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| Longer, Then Forever by Demonica Mills |
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| vicki | Chapter 18 | 07/25/2006 07:42 pm |
| this story has a really great premise which i liked. I also liked the referral to the white vampire. however, i felt that the story just rushed way too fast near the ending - everything wrapped up so quickly. i think it could have gone on longer so that it didn't seem so rushed. and yet, there could have been a bit more detail about what actually happened to buffy and spike vis-a-vis the scoobies. it implied that the scoobs didn't see buffy and spike or that they were not even going to be remembered. i could have used a bit more info about that. on the whole, i would have liked you to go more in depth with buffy's return and dawns seeming negative feelings towards buffy plus i wished that spike would have gone off on the scoobs, especially xander for being so totally and completely clueless as to how to treat buffy. i too would like to see a sequel that told about what happened next for buffy and spike. thanks for writing this one - i usually don't leave a review that tells what i would like to have seen because this is your vision, after all. but i thought you might want to hear what i had to say. not that you know me or anything! haha! thanks again. |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 18 | 07/24/2006 11:13 am |
| wow I really liked the ending of this story... I started reading it when you posted it at twojanes but I kinda forgot all about it... *ducks head* don't know how that happened... Love it though! |
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| Milly | Chapter 18 | 06/08/2006 08:03 pm |
Wow. Impressive story. I liked it.
Would love to see some kind of epilogue, checking in several years later or something. |
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| Chapter 18 | 06/08/2006 08:02 pm |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 18 | 05/15/2006 03:26 pm |
| cool story! I really liked it - sister tara was nice. *smile* |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chapter 18 | 04/27/2006 06:33 am |
| I just finished the story. Wonderful! What a great story line. White vampire, love that also. |
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| Kat | Chapter 18 | 04/23/2006 08:09 pm |
| That is an ending that I totally was NOT expecting. however i did enjoy it. |
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| Lou | Chapter 18 | 04/21/2006 02:34 pm |
| Cool superpowers. |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 18 | 04/21/2006 12:11 pm |
| Fantastic fic with a wonderful ending! I love how you made Dawn, Tara's sister and erased Spike and Buffy from the others lives so that they could start their new life and mission together! |
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| sirc | Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 11:10 pm |
Loved this  |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 07:24 pm |
| awww... great ending!!!! one word - SEQUEL!!!! |
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| betraktor | Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 02:36 pm |
| loved this story, liked cavebuffy a lot, very belivable, good ending but a bit sad, you leave me wanting more, sequel? please... |
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| Ellie | Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 11:01 am |
| this fic was amazing! i dont care wot uva ppl say it was gr8!! the ending i love but i think it could be improved if you make another follow on story about the guardian role!!! if u do i will sooo read it! |
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| Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 06:39 am |
| you spoilt it! it was a gr8 fic but u spoilt it with the horrid ending*sob* ...um...maybe a sequel will fix things up? |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 11:10 pm |
| Nice completion to this story, De. {huggles} It was worth the wait for each chapter each week. It gave me something to look forward to. Nice work all around, and I look forward to more of your stories. |
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| vladt | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 06:57 pm |
| very enjoyable read. tara as dawn's sister, nice touch. very sad to see this tale end. thanks for the wonderful read. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 05:32 pm |
| I really liked the way you ended this. As Buffy said her time here was like a dream, and with Dawn all taken care of Buffy and Spike are free to start on the rest of their journey together. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 04:37 pm |
| I really liked the ending! So, it all went back to before Willow called Buffy back? VERY nice! |
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| Esther | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 02:56 pm |
| Oooh, that was fantastic!!! I love the ending and I'm glad that Dawn decided to be Tara's sister in the end. Great story and I'm gonna really miss it. |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 02:34 pm |
I love this...You took me to a happy place  |
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| Irina | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 01:13 pm |
| I love how Buffy used the title of the fic as a line in this final chapter. Fantastic story, I really enjoyed reading it! |
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| letitia | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 12:31 pm |
| hate to see it end, but I am glad that Dawn is okay and she really did pick the right person. Tara will take care of her for Buffy and Spike. |
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| CutieSaiyajin | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 12:14 pm |
| This was a great story. I'm sad to see it finally end, it was a really good read. |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 11:35 am |
So were Dawn put in an alternate reality or did Spike and Buffy just erease themselfes from the current one? Brain gymnastics I say
But I loved the story over all but the end? Well I would have loved to see an epi with them in the future and giving a bit more info on what it was that they did besides watch the key (gotta get boring after a while ). |
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| me | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 11:31 am |
| great choice with tara...loved this story...hoping for one more chapter (BIG HINT) |
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| Tamara | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 11:11 am |
Definitely like it. And Tara is the best possible choice among the Scoobies.
The bit about tapping the orb is funny as hell. Good job. |
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| whitesaphyr | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 10:55 am |
| i have discover this website a couple of days before and it's the first story i read... and wow ! i read it in an afternoon... and it's totally amazing !!!! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 10:38 am |
| I'm glad they get to travel and be away from the Scoobies but won't the Scoobies (Xander and Willow) try locating spells, etc. to run them down? |
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| Dar | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 10:08 am |
| That was sweet all there mundane burdens gone. Together they can be young and enjoy themselves between missions. |
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| Pin | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 09:35 am |
| I've really enjoyed this story, with it's many turns. I like the way you sorted out everything and gave them futures that would work well. Thank you! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 09:23 am |
| rofl...okay that was totally unexpected! very neat ending! didn't see it coming at all! |
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| kim | Chapter 18 | 04/18/2006 09:15 am |
| So, is this the end? And are they gone from the rest of the groups lives now? |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 17 | 05/15/2006 03:22 pm |
| oh nice twist me likey! runs to conclusion! |
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| Cordykitten | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 03:18 pm |
| The Eternal One? Seems as if Buffy will have a long life.. or it's because she was very long in the other dimension. ... Oh yeah! the millennia of the guardians Long life for Buffy. Uh-huh.. that's the secret of Brianna. And the guardians accepted their fate.. though I'm not sure they noticed what they did |
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| sirc | Chapter 17 | 04/11/2006 01:18 pm |
| great chapter |
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| Sophie | Chapter 17 | 04/11/2006 04:53 am |
| This fic is awesome - keep it coming please! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 17 | 04/11/2006 12:15 am |
| Cool update. Look forward to next week's update too. I am eager for each installment. {Smiles} Nice storyline for Brianna's former self. loved the little convo between Buffy and Spike, including their thoughts. {Chuckles} I like that we have a bit left to our imaginations for now of just what they thought to each other. {winks} Be happy to find out what they were thinking later, when they follow through. LOL |
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| vladt | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 08:35 pm |
| great chapter, love the exchange between buffy and spike. thanks for the fun read. |
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| Esther | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 07:44 pm |
| Oooh, and it gets better and better!!! Love it!! |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 05:26 pm |
| love love love, more please |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 05:03 pm |
| Ohh wow, look at them. With the telephathy and stuff. I knew Brianna was no good. I didn't think she'd be housing a monk but yeah. I feel like something big is about to happen. Can't wait to see what. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 03:51 pm |
| Very interesting. I wonder why she would think that the First was sent to banish evil? Maybe the first was supposed to be good in the beggining but got to into the power? I hope you update soon! |
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| pretty_in_fangs | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 01:35 pm |
| Oh yummy. Crazy possessed Brianna. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 10:42 am |
| wonderful update!! i love that they have to touch to access whatever it is they're doing! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 07:58 am |
| Great story Demon Girl, although I am missing Cave Buffy. |
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| Irina | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 07:27 am |
| The info about the Guardians and Brianna was really interesting. The telepathy between Spike and Buffy was really cool. Loved Anya in this chapter. Wonderful update! |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 07:24 am |
| oooohhh...I do love this...I'm waiting patiently for more...please???? |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 07:08 am |
| Had several chapters to catch up on, but now I'm here and anxiously awaiting the next one. |
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| letitia | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 06:52 am |
| I just really hope that they can get to Dawn before it is too late. This is just a wonderful story and I am glad that the Scooby's are getting the real deal from the Monks so there will be no mis-communication. |
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| Lou | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 06:13 am |
| COOL!! Very exciting. More please. |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 04:26 am |
| oooh things are getting interesting! but i misss primal Buffy. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 04:16 am |
| Thanks for the great update. I love Anya, she is so fun. The connection between Spike and Buffy is so neat. I am really looking forward to your next update. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 03:57 am |
| eeeek!! omg i love this!! please please please update?!?! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 03:10 am |
| awesome chappy |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 02:48 am |
| OK, Brianna is a nutter with powers. Spuffy could have some fun with their new powers. What info does Anya have? More story please. |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 17 | 04/10/2006 02:04 am |
| Ohh guardians it is |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 16 | 05/15/2006 03:20 pm |
| OHHH wow = Brianna has to be evil - I know it! runs excitedly to the next chappuie |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 16 | 04/10/2006 07:54 am |
| Creepy. I love creepy. |
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| psycheps | Chapter 16 | 04/07/2006 08:26 am |
Oh loved the primal Buffy scenes and he communication with Spike.
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 16 | 04/05/2006 01:38 am |
| Oh boy ... oh boy ... Things get more and more interesting and wrapped around. Look forward to the next chapter. |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 05:24 pm |
| Wow, wowity wow. You really have me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens. |
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| Lou | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 09:08 am |
| Brianna - a mystical nasty piece of work and Dawn helpless to resist - good combo! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 06:01 am |
| i'm with wilow tell us about all of them. and WHO is this Briana REALLY? What does she want with Dawnie? update soon please. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 01:21 am |
| This is so good, I can't believe how into this story I am. I loved this chapter and all the fascinating questions it raised. I can't wait until they are answered, I am really looking forward to the next update. |
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| vladt | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 01:01 am |
| your weaving your usual magic. the tale becomes more and more interesting. thanks for the read. |
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| Irina | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 12:51 am |
| Wonderful chapter... so many interesting things going on in this update. I can't to find out what happens next. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 16 | 04/03/2006 12:29 am |
| wow i really like where you're taking this!! |
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| pretty_in_fangs | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 11:42 pm |
| I always love to see this one updated. So, what, exactly, is it that took over Brianna's body? |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 11:10 pm |
| Brianna hmmm! Got my ideas lol. Cant' wait to see where you go next. Such an exciting fic full of twists! |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 10:57 pm |
| love it...can't wait for more |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 10:26 pm |
| A clifie, Oh man and Its getten so good. I hope with all my might that there will be another update soon. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 09:06 pm |
| WTF is Brianna? Did I already ask that question? It's too bad the monks put the key in a whiny teenaged girl with a piss-poor attitude. More story please. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 08:07 pm |
| OOOO, the plot thickens! Is Brianna really Glory in disguise? Maybe one of the other two hell gods?? I am so into this story! I hope you update again soon! |
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| me | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 07:16 pm |
| great chapter...liked dawns dream |
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| Esther | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 05:41 pm |
| Great update!! WOW, so much info!! Now I'm doubly curious as to who Brianna is and if Spike/Buffy will get to Dawn on time. Oooh, more soon, please? |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 05:28 pm |
Oh NO you don't set your arse back down right now Missyand gimme more ficcieP
excellent chappie |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 05:18 pm |
| Buffy should take out an ad in the Sunnydale newpaper in case there's still someone who doesn't know who she is. What an evil place to leave us. We need more story! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 16 | 04/02/2006 04:41 pm |
| Cool chapter. The next chapter should be pretty interesting. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 15 | 05/15/2006 03:16 pm |
| I loved the whole bit about anya and being around for thousand years. very nice sweetie! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 15 | 04/03/2006 05:54 am |
| i think i want a Spike too. he is just too good |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 15 | 04/02/2006 05:12 pm |
| If Dawn gets a keyectomy will she be less of a pill? Hope you don't make Spike too good, evil writer. Buffy been's waiting a long tim. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 15 | 03/25/2006 08:28 am |
| Ooooo ... white vampire. I think I'm liking the sound of that. I look forward to your next update. {Grins} Now that I'm all caught up again on yours. |
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| Lisa | Chapter 15 | 03/21/2006 02:11 pm |
Loved the ending of this chapter, with all the 'white vampire' and "He never said a word", brilliant!
Can't wait for more |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 15 | 03/15/2006 12:14 pm |
| Great update! I can't wait to see what the monk has to say about the white vampire! Wonder what is going to happen when the blonde duo finds Dawn. |
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| Lou | Chapter 15 | 03/15/2006 06:53 am |
| The white vampire - I like that! |
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| Esther | Chapter 15 | 03/14/2006 02:23 am |
| OMG! Great chapter!! Man, that's some interesting info and I can't wait to find out more. Especially about the 'white vampire.' Great job!! |
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| just sue | Chapter 15 | 03/14/2006 02:01 am |
Another delicious chapter! The white vampire, huh? Gonna lok forward to learning more about that moniker.
Thanks ever so and looking forward to more. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 09:18 pm |
| wow.. thats so great.. i love this!!! |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 09:00 pm |
| Oh wow. What a revelation. So Dawn's dying. And poor Spike, Buffy broke his fingers. And what's all this white vampire stuff? I can't wait to find out. Hope to see more soon! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 06:38 pm |
| The white vampire and the key dying, this is getting even more interesting. And poor Spike with the broken hand, poor Buffy when she realizes what she did. What a great chapter. Please update soon. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 05:03 pm |
ohhhhhh Love the White Vampire thing, great part but *begins to whine* can we stake Angel yet?????  |
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| Irina | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 03:18 pm |
| Fantastic chapter! Interesting confrontation between Buffy and Br. John. Can't to learn more about the white vampire. |
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| Glory | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 11:22 am |
| Wow. Fantastic. Love this fic. Poor Dawnie. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 10:54 am |
| ohhh 'the white vampire' sounds interesting...can't wait to hear what you cooked up for that...lol...great update! |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 10:35 am |
| Another great chapter, touching and funny! looking forward to the next! |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 10:31 am |
| Hmmm...white vampire? That sounds like it could be interesting. Spike's poor hand. Slayer strength, you gotta be careful with that, lol. Stupid idiot monks. They can't just poof and make Dawn stop existing! Hurry and update! You're killing me here! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 10:17 am |
| Oh dear. Is this Brianna person doing black magic? If she finds out Dawn is the key there could be big trouble before Spike and Buffy find her. Is the white vampire some kind of guardian angel? |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 09:45 am |
| good update sweetie! |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 09:40 am |
| YOuare way to good at leaving someone begging for more, so here I am on my knees, begging for more soon!!! |
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| k | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 08:56 am |
| Great chapter |
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| Tamara | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 08:37 am |
| Anya's right. And that fact is something the Scoobies never fully appreciated. And I want to hear this explanation , too. |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 08:07 am |
| whoo hooo...impressive imagery...he never said a word...brilliant...more please |
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| maryperk | Chapter 15 | 03/13/2006 07:46 am |
| Interesting. Lovely chappy. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 14 | 05/15/2006 03:14 pm |
| Oh no! Dying ... Dawn can;t be dying... runs to next chapter! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 14 | 04/02/2006 05:07 pm |
| she shall banish the unworthy - Brianna better be careful, under this theory, she might be the first to go. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 14 | 03/25/2006 08:25 am |
| Oh my gosh ... The key is dying? Monks showing up ... so not of the good. Only one chapter left of the current update ... {Whimpers} |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 14 | 03/07/2006 12:48 am |
EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!! OMG!?!?! dawnie? that cant be real..?! oh my god please update!!!!
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 10:35 pm |
| Oh wow! So didn't see that coming either. Damn I love this story! Great work hun, hope to see more soon! |
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| rayan | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 06:38 pm |
WTF.....jesus... way to go with the suspence....lovin the story.
keep up the good work)) |
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| Robyn | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 05:28 pm |
| Oh wow, this chapter was really good, I love that Spike was keeping an ‘ear’ out for everyone. I hope Dawn is going to be okay. Thank you for the update, they are always so looked forward to. |
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| vladt | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 03:36 pm |
| awesome update. good story, terrible place to end the chapter. more, please more. thanks for the read. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 03:34 pm |
| Very nice chapter, but Dawn is dying? Or the key in Dawn is dying? Either would be very bad, and I have a feeling this "friend" of Dawn's may be that goddess that she was reading about. Maybe that iswhy she wants the key? |
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| Esther | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 02:16 pm |
| Fracking hell!! That was great! Man, I knew Brianna was bad news, but I soo didn't know the bitca was killing Dawn. Damn!! Can't wait for more!!! |
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| Brittany | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 02:02 pm |
| WHAT!?!?!?!?! O come ON, you cant leave me hanging like this!!!! it cruel and unusual punishment!!!!! |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 01:53 pm |
| *Aargh!* where's the rest! this isn't fair! *pout* I was completely into the story and then it was like poof! no more story! (okay so I've been listening to my sister's babbling for far too long...) hope you update soon! ;-P |
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| Irina | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 01:15 pm |
| Whoa! Interesting revelations in this chapter. Poor Dawn, can't wait to find out if they find her in time. Great chapter! |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 12:36 pm |
| Wow, Dawn's dying? I didn't see that coming. Sounds like she has some nifty powers though, if she manages to live through whatever's going on now. Love what you're doing with this story so far. I didn't expect Dawn to have such a big part, but I'm glad she does. The Key is something I always found interesting. |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 10:17 am |
| More as soon as you can. *gets on knees, begging* This was an awesome chap! I love it! |
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| Nemo | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 09:58 am |
| Omg! Now I *really* hate Brianna! Great chap! |
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| just sue | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 09:37 am |
Wow! This doesn't look good for Dawn...or the rest of them. Will juts have to keep my fingers crossed that they find Dawn before her 'mate' does any more damned spells.
Looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 09:23 am |
| oh wow! *insert dramatic music* great update! |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 08:51 am |
| OMG! What is Brianna doing to Dawn? Do you think that she knows that Dawn is the Key? I am dying to find out if the Scoobs find her in time! Please update soon! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 08:50 am |
| Oh my the key is dying... I must know more... this is really good! Loved it! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 14 | 03/06/2006 08:11 am |
| And here we thought all the monks were dead. Awesome chappy. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 13 | 05/15/2006 02:57 pm |
| LOL Okay between you and rae you inspired a drabble - posted to my lj. *giggles* |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 13 | 05/15/2006 02:28 pm |
poor Buffy - the scoobies just don't get her do they - she was in hell - what is she suppose to do throw a pizza party!
*oh plot bunny* |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 13 | 04/02/2006 05:03 pm |
| Perfect Dawn, you just want to shake her until her teeth rattle. Wonderful Spuffy, especially Buffy, the way she was before JWhed messed her up. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 13 | 03/25/2006 08:22 am |
| Childish and stupid Dawn. {Growls} She's being as bad as Willow was in the 6th season. I had hoped we'd get to avoid all that. Looks like we don't. Good update, and I'm eagerly heading to the next hoping for some more happier things. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 13 | 03/05/2006 03:12 pm |
| good chapter - interesting to see where you go with this. |
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| megs | Chapter 13 | 03/03/2006 04:20 pm |
wow De!
I love how this is progressing!
Can't wait for more, update soon please (I only have a week off for spring break..hehehee) ;> |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 13 | 03/02/2006 12:57 am |
| Oh wow! This is a grate story, cant wait for an update. |
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| just sue | Chapter 13 | 02/28/2006 10:23 am |
Fab chapter. There's nothing sweeter than Spike understanding Buffy better than the rest of them put together.
Looking forward eagerly to the next update. Thanks ever so. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 13 | 02/28/2006 03:55 am |
| great chappie!!! |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 08:50 pm |
| Nice summing up by Spike. This is so original. |
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| Lory | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 08:23 pm |
| Will you updating soon. Great Story, Penny |
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| Esther | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 06:22 pm |
| Hot damn, I applaud Spike's explanation to those idiots. I swear, they only think of themselves, and speaking of....I hope someone, mainly Spike or Buffy, smacks Dawn upside the head for being stupid. Man, can't wait till they realize she's gone again....more? Please? |
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| vladt | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 05:31 pm |
| great chapter. i was always amazed by how stupid, the "really bright" people in buf fy's life were. thanks for the read |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 05:29 pm |
| Aww, I do feel bad for Buffy. And Xander just has to go and be stupid as usual. And I have a feeling that Dawn's going to be some trouble here soon. Great chapter! |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 04:56 pm |
Very good chapter. I feel so bad for the way Buffy is feeling. She needs to understand that it was the only way she could have survived her time in Hell; it doesn't mean she is a monster!
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| Robyn | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 04:50 pm |
| Poor Buffy, at least Spike’s there for her. I hope the group pays attention to his insight. I always look forward to your updates, thank you. |
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| Glory | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 03:58 pm |
| This is my favoritest story in the whole world! And you updating on the day from hell makes it twice as sweet! Yay you! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 03:11 pm |
| LOL, Spike is once again smarter than the scoobies |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 01:15 pm |
| Ha! Take that you evil judgemental Scoobies and get off her back! Sorry a little pent up fustration for the scoobs there. Loved the chapter and I am a bit worried about what trouble that Dawn is getting herself into! Please update soon! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 11:21 am |
| great update! wonderful look at Buffy's frame of mind! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 10:37 am |
| ARGH! Maybe she'll just smack her friends around some soon. Xander always deserves it but here, Anya does too. I'm afraid they will use this lovely opportunity to exert even more control over her using guilt. More story please. |
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| Irina | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 09:58 am |
| I liked Spike's insightful little talk with the scoobies at the end of the chapter. Good update. |
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| maryperk | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 09:18 am |
| Poor Buffy. Wonderful Spike. Stupid Dawn. |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 13 | 02/27/2006 08:17 am |
| OH so excellent! I hope there is more soon. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 12 | 05/15/2006 02:25 pm |
AHHHHH how sweet! I like this part very nice!
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| Megan | Chapter 12 | 04/19/2006 06:08 am |
| Gahhhh, Demonica, was going to read all this and then email you, but just had to say how much I adored this chapter. Bufy finally remembering who she is and accepting Spike for the treasure he has unwittingly been to her existence was told beautifully. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 12 | 03/25/2006 08:19 am |
| Now that was a very sweet chapter. There are three more left in what is currently updated. I'm hoping our Buffy and Spike are still good. Good chapter update. |
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| vladt | Chapter 12 | 02/27/2006 05:24 pm |
| sweet update, thanks |
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| B_Mac | Chapter 12 | 02/25/2006 09:48 am |
| Love the story. You have such a wonderful imagination. I wish I could write like you. I have read many of your stories and love them all. Keep up the great work. |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 12 | 02/22/2006 07:03 am |
| awww, so sweet and touching! plus smut! I love this fic, you've captured emotions that fit so perfectly with the theme. Looking forward to more |
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| just sue | Chapter 12 | 02/21/2006 07:22 am |
Love the banner and loved the chappie. But please tell me they didn't really just shag on Joyce's grave, 'cos ewww!
Thanks for update and so looking forward to more. |
| LOL! I didn't think about that. |
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| Lou | Chapter 12 | 02/21/2006 06:35 am |
| I love it when Spike's devotion is rewarded. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 11:10 pm |
| aww that so sweet.. glad that she remembers.. um, one question.. not that i dont love then banner, i really do its awesome! theres just one thing.. i remember when you told a reviewer (on BSC) about the title "longer, then forever" not longer than forever.. its just the banner says "than" instead of ".., then..".. just thought i'd point it out.. |
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| Jackofspikes | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 07:49 pm |
wow..I just found this..and I am in awe.
Please update soon |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 04:13 pm |
| Wow! Good on her after regaining her memories. It seems like she can leave a lot of her prejudices, Council bullshit and attitudes from interfering friends behind after what she had to do to survive for so long. More story please. |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 04:12 pm |
| That chapter was simply amazing! I can't wait to see what happens when they go back to the house! |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 02:47 pm |
| awww -Spuffiness! Had a couple of chapters to catch up on apparently. I'm glad I found them and got up to speed. Ready for the next one whenever you are! :-) |
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| Esther | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 02:21 pm |
| Great update!!! Love that Buffy's got her memories back and that she's let herself be with Spike. And that Spuffy scene...gorgeous!! Can't wait for more! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 02:06 pm |
| Oh yeah great chappie |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 01:57 pm |
| AWw...that was so heartfelt. I loved it. Great work! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 12:07 pm |
Demonica - you are totally awesome. Brianna is a great character, Dawn is as spoiled as ever. The chapters with Cave Buffy are terrific - the way she's thinking about things that she doesn't really understand.
Thanks and I can't wait for more. |
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| romero | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 11:45 am |
| Thanks for the great update. |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 11:37 am |
| Beautiful chapter! Please more soon. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 09:36 am |
| good chappie! |
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| Irina | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 09:01 am |
| Loved the chapter! Great conversation between Spike and Buffy. Sweet ending! |
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| neo_trinityknot | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 08:55 am |
| Squee! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 08:50 am |
| Thank you for the update, I love this story. |
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| maryperk | Chapter 12 | 02/20/2006 08:02 am |
| Good chapter. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 11 | 05/15/2006 02:23 pm |
Really great way to remember - now Buffy is back to herself... and everyone knows how long it has been - growls at morons
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 11 | 03/25/2006 08:15 am |
| They give Buffy back her talking and such ... and it was all just a mistake? Holy crap. Yeah, I'd be peeved as all get out too. I knew I didn't like that Brianna chick. Have to watch out for her. Dawn being the Key is probably something Brianna knew and used. Getting a bad feeling. |
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| zanthinegirl | Chapter 11 | 02/18/2006 10:18 pm |
| This is fascinating; I don't think I've seen anything quite like this done before. Really enjoying it so far! |
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| romero | Chapter 11 | 02/14/2006 10:28 am |
| Yea, Buffy's back and speaking in full sentences..I loved the update. |
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| Lou | Chapter 11 | 02/14/2006 05:52 am |
| Is Dawn going to be the junkie witch? Excellent! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 11 | 02/14/2006 01:30 am |
| lol trust anya to provide comic relief.. lol glad that she is remembering and omg dawn?! this chick is into some weird business!!! |
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| vladt | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:51 pm |
| loads of info and more potential problems. great update, thanks. |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:39 pm |
| Oh...How did she get all her memories back. I'm all anxous for the answers. I can't wait for the next update. And what's going on with Dawn? Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. |
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| Irina | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:31 pm |
| Interesting revelations in this chapter. I feel so bad for poor Buffy right now. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic update! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:21 pm |
| She's baaack! She's right to be pissed off. The PTB are trying to make up for with a cryptic visit from Whistler and a book? More story please. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 06:49 pm |
I knew that girl was trouble! I wonder what will happen to that dimension now that Buffy isn't there anymore. I like that she is remembering and speaking much better. Very good chapter!
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 03:50 pm |
| ooh buffy has her brains back! Awesome chap. It's not hard for me to not like dawn, LOL |
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| Brittany | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 01:57 pm |
| AWW poor buffy!!! at least she can speak now!! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 01:52 pm |
| LMAO, damn this is getting better and better |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 12:09 pm |
| Love Anya's line at the end! Love the way this story is going. looking forward to the next chapter |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 11:23 am |
| OMG! I need more please! Evil ciffie! I love it. |
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| time of change | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 10:21 am |
>>“Well, at least she’s speaking in full sentences,” Anya said helpfully. >>
Best Anya ine ever. |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 10:07 am |
| Great update! Did Whistler's tap on her head give her back her memories? I can't wait to see what happens next now that Buffy is back! Please update soon! |
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| just sue | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:27 am |
Phew! Glad that Buffy has got her vocabulary back but there is plenty more to worry about!
Great update and looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:24 am |
| wonderful update! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 11 | 02/13/2006 08:02 am |
| Nice! Love it. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 10 | 05/15/2006 02:19 pm |
See i knew I didn;t like this Brianna chick - she is evil -- evil!
can't wait for more! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 10 | 03/25/2006 08:11 am |
| Famous last words ... Don't do it Dawn. Magic always have consequences. This Brianna ... I don't trust her either. Oh, and I love your story banner. |
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| Esther | Chapter 10 | 02/09/2006 12:55 am |
Cool beans!! Buffy remembers the 'Will be Done' spell...and it's after Spike goes down on one knee that she's happy. Squee!!
Oooh, this Brianna chick is making the spooky radar beep. Wonder what she's up to. |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 10 | 02/07/2006 12:04 am |
| I don't know about Brianna. I still say she's trouble. Great chapter though! I love the whole Scoobies re-enacting the 'Will Be Done', it was cute. Can't wait for the next update. |
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| Irina | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 09:47 pm |
| Good update! It's great Buffy's starting to remember things. Can't wait to find out what kind of badness Brianna is up to. |
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| vladt | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 06:53 pm |
| great update. can see disaster coming. thanks for the read. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 01:33 pm |
| WTF is this Brianna trying to do to Dawn? She'll be sorry if she seduces Dawn because then she'd have the world champion whiner for a girlfriend. More story please. |
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| neo_trinityknot | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 12:53 pm |
| Like I said...bad stranger |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 11:22 am |
| UHOH! I sence big time badness brewing here! Hope Dawn uses her head and walks away, RIGHT, like thats gonna happen! |
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| desertrose | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 11:07 am |
Still here, still reading and still enjoying.
Hey I thought those magic herbs Briana had was just pot. There is so gonna be trouble now. Silly Dawnie trouble magnet. |
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| icemink | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 09:12 am |
Sigh, hasn't Dawn learned from Willow not to play with magic?
I absolutely loved the Something Blue reanactment. It was perfect from Giles deadpan to "Grr! Argh!" |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 07:29 am |
| Uh oh, looks like Dawn is getting ready to cause some trouble! I am loving the story and can't wait to see what happens next! |
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| Lou | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 07:10 am |
| This Brianna seems a bit dodgy to me - bad news. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 06:37 am |
| i have this bad feeling about that girl... great update! |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 03:40 am |
| Hmm what is this Brianna girl up to? |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 01:38 am |
| um, is this brianna like gay or something? whats with the nose thing? lol awwww cookies, at first i thought it was when she told angel she was cookie dough but then i remembered.. lol great update!!! love it.. |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 01:25 am |
| AWESOME! MORE! Pweaze! |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 10 | 02/06/2006 01:06 am |
| DOH! Not the peer pressure thing. Love the bit about the cookies! This is so awesome! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 9 | 05/15/2006 02:16 pm |
| growls - bad Brianna - I just know you are going to be trouble! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 08:08 am |
| I wonder just who this Brianna really is. Sorry to hear about your surgery. Though I know that I'm really way behind on the times since it happened a long time ago. I still wanted to send you wishes that I hope you are doing better. Good chapter. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 9 | 02/02/2006 12:06 am |
| Good update. Sorry to hear about your surgery. I hope that you are okay now and on the mend. {huggles} |
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| pretty_in_fangs | Chapter 9 | 02/01/2006 10:58 pm |
Wow, I just stumbled across this one, and can I just say how happy I am that I did?
Of course, now I get the agony of waiting for updates. ::grin::
Wonderful story. |
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| Irina | Chapter 9 | 02/01/2006 09:33 pm |
| I i'm really enjoying this story so far. I was reading this fic on another site. I'm so glad I found it here. Great update! |
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| Carmie | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 09:23 pm |
| I'm so sorry that you had surgery, I hope everything went well. But thanks for the update, this is a fantastic story, and updates make me happy! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 05:27 pm |
oh my god. Vengence Demon alert
Damn good chappie |
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| neo_trinityknot | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 08:55 am |
| Dawn following strangers in Sunnyhell? Doesn't sound like a good equation to me. |
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| Lou | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 07:10 am |
| Brianna is awfully nosey for a teenage classmate isn't she? Hubble bubble toil and trouble? |
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| Stacy | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 07:07 am |
| Glad to see an update. Really cool story. Thanks for writing. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 06:17 am |
| very interstingn can't wait to see what happens sweetie... |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 03:53 am |
| Hmm so what is Dawn gonna get herself into now? Well guess I'll have to wait to find out |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 03:02 am |
| hmm.. this chick gives me the wiggins.. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 01:49 am |
| Awesome chapter!! I loved Xander's comment about them being out of jelly. That was priceless! Sooo glad you're feeling better. *hugs you* |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 12:59 am |
| OK, who (or what) is Brianna? I hope Buffy didn't run too far. Telemalta? |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 12:35 am |
| I don't know about this Brianna chit, she seems like she might be trouble. I'm really wondering what Telemata means. Great update, hope you're feeling better! |
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| icemink | Chapter 9 | 01/30/2006 12:30 am |
| Hmmmm. . . . I think Brianna is not what she appears. I was almsot expecting her to try and get a wish out of Dawn. Guess I'll have to wait to find out. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 8 | 05/15/2006 02:13 pm |
| Very nice chapter - I enjoyed the interaction between spike and bufyf and am quite vexed at Xan. I hope he gets put in his place |
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| icemink | Chapter 8 | 01/30/2006 12:25 am |
| Poor Buffy. At least her friends mean well. |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapter 8 | 01/24/2006 07:56 pm |
| De, I spent all last night reading this. I can't believe it took me to long to get to this story. It completely and utterly rocks! Ariel couldn't sing your praises enough about this fic and I'm so glad I got time to read it. I can't wait for the next update. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 8 | 01/24/2006 04:00 am |
| Very good chapter. I also didn't think it was boring either. I like to see how everyone is coping in their own ways. I just wanted to say that I think Anya is written very well. I can totally see her patting Buffy on the head and telling her good girl, like she was training a dog, you know?
Can't wait for the next update!!
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| megs | Chapter 8 | 01/07/2006 05:44 am |
| Wow De, this is a great story!
I'm so glad I've fianly caught up on it befor school starts all over ;>
I'd love to read a new chapy befor the 'out damn spot' day....but hey, if not, take your time getting better!
can't wait for more!!! keep it up! |
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| Lou | Chapter 8 | 12/30/2005 12:37 pm |
| Yup - Xander needs putting down. How kind of people to tell the author what she means!! This story is a treat to read. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 8 | 12/29/2005 09:14 am |
| ARGH! Xander is still a jerk and what's with Anya? I find it hard to believe she's being so stupid with Buffy. Thank the PTB that Tara and Spike are there to help Buffy come back. |
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| vladt | Chapter 8 | 12/29/2005 05:50 am |
| good update to a fascinating story. if you want to read boring , read the tedious and unimaginative reviews that talentless people, like me, write. |
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| bubble_blunder | Chapter 8 | 12/29/2005 05:05 am |
| Just got caught up on Chapters 7 and 8. I am so loving this story! Can't wait to read more.
-Lisa
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 8 | 12/29/2005 04:48 am |
| I like that every one has a task to help Buffy. Tara is so sweet with buffy! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
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| Confused Muse | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 08:58 pm |
| I'm fascinated, and thoroughly enjoying this fic. Plus - use whatever title you darn well like, babe |
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| Carmie | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 07:47 pm |
| Yay, update! I really love this story, and the update was fantastic. I love how you write Tara, I think you capture her really well. Much better then some authors. Keep up the good work! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 07:23 pm |
| Excellent update. Love this fic De, and you know I love your stories. Don't know who is being picky, but I do love this one. With how the story is unfolding I would say that the Longer is talking about how much longer she was in the other dimension. The Then Forever is talking about what comes after the Longer part ... as in First she had Longer and Then she has forever. If you were going with than, you wouldn't have needed the comma. I must admit that I had been slipping up and writing Longer Than Forever in my notes to keep track of updates, but it makes sense as is. {Grins} Your stories usually have long reaching effects. I look forward to the Then Forever part. {huggles} |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 05:56 pm |
| Well I like it, a story needs time to develop and not just be action and super drama. I like this new cave Buffy, it's fun to see how she reacts to people she new from before but have no idea of what or who they are. |
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| LindaM | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 03:55 pm |
| I liked it. Not boring at all. |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 03:16 pm |
| *waves hand eagerly* I got it! (re the title hoohah) Yay for punctuation! *insert plug for Riters R Us*
Had some catching up to do, but still enjoying this story. I hope the doctors get you all sorted out and up to par so updates will appear quickly. Thanks for writing it. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 12:36 pm |
| LMAO, very good chappie. I actualy like the plotty goodness and am wondering when Cave Buffy is gonna just throw Spike over her shoulder and drag him back to her place. |
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| sue | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 10:32 am |
| Well, I certainly didn't find that chappie boring. Found it interesting the different ways they were treating and communicating with Buffy. So looking forward to more when it comes. Thank you so much. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 09:40 am |
| I love this fic *sighs dreamily* I'm always so happy to see it updated. And not a boring chapter, btw. As you said, sometimes you just have to get a bit plotty. Sooo cannot wait to read more! |
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| Kat | Chapter 8 | 12/28/2005 06:15 am |
| I loved the Chapter. I didn't find it boring and I love that she wants spike there just as much as everyone else and that spike is treating her like a little kid. Silly people really dont know what they are doing. I was happy to see them stand up for spike too. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 7 | 05/15/2006 02:09 pm |
| oh very good question - why does Buffy have bite marks - can't wait to find out - somehow I already dislike Xander *growls* |
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| icemink | Chapter 7 | 01/30/2006 12:17 am |
| A very good questions. I'm assuming these aren't from the Master or Angel or Dracula since Spike would probably have alreayd seen them at some point. On to the next chapter. |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 7 | 12/23/2005 04:28 am |
| Fab chapter! This is definitely one of my fave fics. Can't see what you have in store for us next! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 7 | 12/23/2005 12:53 am |
| Damn good ficcie I think Buffy needs a spanking |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 7 | 12/23/2005 12:49 am |
| LMaO, Buffy is truly evil, but hey most women are |
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| Lou | Chapter 7 | 12/22/2005 11:54 pm |
| Love the Buffy POV - looking forward to more. |
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| Carmie | Chapter 7 | 12/22/2005 08:20 pm |
| Awesome! I love this story... loved how Anya "helped" lol. More please! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 7 | 12/22/2005 07:30 pm |
| Excellent update. Look forward to more! |
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| Ms Clawdia | Chapter 7 | 12/22/2005 02:46 pm |
| Really enjoying this, always eager for an update. Liked getting to 'hear' Buffy's POV. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 7 | 12/22/2005 07:57 am |
| I loved this chapter from Buffy's pov! I lvoe this fic, period. Thank you for updating again!! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 6 | 05/15/2006 02:06 pm |
| NOOOOOOOO ... no staking of the Spike... really enjoying this sweetie! |
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| icemink | Chapter 6 | 01/30/2006 12:08 am |
Okay, so I guess I was behind on this story. Great Scoobie interaction. You have all their different voices down great. I also love how now that Buffy's started talking she's remembering more and more.
Well off to the next chapter. |
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| Spike_lizard | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 08:35 pm |
| oh no you don't you so can not leave it there |
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| kat | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 08:08 pm |
| who what how. huh. how could you end there ahhhhhhhhhhh |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 06:57 pm |
| HOLY CRAP!!! You end the chapter there? Can we kill you now, De? |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 06:44 pm |
| GAH! evil, evil I say! what an awful place to leave it! need more! (It was a very lovely chapter aside from the potential dusting of spike though) |
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| jane | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 04:16 pm |
| Ah no you can't leave it there so not fair. I'll be nibbling my finger nails until the next update. |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 03:59 pm |
| Eeeep! Ha. And people say I write evil cliffhangars.
Excellent chapter, showing how in touch with the situation Spike is and how out of touch the Scoobies are. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 03:43 pm |
| I am really enjoying this story so far! That was a terrible cliffhanger! How could you? LOL! I know you wouldn't kill Spike. I was really hoping for Buffy to try to stake Xander to protect Spike. I think that her associating no soul with Xander first is very telling. Also, I hope Anya gets wise soon and dumps Xander on his butt! I have always hated the way he and Willow treated her. Keep up the good work, and I hope there is another chapter soon. |
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| sue | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 02:34 pm |
| Now that was plain mean to stop there! Do hope you intend to take away our misery soon. It was a great chappie and looking forward to more. Thanks. |
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| bubble_blunder | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 01:58 pm |
| Evil Evil Cliffie there. More soon please!
-Lisa |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 12:55 pm |
| Shit, you are bloody evil, you can't leave it here
Great chappie though |
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| Stephanie | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 12:04 pm |
| love it as always chica. Fab fab story! |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 11:35 am |
| More More More!!! |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 11:12 am |
| Good chapter, this is a very interesting story and cave buffy sure is fun to read about. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 08:31 am |
| ACK!! That's one of the meanest cliffies ever!! I thought she was going to stake Xander, something I would be happy to see. I hope you will give us the next chapter soon. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 6 | 12/08/2005 07:48 am |
| bad evil cliffie! Great chapter though. xander's so dense. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 5 | 05/15/2006 02:03 pm |
| giggles me like the kisses - does happy dance! |
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| icemink | Chapter 5 | 12/04/2005 04:54 am |
| Okay the last line made me laugh. I can't wait for more. |
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| bubble_blunder | Chapter 5 | 12/03/2005 11:27 am |
| Love it love it love it! More soon PLEASE!
-Lisa |
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter 5 | 12/02/2005 01:01 am |
| Cave!Buffy is so much fun to try to teach...I don't even want to know what potty-training is going to be like...great update, love this story... |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 5 | 12/01/2005 11:15 pm |
| LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! There is nothing to say that hasn't alreday been said, so just assume that I am repeating everything that has already been said! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 5 | 12/01/2005 11:00 pm |
| Totally love this one, De. The whole bathroom scene was cute. Love how you handled it all. The kiss at the end ... Can't wait to see what happens next. |
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| Steph | Chapter 5 | 12/01/2005 03:32 am |
| I love this fic One of the most original storylines i've seen in a long while. I really hope you add another chapter on soon |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 5 | 12/01/2005 01:09 am |
| LMaO, yep Spike, sometimes if we don't kiss them we would have to kill them
Great chappie |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 11:07 pm |
| Do you know how much I love this fic!?! I am going into my email now to read what little more I have of it. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 09:40 pm |
| Nice going Spike! They will have to teach her to talk again and show her that everything is not going to attack her or is something she should eat. This story is so much fun. |
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| Lou | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 09:33 pm |
| This is so sweet - especially how Spike is the one Buffy knows. Top Buffy antics too! |
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| Irene | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 06:58 pm |
| I am really loving this story. it's got a unquie plot line and i cannot wait for the next update. Keep writing. |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 06:10 pm |
| Great story! I've never read a feral from Hell Buffy fic before and love it! I can't wait for more. Funny and intriguing. |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 05:12 pm |
| Great chapter. Like this story very much. |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 04:57 pm |
| Good chapter, funny stuff happening with Cave Buffy. |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 03:20 pm |
| awww. Loved this chapter! Poor Tara though, being attacked by Buffy. The Toothbrush thing was funny! Looking forward to the next chapter |
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| Stephanie | Chapter 5 | 11/30/2005 03:15 pm |
| loved the story - so wonderful ... I love this ferel Buffy it is so completly wonderful - great view of what would happen if Buffy had really gone to a hell diminsion! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 4 | 05/15/2006 12:44 pm |
| Enjoying the story so far - it is really fun so far - I can't imagine how the scoobs will react! (Well I can but none of it good for them)! |
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| icemink | Chapter 4 | 12/04/2005 04:49 am |
| Great chapter. I love how Buffy's trying to provide for everyone, and how the most important thing she can think of is food. I also love Giles' line about Xander always having food. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 4 | 11/26/2005 06:27 am |
| Awesome story, De! I hope that Spike is able to try and explain to them that Buffy was just trying to take c are of them. She was sharing her kill ... her food to feed them. This was an awesome chapter. The back and forth of showing Buffy's POV and then everyone else's POV together was awesome! Look forward to more! |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 4 | 11/26/2005 06:23 am |
| Found this story just a few minutes ago, and couldn't stop reading it! WONDERFUL story!I like how you had the Scoobies whaching as Buffy's friend/pet was killed. They got to share in a piece of her LONG life there, and didn't even realize it. I can't wait to see where you take this story! GREAT JOB! |
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| Lori | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 08:03 pm |
| Love the new chapter. Such a great story so far. Thank you. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 07:51 pm |
| WOW!! This is such a good story! There are so many possibilities and I can hardly wait for you to give us more! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 04:06 pm |
| Oh shit, poor Spike lol, Buffy was just trying to feed her friends and family ?Great chappie |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 02:00 pm |
| I loved this story. It was really fab. I cannot wait to see what you are going to come up with next. HUGS ! So fab. |
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| Lou | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 12:43 pm |
| Brilliant idea and so well realised! I like Buffy's natural affinity with Spike. |
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| jane | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 07:57 am |
| I am so loving this story. |
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| Kat | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 06:37 am |
| Amazing chapter. WOW better and better as it goes on |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 03:29 am |
| Wow, this is REALLY good. I love both sides to the whole thing, it's great to know what Buffy is thinking. Love the reactions of the scoobies to the fyarl arm and the twinkie! I really did laugh out loud. Looking Forward to the next chapter! |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 4 | 11/25/2005 02:25 am |
| This is a fun story and I hope to get another chapter to read real soon. Like this "cave" buffy, she's fun. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 3 | 05/15/2006 12:40 pm |
| Really good chapter sweetie, I enjoyed it very much. I like Buffy not recognizing anyone, but still reconizing them. very lovely! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 3 | 11/11/2005 10:38 am |
| The name thing was adorable. I love how you are writing this one De. Absolutely love it! |
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| Sara M. | Chapter 3 | 11/10/2005 04:11 am |
| YAY! I love how Buffy is trying to get everyone name down. This is so different than whats out there. Great job, can't wait to see what happens next, somehow I don't think vamps or the demons Buffy comes up against is going to be a problem for her. |
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| Stacy | Chapter 3 | 11/09/2005 02:31 am |
| Wow! Interesting and unique! Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing. |
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| Confused Muse | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 08:21 pm |
| The return of Cave Slayer I like it.... |
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| maragret | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 06:07 pm |
| hey no complaints here about the title. i always assume the author had something up her/his sleeve especially with a title. love the image oh buffy trying to remember everyone. sure hope you let spike get treated better than in the show thenks margaret |
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| jane | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 05:47 pm |
| I love primitive Buffy. She's been fighting for her life for the past 147 years but still seems more at peace than her former self. I can't wait to see how everyone deals with the changes. |
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| Ariel Dawn | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 04:36 pm |
| Fab continuation! Love it to bits. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! |
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| murph | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 06:08 am |
| Very cool. Really looking forward to more updates. |
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| Jordy | Chapter 3 | 11/08/2005 05:03 am |
| Very, very interesting twist to the portal. Can't wait to see what she will and won't remember. Great update. Can't wait for more. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 2 | 05/15/2006 12:38 pm |
| WOW - really great chapter - I enjoyed the part about Buffy's pet - so sad she lost it and very ironic that they had seen buffy before but never realized it - go spike for recognizing her. Great update! |
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| icemink | Chapter 2 | 11/08/2005 09:02 am |
| That must be some mud if they can't even recognise her face. Off to read the next chapter. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 2 | 11/08/2005 12:30 am |
| Okay that was a way evil place to end it for us. Loved the Prologue through Chapter 2 that you have posted. Definitely look forward to more. It would seem that 147 years of that dimension went by for the 147 days that went by in ours. Very interesting. LIke it. |
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| Mary | Chapter 2 | 11/03/2005 03:17 am |
| Great beginning. I'm looking forward to more, curious as to how Buffy will readjust to her former world and the people that care about her. Um, should the title be 'Longer THAN Forever', rather than 'Longer THEN Forever'? Jes' askin'... :-) |
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| JamesMFan | Chapter 2 | 10/30/2005 02:32 am |
| Very interesting concept!
I like that she's all "primitive" now, and also totally old. Now, there'll be no more "Giles, you're too old to be singing songs about blue eyes and having orgasm friends" because she's older than him! Huzzah, triumph!
My reviews get kind of odd...
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| megs | Chapter 2 | 10/27/2005 09:43 pm |
| ohohoh!
more soo please!
love the idea of the story, and how it's turning out. can't wait for more! |
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| jane | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 11:57 pm |
| Yes that was great, really looking forward to the Scoobies reactions. I'm on the edge of my seat. Update soon. |
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| daisy | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 06:47 pm |
| hey de don't know how i missed the first chapter but awsome story. and yeah buffy remembers spike. can't wait to see what happens. more soon please. |
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| sue | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 02:45 pm |
| The girl's got good taste! And now she's older than Spike! Love this and looking forward to more. Thanks. |
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| maryperk | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 02:14 pm |
| Wow, cant wait for the next chappy. |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 01:34 pm |
| Awww - she recognized Spike first! Love it. More soon, please? |
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| Pin | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 08:42 am |
| Great start and I'm totally sucked into this story. I found the battle and death of Moyra quite sad, loved the fact that the SG can't recognize Buffy, and that Spike contributes so much and keeps everything going. Really looking forward to more. Thanks! |
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| Steph | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 08:05 am |
| Been checking back for an update on this every day since the first chapter I really hope you can get another update done very soon. Love the fic. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 07:27 am |
| Oh damn you with the evil cliffies! BAD!! Loving this fic in a huge way. Sooo cannot wait to read more!!! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 07:08 am |
| Cliffie!! The mud person is back! What will they do with her? I guess she will be a pretty good slayer now. More story please. |
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| Jeni | Chapter 2 | 10/17/2005 06:37 am |
| I'm loving the new fic so far! Can't wait to see where you take it! More please? soon? C'mon you know you love me enough! |
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| Athenewolfe | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 05/15/2006 10:20 am |
| This was a really lovely beginning to the story sweetie. I am looking forward to reading all the twists and turns of the fic. |
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| Spikez_tart | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 12/11/2005 01:32 am |
| I loved Mud Buffy. We need more ASAP. Please drop everything you're doing and get to work. |
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| romero | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 12/08/2005 08:13 am |
| I love primal Buffy and her wanting to take care of the Scoobies (that was a great scene where she cut off the arm and offered it to the gang). I really like this story and can't wait to read more. |
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| jane | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 12/01/2005 04:00 pm |
| Fantastic really really wanna read more. |
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| Cheryl | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 11/08/2005 01:15 pm |
| I like this story as well, but would you please change the name to "Longer THAN Forever"? (My daughter is a grammar nazi as well, wonder where she gets it? ;-) |
| Hi. Glad you like the story. I do know the difference between then and than as I'm quite the grammar person myself. The title is like that for a reason. You'll understand later. I know that you meant to be helpful in your suggestion, but perhaps next time you could e-mail the author if you think you discover an error as opposed to posting it in the reviews? Bad grammar drives me nuts, but in this case I did it on purpose. Hope that clears things up for you |
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| Chanel 5 | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 11/08/2005 09:40 am |
| Glad to see an update, I just love this fic. |
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| icemink | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 11/08/2005 08:56 am |
| Interesting start. I'm off to read the next part and see where this goes. |
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| spike_spetslayer | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 11/08/2005 07:07 am |
| Wow. that's all i can say. Wow. Can't wait for more. |
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| Chanel 5 | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/18/2005 03:37 pm |
| god, more please! more! |
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| jane | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/14/2005 08:35 pm |
| Really great start I hope to read more soon. |
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| Chanel 5 | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/11/2005 04:01 am |
| fantastic story start. |
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| Liz | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 07:50 pm |
| oh my god. hurry! hurry! update now! |
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| bloodshedbaby | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 04:59 pm |
| I reviewed on BSC, but I'm saying it again here. AWESOME!! Have me hooked but good on this one. Hoping next part will be up soon..... |
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| Jeni | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 04:26 pm |
| De--Great start! I need more please???? |
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| redwulf50 | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 12:49 pm |
| excellent start uhhhhm,,, where is the next chappie |
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| Steph | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 09:01 am |
| Wow. Great, original idea. I really can't wait to read more. I hope you update very very soon. |
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| MarzBar | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 07:22 am |
| Woohoo! This time Buffy really is in a hell dimension. How will she be when they bring her back? More story please. |
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| spike_spetslayer | Prologue/Chapter 1 | 10/10/2005 06:24 am |
| God, Demonica, that is just truly evil, to leave it like that. Really, great start, and I want more NOW!!! |
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