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| Second the First by SinisterChic |
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| Clare | Helpless | 07/19/2006 01:59 pm |
| This story is awesome! Guilt. Guilt. Guilt. Please continue it! Please?? If it sounds like I'm whining it's because I am. Thanks! LOL |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Helpless | 07/16/2006 03:55 pm |
You have NOTHING to worry about. This is good, and I knew it would be. I love this story. It is sad that some things can change and some can't, but unfortunately that is life.
I LOVED when Spikey/William backed Velvet up. I got a kick out of the fact that it was Velvet's words that helped the two of them to get in sync. {Grins}
I look forward to more of this when the muse strikes. I've always enjoyed seeing what was going to happen next with this one. |
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| Stephanie | Helpless | 07/13/2006 08:06 pm |
| Loved Replay. Please finish this one. I want to know how it ends. As for Velvet send her ass home. More please! |
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| vladt | Helpless | 06/12/2006 10:11 pm |
| good read, thanks |
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| redwulf50 | Helpless | 06/09/2006 05:44 pm |
it is very good buut you know I need another chappie to be sure  |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Helpless | 06/07/2006 12:09 pm |
It's sad that Cassie couldn't be saved.I forgot about Replay and the sequel,but then I saw it again and decided to read.Like Buffy,I have a hospital phobia.
Mine's even worse.I can't even go see people in the hospital without freaking out.My dad had to go to the hospital in March(On my mom's birthday),and I freaked out when we already on our way.I was doing okay until we were on our way down.I hate hospitals. Update soon. |
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| RJ | Helpless | 06/07/2006 08:51 am |
| This story is super! I was more than happy to reread the first part since I had forgotten what was going on. Hope you have time to continue it. |
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| letitia | Helpless | 06/07/2006 04:49 am |
| WOW... I am just so sorry that she could not help Cassie... BUt I am glad that at least she has Spike back for a little while. I know enough to know this is not it but so happy that he put Velvet in her place. |
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| vladt | Puzzle Pieces | 06/12/2006 10:06 pm |
| good update. thanks |
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| Catrine | Puzzle Pieces | 06/05/2006 09:43 am |
I recently came over this story (the starting story) and I had to continue reading it. A really nice story,good sequel I hope to see an update soon. |
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| redwulf50 | Puzzle Pieces | 05/29/2006 06:08 am |
| ya know the only thing worse than a cliffie??? One that goes on for monthes pleasse more of this one soon?? |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Puzzle Pieces | 04/08/2006 11:14 am |
| Excellent chapter. I know it has been a while since you updated this one, but I know how that goes. I look forward to reading more when you are inspired to do so. |
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| Pet | Puzzle Pieces | 03/15/2006 09:36 am |
| Great story! I really hope there will be un update soon. |
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| Rebelbaby | Puzzle Pieces | 01/25/2006 01:12 am |
| WOW can't wate to see more of it. It's a grate story please keep up the good work. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Puzzle Pieces | 01/23/2006 11:11 pm |
| this is really interesting.. i cant wait to see how everything turns out... |
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| Wicked Angel/Cass | Puzzle Pieces | 01/21/2006 12:16 am |
| Well, glad William didn't freak too much or anything. Will be interesting to see where you take this. Hope you feel better soon! |
| Thanks. At least my fever is gone from wed. Now I'm stuck with a stuffy nose and I'm real tired. Ugh. Anyway, I hope you like what I have in store. |
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| MarzBar | Puzzle Pieces | 01/20/2006 10:04 pm |
| I hope Spike and William get together pretty soon. This back and forth stuff won't help too much with beating the First or helping the potentials. More story soon please. |
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| SciFi_GK | Oh, You Again | 06/13/2006 06:34 pm |
Regarding your AN (Velvet), you could make her a potential. Interested?
Btw, still got me. keep it up. |
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| vladt | Oh, You Again | 06/12/2006 10:01 pm |
| fine chapter. thanks for the read. good luck with velvet. like what you done so far. |
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| pfeifferpack | Oh, You Again | 05/14/2006 12:42 pm |
Give her to Giles.....he needs somebody after all unless she turns out to be gay then Kennedy can have someone to scare ...er...love. If she wants a demon there's always Clem! Maybe Angel's lonely.......Wes?
No matter, the story is shaping up nicely and I am enjoying it all.
Kathleen
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Oh, You Again | 04/08/2006 11:11 am |
| Ohmy gosh!! Those two are going to go nuts. Spike and William switching back and forth like that. As for Velvet ... I like her, but I don't like her and William or Spike being together. So, I don't care what happens to her one way or the other. {winks} I think she was an awesome OC that took care of William and stuff. Maybe they can all be friends? |
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| Wicked Angel/Cass | Oh, You Again | 01/20/2006 05:43 am |
| Hey! I figured out how to review! I'm not a complete moron then. -lol- Anywho, loved "Replay." *Adoring* "Second the First." Velvet... I dunno. Kinda... hmm... Maybe you could have her eventually join the Scooby Gang for some reason? Doesn't sound like she's got too much goin' for her in Indiana. Maybe California holds better prospects. Or there could be some reason for Angel to come down! And he brings his whole crew, and she bonds with them (*hint hint* Fred). Eh, just some ideas. Anywho, I'm loving the switches from Spike to William. Especially the last one. -lmao- Man, that's good. Poor William. -lol- |
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| SpaceLord | Oh, You Again | 01/19/2006 12:23 am |
| Hmm now they will need to merge william and Spike. As for Velvet I can only say 3 way action, that will keep everybody happy |
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| MarzBar | Oh, You Again | 01/18/2006 09:48 am |
| William and Spike are going to have to learn to get along with each other and share Buffy. Maybe Velvet will like Clem. More story please. |
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| idk5743228 | Oh, You Again | 01/17/2006 03:16 pm |
| I see 2 options, do the back and forth with Spike and that would keep Velvet in the loop. You know kind of a Jr. Scoob or you could bring the 1st into the mix, sacrifice poor, clueless Velvet and set William on his way back to being Spike. Anyway you see the future chapters, I'm sure will be great. |
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| LiquidVamp | Oh, You Again | 01/17/2006 07:08 am |
| Oh swappy Spike and William. Good things could come from this split personality. Can't wait to see what.
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| ZoeGrace | Oh, You Again | 01/17/2006 05:02 am |
| kill the bitch...just kidding.
Threesome?
Ok i'm being naughty now lol. I like this going back and forth, this should prove interesting lol. |
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| neo_trinityknot | Oh, You Again | 01/17/2006 04:20 am |
| Ignore her and maybe she will go away...Great chapter. |
| Ha! I can be like those cit-coms and just not write her in anymore and hope no one notices she is gone. The trouble is, I created her but didn't have a plan as to her role in the larger picture. |
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| vladt | It Starts | 06/12/2006 09:51 pm |
| good chapter, thanks for the read. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | It Starts | 04/08/2006 11:06 am |
| Oooooo ... Spikey is talking to William from within. I like it!! |
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| ZoeGrace | It Starts | 01/14/2006 10:58 pm |
| yes, we get what's going on. |
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| redwulf50 | It Starts | 01/14/2006 09:48 pm |
| LMAO, these chappies freakin rok I loveem |
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| neo_trinityknot | It Starts | 01/14/2006 08:47 pm |
| Did thatevil soul push Spike down? Bad soul, bad! |
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| LiquidVamp | It Starts | 01/14/2006 07:36 pm |
| Oh I loved the whole William/spike conversation. Very nifty indeedy. I read all of Replay yesterday and wen tright to this. I do love both stories very much! Can't wait for more. |
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| idk5743228 | It Starts | 01/14/2006 06:58 pm |
| Excellent chapter. I really don't like to see Spike comforting anyone else but I know that's what William would do. Last part with Spike talking inside his head was brillilant |
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| vladt | Lock it up and Throw Away the Key | 06/12/2006 09:46 pm |
| hi velvet, welcome to sunnydale. thanks for the fun read. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Lock it up and Throw Away the Key | 04/08/2006 11:03 am |
| ROFL!! Ooopppssss Dawnie! Open mouth and insert foot. Great chapter! |
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| ZoeGrace | Lock it up and Throw Away the Key | 01/14/2006 11:40 pm |
| i really like Dawn saying that. And I really like what Anya says in the next chapter. |
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| Nikkole | Lock it up and Throw Away the Key | 01/14/2006 03:14 am |
| I agree, I think Dawn blurting out is much easier than keeping secrets for multiple chapters. Update again soon please!! |
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| neo_trinityknot | Lock it up and Throw Away the Key | 01/13/2006 09:50 pm |
| Oops...just like Dawn to blurt things out. I'm glad though, keeps down the agnst. |
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| vladt | Decisions | 06/12/2006 09:41 pm |
| tale continues to grow. wonder what velvet will make of the sundale crew. thanks for the fun read. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Decisions | 04/08/2006 09:57 am |
Hmmm ... this seems to be where I left off because I remember Buffy getting there, but not what happened next. I definitely don't remember Velvet wanting to go to Sunnydale.
Good update, and I'm reading more. I hope Spike/William does remember. Plus I hope they can convince Velvet that he is who he thinks he is. |
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| Neo_trinityknot | Decisions | 01/13/2006 07:57 pm |
| Just read Replay, and all three chapters of this so far, I love them, and cant wait to read the next chapter! |
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| vladt | Those Golden Eyes Upon Me | 06/12/2006 09:33 pm |
| very good read. but i think buffy might be wrong. i think it will matter. thanks for the fun read. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Those Golden Eyes Upon Me | 04/08/2006 09:52 am |
| Ooo ... Buffy found him, and William went a bit vampirey there for a while. Interesting. I wonder if he is both still vampire and human ... a living vampire perhaps? |
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| vladt | There's More than Corn in Indiana | 06/12/2006 09:12 pm |
| interesting start. even with memory loss, spike remembers a "blond goddess with green eyes." thanks for the read. |
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| pfeifferpack | There's More than Corn in Indiana | 05/12/2006 05:41 pm |
...:::snicker:::.... I grew up in Indianapolis and am loving the idea of Spike in my birth State.
Hope he gets his memories back before the FE starts to mess with him.
Great start.
Kathleen |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | There's More than Corn in Indiana | 04/08/2006 09:49 am |
I could have swornthat I read some of this story before, but I don't see any reviews here for me for it. {ponders that} Strange. So, I'm reading from the beginning here. I know that I had missed the half of the chapters wherever I was reading it before too.
I was glad to see a sequel to Replay started. I liked that fic. I look forward to what this one has to offer. I like how it started off. |
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| Stacy | There's More than Corn in Indiana | 01/16/2006 11:56 pm |
| Well, I did have to read Replay again. But that's ok because I really enjoyed it the second time around also. This is a great start and I hope you keep the updates comin'. Thanks for writing. |
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| Nikkole | There's More than Corn in Indiana | 01/14/2006 03:03 am |
| HMMMM, interesting! So it is the poet that was returned first, very sneaky of you! |
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