I love the Spike/Riley/Angel fighting:
“What the hell are you doing?” shouted Buffy, racing towards them. Christ, she’d been gone for all of two minutes and they were fighting? What was wrong with them? All of them—Spike and Angel and Riley, god, why couldn’t she date men who weren’t nuts?
Oh god, did she just say she was dating Spike?
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