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| Unexpected Arrival by Mefiant |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 29 | 07/16/2006 04:26 pm |
| This was an AWESOME update of this one. I hope that you feel inspired to continue this one Mefiant. I enjoy reading it, and I was glad that there was an update for me to catch up on. {Grins} |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 29 | 06/14/2006 10:53 pm |
another great chapter...please update really soon, i really like this story  |
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| nmcil | Chapter 29 | 06/14/2006 03:16 am |
very much enjoyed reading your story - just found it today as well, looking forward to reading your next chapters. Hope that you have a chance to update soon.
Wonderful set of new characters you have created - |
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| vladt | Chapter 29 | 06/13/2006 07:36 pm |
| great update, as usual. thanks for the fine read. |
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| duke6665 | Chapter 29 | 06/11/2006 08:07 pm |
| wow this is amazing. i just found the fic this morning and have spent half the day reading. i can't wait for more of this one. great work. loved everything including xander w/spell. |
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| Cat | Chapter 29 | 06/10/2006 11:10 pm |
| Oh Yea!! Great chapter, getting damn good now |
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| kim | Chapter 29 | 06/10/2006 09:57 pm |
Been a while!
Good chapter...the scene was pretty clear. I'm sure things are about to get interesting. |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 28 | 06/14/2006 10:52 pm |
| wow...excellent setting, very sexy...loved this chapter...loved giles and anya's bit...very good |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 28 | 03/25/2006 09:38 am |
| Loved this chapter. Everyone being together and sharing intimate time the night before the battle. Look forward to more of this one. |
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| vladt | Chapter 28 | 03/16/2006 01:51 pm |
| unique ending for a chapter. more pleasant thought to hold until next update. rather than what disaster is about to unfold. thanks for the fine read. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 28 | 03/14/2006 06:28 pm |
| Glad to see this story is back. I did, however, have to re-read the whole thing today in order to get to the new chapter. Please, please update soon. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 28 | 03/14/2006 10:10 am |
| whew, hot! great update! |
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| sirc | Chapter 28 | 03/14/2006 09:36 am |
| great chapter |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 28 | 03/14/2006 05:35 am |
| loving this...more soon please |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 27 | 06/14/2006 10:50 pm |
| this is getting more and more intense by the chapter ... very much enjoying this story ;0 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 27 | 02/24/2006 09:23 am |
| Excellent chapter. I can feel the tension of the build up towards the final battle. I loved getting an update of this story. {Smiles} I look forward to more. |
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| Cordykitten | Chapter 27 | 02/05/2006 10:05 am |
| Ah that's why it is so easy for Xander to read (learn): it is a side-effect of the family claim. ~ Awe, Spike choose a ring Joyce gave him for Buffy and it is placed like an engagement ring. ~ Oh my.. and now the battle is to begin soon. Till next time! |
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| vladt | Chapter 27 | 02/04/2006 12:54 am |
| very happy to read this fic again despite the fact that xander is appears to be finally growing up, instead of being endlessly tortured. excellent chapter, excellent fic. thanks |
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| Max | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 09:35 pm |
It took me forever to read all of this thing but it was definitely worth it : )
I especially like how you had everyone face all of Xander's baggage - I hated how he always got away with all of his juvenile crap since nobody would call him on it and eveyone seemed to immediately forget it.
I'm looking forward to reading about the coming battle - imagining Travers getting his arrogent head chopped off gives me a happy : ) |
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| Piper | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 08:55 pm |
| can't wait to read more updates!! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 08:30 pm |
| What a tale! Just found this story today and I thank you for the entertainment. I look forward to the killing of Travers (if this story wasn't about such a bunch of white hats, I would enjoy his torture, too). |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 05:59 pm |
Two things Bloody excellent chapter, and the second About bloody time 
Damn good chappie Mef. |
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| sirc | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 01:43 pm |
| great chapter |
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| Steph | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 12:41 pm |
| The calm before the storm hey? good chapter! |
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| Steph | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 12:40 pm |
| The calm before the storm hey? good chapter! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 27 | 02/03/2006 12:19 pm |
| Excellant story! I love this ficcy! |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 26 | 06/14/2006 10:48 pm |
| another excellent chapter...wonder what spike's thinking? great job |
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| Cordykitten | Chapter 26 | 02/05/2006 09:49 am |
Oh I missed two chapters... *on to the read*
Xander is given a new chance, a big one. I hope, no I think it's a good choice for him. Plus he can help the others fight the Council. ~ Awe, Samuel saw his parents. ~ Excellent idea with the Gems. Wonder what Spike has in mind for Buffy. |
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| vladt | Chapter 26 | 02/04/2006 12:26 am |
| very happy to see this story again. had to reread all. not to refresh my strained memory, but to enjoy once again. thanks |
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| sirc | Chapter 26 | 01/14/2006 01:09 pm |
great chapter  |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 26 | 01/11/2006 10:30 pm |
| Very glad to see an update of this one. I loved following this one before, and it is great to see it moving along. I look forward to more of it for sure. |
| The muse seems to be finally over his hissy fit about having to move right before christmas. Now all I have to do is find a cool spot to write in. |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 25 | 06/14/2006 10:45 pm |
| oooh..that was sexy...very good chapter...needing more now |
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| bubble_blunder | Chapter 25 | 11/12/2005 11:04 am |
| Just found this story and read it all the way through. Incredible! I love it! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
-Lisa |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 25 | 10/11/2005 02:37 am |
| Whew ... {fanning herself} ... That was hot and playful. Very good conversation between Buffy and Spike about Xander. Buffy is letting her insecurities creep up, and I'm glad that Spike saw past some of that. That isn't to say that he didn't have a knee jerk reaction of being ticked right off, but that is normal. Nice update. Look forward to more. |
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| Cordykitten | Chapter 25 | 10/08/2005 10:25 pm |
| I think Spike explained how he felt about Buffy and Rebecca very well. And then it got very hot Loved the chapter. I wonder what will become of Xander now. Buffy and Spike and Stacy? They will make it - I'm almost sure.. I don't know what you have in mind for them. |
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| vladt | Chapter 25 | 10/07/2005 06:14 am |
| love the story. thanks |
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| txjmfan | Chapter 25 | 10/05/2005 10:53 pm |
| Love the new chapter. Very sexy. |
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| Franchesca | Chapter 25 | 10/05/2005 08:50 pm |
| I can't wait to see where Xander is at the end of his journey. I know Buffy needed her moment on insecurity, but I'm glad is over (hopefully). I like that she and Spike are completely together now. |
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| letitia | Chapter 25 | 10/05/2005 04:49 pm |
| So glad to see this back and with a new chapter. I am just glad that Spike saw Buffy's questios for what they were, insecurities brought back by Xander. I am just glad that they are really able to talk and work through their problems. Love the update. |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 24 | 06/14/2006 10:41 pm |
| that last scene could make a story in itself...excellent glimpse into xander's troubled mind...i love this story |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 24 | 10/11/2005 02:30 am |
| Some how I missed Ch. 24, or for some reason I don't remember it. I'm going to go with the former because I remember your stories. You are a good writer. I like this what if spell. I hope that it shows Xander that things had to happen the way they were or everything would have been so much worse off. Good chapter. Off to read 25. |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 23 | 06/14/2006 06:12 pm |
| oh wow...she's still getting the hang of this key business, isnt she? lol |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 22 | 06/14/2006 07:54 am |
| that was so intense...very sweet and moving as well as sexy and hot...just what these two needed to get back to where they needed to be with each other, to get past the pain and grief... excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 21 | 06/13/2006 08:03 pm |
| for once buffy's thinking straight...good plan...excellent update |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 20 | 06/13/2006 07:58 pm |
| wow...this is incredible...i loved rebecca, it's sad that she's dead...but now buffy will be whole, but not to hate spike like xander thinks... excellent update ;) |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 19 | 06/13/2006 07:24 am |
| you create the feeling of being there very well...very peaceful and soothing...another excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 18 | 06/13/2006 12:30 am |
| excellent chapter...i think i like the idea of the familial claim...very intriguing, this story just gets better and better |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 17 | 06/13/2006 12:26 am |
| whoa...seems a bit invasive...i wonder what sort of effect this is going to have on all of their relationships..excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 16 | 06/13/2006 12:12 am |
| wow!! awesome!! i'm happy for them and i don't even know them (oc's) lol ...excellent writing here, you are doing so well with this fic on to more |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 15 | 06/12/2006 10:14 pm |
| aww....good for spike |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 14 | 06/12/2006 10:10 pm |
| so who's the new guy? and the tickle fight was hilarious..not much of a fight though, more of a massacre lol |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 13 | 06/12/2006 10:05 pm |
| that was absolutely exquisite! beautiful conversation, very well done and very true to the characters...and a very good place for buffy and spike to be at the moment |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 12 | 06/12/2006 08:01 am |
| awww..good for xander, finding somebody new excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 11 | 06/12/2006 07:56 am |
| another excellent chapter, your characterizations are flawless...very well done story |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 10 | 06/12/2006 07:51 am |
| wow...that is so sweet...just about brought me to tears...again... excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 9 | 06/11/2006 10:55 pm |
| hmmm....that last comment was kind of cryptic..wonder what she meant by that...is she *expecting* buffy to get another chance? excellent chapter, by the way |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 8 | 06/11/2006 10:51 pm |
| i have to say...buffy and xander deserve the pain of that moment...love anya and giles together...if it was intended to be humor, sorry, but i always thought that match made more sense thanx for another great chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 7 | 06/11/2006 02:19 pm |
| hmm...this should be good....you know, i think xander could come around, and if he does maybe they could get back together? i like rebecca's take on things...interesting chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 6 | 06/11/2006 08:55 am |
| see...even though i want spike and buffy together and *happy*...not him being mistreated by buffy...i can't help but be totally happy for him with rebecca... excellent chapter |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter 6 | 10/04/2005 04:19 pm |
| Yes, I liked it, but I felt sorry for Buffy... which, I think, is a first for me. normally I feel sorry for spike. |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 5 | 06/11/2006 08:49 am |
| unless the council's been doing it for a long time, gradually, and totally know what they're doing..excellent chapter with great explanation |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 4 | 06/11/2006 08:33 am |
| lol...excellent chapter again...maybe this will give buffy a wake up call, having someone else around, a Slayer no less, who actually treats Spike with love and respect and like a person...this whole premise is excellent, i love it |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 3 | 06/11/2006 08:26 am |
| whoa...something tells me he knows rebecca from before...but hurry and get him out of the sun before he dusts!! excellent chapter |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 2 | 06/11/2006 08:15 am |
| wow..this is so fascinating! very intense chapter, explains a lot too very well done |
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| jl1980 | Chapter 1 | 06/11/2006 08:10 am |
| well i'm hoping giles being back is a good thing...this is an excellent first chapter, tore my heart out with spike's pain, love how tara's being a friend to him though... excellent fic |
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