Double Bubble, Toil and.... by slaymesoftly
 
smg fanFive08/04/2006 09:30 pm
Sequal! Write a sequal and I will seriously love you! It can't just leave off like that, please, for the love of all things Spike write a sequal!!

That said.. Great job! ^.^
Hee! Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It could be sequeled, I guess, but I wouldn't hold my breath if I were you...
 
redwulf50Five02/12/2006 07:33 pm
damn good ficcie
:-)
 
AthenewolfeFive02/09/2006 05:49 am
I love the conclusion to this fic. Ripper coming out to play was fun and I don't believe for a minute that willow was really truly sorry. You know if you ever need any plot ideas I could see an excllant sequal out of this. An angry Willow who was just saying she was sorry - goes to the Coven because she thinks she can learn more magic not because she thinks of control and then WIllow as a villian. LOL - I love Willow as a villian because she is so good at it *grin* of course that is just me wanting more of good story and not a demand in any way. This was a great fic and another wonderful story!
Thanks, Steph. I'm glad you liked it.There certainly is room for a sequel, isn't there?
 
LouFive01/21/2006 09:32 pm
I enjoyed this Willow, loved the Ripper moment and what a place to leave the Spike/Buffy thrillathon! Torturer!!
*evil grin* But leaves room for more exploration of this reality, doesn't it?
 
janeFive01/21/2006 12:10 pm
Great story really enjoyed it.
Thank you. I'm glad you did.
 
slinkypsychokitFive01/21/2006 06:08 am
Awww! That was so cool!
Thanks!
 
KarynFive01/21/2006 04:43 am
Cool, think willow needed more of a smackdown/good spanking but losing her magic for a bit was good too...rofl
She may have lost it for more than a little - the coven will decide....
 
RichardFive01/21/2006 03:39 am
That's a good ending, nice and ambiguous.
Thank you.
 
jl1980Five01/21/2006 02:07 am
Awww...it's over now?? It's a good ending place, though....like everyone else I'm way excited about the idea of a sequel....
It's not like me to leave them hanging too long...
 
MarzBarFive01/21/2006 01:53 am
OMG! The ending still leaves Buffy with the power and Spike unable to defend himself against her beatings and verbal cruelty. I hope the time they had together will soften her up some.
Oh, I'd say she's softened up a bit....
 
idk5743228Five01/21/2006 01:48 am
*pouts* I want more. But it was an excellent story. Can we just say sequel. Possibly after Spike gives her his forwarding address.
Well, she already knows how to find the crypt....
 
ZoeGraceFive01/21/2006 01:39 am
that's it? no happily ever after? no claimy? *cries*
LOL - there's always sequel land
 
SpaceLordFive01/21/2006 01:12 am
Well very interesting story, now I'm curious about a sequel. I would personally like something that went off canon with this to base it on. Great story and really hope for a sequel.
Thanks. It obviously could have a sequel that went completely off canon - since I'm already well on the way. No plans right this minute though.
 
IrinaFive01/21/2006 12:43 am
Great story! I really enjoyed it.
Thanks. I'm glad you did.
 
jl1980four01/21/2006 01:27 am
Awwww.....poor Spike!! That's gotta be so hard for him, cause he wants her so bad but its not really her and.....awww... lol Loving this fic, absolutely loving it...on to the next chapter!!!
:-D
 
CopyKweenfour01/20/2006 07:59 pm
Excellent chap! I hope Giles gives Willow a good old-fashioned smack-down! And Buffy's lusty antics are a treat!
:-)
 
letitiafour01/20/2006 04:33 pm
I hope that during this time she gets to see how Spike really can be. And also gets a chance to see his true feelings. I just love Ripper's appearance.
:-)
 
Karynfour01/20/2006 04:11 pm
rofl, I LOVE IT.....and ohhhh scary Giles/Ripper gonna teach her a lesson huh? “I’ll come up with a better one,” and “I hope you do,” Wonderful, couldn't help but grin when i read that!
:-)
 
Irinafour01/20/2006 03:45 pm
Fantastic chapter! I'm really enjoying this story. I just love the plot. I look forward to read more!
:-)
 
janefour01/20/2006 03:44 pm
Oh yes can't wait to see Ripper put Willow in her place.
:-)
 
Athenewolfefour01/20/2006 03:28 pm
Awesome story Slay! I cannot wait to see what happens next! Evil Willow is so wonderfully evil!
:-)
 
idk5743228four01/20/2006 02:40 pm
I always loved Ripper. Can we keep him? Pretty please? More chapters soon?
:-)
 
Loufour01/20/2006 02:33 pm
Our Spike is such a gent. And Ripper should be able to give Willow pause for thought!
:-)
 
maryperkfour01/20/2006 02:14 pm
Poor Spikey, having to fend off a horny slayer. LOL. Good, Ripper is going to show up. Personally I don't know why they didn't do something with Willow in the show at this point to help her.
:-)
 
redwulf50Three02/12/2006 07:20 pm
LOL Spike and his big mouth
:-)
 
LouThree01/20/2006 01:04 pm
God - Buffy's such a dope!!!!!!
LOL perhaps - but don't forget which season this is....cut her a bit of slack. She doesn't know what we know...
 
janeThree01/20/2006 11:09 am
Excellent I can't believe that's the last we've seen of Willows magic. I'm hoping further threats will bring B/S closer.
Oh, I think you can safely assume that.....
 
jl1980Three01/20/2006 05:04 am
Ah, poor Spike...never did learn when its a good idea to keep his mouth shut...lol...and for a little bit there it looked like they were doing okay...*sigh*...waiting eagerly for next chapter now
Wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if all went smoothly, would it? New chapter going up soon.
 
KarynThree01/20/2006 04:42 am
open mouth insert foot...rofl...spike does it again *sigh* and woah check out willow all 'don't mess with me' lol
Spike = no impulse-control.
 
idk5743228Three01/20/2006 04:30 am
You'd think that Spike would learn the lesson that big mouth does not equal spuffy loving. Excellent chapter.
You'd think - but it is Spike, after all. LOL
 
letitiaThree01/20/2006 04:03 am
Spike just can't shut up.... And Buffy can't give herself a chance to have some real feelings. great update.
thanks!
 
MarzBarThree01/20/2006 03:40 am
Have Spike and Buffy completely forgotten the other dimension now?
?
 
maryperkThree01/20/2006 03:10 am
LOL, Spike's mouth and brain really need to be connected don't they? Nice Chappy.
Yes, alas. Spike and his big mouth - no spuffyness for him!
 
redwulf50Two02/12/2006 07:15 pm
LOL, still love this ficcie
:-)
 
LouTwo01/20/2006 12:02 am
Top bad Willow - a real nasty piece of work. Aahh... Spike is being so good!
Well, it IS evil Willow, after all....
 
janeTwo01/19/2006 10:13 pm
Really excellent story. Willows so out of order. it's great. Can't wait to see how the others deal with her.
Somebody will have to! Thanks for reading.
 
MarzBarTwo01/19/2006 07:42 pm
Besides a power hungry novice witch, there is still a slayer who is a blockhead and a bitch. More story please.
more soon
 
RichardTwo01/19/2006 03:36 pm
Retaliation? I think a bullet to the back of Willow's head would be a great preventive measure. And one that Giles is probably ruthless enough to enact. I have serious doubts he'd patiently stay stay under the thumb of an out of control witch. Great chararcterization of Willow by the way.
Thank you - I'm glad you like her.
 
IrinaTwo01/19/2006 03:12 pm
Great start! Can't wait to read more.
Thanks
 
bloodshedbabyTwo01/19/2006 02:49 pm
aww how sad! Poor Spike, back in the tub with him.
Now, BSB, admit it. YOu know we all like Spike chained up....
 
jl1980Two01/19/2006 02:45 pm
awesome chapter!! gave me chills when Willow was making her threats...my gosh, she's scary!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Thanks!
 
OpalTwo01/19/2006 01:54 pm
This fic rocks Patty! I love it. Great start, I can't wait to finish reading the rest.
Thanks. More tonight
 
redwulf50One02/12/2006 07:11 pm
LOL, Willow ws always an evil bitca
Doesn't like to not get her way.....
 
ShippyOne01/22/2006 10:29 am
Great fic!
Thanks. *grin*
 
spike_spetslayerOne01/21/2006 03:48 am
See? Another fantastic Pattific! Wonderful story, slayme, I really liked the way that you showed Giles in a mature Ripper-fashion, as well as Willow's dark side...and who could ever say no to some sweet Spuffy love? Good point too, about the rape intention...that stopped Willow cold in her tracks...thanks for this story, Patti...another wonderful addition to your already sterling line-up of tales...you are fast becoming my favorite author of all time!
*blushes, squirms and points to BSB, Always_jbj, Amyb, Eurydice, The Bear, et al* Thank you so much for the kind words.
 
idk5743228One01/19/2006 03:09 pm
Wow, I wasn't too thrilled with Willow in season 6. I'm even less thrilled about her now. That chick has issues. As always though, your great writing made me really hate the first class bitch. I can't wait to read more
More soon.
 
bloodshedbabyOne01/19/2006 02:40 pm
this is so great!! *goes to read the next chap*
:-)
 
jl1980One01/19/2006 02:38 pm
This is pretty good stuff....I like the first chapter a lot, and something tells me that Willow is going to get a *lot* meaner before all is said and done!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Thanks - hope you continue to like it