Home | New/Updated | Completed | Authors | Titles | Search | Sweet Temptation | TopTen | Betas | Challenges | Tools | Chat | Help | Login The Right Thing by jl1980   Nikkole 32 04/07/2006 12:42 pm EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! thanx, so glad you liked it my first ever spuffy fic   Anna 32 02/23/2006 05:26 pm This was absolutely wonderful.. It took me like 2 ½ hours to read, but it was worth it! Keep up the good work! (I am looking forward to a sequel!) All the best, /Anna thanx so much for great review, this was my first spuffy fic ever! so glad you liked it   Rose 32 01/07/2006 02:26 pm Excellent story! Thanks for a great read, and I am dying for the sequel. thanx, glad you enjoyed it   CutieSaiyajin 32 11/22/2005 07:18 pm Wow, this story was amazing! I loved the idea behind it. Initiative stories always interest me, and this one has got to be one of the best I've read so far. Great job! me too, so glad you liked it   bloodshedbaby 32 11/17/2005 07:56 am Finally read the last chapter and awww! So sweet! Great fic you have here. Glad you didn't let me deleting you off BSC keep you down! Cos that would have been damn tragic. *rushes off to read your other fic* so glad you enjoyed it, thanx   Stacy 32 11/08/2005 02:45 pm Loved this story! Can't wait to see what happens with the vamp kiddies. I look forward to reading more fic from you. Thanks for writing. thanx so much   spike_spetslayer 32 11/07/2005 05:28 am Sorry to see it end, but it must, as all stories do. This was a wonderful fic, totally plausible in the Jossverse had they taken things in other directions. You did quite well, and I applaud you for a fine romantic adventure story. Kudos.   Chanel 5 32 11/07/2005 05:07 am Fantastic story. thanks for sharing it with us.   Mary 32 11/07/2005 01:03 am I really enjoyed the story and the quick updates! I look forward to your futue projects.   Jenna 32 11/07/2005 01:01 am Sorry to see the story end, but it's a great ending and a logical stopping point. I'm glad to hear that you may to a follow up about Buffy and Spike's relationship and what will happen to the vampire family. There's a lot of promise in that idea and I'm hopefully looking forward to it. I think it could be really great, if you can think up a bad guy creepy and complex enough to follow in the footsteps of Cordova. I'll have to check out what else you've done; I really liked this story. thanx; so far i've only got one other completed fic; posted on slayerfanfic.com; it's not spuffy though it's spara...and another spara fic WIP; i'm starting a new spuffy fic as we speak though...but its gonna be REALLY dark, so......thanx for the support and great reviews!!   letitia 32 11/07/2005 12:59 am Great last chapter. It was too funny for Xander to remind them of the children... Great twist. Love this story.   Lou 32 11/06/2005 10:30 pm Just deeeelicious!! Thoughly enjoyed it and thanks for all your hard work,   slaymesoftly 32 11/06/2005 05:18 pm Thoroughly enjoyed this whole thing, Jessi. Well, not so much the Spike torture...but you know what I mean! I definitely would encourage you to keep writing and to come back to this "world" someday soon.   Stephanie 32 11/06/2005 03:44 pm Excellant story. I really loved this chappie and the story overall. It was so wonderful!   lynpen 32 11/06/2005 02:28 pm Thank you for the very enjoyable story. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing, including that possible sequel.   redwulf50 32 11/06/2005 02:09 pm Thanks for a great fic, I loves it.   SpaceLord 32 11/06/2005 10:47 am Good ending and a really good point to start a sequel at later. Gonna be on the lookout for whatever else you will write in the future. Thx for a good story.   Confused Muse 32 11/06/2005 10:23 am Good ending, and a great story - challenging, thought provoking and engaging Yay!   Rider 32 11/06/2005 09:04 am I Loved reading this story and can not wait to read your next story! Excellent work!!   MarzBar 32 11/06/2005 09:04 am Thank you so much for the fabulous story. The bad guys got offed in very appropriate ways. Now Spike and Buffy get to start out together. i am hoping for a sequel.   Always_jbj 32 11/06/2005 08:55 am Excellent last chapter and yes it is a perfect place to end it! I look forward to reading any future projects of yours.   spike_spetslayer 31 11/07/2005 05:23 am Simply awesome   Lou 31 11/05/2005 09:52 pm Aaaahhh - that's just perfect! Lovely Buffy.   Ruthie 31 11/05/2005 04:04 pm I am so glad that Spike's other children were not left behind. I ws worried for a bit. You have done an incredible job with this story.   Ruthie 31 11/05/2005 04:04 pm I am so glad that Spike's other children were not left behind. I ws worried for a bit. You have done an incredible job with this story.   Confused Muse 31 11/05/2005 12:00 pm One, two, three..."awwwww!"   Jenna 31 11/05/2005 09:10 am What a sweet reunion. Can't wait to see how Spike's children interact with Buffy and the scoobies.   SpaceLord 31 11/05/2005 08:19 am Very nice, feels like this story is coming to an end soon. Just a few lose ends to tie up, can't wait.   bloodshedbaby 31 11/05/2005 07:04 am aw that was sweet!! I loved that Buffy is letting him keep his 'children'. This has turned into a fantastic tale and thank you for the very quick updates!   UncagedMuse 31 11/05/2005 05:57 am Oh I love how Spike told her everything about leaving Cordova with his children and then Buffy letting him go back in for them. MORE SOON PLEASE!   Angie 31 11/05/2005 04:45 am I love this story. For some reason, I see Buffy having a little more help patrolling.   MarzBar 31 11/05/2005 04:25 am Are the Scoobies, along with Spike and Buffy, going to raise a whole nest of good vamps? If their Sire and the Slayer don't teach them murder, torture and other cruelties, could it be possible? More story please.   WendyJane 30 11/04/2005 08:54 pm wow! she so had that coming.   slaymesoftly 30 11/04/2005 01:55 pm Oh - good vengeance! "shouldna built the bloody kitchen" Love it!   Confused Muse 30 11/04/2005 01:49 pm Oh, you kept us waiting for the payback and boy was it worth it *Sits and hums Beethoven's 9th while imagining the silly woman's payback party*   Lou 30 11/04/2005 12:22 pm Got to love Spike the Wise - here's hoping Buffy sees it that way. Nice to see a sensible Xander too.   Athenewolfe 30 11/04/2005 10:19 am OMG! That was so excellant. I truly loved it. What a fiting revenge for Spike to take. I kinda feel sorry for the children of Spike though. What happens to them without chips and without sire if Buffy and co push the panick button? I know they are vampires but how will they react if they get locked in. Sniff of course if they get out can Spike control them. Ohhhh i want more so I know who to feel sorry for. Need more ... need more.... Please? he he - great story!   MarzBar 30 11/04/2005 09:57 am OMG! What perfect vengeance! Spike is so smart, unlike the blockhead he's in love with. I just hope he gets away and gets healed. More story please.   sue 30 11/04/2005 09:18 am Neat solution. Wonder how that would turn out if we applied it in RL - let the victims punish the wrongdoers? Hmm.   Jenna 30 11/04/2005 08:17 am Great follow up! I loved this line: "If you can’t take the heat – shouldna built the bloody kitchen.” Thanks for the fast updates and the really enjoyable story!   SpaceLord 30 11/04/2005 07:52 am And justice for all   spike_spetslayer 30 11/04/2005 07:31 am Go Spike! and go Xander for once! this is turning out great...an awesome fic...   Always_jbj 30 11/04/2005 06:42 am Now THAT was justice!! Way to go Spike. And it's nice to see Xander growing a brain.   WendyJane 29 11/03/2005 07:41 pm Excellent! more more more!!   Lou 29 11/03/2005 01:51 pm Nice one. I'm surprised he didn't rip her to pieces. Oh please guys...everyone's assuming its over!!! Spike is a bit more creative than that!!   Dar 29 11/03/2005 12:02 pm I don't think I would like to see Spike turn her after all he is a civilized man but boy would it be tempting. He certainly deserves his pound of flesh. Excellent   spike_spetslayer 29 11/03/2005 09:45 am oh, yeah, you go Spike! suck the B**ch dry!   sue 29 11/03/2005 09:37 am Hmm. Don't know if I want him to kill her, turn her or just leave her there for the authorities. Whatever would be most painful for her I guess. Loving this story and looking forward to the rest. Thanks.   SpaceLord 29 11/03/2005 08:31 am hmmm not so much torture but I hope Spike makes her a mindless minion and leaves her there or maybe takes her with him so that Xander can stake her Not done yet lol   Angie 29 11/03/2005 04:18 am I love this story. I'm so happy for the fast updates!!!! And can I say the Bitch had it coming to her!!!!   Jenna 29 11/03/2005 03:45 am Wow, you updated fast! Great update; you're characterization of Spike is really well drawn and the situation you set up with Cordova is really gratifying. Really looking forward to the next chapter to see what Spike (and Buffy and Willow, etc) are going to do.   Always_jbj 29 11/03/2005 03:32 am Fantastic!!   WendyJane 28 11/03/2005 07:28 pm Welcome to Hell indeed; can't wait to see Spike finally get the vengence he deserves!! (And a Buffy and Spike reunion WILL be beautiful!!)   Lou 28 11/02/2005 11:29 pm Superdooper excitement! A brilliant story, and now he's going to kick ass.   MarzBar 28 11/02/2005 09:33 pm YAY! Can Spike kill her now?   spike_spetslayer 28 11/02/2005 07:26 pm *claps hands* Yeah! Whoredova is finally going to die! I can't wait! Am I a sicko for wanting a human to die? No--there is never a need for torture, no matter what the "justification"--this is the most awesome fic, need more!   Stephanie 28 11/02/2005 03:40 pm Wonderful! I loved it!   Confused_Muse 28 11/02/2005 03:14 pm And the payback begins... Great chapter, loved the desperate atmosphere you ramped up   redwulf50 28 11/02/2005 12:26 pm oh yeah, its time and past time   Always_jbj 28 11/02/2005 12:14 pm *grabs popcorn and sits back to enjoy the show!* I LOVED the chap... but I think I will enjoy the next one even more! lol   SpaceLord 28 11/02/2005 11:09 am wohoo....finally the blood is gonna run like a river in that place   Angie 28 11/02/2005 10:41 am Man, I can't wait for the next chapter, that bitch is finally gonna get what she has coming to her!!!   bloodshedbaby 28 11/02/2005 07:10 am woo yeah! The chip is down... Can't wait to see what happens next!   Dar 28 11/02/2005 06:36 am YES!!!!!   Anne 28 11/02/2005 05:33 am Wonderful story love the daily updated cant wait for the revenge!!!! hope Buffy gets to help   slaymesoftly 27 11/02/2005 03:15 am This is so intense and so good. Loving the quick updates too!   Angie 27 11/01/2005 10:20 pm Another brilliant chapter.   bloodshedbaby 27 11/01/2005 05:57 pm I love how you're bringing Willow and Xander over to sympathize with Spike, it's great! Looking forward to the next chappie!!   WendyJane 27 11/01/2005 02:41 pm Completely powerful chapter- jeez, just reading back to the first few chapters; there's been a hell of a lot of truly amazing character developments. Truly amazing. I'm realy enjoying this fic and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!   redwulf50 27 11/01/2005 12:10 pm LMAO, Cordova is in for a world of pain.   spike_spetslayer 27 11/01/2005 11:41 am OMG, Whoredova is such a raving bitch! She must die! Great update, BTW...   Marie 27 11/01/2005 11:25 am I love this story, it is very well written, and I look forward to every update   Stephanie 27 11/01/2005 10:53 am Excellant story - This was soooooo good. I adored the story. I love how Willow was like take down the buttons now! NOW! LOL - it was so good! I can't wait for thenext update! You are such a great writer   MarzBar 27 11/01/2005 09:15 am EEEK! They have to get Spike out of there before the panic button goes off or the government jerks will just kill him.   SpaceLord 27 11/01/2005 08:44 am Death to the initiative, kill 'em all. Good update, look forward to more soon.   Always_jbj 27 11/01/2005 07:45 am Excellent update!!!   UncagedMuse 27 11/01/2005 07:29 am KILL CORDOVA! I love it and sorry I haven't reviewed in a couple of days but I wasn't online.   WendyJane 26 11/01/2005 02:31 pm Bitch. I really hate this woman- I'm feeling Spike's pain right now- and Buffy's too. Yet- still holding out for a happy ending!   redwulf50 26 10/31/2005 12:22 pm Oh yeah, is it wrong I am praying for Darth willow here??   Athenewolfe 26 10/31/2005 12:16 pm Excellant story. I love the sacrifice that Spike made. It finally dawned on Xander that Spike was more then a monster. I hope that they can rescue him soon. And the General needs to DIE! Grrrrr... I want to kick her but! Love this chapter as always!   Confused Muse 26 10/31/2005 10:46 am Go Spike Are we about to see incredibly pissed off Willow? *crosses fingers in hope* I love it when that girl kicks ass. *Hopes for a cyberpunk moment with Willow taking over the Initiative's systems*   spike_spetslayer 26 10/31/2005 08:26 am God I love this story! BTW, you're a good puppy now...update fast!   Fanatic 26 10/31/2005 08:21 am Oh, I love it! Shades of "Princess Bride" pit of dispair?   Chanel 5 26 10/31/2005 07:44 am God, what a bitch. please don't just kill her off, do it very slowly...   MarzBar 26 10/31/2005 07:05 am GRRR ARGH!! Is it even possible to think up a torture horrible enough to inflict on Whoredova? Will Buffy get over her humans with souls = good shit? I want more story but I really want revenge on the Initiative.   WendyJane 25 11/01/2005 02:24 pm Poor old Spike; loved the fact that he was so adamnt to put Buffy first. Always knew he was a total hero.   letitia 25 10/31/2005 02:22 am please please please please. I am glad that they got Buffy out but I just hope Spike can get out as well. Buffy is going to kick his @ss when she gets her hands back on him for leaving her and going back. Great story.   Always_jbj 25 10/30/2005 02:50 pm Oh dear! Poor Buffy and poor Spike! Excellent chapter, and as usual you leave us desperate for more!   redwulf50 25 10/30/2005 01:47 pm lol, great chappie, damn the scoobies will have to come back, again   Athenewolfe 25 10/30/2005 12:19 pm WOW! I love this. Poor Spike, caught by the Initative again. Whimpers. I need to know what is going to happen. I hope you update soon, I am drooling over this story. It is wonderful and captiviting. HUGS! Stephanie   SpaceLord 25 10/30/2005 10:44 am That is just another evil cliffhanger, no tea and cake for you Good chapter.   Fanatic 25 10/30/2005 08:35 am GAH! You and your masterful cliffhangers! I can't wait to see what you have in mind.   MarzBar 25 10/30/2005 06:19 am OMG!! How fast can Buffy heal to be able to rescue Spike? Can she get help from anybody else? Maybe Clem knows somebody. Whoredova deserves radical, violent punishment.   spike_spetslayer 25 10/30/2005 06:15 am Aww, you evil...making us wait... bad puppy! more now!   Megan 25 10/30/2005 04:40 am Oh Lordy. He's caught, then he's safe. Buffy's caught, now she's safe. Spike's caught again...gahhhhhh. Cordova better get one hell of a lot of suffering for ehr evil teeny mind!   WendyJane 24 11/01/2005 02:16 pm Tension building. Just hope he can get to her in time. I love the blessing from Willow too- very cute.   Angie 24 10/29/2005 06:37 pm I love this story, I can't wait to see how it all plays out. I esp liked Spike finding his duster in Buffy's closet.   spike_spetslayer 24 10/29/2005 04:33 am Go, Spike, Go. Go save Buffy. Burn with realization, Buffy, burn. Die, Cordova, die. Good update...Go! you!   Esther 24 10/29/2005 03:28 am Another very exciting chapter!! Loved that Willow's ok w/Spuffy, and I'm glad that she thought of getting the mind reading spell for Spike. Hot damn, poor Buffy....I bet Spike's gonna go nuts when he sees what Cordova's done. Can't wait!!!   Dar 24 10/29/2005 02:21 am Okay, Ouchie that hurt you have been playing with the Initiative too long because that was just cruel place to stop. ; ) but really great story you're doing such a wonderful job.   WendyJane 23 11/01/2005 02:08 pm 'Saw Spike giving it to Buffy. The laptop!!' Ha ha ha- classic! Chilling chapter. Come on Spike- time to do the hero bit!   Dar 23 10/28/2005 04:06 pm Well she said she got T-shirt from Walsh attempt at slaying the slayer guess she just earned a second one. Great Story.   SpaceLord 23 10/28/2005 08:08 am well well looks like someone is up the creek without a paddle Can't wait for the next chapter.   Always_jbj 23 10/28/2005 08:02 am *Gulp* Ok... really, really need more!   UncagedMuse 23 10/28/2005 05:31 am I hope Spike and the Scoobies make it there before Cordova can inflict too much damage. Will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chap! Absolutely magnificent fic!   bloodshedbaby 23 10/28/2005 04:53 am Oooooh Spike is going to save the day.... Bloody fabulous! Can't wait to read the next part!   slaymesoftly 23 10/28/2005 01:53 am ohhh - going to that scary place again! Gah!   spike_spetslayer 23 10/28/2005 01:45 am OMG, you are evil! Leaving us there! LOL--really, come on and give us more.....   MarzBar 23 10/28/2005 01:42 am ACK!! Will Spike, his childer and the Scoobies get away soon enough? How will they save Buffy? More soon please.   WendyJane 22 11/01/2005 02:00 pm Bless! There- that was what we all wanted! Nice one! Another perfect chapter!   Confused Muse 22 10/27/2005 10:40 am My god, she actually listened for once! *is stunned* Mind you, he is a hard man to resist and all. And yet, still with the looming loomingness of doom *aaargh*   bloodshedbaby 22 10/27/2005 07:12 am Oh yeah. Buffy's gonna get it. Hope Spike will save the day   UncagedMuse 22 10/27/2005 05:21 am absolutely wonderful chap! Whats Cordova going to do in the next chap though? I'm all crazed and waiting for more!   Fanatic 22 10/27/2005 05:03 am I think its great how you maintain the tension even while resolving plot arcs like this one. Also thanks so much for the frequent updates. I'm hooked.   Always_jbj 22 10/27/2005 02:15 am Oh lovely chapter... very nice resolution to their estrangement. I loved Spike's speech it was perfect! Now if only Buffy would learn to listen to him more often... he has afterall been around a little longer than her.   SpaceLord 22 10/27/2005 01:25 am Good going for Spike, can't wait to read what happens next. Should be interesting.   MarzBar 22 10/27/2005 01:24 am Good on Spike for getting through to her. I bet she's in danger from Whoredova though. More soon please.   spike_spetslayer 22 10/27/2005 01:13 am Aww...sweet...but Buffy still thinks she's in the clear...Love this story more with every chapter...   WendyJane 21 11/01/2005 01:52 pm Okay- I'm a little scared for the loverly Spike right now. Good acting from Buffy tho- love how well-written this is!!   Always_jbj 21 10/26/2005 11:59 pm OK... the fact that she is sending Buffy home worries me... I do hope she doesn't have a tracer of some sort on the car because I would hate to see what she did if she got her hands on Spike, Diana and Darian. *covers eyes*   Confused Muse 21 10/26/2005 07:37 pm *Stands up waving arms* "Get off the track! Train! Train!" I'm biting my knuckles here, lol.   bloodshedbaby 21 10/26/2005 07:06 pm I just love this story... I'm glad you gave Riley lots of pain but now General Whoredova needs to go by way of agony.   Dar 21 10/26/2005 03:52 pm Maybe Buffy will end up walking a mile in Spike's shoes. General Cordova is sicker than Finn, scary thought. But Wow so caught up in this story. Thank You so much for working so hard on it. Excellent   Stephanie 21 10/26/2005 01:42 pm Great story. I love this update... I am dying to find out what happens next. Will Buffy fall for the trap? How will everyone react if she gets taken captive. Oh my oh my... I want to know. Bounces happily... such a fab story   Lou 21 10/26/2005 12:43 pm I'm afraid Buffy's dope quotient has gone off the scale. And poor Spike - the only time she'll give him a break is if he gets dusted! Gggrrr!   Chanel 5 21 10/26/2005 07:13 am Buffy's game. I mean, what does she think is going to happen? that Cordova will see what happened to Finn and just shut down the initiative? what are Buffy's plans for their destruction? She must be suspicious that cordova might think it was her. More updates, although I feel bad for asking because you already do update so often. It's just.... Please???   spike_spetslayer 21 10/26/2005 05:33 am Uh-oh...does Buffy not smell the trap? what will happen to our heroine? and when will you be updating again? too many questions...and BTW, have I told you how very much I love this story?   WendyJane 20 11/01/2005 01:45 pm Let's hope Buffy really does want what she says she doesn't. Spot on with that characterization by the way   Confused Muse 20 10/26/2005 07:33 pm Oh dear.... Poor Buffy's in for another world of pain, isn't she? They're going to be saddling up in and out of that place for rescue missions *again*!   slaymesoftly 20 10/26/2005 01:46 am Lovely update. And go Darian with the insight. Buffy's reaction rings so true - and Spike's remaining violent streak is so true to how he would have been at that time. Really enjoying this (even if I am too lazy to review every time).   Stephanie 20 10/25/2005 07:49 pm Excellant story I am really enjoying this. You are an excellent writer and I cannot wait for the next update. I so hope that Buffy wakes up and realizes that there are some lines that shouldn't be crossed and it doesn't matter if the victim is a vampire or a human. I want to smack Xander he is so stupid!   Lou 20 10/25/2005 10:41 am Thanks - you're spoiling us! A decent sleep may help our heroine see the light but I'm afraid there's no hope for Xander!   spike_spetslayer 20 10/25/2005 06:54 am Gosh and golly, two chappies in one day--I may have a heart attack! Awesome update, and more is a blessing...thanks so much....   MarzBar 20 10/25/2005 04:34 am Whoredova may be able to figure out that Buffy was involved with the escape. That could give Buffy the chance to get first hand understanding about what Spike, Darian and Diana went through. She is still being pretty stupid.   Always_jbj 20 10/25/2005 03:47 am I love Darian... he's so sweet, and insightful! I am glad he was able to make Spike feel a little beter. It occurs to me that Xander's little tirade may have had completely the opposite result to that which he wanted, and actually be the last little piece in the puzzle that will help Buffy realise that what Spike and Diana did was completely justified and NOT just because they were vampires and unable to help themselves. And oh boy... the shit is going to hit the fan when the General sees those tapes! You are very very good!! That was exactly what I intended with Xander's little speech!!! Kudos to you, percepto person!!   Cas 20 10/25/2005 03:26 am I was wondering about survelliance tapes and such, esp. with all that's been going on in Spike's quarters. Foolish of them not to consider that the rooms might be bugged. I wonder what they'll show?   WendyJane 19 11/01/2005 01:36 pm Gee- that was painful! I hope things'll get better. Poor Spike!   slaymesoftly 19 10/25/2005 01:05 am Oh,very well done. Even when Buffy allows herself to listen, she still has that Slayer mentality telling her she's not doing her job. Looking forward to the next chapter.   weaverslayer1 19 10/24/2005 11:56 pm Great story. Made me very sad for Spike.She just won't cut him a break.Love can be very painful sometimes if you see everything in black and white   MarzBar 19 10/24/2005 10:19 pm ACK!! How long in this universe is Buffy going to remain stupid?? Vampire getting even = bad; human getting even = OK. Maybe she needs a little torture by some lovely humans.   Dar 19 10/24/2005 09:56 pm Looks like poor Spike has traded one prison for another. Still can't get anyone to listen.   spike_spetslayer 19 10/24/2005 04:16 pm So Buffy becomes crabby, holier-than-thou again...shoulda seen it coming. man, her compass is pointing due south/southwest, isn't it? hope it changes direction soon....   Confused Muse 19 10/24/2005 12:57 pm Ah, with an overdeveloped sense of responsibility comes very twisted logic. Bless her - disappointed in herself more than with Spike, but somehow, both of them end up paying for it. Wonderfully complex emotions depicted vibrantly   redwulf50 19 10/24/2005 12:51 pm god Buffy is stupid. Great chappie   SpaceLord 19 10/24/2005 12:24 pm Man talk about sitting on you high horse, it would take alot less for a human to go totally bloodthirsty if someone was doing that to them. Anyway good chapter and I really like this story.   Stephanie 19 10/24/2005 11:57 am It was such a sad chapter. I hope that things get right between them. I know she is the freaking Slayer but please she would have done the same thing if it had been Dawn being abused. Sigh... loveley update   Lou 19 10/24/2005 10:52 am Yeesh - I had such hopes when he waved the Dawn or Mom flag - but no. There's a surprise - the dope needs to wake up and smell the coffee!   WendyJane 18 11/01/2005 01:28 pm Still going strong- I'm pretty sure Buffy'll come around. Love this story!!   letitia 18 10/23/2005 11:54 pm WOW... I can't wait for more. So much to look forward to in the next chapter.   spike_spetslayer 18 10/23/2005 11:30 pm Awwww, you evil! you can't just leave us here! You know, sometimes Buffy's moral compass is so far off, she could find her ass with a roadmap and directions from MapQwest. Hope Spike gets to the splainy before she dusts him, and hope Diana keeps her little vampclaws to herself... Loving this!   Mary 18 10/23/2005 07:32 pm Loved the update and looking forwaard to more action!   redwulf50 18 10/23/2005 01:23 pm Stoopid Buffy, hell I would have killed the bastard   SpaceLord 18 10/23/2005 10:15 am This story is getting really good and I really like it, can't wait to see what happens next. Well the saying is "Revenge is a dish best served cold" or something like that   Dar 18 10/23/2005 06:40 am I am so hooked on this story Great job of telling this story. Just want more of it.   MarzBar 18 10/23/2005 06:33 am Grrrr Argh! I hope Spike tells her and shows her everything that piece of shit was doing to them before the chips went down. Not to mention, it's past time for Buffy to start getting smarter about life and the general nature of good, evil, souls and humans. More story please.   Tamara 18 10/23/2005 05:55 am I think Buffy is still struggling with her definition of humanity. Thinking that Riley deserved her protection is just wrong. Doing what they did is the only available option they had. He would have gotten off scott free and then done the same thing all over again to another girl. Since the operation is so secretive it's unlikely he would even be discharged from service. Maybe Anya should have a tlak with her about vengeance. Hmmm...Anya's ideas on the whole thing could be interesting..thanx for idea ... and yeah, Buffy's not quite got everything worked out yet, but that's just her, right?? thanx for review   Opal 18 10/23/2005 05:33 am Incredible update!   Always_jbj 18 10/23/2005 04:55 am Very good chapter! I loved Buffy comforting Spike despite being so angry with him.. and now that she is starting to calm down a little maybe she will hear him out and realise why they had done what they did. I LOVE that she is beginning to be a little less narrowminded in her view of things. I am really loving this story.   WendyJane 17 11/01/2005 01:19 pm Wow wow wow!! I hope Buffy comes to realise that Riley desrved everything he just got!   spike_spetslayer 17 10/23/2005 11:24 pm Can I just say--Just Desserts? Threefold rule? Karma, kismet and fate? Riley got everything he deserved...and he did deserve it. On to the next chappie!   slaymesoftly 17 10/23/2005 12:20 am Wow! can't mourn for Riley- but the General's not going to be pleased. Poor Buffy. It will be interesting to see how she handles this mess.   redwulf50 17 10/22/2005 12:48 pm LOL, at least Buffy made the right decsion at the end   Stephanie 17 10/22/2005 12:07 pm Excellant update! I cannot believe what the heck happened. Riley is dead and so bloody! I can't wait to see how Buffy is going to react once Spike and Diana are out. I can't wait for the next update!   SpaceLord 17 10/22/2005 10:04 am Yay!!! The blood flows.....now we need for Dru to come to town and hurt the people that hurt her Dark Knight   Megan 17 10/22/2005 09:52 am Oh God, I think I'm as scared as Spike!   MarzBar 17 10/22/2005 07:05 am YAY!! Ugly, vile death for Cardbored! Good thing Spike is out, too! Now, what is Buffy going to do, if anything, about the Initiative?   Always_jbj 17 10/22/2005 07:04 am Oh.. lovely chap! Riley got his just deserts and Spike and Diana are out of there *yay*... now I just hope that Buffy calms down enough that she will let Spike explain.   fanatic 17 10/22/2005 07:00 am Mmm. Delicious retribution. Moral ambiguity. Excitement and romance. Don't leave us hanging!   WendyJane 16 11/01/2005 01:13 pm Chills. Seriously. This is such a good- well written story. Pure genious I swear!   Always_jbj 16 10/22/2005 03:10 am *sits back to enjoy the show* Riley Finn has soo had this coming!!! Loved the chap! Thanks.   MarzBar 16 10/22/2005 02:39 am EEEEK!! Evil, evil cliffie! Please, please kill Riley now! I hated him in the series and this one makes Hitler and Stalin look like saints.   redwulf50 16 10/21/2005 11:10 pm LOL, oh yeah I sooooooooooo lopve this fic, can I be your biggest fan????   BatdzAngel 16 10/21/2005 10:36 pm Oh my God! Go Spike! Kill the bastard Diana! Whee, this is becoming one of my favorite stories ever! Good job!   bloodshedbaby 16 10/21/2005 06:46 pm you teasing wench!! BAD!!! Well, it was good, but still you're bad. *pouts*   Stephanie 16 10/21/2005 03:24 pm Riley must die.... I can not believe how cruel he is. (Well I can) but he needs to die painfully. Grrrrr.... I love this story and all your updates - wonderful job!   spike_spetslayer 16 10/21/2005 03:09 pm Riley Finn must die. And i cannot believe that you left us there, up in the air! better have an update soon, or there will definitely be a revolt! (teasing)--this story gets better and better everytime i read it.... BTW, Hurrah for the Smut!   SpaceLord 16 10/21/2005 02:56 pm Too bad they only got 20 minutes to torture and kill Riley. Well can't wait for the next chapter this is getting good. Keep up the good work   Chanel 5 16 10/21/2005 02:45 pm Yay! riley's death! where is it???   Lou 16 10/21/2005 01:54 pm Please make it slow and nasty.   WendyJane 15 11/01/2005 01:02 pm Take my breath away much!! Perfect chapter!!   spike_spetslayer 15 10/20/2005 11:47 pm oh,oh, oh, you go, Buffy! teach that bad boy a lesson...lol...Love this story, and how *devious* they both are. Keep those chappies coming!   letitia 15 10/20/2005 08:00 pm Now let the fun really begin. Great update.   Stephanie 15 10/20/2005 02:25 pm Excellant Story. I am loving the updates! You are such a talented writer! thank you so much; that is so nice of you to say; glad you are enjoying the story   slaymesoftly 15 10/20/2005 01:57 pm Oh, nicely done! Love the angry shouting at each other in place of what they really wanted to do. But, I'm really worried about this not being the time/place for it. What if they get caught??? *shudders* *shouting instead of kissing* -- what they always did...lol *wrong time/place* -- again what they always did Just trying to stay true to the show lol   redwulf50 15 10/20/2005 12:21 pm Oh yeah I love this fic, poooooor spike oh yeah, don't you feel sorry for him *rolling eyes*   Always_jbj 15 10/20/2005 11:29 am *fans self* *melts* There better be more... and soon!! Fabulous chap!!!   SpaceLord 15 10/20/2005 10:15 am Allright porn time Always nice with these updates. lol...i'm glad you're enjoying it; i'm sorry to tell you that I don't really do porn..lol ...i'm not too good at it... so it prolly wont get too much more explicit... hope you still enjoy it   Opal 15 10/20/2005 04:18 am Nice update! Sweet!   WendyJane 14 11/01/2005 12:56 pm Oooohhh!! Can't wait to see what's coming next!!   redwulf50 14 10/20/2005 12:28 am Thank you, I love this fic, so thanks for updating so quickly.   MarzBar 14 10/19/2005 09:06 am OMG! I cannot believe what goes on in Spike's quarters that seems to be unobserved. And how much stupider can Buffy get. I can't fathom that she thinks it will be OK to leave Spike in there to take the punishment if the girl gets out. Her cold heartedness is starting to approach Whore-dova's. BTW, still need to smack Xander.   bloodshedbaby 14 10/19/2005 09:04 am Oh the plot thickens... Let's hope they can pull it off!   spike_spetslayer 14 10/19/2005 08:29 am oh yeah--go buffy--loving this...keep going...   WendyJane 13 11/01/2005 12:49 pm Powerful chap- I'm really enjoying this fic!!   MarzBar 13 10/19/2005 08:57 am Always happy to see somebody manage to shut Xander's mouth, if even for a short time. Spike outwitted Cardbored but if Willow can't break the code soon, Spike could be a casualty of Riley's cruelty.   Stacy 13 10/19/2005 06:15 am I don't know if I've posted any reviews on this story yet, but just in case... I love it. I wasn't sure I would from reading the summary but I've really gotten into it and look forward to all the updates (which have been coming quite regularly, thanks so much!) I can't wait to see what's coming up in future chapters. Thanks for writing.   Lou 13 10/18/2005 11:54 pm Whooo lovely - fighting talk. Kudos for creating the vilest Riley.   Always_jbj 13 10/18/2005 03:30 pm Excellent!! Well that news put paid to Xander and his sanctimonious bullshit didn't it!! And thank god Buffy got the laptop out in time... poor Spike.... there really isn't enough that can be done to Mr Finn to make up his many and varied crimes... but I do hope you are going to give it a damned good try! lol.   redwulf50 13 10/18/2005 12:51 pm another excellent chapter   SpaceLord 13 10/18/2005 10:37 am Wohooo promise of Riley pain, hope it's gonna be long and tortures and all that kinda stuff. As AC/DC wrote "if you want blood, you got it" I'm so hoping this is true for this story Good to see the frequent updates too, really like that. Don't make me forget the previous chapters that way.   Stephanie 13 10/18/2005 09:08 am Great update - I loved it! I sent you some info through the contact author link did you recieve it (either from athenewolfe or stephanie) please let me know. I can't wait for the next story!   spike_spetslayer 13 10/18/2005 06:31 am Fantastic! Xander finally speechless! Willow shocked! Buffy repentant! could this get any better? Hope so! more soon, please!   bloodshedbaby 13 10/18/2005 06:16 am Very much with the awesome! Stupid Riley. He needs pain. I love Buffy's last lines, perfect. Thank you for keeping up with frequent updates and making me happy!! Riley pain coming up soon...i promise...like in the next few chaps...   WendyJane 12 11/01/2005 12:42 pm Wowee- another great turn of events!!   Always_jbj 12 10/18/2005 06:26 am Excellent chap! Off to read the next one... I am just LOVING this fic.   redwulf50 12 10/17/2005 12:46 pm lol, verygood chappie, but is the general setting them up??   SpaceLord 12 10/17/2005 11:24 am I like it, now where getting somewhere but I'm still a firm beliver that the army boys needs to die in a most horrible and tortured way.   MarzBar 12 10/17/2005 09:51 am Good on the Spike spying and seducing. Hope he's not caught and punished.   WendyJane 11 11/01/2005 12:31 pm Loved it. Another brilliant chapter.   Always_jbj 11 10/17/2005 02:41 am Argh... can someone please knock some sense and/or compassion into Xander Harris!? Good update! Thank you.   MarzBar 11 10/16/2005 09:55 pm GRR ARGH!! Now we need to do something horrible to Xander as well as everybody in the Initiative. Buffy is remaining stupid and stubborn as well. She's had a year off with almost nothing to slay. What if the vamps did get loose? It's her job and not the Initiative's. They are seriously messing with the balances here. Could the PTB help take them down? More story please.   slaymesoftly 11 10/16/2005 03:41 pm Quick update! Yay! *looks around eagerly for more*   Chanel 5 11 10/16/2005 02:08 pm I wish buffy had caught up with Xander, he needed taking down a peg.   redwulf50 11 10/16/2005 01:53 pm Oh yeah I love a plot that progressess so nicely   WendyJane 10 11/01/2005 12:21 pm Great great great!   slaymesoftly 10 10/16/2005 01:14 am Another good chapter. Hope they come up with something quickly.   athenewolfe 10 10/15/2005 10:19 pm Great story - I loved the chapter !   spike_spetslayer 10 10/15/2005 04:16 pm Riley is such a wanker. This is getting good!   redwulf50 10 10/15/2005 03:21 pm Oh yeah It keeps getting better (rubs hands together gleefully)   SpaceLord 10 10/15/2005 02:12 pm I don't understand Buffys problem with deactivating the chips, afterall killing all the soldiers is a good thing and as the saying goes "play with fire...." Fully agreed, but remembr this is BUFFY... so of course she can't see that *rolling eyes at silly Buffy* lol   Always_jbj 10 10/15/2005 12:25 pm Another great chap! I love how Buffy is gradually reassessing here veiws on right and wrong. Spike's plan sounds promising... hopefully he will come up with the solution he needs to get Buffy to agree pretty soon before anything worse happens to Diana or him. I can't wait for the next chap! I'm really loving this fic.   Chanel 5 10 10/15/2005 11:42 am another fantastic chapter...   WendyJane 9 11/01/2005 12:14 pm Man- you gotta hate this Riley. Love this story tho- and I like Darian's character too.   slaymesoftly 9 10/15/2005 04:48 pm Just spent some time catching up with the chapters I'd been missing on this story and now I'm hooked! Wonderful plotline - can't wait to see how/when Buffy brings them down (she IS going to bring them down, I hope? Tell me now if this is going to a really dark place!) Will be watching for updates. Oh don't worry, they're coming down all right...Mr. Finn in particular lol   Esther 9 10/15/2005 09:56 am My goodness, just read all 9 chapters because there was no way to stop. Very intriguing twist on S5, and (I say this with sincerity) never have I HATED Riley Finn so much in my existence. Hot damn, you've brought an evil out of him that amazes me, yet terrifies me for how well *in character* it is. Damn, just wanna kill the jerk for doing those things to poor Diana....poor Spike, so glad he was able to hear Buffy and agree to help. Oh, can't wait for more of this cause I'm totally in awe of this story. Awww...that is one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten...thanx!! glad you're enjoying it and glad i can spread Riley-hatage everywhere hehehe lol   spike_spetslayer 9 10/15/2005 04:31 am Awesome update. Excellent chappies. Great Evil Riley. Wonderfully sinfully wicked General Whore-dova. Need more, soon, please! Thanks for your review; helps to know i'm doing the general right cause original villains are hard *whew* lol glad you're enjoyin it   redwulf50 9 10/14/2005 10:40 pm God can we kill Finn soon?? patience, friend, patience...all in good time   MarzBar 9 10/14/2005 06:09 pm OMG! It's not possible for me to put into words what I feel about Captain Cardbored and his friends. No torture Spike could inflict would be too horrible. I wish Buffy would get over her stupid deal about humans being all superior because they supposedly have souls. She could have been best friends with Hitler. More story please.   Chanel 5 9 10/14/2005 11:13 am another great chapter!   Always_jbj 9 10/14/2005 09:54 am I love Darian you just want to cuddle him! Poor thing. Riley Finn really needs to pay!! Pain.. LOTS of pain... and that horrible General too! I am really enjoying this fic. Thank you!   bloodshedbaby 9 10/14/2005 09:39 am OOOH! This is a total Riley shitlist fic! You have him such an asshoe in this, I think there will be mucho cheering when they make him feel some pain. Can't wait to find out how they're going to take the initiative down!   SpaceLord 9 10/14/2005 08:52 am Slowly getting there, really like it and can't wait to continue reading this story.   WendyJane 8 11/01/2005 12:06 pm Amazing chapter- great Buffy and Spike reunion! Loved it muchly!   Chanel 5 8 10/13/2005 03:36 pm This is a really interesting story and for some reason the fact that the initiative people are taking humans, inparticularly Diana, to be turned makes me irrationally angry, influencing me more then a story should. For some reason I have been constantly thinking about life, and things people take for granted, and how someone else's views can impact your way of living. I've been ranting about it for a few weeks, I just can't explain how angry stories about slavery and terrorism and fascism are making me at the moment. And the media does nothing to help. I've taken a stance and am now boycotting all media. I even turn the radio down during the local news. the news is just depressing, and the media only ever plays one side of it, hardly ever accurate, and then the inability to change what happens becomes frustrating. Am I any better off knowing about a mudslide in guata mala? no. I can't do anything about it past giving money. I'd rather live in my own little world, where the only bad stories I hear are about people I know and can do something about. It might be an ignorant way to live, but I'll be much happier for it. OK, rant over, crazy lady going away now... BTW, great story!!!   SpaceLord 8 10/13/2005 03:34 pm I want to see the initiative run red with blood soon, damn kill 'em all.   Always_jbj 8 10/13/2005 02:21 pm Excellent update. Spike told her JUST what she needed to strengthen her resolve! I wouldn't want to be in Mr Finn's shoes--he has both a pissed-off Slayer and Master vampire out for his blood!   WendyJane 7 11/01/2005 11:57 am Ooh- that chapter really gave me chills! Great work!   Lou 7 10/13/2005 11:46 am Love this - definitely time for retribution!   SpaceLord 7 10/13/2005 10:27 am Time for some serious torture and killing soon, must deactivate the chip and let Spike run free   sue 7 10/13/2005 10:17 am Wow. Just caught up with this one and I love it! Looking forward to some bloody vengeance in the future. Thanks.   Always_jbj 7 10/13/2005 09:17 am I am REALLY loving this fic. Excellent job so far!! Poor Spike... I do hope he gets the opportunity to exact some form of revenge on these people for what they have done to him and his! And Buffy is re-evaluating her opinion of good and evil, right and wrong... always good to see!   bloodshedbaby 7 10/12/2005 05:42 am That was just awesome, and thank you for the quick update!! I love the confrontation between Spike and Buffy and man, those Initiative pricks... They're in for a whole lotta of pain... Looking forward to seeing how Buffy gets them out of there!   Tamara 7 10/12/2005 03:58 am While she didn't come to protect the vampires being abused , they are innocent. They've done no wrong and are being being victimized by conscienceless monsters. Sounds like Buffy is getting closer to realizing that it shouldn't have been a matter of Human and demon but innocent and guilty.   WendyJane 6 11/01/2005 11:45 am Ooh- I can't wait to see what's coming!! Great chapter- I love Spike's emotions in this.   redwulf50 6 10/14/2005 10:26 pm oh shit I kind of love this   MarzBar 6 10/11/2005 08:06 pm ACK!! How the hell is Buffy going to be able to help him? He is pretty weak after all that torture now. Amazing to me how vile humans can be and tell themselves they're good. More story please. Spike needs rescue and revenge.   SpaceLord 6 10/11/2005 05:33 pm I'm gonna be seriously pissed off if Spike and his childe don't get a chance to torture these soldier boys in the upcoming chapters. Hell at this point in the story I wouldn't mind much if he killed Buffy either.   bloodshedbaby 6 10/11/2005 06:18 am Gah! How could you leave it there? *whines* This was an amazing chapter. Seriously, this fic just keeps getting better and better. i even love protective Spike even tho he's 'protecting' someone other than Buffy. Seriously cannot wait to read more!!   Chanel 5 6 10/11/2005 06:13 am I'm glad there's more of this coming. It leaves me agitated with the need to find out what happens next.   UncagedMuse 6 10/11/2005 06:10 am OMG that is so freaking cruel. I hate the initiave! MORE SOON PLEASE!   WendyJane 5 11/01/2005 11:38 am Just brilliant. I love this story!   Chanel 5 5 10/11/2005 01:59 am come on, come, get to the good stuff!!! more please lol...just one more *teaser* chapter before the *sigh* reunion... lol   MarzBar 5 10/10/2005 07:12 am OMG!! Does Buffy think Captain Cardbored will actually show her what he and the General are doing? Will he show her his pet vamp and her abuse? Will they show her Spike? I hope this story will involve torture of "humans" to make up for the poor vamp slaves. More please.   redwulf50 5 10/09/2005 10:38 pm Oh my god I hope she realy did try to escape and that she made it.   WendyJane 4 11/01/2005 11:34 am Totally gripping; I can't believe Riley. Such an evil bastard- and yet another great turn of events!!   WendyJane 3 11/01/2005 11:25 am Great stuff- totally Spike. Love this new twist!   redwulf50 3 10/09/2005 10:27 pm oh yeah liked this chappie   WendyJane 2 11/01/2005 11:19 am Ooh- what a great twist! I can't wait to see how this'll go down!   redwulf50 2 10/09/2005 10:20 pm ahhhh the plot thickens   Nikkole 1 04/06/2006 01:47 pm Thats ok that there wasn't much ation, you need a good set up for the rest, you know?? I am so glad that this a a completed story! Your cliffies drive be mad! LOL! yeah...i agree...lol...you'll get a break from my evil cliffies...which i dont think were quite as evil anyway back when i wrote this ;) thanx   Chanel 5 1 11/05/2005 12:48 pm yay! what a great ending!!! But what are they going to do with all those vamps?   lynpen 1 11/04/2005 03:51 am Excellent. I am really enjoying this, go Spike.   WendyJane 1 11/01/2005 11:12 am Great great start!   linpen 1 10/27/2005 01:39 am Great updates. Buffy has finally seen the light but she is seriously underestimating the General. She really should be getting that rest!   linpen 1 10/25/2005 01:59 pm I just peeked to see what the first little bit looked like (battling WIP addiction). Twenty chapters latter(Insert Aussie understament) I think I can say it looks good.   Tam 1 10/14/2005 11:08 am awwww can i have darian? and poor diana! i'm surprised she doesn't beg spike to stake her after having slimy riley paws all over her. excellent update and can't wait for the next one!   bloodshedbaby 1 10/10/2005 07:47 pm You've spoiled me because now I'm waiting for my daily update of this story. More? *looks hopeful* workin on it lol almost done will be posted tonight   redwulf50 1 10/09/2005 10:15 pm So far so good   Disclaimer If you are under the age of 17, please use your head and do not read fics that are labeled "NC-17". Parents, I cannot control what your children are reading, so please be advised that the majority of the fics archived here are NOT suitable for those under the age of 17. I do not own Buffy the Vampire Slayer and I am in no way making any profit from this site. This is for pure entertainment purposes only. 2004 copyright-bringonthebloodshed.com