Present Childe by Ariel Dawn
 
vladtTroll man and Willowy goodness06/17/2006 10:33 pm
that was a fun read, thanks
Thanks for reading
 
LyndaTroll man and Willowy goodness06/17/2006 09:01 pm
Thank you for updating this story. I know you have a few going on and I love them all.
That's so nice of you to say!
 
VerdaTroll man and Willowy goodness06/16/2006 10:56 pm
Thanks for the update. Good to see your creative juices flowing again. Love that epi. Update soon!
Thank You!
 
golddrakeTroll man and Willowy goodness06/16/2006 10:45 am
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what they do with vampy Willow.
Thanks
 
vladtBondage Fun Girl06/17/2006 10:26 pm
fun update, thanks. can buffy seriously hurt the little troll?
well we all know he gets his comeuppance eventually
 
vladtBondage Fun Girl05/30/2006 11:55 pm
fun read, thank you
Thanks for reading!
 
OpalBondage Fun Girl05/30/2006 12:39 am
Squee! Great update AD! love the chappie title...bondage fun girl...think I'll take that as my pointer for this year's halloween costume.
lol
 
AthenewolfeRoad Trip05/20/2006 07:56 pm
giggles - i still like my parallel universe *giggles*
Glad you like! I'm not posting the parallel universe anywhere but my site.
 
vladtRoad Trip05/19/2006 11:40 pm
good update. not a good spot ot stop. but there is no good place to stop. thanks for the read.
Thanks for reading!
 
MarzBarAttack05/05/2006 03:38 am
Nice job on draining the Wankers. Will Faith learn anything from this experience?
Doubtful...
 
v ladtAttack05/05/2006 12:26 am
excellent! enjoyed the update. love the last sentence, that is a line that should have been used much more often. thank you for the fun read.
No problem, it was my pleasure!
 
AthenewolfeAttack05/04/2006 06:05 pm
I adored this chapter as always - I really like how faith staked willow and how buffy let all the others die. happy grin very very good!
Glad you like!
 
akarinacjAttack05/04/2006 05:48 pm
Great chapter, please update soon.!!!!
Thanks, I'll try!
 
AthenewolfeSetting up House04/08/2006 09:43 pm
*giggles* hopefully... hopefully... please she just wanted to bite willow... giggles... oh turn willow ... please .... please.... (what can i say I like vampires. I know that is probably not your plan but i can hope - love the chappie!
Will I turn Willow in this fic? I don't know...I haven't decided yet...
 
MarzBarSetting up House04/08/2006 01:04 pm
Good grief! The girl is daft! Witchnapping Willow cannot be a good thing. The Scoobies could be tracking them down already. More story please.
Glad you like!
 
AthenewolfeThe Cricket04/08/2006 09:39 pm
OMG that was so good sweetie! I loved the story - loved the willow kidnapping! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanks!
 
McChickThe Cricket03/25/2006 01:25 pm
Ohhh this chapter was good... poor Willow, I hope everything turns out ok for her! Loved this chapter though, can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one!!

-Ashley-
Thanks
 
MarzBarThe Cricket03/25/2006 09:42 am
Good grief! How daft is Buffy? Kidnapping Willow will get her dusted, regardless of who she does or does not feed on.
Lets just say that Buffy is not thinking with all her marbles at the moment.
 
AthenewolfeDamsel in Distress04/08/2006 09:30 pm
Stupid people! Why can't they just leave Buffy and Spike alone/ I just want to beat them up. Grin great update - love how you twisted this episode to create the strorylin. Excellant excellant! *hugs*
Thanks!
 
redwulf50Damsel in Distress03/13/2006 04:54 pm
excellent chappie Luv, can we beeat the shit out of Giles and Faith now??
Go right ahead wulfie, lol
 
MarzBarDamsel in Distress03/13/2006 01:12 pm
Evil cliffie! Is Faith too stupid to know who just saved her life? More story please.
lol, yes Faith isn't the brightest crayon in the drawer
 
AthenewolfeMaking Up02/19/2006 11:59 am
i can't wait to see what happens... sigh darn moving! LOL waiting paitently!
So Glad you like!
 
AthenewolfeMaking Up02/07/2006 07:13 pm
Love this ficcy MOOOOOOOOOO.... i love spike's blazze attitude *grin* fab update sweetie
Thanks Steph!
 
SpaceLordMaking Up02/07/2006 02:36 am
Well Spikes reasoning reminds me of Mother in Full Metal Jacket "better you than me"
Thanks for the review!
 
OpalMaking Up02/06/2006 09:11 pm
Spuffy time again! Great update.
Thanks Opal!
 
MarzBarMaking Up02/06/2006 08:16 pm
OMG! This could be even worse than the series at this time. Somebody needs to break the spell over her foolish mother.
lol yep that they do...However I'm going to let this run cannon wise for a bit longer, interesting consequences and all that good stuff
 
AthenewolfeGifts02/19/2006 11:58 am
great inclusion of an episode laughs - I can't wait for the MOO moms lol - good update!
Thanks!
 
MarzBarGifts01/27/2006 07:55 pm
OMG! Joyce is really stupid. These little brats have cast a pretty good spell on her. I am worried about Spike and Buffy. Will Joyce try to kill Buffy this time and if she does, who will save Buffy from the witch burning?
only time will tell!
 
AthenewolfeHolidays02/19/2006 11:55 am
bones and wreath of intenstines? WOWzers Dru knows how to decorate - giggles great update!
Doesn't she though?
 
Confused MuseHolidays01/16/2006 10:18 am
Silly boy can't make his mind up! And fair play to Buffy, god knows I wouldn't want to live with Drusilla either ;) Great update, and the angst is palpable.
Thanks!
 
McChickHolidays01/16/2006 02:06 am
Oh this was a good chapter! It's interesting to see a vampire trying to live a 'normal' life. I can't wait to see how Buffy will get rid of Dru... it should be an amazing chapter or so. Also I really like the scenes where Spike tries to control Buffy as her Sire, that control and everything is hot hahah! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter! -Ashley-
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying!
 
idk5743228Holidays01/16/2006 12:44 am
A wreath of intestines. I'm going to have to look into that for next Christmas. Can we hurt Drusilla now? Please?
lol.
 
AthenewolfePetulant Grandchilde02/19/2006 11:52 am
love the sex scene and the damien dustage - happy sigh!
Glad you like!
 
bubble_blunderPetulant Grandchilde12/29/2005 03:35 am
Awesome update! More soon, please! -Lisa
Thanks!
 
OpalPetulant Grandchilde12/27/2005 04:33 pm
Wicked good update! I love the dusting of Damien and the mating in front of the minions. Good way to show them who's in charge.
Thanks! Doing it on Vampire dust though, not something I'd be into normally lol
 
redwulf50Petulant Grandchilde12/26/2005 02:01 am
LMAO, Damien/Edgar was realy that stupid?? Does he have any idea of Dru's feelings o family?? damn good chappie
Thanks Wulfie!
 
redwulf50Petulant Grandchilde12/26/2005 01:58 am
LMAO, Damien/Edgar was realy that stupid?? Does he have any idea of Dru's feelings o family?? damn good chappie
Thanks Wulfie!
 
Confused MusePetulant Grandchilde12/25/2005 07:39 pm
Ooh, hot, uninhibited and oh so mouthwatering.. I'm loving the complications in their relationship, although I'm on tenterhooks waiting for Buffy to really let rip with demon rage before very long
Oh the demon rage will rip, eventually.
 
AthenewolfeSpanking Baby02/19/2006 11:49 am
great update. I love the interaction between buffy and spike and dru. Great update!
Thanks
 
MarzBarSpanking Baby12/04/2005 06:16 am
So, Buffy did not keep any slayer strength or soul? She's just not too evil. Weird vampire.
She didn't keep her slayer strength, that doesn't mean she isn't strong, just not as strong as she was when she was a slayer.
 
redwulf50Spanking Baby12/04/2005 12:38 am
OK, another Buffy spanking coming up soon????
ROFLMAO, I'll think about it wulfie
 
bubble_blunderSpanking Baby12/04/2005 12:25 am
So Drusilla has to go. Wonder how Spike will take that one? Glad to see an update of this one. More soon please. -Lisa
Thanks
 
SpaceLordSpanking Baby12/03/2005 10:19 pm
Good chapter, the whole relationship is still somewhat in the air I feel. Someone will have to bend, I hope it's both. To make some compromises to get this thing to work, I think that Buffy needs to start respecting Spike and the vampire ways a little more. Just my thinking anyway.
Oh you are completely right!
 
AthenewolfeWords02/19/2006 11:47 am
evil grin - great update - I can't wait to see how the minions react to her now!
Thanks
 
MarzBarWords11/23/2005 08:13 pm
Spike ought to offer to home school Buffy. He's much, much better educated than any high school teacher she's likely to come across. Does she like the social life?
Hmm, Spike home schooling Buffy, I hadn't thought of that...And ya it is the social life that she's drawn to for the school thing.
 
redwulf50Words11/22/2005 01:44 pm
oh yeah it is getting better and better and it was great to begin with
Aww thanks Wulfie!
 
janeWords11/22/2005 11:15 am
Yay great update more more more.
lol, glad you like
 
bubble_blunderWords11/22/2005 07:32 am
Great update! I love Joyce! She's just so blase about everything other than "This is my daughter, who I love". It's great! Looking forward to more. -Lisa
Thanks
 
OpalWords11/22/2005 05:37 am
Nice update AD!
Thanks Opal! *hugs*
 
AthenewolfeIn the Basement02/19/2006 11:43 am
LOl that is so cute... Buffy the vampire who won't kill *grin* this is a freaking adoreoable story!
thanks
 
OpalIn the Basement11/13/2005 10:27 pm
Yeah!! Great smut & great update!
Thanks Opal!
 
bubble_blunderIn the Basement11/12/2005 10:29 pm
Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next update. -Lisa
Thanks!
 
wildwomenIn the Basement11/12/2005 10:00 pm
I love that they keep on saying she does not have a soul. it is just to funny. soul or not buffy does not kill at that is great. cannot wait to read more.
So glad that you like!
 
romeroIn the Basement11/12/2005 05:51 am
Sorry about wrong review (hangs head). I'm glad that Willow considers herself to be Buffy's best friend still and is open to Buffy's new status. Joyce needs to get a clue about school-windows- and sunlight challenged Buffy. I'm looking forward to reading Spike/Joyce interactions.
lol no problem, I'm glad you like the fic
 
romeroIn the Basement11/12/2005 05:45 am
I can't get enough of this story. I'm glad there will be a sequel. I love the fact that Buffy and Spike can speak demon and that Dawn, Spike and Buffy seem to be immortal.
uhhhh....
 
MarzBarIn the Basement11/11/2005 11:50 pm
Always good to have hot make-up sex. I hope Spike manages to have a serious talk with Joyce. Buffy will be killed at school and from my recollection, high school is not worth it. More please.
I agree with you there, High school isn't worth it. Thanks for your review
 
~*~Tasha~*~In the Basement11/11/2005 10:46 pm
{chuckles} Love Spike making sure that Willow realizes that Buffy doesn't have a soul. LOL. Yeah he's the big bad isn't he? {Chuckles} Look forward to more.
I'm glad you like!
 
AthenewolfeSchool Daze02/19/2006 11:32 am
lmao - vampires at school = pricelss just priceless!
lol
 
~*~Tasha~*~School Daze11/11/2005 10:17 am
Oh my ... she is taking a huge risk to head to school. I understand why her mom wants her too though. It just isn't going to work out unless something changes with her hypocritical friends. Can I string Faith up?
lol, I have plans for Faith, no stringing her up yet.
 
MarzBarSchool Daze11/07/2005 04:29 am
WTF is she doing at school? Does not sunlight come into the classroom windows? How does her mother make her go to school?
Thanks for your review
 
redwulf50School Daze11/06/2005 10:14 pm
LMAO, now pooooor poooor Bufy gets to experience the hypocrits that are her 'friends' Great bloody chappie
Thanks Wulfie!
 
SpaceLordSchool Daze11/06/2005 10:09 pm
Denial parental units, sure is fun . I like this story alot and find it funny and sad, can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks!
 
janeSchool Daze11/06/2005 10:04 pm
Joyce has really lost it, how long can she expect Buffy to risk life and limb in that school day in day out? Sheer madness but funny.
Joyce is definitely in denial here.
 
AthenewolfeGoing on Faith02/19/2006 11:09 am
I freaking adore the whole marking Faith as a child thing and the soul versus no soul question - great chappie!
Thanks!
 
nicholeGoing on Faith10/30/2005 05:10 pm
hey geat update...Buffy hit him where it hurt..his car..he knows he messed up..he is going to have to make a decision between Buffy and Dru..with Buffy being his mate the choice should be simple..but you never know..look forward to more..update soon...N
Nothing is ever simple with Spike, that's why we like him. Thanks for taking an interest in my fic!
 
redwulf50Going on Faith10/29/2005 01:58 pm
oh yeah great fic and I will too update a fic soon meaniehead
uh huh, sure. Thanks Wulfie!
 
BloodyTearsOfLifeGoing on Faith10/29/2005 08:09 am
ohh I so can't wait to see how Spike punishes her. *snicker*
lol, well at least you get to see it before the rest of the world eh? *hugs to my fab beta*
 
romeroGoing on Faith10/29/2005 08:08 am
I like that Buffy and Willow are still friends. Looking forward to what Spike does next.
Willow will be very important in this fic. Thanks for your review!
 
MarzBarGoing on Faith10/29/2005 07:35 am
Still haven't seen Buffy kill and Spike thinks she has a soul. What will be Buffy's punishment for wreaking havoc on the DeSoto? More please.
Thanks! Hmmm, will Buffy get off easy or not?
 
AthenewolfeVisiting Mom02/19/2006 11:06 am
OMG still laughing so hard about this - trying to ground a vampire and the whole you should have thought about that before you became a vampire. laughing my but off here!
Glad you like!
 
MarzBarVisiting Mom10/22/2005 11:10 pm
Weird! Is Buffy going to eat people? I'm personally all for it but I thought her calling and her so-called soul would prevent that from happening. More please.
lol, I'm not giving anything away...I think the next chapter will answer your question
 
redwulf50Visiting Mom10/21/2005 11:20 pm
as always a great update, but we could realy use the second Youth sequal
lol and I tell you again wulfie... there will be no Second Youth sequel until you update... But thank you for the review!
 
NicholeVisiting Mom10/21/2005 06:29 pm
Hey great a update for this..i have been waiting patiently and look forward to more of this story..great update and chapter and i glad Buffy let Spike know how she felt..
Thanks for your review!
 
Chanel 5Visiting Mom10/21/2005 03:28 pm
I really like this. I have a feeling that Buffy won't feed, and good for her! And poor buffy, for dru to come back just at that moment. It's like your sister announcing she's pregnant at your wedding or something.
hehehe I agree! Bad Dru!
 
AthenewolfeA Rocky Beginning02/19/2006 11:00 am
hehe Buffy came back wrong! I love it!
lol, yep she did, she just doesn't know how wrong she is at the moment
 
Chanel 5A Rocky Beginning12/26/2005 06:28 am
Loved the new chapter! The tea party bit was just great, something I'm sure Spike's done a few times before, a real hoot. thanks!
Glad you like!
 
margaretA Rocky Beginning11/07/2005 07:20 pm
love the direction this fic is taking. spike needs to sort out dru and buffy and a teenage vamp going to school....great thanks margaret
Thanks!
 
Chanel 5A Rocky Beginning11/07/2005 02:00 am
Fantastic! and poor Joyce, still in denial.
lol, yep that she is
 
~*~Tasha~*~A Rocky Beginning09/22/2005 03:09 pm
Definitely going to be a long night for Spike. Dru really is mucking it up though. I'd say Buffy is a bit soulful based on Dru's reactions. I hope that Spike sees through Dru though and sides with Buffy.
hmmm yes Dru is in the way a bit isn't she?