Come Back to Me by SpikesDeb
 
~*~Tasha~*~Unexpected07/15/2006 08:46 pm
Oh man ... what a place to leave it. I hope that your muse feels inspired to continue this one. I still love reading it, and I am trying to catch up on the BSV stories. Awesome chapter. I wonder why Cordy is there, and why Dru is lying on the couch. I wonder about human Spike. So many questions. I look forward to the answers.
 
B_MacUnexpected06/24/2006 05:19 pm
Love it. Love it! Love it! Especially Spike going back in time.
Keep those chappies coming.

B
 
CewcewUnexpected06/05/2006 09:13 pm
lol, to bizzy laphing to reply. I can just see Cordelia's face! lmao.
more soon please.
 
vladtUnexpected06/05/2006 03:44 pm
excellent read. gotta love dru. thanks for the read.
 
pfeifferpackUnexpected06/04/2006 12:01 pm
Now THAT was an unexpected ending to the chapter *G*.

Love Willow starting to see what Spike always has, there is not much difference between Angel and Angelus at all.

I am dying to find out the Powers real plan here. I agree with Willow that their insistance upon Angel as their champion is (and was on the show) crazy! He was convenient at best.

Kathleen
 
JackofspikesUnexpected06/04/2006 09:33 am
I can't tell you how much I love this story. Thank you for updating
 
RobynUnexpected06/04/2006 06:52 am
I really enjoyed Spike’s reaction to being human and around all his favorite foods. And now Cordy’s there, I can’t wait to find out why. Thank you for the update, I really enjoyed it.
 
Randi GilesUnexpected06/04/2006 01:07 am
What the Duce? ...Cordy's a sneaky one
 
KatUnexpected06/03/2006 11:48 pm
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm good chapter. different endinging.
 
KarynUnexpected06/03/2006 09:41 pm
awesome update! eck! wonder what cordy's doing there? poor buffy, never gets a break!
 
Spikes Slayer2Unexpected06/03/2006 08:52 pm
what the?
 
UncagedMuseUnexpected06/03/2006 07:00 pm
I hope that next chap is with your beta now. LOL I read this one when you put it up at your site. IT'S AMAZING AND BRILLIANT!
 
kimUnexpected06/03/2006 06:38 pm
Eh? Well, isn't that a cliffie of an ending.

I'm guessing this actually isn't about Angel, at all, but about Spike. The final test to elevate him to favorite of the Powers. Simply because Willow is right about Angel - he doesn't make the right choices in the big moments, nor for the right reasons.

Loved how you wrote Spike's memories of home, the relishment in cherished smells and sounds, and tastes.

Is Dru completely still because the moment's been paused, so Cordy can talk to Spike?
 
jl1980Unexpected06/03/2006 06:21 pm
whoa! how did *that* happen? excellent update, very much enjoyed it...i have to like dru, even though i want to hate her..you write her very well
 
redwulf50Unexpected06/03/2006 06:01 pm
I already reasd this one *whines*

Is good but I read it already
 
~*~Tasha~*~Surprises03/29/2006 01:46 am
Wow. Another perfect chapter. This is so getting to me with each one I read or reread. {shivers} I wonder what is going to happen with Spike and Dru. Dang ... {biting her nails}
 
Harry 4EyesSurprises03/27/2006 10:24 am
Why do I get the feeling that these tests were designed for Spike in the first place and the PTB are using Angel as an excuse and had set this up from the beginning to test Spike and see if he is the true champion? They are testing him to see if he would do the right thing no matter what his personal preference, like Buffy has had to do over the years.

hmmm....well that's my view might change next update ;)
Well loving this fic.
Update soon
Harry
 
pretty_in_fangsSurprises03/26/2006 12:03 pm
Hmmm... I can't wait to see what the next trial really involves.
 
UncagedMuseSurprises03/25/2006 11:57 pm
Still in love with this fic! Can't wait to see what happens next.
 
MarzBarSurprises03/25/2006 08:52 pm
OMG! Will he have to dust her to pass or not? That is a truly evil cliffie and I hope you're happy with your torture of your fans.

I think I had been reviewing this elsewhere but I'm happy to see it here. This is a great story and I pray for more soon.
 
vladtSurprises03/25/2006 07:54 pm
very good. thanks for the excellent read and the evil cliffhanger.
 
RobynSurprises03/25/2006 07:54 pm
Another evil cliff-hanger, you are so good at those. I loved your first trial, so easy and yet with where his mind was he could have failed. I am looking forward to what other trials are in store for him and what form they take. Thanks for the great chapter.
 
PyroChildeSurprises03/25/2006 07:20 pm
Hmmm, this should prove interesting. Dru always makes things interesting.
 
Spikes Slayer2Surprises03/25/2006 07:08 pm
*gasp* oh no.. i bet he has yo stake her or something..
 
lilmamadaySurprises03/25/2006 05:41 pm
I love how Buffy stood up to Angel and didn't let his words get him down and that she let Spike know that he was her man and that she was 100% behind him! The first trial seemed easy enough but it looks like the 2nd trial will be a doozy! Nothing is ever easy when Dru's around! I can't wait to see what happens!
 
jl1980Surprises03/25/2006 05:17 pm
*gasp*....what's gonna happen? where did they go? fascinating as ever...love this story, can't wait for the next update
 
pfeifferpackSurprises03/25/2006 04:54 pm
Gaaah those evil PTB's to have Spike deal with Dru! He will always love her even if he isn't IN love with her. Poor Spike always has to pay the biggest prices while Angel dines for free.

Wonderful update to the terrific story. Thanks.

Kathleen
 
redwulf50Surprises03/25/2006 04:19 pm
LOL, see this is why you are my senesei

G"reat fic, great cliffioe
 
JackofspikesSurprises03/25/2006 04:05 pm
oooh...I love this story. It was such a happy surprise to see the update. Thanks for sharing it with us.
 
kimSurprises03/25/2006 04:01 pm
Ah...final fight between sire and childe. Dru stands no chance.
Hee! Yep, there's going to be fireworks. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Decisions03/25/2006 07:59 am
Evil cliffie ... more more more .... Pretty pretty please.
I know, evil cliffie - but I can't help it. It's like an addiction I tell you.

Glad you enjoyed and thanks; next chappy is up.
 
Spikes Slayer2Decisions03/12/2006 11:59 pm
arrghh!!! have the trials got something to do with buffy as well!?!?
*zips lips* Not telling! Hee! Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated, and I will be updating soon once my beta has returned from her holiday.
 
pretty_in_fangsDecisions03/12/2006 10:28 pm
Ooooo... ::shivers:: Lovely chapter. I can't wait to see the trials, though I have my suspicions on the first. Can't wait to see if I'm right.
Thanks for you review and for reading. Trials are ahead and I hope I don't disappoint. Thanks again.
 
RobynDecisions03/12/2006 07:09 pm
Fantastic chapter, of course you did end with that nail-biting cliffhanger. I loved the interaction between Buffy and Spike, and how Spike again realized how much Buffy loves him, and that it is real. Harm was a wonderful piece of fun in the middle of all the angst and her little scene was the perfect balance for the chapter. Update soon. Please.
Thanks so much. I liked the idea of Harmony being distracted by shoes and whatnot in the middle of a crisis - she really is an airhead and such fun to write. Cliffhanger - yup, sorry! Had to stop there or my muse would have castigated me. Thanks again and I promise to update soon.
 
lilmamadayDecisions03/12/2006 06:13 pm
I wonder why Angel never noticed the aftertaste of his blood. Then again, knowing the broody one he probably just thought the blood tasted bad and thought that it was his penance for all the bad that he had done. Unlike Spike who would add things to the blood to make it taste better. For an undead guy, Spike really knew how to live! lol

I am really worried about what will happen next thanks to your foreshadowing so please don't keep us in suspense for too long! Still loving the story!
I think Angel was used to drinking pigs blood for so long that he didn't even consider there was anything wrong. And Harmony would be demanding the best, as usual, so it would be immediately apparent to her. I won't keep you hanging long, I promise, and thank you so much for your interest.
 
kimDecisions03/12/2006 03:54 pm
Yikes! Oh, please update soon!

After this, there's no way the Powers can hold Angel in higher regard than Spike. He doesn't even LIKE Angel, and yet he's still doing the right thing.

Kick ass, Big Bad!
I will, I promise. The Powers suck sometimes, but Spike has a way of becoming indispensible and partially due to his sense of noble sacrifice. One fight, coming up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
redwulf50Decisions03/12/2006 03:21 pm
excellent chappie you evil cliffhanger queen
Bwahahaha! So glad you like it, and thanks!
 
vladtDecisions03/12/2006 02:52 pm
good update, setting up great expectations for next chapter. thanks for the read.
Oooh, now that puts pressure on me! I hope I can live up to them. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
MarzBarDecisions03/12/2006 02:16 pm
Go Spike! I sense some interesting trials coming up, and not the physical ones. At this point, those seem pretty unnecessary, especially for Spike. More story please.
Well spotted! I don't think physical trials would be anything more than a mere inconvenience to him. His battle will be in the mind. More very soon, and thanks!
 
pfeifferpackDecisions03/12/2006 01:40 pm
Oooo Can't wait! I know our boy...he has the incentive he needs now to make it through.

This is such a compelling story I love the wonderful updates.

I think there is so much truth to the Angel character you have painted. That demon was always just barely under the surface and not so much under his soul's control either. So very different from Spike, even when Spike was unsouled. You have captured him perfectly here in this story.

Kathleen
Thank you so much Kathleen. I'm glad you find Angel believable. I don't want to 'bash' him because after all he has been chosen by the Powers to be a champion, but I do believe he is flawed. And I don't want him to get Buffy. I was always struck by the glaring differences between unsouled Angel and unsouled Spike - even before the chip, Spike was capable of reining in his demonic urges and considering his actions. Angel, however, was always slash and feed, however inventively. So - long winded response, but thank you.
 
JackofspikesDecisions03/12/2006 12:38 pm
ooooh...no! don't stop there...must have more...pleeeeeease.
*giggles* More to come very soon, just have to wait for my beta who's been having a well deserved holiday. Thanks for the review.
 
KarynDecisions03/12/2006 12:21 pm
*wipes tears*
ohhhh dramatic ending, great update!
Thank you. Sorry to provoke tears!
 
jl1980Decisions03/12/2006 12:18 pm
"You are my heart"...unbelievably beautiful and romantic...love this chapter...can't wait for the next
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. More is on its way, but my beta has been on holiday. As soon as I have it, so can you. Thanks again.
 
RichardDecisions03/12/2006 12:16 pm
One of the problems with the concept of sacrifice is that, in general, it's not compatible with justice. If anything, as of the last few chapters this story is about sacrificing justice. And for what? For obedience to Power. This should give everyone pause for a few moments, and give anyone concerned with justice a sick feeling inside. At the beginning, I loved this story. But more and more it looks like the bad guy won't get the comeuppance I've been anticipating for more than a dozen chapters. I don't like this story anymore.
Sorry you feel that way Richard. And I'm not going to give the ending away just yet. Suffice to say that I have plans for all of the characters that may not be apparent so far. Thank you for taking the time to read and review in the past, and I wish you well in your search for stories that fit in with your definition of justice.
 
maryperkDecisions03/12/2006 12:07 pm
Cool update. Love it.
Thanks Mary. Glad you enjoyed.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Holding out for a Hero03/25/2006 07:51 am
Oh, {sniffles} Poor Spike and Buffy. Damn it! I want Angel in the breeze. Stupid jerk. Poor Buffy having to know that Angel will not only be saved, but that Spike's death is what will save Angel. I'm running to the next chapter.
Hee! My job here is done! Everybody wants Angel blowing in the wind. *evil cackle* Glad you enjoyed and thanks.
 
PyroChildeHolding out for a Hero02/26/2006 10:01 pm
GRRR!!! I really cannot stand Angel/Angelus whoever he is this time! Stupid idiot PTBs. Don't they know Spike is soooo much better than Angel? Spike and Dawn better not die!! I really hate Angel!

Oh, and I can't believe poor Xander. I mean, I feel so bad for him and I'm sooo mad at him. Look, now you've got me all conflicted. lol. Awesome job writing his character though, its very believable.

This is an awesome fic! I started it today and I'm completely hooked. I read the entire thing straight through and I can't wait for the next update. This is amazing!
Hee! I'm glad I've got you grooving with the Angel(us) hatred. That was the plan And Xander is really in a bad place right now.

Thanks so much for your wonderful review. It's really made my day. The next chapter won't be long as it's with my beta and we're not far from the end so I hope you keep enjoying. Thanks once again. :happy author:
 
pretty_in_fangsHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 10:17 pm
Oh! I'm so happy to see this story here. I'd been watching it for updates elsewhere and am so thrilled to see it here... with an update!
I love this story. You do beautiful work.
Thank you; I'm so glad you're enjoying and thanks for your kind words. I update here and my site first for all my stories. The next update won't be long, it's with my beta. Many thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
jl1980Holding out for a Hero02/25/2006 08:50 pm
well at least they managed to stop that...i think i'd rather see angel dust than saved though...he's evil soul or no soul...can't wait for your next update!!
I sense you're having a hard time with Angel. *giggles* I'm so glad! I wanted people to dislike him intensely. Thanks again for reading, I'll try not to disappoint.
 
lilmamadayHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 08:19 pm
Great update! I am dying to see what happens next! please update soon!
Thank you. Next chapter is with my beta so watch for it soon.
 
SpaceLordHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 05:05 pm
Well this is fun, Buffy ready to kill Angel well you gotta love that.
Yeah, what did she say? "nobody messes with my boyfriend." Well, it's about time Angel found that out first hand. Thanks for reading, much appreciated.
 
pfeifferpackHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 01:49 pm
I am so delighted that this is being updated again! I went back to reread and et the flow going. Lovely update.

Everyone is in character and Angel not being that different from Angelus is shown clearly to all (even tainted blood aside).

So typical of Spike to see himself as unimportant and yet be willing to do what is asked. Just lovely peek into his being (cause even without a soul he is like this).

Please do continue.
Kathleen
Thanks Kathleen. I'm glad you're enjoying this story - it's so dear to me that sometimes it's hard because it takes a lot out of you to write angst. My muse seems to have no problem with the PWPs - can't think why.

Anyway, thank you once again. I appreciate your words, especially coming from somebody whose writing I really admire. It means a lot to me. Thank you.
 
vladtHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 01:12 pm
great update, but angel dust would be so much better. probably not for your excellent fic, but for my own selfish joy. thanks for the read.
Hehehe. Yeah, Angel dust seems to be the plea from everybody. Maybe....;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, much appreciated.
 
redwulf50Holding out for a Hero02/25/2006 12:57 pm
LOL you feed my angel hatred soooo well.
I knew you'd like this chappy.

Just for you! Thanks!
 
kimHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 07:23 am
I'm sure the Wankers That Be have plans they aren't telling...still, poor Spike always has to make the sacrifices, maybe because he's always willing to in the first place.

What could be so important that they still need Angel to do?
Spike has the heart of a hero so he'll always end up doing the right thing, despite his blustering and snarking to the contrary. That's why we love him so.

And the PTB do have plans for Angel. Watch this space...

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
JackofspikesHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 04:16 am
oh yay updatey goodness. I love this story...please please please update soon.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy my meanderings and the update will be as soon as my beta can get the chapter back to me. Thanks again.
 
RobynHolding out for a Hero02/25/2006 02:49 am
I just discovered this treasure tonight and had to read the whole thing. It is so good. I can’t wait for another chapter.
Thank you so much. More will be very soon, and the story is drawing to an end. I'm so glad you enjoyed and thanks again.
 
UncagedMuseHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 11:56 pm
Excellent update! More More!
Thanks hun! More very soon
 
MarzBarHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 11:31 pm
OMG! Any hell that can be dished out to the PTB on behalf of Spike should be served up painfully and slowly. Is this rotten fight with Angelus part of the trials? More soon please.
Thank you for reading and yeah - the trials are about to begin. I think the PTB have underestimated people's regard for Spike, that's for sure. Glad you're enjoying and thanks.
 
spikeslovebiteHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 11:09 pm
fuckers that be

**snicker!!** love that catchy little phrase! So happy to see an update for this fic!! *hugz you*
Hee! Yeah, snarky!Spike is such fun to write.

Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks. *hugs back*
 
Spikes Slayer2Holding out for a Hero02/24/2006 10:33 pm
if i was her i'd be like "huh? one more time? thats means you're going for good?" etc etc etc.. lol great chapy cant wait to see what happens next..
Thank you. Poor Buffy and Spike keep getting messed with; what do they say - the path of true love never runs smoothly? Next chapter will be up very soon.
 
OraclehollyHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 10:05 pm
WOW Deb! I've missed the last few chaps and just now caught up. What action! Having Cordy back into the mix to trade barbs with Spike is great. The Faith/Buffy tangle during the Angel/Spike battle was great. But Buffy has always been stronger than Faith; however, given the stress and the Faith's motive, I guess I could see Faith overpowering her for a bit. Still... the lesson we learn here kiddies... don't fuck with Willow! oh and Harmony (from 2 chaps ago) is still a doofus.
Hi hun. Thow thanks! I know that under normal circumstances Buffy would so kick Faith's ass but with the fretting, the emotion, the lack of sleep - I think it would be safe to say that she'd be distracted at the very least. And besides..I needed to make the point.

Willow is awesome when she's fully powered up and I love to play with her. And Harmony - well, she's such an airhead, but funny. Glad you're enjoying, and thanks again.
 
slaymesoftlyHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 09:58 pm
Whoa! Powerful, exciting new chapter! I love Spike's acceptance of his role - and Cordelia's understanding that his love is worth more than Angel's posturing. Will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Thanks hun. I'm glad you've enjoyed. More very soon, it's already with my beta. Cordelia sees more than people think, and I always figured she was a sucker for a true love story.
 
The Space BetweenHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 08:40 pm
/crying

Gah! This is my favorite story on this site thus far. You're the reason why I joined Bloodshedverse; you and this story you're writing. It's incredible.

I can't wait to see the rest of this story unfold.

~Desiree
Wow. I'm truly speechless. Thank you so much; I just hope the rest of it doesn't disappoint. Writing makes me happy and knowing that you are enjoying makes me so much happier. I'm honoured that you've taken the time to read and review, and it is appreciated more than you know. Thank you.
 
redwulf50Holding out for a Hero02/24/2006 08:21 pm
FUCK the damn Powers they are idiots Just Dust the Bastard grrrrrrrrr

Great chappie
Well, that's what you always say...

Thanks Wulfie.
 
maryperkHolding out for a Hero02/24/2006 07:58 pm
Great chappy!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
 
IsabelLiving Through the Pain05/31/2006 03:32 am
A couple of great lines in this chapter.
"Well bake me, frost me, and top me with a cherry! The divine Miss C is returned to hearth and home"
This cracked me up. That was just so Lorne. I love Lorne.

And, quite possibly one of the best lines I've read in fanfiction ;)
"A stake’ll fix him whether he’s an ‘el’ or an ‘us’"
::sighs:: so true. Got love Spike's logic. This line had me chuckling like a hyena lol
 
jl1980Living Through the Pain02/25/2006 08:44 pm
uh-oh...they need to hurry up and get this thing done before angel hurts spike....on to the next chapter...
They're on it, Willow the Wicca is on to him and will take no prisoners.
 
SpaceLordLiving Through the Pain02/25/2006 04:51 pm
Hmm these PTB need to get their shit together and cut their losses. Don't see the reason for saving his ass, he made his choice now he must pay the piper.
Yeah, but don't forget the Powers are often cruel and unfeeling and work in mysterious ways. I hear you though, it does irk. Thanks for reading.
 
vladtLiving Through the Pain02/25/2006 01:09 pm
reread the earlier parts of this excellent story. great update. really hope the powers don't save angel. thanks for the read.
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. The Powers are strange and offputting.
 
Bite_MeLiving Through the Pain02/20/2006 05:06 pm
Just finished reading what you have so far and gotta say that I'm lovin' it! I was cryin' like crazy in the beginning though! Please continue soon!
Thank you so much. The next two chapters are with my beta and I hope to have them up very soon. This story is dear to my heart and you've really made my day with your comments. Thanks so much.
 
slaymesoftlyLiving Through the Pain02/12/2006 12:25 pm
Ah, had missed this latest chapter somehow. Such an exciting fic - more soon, please?
Glad you like it, and thank you. Lou has my next chapter so hopefully very soon.
 
bubble_blunderLiving Through the Pain12/28/2005 09:29 pm
Just back from Christmas vacation and catching up on the updates I missed. Wonderful chapter! -Lisa
Hi Lisa - I apologise for not replying sooner. RL is insane at the moment. Next chapter will be up soon; thank you so much for reviewing.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Living Through the Pain12/22/2005 12:48 am
Angel gets another chance? Dang. Somehow that doesn't seem right with all that he is doing this time, but this is a really good story. I look forward to seeing where you go with it next.
Hi Tasha. Hopefully, the story will explain all. We're not too far from the end now and all the threads are drawing together. The Powers, of course, are stoooopid! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
 
RichardLiving Through the Pain12/20/2005 04:54 pm
Technically good, like the rest of the story, but you've lost me completely. Angel brought all of this on himself, again, and now he's getting another unearned get out of jail free card? AGAIN? For the 3rd or 4th (or is it 5th) time? Seems that Powers just means Powerfully Stupid.
Thank you. Sorry for losing you. The Powers have never claimed to be logical, they have their own agenda. More very soon.
 
NikkoleLiving Through the Pain12/19/2005 10:18 pm
I have to agree with confused muse here. Why would anyone want to save Angel? That right bastard!
*grins* Yeah, he's not making any friends....Thanks for reading and reviewing, more very soon.
 
Confused MuseLiving Through the Pain12/19/2005 11:24 am
Oooh, fab update! This fic is so dark and dramatic, I'm absolutely hooked. Although the traitor in me is saying "why would anyone want to save Angel?" *grin*
Hiya hun. Thank you so much. You're not the only one wanting Angel to have a dusty end. We'll see - ooh, is that teasing? *grins* Hope you are well.
 
MarzBarLiving Through the Pain12/19/2005 03:29 am
I'm worried now. The Scoobies and the Angel team don't seem to get it that they don't have so much time now. Angel knows about them and is ready to have his mystics or demons or whatever kill Spike soon. I don't see why the PTB think they have to save Angelus again. It's getting tiresome. More story please.
Well the PTB are laws unto themselves. Not sure myself what Angel has that keeps getting him off the hook - but my muse wants it that way so who am I to argue? Next chapter with Lou so will be up as soon as it comes back. Thanks.
 
DarLiving Through the Pain12/19/2005 03:26 am
What a place to leave off..intense.great story, great job telling it. Definitely left me wanting more
Thank you; glad you enjoyed. Next chapter is with my beta so will be up soon.
 
redwulf50Living Through the Pain12/18/2005 11:41 pm
damn good chappie and like a GOOD friend I reviewd it *laying on the guilt*
*raises eyebrow* Guilt duly absorbed.

Glad you liked; you'll LOVE the next chapter.
 
IsabelSecrets and Lies05/31/2006 03:06 am
You took two of the characters I dislike the most and made them even worse. It's fun to read. Now all I need is for Riley to show up and the trio would be complete. On a more serious note, great chapter. I love the twists and turns of this story. It makes me feel nervous. I'm really into this.
 
jl1980Secrets and Lies02/25/2006 08:26 pm
well good thing xander was too drunk to keep a secret...this story has me so tense, on edge, waiting to know what's gonna happen next...gotta read more now
Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much, it makes me smile. More to come.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Secrets and Lies12/08/2005 06:52 pm
{growls and snarls for not so happy reasons} That jerk. Him and Angel both. Okay, kill Xander and Angel as painfully as possible. Where is a vengeance demon when you need one? Excellent chapter update!
Sorry I made you all grrrr aaaargh! Xander seems to bring that out in a lot of people, and Angel? He'd better not wander the streets or he may just fit into an ashtray. Anya would so fry their butts! Glad you enjoyed and thank you.
 
NikkoleSecrets and Lies12/08/2005 04:34 pm
I was so happy to see an update that I dropped everything to sit down and read it...laundry be damned!! hehe! Great update! I had a feeling Xander would betray everyone. What an a$$!! Hope to see more soon!!!
Awww *blushes*; so pleased you like it - and hope the laundry got done eventually. Xander's been heading that way, that's for sure. More very, very soon - I have the next chapter back from my beta so I just need to check through.
 
janeSecrets and Lies12/08/2005 04:34 pm
Great update. I know Xander's been through alot, but I hope he gets what's coming to him.
Thank you. Xander's broken but that's no excuse for turning on your friends. Trust me. He's not getting away scot free.
 
SpaceLordSecrets and Lies12/08/2005 04:05 am
Need to see both Angel and Xander killed and preferably real soon Good chapter hope to read the next one soon.
Kill them? You want me to? Oh hell...and here's me thinking you'll love them both. *giggles* Yeah, not very nice are they? Lemme see what I can do. Thanks for reading!
 
IsabelBattle Lines05/31/2006 02:33 am
Angel, that bastard. God I love saying that lol. Great story. I started reading it today and just couldn't stop. I was even late for work I really love it and can't wait to see what will happen next.
 
jl1980Battle Lines02/25/2006 08:22 pm
oh great...what's xander gonna do now?? i need more...
Xander is so lost, he's open to anything at the moment. More soon! Thanks.
 
vladtBattle Lines11/16/2005 04:22 am
was going to try to write a magnificent review for this update,but xander showed up. have to downgrade to excellent chapter. thanks
Thanks so much; sorry about the Xander appearance but he is an integral part of the story so..... I appreciate you reading and reviewing; I have two chapters with my beta so fingers crossed I'll be able to post more this weekend.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Battle Lines11/11/2005 09:09 am
Oh my gosh! I am so going to have to kick Xander's arse if he even thinks of betraying Buffy and the gang again. The stupid, arrogant, prick. Please tell me this is part of a specific plan, and not that he is really turning on them? Oh man ... not good. Please write more soon.
Yep, Xander isn't really making any friends here, is he? There is a plan...but it may not be what you think. *evil smirk* More is on the way..Thanks sweets!
 
KristenBattle Lines11/08/2005 12:34 am
No, you have GOT to be kidding me! Xander wouldnt be THAT stupid would he? Come on now! Love the story by the way, just finished reading all 17 chapters and I have to say its pretty awsome. I love how Spike and Buffy mated, and how you are taking what happened during season five of Angel and making it totally better. Update soon!
Well, Xander isn't playing with a full deck right now. Hopefully the next chapter will explain that. I'm so pleased you like my story - your feedback is very generous and I'm extremely grateful to you for taking the time to let me know. Thanks again! Next chapter is with my beta so hopefully will be up in the next few days.
 
CewcewBattle Lines11/06/2005 05:11 am
Alexander Lavell Harris! O! Boy.. If you F#@K this up for Buffy, Spike and Dawn, So Help me I’ll jump in that story and strangle you my self!!! More Please. :-)
LOL! Hey, if they need help to kick some ass can I send for you? Glad you're enjoying, more very soon. Thanks for the feedback. *grins*
 
MarzBarBattle Lines11/06/2005 12:48 am
OMG! Not only does Angel need dusting, Xander (as usual) needs torture and death. I hope Spike, Buffy and Faith get to do some serious fist and fang work soon.
Thanks for reading. Don't worry, I have plans for the dork duo. *grins*. More very soon, and thanks for the feedback.
 
slaymesoftlyBattle Lines11/05/2005 09:12 pm
Had some major catching up to do, but now I'm all with the program and ready for the next chapter! Evil Xander? He hates Angel too. Don't tell me he's going to help him? Gah!
Hee! Didn't you know I was evil? *grins* Next chapter won't be long but I've posted all that I have done for now; and Xander's in a really bad place. It's going to get worse....TA TA DAAAAA! (that was supposed to be creepy music!) Thanks for reading and reviewing hun, much appreciated.
 
jl1980The Power of Love02/25/2006 08:20 pm
unfaithful creep...on top of all of it he plans to cheat on her?? i hate angel...please make him dusty soon...
*giggles* You sound like you're channeling Wulfie.

Angel's got an inflated sense of his own importance; he's going to get brought down to earth very soon. Thanks!
 
~*~Tasha~*~The Power of Love11/11/2005 09:02 am
Angel is so stupid if he thinks that he was going to be able to pull one over on Buffy and Cordy. Hello ... did he forget that she worked for the PTB ? {shakes her head} I feel really bad for Cordy.
Angel is temporarily insane, obviously! And Cordy - don't forget she's Queen C and she'll never lost that. More soon! Thanks for the wonderful feedback.
 
jl1980Mine02/25/2006 08:14 pm
well hopefully angel keeps buying it until they can stop him...i dont know how they're gonna do it but i know they're gonna...please...
Don't worry, I have big plans. They don't involve Angel getting his paws on Buffy. Thanks for reading on
 
~*~Tasha~*~Mine11/11/2005 08:51 am
Loved the chapter. I'm rereading back through to make sure I didn't miss any. I was really screwing up on my updates for a while. Want to be sure I'm all caught up on this one. Love it.
Hey Tasha. I'm so glad you like it. Next chapter is with my beta and the one after that is about ready to go too. *smiles*
 
jeanieLove Me02/25/2006 08:28 pm
hope that chaps angel's ass.
Hee! Angel's ass is toast...

Thanks.
 
jl1980Love Me02/25/2006 08:10 pm
wow...thats so awesome...now just hope they can stop angel in time :
Thank you.
 
jl1980Solid Through02/25/2006 08:05 pm
good...willow's on to him...they have to stop him, but what if it's too late? what if she's already gonna have to choose? have to read more now!
Hee! I've got you racing on now, I'm honoured. Thanks!
 
jl1980The Stage is Set02/25/2006 07:59 pm
oh no...i know what angel's doing...evil creep...hopefully they'll figure it out before anything really bad happens...
Don't worry, the Scoobies and the Fang Gang are on it.
 
jl1980White, Black and Murky Grey02/25/2006 07:42 pm
so they're starting to catch on to his motives...he's gonna make her choose between dawn and spike isn't he? i hate angel!! on to next chapter!!
*giggles* My work here is done! Thank you so much for continuing to read and enjoy; this story is dear to my heart and I'm delighted you like it.
 
jl1980Realisations02/25/2006 07:24 pm
at least they know angel's up to something...can't wait to see what happens next...they need to make spike all solid again!!
Yep, Spike needs some Buffy time that's for sure. Glad you're still enjoying.
 
Spikez_tartWhere I Belong03/12/2006 07:47 pm
Very sweet Buffy.
Yeah, I like me some sweet Buffy. She's just a girl who wants to be loved. Awwww.

Thanks!
 
jl1980Where I Belong02/25/2006 07:18 pm
i am so scared of what angel's doing behind the scenes..and i'm glad willow's on their side but i think angel's gonna try to use xander's hostility against spike...on to the next chappie now
You spending time in my mind? *hee* Yeah, Angel is very manipulative and having the power of W&H behind him isn't holding him back. Thanks again!
 
Spikez_tartWe Meet Again03/12/2006 07:38 pm
Oh no. Evil writer. Don't make Spike disappear!
Bwahahahaha! [insert evil cackle here] Don't worry, all will be revealed.
 
jl1980We Meet Again02/25/2006 07:09 pm
oh no...angel is doing it isn't he? and he wont stop at anything to keep buffy, even though she'll never be his! i love this story, on to the next chapter!
:grins: Yeah; Angel is deluded about Buffy and his hold over her. He hasn't figured in her love for Spike. And that's his big mistake.
 
Spikez_tartWatching, Waiting03/12/2006 07:29 pm
can we forget the poor-Giles gig for a moment? Willow - you go girl.
Willow rocks! Thanks
 
jl1980Watching, Waiting02/25/2006 06:44 pm
oh, buffy, he is!!! so sad!!! i love this chapter...but angel's starting to freak me out...and he did something to dawn, didn't he? bloody wanker!!! he needs staking badly!!!
Hee! See how I let you start to like him and now you want him staked? *evil grin* Yeah, Angel's not coming out of this with any new friends that's for sure. Thanks!
 
jl1980Time and Reason02/25/2006 06:38 pm
oh i cant wait to see their reunion!! loved this chapter!! i love fred, i'm glad you've combined the la group and the sunnydale group for this story, i love this story!!
Thank you. I love Fred too. I'm trying to do an ensemble piece and it's bloody hard to give everybody 'screen time' let me tell you! I'm thrilled you're enjoying.
 
Spikez_tartHoney I'm Home03/12/2006 07:09 pm
after all that had happened with Spike and Wood in Sunnydale, she still instinctively reached out to Giles in moments of crisis. The answer was simple – she had nobody else. If you don't feel sorry for Buffy after that ...
Yeah; he's the nearest she has to a father and really, for the bulk of her adult life she's been able to just know he'd be there to catch her. I always wanted to restore that relationship - so I have! And I love Buffy; I know she treated Spike badly but it takes two to tango and in my mind I believe they would have worked it out. Thanks for reading.
 
jl1980Honey I'm Home02/25/2006 06:32 pm
lol...love Spike's entrance, as always...but angel's going to be evil, i know...he's already starting to lose control...
Well, Spike can always push Angel's buttons. And that's when the fun usually starts. Thanks!
 
Spikez_tartHelp Me03/12/2006 07:02 pm
I know this is supposed to be angsty, and it is, but I'm LOL over that crack about Swedish drama. That stuff just gags me. Enjoying the miserable Angel. He deserves it for being such a jerk.
Thanks for getting that bit! I remember watching "Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure" where they have to play games with Death and it's like an Ingmar Bergman flick but parodied - cracks me up! Miserable Angel seems to be quite the hit. Thanks again!
 
jl1980Help Me02/25/2006 06:28 pm
oh no!! what happened to dawnie?? and i have a feeling when spike shows up angel's gonna make lots of trouble...on to next chapter
Oh yeah, you got it right.

Things are never what they seem. Thanks for reading.
 
Spikez_tartPain03/12/2006 06:55 pm
LOL re Harmony the assistant. Don't trust this good Angel. He's going to do something bad isn't he?
Hee! Harmony's a right giggle to write. And good Angel has another agenda yes. Ooops! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
jl1980Pain02/25/2006 06:21 pm
i love how you've written this, you're not bashing angel and you've actually made me feel for his pain too in this...its very realistic and still very beautiful...on to next chapter
Thank you. I think I wrote this just after I'd met David Boreanaz at the Halloween con in London - and he was just such a babe with a great sense of fun it was hard to write Angel as uncaring. I'm so glad you're enjoying, thank you.
 
Spikez_tartReality03/12/2006 06:48 pm
Heartbreakers SD. Isn't it nice that Giles sticks up for Spike now that he's dead and after he arranged that little ambush with Robin.
Well, I want Buffy to be happy, so to make her world all fluffy and nice she'd have to have Giles back in the camp. And she wouldn't have him unless he was good to Spike. I've indulged myself therefore. Thanks for the review.
 
jl1980Reality02/25/2006 06:15 pm
you brought me to tears with this one...beautifully written, you put so much emotion into the retelling of the finale, going on to next chapter now
Thank you. I found myself writing with tears in my eyes so I'm glad that translated. When the plot bunny first bit me I was rewatching S7 again and I was all raw. Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*
 
jl1980After the Hell is Over02/25/2006 06:10 pm
the intro is very promising...can't wait to see where you take this
Thanks! I hope I don't disappoint.
 
spike_spetslayerAfter the Hell is Over12/09/2005 03:48 am
Just read the whole thing up to date...awesome story...Angel is just evil, and Xander? Major asshole problems there...love this story, please update it soon....
Update may be tonight but I'm having attachment issues from my beta's e-mail. *fingers crossed* I can sort it. So glad you're enjoying it, and Xander's such a naughty boy. Thanks for reading!
 
bubble_blunderAfter the Hell is Over12/08/2005 05:45 am
Glad to see an update of this story! The plot just continues to thicken. More soon, please! -Lisa
Sorry you had to wait so long, I won't leave you hanging as long this time. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 
janeAfter the Hell is Over11/05/2005 07:04 pm
Absolutely brilliant fic.
Thank you! *blushes* I'm so glad you like it; this one wrings it out of me I have to say. Angst is draining! Glad you enjoyed it so far.
 
SpikesKatAfter the Hell is Over11/05/2005 04:00 pm
I'm gonna shamelessly beg for more here... cuz, I know you've got more...at least for now. Really hope rereading gets the muse flowing. ^_^
Begging now? *giggles* You know I'm on it! But I love how you love this story. Means a lot to me. *hugs you*