11:27 pm Interesting story so far Liked how Drusilla came in to help in several ways. Awe - Buffy has a son now, William Oh - the familiar link - I like that *g* It's nice to see Riley helpfull too. The green eyes? Has little William a little 'keyness' in him? Gonna read the next chapter - maybe I'll find out?   Old BSV Site Reviews Ch 1 through 9 09/30/2005 07:01 pm Oracleholly 09/15/2005 @ 02:37 am Going to be interesting now with Angel, Spike and Riley in one room. Let the ruckus begin! And bully for Buffy to start realizing what a selfish, scared bitch she was being. ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 09/15/2005 @ 01:54 am Oh god, Angel is going to FLIP!! ~~~*~~~ DK 09/15/2005 @ 01:28 am I love stories where Buffy and Spike are parents. This story is going great, going to LA with Riley of all people. You do write well. ~~~*~~~ Max 09/15/2005 @ 12:14 am Wow Buffy actually allowed past events to work in Spike's favor for once - let's just hope she doesn't fall into Angel's old no soul = evil excuse again when she gets to LA. ~~~*~~~ Niamh 09/14/2005 @ 11:21 pm I can't wait to see what Angel's reaction is. . . and when Will finally gets to his daddy. . . . good job. . . ~~~*~~~ spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 11:11 pm Opal--Thank God you finally saw the light! thought we were gonna have to do an intervention there (can you see THAT on the tagboard? LOL) Good story, glad Buffy finally got her head on straight. Can't wait until Spike catches up with her and Cornbred...MORE! ~~~*~~~ maria 09/14/2005 @ 10:21 pm I just started reading this story and so far it is great. I can't wait till Spike can hold William and I'm glad Buffy is realizing how foolish she has been and hope fully she will let spike in her life. Please update soon!!! ~~~*~~~ Karyn 09/14/2005 @ 09:58 pm oh thank the powers that she's starting to see the truth...thought i was going to have to start a lynch mob to ...lol...dramatic yet effective ~~~*~~~ Sara 09/14/2005 @ 09:56 pm Iowa?!?! That is so not right! Hopefully Spikes not that far behind. ~~~*~~~ Rhonda 09/14/2005 @ 08:14 pm I am so glad that Spike got a chance to get a peak at William. And now that he has his link in place with his son, there is no place that Buffy will be able to go and get away from him completely. I just hope that Riley can help and not be a hinder truely what Buffy and Spike could have with Willam as their son. ~~~*~~~ Pam 09/14/2005 @ 06:22 pm Email love the story. please, please, please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 09/14/2005 @ 04:50 pm Noo! No! She can't go play house in Iowa with the big wanker!! No way! ~~~*~~~ Oracleholly 09/14/2005 @ 11:25 am *ch7* ARG! Love the connection between Spike & his son. ARG with Maggie Walsh - bitch! Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 10:36 am I hope there's a nearby graveyard and lots of lurkable spots in Iowa. Although Riley's a bit dumb going missing *with* Buffy to his hometown. Like Walsh isn't gonna figure that one out? I so can't wait until we see Maggie's butt get kicked Oh, and ignore pet about the cliffies - cliffies are the way forward...as long as you update soooon. ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/14/2005 @ 10:09 am Grr. Buffy on the road with Riley. Grr. ~~~*~~~ spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 09:31 am Opal, how can you leave us like that? Going to Iowa? Corn-fed can't raise a vampire baby, he needs his daddy, and even though buffy doesn't know it yet, so does she. Good update, but God, the cliffhangers! ~~~*~~~ Mali 09/14/2005 @ 07:54 am Email O.o Farmer girl Buffy. I'm happy that Riley understands Buffy, Spike and Will's familial bond, and isn't trying to butt in. ~~~*~~~ Max 09/14/2005 @ 07:31 am Buffy needs to be taught a lesson and Riley needs to suffer a horrible accident. Technically with Angel ensouled and Dru insane Spike is the head of the clan of Aurelius - not smart to steal his son from him. ~~~*~~~ stephanie 09/14/2005 @ 05:43 am Email Riley is evil, I just know it. he is just being nice because he wants Buffy... don't believe he has any good intentions twards her nope, don't believe it. and Iowa. Bah! Cornfields. Sniff ... go spike get your woman and your baby ~~~*~~~ MarzBar 09/14/2005 @ 03:54 am GADZ!! Captain Cardbored's friends are after Buffy and baby. Is she safe with him? Why is she still so stupid about Spike? She's going to Iowa? Confused Muse 09/14/2005 @ 01:58 am Aargh! I don't think Spike's going to tale Riley#s protectiveness very well I think Joyce is going to lose her temper with Buffy somewhere down the line too if Buffy doesn't get a grip... Keep going, keep going! ~~~*~~~ Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:20 pm Okay you're getting 2 reviews in one day b/c viola you updated - so *6*: GRRR @ Riley and GRRR @ stupid Buffy. that is all. ~~~*~~~ DK 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm Riley must find protecting her and Wm from Daddy easier than from Walsh. He is such a jerk. Type fast. ~~~*~~~ Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:07 pm Email *up to ch 5* Awww she named the baby William. Liked how Drusilla's helping of Spike via concealment charm. Nifty Slayer dream. I'm having mixed feelings about Riley - while hate that he left, he's not the dad; while he claims Buffy as a friend and stuck up for her to his army pals, he's a complete prejudiced ass. ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 09/13/2005 @ 09:34 pm Email URL *growls at Riley* he better not get between Buffy and Spike ~~~*~~~ spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:05 pm Email Type fast, Opal, cause here is your review! Good story, loving it...more, more, more! ~~~*~~~ Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:35 am Email Great story I really enjoyed it. Please write more soon! ~~~*~~~ MarzBar 09/10/2005 @ 02:56 am Email I hope Dru will come and help Spike protect the baby. How long will it take for Buffy to have enough energy to grow some brains now? Spike would be a better daddy than Captain Cardbored ever would. More please. ~~~*~~~ Tami Brandt 09/09/2005 @ 09:10 pm Email Great chapter. Can't wait for Spike to show up! ~~~*~~~ ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/09/2005 @ 12:50 am I'm ecstatic over chapter 4 and 5 that I read today. Glad that SPike knows and Dru is actually being helpful. I'm scared about what Angelus will have to do with this. I hope that Dru and Angelus are actually both just there to make their vows to protect all of the family. I can't wait to see what you write next. Love this story. ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 09/08/2005 @ 11:43 pm Awww, how sweeeet ~~~*~~~ redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:57 pm Damn good chappies I love the flow of this fic ~~~*~~~ tina 09/08/2005 @ 08:51 pm update soon!!!! ~~~*~~~ Steph 09/08/2005 @ 05:50 pm Awww baby william...I love it! ~~~*~~~ vicki 09/08/2005 @ 09:41 am Great update and labor scene. Let's hope Spike beats Riley home. Can't wait for more. ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 09:08 am Great chpaters that covered a lot of ground and brought a lot of characters together in a very fluid way. Can we kick Riley now? Jerk. Well, at least Spike will be home soon and they can get some things settled. Great chapters. ~~~*~~~ Lou 09/08/2005 @ 04:53 am Aaaah - Sweet William ~~~*~~~ DK 09/03/2005 @ 02:21 am Sometimes Dru can be alright! Does that make her a Grandmother? ~~~*~~~ Good chapter. ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:48 pm GO SPIKE ... RUN back to Buffy as fast as you can. Hell ... even bring Dru if she is willing to protect Buffy ... Just get your arse up there fast. If Walsh finds out, oh boy. Plus he heard the news from Finn himself. Oh please let Buffy realize that the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~ TINA 09/02/2005 @ 05:20 pm PLEASE MORE SOON ~~~*~~~ spike_spetslayer 09/02/2005 @ 04:32 pm More, Opal! more!!!! ~~~*~~~ vicki 09/02/2005 @ 01:18 pm I love this story. But how did she really get pregnant with Spike's child? I can't wait to find out more! ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 12:48 pm That's a great idea! Riley volunteered for South America, and of course Spike went back there. Brilliant! Nice of Dru to make sure that Spike paid attention. Now he can get back to Sunnydale and convince Buffy that he really loves her and that she loves him. ~~~*~~~ Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 12:33 pm hee hee, Loved the chappie! Still want to bash Riley's skull in, but now Spike knows! Yay! ~~~*~~~ Max 09/02/2005 @ 12:19 pm I can't say I like that fact that Spike seems to be running back to Buffy like he seems to be doing. PLEASE do not make him weak and wimpy Spike begging for scraps. We all got way too much of the in season 6. Spike has it right, Buffy refuses her feelings for Spike because of what he is not who he is even with proof of his loyality with Drusilla, she's just being a bitch about it. And about Buffy trying to run away with the kid mentioned in the challenge, anyone remember how well Spike to care of Dawn versus how poorly Buffy did. Spike is a LEGENDARY master vampire, who Angel feared more than the Master, despite how much Whedon apparently hates him and just slowly destroys him over the course of the series, remember how protective he was with girlfriend? I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and friends try to keep him away from his child. ~~~*~~~ ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/02/2005 @ 10:59 am Email URL {growls} What a bastard Riley is. He didn't even tell Buffy that he knows the child isn't his. {Growls again} I hope that Buffy gets the realization through her head that it can't be RIley's baby, and the baby is Spike's. Look forward to the next chapter. ~~~*~~~ Ariel Dawn 09/02/2005 @ 10:38 am Can we smack Riley over the head now? With a mace? Unfeeling bastard. Grrr. Not that I want him with Buffy for anything but...grrr. Bring on the next chapter! ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/02/2005 @ 10:32 am About what I expected of Riley. Can't wait to see Spike in the future. Keep up the good work! ~~~*~~~ Max 09/02/2005 @ 07:27 am It's a good start. When Spike comes back please don't make him wimpy Spike (and preferrably no chip either), he can be nice without being a wimp like he was made out to be after the chip. ~~~*~~~ chanel 5 08/20/2005 @ 04:38 am Great start, but short. can't wait for more ~~~*~~~ Alice 08/18/2005 @ 09:29 pm Great fic, but not much Riley. ~~~*~~~ ~*~Tasha~*~ 08/18/2005 @ 09:07 pm Excellent start to this challenge. I love it. I hope we get more of this one soon and continuously. Look forward to the next update. ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 08/18/2005 @ 06:23 pm Oooo, when's Spike going to show up?? ~~~*~~~ Braat44 08/18/2005 @ 06:18 pm Excellent start! Can't wait to see where it goes. ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 08/18/2005 @ 04:46 pm Potential for a great story. Keep it going! ~~~*~~~ Ariel Dawn 08/18/2005 @ 04:10 pm Fantastic start. Can't wait for more!   Old BSV Site Reviews Ch 1 through 9 09/30/2005 06:59 pm Lou 09/15/2005 @ 05:36 am Poor Spike - getting the shitty end of the stick as usual. Hopefully he'll get the chance to make them all eat their words! ~~~*~~~   Old BSV Site Reviews Ch 1 through 9 09/30/2005 06:57 pm ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/21/2005 @ 12:31 am Ooooooooooo ... I just caught up on my reading of your story. Man am I sorry that I was behind on it. I read 6-9 and WOW. Loved em all. Loved how Angel just came right out with the realizations. Hope he doesn't cause problems, but it looks like he has at least accepted it,even if he doesn't like it. Can't wait for more. ~~~*~~~ Lou 09/19/2005 @ 05:33 am l Delighted that Buffy's seeing sense at last! ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/18/2005 @ 12:05 pm Oops, looks like baby William is more than he seems. I'm glad Angel didn't freak out completely. ~~~*~~~ Confused Muse 09/18/2005 @ 08:25 am Hmmm, do I sense smut? And probably a very very outraged Riley ~~~*~~~ redwulf50 09/18/2005 @ 07:46 am You, you, poopyhead. arrrrrrggggggggghhhhhh It was just getting good I feel like you changed the channels in the middle of the superbowl. (Pulls out own hair) freakin great chappie but I need more (whines) ~~~*~~~ spike_spetslayer 09/18/2005 @ 04:33 am God, Opal, this is getting better and better--and why are the baby's eyes flashing green? come on, baby, gimme more! ~~~*~~~ Erin 09/18/2005 @ 01:35 am Loved it!! More soon please. ~~~*~~~ txjmfan 09/18/2005 @ 12:56 am It's been a while since I'd read the story, I had to start over. But it was well worth it. Love what you've done with it. ~~~*~~~ MarzBar 09/18/2005 @ 12:46 am Thank the PTB that Buffy went to LA and not Iowa. Good thing that Spike is smarter than she is and has his connection to the baby. We need more soon, please. ~~~*~~~ ElizabethAnneSummers 09/18/2005 @ 12:38 am Oooooo, can't wait to hear the explainy bits. ~~~*~~~ Tami Brandt 09/17/2005 @ 11:25 pm can't wait for another update for this one ~~~*~~~ Max 09/17/2005 @ 11:17 pm That's it? After all the crap Buffy put Spike through when before she drove him off and trying to keep him apart from his son, it's just high honey I'm home, I don't mind being treated like crap and almost losing a child I never though t he could have just because of Angel and your delusions of a normal life, it doesn't matter if I'm fiercely loyal and protective with those I care about. Ask a couple parents how they'd feel if they someone tried to steal their child from them before you write the next chapter. I wouldn't be suprised if Spike gets violent, Buffy REALLY needs to get past her Angel issues even if Spike has to kick her ass a little bit to do it, we all saw WAY too much of that during the TV series. Other than my rant, it's a great fic. ~~~*~~~ vladt 09/15/2005 @ 09:29 pm Email great update. Buffy and William, Riley, Angel and Spike minutes behind. this should be fun. thanks ~~~*~~~ redwulf50 09/15/2005 @ 07:05 pm Email Sorryabout tghe missing reviews, but this story is still one of my faves , great story so far ~~~*~~~ ComedyofErrors 09/15/2005 @ 02:52 pm I like the idea of going to L.A. Angel is the perfect person to help, though Cordelia will probably freak out. I also like the connection between Spike and his son. ~~~*~~~ Rhonda 09/15/2005 @ 12:54 pm Finally something is coming to light for Buffy when it comes to Spike. I am so glad Spike was able to connect with William before they hit the road. And what fun it will be when Angel gets close enough to William to smell Spike and realize that he is family. ~~~*~~~   MarzBar Ch 1 through 9 09/30/2005 03:01 pm I think I reviewed this before. I still like it and hope you give us more soon.   Disclaimer If you are under the age of 17, please use your head and do not read fics that are labeled "NC-17". Parents, I cannot control what your children are reading, so please be advised that the majority of the fics archived here are NOT suitable for those under the age of 17. I do not own Buffy the Vampire Slayer and I am in no way making any profit from this site. This is for pure entertainment purposes only. 2004 copyright-bringonthebloodshed.com