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| Love, Keyness and Impending Marriage by Ariel Dawn |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Awkward Moments | 07/17/2006 01:29 am |
| OH MY GOSH! Dawn is making out with Graham!!! Oh my ... that's just ... oh my gosh. Spike is going to kill him! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Awkward Moments | 07/17/2006 01:29 am |
| oH MY GOSH!!! |
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| Athenewolfe | Awkward Moments | 06/20/2006 12:16 pm |
| Personally i absolutly loved this chapter! I love graham and a graham/dawn relationship here just rocks. I think this is a completly awesome story and the pairing is excellant. I am droooling here sweetie - just drooling! |
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| vladt | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 06:51 pm |
| dawn's hormones are going to get graham, if not killed, at least to the emergency room. if spike doesn't, buffy will. fun read thanks. |
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| Verda | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 06:02 pm |
| Wow, I would have thought that the at least Spike, would have ripped his head off. She's underage and he's at least 22. Color me shocked! Good read. Thanks for the update. |
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| kim | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 02:33 pm |
LOL!!
Well, that didn't take long...Graham's hot 'n heavy for a teenager.
Maybe some mood stabilizer meds for Willow?? |
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| golddrake | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 12:44 pm |
| great chapter. Things are getting really interesting. |
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| sam | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 12:10 pm |
| okay, ewww, sorry, but the whole dawn and graham thing is just gross. i'm seriously not liking her in this. i can't believe she would do that right there where buffy was bound to catch them, and hello, jailbait, willow was right about that. the jerk doesn't even like spike. i just don't understand how she could be interested in someone like him. she hasn't been making very good choices in this story and there's probably only so much more i can take. hopefully buffy knocks some sense into her. |
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| letitia | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 11:42 am |
| Pappa Spike is going to be really PISSED with Dawn and Graham now. And I just feel bad for Andrew. Love how Buffy is all concerned over her. |
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| Karyn | Awkward Moments | 06/19/2006 08:19 am |
| hee hee! poor Dawn and Andrew, trapped in a 'future relationship' kind of way, hope they figure it all out. lol |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Hands in Bad Places | 07/17/2006 01:25 am |
| Great update. I'm worried about her running into Graham. I wonder what is up with that. |
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| vladt | Hands in Bad Places | 06/06/2006 11:01 pm |
| lmao. that was fun, thank you. graham is probably not fun. |
| maybe, maybe not |
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| letitia | Hands in Bad Places | 06/06/2006 08:21 pm |
| I really hope Graham does not have any devious plan for Dawn. I hope she does get a chance to have a little fun and what in the world is Andrew thinking??? Great chapter. |
| Andrew is a force unto his own |
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| Athenewolfe | Hands in Bad Places | 06/06/2006 11:50 am |
| lmao lmao lmao - i loved this chapter so funny! hands in bad places *giggles* and ohhh graham is in town - I love graham! |
| Glad you like graham! He'll be around for the rest of the fic I think |
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| redwulf50 | Hands in Bad Places | 06/06/2006 05:31 am |
| LMAO, pooor Dawnie |
| lol |
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| Athenewolfe | Genius | 06/06/2006 11:42 am |
| excellant update sweetie - this sotry keeps getting better and better! |
| Thanks! |
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| Opal | Genius | 05/26/2006 08:43 pm |
| Just got caught up on this ficcie, grest update. I can't wait to see what happens with Graham in the picture now. |
| oh fun will be had! |
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| vladt | Genius | 05/25/2006 07:53 pm |
| fun read, thamks |
| Thanks for reading! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Genius | 05/25/2006 07:08 pm |
| Funny ... Dawn in protecto mode over Andrew. Too cute. |
| Thanks! |
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| Pulchra | Genius | 05/25/2006 11:46 am |
"Me too, Andrew. Now stop ogling spike's ass!" *slaps a. in the head*
Lol! loved it! I really like Anya and Buffy in your fics... nothing better then the witty comments they make ;-) ... okay so there are some things better *cough*spike's ass*cough* but not many *lol* |
| lol, thanks for the review! |
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| Karyn | Genius | 05/25/2006 09:36 am |
rofl, great update!! i love it that Andrew's in the mix...and staring at Spike's ass *dies*
And i just lurve Anya, so much fun!! |
| Thanks so much for reading! |
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| Lou | Genius | 05/25/2006 06:05 am |
| Good sniping! |
| Thank you! |
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| Kat | Genius | 05/25/2006 12:03 am |
that was a great chapter it made me laugh  |
| Yay! |
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| Athenewolfe | Inappropriate | 06/06/2006 11:39 am |
| giggles - well now ... I could debate on wether xander should.. ooops there i go again questions x's sexuality . ducks head! giggles |
| lol |
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| Cheysma | Inappropriate | 05/16/2006 01:40 pm |
| This is a great follow up. I hope it has updates soon. |
| Updates will come, just not as soon as you hope I'm afraid |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Inappropriate | 05/15/2006 10:36 pm |
LOL ... I still get a kick out of that episode. They were all so far off of themselves falling over that guy. LOL.
Excellent update. Love this story, AD. |
| Thanks Tasha! |
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| vladt | Inappropriate | 05/14/2006 03:34 pm |
| very good read, but xander, come on. thanks for the read. |
| yep, Xander...*sigh* hehehe |
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| Kat | Inappropriate | 05/14/2006 12:47 pm |
| yikes great chapter |
| Thanks! |
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| redwulf50 | Inappropriate | 05/14/2006 10:08 am |
LOL, give Xander a mission he might be able to fulfil  |
| yep, it happens once in a blue moon |
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| Athenewolfe | Childish Pranks | 06/06/2006 11:38 am |
| LMAO i know i said it before but this was so cute! |
| Thanks! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 10:14 pm |
| My oh my ... bad Dawn. I so would not want ot mess with Buffy when she has so much more power than she used to. She knows so much. I'd be afraid of the pranks that I'd get in return. LOL. This was a funny chapter. Loved it. Anya is in big doo doo too. |
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| MarzBar | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 08:13 pm |
| Teeheehee!! Very funny pranking. Will we get more trickster stuff from the two incorrigible girls? |
| Maybe |
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| Karyn | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 06:25 pm |
| rofl!! great update! love the fighting between buffy and dawn... ohhh prank wars! rofl |
| Glad you like! |
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| Kat | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 05:12 pm |
| oh wow LOL great fun and sillyness. lol i dont even know what else to say lol |
| Well that's even to let me know that you liked it! Thanks! |
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| redwulf50 | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 04:58 pm |
| lol, pooooor Dawnie |
| hehehe |
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| letitia | Childish Pranks | 04/18/2006 04:44 pm |
| just what a great family they have. And I just love the relationship btween Anya and the Summer's camp. this chapter was just too cute for words. |
| Thanks wulfie! |
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| willowmouse | Blood | 04/09/2006 04:09 am |
| it amazes me that this story continues to grow & grow, just loving it! |
| Thanks! |
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| Cheysma | Blood | 04/05/2006 09:14 pm |
| More,come one you know you want to keep updating this one. |
| of course I do! |
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| Oracleholly | Blood | 04/05/2006 12:35 am |
| And see here I thought it was Willow's presence back in Sunny-D away from the "nosy witches" that is what is making Dawn sick. But here's hoping this time it is not Willow's fault. |
| lol, even if it isn't then will Willow think it's her fault anyway? |
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| Athenewolfe | Blood | 04/04/2006 05:22 am |
| This chapter was quite excellant my dear. I loved the suspense on what is wrong with Dawn (and cannot wait to find out. This is an excellant story so far and I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. *bites nails* I hope dawn is okay! |
| Glad you like! |
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| MarzBar | Blood | 04/03/2006 11:45 pm |
| Has somebody done a bad spell on Dawn? It's still about the blood here. Nice cliffie, BTW. |
| Thanks |
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| vladt | Blood | 04/03/2006 10:00 pm |
| anya to the heart of the matter. very good update. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thanks for the fine review! |
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| Jace Nox | Blood | 04/03/2006 06:52 pm |
| Ohhh...I love it. Poor Dawn though. *wipes a tear* she's sick... |
| Thanks! |
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| redwulf50 | Blood | 04/03/2006 05:31 pm |
| lol; You are da bomb, Next cahappie is when??? |
| When i write it wulfie... |
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| Oracleholly | Take it Back | 04/04/2006 11:56 pm |
| You know it is funny how much Spike did start to brood... hell, "Lover's Walk" was all brood. It's very ironic. I'm worried about Molly - getting bad vibes. |
| Don't worry, Molly will make an appearance! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Take it Back | 03/28/2006 10:53 pm |
| That's a way to get Spike to stop pouting ... tell him he is brooding. LOL He can't handle being told he does anything like Angel. That is not good if the Initiative is back. Very bad there. I loved this chapter. |
| Thanks Tasha! |
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| Karyn | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 08:15 pm |
| ahhh! the ultimate insult...lol...great update! |
| Thanks |
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| Richard | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 06:30 pm |
Oh please please please, don't let him do anything so stupid as to get a soul. Spike isn't so emotionally distraught and self-hating that he would overlook the quite elementary facts that,
1) he would be a different person with the soul
2) Buffy loves HIM and not this other person
Additionally, even pure vampire Spike is capable of realizing that there are limits to love. Witness his giving up on Drusilla after the Chaos demon. |
| No, he doesn't need a soul in this fic. I've long decided that he's not going to get one, doesn't need one, the First isn't an issue in this sequel. |
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| vladt | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 01:56 pm |
| it is so easy to distract spike. fun read. thanks |
| Thank you! |
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| k | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 01:21 pm |
| i can't help but wonder if something is really wrong with willow...good chapter |
| Thanks for the review, is there something wrong with Willow? you'll just have to wait and see |
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| maryperk | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 11:14 am |
| Spike sure hates being told he's broody. LOL. Good chappy. |
| Thanks |
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| letitia | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 10:56 am |
| So the "teleporation" secret is out. Dawn took it better than I thought. And what is the initiative doing back here?? Great update. |
| Thanks |
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| Athenewolfe | Take it Back | 03/17/2006 10:47 am |
| i like the teleportation - so cool! What a great story - I can't wait to see where you are going with this, Happy sigh! |
| Thanks! |
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| Oracleholly | Worried? Shop! | 04/04/2006 11:47 pm |
| Ooooh Buffy can teleport. I love that Buffy & Anya got their shop on. I'm making time to catch up. So, you'll be getting reviews missy. |
| awww thanks Oholly! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Worried? Shop! | 03/03/2006 01:52 am |
| It is so cool that Buffy can teleport, AD. Guess living for a hundred years has its perks. {grins} Look forward to more of this one, always. |
| thanks |
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| redwulf50 | Worried? Shop! | 02/16/2006 07:24 pm |
| LOL, seeeeeee Buffy needs a spanking |
| lol |
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| vladt | Worried? Shop! | 02/12/2006 05:19 pm |
| fun read. after 100+ years what passes for logic, still, barely passes. thanks for the read |
| Glad you like! |
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| Pulchra Nex | Worried? Shop! | 02/12/2006 05:32 am |
| you know? that's actually very good advice! worrying about my music exams tomorrow so... I'm going shopping! ;-)love the update! |
| It's advice I live by. lol Glad you like! |
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| Jace Nox | Worried? Shop! | 02/12/2006 12:17 am |
Wonderful. I can't wait to read more.
Jace |
| Glad you like! |
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| Athenewolfe | Worried? Shop! | 02/11/2006 04:28 pm |
| That was fun to read.... I should reread when not on whirl tilting medications -- hehe sorry, not trying to bable - I love shopping heheheheh - sigh you know you are seriosuly one of my all time favorite authors in the universe *giggles* I love your sense of humor and buffy writing - hey any teeth checking in this one... lol - sorry -- oh does she get to meet riley again ... i wanna read! Can someone hurt him> what anout the initative... hhehe more more more |
| oooh you are funny when you are on meds! Thanks for the review! you rock! |
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| MarzBar | Worried? Shop! | 02/11/2006 04:28 pm |
| I do like to shop when worried; it's a great method of both invigorating and relaxing oneself. Interesting reaction to Spike from Tara. |
| Shopping relieves much stress, it's true! |
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| Lilachigh | Mortal Danger | 03/17/2006 11:43 am |
| Still loving it! Reading on - really fast! |
| thanks |
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| redwulf50 | Mortal Danger | 02/16/2006 07:17 pm |
| Poor Anya, Spike should spank Buffy |
*sigh* you really have this thing where Spike has to Spank Buffy don't you?
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| Athenewolfe | Mortal Danger | 02/11/2006 04:22 pm |
| such a fab start - can we have more! And I still demand the title to being your biggest supporter - don't make me go live a review for every chapter you have every written (justin case I didmn't) I can do that - just ask kristina *giggles* |
| Ok, you have the title! I'll believe you! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Mortal Danger | 02/01/2006 09:58 pm |
| Nice way to handle the whole worm bit. It's much better without psycho Spike. Although that Blue shirt was the dish in that episode. {grins} Loved the update, and I am still very glad to see that you are working on this sequel. Maybe it will get me off my butt to start putting out the sequel I'm working on too. |
| yay ficcage! Thanks for the review Tasha! |
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| jane | Mortal Danger | 01/21/2006 12:32 pm |
| Absolutely brilliant, I laughed my socks off. |
| thanks! |
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| kat | Mortal Danger | 01/21/2006 10:37 am |
| most intresting chapter. I loved it. I would love to see more soon |
| Thanks! |
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| MarzBar | Mortal Danger | 01/20/2006 08:38 pm |
| Teeheehee! I always figured that stupid worm demon was a BIG mistake on Anya's part. The guy should have been turned into an actual earthworm or centipede or something else small. More story please. |
lol, me too!
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| Karyn | Mortal Danger | 01/20/2006 06:52 pm |
| poor buffy caught in the middle, and poor little dawnie, of all people to inherit her driving talent from it had to be buffy....rofl |
| lol yep, tragic. Thanks for the review! |
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| Bite_Me | Back to School | 05/17/2006 12:35 am |
OMG! I love it! Especially the ending:
“I protect what’s mine. They’d never find your body.”
I'm so happy you are keeping this story line alive! Now I'm off to read more! |
| Thanks for reading! |
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| Lilachigh | Back to School | 03/17/2006 11:38 am |
| Love this, but please, it’s black pudding, not blood pudding! No such animal. |
I'm glad you like. Regardless of whether or not there is actually a concoction that is called Blood pudding in british cuisine, and I have it on pretty good authority that there is (or my friend is completely pulling my leg) Spike is a vampire...therefore shouldn't he want to eat something called Blood pudding????
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| redwulf50 | Back to School | 02/16/2006 07:12 pm |
| Not that you know Buffy is using any gadgets I just always wanted to use that line |
| It's an interesting premise for a fic though...*bats away plot penguins* |
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| redwulf50 | Back to School | 02/16/2006 07:12 pm |
| LMAO, go, go Gadget Buffy |
| lol |
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| Athenewolfe | Back to School | 02/11/2006 04:20 pm |
| I seriously object - I think I am the biggest supporter of second youth - *giggles* At least I am the nom queen for it... probably will end up being an evil nom queen for this one to - as soon as there are more chapters - waits impatiently - me love ficcy! |
| lol, ok there's a tie for biggest Second Youth Supporter? |
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| Lyns | Back to School | 01/22/2006 05:31 pm |
| hehe, 'i protect whats mine. they'd never find your body.'
classic!! |
| Thanks Lyns! |
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| idk5743228 | Back to School | 01/20/2006 10:01 pm |
| Still loving the story. I really love this new Buffy, and of course Spike's no slouch either. More soon? |
| I'm in the process of moving at the moment so I think updates won't be as weekly as they have been. Sorry for the inconvienience |
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| jacquie | Back to School | 01/10/2006 09:04 pm |
| bloody brilliant....more please |
| Thanks! |
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| jacquie | Back to School | 01/10/2006 09:04 pm |
| bloody brilliant....more please |
| Thanks! |
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| vladt | Back to School | 01/07/2006 10:51 pm |
| what a fun read! excellent, thanks |
| Glad you liked! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Back to School | 01/07/2006 10:32 pm |
| Awesome sequel start, AD. This is so cool! I can't wait to see what happens next. What a great beginning. |
| Thanks Tasha! *hugs*
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| ct114 | Back to School | 01/07/2006 10:16 pm |
| I totally forgot about the first story!!!! I loved it!!! I also like this one already!!! keep it up! |
| Thanks! |
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| Lou | Back to School | 01/07/2006 03:16 am |
| Organised Buffy is a rare treat. This is fab! |
| Thanks! |
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| neo_trinityknot | Back to School | 01/07/2006 02:15 am |
| Sequel, SQUEE! The casual, they'll never find your body, was nice. |
| Thanks Neo! |
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| Chanel 5 | Back to School | 01/07/2006 12:25 am |
| Ha Ha hA!!! I loved the last line - what a hoot. thanks for that! |
| lol, no problem! glad you liked! |
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| Oracleholly | Back to School | 01/06/2006 11:45 pm |
| OMG! OMG! OMG! You did it!!! You started the sequel. I'm all squeeing with the squee! LOVE IT! LOVE it! really enjoyed Buffy 2.0's first meeting with Wood (well subsquent one) so much. Looking forward to more goodness. |
| I did it! Took me long enough! lol. Thank for loving it! *hugs* |
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| idk5743228 | Back to School | 01/06/2006 08:28 pm |
| I have to agree with the other reviewers. I love the 123 year old version of Buffy. Knows who she is, what(who) she wants and doesn't seem to be bothered by her old, pesky thoughts of "this is wrong and bad". I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. |
| Thanks! |
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| jane | Back to School | 01/06/2006 07:40 pm |
| Excellent start. I love this Buffy she's funny, self assured and intelligent and she knows how to treat her man. |
| Thanks, Yes Buffy treats Spike much better in my little universe |
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| Pin | Back to School | 01/06/2006 07:21 pm |
| Delighted to see the new chapter - I love this story. Love the meeting with Wood and Buffy's warning. Nothing lioke getting everything out in the open early on. Looking forward to more - Thanks! |
| Glad you enjoyed! |
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