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| Strip Snap by Lilachigh |
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| BerMH | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/29/2006 02:50 am |
| Ooh! Intriguing! I can't wait to find out how everyone's going to deal with this one. |
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| Robyn | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/21/2006 01:56 am |
Great update. I loved that Buffy managed to get Anya to close the store.  I am really looking forward to what discoveries Buffy makes with having two parts of Spike side by side. |
| Yes, 2 Spikes! Always a good idea. |
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| Lou | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/17/2006 02:16 pm |
| Neato! Excellent idea. |
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| Verda | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/17/2006 05:43 am |
| That is so bad, just leaving us with that cliffhanger. Please update as soon as you can, I'm jumping out of my skin here. This is so good. Soon Please!!! |
Hi Verda, hope you don’t mind if I thank you for all your great reviews in one go! I can’t thank you enough for having the time and patience to read the whole of Strip Snap in one go! it took you hours! So pleased you enjoyed it so much. It really helps when a new reader comes to my fiction. I thought all the comments you made were good and interesting. The Aurelian problem is one I am going to have to resolve very soon!
Do let me know if you find any of my other work of interest. Cousin Arabella is funny with a villain who has won awards for best demon. Never Alone is a finished piece which people seemed to like.
Splinters is also finished and the first fic I ever wrote, so be kind to that one.
Whatever, even if you never read another fic of mine, thank you so much for making my day today! |
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| L | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/15/2006 07:44 am |
| Yes,you've updated! Like the path it's going. Really enjoy your work. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/15/2006 02:42 am |
| Meanie. FANTASTIC chapter, btw. I love this twist you have going!! |
| Thanks for kind words. Glad you’re enjoying the story. |
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| Irina | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/14/2006 11:26 pm |
Whoa! What an exciting new development, gotta say I didn't see that twist coming. I can't wait to find out what happens now that Spike and William are both in the mix. Fantastic chapter!  |
| Thank you so much for kind words. I was keen to get the three of them in one story! |
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| vladt | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/14/2006 07:52 pm |
| excelleent read, thank you. |
| Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/14/2006 05:48 pm |
| Great! I was just wishing the other day for some more Strip Snap and the Wish demon must have heard me. |
| Glad you’re pleased. Most of the other people who asked for another chapter seem to have deserted me! Which makes you wonder if they hated the chapter or never saw it in the first place! |
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| kim | Chp 19 Fighting Desire | 07/14/2006 01:57 pm |
Oh, geeze...she really is insane. That was an incredibly stupid risk. Buffy can be such a bitch.
I feel so sorry for William...no one's wanting him here, and barely giving him any consideration, and he's been nothing but decent. |
| I feel she has suddenly realised exactly what she is facing and although she is fond of ‘William’ she needs ‘Spike’. Of course, what she doesn’t understand is that they are the same person! let’s hope she does soon. Thank you for reviewing. |
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| Verda | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 07/17/2006 05:31 am |
| Present day Aurelians means Spike too! Don't care about Angel. Can't wait to see where this is going. Really great story. |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 06/01/2006 08:11 am |
| Woo Hoo! More Strip Snap! I'm still loving this story, in fact I went back and read the whole thing again and loved it again. Can't wait for more. |
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| Cewcew | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/27/2006 11:08 am |
| This story is superb! I hope they'll be another update soon. |
| Sorry for delay in replying. E mail problems at my end. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated. |
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| Irina | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/20/2006 03:34 am |
| Great flashback. Willow was so cute in this chapter. I loved the new exciting info Willow gave Buffy and William. Can't wait to find out how they get around the fact that William is an Aurelian. Fantastic update! |
| Many thanks for review. Yes,William’s future is going to be a difficiult hurdle for Buffy to cope with. |
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| Robyn | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/20/2006 01:31 am |
| Lots of embarrassment and lots of information, I love how Willow tried to explain what she found without going into certain details. I also like how she admitted, very quickly, that Anya was right, that must be a first. I really enjoyed the update, thanks. |
| Glad you’re enjoying it. Hope to post next chapter soon. |
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| Isabel | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 11:35 pm |
| This story is getting better and better. Good job! |
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| slaymesoftly | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 05:47 pm |
| Ah ha! I thought that's where that was going? LOL Three times, right? Next chapter should be fun to write... |
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| Lou | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 05:33 pm |
| It's going to be spontaneous combustion at this rate!! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 05:13 pm |
| Great story, L. I really love the old England/priest stuff, not to mention bringing the Master of 'Oreos' back. Excellent. |
| Thanks for review. Glad you liked it. |
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| Caro Mio | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 04:48 pm |
| I noticed that, but I figure you have a good explanation coming for how Spike's going to come out 'alive'. I'm sure one of them will pick up on it any time now... |
| I do hope so! Runs away to check notes! |
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| Pin | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 12:45 pm |
| Are they forgetting that Spike is an Aurelian? Great chapter, looking forward to more. |
| Well done! You are the first person on any site to pick this up - or at least mention it! Big part of next chpt. |
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| Karyn | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 12:27 pm |
| excellent update, you did very well with bringing it together...not sure but i think your chapter labels are messed up, went from chapter 17 to 20. |
| Thanks for reviewing and double thanks for pointing out the chpt problem. Will try and sort it. |
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| Shadow | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 11:45 am |
ookay if Buffy wont have sex with him... I WILL! *volunteers*
great chapter! |
| Tut, tut, Shadow, form an orderly line please! |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 18 Charms and Thralls | 05/19/2006 10:41 am |
| Man, I kept watching the scrollbar to see how much of this I still had left as I was reading. And now I'm at the end. Get what I'm saying? *looks hopeful* |
| Picks self up from floor and whimpers, “can‘t write another chp today” and begs for mercy. |
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| Verda | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 07/17/2006 05:17 am |
| This is so scary, to think what might be happening to them. Going to the next chapter now. Great chapter. |
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| vladt | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 05/19/2006 09:49 pm |
| fine chapter. thanks for the great read. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 05/19/2006 05:07 pm |
| She didn‘t want any more discussion - that's the way Buffy. Love the Anya charcterization and the cliffhanger. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 05/19/2006 10:31 am |
| Damn, I only have one chapter left. *pouts* I LOVE the way you are twisting the charm around!! |
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| Lou | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/22/2006 10:20 am |
| Good job with the mystical! |
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| vladt | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/19/2006 07:13 pm |
| fantastic update and evil cliffie. nice job. loved it. thanks for the fun read. |
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| Cordykitten | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/12/2006 04:46 pm |
| The Old returns.. Oh yeah.. William knows what kind of help Buffy needs ;-) Yet it seems to be important, part of the what was written. Yes it is, and it is happening. Uh-huh.. Willow discovered something important! And maybe deadly? Looking forward to the next part |
| Thank you for reviewing. Glad you’re having fun with the story. |
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| Dirktavian | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/12/2006 01:44 am |
| Wonderful story! I love where this is going-- and now poncy William is getting all growly and possessive-- yummy! Can't wait for your next update. |
| thank you for reviewing and apologies for not replying sooner. Glad you are enjoying the story. Hope to update very soon. |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/11/2006 09:12 am |
| Woo Hoo! More Strip Snap! I have to admit that this is my favorite of all your wonderful fics. For some reason I'm just in love with William. Please don't leave me in agony for long with the evil cliff hanger. ;P |
| I like William too. Will try and update soon. Promise! |
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| MarzBar | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 11:58 pm |
| Hmmm. Buffy and William in a never-ending porn dream. |
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| Robyn | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 11:19 pm |
It was so lovely to see an update to this story, and I was enjoying it so much, but then 'the cliff-hanger', and all I could think is this evil web that draws us in and then traps us with 'the cliff-hanger'. Sorry in bit of an odd mood . But really thoroughly enjoyed this, I loved that Buffy figured out that what is happening between her and William is a part of the spell, and I really am curious with what information Willow discovered, and what the Demon Fire does to the Slayer. I am really looking forward to your next update. 
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| thanks for review. cliff-hanger was more from exhaustion than being nasty! Hope to update very soon. Much appreciated. |
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| Irina | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 09:51 pm |
| Whoa! Things are getting really exciting. Can't wait to find out what Willow discovered. Great update! |
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| slaymesoftly | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 08:06 pm |
| Which is?????LOL Evil cliffhanger woman! Was behind by two chapters - I don't know how that happened, but now I'm all caught up and eager for more. |
| Thanks for kind words. Sorry for delay in replying. Got caught up with LJ work! Hope to update very soon. |
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| Karyn | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 06:33 pm |
| oh no!! *bites nails* this just keeps getting worse...and better at the same time..*smirk* |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 05:53 pm |
I believe I ‘helped’ last night in the cemetery, did I not?”
Yes, William, you were a big help. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 05:06 pm |
| Good story.I decided to check this out,but I didn't know it was you.I checked your profile.Poor Spike as William.I hope the charm wears off.I'm going to check it again in a few minutes.I can't tell you're British.You can usually tell.(The thing that bothers me is American characters calling their mothers "Mum".)Update soon. |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 17 Passion Burns | 04/10/2006 04:59 pm |
oh shit????? I see you joined cliffhangers are us
Damn good chappie |
| I like cliff hangers! Especially when you’re not sure of the next sentence! |
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| Verda | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 07/17/2006 05:04 am |
| Oh great, the masters going to rise again! Just what she needw now and without Spike to watch her back. William maybe a good fighter but he lacks the passion and experience that Spike has. This is getting better all the time. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 05/19/2006 05:02 pm |
Poor buffy, everyone is pulling on her - if she's with Spike, Dawn's mad, if she's at work, Spike's not happy. Willow is never happy.
He was dust, dusty bits of dusty dust. LOL Sounds like my house. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 05/19/2006 10:25 am |
| uh oh! You've thrown something else into the mix. Love it. |
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| vladt | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 04/19/2006 06:55 pm |
| so glad i final follow my not to catch up on this fine fic. buffy is in love with spikeand in lust with william. her friends are,as usual, not. and the master is on his way back. fantastic snd wonderfully told. thanks |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 04/10/2006 05:44 pm |
| Excellent Bitiness. Can't wait to see where you go with the Return of the Master of the "Oreos" line. |
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| Irina | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/03/2006 11:13 am |
| I was reading and reviewing on a different site. Just caught up with story again, and i'm really enjoying how the plot is unfolding. Great chapter! |
| Thanks for review. Glad you’re with me again. Sorry for delay in replying. |
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| Lou | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/03/2006 03:40 am |
| Ahhh - the Master. It'll be great to see him again after all this time! |
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| katakata | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/03/2006 01:10 am |
| Wow what a rollercoaster of a ride! I'm loving this William - soul of a poet (I don't buy the whole 'but he's soulless' thingy) and the heart of a warrior most definitely. And oh soooo possessive...lovely ~eyes glaze over at the thought~ So old Bat-face might be making an appearance huh? Well since Buffy's already killed him twice, and with Spike/William fighting in her corner too, I have every confidence she can go for her third time. I hear that's the charm, LOL. Looking forward to your next instalment. |
| Glad you’re enjoying this story of mine. I love writing it, especially William. I’m looking forward to his meeting with the Master! Hope you are too. |
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| Robyn | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/02/2006 11:41 pm |
| I have really enjoyed what you have done with this story so far, I love that you had Buffy actually stop the denial and realize that she loves Spike. I also like that you had William ask Buffy about how important her friends approval was in comparison to her feelings, and you had Willow state why Dawn might be clingy. |
| Thanks for kind review. I’ve always thought that although Dawn very whiny, there is a good reason behind it which is never really explored. |
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| Karyn | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/02/2006 05:34 pm |
| great update..ohhhh the Master... and damn Buffy and her denial anyway! lol |
| Yes, she certainly is having problems at the moment. |
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| MarzBar | Chp 16 Demon Fire | 03/02/2006 04:20 pm |
| Yikes! That fat old git coming back? I hope Buffy gets over herself and her supposed friends' opinions soon enough so that Spike/William can help her. More story please. |
| Don’t remember him being fat. He always freaked Buffy out, more than most of the vamps she fought. |
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| Verda | Chp 15 Like ice | 07/17/2006 04:42 am |
| Will she ever learn? Very disappointing, she'd rather be without the man that she loved then admit to her friends that she loves him. Fire pretty, pretty cold that is! Another great chapter. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 15 Like ice | 05/19/2006 04:56 pm |
| We haven’t got time - little coward - or is Buffy falling in love with William, too? Hmm. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 15 Like ice | 05/19/2006 10:20 am |
| I like what you did with Spike's dad. It builds even more character for 'Spike'! *rushes off to read the next chap* It feels like xmas! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 15 Like ice | 04/10/2006 05:37 pm |
| This raises an interesting question. Spike "wants" Buffy like crazy, but what exactly would he do with her if he got her? |
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| Karyn | Chp 15 Like ice | 02/21/2006 01:18 pm |
| not sure if i reviewed this elsewhere or not, but wanted to say great chapter, and what an evil cliffie..lol..can't wait to see what the fire was! |
| Thanks, hope to update very soon. Holiday got in the way! |
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| Lorias | Chp 15 Like ice | 02/07/2006 10:46 pm |
| This was a lot of fun to read. It has a hard edge wrapped in tenderness. I can't wait to read the rest. |
| Thank you for review and apologies for long delay in replying. Holidays got in the way! |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chp 15 Like ice | 02/05/2006 10:09 am |
| I'm missing this fic. are you stuck on it? |
| Not so much stuck as was on holiday. I’ve 2 mor stories to update before I get to this one again. Sorry! But it will be worth it in the end. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 15 Like ice | 01/27/2006 06:30 am |
| Great story LH. This is really good William stuff. Most stories make him out to be a sap. |
| Thank you, yes, i can never understand that. William was a Victorian gentleman - they wrote poetry and conquered a great part of the known world! |
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| Lou | Chp 15 Like ice | 01/27/2006 05:04 am |
| Come on, Buffy, get a grip. You're like a big jelly!!! |
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| April | Chp 15 Like ice | 01/26/2006 10:47 pm |
| I love this story & was so glad to find it on here after BSC got taken dwn. I can't wait for more!!! PLease update soon!!! |
| Thank you for reviewing. There might be a little pause as I’m off on holiday next week! Sorry. |
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| gaillee | Chp 15 Like ice | 01/26/2006 08:15 pm |
| How typically Buffy...afraid her friends would know of their relationship. I will be watching to see how it changes in this. Ice? |
| Yes, an icy fire. Could lead them anywhere. I’m quite keen to see where, too! |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 15 Like ice | 01/26/2006 05:47 pm |
| Great new chapter!!! Poor Buffy. Always soooo worried about what everyone else will think. *sighs* Thank you for this NEW chapter!! |
| It’s all the rejection bit with her, isn’t it? Glad you liked the chp. |
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| Verda | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 07/17/2006 04:29 am |
| If she let herself she would see that she does love William as well, he's apart of Spike, the sweet romantic, protect all that he loves guy. Hope that he gets to meet Giles, a fellow contryman. Great chapter. |
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| Isabel | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 05/19/2006 10:42 pm |
| I like William, but... Spike is Spike. Know what I mean? She has to find a way to bring him back, no matter how sorry I feel for William. But I'm guessing he'll just go back to his time, so it's not like it will kill him or make him vanish into oblivion. So it's not so bad. I'm so glad Buffy finally accepted that she loves Spike. Now, if she could just love his William side too, Spike will come back. Sorry I haven't reviewed this before, I'm way behind on this story. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 05/19/2006 04:52 pm |
| shunned by her friends, shut out from the support and affection that had given her a semblance of normality - this is the best explanation I've heard about why Buffy doesn't just tell her goof ball friends. She really must not trust them (or anybody?) to love her enough to accept when she does things they don't approve of. That's really sad. Love the story, Lilac. |
| Thank you for review. Yes, I’ve always felt that she hangs onto her friends respect as a sort of comfort blanket. Right from Episode One - why choose Xander and Willow from everyone else at school? Because they like her. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 05/19/2006 10:16 am |
| Yeah, she's admitted it! I love the conflict you've built up here. So awesome! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 04/10/2006 05:31 pm |
| Silly girl. Of course you love William, too. Buffy can be so stupid. Great stuff where William calls her on the carpet for keeping her affair with Spike and with him a secret. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 01/26/2006 05:44 pm |
| The next one is new, right? |
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| Lou | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 01/19/2006 11:49 pm |
| Hey she's admitted they love each other out loud - that's got to do the trick. |
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| MarzBar | Chp 14 Never Ever Work | 01/19/2006 10:07 pm |
| Oy vey! Buffy still lets other people tell her, the Chosen One, the one with super powers, how to live her life. She is so annoying. |
| She can’t stand the thought of rejection. I always feel that Buffy, deep down, believes people only like her because she’s the Slayer. |
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| Verda | Chp 13 One Little Word | 07/17/2006 04:12 am |
| At least William doesn't love her so she's not hurting him like I thought she would. Leave it to Anya to get the sex part right! Always like Anya. Haven't they had sex more than three times already? Oh, reread the spell and I missed that she had to acknowledge that she loved Spike, which she only now admitted that she did. Very good. Xanders going to have a cow! Really great fic. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 13 One Little Word | 05/19/2006 10:12 am |
| The toes lines were classic! I know I've already read this chap but it's so nice going through and re-reading! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 13 One Little Word | 04/10/2006 05:25 pm |
Buffy has got to make love to William. And want to. Three times!”
Please, Buffy, force yourself. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chp 13 One Little Word | 01/11/2006 11:01 pm |
| Great chapter. I hope that Buffy wises up and apologizes to William. I hope that she tells her friends how she feels for Spike. Look forward to more. |
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| Lou | Chp 13 One Little Word | 01/11/2006 10:53 pm |
| Make love to William three times? That's some chore! |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chp 13 One Little Word | 01/11/2006 08:35 pm |
| Oooh, now Buffy's managed to hurt William. I hope she wises up immediately! |
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| Verda | Chp 12 One Solution | 07/17/2006 03:51 am |
| That's a fine kettle of fish she's gottin' herself into. Dawn likes William too and now what? Can't wait to get to the next page. Wonderful. Thank you for the fine read. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chp 12 One Solution | 05/19/2006 10:07 am |
| I love this fic! And I'm glad I held off on reading the updates because now I have MORE chappies to read!! I love how sweet Dawn was about this. Poor Buffy, so conflicted. |
| Glad you’re enjoying it. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 12 One Solution | 04/10/2006 05:19 pm |
| Buffy Buffy Buffy - you're going to get caught and the whole gang is going to know you've been doing the naughty with Spike. I hope. Heh heh. |
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| Carmie | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/09/2006 06:19 am |
| You can't leave us there! More! Please!
Please... |
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| vladt | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/08/2006 07:25 am |
| great chapter. love the ending. thanks |
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| akarinacj | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/08/2006 02:57 am |
| What, What???? You just left it there? Spike...she was looking at Spike? You´re Evil...:-)) Wow, can´t wait to read more. Please update soon. |
| Thanks for review. Glad you’re enjoying it. Yes, i am Evil. Bite me! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/07/2006 11:28 pm |
| very interesting. Look forward to the next chapter |
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| Lou | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/07/2006 09:41 pm |
| Heap powerful sex magic! |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 12 One Solution | 01/07/2006 09:18 pm |
| Oh shit poort Buffy :p NOT kick her ass Spike the bloody hypocrite. |
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| Verda | Chp 11 What About Me? | 07/17/2006 03:39 am |
| Very good. I hadn't thought of his desires before. Of course he wants to live. Spike in a bubble bath is just to much! If he does remember, he'll kill her alright! Excellent chapter, intriguing story. Thanks. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 11 What About Me? | 04/10/2006 05:14 pm |
| Boy, William is a fast learner. I bet Cecily wouldn't have been so snippy if she'd had an inkling. Loved the twist where William doesn't want to get sent back to whereverness. How can our heroine get both of them? |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chp 11 What About Me? | 01/03/2006 06:10 am |
| Ooooo ... good chapter! |
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| Lou | Chp 11 What About Me? | 01/01/2006 03:48 am |
| That's a tricky one! This is so much fun. |
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| Carmie | Chp 11 What About Me? | 12/31/2005 09:49 pm |
| Haha! Love it. "He simply can't come back."
Beautiful. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. |
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| Verda | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 07/17/2006 03:22 am |
| His bedroom skills aren't the only thing that he still possess of Spike's, fighting I mean, and loved how he went about introducing himself to everyone and wanting company with another male, she does understand how Victorian men had nothing in common with woman other than sex. Buffy's either going to have to tell everyone about them, which she most certainly will not or break his heart by telling him she can't because he's a vamp. Lovin' this story. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 04/10/2006 05:07 pm |
| ROF - William has nearly as big a mouth as Spike. Great stuff with Xander and William is priceless. |
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| vladt | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 12/29/2005 04:07 am |
| love the story. thanks for the update, but i beg of you, don't let xander and spike become friends. |
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| akarinacj | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 12/28/2005 10:16 pm |
| Funny and interesting story. It will be very interesting too see all the things that will happen to William now and how he´s confussing everybody with his comentaries. I don´t think he´s going to make Buffy´s life very easy right know, he, he. I hope you update soon |
| Thanks for your review. Glad you’re enjoying the story. I hope to update very soon. |
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| Joyful Dayz | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 12/28/2005 01:08 pm |
| I'm addicted to this fic, and've been angsting for another chapter - it was great! I love your William. Can't wait for more. |
| So glad you are enjoying William. He is such fun to write and won’t let Spike back at present! |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 10 Welcome to Sunnydale | 12/28/2005 01:02 am |
| LMAO, can William stake Xander. Freakin awesome chappie |
| glad you enjoyed it, Wulf. I need to write more fast! Perhaps Xander and William will become great friends! |
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| Verda | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 07/17/2006 02:59 am |
| Are you sure an actor owned that property and not Stephen King? It will be a treat to see the world through his eyes as he discovers this new world. I haven't heard the word "congress" used as meaning anything else but a branch of American gov. in a long time. This is so much fun, except for the mud demon, of course. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 04/10/2006 05:00 pm |
| Lilac - I had to review a couple chapters to be reminded of the Spuffy goodness. Love your characterization of William and LOl at his take on the modern world with silver demons. Not sure that ignorant lout Buffy would know the name of the Queen. She'd probably be up on Princess Di, though. |
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| Jerri | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 12/22/2005 04:35 am |
| This is so much fun to read. More please! |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 12/22/2005 12:58 am |
| LMAO, poor William being stuck with that Harlot Buffy Summers |
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| Lou | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 12/21/2005 10:46 pm |
| William is a hoot! Pretty cool the way he was able to manage a quickie like that! |
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| Sara M. | Chp 9 Monsters and demons | 12/21/2005 08:38 pm |
| A plan! LMAO! Great chapter! In a boat! At least William is a gentleman and helped her out. |
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| Verda | Chp 8 Play Time | 07/17/2006 02:40 am |
| Oh William, sex education 101. Buffy's lucky he is a fast study. Now that playtime is over, feeling very sorry for young William, and what's to become of him as he makes the necessary adjustments to his situation. Enjoying this very much. Thank you. |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 8 Play Time | 12/21/2005 01:39 am |
| LMAO, of course Spike will remember everything, right?? Please, Please Damn good chppie |
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| Verda | Chp 7 Down the Rabbit Hole | 07/17/2006 02:19 am |
| This is so interesting. William, but still a vampire and shame on Buffy for corrupting him so quickly. She will make him forget Cecily soon enough. I'm so excited to see what happens next. Thank you for this wonderful story. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 7 Down the Rabbit Hole | 03/10/2006 09:01 pm |
| wow....why am i not surprised that william had that in him?? there's really not so much difference in william and spike at all!! this could get really interesting!!! |
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| Sara M. | Chp 7 Down the Rabbit Hole | 12/19/2005 04:15 am |
| LOL! Wonderful story! I can’t wait to see what happens next! Keep it up! |
| What nice comments. Thank you. I’ll be posting again soon. |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 7 Down the Rabbit Hole | 12/18/2005 10:54 pm |
| LMAO, no matter what happens, lerave it to Buffy to "Come out on top"
Good chappie |
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| Verda | 6 | 07/17/2006 01:54 am |
| Of course he's asleep you little minx! As long as she's good to him, I'll be good to her. Really like this fic, it's quite wonderful. Thank you. |
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| jl1980 | 6 | 03/10/2006 08:57 pm |
| wow....what an admission!! and he's asleep!!!!! is he really, i wonder?? on to the next chapter!! |
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| Joyful Dayz | 6 | 12/18/2005 07:53 pm |
| I'm really enjoying this! Can't wait for more, and for William. I have a soft spot for him. |
| Thanks for kind review. William is just about to appear. Hope you like him in this story. I do! |
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| redwulf50 | 6 | 12/18/2005 01:23 am |
| LOL, Bitch Buffy is in full force till he passes out lol. Damn good chappie |
| Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. Hope you enjoy my take on William. |
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| CopyKween | 6 | 12/17/2005 11:13 pm |
| Caught up on all these chaps today.....and so far I'm really enjoying it! Can't wait to get to the "Willaim" bits hehe. Should be interesting. |
| Glad you’re enjoying it so far. Hope you will continue to do so now I have posted the chp where William appears. |
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| MarzBar | 6 | 12/17/2005 07:33 pm |
| Oh dear, Spike missed the confession. That will give her a chance to start worrying about what her so-called friends that live in her house rent-free and tell her what she must do with her life think about her with Spike. I hope the damage to Spike isn't too bad. Will Buffy feed him? More story please. |
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| Verda | 5 | 07/17/2006 01:34 am |
| She always could be a right bitch when it came to him. Didn't like her much during S5&S6, guess that's why and yet he always is there for her "Love's Bitch". What's a Tazksha demon. Guess I'll be finding out next chapter. Very good chapter. Thank you. |
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| jl1980 | 5 | 03/10/2006 08:55 pm |
| what the heck is a Tazksha???? on to the next chappie to find out!! great update by the way!!! |
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| Verda | 4 | 07/17/2006 01:18 am |
| Wow! what a passionate round one that was! Good thing he checked everything out first. He's beautiful sitting by the fire and remembering his youth. Thank you for the wonderful imagery. Very good chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 4 | 03/10/2006 08:52 pm |
| last line is perfect...that just about sums it up...normal for *them*!! loving this story, so romantic and sweet and perfect... |
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| Verda | 3 | 07/17/2006 12:59 am |
| Can see his muscles rippling under his shirt and the way she's loving what she sees. Hearing of his past is wonderful. Neither of her boyfriend's really went into their's before either and wonderful to see her so relaxed. Very romantic setting except nothing less from Spike. Lovely chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 3 | 03/10/2006 08:50 pm |
| wow...your descriptions are awesome!! you make it feel like you're actually there...if buffy doesn't totally fall for him after all this she's a crazy woman!!! |
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| Always_jbj | 3 | 12/19/2005 09:36 pm |
| Very nice! |
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| Verda | 2 | 07/16/2006 11:44 pm |
| How romantic! So much better than the still warm heart that Angelus gave Dru. That's our Spike, ever the romantic. How could she not love him. Guessing these next few chapters change everything. Very nice chapter, makes me warm inside. |
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| jl1980 | 2 | 03/10/2006 08:47 pm |
| wow....spike is so romantic....i want one!!!! ;) great chappie, i'm as breathless as Buffy!! i want more...so i'm going on to the next chappie!! |
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| Always_jbj | 2 | 12/19/2005 12:00 pm |
| Very sweet! |
| Thank you for review. Hope you enjoy rest of chpts. |
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| Verda | 1 | 07/16/2006 11:31 pm |
| First time reader of your work. Like the rewrite so far. Hope to get caught up tonight. Love B/S, but Spike's my man. Thank you for the read. |
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| jl1980 | 1 | 03/10/2006 08:43 pm |
hmmmm...very interesting start...their conversation is sweet and thought-provoking... buffy's speculations about the following year and what they'll all be doing made me get choked up, knowing how it all turned out  great story by the way |
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| Joyful Dayz | 1 | 01/02/2006 12:00 am |
| Another great chap. I like the flashes of Spike, and that William is becoming assertive. Can't wait to see where you go from here. |
| Thank you for reviewing. Glad you like the story so far. Hope that continues with the next chp |
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| Joyful Dayz | 1 | 12/22/2005 01:40 pm |
| I'm loving this! It's one of the most intruiging stories I've read in a long time. I've never read anything of yours before. I'm off to look for more. |
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| Carmie | 1 | 12/22/2005 05:31 am |
| Love it! Please more! It's Spuffy and funny and all kinds of goodness! |
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| spike_spetslayer | 1 | 12/21/2005 11:27 pm |
| Good story so far...glad to see you posting over here now, lilac...can't wait for the next update! |
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| Always_jbj | 1 | 12/18/2005 07:36 am |
| Very nice start... nice to see them having a real conversation at this point in time. |
| Thank you, and yes, they have such a lot in common but sometimes they don’t bother talking! |
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