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| Poppycock (formerly Dead Things fic) by slaymesoftly |
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| Kelly | four | 03/26/2006 01:22 am |
| *in sing-song* She stayed She stayed La dee Da Dee Da *end sing-song* All through their romance I just wanted her to love him enough to stay!! Well Done!! Thank you ~ Kelly |
| Hee! She almost always gets a clue eventually in my fics.Thanks. |
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| CutieSaiyajin | four | 01/13/2006 03:07 am |
| Ooh, I loved this! Great ending. |
| Thanks! |
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| Lou | four | 11/22/2005 10:35 pm |
| Just perfect. |
| Thanks! |
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| bubble_blunder | four | 11/22/2005 07:15 am |
| Really liked this one!
-Lisa |
| Thanks. I'm glad you did. |
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| Confused Muse | four | 11/20/2005 03:25 pm |
Tender, hurtful, anguished, loving - ye gods woman, you've played them and us like an accordion  |
| Hee! Thank you. |
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| UncagedMuse | four | 11/20/2005 07:52 am |
| Oh loved this fic! It was wonderful. |
| Thank you |
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| idk5743228 | four | 11/20/2005 03:03 am |
| Hey, forget whatever silly title I may have come up with for this story. You don't need it. You could send this out with no title and it would stand by itself. I loved it; Spike was Spike, Buffy used her brains; and I'm not sure what planet Xander dropped in from, but I loved the new, I'm not a complete idiot, ask me how Xander. I was sad to see the story end, but the ending felt right. Thanks for a great one LOL Isabella |
| Thanks for the great review! |
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| Opal | four | 11/19/2005 10:34 pm |
| Great job! I really liked this fic. Short & Sweet, with a happy ending. |
| Thanks, Opal |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | four | 11/19/2005 07:34 pm |
| That was a very sweet ending to this one. That would have been one heck of a great way for it to have ended for real. Her finally coming to the realization of it all when she did that to him. Excellent story, Patti. |
| Thanks, I like to think she first began to realize he meant something to her at that point. Even in the show, she was nicer to him at her birthday party as though she'd reached some sort of comfort level with their relationship. Then Riley had to show up and blow it all to hell. Grrr |
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| jane | four | 11/19/2005 07:23 pm |
| Brilliant really good read. |
| Thank you. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Three | 11/19/2005 07:15 pm |
| Oooo ... Xander knows. Now that was a nice twist. Loved the chapter. I almost thought it was Dawn or something. Didn't expect Xander, and I love that choice! {heads to the next chapter which looks like it is the last based on the fic now saying complete} |
| Thanks, Tasha |
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| jane | Two | 11/19/2005 09:34 am |
| I really like it more please. |
| Thanks - more coming up. |
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| sam | Two | 11/19/2005 05:02 am |
| okay, i like your stories and everything, but i have to say that i don't really care for this one. first of all, this chapter was basically the same thing that happened in the episode. i was hoping you would have changed it more and not have him get beat up, i can't even watch this episode at all because of that part. it gets me so pissed off. buffy is still a bitch here and i was really hoping you would have made her better. |
| I'm sorry you're not liking it. I tried to give a little insight into Buffy's emotions and give Spike a little more sympathy for her internal termoil, but perhaps it isn't working the way I'd hoped. Not having him get beat up just wasn't an option -it is a very important event in their relationship. But I think/hope I give it a better outcome than on the show. Please read the next couple of chapters and let me know what you think. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Two | 11/19/2005 02:09 am |
| Yep, definitely grim. Hope it gets Spuffy again soon. I mean yeah the balcony scene was always an awesome one in my book, but what followed what awful. I look forward to seeing where you take it. |
| It will get better. I promise! |
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| Ariel Dawn | One | 11/19/2005 04:54 pm |
| I have to say that I love what you've done with the episode, especially Buffy's breakdown when she can't find Spike, and Xander's acceptance of the situation. Good job! |
| Thanks, AD! |
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| Coquine | One | 11/18/2005 09:10 am |
| Ah, yes, Dead Things is certainly one of those eppies that begs you to play with it just a little bit more! I enjoyed this thoroughly. As for a title, how about "Safe Words"? Kinda lame, I know, but anyone who knows what it is will be immediately intrigued! |
| Well, it wasn't begging me! I didn't want anything to do with it, but that's the fic I was assigned, so.... Kinda giving up on the title thing. I think I'm going to stick with Dead Things Fic or something very close to that.Thanks for reading. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | One | 11/18/2005 06:26 am |
| Liked the fic. Look forward to seeing Buffy's turn in the cuffs? Or is this the end? |
| Not the end, but the end of fun with handcuffs. Sorry! Buffy got her turn in them in enough other stories, this one is going somewhere else. |
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| MarzBar | One | 11/18/2005 05:31 am |
| Delicious! I'm really looking forward to his turn since I think he's had more experience and is very interested in bringing me . . . oops, her pleasure. WEG |
| Thanks for reading - hope you aren't disappointed with the direction the story takes. |
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| idk5743228 | One | 11/18/2005 04:47 am |
| I'm loving it so far. How about "Poppycock means never having to say you're sorry" for a title? |
| LOL - Not a bad thought! Thanks for the input and for the review. |
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| Jenna | One | 11/18/2005 04:14 am |
| Very hot. And I liked the communication between them...very sweet. |
| Thanks - it's not often they have any good communication, is it? |
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| maryperk | One | 11/18/2005 02:21 am |
| I like it so far! |
| Thanks - I hope you continue to like it. |
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