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| Rock, Paper, Scissors. by Ariel Dawn | | | | B | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 04/06/2006 03:07 pm | That was good, sweet and hot. Nicely written to. Really liked it.
Only tiny tiny critism i have, 'Ya' isn't a word. I could deal with it in the speech (although, i prefer 'yeah' or just 'yes') but it was in the narrative as well, and that was really jarring. Yes should be used in the narrative i think.
It was in there right at the beginning and i nearly stopped reading because i thought if someone used that in narrative they would use other slang and non-words and it'd be badly written. I'm glad i read on because this was good, and that little word was the only issue i had. Thought i'd mention it just as something to think about. | | Ok, I can understand that, and I respect your right to not like how I write things. I use the word Ya. Ya, it's not exactly 'proper' however, I dislike how 'yeah' is spelt to such an extent that I do not use it, if I can help it. Perhaps it's a flaw, I'm ok with it. Thanks for your opinion, and I'm really glad you liked the fic other than that word. | | | | Oracleholly | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/24/2005 08:30 pm | | What a great Christmas prezzie for BTL! Excellent ... I wanna play Rock, Paper, Scissors so Spike can come to my house too. *pouts* | | hmmm, don't we all...can I have Spike wrapped up and under my tree? | | | | redwulf50 | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/23/2005 06:39 pm | Great fic, but I still think Buffy needs a spanking  | | lol wulfie you always think Buffy needs a spanking! | | | | ~*~Tasha~*~ | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/20/2005 10:42 pm | | Loved this one. Always a treat to read your stories!! | | Thanks Tasha! *hugs fellow misfit* | | | | vladt | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/18/2005 08:01 am | | what a lovely christmas present! | | Thanks | | | | kat | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 07:25 pm | | Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet lol love holiday stories | | Glad you like! | | | | MarzBar | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 05:37 pm | | Teeheehee!! Nice snuggly love making and then RAMONES!! Fun story; thank you for sharing BTL's present with us. | | Glad you like! | | | | ComedyofErrors | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 04:30 pm | | Very sweet; love the finale. | | Thanks! | | | | Lou | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 02:27 pm | | I just love a good dose of the old festive feelings! | | Glad you like! | | | | Chanel 5 | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 01:55 pm | Gorgeous - nice and christmassy  | | Thanks | | | | CutieSaiyajin | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 01:38 pm | | Hee, great story. Loved the ending! | | Thanks! | | | | idk5743228 | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 03:43 am | | What a way to spend a cold, snowy christmas evening. Do you think I could get Spike delivered? Merry Christmas, LOL Isabella | | lol, Can I have Spike delivered too? | | | | BloodyTearsOfLife | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 02:15 am | | Oh, I just had to read it again. It was good. *sigh*
And you put it under porn with some plot! *snerk* | | It doens't have 'some' plot? I'll argue it has at least 1/4 of a plot...that's still some | | | | redwulf50 | Rock, Paper, Scissors. | 12/16/2005 01:19 am | | LMAO, poor Spike, Poor Joyce, Evil Buffy, she needs a spanking :-> | | You always think that Buffy needs a spanking wulfie! | | |
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