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| Aloha my love by Isabel |
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| Lou | Rescue me | 08/01/2006 02:56 pm |
| Cards on the table and we're all happy. Lovely!! |
| Thanks, Lou. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 11:56 pm |
| roflmao! |
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| letitia | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 08:52 pm |
| I am just so happy to see this story continue. I did miss it. Love how they were found. And it is too funny that normal ppl had to come and find the "chosen" one along with her vampire companion.. can't wait until she gets back to the resort. |
| lol Yeah, that's what I was going for. I thought it would be hilarious if normal people would find them. Thanks, letitia, and I'll try updating more often. |
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| Shanna | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 04:40 pm |
| So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG** |
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| Shanna | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 04:37 pm |
| So happy you starting updating this fic again. Love it. And now for that shower....**WEG** |
| I'll try to update more frequently from now on. Thanks for your review. |
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| fallen_angel | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 01:43 pm |
| ROFLMAO! |
| Well, I wanted to make you guys laugh. I guess I succeeded lol |
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| Nikkole | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 12:39 pm |
| That was TOO funny! Great chapter. I loved Spike being all moody when she gets back to him. I am also very happy that he finally asked her what they were. |
| Glad I made you laugh. That was the point And yes, it was about time they had that little talk. Now, let's just hope Buffy isn't being overly optimistic about their future in Sunnydale. Wouldn't it be great if she finally found the courage to tell him she loves him too? I'll update soon. |
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| kim | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 11:15 am |
Ha ha ha! I'd expect better from Spike...navigate by the stars, or something.
Thank goodness for park rangers. |
| Poor Spike and Buffy. All the sex they had in the last couple of days affected their brains |
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| deedo | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 10:22 am |
great update!! 
I totally love the new chappie, just the right amount of fun, seriousness and smut. Buffy and Spike are too cute, totally lost!! 
Can't wait for more!!  |
| Thank you, deedo. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Rescue me | 07/31/2006 10:02 am |
| lol that was funnny.. i cant wait until they get back to the hotel ;) lol |
| Thank you. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/30/2006 01:22 am |
| tsk tsk spike just cause you cant go out and play doesnt mean you get to be all huffy.. lol great update!! |
| LOL Thanks. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 10:46 pm |
| Now to murder the dego bitch |
| Yeah. Wouldn't it be great if there was a way around the 'no killing humans' rule? We'll see. |
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| golddrake | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 08:43 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you! |
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| kim | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 08:28 pm |
| Huh...what's up with Spike? |
| You'll find out in the next chapter ;) Poor Spike doesn't like being left out when there's an oportunity for violence lol. |
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| Lou | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 05:38 pm |
| Aaah -- Spike missed the action. Nice and yucky. |
| Yeah, poor Spikey. Stupid sun always ruins his fun. |
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| vladt | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 04:20 pm |
| good read, thank you. looking forward to carlita getting hers and "Hot scented oil, candles ... could be fun." |
| I think they'll enjoy both activities very much indeed. I'll try updating soon. Thanks for your review. |
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| MarzBar | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 03:59 pm |
| Yucky demon killing. The Italian b____ is going to be surprised when Buffy shows up on her doorstep to kick her butt. More story please. |
| Yeah, that's one surprise I don't think she'll enjoy lol |
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| fallen_angel | How to kill a demon in three easy steps | 07/29/2006 12:03 pm |
| there's an Indian proverb which translates to "The fruit of patience is sweet" and boy this chapter was sweet! Demon deadage and promise of upcomming smut, you rock! |
| Glad it was worth the wait ;)Thanks for the review |
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| Shanna | Welcome to the jungle | 05/11/2006 07:33 am |
| Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon. |
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| Shanna | Welcome to the jungle | 05/11/2006 07:32 am |
| Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more exciting chapters soon. |
| Soon, promise. Thanks for the feedback. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Welcome to the jungle | 05/11/2006 07:06 am |
| LOL good way of gaining some time!! cannot wait for the next chapter!!! |
| Yeah, that's Spike... always with the wacky ideas lol But at least it worked. I'll start working on the next chapter right away. Thanks for the review. |
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| MarzBar | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 11:41 pm |
| Wow! What if they just go kill the Italian slut? Will that stop the big bull dog? Nice to have this fun story back again. |
| Too bad there's that pesky rule about Slayers not being allowed to kill humans... Maybe we can find some way around it? We'll see. Thanks for the feedback. I'll try not to make you wait that long for the next update. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 10:36 pm |
| Toss it into a volcano!!! |
| lol Good idea. I'm sure that would work. Thanks for your review. |
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| vladt | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 08:15 pm |
| wonderful update to a fine tale. thanks for the read. |
| Thanks, I'm flattered |
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| Lilachigh | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 05:22 pm |
| Thanks for great chapter. i do like your Buffy and Spike dialogue. |
| Thanks hon, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. |
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| Robyn | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 03:45 pm |
| Thank you for the excellent update. You did a great job of showing Buffy's stubbornness as well as Spike's ability to egg her on. I really enjoyed the humor mixed with action that you had in this chapter. |
| Glad you enjoy the interaction between the characters and the humor. It's always nice to have a review that lets you know that you succeeded at what you were trying to do. Mixing action and humor was my goal in this chapter. Thank you for your review Robyn. |
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| Lou | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 03:05 pm |
| Ha! Nothing our guys can't handle! Super Spike. |
| Nope, nothing they can't handle. They bicker a lot, but they're an amazing team. That's why we love 'em lol Thanks for your review |
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| Bookchick of the Novel Clan | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 12:42 pm |
| Goody, I had been waiting on this! You didn't dissapoint me either, great chappie! You have a great sense of humor, can't wait for the next one. |
| Sorry for the wait. My job keeps me busy. But I'm already working on the next chapter so it shouldn't take too long this time. I'm glad you think it was worth the wait and especially glad I made you laugh ;) |
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| fallen_angel | Welcome to the jungle | 05/10/2006 12:33 pm |
| wow1 I didn't know anyone could making something action-packed and humourous at the same time. Grat chapter. |
| Thanks for the review, it made me happy! |
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| Robyn | Road trip | 04/02/2006 05:06 am |
| Buffy driving? Spike really was taking his life in his hands. I loved all of Buffy's snide comments about men and driving, they were funny and true. I am really looking forward to how the situation with the monster turns out, and how they are going to survive. Thanks for a great story. |
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| Lou | Road trip | 03/31/2006 02:11 am |
| Surely our dynamic duo will see off the clunky monster - please. |
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| BuffyRat | Road trip | 03/30/2006 11:18 pm |
| As much as I enjoy Ben tormenting Carlita, I don't think angering is going to end too well for him. And poor Spike all cooped up in the backseat with Buffy driving. That is a trying time. And now... well, cant wait for an update so see what happens next. Great chapter. And, please, update soon. |
| Oh yeah, he's pushing his luck big time lol I'll try to update soon, promise. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Road trip | 03/30/2006 11:04 pm |
| omg!!! please no!! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Road trip | 03/30/2006 10:13 pm |
| Oooo irritating dego bitch! *attacks with claws* |
| Go for the eyes! lol |
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| Nikkole | Road trip | 03/30/2006 08:45 pm |
| Interesting! You know they will be ok, they are Buffy and Spike, they will always be ok! |
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| MarzBar | Road trip | 03/30/2006 05:53 pm |
| What is that big demon? Is it a hell hound? Loved the Buffy driving adventure. I am always amazed that a California girl of that age cannot drive. More story please. |
| I know. She's hopeless. But she can kick a Fyarl demon's ass in fifteen seconds flat, so I guess that counts for something ;) Maybe Spike could give her driving lessons when they get back home. Not in his Desoto though. He'd be too worried for his baby lol |
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| vladt | Road trip | 03/30/2006 04:14 pm |
| good update. evil place to stop. thanks for the fun read. |
| Yes, really bad place for the car to break down. Especially since it's getting dark. Stuck in the middle of a forest after dark with no weapon and a thing as big as a truck following you, not so fun. But they're Spike and Buffy, so there's nothing to worry about. Hopefully ;) |
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| rayan | Road trip | 03/30/2006 03:50 pm |
| goood chapterr |
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| fallen_angel | Road trip | 03/30/2006 02:07 pm |
| alright they are lost, their jeep's not working and a monster is chasing them! i think Buffy should ask the council to refund their vacation once this is over. |
| LOL I just might use that ;) Thanks for all your reviews! |
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| Robyn | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 04/02/2006 04:33 am |
| Well Ben did try to tell them, of course he completely messed up by not clarifying who he was. I really like that Buffy came clean to Spike about her wanting him to bite her. And the hot tub stuff, very nice. |
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| fallen_angel | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/30/2006 04:19 am |
| Ben calls that trying? and what's his problem with vampires? |
| Well... Ben's chicken. He's a wimp and Carlita is a bitch. Bad combination. And his problem with vampires: He's part of the concil and his uncle is Quentin Traves. Nuf said lol |
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| Lou | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/28/2006 04:58 am |
| God they're so sweet together!!!! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/28/2006 04:04 am |
| awww loved that update!!! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/27/2006 11:47 pm |
| lol, banging against the door to embarrass Ben, that was funny |
| Wasn't it? I thought it was Such a Spike thing to do. Too bad it made Ben change his mind about warning them. But to be fair, I think Ben is was too scared of Carlita and what she would do to him to really warn them. He would have probably changed his mind anyway. |
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| MarzBar | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/27/2006 09:56 pm |
| Oh dear! Maybe they should have listened to Ben. I guess it wouldn't be the Buffyverse if there wasn't an unexpected enemy attack or two. Lovely bubble bath. |
| Maybe if Ben wasn't acting so weird and saying the wrong things, they would have listen to him. But of course, the moron couldn't just come out and say it "The concil is after you." That would have been too easy. Poor Ben, the guy is completely clueless lol Thanks for all your reviews. |
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| vladt | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/27/2006 09:31 pm |
| good update. this is a very good read. thank you. |
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| rayan | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/27/2006 06:50 pm |
| cool fic...i never thought id say this in a million years but spike in maui...bloody perfect hehe...keep it up |
| Spike would be bloody perfect in Alaska lol Although, I prefere him in Maui... Less clothing necessary. |
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| Lilachigh | Hot tub, bubbles and fantasies | 03/27/2006 04:17 pm |
| Great update, as usual. I love the dialogue between them. |
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| Robyn | Dessert | 04/02/2006 04:09 am |
| This was a whole lot of hot sexy fun. Loved when he came in and she commented that she hadn't had dessert. |
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| fallen_angel | Dessert | 03/30/2006 04:08 am |
| oh poor server*snigger* |
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| vladt | Dessert | 03/27/2006 09:15 pm |
| was not going to comment 'til i caught up on this wonderful fic, but this was delightful. thanks for the read. |
| Thanks vladt. I appreciate it. |
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| Dirktavian | Dessert | 02/16/2006 02:33 am |
| What a wonderful V-Day present!! Loved it-- and I was so thrilled to see you had updated. More soon, please! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Dessert | 02/14/2006 10:35 pm |
| nice smut.. *gasp* horrible woman.. tsk tsk GREAT chappie!!! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Dessert | 02/14/2006 08:23 pm |
| Dammit dego woman, go away! LoL |
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| MarzBar | Dessert | 02/14/2006 08:23 pm |
| LMAO!! Go Spike! I love the tipping for the tupping! Thanks for the Valentine's Day prezzie. |
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| Robyn | Hawaiian magic | 04/02/2006 03:56 am |
| 20 questions always an interesting game for a date. I love how Buffy reassured-explained to Spike that she didn't have a problem with his demon side. |
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| fallen_angel | Hawaiian magic | 03/30/2006 04:02 am |
| to be forever hungry? horrible curse!now if only we could cast it on Riley*dreamy look* I hope monster eats Carlita |
| I like the way you think. A curse on Riley... what a great idea! |
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| Dirktavian | Hawaiian magic | 01/24/2006 06:47 am |
| Ummm...Scrumptious looking, and slightly nervous-- Just how I like my Spike! Thanks for the update-- I had been following this story on another site, so I'm really greatful for the new chapter. Can't wait for Buffy to spill her "confused" feelings over wanting Spike to snack on her neck. Maybe she'll be brave enough after the big smack-down. Please update again soon! |
| Buffy and confused seem to go hand in hand doesn't it? The girl always has to make everything more complicated than it has to be. But she'll figure things out... eventually. Thankfully, she has Spike to clarify things for her lol First time I write a bitey fic, so we'll see if I can pull this off. |
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| jane | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 11:13 pm |
| Great update can't wait to see how Buffy and spike deal with the new threat. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 10:36 pm |
| Look it up *sticks out tongue* They're like the pixies, trolls, or leprechauns of Hawaii. I know there are several sites because I had to look up the spelling to make sure. Most of the Hawaiian words I know, I learned orally so I usually have to look up spelling. Hehe, Spike has one sexy okole *swoons* Too find out what an okole is, go here (and no it's not perverted, just funny if you know what an okole is) http://www.brown.edu/Departments/AmCiv/Studentprojects/GISP10/week11/okole |
| That was funny. Thanks hon. I'll look up the other words you said. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 10:16 pm |
| Well, can't help you with Maui, I only lived on Oahu and never visited the other islands. Ooo ooo, they should run into some Menehune!! Heehee |
| What's a Menehune? I'm curious. |
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| MarzBar | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 09:20 pm |
| Eeeeek! WTF is Carlita summoning? It's nice that Spike and Buffy had a nice day but I guess nothing that good could last long for them. More story please. |
| lol you crack me up. She's summoning something nasty, of course ;) And about the good stufff not lasting, well, it will last for another day before things get hellish. But that won't last too long. The story was never meant to be really angsty. |
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| Lou | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 09:00 pm |
| Well that's cheating - summoning a demon to do the dirty work. |
| lol Did you really think Carlita would get her hands dirty? Beside, she's not a stupid woman, she knows Buffy would kick her ass while Spike would hold her ;) |
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| daisy | Hawaiian magic | 01/23/2006 08:17 pm |
| well that sounded ominous. can't wiat for more. poor buffy is going to have to do some slaying on her vacation. happy to see they got together. more soon please |
| Yep, she can't even have a little vacation without having to work. The life of a Slayer sucks sometimes. Thank God she has hot, sexy, naked compensations... namely, Spike lol |
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| Robyn | Phone calls and photo shoot | 04/02/2006 03:32 am |
| The phone call from Xander and Buffy's slip about Spike's win was quite funny. I love the whole Buffy-Spike fun. And Carlita is right, Travers is a rat. |
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| fallen_angel | Phone calls and photo shoot | 03/30/2006 03:49 am |
| argh I hate this Carlita!!!arrogant, hateful, hearless.. i'm rambling sorry it's just nice to hate someone once in a while |
| I know. Isn't she delightfully evil? I'm the one creating her, and I want to smack her around a bit lol What a bitca! Thanks for reviewing. |
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| Lyns | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/23/2006 12:58 pm |
| How very confusing! I'm sure i've read this chapter already....! Oh well! I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to seeing what happens with Carlita and Travers plotting against our faveourite couple. Looking forward to more soon! |
| Maybe you've read it on SR or B&S Diaries. I was a little behind on posting here. But not anymore and the next chapter will be new. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoy the story. |
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| slaymesoftly | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/23/2006 02:23 am |
| I am reading, actually. But may not have reviewed because I read the first several chapters all at the same time and then went directly to bed. Sorry1 |
| Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. |
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| Jane | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/22/2006 11:35 pm |
| Great update, I'm really liking this story. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/22/2006 10:37 pm |
| Eee!! I want those photos!!! And I can't wait to see Xander's face!! lmao!! |
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| Lou | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/22/2006 10:14 pm |
| You've made them so sweet together - delicious! Beware volcanoes... |
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| MarzBar | Phone calls and photo shoot | 01/22/2006 09:55 pm |
| OMG! This bit of nastiness has to be completely unexpected by Buffy. Spike could probably tell her a thing or two about the Council of Wankers but it looks like she is going to get a good idea on her own. More story please. |
| Yep. The Council's always been a pain in her butt, but she'll soon find out they can be more than that lol |
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| Robyn | Playing games never ends well... or does it? | 03/29/2006 02:44 pm |
| What a great ending to their games. Very, very glad that she told him the truth of what she wanted. Things will definitely never be boring with those two. |
| Nope. Boring is not in their future. Thanks for reviewing. |
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| Cewcew | Playing games never ends well... or does it? | 01/18/2006 06:03 am |
| His meaty @%#! O my! Yes! they did it, they did it (place scoobie dance here). This is a grate story very original. Cant wait for another update. |
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| gaillee | Playing games never ends well... or does it? | 01/18/2006 02:55 am |
| Love...Love...Love it! Are the games done now? Thanks, super chapter. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Playing games never ends well... or does it? | 01/18/2006 12:44 am |
| Eeeeeeee!! YAAAY! |
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| Robyn | And my sins will be forgiven | 03/29/2006 06:44 am |
| I like that Buffy finally figured things out and is willing to make the first move, but to wait not always a good thing. |
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| MarzBar | And my sins will be forgiven | 01/17/2006 05:49 pm |
| It doesn't seem that Buffy will be able to magically make things right with Spike tomorrow since there seems to be a hit out on her. More story please. |
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| Lou | And my sins will be forgiven | 01/17/2006 03:32 pm |
| You know that's pure torment, don't you??? |
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| gaillee | And my sins will be forgiven | 01/17/2006 09:08 am |
| I hope she isn't setting herself up for a fall by waiting...she always waits. Thanks for the update |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | And my sins will be forgiven | 01/17/2006 08:05 am |
| Well that wasn't much *pouts* pounce him!! ^.^ |
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| Robyn | One too many rejection | 03/28/2006 10:35 pm |
| If anyone ever thought that Buffy was a bitch they need to meet Carlita. Too bad that Spike trying to help Buffy out at the bar backfired in a way neither could ever expect. This story just got interesting in a very unexpected way, hopefully Ben will grow a pair and warn Buffy and Spike. |
| Poor Ben... The guy has been terrorized by his uncle as a child, there's very little chance he'll ever grow a pair lol. |
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| gaillee | One too many rejection | 12/20/2005 06:58 pm |
| Thanks for the intriguing beginning. I love the interaction between Spike and Buffy (except for the continual misunderstanding). I will be watching for updates. (Yah, I suspect Quentin, too!) |
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| ComedyofErrors | One too many rejection | 12/19/2005 04:09 pm |
| Oooh, this has Quentin Travers written all over it. Excellent update. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | One too many rejection | 12/19/2005 07:33 am |
| I hate the stupid dego bitch.... is she going to die a painful death?? *grins hopefully* |
| Believe in karma ;) It's all I can say |
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| MarzBar | One too many rejection | 12/19/2005 06:21 am |
| ACK! Who are the murderers? What exactly did Buffy do or who did she kill? I thought we were going to get a lovely tropical PWP with this story but it appears to be turning into danger and adventure. |
| Is 'danger and adventure' a good thing? I hope so lol. But there won't be too much of it. Just a little to spice things up. I'm keeping this story light and romantic. The other story I'm working on, Please Mrs. Jailer, is pretty angsty and I needed a break from the drama lol So don't expect too much angst in this one. Just enough. |
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| Robyn | Hawaiian Idol | 03/28/2006 10:23 pm |
| Spike always makes life interesting. Loved both of their choice in song. Great chapter. |
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| Spikez_tart | Hawaiian Idol | 03/27/2006 08:18 pm |
| LOL. Not so sure about Buffy's singing - I'm still cringing from SMG's (1st season?) rendition of Macho Man. |
| LOL I completely forgot about that. Good times But let's just say 'Bitch' isn't the kind of song that requires a beautiful voice, so she did all right. Isn't it funny how Buffy is so good at slaying, but she can't do anything else? She can't sing, she can't act, she can't drive, she can't cook... Poor girl! Thanks for your review. |
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| MarzBar | Hawaiian Idol | 12/05/2005 09:44 pm |
| Spike singing in Hawaii! Can't imagine a better vacation than the one Buffy is having. Fun story. |
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| ComedyofErrors | Hawaiian Idol | 12/05/2005 07:45 pm |
| Hilarious and sweet. I'm curious to see what the deal with the Italtian woman is. |
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| Robyn | Trouble in Paradise | 03/28/2006 09:53 pm |
| Spike asking the room service guy his blood type, so funny. I love how easy it is for them to get into a fight. Fun chapter. |
| And you know they just love it. They'd be bored to death and they didn't argue all the time ;) That's also why we love them so much lol. Thanks for all your reviews. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Trouble in Paradise | 12/03/2005 11:45 am |
| Whats wrong with the Princess Diaries?? *bops Spike* Besides the fact it had little to do with the book and the sequel had NOTHING to do with the books.... I still loved them *waves arms and bops him again* LoL
And poor Spike.... *whimpers* but he was being an ass *tsk tsk* |
| Love the Princess Diaries too. But he's a guy, of course he's not gonna admit that he loved it ;) |
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| Robyn | Who needs sun anyway? | 03/28/2006 08:50 pm |
| What a lovely dream and then to come back to her room to see her dream in the flesh. Lucky girl. Loved the ending of this chapter, very fun. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Who needs sun anyway? | 12/01/2005 03:40 am |
| Asshole? Thats a game?? Painful.. |
| You never played Asshole? That was my favorite College 'time wasting' card game. I almost turned into cave Isabel after a while, playing cards and drinking beer lol Gotta love College. Anyway, yes, it's a game |
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| MarzBar | Who needs sun anyway? | 11/30/2005 09:29 pm |
| Droool! She got back to the room before I could get him. I am hoping to get lots more good visuals coming up (pun intended). |
| Aww, sorry. lol Next time, when you hear that Spike is all alone in a hotel room, run faster Thanks for your reviews, and I'll try to give you as much good visual as I can. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Who needs sun anyway? | 11/30/2005 05:34 pm |
| I'm catching up with this fic and giggling like mad. I love your non-bitchy Buffy! Sex on legs. *nods* Yeppers, i agree with that one! |
| I like her too. I like non-bitchy Buffy a lot more than bitchy Buffy, but Buffy wouldn't be Buffy is she wasn't bitchy once in a while, right? Maybe if Spike keeps her sexually satisfied, she'll stay in a good mood? We'll see |
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| ComedyofErrors | Who needs sun anyway? | 11/30/2005 05:07 pm |
| I envy Buffy that view. Whew. |
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| Joyful Dayz | Who needs sun anyway? | 11/30/2005 03:59 pm |
| I read the first three chaps last night, what a great start! And this one, hot! Sex on legs indeed. |
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| Robyn | Slayer, such a lovely word | 03/28/2006 08:40 pm |
| I am very intrigued by the lady that Buffy kept bumping into. I loved Spike's explanation and examples of his use of Slayer and how the one word can mean different things. Great chapter. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Slayer, such a lovely word | 11/30/2005 04:55 am |
| Muahahaha, I got an idea of what he might do by himself.... I wish I could watch *sighs* |
| Right there with ya lol |
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| ComedyofErrors | Slayer, such a lovely word | 11/30/2005 02:38 am |
| If MarzBar isn't available, I'll take care of Spikey.
Hmm. Interesting reaction to Buffy. Could it be this holiday will have more than simple romance? Eagerly waiting to find out. |
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| MarzBar | Slayer, such a lovely word | 11/30/2005 02:23 am |
| Nice beach. I hope it's safe for Buffy to sleep alone on the beach. I volunteer to keep Spike comany in the room while she sun bathes. |
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| Robyn | The longest night | 03/28/2006 07:50 pm |
| This chapter is really good. I love that Spike went to the wrong door, that was so fun. |
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| MarzBar | The longest night | 11/28/2005 12:53 am |
| YUM! Two weeks in Hawaii with Spike! She better get going or the vacation will be over before she knows it. More story please. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | The longest night | 11/27/2005 12:08 am |
| Interrrrresting... |
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| Morrigan | Welcome to Paradise | 08/01/2006 02:44 am |
| Cool story so far. Just one suggestion though... You have different speakers in the same paragraphs in many places, which makes it a little hard to read, because you have to back up and be sure you know who is speaking. It's much easier to read if you always separate the speakers. Please don't take offense though, cause, I'm not knocking you. I made the exact same mistake, when I first started writing and someone had to point that out to me, too. Otherwise, nice story so far. I'm off to read the next chapter. |
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| fallen_angel | Welcome to Paradise | 03/29/2006 04:15 pm |
| canada not so much a bad place if u move south to toronto*my home town*, but for spuffy romance it's gotta be maui! so gonna see spike in a hawaiin shirt?or maybe swim gear? or...*puts on devlish smile and goes to check fic rating* |
| lol you're right, nothing wrong with Canada. Especially since I live in Toronto too. Maybe I could write a fic in which Spike goes to T.O... And end up having to work as a stripper for one night because he ran out of cash. Do we have a strip club for women here? I don't even know. We had one in Montreal. Thanks for your review. |
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| Robyn | Welcome to Paradise | 03/28/2006 07:37 pm |
| This chapter is really cute. I love the exchange so far between Buffy and Spike. |
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| ComedyofErrors | Welcome to Paradise | 11/27/2005 07:25 pm |
| THis is a great begining. Can't wait to see more. |
| Thanks, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the fic. |
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