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| Dark Paladin by Thianna |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 20 - What Now? | 07/24/2006 03:23 am |
| Ewww... someone loving Angel... that's just not right! *gags* |
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| vladt | 20 - What Now? | 07/23/2006 08:25 pm |
| great update. thanks for the read. i just *knew* if the tale was long enough angelus would show. thanks again |
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| MarzBar | 20 - What Now? | 07/23/2006 07:32 pm |
| OMG. Is the mysterious female the lover that Angelus drained? Did another vamp turn her? More story soon please. |
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| fallen_angel | 19 - If I Pass On | 06/22/2006 08:22 am |
| Who's the girl? update soon please |
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| vladt | 19 - If I Pass On | 06/07/2006 10:22 pm |
| very sadand beautiful chapter. isuppose the pretty brunette with the devilish grin means trouble. thanks for the great read. |
| Thank you for the review... yup she's trouble |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 19 - If I Pass On | 06/06/2006 11:23 pm |
| who is it!?!? and omg that chapter made me cry so much!!! |
| Hehe.. you'll find out soon enough |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 19 - If I Pass On | 06/06/2006 09:16 pm |
| Die angel DIE, lol |
| Yeah.. we all want that. ^_^ |
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| fallen_angel | 18 - Claimed Fully | 06/22/2006 08:14 am |
| I like Niko too! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 18 - Claimed Fully | 05/26/2006 11:02 pm |
| aww.. |
| Thank you. |
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| vladt | 18 - Claimed Fully | 05/26/2006 07:58 pm |
| excellent chapter. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thank you. |
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| SpaceLord | 18 - Claimed Fully | 05/25/2006 11:41 pm |
Oh now they've done the dirty....I guess there will be a lot of smut in the upcoming chapters  |
| Well hmm.. we'll see |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 18 - Claimed Fully | 05/25/2006 11:41 pm |
| Now kill her and bring in Marie, muhahahahahahahaha |
| lol... just wait patiently... *hands you a Spike plushie* here you go for now. |
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| fallen_angel | 17 - What I Asked Him to Do | 06/22/2006 08:10 am |
| LOL. Spike's simply the best. Ilike Merrick better than Giles |
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| sirc | 17 - What I Asked Him to Do | 05/19/2006 11:02 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| MarzBar | 17 - What I Asked Him to Do | 05/18/2006 12:00 am |
| I hope Merrick lets Spike and Buffy stay together and that he doesn't tell the Wankers' Council. More story please. |
| Merrick does care about Buffy a lot. |
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| vladt | 17 - What I Asked Him to Do | 05/17/2006 08:55 pm |
| very good read. you obviously did not pattern merrick after giles. thanks for the enjoyable read. |
| Thanks.. yup, tried to pattern Merrick as to how I saw him in the movie. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 17 - What I Asked Him to Do | 05/16/2006 10:54 pm |
| Hurry with the sparie, post a bunch of chapters at once. I want to see Marie!! |
| Hehe.. sparie will come soon |
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| vladt | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 07:31 pm |
| wonderful update to a great tale. why do i believe the next few chapters will not be pleasant for the slayer and spike? love the tale! thanks |
| Uhm.. you might be surprised... ^_^ thanks for following this story. |
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| pretty_in_fangs | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 07:27 am |
| YAY! Complete! |
| Thanks.. yup they are together now. |
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| fallen_angel | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 07:02 am |
| now what will mr. brood and mr. guy frm council of wankers do? |
| Next chapter will show how they will react |
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| MarzBar | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 02:56 am |
| She had a wonderous vision quest. It seems that the previous slayers approved of Spike and the claiming. More story please. |
| Thank you. |
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| SpaceLord | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 02:37 am |
| Now the shit will hit the fan for sure. |
| Yup... though I think you'll like the next chapter. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 16 – Incomplete or Complete | 05/05/2006 01:11 am |
| AHHHHHH! YAY!! |
| Yup.. goodie they're finally claimed and closer to Sparie.. we're getting there... |
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| Cewcew | 15 - You Were a What? | 04/29/2006 11:12 am |
| Of course updates are loved, as is this story. |
| Thank you so much. |
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| fallen_angel | 15 - You Were a What? | 04/26/2006 06:09 am |
| *yeeeeeh sunnydale* well first of all love the chapter title and second love the chapterespeciaaly the dancing in and out of mystical cirlcles part. can do without Giles but Will ans Xand would be nice to have. |
| Thank you. No Giles, but have Willow somewhere in there.. ^_^ |
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| SpaceLord | 15 - You Were a What? | 04/26/2006 02:13 am |
| Nice to see an update to this story. I guess that there will be no Giles in this story. Will there be any scoobies at all? |
| Nope.. sorry no Giles... as for Scoobies, right now all I have is Willow |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 15 - You Were a What? | 04/26/2006 02:03 am |
| Then why the hell does he stick around? Why don't they start a coup? |
| Lesser of two evils I guess... that or I think he feels guilty about Helena. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 15 - You Were a What? | 04/25/2006 10:42 pm |
| lol they're the tools that shape america.. lol hehe great update!! |
| Thank you |
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| Kat | 14 - Yours | 04/17/2006 01:01 pm |
| oh nice story. I really really like it alot |
| Thank you. I'm glad you like it. |
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| fallen_angel | 14 - Yours | 04/16/2006 05:15 am |
| let's go to sunnydale! no seriously, i wanna see Will and Xand's reaction to slayage and the vamp guards and everything and wanna see Giles interactions with the vamp guards too. |
| They will go to Sunnydale, but unfortunately no Giles in this fic. Sorry. |
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| MarzBar | 14 - Yours | 04/15/2006 11:06 pm |
| Hot chocolate with marshmallows! That's pretty cute. More story please. |
| Thank you. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 14 - Yours | 04/15/2006 10:27 pm |
awww. thats so cute that joyce is all understanding like.. 
and lol spike is so adorable..  |
| Yes he is isn't he. |
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| vladt | 14 - Yours | 04/15/2006 09:07 pm |
| good chapter, fun tale. thanks for the read. |
| Thank you. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 14 - Yours | 04/15/2006 07:36 pm |
| Get to the smut! LoL And the Sparie! hehe |
| *lol* I will. I will. |
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| fallen_angel | 13 - Something is Missing | 04/05/2006 05:43 am |
| yeh! claim's not broken! i really hate Angel right now wish someone would dust him! |
| *lol* I know.. he's so serious and broody. |
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| SpaceLord | 13 - Something is Missing | 04/05/2006 05:02 am |
| So whens the cat gonna get out of the bag? |
| Might take some time... |
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| MarzBar | 13 - Something is Missing | 04/05/2006 02:17 am |
| Strange semi-claim effects. Interesting that the other vamps will not force Spike to do what Angelus wants. More story please. |
| Well the way I see it the other vamps don't always agree with Angel. Niko likes Spike a lot and Caden treats Spike like a younger brother... |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 13 - Something is Missing | 04/04/2006 11:56 pm |
| ohhhh poor Spike... just dust Angel and make a run for it with her, hehe |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 13 - Something is Missing | 04/04/2006 11:56 pm |
| ohhhh poor Spike... just dust Angel and make a run for it with her, hehe |
| Yup... poor Spike but I'll fix it somehow... |
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| Cewcew | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 08:24 pm |
| Sweet chappie! I shall be awating the next. |
| Thank you. |
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| vladt | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 01:03 pm |
| so he didn't break the claim, just blocked it? should make for interesting future chapters. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thank you. Yup, I guess that would be the best description. |
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| fallen_angel | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 12:31 pm |
| i wait 4 ur story like mad. the last para made it seem like spike broke the claim. so is sunnydale in the offing?still waiting 2 see who the girl in the black n white shirt is. |
| Aww.. thanks. Sunnydale is still in the horizon... it is the Hellmouth afterall. Thanks again. |
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| Dar | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 08:09 am |
| Angel broke the claim didn't he, darn all that forehead an nothing to show for it. Wanker.. great Update |
| *lol* Well Angel is a wanker but he didn't break it. He wants Spike to break it. |
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| MarzBar | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 03:15 am |
How is Spike going to break this incomplete claim without Buffy's presence? I get that Angelus is jealous and Merrick is a true Wanker but I don't get what Spike is supposed to do. Does he yell "repudio" or something three times? Wouldn't he have to do it to her face?
Blonde here requesting more. |
| Yup, the claim is incomplete especially since Spike wouldn't let Buffy respond to it. I see Merrick as just being quite protective and Angel just has his views on how things should be. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 02:45 am |
awww.. did angel break the claim???
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| No, he wants Spike to break it. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 12 - Next Best Thing | 03/24/2006 01:25 am |
| Oh noes, what did he do? |
| Nothing really bad... just what he thought was best for all parties involved. |
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| fallen_angel | 11 - A Solution | 03/24/2006 12:04 pm |
| ok what's with Angel?and what the implications of the claim gonna be? u have me totally hooked u know that. |
| I'm glad you're liking this fic. Angel is very serious and professional acting in this fic. |
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| Chanel 5 | 11 - A Solution | 03/17/2006 08:45 am |
| What a great story, and such an original idea. I'll keep my eye on this one. |
| Thank you. I'm glad you like the plot bunny. |
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| SpaceLord | 11 - A Solution | 03/17/2006 01:22 am |
| Well now Spike has done it |
| That's Spike for ya! |
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| MarzBar | 11 - A Solution | 03/16/2006 10:48 pm |
| OMG! Spike saved her by claiming her? Now he'll have to fight for his life against Angelus. Seems like a pretty solid claiming. More story please. |
| Thanks. Hope you'll like what happens next. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 11 - A Solution | 03/16/2006 10:41 pm |
| Did the three stooges sense the new claim?? |
| Yes they did and Angel ain't happy. |
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| vladt | 11 - A Solution | 03/16/2006 09:57 pm |
| very good chapter. am sure it's going to cause problems. looking forward to reading about them. thanks. |
| Thanks. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/10/2006 08:35 pm |
| *GASP*.... oh no!!! he wouldnt?!? um one question.. why is avril on the banner?? *ponders* |
| Well all vampire guards have been given authority by the Council to dispose of the Slayer if needed. As for Avril in the banner... hehe |
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| SpaceLord | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/10/2006 02:23 am |
| Ohh fight to the death, that should be fun. |
| Hope you'll like what will happen next |
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| MarzBar | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/10/2006 02:14 am |
| OMG!! What kind of thrall does Lothos have? Buffy is still a bimbo and she must be pretty easy. More story please. |
| Well I'm assuming that Lothos was more of a vampire that used thrall... especially considering his age. |
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| fallen_angel | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/10/2006 01:21 am |
| too short!need more please write more fast! who's the girl wearing the black and white shirt in the banner? |
| Will try to update as soon as I can. The girl wearing the black and white shirt... part of the eventual twist. |
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| vladt | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/09/2006 11:12 pm |
| very evil (good) spot to leave a very good update. enjoying the fic. thanks for the read. |
| Thanks. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 10 - Warm Feeling | 03/09/2006 10:13 pm |
| Eeep! No beating on Spike..... except for me....... |
| *grins* Don't know yet but you might get the chance. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/02/2006 04:04 am |
| awww.. did anyone think of cinderella story? lol i can hear it now.. "... on sleepless roads the sleepless go, may angels lead you in..." awww.. too bad about the fighting bit.. |
| ^_^ part of me saw the cinderella story... or maybe I just wanted to have Spike in a suit. |
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| SpaceLord | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/02/2006 02:37 am |
| Ohh things are heating up now, so will Merrick die? Will things change alot from canon? This story is very interesting. |
| Thanks. Hope you guys won't hate me for what I'm planning on doing. |
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| MarzBar | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/02/2006 02:26 am |
| ACK!! Just when the Spuffy is getting started, some trumped up vamp interrupts and you leave us with a cliffie! I'm really enjoying this story and want more please. |
| Thanks. Yay. I was a little nervous about this chapter. |
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| vladt | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/02/2006 12:29 am |
| how could spike lose buffy? enjoyed the update. thanks |
| Lots of demons... a fyarl and a number of minions grabbed her. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/01/2006 11:15 pm |
| gaaaahhh I hope she sets Lothos on fire for breaking up the make out section... |
| *grins* You'll see. |
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| jl1980 | 9 - Saints and Dances | 03/01/2006 10:49 pm |
| well things are heating up nicely...i want to know what happened to buffy!!! will they find her in time?? loving your story still |
| Thanks. I'm glad you're still finding it interesting. |
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| SpaceLord | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/23/2006 03:30 am |
| Well that was a nice chapter....so she got over Angel pretty fast |
| Well he's all broody and boring... ^_^ |
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| MarzBar | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/22/2006 11:24 pm |
| Yummy, the Spuffy is beginning. Will she have to burn down the gym in this AU? I think having vampire guards for the Slayer is such a good idea. More story please. |
| Yup.. spuffy loving... as for the gym... hehe |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/22/2006 11:01 pm |
aww thats cute and great.. love it
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| Thanks. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/22/2006 10:33 pm |
| hehehe i like them annoying each other |
| cool... guess it sounded better than I thought. hehe |
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| vladt | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/22/2006 10:08 pm |
| good update, enjoying the tale. thanks |
| Thanks. |
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| jl1980 | 8 - Slayer Blood | 02/22/2006 10:02 pm |
| liked this chapter a lot, their conversation was good...i like how you've changed the history of Spike's relationship with Nikki...i could see that happening...even in the show their dynamic seemed similar to Spike and Buffy's...this story is very very good |
| Thanks. I just hope I don't run out of steam... *pets muse* |
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| vladt | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/17/2006 03:29 pm |
| good update, despite "an apparent taste for poofters" |
| I know ... icky Angel |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/17/2006 04:38 am |
| ooh. great chappie!! |
| Thanks |
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| SpaceLord | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/17/2006 02:59 am |
| ewwww.....Buffy drooling over Angel is just wrong ;) |
| hehe.. I know... just completely wrong. I'll fix it soon. |
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| MarzBar | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/17/2006 02:55 am |
| Ack! She's got a taste for poofters. Spike is still funny and Angelus is still broody. Will Buffy get smarter? More story please. |
| Thanks. I hope I can keep Spike entertaining. ^_^ |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/16/2006 11:52 pm |
| Ewwww.... bangel..... |
| I know... icky.. This was suppose to be bangel for a bit but I decided against it. |
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| jl1980 | 7 - Meeting Buffy | 02/16/2006 11:51 pm |
| i like this so much!! I love the way you've brought all the characters together in this very unique world, i loved Buffy and Spike's first meeting, but please let her get over the whole angel-crush thing really quick!! lol |
| She will... just couldn't write bangel... |
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| vladt | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 08:58 pm |
| nikolai, like spike, probably does not take direction well. good read. thanks |
| Yup.. and he doesn't care for Angel that much either. |
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| redwulf50 | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 06:21 pm |
| LOL, you gave swpike an equaly obnoxious friend???? Damn good ficcie |
| ^_^ Yup, will hopefully flesh out Niko's personality a bit more in the coming chapters. |
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| MarzBar | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 06:05 pm |
| Will there be Spuffy soon? Will Angelus emerge as his true scummy self? More story please. |
| Spuffy will be coming soon. |
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| mamadd | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 10:53 am |
| very different from anything I have read. really liked it, please update soon |
| Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it. |
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| SpaceLord | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 04:00 am |
| well this was fun....now things will get more spuffy....I also hope to get some more story of some of the slayers that has come and gone since Helena |
| Glad you enjoyed it. Will see if I can incorporate some more slayer backstories. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 03:57 am |
| Ewwwww.... Nikolai..... *giggles and turns to run from Niko before he catches her* |
| Get back here bella ragazza! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 01:54 am |
| o0ooooh i like it alot.. i love how you incorporated scenes from the buffy movie.. very nice.. lol |
| Thanks. More pre-Sunnydale Buffy coming up. |
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| jl1980 | 6 - The New Slayer | 02/14/2006 12:45 am |
| still loving this story and really excited that we're on the edge of spuffiness (i hope)... your original characters are very believable and engaging...really love your story |
| Thank you. ... Caden and Niko are glad that you like them. I'll hopefully be able to flesh Niko out a little more. |
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| redwulf50 | 5 - Chosen One | 02/14/2006 06:18 pm |
| Damn Angel is a cold bastard |
| Yup.. Angel will be all business in this one.. which is ironic I guess since he's the one with a soul. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | 5 - Chosen One | 02/09/2006 05:08 am |
| arggghhh!!! its great!! love it.. but i really need to see some spuffy!! |
| Don't worry. Spuffy will be coming soon. |
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| SpaceLord | 5 - Chosen One | 02/09/2006 02:56 am |
| How very sad, loved the Helena character she seemed like such a wonderful girl. |
| Thank you. I liked her too. Thanks for reading. |
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| MarzBar | 5 - Chosen One | 02/09/2006 02:47 am |
| Pretty sad. Can Spike stay tame enough to go with Angelus and Caden and guard the new Slayer? More story please. |
| He will... party feels guilty Helena is dead so he'll stay with them. |
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| jl1980 | 5 - Chosen One | 02/08/2006 11:26 pm |
wow..that's harsh  poor Spike, poor Helena...love the dialogue with the children...can't wait to see what happens next |
| Yup... Angel's all business. Hope you'll like what's coming. |
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| vladt | 5 - Chosen One | 02/08/2006 09:56 pm |
| great update, even considering helena's fate. very enjoyable read. thanks |
| Thank you for the review. Hope you keep on reading. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 5 - Chosen One | 02/08/2006 09:21 pm |
| are we closer to sparie??? |
| Slowly but surely... still a ways though. |
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| redwulf50 | 4 - Retribution | 02/14/2006 06:13 pm |
| oh yeah loving this one so far |
| Thanks. I'm so glad you're liking it. I wasn't sure if people will like the plot bunny. |
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| jl1980 | 4 - Retribution | 02/08/2006 11:22 pm |
| sooo good!! I love the trial thing, didn't see it coming til the end...love the sparring match...i really love this story! |
| Thanks. Glad you liked it. ^_^ |
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| MarzBar | 4 - Retribution | 02/06/2006 01:17 pm |
| Can Spike be tamed so soon after his turning? I think some other kind of dance with the Slayer might work better but that's just my DOL talking. |
| *grins* Well I'm sure that other kind of dance will definitely get Spike to follow the Slayer. I think the reason he's changed quickly is because he actually cares for Helena like she's family. Thanks for reading. |
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| SpaceLord | 4 - Retribution | 02/06/2006 03:09 am |
| I love this chapter very nice, how much more will be spent in the past and when will it move to Spuffy? Not that I mind I like these new characters of Helena and Caden. |
| Just a tiny tiny bit more. Thanks for being so patient. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 4 - Retribution | 02/05/2006 11:32 pm |
| Awwww, you mentioned me *faints* When do we get to the sparie?? |
| You deserve it! But you know things take time.. hehe |
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| vladt | 4 - Retribution | 02/05/2006 10:48 pm |
| just started this fine fic. really enjoying the read, thanks. why am i sure that helena, who i really like, is n't going to be around long? |
| Thanks. Hope you'll enjoy where I'm going to take the fic. |
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| redwulf50 | 3 - Turning | 02/14/2006 06:14 pm |
| Damn good ficcie |
| Thanks |
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| jl1980 | 3 - Turning | 02/08/2006 11:14 pm |
| oh i hope he doesn't get in trouble!! *worried* please change canon when it comes to what happened with his mom! this is so good, i'm on to the next chappie |
| I thought about that... was actually contemplating on turning her but decided against it. Thanks for the review. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 3 - Turning | 02/01/2006 09:05 pm |
| Get to Marie! hehe |
| =P I will.. I will |
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| redwulf50 | 2 - Change | 02/14/2006 06:14 pm |
| OK, loving this one |
| Nice to see that you're liking it. ^_^ |
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| jl1980 | 2 - Change | 02/08/2006 11:10 pm |
| I love this twist on canon...so good....you dusted Dru! Bit of a shock but it's interesting, having him turned by souled Angel instead...and I love how his Slayer friend actually brought about the events unknowingly, urging him to tell Cecily how he felt....hooked on this on to the next chapter |
| Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it so far. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 2 - Change | 01/28/2006 12:45 pm |
| Oooo yay! Dru dust!! |
| *cough cough* Yup.. didn't want her being in this fic. |
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| Pin | 2 - Change | 01/28/2006 06:19 am |
| Very interesting turn of events. How will William react?? Looking forward to more. thanks |
| Thanks. Hope you'll enjoy the plot twists along the way. |
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| SpaceLord | 2 - Change | 01/28/2006 02:12 am |
| Well interesting to say the least. Love the twist you put on it. Can't wait to see where this leads. |
| Thanks. Hope you keep on reading. |
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| MarzBar | 2 - Change | 01/28/2006 01:04 am |
| Spike Pratt?!?! Is this going to be a funny story? |
| *lol* I don't think it is...hope you keep on reading. |
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| redwulf50 | Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position | 02/14/2006 06:14 pm |
| Good beginning |
| Thank you. |
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| jl1980 | Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position | 02/08/2006 11:06 pm |
| very interesting first chapter... i'm off to read the next now |
| Thanks |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position | 01/24/2006 05:38 pm |
| Is this the one with me in it? *dances* |
| Yes it is. ^_^ so sit back and enjoy. |
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| Jenna | Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position | 01/24/2006 06:37 am |
| I like the concept! William as watcher, very nice. |
| Thanks.. though he won't be a watcher for very long. |
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