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| Where Do I Stand? by Thianna |
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| Emilee | 27 - Carnival in Town | 07/12/2006 07:56 am |
| I was hesitant about reading this at first, but WOW! This is an amazing read. The first person veiwpoint is refreshing, and I like that it's the POV of a souless demon. The plot is unique and the story is well written. I actually care about the characters. I can't wait for the next addition. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 27 - Carnival in Town | 07/07/2006 07:54 pm |
| awwwwwwwww baby ripper |
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| vladt | 27 - Carnival in Town | 07/07/2006 02:08 pm |
| enjoyed nine year old giles. very good update to a fascinating tale. thank you. |
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| MarzBar | 27 - Carnival in Town | 07/07/2006 12:33 pm |
| This story gets more and more intriguing as we get closer to our time. I hope meeting Giles helps them later on down the road. More story please. |
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| jl1980 | 27 - Carnival in Town | 07/07/2006 07:17 am |
that early glimpse of giles was great...and the hooded man is just creepy..guess he's supposed to be though, eh? another great update, can't wait for more  |
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| vladt | 26 - But He Was Older | 06/14/2006 12:18 am |
| great read. and you let spike change the subject "... to cleanse ... to change." your as good at change the subject as spike. thanks for the fun read. |
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| jl1980 | 26 - But He Was Older | 06/11/2006 10:06 pm |
awww..how very sweet...and also very hot  ... wonder how spike could do what he did to the other vamp? excellent update |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 26 - But He Was Older | 06/11/2006 08:33 pm |
| Gawd, Spike is ALWAYS in the friggin mood |
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| sirc | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 06/11/2006 01:13 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thanks |
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| vladt | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 06/02/2006 02:02 pm |
| great chapter, thanks for thefine read. |
| Thank you |
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| hotlipedjen | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 06/01/2006 06:26 am |
| Great story! Am looking forward to more. |
| More to come soon |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:08 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
| Yes he is |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:07 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:07 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:07 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:06 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:06 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 11:06 pm |
| Spike is so whipped.... |
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| jl1980 | 25 - A Night of Ironies | 05/30/2006 10:12 pm |
| whoa...that is kinda ironic at the end there...enjoyed this chapter...intrigued by the markings and all..can't wait for more |
| thanks |
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| vladt | 24 – Cloudy Future | 06/02/2006 02:02 pm |
| good update, great way to end a chapter. thanks for the read. |
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| vladt | 24 – Cloudy Future | 06/02/2006 11:58 am |
| good update, great way to end a chapter. thanks for the read. |
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| SpaceLord | 24 – Cloudy Future | 05/21/2006 02:23 am |
| I don't know...haven't they heard that power corupts....this can't be good |
| Yup ... it's all a mystery right now what's going on... action to come in the next chapter |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 24 – Cloudy Future | 05/20/2006 11:27 pm |
| Eat her! |
| *lol* |
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| jl1980 | 24 – Cloudy Future | 05/20/2006 09:18 pm |
| fascinating..can't wait to see what it all means |
| Thank you. |
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| vladt | 23 - On the Move | 05/21/2006 03:49 pm |
| very good update, not that she told them much about the marks. love the tale, thanks for the read. |
| Thanks for reading. |
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| jl1980 | 23 - On the Move | 05/17/2006 12:25 pm |
| very very interesting....love buffy and spike sparring, always.. can't wait for your next update |
| Thank you so much for all the reviews. |
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| MarzBar | 23 - On the Move | 05/10/2006 11:50 pm |
| Elizabeth passing as a man is a fun idea. Nice they had a little time out from being chased around by the Order. |
| Thanks for the review |
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| vladt | 23 - On the Move | 05/10/2006 06:33 pm |
| good update, but really, really need to know about the marks and the vessel. thanks for the great read. |
| Thanks for reading... yeah, I know it's all mysterious right now |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 23 - On the Move | 05/10/2006 01:14 am |
| *bounces* SMUT SMUT SMUT |
| hehe... |
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| jl1980 | 22 - Sunnydale | 05/17/2006 12:24 pm |
| hmmmm...this is getting more and more fascinating... |
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| vladt | 22 - Sunnydale | 04/30/2006 06:32 pm |
| looking forward to the forging process. thanks for the great read. |
| Thank you for reading. |
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| 2zen2 | 22 - Sunnydale | 04/30/2006 09:57 am |
| Nice work. This story is going to places I never thought of and I can't wait to get there. I love Spike's protectivness of Elizabeth. Keep it coming! |
| Thanks and more stuff to come. |
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| SpaceLord | 22 - Sunnydale | 04/30/2006 04:29 am |
| Well now things are getting more interesting for sure. Can't wait to see what you have planned. |
| Thanks. Hope you'll like it. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 22 - Sunnydale | 04/29/2006 11:34 pm |
| Hey hey, whats all that MEAN? |
| *grins* It means they are important and they have a destiny |
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| MarzBar | 22 - Sunnydale | 04/29/2006 11:22 pm |
| Who or what is capturing Spike and giving him cryptic messages? Are he and Elizabeth meant to be champions for the PTB? More story please. |
| The cloaked figure will come in from time to time and as for being champions, hard to tell right now. Thanks for reading. |
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| jl1980 | 21 - Had to Do | 05/17/2006 12:21 pm |
| so now they're on their own....i'm glad, the others were getting to be a bit much to bear...excellent chapter, goin on to the next now ;) |
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| vladt | 21 - Had to Do | 04/19/2006 12:37 am |
| love the update. why do i anticipate things to be much more difficult for spike? thanks for the fine read. |
| Because I'm an evil author and I do bad things to Spike... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 21 - Had to Do | 04/19/2006 12:14 am |
| Ohhhhhhh, that is soooo SWEET |
| Thank you. |
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| MarzBar | 21 - Had to Do | 04/18/2006 10:26 pm |
| I'm glad he found her but I fear he will wake up to a big pile of dust because Darla or one of the other "family" members will stake her in her sleep. |
| Well they'll be leaving the family now. |
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| jl1980 | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 05/17/2006 12:20 pm |
| no, don't do it, spike!!! find her, take her, and get as far away as you can!!! |
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| 2zen2 | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 11:07 pm |
| Nice flow. I'm very anxious to read the next chapter - very very evil cliffhanger... |
| Thanks.. and thanks to you for helping me out. |
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| vladt | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 06:04 pm |
| very good read. but can't believe spike will break the claim. thanks for the enjoyable read. |
| Thank you. |
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| rayan | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 05:41 pm |
| noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo........dont spike doooont....hehe anyway great chapter |
| Thank you. |
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| Brittany | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 12:59 pm |
| NOOO he said he would never leave her!!!!!!!!!! |
| I know... just trust Spike. |
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| MarzBar | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 11:19 am |
| Oh dear! What does he have to do? What has to happen to break a mating claim? More story please. |
| Thank you. Hope you'll like the next chapter. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long | 04/09/2006 01:23 am |
| NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Just wait and see. |
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| jl1980 | 19 - A First | 05/17/2006 12:17 pm |
| interesting twist on spike's first slayer kill...can't wait to see where this goes from here ;) |
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| vladt | 19 - A First | 03/29/2006 03:23 pm |
| fine chapter. thanks for the read. |
| Thank you. |
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| rayan | 19 - A First | 03/29/2006 10:07 am |
| good chapter...still loving this story |
| Thank you. |
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| MarzBar | 19 - A First | 03/29/2006 03:31 am |
| Interesting take on the first Slayer kill. I hope Elizabeth finds a way to live with this curse. More story please. |
| Thank you. Well with Spike's help she'll try to find her purpose in the world. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 19 - A First | 03/29/2006 01:25 am |
| Ohhhh, yay, happy spuffyness again |
| ^_^ will try for more later on. |
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| jl1980 | 18 - A Secret | 05/17/2006 12:16 pm |
| china, huh?? hmm...another slayer sighting, perhaps? so spike is gradually making concessions for her, because of her soul...getting better and better |
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| MarzBar | 18 - A Secret | 03/22/2006 12:03 am |
| Are Spike and Sera on their way to Spike's firs Slayer kill? BTW, you did not inform us who hired this amateur spell caster to curse Sera. More story please. |
| ^_^ Well Sera's curse was because of the PTB. |
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| vladt | 18 - A Secret | 03/21/2006 03:17 pm |
| nothing ever goes easily for spike. if he doesn't muck it up, someone does it for him. good update. thanks |
| Thanks. Yup, poor Spike and this is just the beginning... |
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| rayan | 18 - A Secret | 03/21/2006 11:07 am |
| good chapter..i like the whole idea of spike doing anything for her even without his soul....looks like the adventure is just about to start kiddies ....china here we come....anyway god job....keep em comin´ |
| Thank you. Yup, Spike loves her that much, though we'll see how he'll be able to take. |
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| Brittany | 18 - A Secret | 03/21/2006 05:25 am |
| AWW TEAR JERKER MUCH!?!?!?! i absolutly LOVE this story!!!! i feel so bad for spike! |
| Thank you so much. I'm glad that you're liking this story so far. Thanks for the review. |
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| SpaceLord | 18 - A Secret | 03/21/2006 02:54 am |
| Yay going to china |
| =^_^= |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 18 - A Secret | 03/21/2006 12:43 am |
| yay! lots of yummy chinese food! LMAO |
| LOL... that's one way to look at it. You made my day with this review. |
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| jl1980 | 17 - Open Up | 05/17/2006 12:13 pm |
| wow....so she's got her soul back...this should make things a whole lot more interesting...but now they really need to get far away from the others or it could get really bad |
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| rayan | 17 - Open Up | 03/17/2006 12:59 pm |
| bloody genius ...thats your name...real good story...how will the blonde couple make it?..and what does faith have in store for them...and who cursed the lovely sera??? all questions itching to be answered....and that you will...wont you!....good to know thank a bunch....*giggles* |
| *blushes* Thank you. Nice to know readers like you are liking this story. Our blonde couple will be going through a lot in the upcoming chapters |
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| vladt | 17 - Open Up | 03/14/2006 02:07 pm |
| fine read. and an excellent question at the last. who? angel? thanks for the read. |
| Thank you. |
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| MarzBar | 17 - Open Up | 03/14/2006 09:57 am |
| Did the Gypsy curse miss Angelus and hit Sera instead? More story please. |
| Sera being cursed with a soul was originally supposed to be because of the gypsies.. but now it's because of someone else. |
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| SpaceLord | 17 - Open Up | 03/14/2006 03:30 am |
| Hmm so who stuck a soul in her? |
| Let's just say, it was a somewhat unwilling party. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 17 - Open Up | 03/13/2006 11:11 pm |
| Whoever it was must die! |
| What if they can't be killed? |
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| jl1980 | 16 - Painting | 05/17/2006 12:10 pm |
darla's motives may be selfish, but i love her in this chapter....so glad she helped them...poor spike....  |
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| SpaceLord | 16 - Painting | 03/07/2006 02:27 am |
| Hmm are we going to find out what the PTB's want with them? It was stated in the summary about that so I'm just wondering when that will come into play and how. Nice chapter can't wait to read more. |
| Thanks. the next chapter should reveal what the PTB will have in mind, though things might be cryptic in their eyes. |
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| vladt | 16 - Painting | 03/07/2006 12:22 am |
| dru bringing darla to spike's aid? what a twist. i'm certain the reason will not be pleasant for spike. great read, thanks |
| Thanks. As for the reason... actually it won't be that bad for Spike. |
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| MarzBar | 16 - Painting | 03/06/2006 11:34 pm |
| Hard to imagine that Spike and Sera were saved by Darla. Drusilla is still nuts and no help to anybody at all. More story please. |
| Yeah, Darla is a bit maternal here... though there is something that's driving her to be protective of Spike and Sera |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 16 - Painting | 03/06/2006 09:54 pm |
| ooohhhh grrrrr, i hope Angelus comes to a very painful end!! |
| Haven't thought about it yet, but I'll try to make it fitting... I hope. |
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| jl1980 | 15 - My Angel Mine | 05/17/2006 12:03 pm |
| good for spike!!! fighting him off!! i have a feeling that's not the last of him, but i love spike's defensiveness of his mate! great chapter |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 15 - My Angel Mine | 03/03/2006 11:44 pm |
| Why didn't they dust the poofter??? |
| Because I unfortunately need the poofter for something else... |
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| MarzBar | 15 - My Angel Mine | 03/03/2006 02:44 am |
| Oh dear. What horrible punishment will the Poofter dream up to torture Sera and Spike? |
| Well might have to disappoint you. I want to concentrate on the spuffy so we'll be leaving Angelus for now. |
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| vladt | 15 - My Angel Mine | 03/02/2006 10:57 pm |
| good read. will angelus really leave it there? enjoyed the update. thanks |
| Thanks. Well I guess Angelus should make more of an appearance with the grr argh... but I want to concentrate on the spuffy. |
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| jl1980 | 14 - We Belong | 05/17/2006 12:00 pm |
| oh no....is angelus gonna hurt sera? i need to read more!! you actually had me feeling quite sorry for dru there...but angelus is getting worse and worse great chapter |
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| MarzBar | 14 - We Belong | 02/28/2006 02:33 pm |
| Hmmmm. Was the girl merely a distraction while Angelus and whoever else do what they had in mind for Sera? More story please. |
| ^_^ All I'll say right now is that the girl is pretty significant. |
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| letitia | 14 - We Belong | 02/28/2006 12:03 pm |
| love the update. I so can't wait to find out more. And what a treat to see them with claim marks directly over Dru's. |
| Thanks. Yup... wanted Spike and Sera to belong to each other completely. |
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| SpaceLord | 14 - We Belong | 02/28/2006 03:59 am |
| Nice chapter. An evil cliffy too |
| Thanks. Just a little evil cliffy. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 14 - We Belong | 02/27/2006 10:44 pm |
| Who cares if Dru is being her usual pissy self? And death to Angelus! lol |
| ^_^ I agree 100% |
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| vladt | 14 - We Belong | 02/27/2006 09:50 pm |
| so angelus is plotting! great update. thanks |
| Thanks. just a tiny angelus thing. |
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| jl1980 | 13 - Why Haven't You? | 05/17/2006 11:56 am |
| that was an awesome claiming scene...very well done...good on sera for getting him to do it ;) great chapter |
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| vladt | 13 - Why Haven't You? | 02/21/2006 03:15 pm |
| good mating claim scene, spike needs it. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thanks. yup.. Spike deserves every single kiss and caress. |
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| MarzBar | 13 - Why Haven't You? | 02/21/2006 01:44 am |
| Hmmmm. Spike has a mate. What is Darla up to with the Master? Will they take Sera away from Spike? More story please. |
| Yup.. about time Spike got claimed what he knew was his... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 13 - Why Haven't You? | 02/20/2006 10:11 pm |
| Awww, claimy goodness! |
| About time too. |
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| jl1980 | 12 - Meeting | 05/17/2006 11:54 am |
| the master's got something up his sleeve...i have a feeling that spike's anger over sera is gonna come back to haunt him...more story now |
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| vladt | 12 - Meeting | 02/16/2006 08:46 pm |
| spike's being astute as ever. good update. thanks |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 12 - Meeting | 02/15/2006 10:38 pm |
| Oooo what going to happen? |
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| jl1980 | 11 - Beyond the Family | 05/17/2006 11:51 am |
| i love the dynamic between those two, very sweet for two evil beings...lol...can't wait to see what happens when spike meets the slayer |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 11 - Beyond the Family | 02/11/2006 12:21 pm |
| Dammit Darla! lol |
| yeah.. Darla just loves to follow the Master around. |
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| MarzBar | 11 - Beyond the Family | 02/11/2006 11:22 am |
| Hmmmm. A slayer for Spike so soon? More story please. |
| Hehe... actually.. well... don't want to reveal anything yet. |
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| jl1980 | 10 - End to a Perfect Hunt | 05/17/2006 11:28 am |
| angelus is gonna cause a whole lot more trouble than that, isn't he? i love the sensuality between sera and spike....again, lovely chapter |
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| MarzBar | 10 - End to a Perfect Hunt | 02/07/2006 08:52 am |
| Nice to see Spike and Sera having fun together when they can. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 10 - End to a Perfect Hunt | 02/06/2006 11:33 pm |
| oooo la la |
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| Verda | 9 - Dance | 07/08/2006 01:02 am |
| I don't know why but I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. Good job, great chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 9 - Dance | 05/17/2006 11:25 am |
| oh i hope spike doesn't pay for the "insult" that angelus seems to be taking this as...lovely whimsical sort of chapter...in a horrific sort of way...lol... thanx for writing |
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| letitia | 9 - Dance | 02/06/2006 07:06 am |
| I so wonder what will happen next. I am finding myself always looking at Dru's actions to see if I can figure out what she has forseen. Great update. Love Spike and Sera |
| Thanks. I'm glad that you're liking Spike and Sera and I hope you'll keep on enjoying the fic. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 9 - Dance | 02/05/2006 09:15 pm |
| Heeheehee!! Pissing off Angel is always good! |
| Yup... always good. |
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| Verda | 8 - The Party Goes On | 07/08/2006 12:48 am |
| Does Angelus only feed on the elite and everyone else gets servants? Darla's the head of the clan not him, the wanker. Another great chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 8 - The Party Goes On | 05/17/2006 11:22 am |
| im absolutely aghast..i mean..i know spike was evil, but...man...that was harsh...fascinated though, and reading on |
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| MarzBar | 8 - The Party Goes On | 01/31/2006 11:29 pm |
| Pretty bloody. How will Spike keep Sera from Angelus and Darla and their perversions? |
| Sera is shaping up to be quite a vampire, thankfully she listens to Spike more than the other members of their family. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 8 - The Party Goes On | 01/31/2006 09:26 pm |
| Can we dust Angel and the wenches yet? |
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| Verda | 7 - The Party | 07/08/2006 12:34 am |
| That chapter answered a few questions. Thank you for the wonderful read. |
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| jl1980 | 7 - The Party | 05/17/2006 11:18 am |
| chilling and disturbing and fascinating all at once...excellent chapter |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 7 - The Party | 01/30/2006 09:29 pm |
| Ooooo yummy!! |
| Hopefully will get yummier. |
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| Verda | 6 - Winged Angel | 07/08/2006 12:19 am |
| I guess Angelus, Darla, and Dru are a kinder, gentler group in this story, I keep expecting them to start bitting and riping at her as she would be shared among them. I like the peace between them, it's nice for a change. good chappie. |
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| jl1980 | 6 - Winged Angel | 05/17/2006 11:12 am |
| this is beautifully written, and fascinating to think of buffy in this way...very very good story, though i am just now picking it up again after a long break on to the next chapter |
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| letitia | 6 - Winged Angel | 01/26/2006 09:37 am |
| HUM... Interesting chapter. They are all an interesting bunch of ppl. can't wiat to read more. |
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| MarzBar | 6 - Winged Angel | 01/25/2006 10:38 pm |
| I hope Elizabeth works out for Spike. I'm afraid that her demented sire will make her want Angelus. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 6 - Winged Angel | 01/25/2006 09:35 pm |
| He is such a ponce *sticks out tongue* |
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| Verda | 5 - Always | 07/07/2006 11:58 pm |
| Surprised they didn't torture her, but I guess that's more of Angelus' thing. Good chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 5 - Always | 02/15/2006 10:40 pm |
| very good still, very enthralling, i can't wait to see how the family dynamic will change now with Elizabeth in the mix... loving your story so much |
| Thank you. I'm glad you're liking this story even though it's in Spike first POV. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 5 - Always | 01/24/2006 05:19 pm |
| Ewwww, Dru kisses *gags* |
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| Verda | 4 - Presents | 07/07/2006 11:47 pm |
| To bad that he didn't turn her himself, I guess he'll just have to claim her instead...oooh I hope he does, just love a good claim. Another good chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 4 - Presents | 02/15/2006 10:38 pm |
| oh no!!! I was hoping he would be the one to turn her but maybe it's better this way...crazy Dru, mucking things up!! Well, now you've got me well and truly hooked and i'm on to read more! |
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| ZoeGrace | 4 - Presents | 01/20/2006 05:29 am |
| that's so sweet of dru...in a bizarre twisted way of course lol. |
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| letitia | 4 - Presents | 01/20/2006 05:28 am |
| I hope Dru and Darla get what is coming to them. And why is Elizabeth afraid to meet Spike's eyes? |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 4 - Presents | 01/20/2006 04:24 am |
| stake dru, stake darla!!!! eeeee!! |
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| Verda | 3 - Gentleman | 07/07/2006 11:34 pm |
| So Elizabeth wanted him as well and knows he is something else, something other than human? Horny Elizabeth. Good chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 3 - Gentleman | 02/15/2006 10:36 pm |
| love that last line...perfect...and i love how he seems to be having trouble taking what he wanted, at least in the way that he intended originally...i'm completely intrigued and drawn into this story and moving on to the next chapter now |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 3 - Gentleman | 01/18/2006 09:20 am |
| Oooooo loved that update. Excellent work. I so look forward to more and more and more. {Grins} |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 3 - Gentleman | 01/17/2006 07:58 am |
| LoL, loved the last line!! |
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| Verda | 2 - Comfort | 07/07/2006 11:18 pm |
| If Spike takes Elizebeth, does he has to share her as well? Very good chapter. |
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| jl1980 | 2 - Comfort | 02/15/2006 10:34 pm |
| i like how Spike was with Darla, not letting her intimidate him... but I have a bad feeling about Angelus, he didn't get back at Spike just then, so he's gonna try to use the girl Spike wants against him...on to next update now still great |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 2 - Comfort | 01/03/2006 05:59 am |
| Definitely a fic worth continuing. I look forward to the udpates. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 2 - Comfort | 01/01/2006 05:08 am |
| can we dust Angel again? *nods* and Dru for good measure.... and Darla just cause she has an annoying voice *nods again* |
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| Verda | 1 - My Hope | 07/07/2006 11:08 pm |
| Very beautifully written story. Can't wait to see what style of writing you chose, because writing in the first is very hard to write. Enjoying it very much. |
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| jl1980 | 1 - My Hope | 02/15/2006 10:31 pm |
| very good story so far...you make the reader feel Spike's desperate need for Dru, it almost hurts to read it...very engaging, well-written...like this very much |
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| SpaceLord | 1 - My Hope | 01/31/2006 02:58 am |
| Well nice start but I think I prefer a third person perspective. |
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| margaret | 1 - My Hope | 01/03/2006 07:18 pm |
| like how the story is starting out, pov is fine interesting actually...please write more and it would be great if "elizabeth " could be sired by spike rather than any of the others(imho) thanks |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 1 - My Hope | 12/26/2005 01:27 am |
| In answer to your POV question ... either way is fine. You're doing a pretty good job of writing from Spike's POV. {Smiles} It gives the story a particular slant and air about it that is nice. Writing third person is often much easier to write, but you can still get things in there about how a character feels etc. So, either way is good. Always up to the writer of what they want to do or accomplish with the fic.
The story itself is awesome. I love it. This is already shaping up to be a very interesting one. I look forward to more chapters. |
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| vladt | 1 - My Hope | 12/24/2005 04:43 am |
| love the chapter. spike pov very interesting, and difficult for the writer; third person easier to lead the reader to the mindset you want them to have. from reading other of your works, i know pov doesn't matter, this will be a well written, enjoyable fic. thanks for writting. P.S. this is probably the longest review you will ever receive from me. thanks again |
| Thanks for the review. I know it might be a little difficult but I hope I'll be able to capture Spike's thoughts well. |
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| idk5743228 | 1 - My Hope | 12/23/2005 05:27 pm |
| I love the beginning. I think third person does open the story to more possibilities. However, anyway you write it is going to be great. I can't wait to see where you take it. |
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| bloodshedbaby | 1 - My Hope | 12/23/2005 03:20 pm |
| I'm lazy and third person is easier to write (at least for me) so I'm going to have to say whatever is easiest for you! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 1 - My Hope | 12/23/2005 12:54 pm |
| I don't mind the Spike POV. ^.^ Can't wait to read more. |
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