Underneath This Smile by lovesbitca37
 
jl1980Parts 16 - 2005/24/2006 11:56 pm
very sweet and sad...loved your re-write of the bathroom scene..very well done, the whole way through
 
CutieSaiyajinParts 16 - 2001/06/2006 07:10 am
Very well written fic, and I loved the ending. Well done.
 
bubble_blunderParts 16 - 2011/10/2005 10:40 pm
Just re-read this story, and wanted to let you know how much I liked it. You took a really dark subject and explored it in a way that still let the light back in. -Lisa
Thank you, that means a lot to me. This fic really made me nervous! Thanks
 
MarzBarParts 16 - 2011/01/2005 01:05 am
Nice to see that they won't be wasting any more time with Buffy being a blockhead.
 
jl1980Parts 11 - 1505/24/2006 11:48 pm
uh-oh...ew...not riley i hope buffy doesn't freak out over it
 
jl1980Parts 6 - 1005/24/2006 07:59 am
this is genuinely scary because it's so real...you make my heart ache and sob for buffy, she's hurting so bad...and for spike, because he genuinely loves her, but doesn't know how to help her...and strangely, most of all for poor little dawnie...so lost, without her mom or her sister...beautiful sad story will read more later
 
jl1980Parts 1 - 505/24/2006 07:51 am
oh how very sad, depressing even...but beautifully written with a very real grasp of these sorts of issues...i am captivated...reading on now