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| Gathering Loose Ends by pfeifferpack |
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| Judy | Chapter 53 | 03/20/2006 03:47 am |
| Great fic. What a great way to end W&H. Really loved seeing Angel getting it from the Scoobies. |
Yes, the scoobies needed to have some words with Angel...all the trouble their time with him caused was never addressed. He impacted every one of them and never seemed to stop trying to run everything for everyone even in LA.
Thank you.....K |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 53 | 03/01/2006 06:20 pm |
| ACK!! Did you wait for "Bones" to start so you could end with Angel's 'acting' award?? Nice ending to a long story which I had to re-read since I couldn't remember enough of the beginning to enjoy the finale. Thank you for sharing. |
Thank you! No I didn't wait for Bones but it did cause me to make the charcter an FBI agent...I was going to be vague but it was too perfect to pass up.
Don't know if I should be sorry you had to reread *G*...genuinely appreciate your taking the time though. I never expected it to take this long that's for sure.
K |
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| Diabola | Chapter 53 | 03/01/2006 05:50 pm |
Absolutely loved the line about Cordy. Made me cry actually. She would have loved that. *sniff*
Great story and good work at wrapping everything up nicely. Usually I prefere to see Angel put down in the end, but I liked how you managed to get a few digs in even while giving him what he desired.
Yup, liked the whole thing very much. Can't wait to see what you come up with next... ;-) |
Thank you! I thought it was appropriate especially since Cordy wanted to be a star so badly.
Just think the mess Angel will make of his new chance with his career choice...he'll pave his own way to hell eventually *G*.
K |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 53 | 03/01/2006 04:30 pm |
| Good ending.I'm surprised that Angel became an actor. |
Angel was always quite the liar and that "skill" would help him in Hollywood *giggle*. Thank you.
K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 53 | 03/01/2006 04:27 pm |
| arrrrggghhhh, great chappie, but my eyes, my eyes Angel won an emmy *pokes out eyes with a spoon* |
| Yes but that isn't usually given to real talent anyway *G*. Thanks. K |
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| maryperk | Chapter 53 | 03/01/2006 04:27 pm |
| Great chappy!! Nice ending. |
| Thank you! K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 52 | 02/28/2006 05:49 pm |
| Damn good chappie, Drusilla I presume?? |
Thank you! Hum, not too much of a cliffhanger huh? I am tying up loose ends here so that's a good guess. Hope you enjoy Spike's solution and also how I handle your favorite boy, Angel (nope...no dusting, sorry, although I did try to at least cut off his metaphorical balls to a degree).
Thanks again.
K |
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| DeanSamWinchewterfan | Chapter 52 | 02/28/2006 05:22 pm |
| Good chapter.I like this story, and I wonder who Spike's going to meet.Is it Dru?Update soon. |
Thank you! THe last chapter will be up as soon as my Beta gets it back to me...maybe tonight or tomorrow at the latest. Hum.....well, we haven't heard from Dru that is true...tune in to see. K
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| maryperk | Chapter 52 | 02/28/2006 05:00 pm |
| Nice chappy. Do I see a visit from Dru to stir up some trouble? |
| ...:::snort:::... since Dru is one of the few characters I haven't "tied up" its a good guess. Next chapter is the last and it may make it up tonight or tomorrow at the latest. Thanks, K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 51 | 02/25/2006 11:44 pm |
LMAO, Lindsey and Lilah  |
Seemed a fitting hell for them both. I just sent the last two chapters of this to my Beta so I hope to have it completed very soon.
Thanks for all the lovely feedback.
K |
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| maryperk | Chapter 51 | 02/05/2006 08:20 pm |
| Great story. Loved it. Hope to see more. |
| Thank you...final bits coming as soon as I finish the one that's overdue for a community on LJ (What You Wished For was supposed to be finished by January 31!). RL got crazy. K |
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| Kat | Chapter 51 | 12/31/2005 03:47 am |
| Amazing. perfect ending to a perfect chapter. love it all so very much. hmmmm i cannot wait to see what god old weasley needs to tell the vamp boys. |
| You won't have too long to wait. Barring disaster, I plan to have this story completed by the end of January.
K |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 51 | 12/30/2005 09:19 pm |
| Please update really fast.Good story. |
| Thank you. I plan to have it completed by the end of January (barring RL interruptions). K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 50 | 02/25/2006 11:39 pm |
| Ya know I still hate Angel, right?? Great chappie |
| You wouldn't be you if you ever liked Angel. Thanks. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 49 | 02/25/2006 11:33 pm |
| freaking sell out dust him please |
| Not necessary, I have a different plan for the boy. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 48 | 02/25/2006 11:28 pm |
| LOL, yep Angel is evil |
| He really is you know. That is his real struggle, fighting his true self. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 47 | 02/25/2006 11:22 pm |
| Damn I think Buffy dropped her clue |
| She'll pick it up. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 46 | 02/25/2006 11:14 pm |
| Oh yeah I'm loving it |
| SO glad. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 45 | 02/25/2006 11:10 pm |
yeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssss dust Angel
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| You have a cute one track mind LOL. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 44 | 02/25/2006 11:05 pm |
| The bad thing is I believe the Wolf may actualy be in charge of our polotics |
| It felt a bit too real to me too. Gaaaahhhhh. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 43 | 02/25/2006 10:59 pm |
| LOL, Spike fan that I am him having a plan worries me too |
| Yup, never works too well for him, good thing he thinks well on his feet. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 41 | 02/25/2006 10:41 pm |
| Whose afraid of the Big Bad Wolf *Snickers* |
| There's some truth in those old stories you know. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 38 | 02/25/2006 10:26 pm |
| C'mon 38 chappies already I need to see a beat down |
| Its comin. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 35 | 02/25/2006 10:13 pm |
| oh yeah you beks the ass whooping will soon commence |
| Needs to be done. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 34 | 02/25/2006 10:10 pm |
| That was evil |
| My middle name....evil. K |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 34 | 12/31/2005 05:36 am |
| Hmm love the story so far but to be honest this chapter does not feel in line with what Spike said and did in the previous chapters. Why would 3 stupid minions be able to overpower him? Why is he not using any of his special weapons and why is he not going for a quick kill when faced with opponents? I mean it has been established earlier that alot rides on this, the fight of a lifetime and yet he's just fuckin around. Don't particularly like the hollywood crap about fighting and stuff. Just feels really stupid, like the idiots in horror flicks going to check something out even tho they know killers are around. Just makes my skin crawl about how stupid this makes Spike really look. It's like he suddenly forgot why he's there and thought it was just another bar brawl in Sunnyhell. I mean he went against four opponents in his training and now all of a sudden he forgets how to fight? Just not very logical or just doesn't feel right. |
| Fight scenes are difficult for me. This was the first story to realy use them with any frequency. I imagined Spike a bit distracted having Buffy in his company for the first time since the Hellmouth. He also broke his first "law" in feeling too confident as well. Those two factors made him vulnerable. Spike is never stupid, but his focus on Buffy can cause him to loose focus. He'll get it back. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 32 | 02/25/2006 09:57 pm |
| and the fight ios own damn I loves it |
| Thanks! K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 31 | 02/25/2006 09:53 pm |
| Ohh Spike hit them with the truth |
| Spike is good at that. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 28 | 02/25/2006 09:33 pm |
| OMG is Angel growing up????? Who would have thunk it |
| Still needs some lessons, but growing a bit. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 25 | 02/25/2006 09:11 pm |
| Oh yeah kill Wobin Hood too I hate him |
| I have a hate on for him too even if I get his Spike hatred....that doesn't excuse his stupidity being played by the FE like that on the show. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 24 | 02/25/2006 09:05 pm |
| Sickem Giles wooo hooooo |
| LOL K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 22 | 02/25/2006 08:52 pm |
| LOL, poor Giles |
| He deserves a bit of sympathy true. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 20 | 02/25/2006 08:40 pm |
| oh yeah I loves it Wesley is a higher power |
| It just seemed fair after his stint with Angel. K |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 17 | 03/03/2006 08:23 am |
| I'm re-reading the whole story until my aunt comes to pick me up.(I'm staying overnight)I like that Xander's attracted to Illyria.I think he's a demon magnet for love.Since I forgot to say some stuff for the last chapter,I love "Bones".I've only seen two episodes because I'm usually watching other shows.I'm a huge Booth/Bones shipper.I also watch "How I Met Your Mother" because of Alyson Hannigan.I started watching for her,but I love the premise.Do you watch "How I Met Your Mother"?I didn't get a chance to see Nicholas Brendan's show though. Start a new story soon. |
So glad you liked it and are even willing to reread it *G*.
I do watch How I Met You Mother when I'm home but don't tape it. Same with Bones. I did watch Kitchen Confidential and it was too good to cancel (poor Nicky!)
Starting new stories this weekend but won't post until Beta'd but lots coming.
Thank you again.
K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 17 | 02/25/2006 08:13 pm |
Illyria simply looked at the human with the eye patch and wondered again at why she had chosen to throw her lot in with such as these.
I hear ya Illy |
| LOL K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 15 | 02/25/2006 07:59 pm |
excellent  |
| Thank you. K |
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| maryperk | Chapter 13 | 02/05/2006 12:53 pm |
| Just had to say that my husband listens to Art Bell on the radio. |
| Tee hee...so does my husband, and me along with him. Nice blend of interesting and whoo whoo. *G* K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 12 | 02/25/2006 07:42 pm |
| LOL, I lovers it |
| Thank you. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 11 | 02/25/2006 07:37 pm |
| You are a very good writer and keep me on the edge of my seat |
| I am SO flattered! I love your stories too so it is a high compliment to have you like mine. Thank you. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 10 | 02/25/2006 07:31 pm |
| Ya damn right, dust the poofter I say |
| But you always want that sweetie! K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 9 | 02/25/2006 07:25 pm |
| oh yeah am still loving this fic |
| Good, glad you still do. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 8 | 02/25/2006 07:18 pm |
| more of the pltty goodness |
| As long as it's good....K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 7 | 02/25/2006 07:11 pm |
| great [plotty goodness |
| I'm plotty mcplot with this one. K |
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| Megan | Chapter 6 | 03/07/2006 05:27 am |
| Tomorrow, it was time to storm the gates of Wolfram & Hart, the Italian edition, and the mighty fortress that was Ilona Costa Bianchi, she of the formidable turrets. |
| :-) K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 6 | 02/25/2006 07:06 pm |
| LOL, great chappie |
| Thanks. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 5 | 02/25/2006 06:59 pm |
| Ok, am still loving it ? |
| I don't know...I hope so. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 4 | 02/25/2006 06:52 pm |
| lol, kill the watcher??? |
| This is a smarter crew...in time. K |
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| Megan | Chapter 3 | 03/07/2006 04:39 am |
| The whopping great breasts! Ain't that the truth. |
| ...:::snort:::... and didn't JM have his eye on them! K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 3 | 02/25/2006 06:44 pm |
| LOL, the Whopping great breats' roflmao |
| That's our Illona, no? K |
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| Megan | Chapter 2 | 03/07/2006 04:31 am |
| Wow, why did I wait this long to read? I love this Willow--and ordinarily I can't stand her! I love that she's finally wrapped ehr ehad around who Spike really is and that everything about his feelings for Buffy were genuine. Wonderful work, Kathleen. |
Thank you. I can see good and evil in most of the charcters and in this story I made the assumption that the hellmouth closure matured most of them.
Kathleen |
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| Delicia | Chapter 2 | 03/02/2006 01:36 am |
Great! It's nice how Willow is treating Spike.
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| I think after what Spike did in Sunnydale they should all have learned to appreciate him more. Thanks. K |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 2 | 02/25/2006 06:41 pm |
| damn I like the plot building and anticipation |
| thank you. K |
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| Megan | Prologue and Chapter 1 | 03/07/2006 02:13 am |
| Oh my! What an incredible start. Some of your one-liners are superb. Looking forward to Spike's re-entry into Scoobiness. |
| Thank you! I so admire your stories, your liking mine is making me giddy! Kathleen |
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| Delicia | Prologue and Chapter 1 | 03/02/2006 01:06 am |
| Wonderful!! I loved the entire prologue and chapter. Especially the Rice-Stoker surname. Hilarious! |
Thank you! I couldn't resist the surname (and could just see Angel trying to stick it on Spike too thinking it would pi$$ him off since Spike was always distainful of the writers of vampire stories).
K |
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| redwulf50 | Prologue and Chapter 1 | 02/25/2006 06:37 pm |
| kool so far |
| thanks... this epic just kept on coming. K |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Prologue and Chapter 1 | 12/30/2005 09:18 pm |
| Good story so far.Please update soon because I want to find out what happens. |
| Thank you! K |
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