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| Sins of the Father by Laura Siri |
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| lOU | Ch. 21- Meddling Powers | 03/27/2006 08:26 am |
| Just caught up with this one - a top read! |
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| stephanie | Ch. 21- Meddling Powers | 02/27/2006 05:07 pm |
| your story is soooo good! I can't wait for more! |
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| Pam S | Ch. 21- Meddling Powers | 02/20/2006 05:08 am |
| Good... no Angelus. |
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| just sue | Ch. 21- Meddling Powers | 02/20/2006 03:55 am |
Yikes! I wondered vaguely about the soul issue but... Wonderful twist and, together with all the plans to get Bell out from W&H, a fantastic chapter.
Thanks ever so and looking forward to more. |
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| sirc | Ch. 20- Spiral | 02/19/2006 07:39 am |
great chapter
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| MarzBar | Ch. 20- Spiral | 02/14/2006 08:59 pm |
| Will Tara and Willow come to LA to help Bell? Will Buffy get a Scooby gang? More story please. |
::Taps her fingers together evilly:: Oh, we're getting there.  Thanks for reading, Marzbar... |
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| spikeskat | Ch. 20- Spiral | 02/14/2006 08:22 pm |
| No, this isn't me reading your story. Nope. *shakes head* I'm actually writing my paper. *nods* Gah! Love this and am waiting *cough*impatiently*cough* for the next part. Quit teasing already! ^_^ |
| Paper? What paper? ::whistles:: I don't see no paper. But thank you for reading! (And I'm almost done with the next chapter of Giftless, honest.) |
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| just sue | Ch. 20- Spiral | 02/14/2006 03:54 pm |
Fantabulous chapter! Everything fit together hand in glove. Wonderful flow and oodles of plot. Yummy stuff, hun.
Can't help myself - more soon please. |
| Thanks Sue! I sometimes feel like I'm over doing it, but its all going to come together, I swear! ;) |
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| Abbyland | Ch. 19: Bell's Theorem | 02/13/2006 03:51 pm |
I've been following this fic for a while and I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying it. This Buffy and Spike are awesome! I'm looking forward to how it all comes together.
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| Thank you! I try... And it is all coming together, slowly but surely... |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 19: Bell's Theorem | 02/12/2006 09:19 pm |
| That was an interesting chapter! Will this poor captive girl be able to help Buffy? Mysterious mind-talking there. More story please. |
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| just sue | Ch. 19: Bell's Theorem | 02/12/2006 08:23 am |
Delicious! I love the layers of plot that you constantly thread into this - almost as much as I appreciate the speedy update! LOL
Will be keeping eyes open for more of this - I'm so hooked. Thanks ever so. |
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| sirc | Ch. 19: Bell's Theorem | 02/12/2006 04:49 am |
| great chapters |
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| just sue | Ch. 18: Split Loyalties | 02/10/2006 03:49 pm |
Yummy! That was a very pheromone (Lord! I hope I spelt that right!) driven chapter. the more I read of this the more I feel for Buffy in such a conflicted life.
Do hope to read more soon. Thanks ever so. |
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| just sue | Ch. 18: Split Loyalties | 02/10/2006 03:49 pm |
Yummy! That was a very pheromone (Lord! I hope I spelt that right!) driven chapter. the more I read of this the more I feel for Buffy in such a conflicted life.
Do hope to read more soon. Thanks ever so. |
| Conflicted, but she will figure herself out, don't worry. Thanks for reading! |
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| kim | Ch. 18: Split Loyalties | 02/10/2006 03:00 pm |
| Oh, don't let him go all Angelus on her. Cordy's good for him. She's never been afraid to slap him upside the head when he's being an idiot, or taking himself too seriously. |
| We'll see... I have a plan. ;) Don't worry. I think Angel and Cordy are good for each other. And thanks for reading! |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 18: Split Loyalties | 02/10/2006 02:23 pm |
| Hmmmm! Are we going to have Angelus / Cordelia smut? And I do mean Angelus. Will Buffy be able to handle the Wolfram & Hart meeting? More story please. |
| Oh, it'll be good, don't worry. Not quite so predictable, but fun. Thanks for reading. |
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| romero | Chapter 17- Coming to Terms | 02/08/2006 03:55 pm |
| I loved the part where you wrote that Spike fell in love with Buffy when she killed the Kareen demon. Great update. |
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| just sue | Chapter 17- Coming to Terms | 02/08/2006 03:14 am |
Cracking chapter. Loads of lovely plot to feed upon with that delicious undertone of debauchery. Yummy.
Look forward to more when it appears - will always be reading whenever. Thanks ever so. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 17- Coming to Terms | 02/08/2006 02:32 am |
| Thanks for the great chapter! Buffy's status in her home is so precarious. Will Cordelia help Angelus lose his soul? Does he have one? More story sooner please. |
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| Priscilla | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/04/2006 05:09 pm |
| Oh. My. God. Fuck that! Why the hell should Spike get away with that?! That asshole! He practically raped her! I mean, sure, she enjoyed it but did he have to be such as ass about it?!?! She's going through something and learning stuff about her past and here's Spike being a dick because she decided to freeze him so she could be alone for a while. Please, oh PLEASE let Buffy extract some vengence on him in the next chapter, please?!?! (Wow, I kinda sounded like Anya a bit there, lol). Don't get me wrong, I'm all for the Spuffy lovin' and always have been. But when Spike treats her like that, thats taking it too far. Lol, wow I can rant and rave with the best of 'em. Sorry if I sound like a bitch, I just hate it when Buffy or women in general are demened in any way. Just know that I love your fic, except for the whole Spike-being-an-asshole-thing. |
Ok, you'll see in the next chapter that its not quite as bad as I made it out to be... and Spike kinda had a point in doing what he did. The world Buffy lives in consists of predators and prey, and Spike was trying to remind Buffy that acting on emotion makes you prey. Also, as in the show, SOF Buffy is struggling with her darker side and trying to sort out what she is and what she isn't. She was raised by a monster, and I kind of feel like Spike was reminding her that she has a long way to go to becoming a REAL monster. And that she's a lot closer to redemption than she thinks.
But thank you for reading Priscilla... I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. And don't worry, Spike's still gonna get messed with... |
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| Jenny | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/03/2006 04:32 pm |
| Believe me when I say I am definitly still following this story. I check all the time to see if you've updated it. I love it. This chapter was no exception. Can't wait for more! |
| I've set up a new writing schedule. Mondays and Fridays. So I will be posting those days (or sooner). Thanks for reading! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/03/2006 02:09 pm |
| Woohoo! Way to go Spike! It seems to be time for her to come to grips with her slayer status. Spike and Giles need to help her find a plan to stay safe from her father. Thanks for coming back to this story. |
| MarzBar, you're still there! Thanks for keeping with me... am working on having a set writing schedule of Mon and Fri, and I'm chaining myself to it this time, dammit!! |
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| sirc | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/03/2006 09:39 am |
| great chapter |
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| just_sue | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/03/2006 03:53 am |
So happy to get more of this fascinating story. The sex weren't bad either! LOL
Looking forward to the 'coming soon' bit - hope it will.
Thanks so much. |
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| romero | Chapter 16: Power Play | 02/03/2006 12:36 am |
| I'm so glad to read your update. This is such a good story. Can't wait to read more. |
| thank you! |
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| Confused Muse | Ch. 15- Graveyard Shift | 12/29/2005 07:48 pm |
| Still very much with you here... Nice contrast between scared little rich girl and kick-ass hard case for Buffy |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 15- Graveyard Shift | 12/29/2005 09:37 am |
| Will Spike get to Buffy in time to help her with the demons? Can he convince her to come back with him and talk to Giles? |
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| ZoeGrace | Ch. 14- Uncertain Days | 12/14/2005 03:38 am |
| I really like this story. It's very different. Can't wait for more. |
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| Confused Muse | Ch. 14- Uncertain Days | 12/14/2005 12:44 am |
| Lies, damned lies, and families. The tension's definitely mounting, along with the angst. I'm still reading! |
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| Trish | Ch. 14- Uncertain Days | 12/13/2005 10:32 am |
| Yay! You're back. I was afraid this story had gone deadfile. |
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| Chanel 5 | Ch. 14- Uncertain Days | 12/13/2005 09:25 am |
| great chapter. more questions then answers, more please! |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 14- Uncertain Days | 12/13/2005 08:32 am |
| Yikes! Did Buffy just start to believe her mother when she saw Giles? I hope the spell breaks by itself and Spike and Giles are not stuck there for too long. More story soon please. |
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| PIn | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 02/03/2006 08:44 am |
I'm just catching up on this story, trying to read it in one sitting - which is like consuming a rich dessert! I love this line - which says so much -
“We all have decisions to make, Watcher,” he said finally. “To break, be broken. All of us are weak, brittle like somewhere. Love’s the place where I choose to crack.”
Excellent imagery! I'm off to read more , I have three more chapters to go so far. THanks! |
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| romero | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 11/13/2005 07:54 pm |
| That's cruel!! I have to have more of your story. Please update soon. |
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| Chanel 5 | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 11/13/2005 12:33 am |
| Oh my god - what? Don't leave us hanging!!! |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 11/12/2005 07:06 pm |
| Still here and waiting for more! That was a short chapter and ended with a cliffie. |
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| spikeskat | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 11/12/2005 05:51 pm |
OMG! You little tease!  Geez! And they call ME bad! I'd ask (read: beg) for more, but I know you're off soon...so have fun! ^_^ |
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| Confused Muse | Ch. 13- Prophecy and a Bottle | 11/12/2005 04:46 pm |
| And now for the training montage...? Kidding. Loved the trip down memory lane, and Spike's confessional gave me shivers.
Please keep going! |
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| Confused Muse | Ch. 12- The Rising Tides of Fate | 11/10/2005 07:02 pm |
| Oooh, loving this dark dastardly plot. And the smut was scrumptious too *cheer* |
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| Chanel 5 | Ch. 12- The Rising Tides of Fate | 11/10/2005 11:50 am |
| Great update! |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 12- The Rising Tides of Fate | 11/09/2005 11:29 pm |
| OMG! What is the filthy Hank going to make her do for W&H? Spike and Giles have their work cut out for them if they're to protect Buffy from Hank. Love this story and hope you give us more soon. |
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| Franchesca | Ch. 12- The Rising Tides of Fate | 11/09/2005 05:25 pm |
| I love it... and you're especially good at the NC17 parts. I like the touch at the end with Giles' glasses being destroyed. I like him being led around LA by William the Bloody... funny. |
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| Franchesca | Ch. 11- Dark Paradise | 10/20/2005 10:31 pm |
| Just read this up to date and I love it. Very fast paced and I like the relationship between Buffy and Spike. I even like the realism of Bufyf wanting her father's validation even though he's such an evil man. |
| Thanks for reading! Everybody starts out wanting parental love... Buffy's just got to figure out other people want and need her. ::cough:: spike ::cough:: |
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| jane | Ch. 11- Dark Paradise | 10/20/2005 11:33 am |
| This is a good story lots of action and a truly dastardly villain. More please. |
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| Confused Muse | Ch. 10- Intervention | 10/16/2005 11:56 am |
| Extremely original, and very well written. And yes, you're evil, but evil people get to have more fun *wink* |
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| RJ | Ch. 10- Intervention | 10/15/2005 03:45 pm |
| Best totally AU I've read in a while! Very well woven story. |
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| Kat | Ch. 10- Intervention | 10/15/2005 02:52 pm |
| Oh! You weren't kidding about the cliffy! Gah... Like a page out of my book. ^_^ I love how this is unfolding, and good to see Angel getting in the thick of things... |
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| MarzBar | Ch. 9- From Shadows to Dazzle | 10/15/2005 01:42 am |
| Yikes! Fascinating story! A slayer with magic powers and an evil father. What's Giles going to do that won't kill him? How will Spike protect her from her father and the council? More story please. |
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| Tam | Ch. 9- From Shadows to Dazzle | 10/14/2005 11:04 am |
excellent read so far. i really like the different twists you've placed on each character. can't wait for more  |
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| sirc | Ch. 1- Twisted | 02/03/2006 08:12 am |
| great chapter |
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| Izzy | Ch. 1- Twisted | 01/07/2006 12:30 am |
| This really, an interesting take on the spuffyverse, good job! I'll be looking out for the next chapter! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Ch. 1- Twisted | 10/20/2005 06:01 pm |
| Dear GAWD, that was HOT!!!!!! And what exactly is evil Daddy Dearest up to? Bad Hank! I think the old man needs a spanking of the unfun kind. |
| Thanks! And don't worry, Hank will get what's coming to him... eventually. |
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| romero | Ch. 1- Twisted | 10/15/2005 10:37 pm |
| You are evil to leave us there!!! This is a great story and I really like your original story line. Please don't make us wait for an update. |
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| spike_spetslayer | Ch. 1- Twisted | 10/15/2005 04:11 pm |
| Aww, you left us there? what kind of sadist are you? Gimme gimme gimme more! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Ch. 1- Twisted | 10/15/2005 01:39 pm |
| Oh yeah. Evil cliffie. How could you?! ***sniffle*** Just when things were getting really, really good, you stopped! **pout** Want more....please?
Seriously though, I like this. It's a very unusual twist, unique. Can't wait to see what happens next. *cough*smut*cough*.
Hope you update soon, dear. |
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