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| Cousin Arabella by Lilachigh |
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| JenxGeR | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 02/04/2006 08:10 am |
Gah, Spike was on the verge on killing Arabella, and yet he changed his tune in the car drive back? How weird! At first I thought it was a twist to the story or something, that maybe Arabella was trying to make Buffy admit she loves Spike, but then, guess she's simply a bitch lol.
I still can't imagine canon Buffy having that kind of patience, especially around Arabella. You should know how things turn vicious between us women!
I can't wait to read your sequel  I've always loved reading the works of all the writers of the bsv. Thank you
Jennifer |
Hi and thank you for review. I was trying to convey that to Spike, his arguments with his cousin are just ‘family squabbles’. In this case he is being the perfedt ‘male’ creature and failing to see what is blindingly obvious to the women in his life. Buffy being patient - yes, odd, but then once again, she loves Spike, even if she isn’t quite admitting it and Arabella is his cousin!
Sequel starting tonight. |
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| Kittenuno | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 02/01/2006 03:15 am |
| What a fantastic ending! A hilarious conclusion with sexy undertones for the Spuffy lover....me! Thank you - I adored the deliciously wicked predicament you created for cousin Arabella. She deserved it and more! Look forward to your next tale. |
| Thank you so much for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed ending. Sequel will be posting soon. Called Three for a Secret.... |
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| Irina | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 01/31/2006 10:46 pm |
| Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it. I'll be keeping a lookout for the sequel. |
| Thanks for reviewing. Pleased you liked Arabella. Sequel starting soon. Called Three for a Secret.... |
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| greenhair00 | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 01/31/2006 10:07 pm |
| Great job... but I want to know about those damn puppies!! I'll be looking forward to a sequel. |
| So do I! |
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| MarzBar | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 01/31/2006 07:32 pm |
| You will bring us Arabella II? Glad Spike doesn't take her seriously even if Buffy is still not very good to him. Thanks for the fun story. |
| Thanks for review. Glad you enjoyed Arabella. The sequel will start to be posted soon. Called Three for a Secret.... |
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| jl1980 | Chp 12 Can you make him happy? | 01/31/2006 06:55 pm |
| Wow!! I just have to say this whole story was incredible! I love the ending...because even though I hated Arabella, it would have been kind of sad to have either Spike or Buffy actually kill her....I like that Spike found out the truth about her in the end and chose Buffy over her... I like Arabella's "fate"...lol...and I think you should do a sequel someday!!! Thanks for writing this great story!!! |
| Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed meeting Arabella. Sequel coming soon. Australia will never hold her! It isn’t big enough |
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| greenhair00 | Chp 11 To the death | 01/30/2006 11:57 am |
| Good chapter, as always! |
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| Kittenuno | Chp 11 To the death | 01/29/2006 08:17 pm |
| Wow! Chapter 11 - what a great chapter. Arabella is a real nasty piece of work. I don't think this can end well for her or her hubby. However, girl fight and hot sex - what more can one ask for? Next chapter please!!!! |
| Thank you or reviewing. Yes, Arabella is certainly not a nice girl! But then, she thinks she is! And I’m in love with Div’vid! |
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| jl1980 | Chp 11 To the death | 01/29/2006 02:03 pm |
| I hate Arabella!!! And why can Spike not see through her???? Grrr...men!!!!! I promise, that vamp needs dusting badly!! Cant wait for the next update!!! |
| Thanks for review. Well, men never see through girls like Arabella. That’s life, even when you’re dead. |
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| MarzBar | Chp 11 To the death | 01/29/2006 01:45 pm |
| How long before Spike takes Buffy home? Will he catch on to Arabella in time to save somebody's life or unlife? |
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| MarzBar | Chp 10 Learning Curve | 01/27/2006 06:00 pm |
| Yikes! Evil cliffie leaving Buffy naked and weaponless with the lying vampire bitch. Will Spike get back in time? More story please. |
| Glad you like the story. Updating soon. |
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| greenhair00 | Chp 10 Learning Curve | 01/27/2006 05:38 pm |
| I wish Buffy would just stake that chick and get it over with! Good update!! |
| How can you kill ‘family’ is her problem! |
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| Morrigan | Chp 10 Learning Curve | 01/27/2006 02:24 pm |
| Hmm... Arabella in Spikish attire. I wonder when Spike is going to realize that his cousin is a bitch? |
| Some men never do! |
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| Irina | Chp 10 Learning Curve | 01/27/2006 07:08 am |
| Great chapter. Can't wait for the Buffy/Arabella confrontation. |
| Thanks for review. Fight coming soon, I expect. |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 10 Learning Curve | 01/27/2006 06:43 am |
there was a tiny voice saying, ‘Is this what normal girls do?’
LOL - Only if they get the chance! |
| Oh, I so agree, but Buffy aches to be normal and has done from day one of the series. |
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| greenhair00 | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/23/2006 04:23 am |
| Just found this one and love it! Keep up the good work! |
| So pleased you like it. Writing more in my head at moment, which isn’t so good for the readers! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/22/2006 02:34 am |
| Loved the fighting. Maybe Cousin A should move to Sunnydale? |
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| Morrigan | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/21/2006 12:06 pm |
| Interesting. I wonder when Spike is going to see his cousin for what she really is? |
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| Irina | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/21/2006 08:54 am |
| Good update! Interesting confrontation between Buffy and Arabella. Can't wait to read more. |
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| Kittenuno | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/21/2006 06:25 am |
| Great chapter. Men! They are truly, truly blind creatures. Hopefully the blinkers will be removed from Spike's eyes and he will see his cousin for the slutty conniving vamp she truly is. |
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| MarzBar | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/21/2006 05:37 am |
| Spike snores?? Cousin is pretty snarky and I wish Spike and her husband would catch her while she's tormenting Buffy. More story please. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 9 “I Dare You” | 01/21/2006 02:17 am |
| Have I mentioned yet how very much I hate Arabella?? LOL She is such a witch, but she *did* almost get Buffy to admit she loves him, so maybe that's a good thing....still adoring this story...waiting for next chappie |
| Everyone hates her. But she just insists on taking centre stage. So like girls I’ve known! |
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| MarzBar | Chp 8 Sixty Minutes | 01/19/2006 07:33 am |
| Loving this story but . . . EVIL CLIFFIE!! More story please. |
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| Kittenuno | Chp 8 Sixty Minutes | 01/19/2006 01:09 am |
| What a great cliffhanger! How could you leave Buffy in that situation? Love it...love it! Spike's cousin, Arabella and her husband are two fascinating and wacky characters. |
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| Irina | Chp 8 Sixty Minutes | 01/18/2006 07:16 pm |
| I just finished reading all 8 chapters, and i'm really enjoying the story. I look forward to reading more! |
| What a long task! Hope it was worth it. Just posted chp 11 so hope you’ve managed to catch them all. |
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| Morrigan | Chp 7 Just one more Time | 01/16/2006 09:41 am |
| Cool chapter. Like'd the Spike thoughts in this one. Of course, one can never complain about the smut, either. *L* |
| Smut? Well, hot sex, maybe! |
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| Lost in a Jungle | Chp 7 Just one more Time | 01/16/2006 01:31 am |
| Awesome update!
I'm really enjoying this story! |
| pleased you’re pleased. More will be posted very soon. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 6 We’re not together! | 01/15/2006 12:11 am |
| I just wanna tell you again how much I'm loving this story!!! I can't believe i didn't start reading it sooner!! Sounds to me like Arabella's a little loopy, actually...doesn't seem to matter to her who gets killed, she just wants to see some bloodshed...lol...first she's telling Div'vid and Spike to kill each other, then she's telling Spike to kill Buffy, then she's telling Buffy to stop them...they need to dust her...lol anyway, can't wait for the next update!!! |
| Arabella is typical of her type. She changes her mind about what’s best for her from second to second!. We all know girls like that. |
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| Lost in a Jungle | Chp 6 We’re not together! | 01/14/2006 06:32 pm |
| Awesome story, can't wait for more! |
| thank you. More coming soon. |
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| Morrigan | Chp 6 We’re not together! | 01/13/2006 09:44 pm |
| I liked the closing paragraph in this chapter. Leave it to Spike to go all GRRR when he's outnumbered. Haha! |
| anything for a fight, our boy. |
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| Morrigan | Chp 4 One for the Girls | 01/11/2006 10:08 am |
| Ewww...tentacles. That "would" be rather gross. Wonder what Buffy is going to say to Div'vid. Hmmm...Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Thanks for review. I just had this funny picture in my head of a room full of dancing disco demons. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 4 One for the Girls | 01/11/2006 03:39 am |
| Oh this is getting way good!!! I hope she can convince one of our two poor sweet clueless guys what that Arabella slut is up to!!! Can't wait for the next update!!! |
| Let’s face it, where women on the prowl are concerned, most men are clueless! Thanks for review. Hope you enjoy rest of story. |
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| Joyce | Chp 4 Anything at All | 01/29/2006 08:47 am |
| This chapter reminds me of a Star Trek (original series) episode where the Vulcan Spock is betrothed to is so brutally honest about how she wants Spock dead in order to marry her lover. Totally different scenario but same methodology. Brilliant! |
| Thanks for review. Glad you’re enjoying the story. Arabella could well be a Vulcan, except too much emotion! |
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| Morrigan | Chp 4 Anything at All | 01/09/2006 08:02 am |
| Wow. Arabella is an big evil bitch!
Can't wait to read more. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 4 Anything at All | 01/09/2006 06:06 am |
| Oh my gosh that evil disgusting little slut!!! She's gonna either get Spike hurt or cause major problems between him and Buffy or both....this makes me mad!!! Grrrr....but I can't wait for the next update!!! |
| Yes, she’s not the type of girl you’d want to annoy, that’s for sure. |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 4 Anything at All | 01/09/2006 02:41 am |
| ok Arabella must die. or worse make her sleep with Xander |
| Poor Arabella! |
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| jl1980 | Chp 3 ‘Where’s Drusilla?’ | 01/08/2006 01:34 am |
| Ok, I need more of this story like, NOW!! I'm loving this and hating Arabella and wanting Buffy to stake her but somehow i think its a lot more innocent than she thinks it is... waiting for more!! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chp 3 ‘Where’s Drusilla?’ | 01/08/2006 01:13 am |
| Love Cousin Arabella - what a bitch. Lilac - no cloakrooms in America - bathrooms or powder rooms. |
| Thanks for review and vocabulary update. i went back to story and edited it. I should have remembered from my visits to States that you always ‘go to the bathroom’ not ‘go to ladies, or go to the toilet’. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 2 Ashamed of Me? | 01/08/2006 01:19 am |
Oh wow this is getting better and better you are totally drawing me in....I wanna go on a date with Spike!!!  Oh and I loved the description of Spike's voice, like "cream poured across brandy ice" -- that's a gorgeous and memorable line! ok, off to read more now! |
| Thanks for kind review. Much appreciated. |
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| Lou | Chp 2 Ashamed of Me? | 01/06/2006 11:37 am |
| It won't hurt to let Buffy stew a little!! |
| thanks for the review. Appreciated. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chp 2 Ashamed of Me? | 01/06/2006 05:17 am |
| Curious to see where this one leads. Good chapter. |
| glad you’re enjoying it. Wish more people were reading it! |
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| Morrigan | Chp 1 The Invitation | 01/09/2006 07:22 am |
| Haha! So far, so funny. And, I mean that in a good way. Off to read the next chaps. |
| Glad you like it so far. |
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| jl1980 | Chp 1 The Invitation | 01/08/2006 01:08 am |
| Just started this story tonight...I'm loving it so far...you have a great sense of humor and an eye for detail in your writing....I love how you took this story from a little detail in a single episode, and there are all kinds of little hints of possible other stories that could branch off from *this* one too!! lol I wanna hear about the party where Dru killed the guests and the puppy incident, dang it!!
Well, off to read your next chapter! Great so far!!
PS: Honestly I hadn't read yet because I've been doing more writing than reading lately, lol, but now I think I'm hooked! |
| Thanks for the review. Glad you’re enjoying the story. Arabella sort of forces her way into your life and refuses to go away! |
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| redwulf50 | Chp 1 The Invitation | 01/05/2006 01:25 am |
| *Snort* ‘Spike, I haven’t got a thing to wear!’ yeah Buffy is female |
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| idk5743228 | Chp 1 The Invitation | 01/05/2006 01:09 am |
| Ooh, Arabella's back. Love her. Well not really. I really think she's just a vamp stealing ho. But, she has style. More soon, pretty please? |
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