Future Childe by Ariel Dawn
 
AthenewolfeReunion02/19/2006 10:47 am
ahhhhhh freaking amazing ending! I love this story and yes I know I read it before but I forgot how much I enjoyed it! Hppy sigh!
Thanks!
 
MarzBarReunion10/22/2005 08:11 pm
What a great story. I'm off to find Present Childe.
Thanks!
 
tamibrandtReunion09/23/2005 12:34 pm
I really liked this story. I know I didn't leave feedback on every chapter, but I had read the full length on the old version of BSV.
Thanks for the review Tami
 
AthenewolfeNot the same without him02/19/2006 10:46 am
ohhhh great update
Thanks!
 
AthenewolfeFriends02/19/2006 10:43 am
giggles love the scene with willow in the end - happy sigh!
Thanks!
 
AthenewolfeMy Summer as a Pet02/19/2006 10:41 am
nice dream - love this story!
thanks!
 
AthenewolfeThe Lady’s with Me02/19/2006 10:37 am
ahhh the chapter was so sweet --- hehe got dru got buffy what more does he need hehe
Glad you like
 
AthenewolfeThe Deal02/19/2006 10:34 am
excellant chapter!
Thanks
 
AthenewolfeMeaningful conversations at the beach02/19/2006 10:31 am
Awesome chappue... I love the claioming nice and sexy!
Thanks
 
AthenewolfeHaunting you02/19/2006 10:29 am
NOOOOOO....... Like Spike can't understand meaningless sex
Wah!
Well if your girlfriend had sex with Angel how would you feel?
 
AthenewolfeTea with Grandmummy02/19/2006 10:24 am
wonderful wonderful wonderful ! Finally Dru was wonderfully sweet and told Buffy that he was alive. Happy happy sigh!
Glad you like
 
MarzBarTea with Grandmummy09/21/2005 09:34 pm
Good story; lots of smut and angst. Are you writing Present Childe?
Thanks! and yep!
 
MeraTea with Grandmummy09/21/2005 09:33 pm
Great story can't wait to read the sequel.
Thanks!
 
3988AkashaTea with Grandmummy09/21/2005 09:33 pm
The sequel can't come soon enough. I love the story. It had the right amount of angst and love and a bittersweet ending. Yay for you and you're amazing writing. You have some of the best smut I've ever read. Keep it up.
Thanks!
 
CEWCEWTea with Grandmummy09/21/2005 09:32 pm
So good, good, good! Sequel, Sequel, please, please, please! Luv you forever I will, I will!
lol, ok ok
 
AislingTea with Grandmummy09/21/2005 09:32 pm
j'adore le fiction!! sequal soon LOL
thanks!
 
AthenewolfeFriends Tell02/19/2006 10:20 am
poor buffy - I can;t believe no one has bothered to tell her that spike is alive... I wonder if we can skin angel alive?
oooh I like that idea
 
BurnzFriends Tell09/21/2005 09:31 pm
That a girl! Yay a vamp Buffy! I'm glad you didn't make Spike wimp out. I really enjoyed your fic.
Thanks!
 
ElizabethFriends Tell09/21/2005 09:31 pm
Well...I have noticed that I haven't actually review thus far, but wow, I've followed this story beginning to end and I LOVE it. It has the perfect amount of angst and drama and everything. I cannot wait to read the sequel, it's going to be great. Liz
Thanks!
 
pxt3000Friends Tell09/21/2005 09:30 pm
SEQUEL!? yess! luv it!
Thanks!
 
BrittanyFriends Tell09/21/2005 09:30 pm
Awwww this is like one of my all time favorite storys!!!!!!!!! cant WAITE for the sequel!!!!
Thanks!
 
RhondaFriends Tell09/21/2005 09:30 pm
WOW what a way to end this great story. Can't wait for your sequel.
Thanks!
 
AthenewolfeBig Mistake02/19/2006 10:16 am
LMAO - Wow I loved that chapter - I know Spike will throw a fit but damn that was funny - Angel trying to play mind games with her but she has had greatsex so knows she was the one who was dissapointed! I loved it!
Ya I liked writing that part!
 
DKBig Mistake09/21/2005 09:29 pm
Excellent story, thank you for such a quiet and meaningful ending. Looking forward to the sequel.
Thanks!
 
redwulf50Big Mistake09/21/2005 09:29 pm
excellent fic
Thanks!
 
LyndaBig Mistake09/21/2005 09:28 pm
Now I am confused. First she wanted to be a vampire and be with Spike--who is a master vampire. Now she doesn't and she is all alone. Poor Buffy, poor Spike.(Dru left so fast. Thank God).
I think Buffy's confused too...
 
BrittanyBig Mistake09/21/2005 09:28 pm
AWWWWW *tear* they got to get back together!!!!!!!!!!
Yay!
 
AislingBig Mistake09/21/2005 09:27 pm
Ohhh Poor Spike and Buffy... stop killing for her then damn it! more soon huni i luved the update... :'(
Thanks
 
AthenewolfeGrieving02/19/2006 10:11 am
poor buffy - I hope she finds out the truth soon - she is so hurt by Spike's "death" - great ficcie!
Thanks!
 
AislingGrieving09/21/2005 09:27 pm
nice updates huni.. more soon cant wait to see what the 3 of them get up to cya xx
Thanks
 
LynsGrieving09/21/2005 09:26 pm
Ok, my last review probably makes no sense! The page didn't load fully so that was a review for up to chapter... 12... i think. Anyways, off to read the rest! lol
lol
 
LynsGrieving09/21/2005 09:26 pm
Aww, poor buffy!! Love this story, just read all of ti in one go, can't wait till the next update
Thanks!
 
3988AkashaGrieving09/21/2005 09:25 pm
Awesome re-write of Becomming! I love how Spike saves Buffy! Can't wait to see where Spike takes Dru and Buffy, and when he decides to turn her. Update Soon!
Thanks!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Grieving09/21/2005 09:25 pm
Nice different way to end Becoming. Joyce really went even freakier in this one. Nice writing. Since I see a TBC, I'm glad to see that we are going to keep going with this story. I look forward to seeing where you take them and what happens when Dru wakes, up, etc. Look forward to more.
Thanks
 
AthenewolfeYou’re who?02/19/2006 10:08 am
that was so horrible (what Kendra did) Can I kill her - just a little bit - *sniff* so sad ... I hope she discovers he is alive soon!
lol, kill her a little bit? Is that even possible?
 
joyful_dayzYou’re who?09/21/2005 09:24 pm
great chap! I can so see Spike getting mad because Buffy shagged Angel, but I'm wondering why Buffy didn't call him on not telling her he was still undusty. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
Thanks!
 
AislingYou’re who?09/21/2005 09:23 pm
more soon cya x
Thanks
 
BurnzYou’re who?09/21/2005 09:22 pm
Dang! Our boy is being quite the prat isn't he? Hopefully he will shake it off and get some sense. Good chapter.
Thanks
 
StephanieYou’re who?09/21/2005 09:22 pm
great story - can;t belive that spike is being so strange! How mean of him! Loved the update and cannot wait for more. Post soon! This story is fab!
Thanks!
 
TashaYou’re who?09/21/2005 09:21 pm
You can't leave it there. I can't believe Spike acted like that, she was grieving. Oh well, it will all end well right?...Right?
Absolutely
 
AthenewolfeSo what is the relationship beverage of choice then?02/19/2006 10:04 am
lol i love the last line in this chapter so much fun *giggles* poor Buffy she is Spike's dirty little secret wha a strange role reversal! I really enjoy this ficcie!
Thanks!
 
~*~Tasha~*~So what is the relationship beverage of choice then?09/21/2005 09:16 pm
Oh noooooo! Don't leave Spike! Buffy thought he was dead, and she .... oh man this sucks. I read this here first, instead of SR. So, I'm reviewing here. I hope Spike and Buffy get things straight soon. She thought he was dead. Even then she didn't have sex with Angel because she loved him. Please forgive her Spike. Please understand. She isn't like Dru. She loves you, and only you. Look forward to another update, hopefully soon.
So Glad you like!
 
Superstes DiligoSo what is the relationship beverage of choice then?09/21/2005 09:16 pm
sorry forgot to say something i wanted to say...: Love the Buffy/Dru interaction! it's sweet!
Awww, thanks!
 
Superstes DiligoSo what is the relationship beverage of choice then?09/21/2005 09:15 pm
Aww! look at what you did! you made me all weepy! *AGAIN* still loving the story though... keep it up!
Thanks!
 
AislingSo what is the relationship beverage of choice then?09/21/2005 09:13 pm
oooh more! angelus is a jerk! she does not lov you.. move on!! in ur face more soon cya xxx
lol, great review!
 
StephanieSo what is the relationship beverage of choice then?09/21/2005 09:13 pm
WOW!!! That was a really good story. I cannot wait for more. I love how you handled the whole Angel/Buffy scene - I know it must have been traumatic to write but you did a very good job. I love Buffy telling Angel how bad he was it was priceless. I think you have a great portrayal of Dru as well. very fab story!
Thanks so much!
 
AthenewolfeEveryone Lies02/19/2006 09:59 am
LOL - Buffy is so funny... Angel is an ass... sigh is it to late to start beggging for Angel dustage> LOL - greact ficcie sweetie!
Angel dustage is not in the cards for this fic, sadly. Sorry
 
3988AkashaEveryone Lies09/21/2005 09:12 pm
Awesome updates! I understand the Angel thing...does Spike know...about the sex? That will be so exciting to see what happens. I am still lovin' this story!
So glad you like!
 
Superstes DiligoEveryone Lies09/21/2005 09:12 pm
Great new chapters! u're awesome!
Thanks
 
TashaEveryone Lies09/21/2005 09:11 pm
Great new chapter, I love this story. Sad though, I can't wait for more. Gimme, gimme, gimme.
Glad you like!
 
AislingEveryone Lies09/21/2005 09:10 pm
oooh... more soon cant wait huni!
Thanks
 
3988AkashaEveryone Lies09/21/2005 09:10 pm
Another great chapter! I totally love this story. Yay for making Angel not a complete idiot!
Thanks!
 
AthenewolfeSecrets and Lies02/19/2006 09:53 am
happy sigh - want a sweet chaptr - cant wait to read everyone's reactions to the thrall!
Thanks Steph!
 
BurnzSecrets and Lies09/21/2005 09:09 pm
The longing and the grief...will our heroine ever be united with her love??? Is Angel holding out on our girl with regard to her past beau? Ah the questions. I anxiously await your next update
glad you like
 
LindaSecrets and Lies09/21/2005 09:08 pm
Neat chapter.. luv it!
Thanks
 
AislingSecrets and Lies09/21/2005 09:08 pm
luv it huni!! bad Kendra, i was hoping no one wud hit Spike with that thingy. LOL more soon xxx
lol, yep Poor Spike's doomed to repeated wheelchair time
 
BurnzSecrets and Lies09/21/2005 09:07 pm
Nice job of weaving in the episodes and giving them a new twist!
Thanks!
 
redwulf50Secrets and Lies09/21/2005 09:07 pm
greta chappie
Thanks Wulfie!
 
AthenewolfeNever try to eat your lover’s friends02/19/2006 09:47 am
Wonderful story - I wonder who is watching *grin* does that make it performance art?
lol, performance art? lol
 
TashaNever try to eat your lover’s friends09/21/2005 09:06 pm
Great new chapter, can't wait for Buffy's turn. Naughty Dru!!
Thanks Tasha!
 
3988AkashaNever try to eat your lover’s friends09/21/2005 09:06 pm
Great chapter. I love how Dru is playing with Buffy it is so cute (in a wierd vamp way)!
Glad you like!
 
AislingNever try to eat your lover’s friends09/21/2005 09:05 pm
LOL poor Buffy, 7 to 7-oh-5 am is now occupied... more soon huni xx
Thanks for the review!
 
redwulf50Never try to eat your lover’s friends09/21/2005 09:04 pm
Damn, can we just stake Angel now and get it freakin over with???
LOL, oh Wulfie...
 
Superstes DiligoNever try to eat your lover’s friends09/21/2005 09:04 pm
Love this chap! Don't like the thral thing much though... But i just know it'll go on as a fantastic story
Thanks!
 
AthenewolfePretending School’s Hard02/19/2006 09:44 am
I absolutly adore this chapter - excellant - the dream was fantastic - lol
Thanks!
 
TashaPretending School’s Hard09/21/2005 09:03 pm
Great new chapter, can't wait for some more Spuffy loving.
Thanks Tasha!
 
3988AkashaPretending School’s Hard09/21/2005 09:02 pm
This is so great. I love this story. It is a fresh idea. I can't wait to see if Spike really turns Buffy! Maybe Buffy really is under a thrall....maybe not. So exciting.
Thanks for the review! Glad you like!
 
romeroPretending School’s Hard09/21/2005 09:02 pm
This is a great story and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks
Thank you!
 
KattiePretending School’s Hard09/21/2005 09:01 pm
Amazing.. i luv it.
Thanks
 
MilvaPretending School’s Hard09/21/2005 09:00 pm
I realy enjoyed reading your fic.Hope you update soon-like every day?!
lol, thanks
 
AthenewolfeMaking up your mind02/19/2006 09:24 am
What a wonderful first chapter of this story. I love how he found a pre-slayer Buffy but wants to allow her to grow up a bit before he turns her... Happy sigh...
Thanks Steph!
 
TashaMaking up your mind09/21/2005 08:59 pm
Wow, this is a fantastic piece of fiction. I've just read if from beginning to what you have so far. I can't wait for a new installment, I hope you update this regularly from now on. Keep up the great work.
thanks
 
lilmamadayMaking up your mind09/21/2005 08:56 pm
I am so glad to see your story here at the Bloodshedverse! I have been following it at SR and I love it! Please update soon!
Thanks!
 
Superstes DiligoMaking up your mind09/21/2005 08:53 pm
don't mind the long chapters! love the story! keep it up!
Thanks!
 
redwulf50Making up your mind09/21/2005 08:50 pm
damn good chappie, I realy enjoyed this fic
Thanks wulfie
 
AislingMaking up your mind09/21/2005 08:49 pm
LUV IT!!
Thanks!