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| Will\'s Papa by redwulf50 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Will's Girl | 07/15/2006 08:22 pm |
| Good ending to this one, and it was a nice fill in for what happened in the future before they went into the past. {Smiles} |
| Thank you, I was trying to make Toni slightly more likeable |
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| nichbuket | Will's Girl | 06/17/2006 07:12 pm |
| Cute. By the power of greyskull. God i haven't seen heman since forever. |
lol, it just jumped out of my head, it was scary  |
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| slinkypsychokit | Will's Girl | 06/12/2006 05:58 pm |
Go, Toni, go get your man! How can you not with Mama Summers-Kenticot's stamp of approval?
Way to go Buffy with the sneakiness. Not to mention Spike's little attempt to Psych 101 his son's sweetie. Looks like things are about to get VERY interesting for the swamp girl. |
LOL, make her a swamp rat and Slinky just loves her already  |
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| sirc | Will's Girl | 06/12/2006 02:23 pm |
well done  |
| thank you |
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| Joyful Dayz | Will's Girl | 06/05/2006 06:50 pm |
Wonderful story! Young Will just pulls my heartstrings. I'm off to read Toni.  |
Will is a bit of a momma's boy though  |
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| Pin | Will's Girl | 06/05/2006 12:15 pm |
| Love this universe and always happy to see a new segment. Thanks. Now I get to go back and read Time Tossed again. Neat! |
and thabnk you for reading  |
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| Robyn | Will's Girl | 06/04/2006 08:11 pm |
I really enjoyed how the girls played Spike and Toni's comment as she went into the portal brought back memories and was a very nice touch.  |
| Thank you, I hope you like Toni in Time Tossed Interlude |
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| vladt | Will's Girl | 06/04/2006 04:02 pm |
| very good chapter and one hell of a place to leave. thanks for the grat read. |
LOL, it continues straight into Time Tossed Interlude. and thanks  |
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| Athenewolfe | Will's Girl | 06/04/2006 07:18 am |
LMAO LMAO - the power of Greyskull? Please oh god please tell me you are not planning on bring she ra into this. Whimpers I beg of you.
LMAO so where oh where has toni gone? |
| LOL, no toni just loves old cartoons and she just touched down in Time Tossed Interlude |
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| Karyn | Will's Girl | 06/03/2006 09:31 am |
| ugh, where did go to? silly girl! great chappie! |
| She took the last train to clarksville?? |
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| Jackofspikes | Will's Girl | 06/03/2006 08:53 am |
You need a couple of clones so we can have more wulfie updatey goodness. I must admit, that this was worth the wait. Now....MORE  |
but then we would just find more reasons to not write as much as we need to  |
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| dihcar | Will's Girl | 06/03/2006 05:31 am |
Very nice, it clarifyies the situation alot. I'm looking forward to more of Love lost.
seeya |
Tam is right now beating me till I write more  |
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| golddrake | Will's Girl | 06/02/2006 10:56 pm |
| Another great chapter. I've really enjoyed this series. I'm looking forward to whatever you get out next. |
| thanks I have a short fic following this then onto more TT/LL |
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| maryperk | Will's Girl | 06/02/2006 07:01 pm |
| Good chapter, More now! |
first chappie of Toni is finished and I have about half of the next chappie of Love Lost  |
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| Karyn | Will's Mum | 06/03/2006 09:27 am |
damn she's like grrrr buffy..lol
kinda feel sorry for toni...lol |
you don't think Buffy would be overly protective of her only son???  |
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| jl1980 | Will's Mum | 05/19/2006 12:40 am |
wow...wonderful story with a wonderful end...their past still has a part in their future, doesn't it? lovely fic, pet  |
| yep the chapter I just posted brings us up to the point they left going back in time |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Will's Mum | 03/31/2006 01:02 am |
| {chuckles} Sounds like Buffy wants to take a crack at Toni. This was a good series. Will you ever be adding to it? Please let me know at my contact through the BSV. Thanks bunches. |
Buffy sees Toni as a younger version of herself and remembers the way she treated Will's Papa  |
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| Judy | Will's Mum | 03/15/2006 05:17 am |
| Wow, Mama Bear protecting her cub. Wouldn't you just hate to be any girl that Will dates? Cute fic. |
| lol, oh yeah Buffy is a bit protective |
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| Joyful Dayz | Will's Mum | 03/15/2006 12:37 am |
| As always, I love your stuff. I'm so glad your The End?'s have been teasers. Keep it coming, please. |
| only one more chappie though and it leads directly into TT/LL |
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| Ariel Dawn | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 11:17 am |
| That was a fun fun fic Wulfie! Cute, funny very entertaining! |
| thank you madam |
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| MarzBar | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 09:46 am |
| The rest of the girls want to do naughty things to him because he's pretty? Seems like a pretty good motivation for naughtiness. |
| lol, seee Buffy would so kill you. |
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| letitia | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 09:39 am |
| Gotta love a concerned MOMMA... Now Buffy was just too much. Great glimpse. |
| lol, thank you |
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| sirc | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 08:37 am |
great work  |
| thank you |
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| Athenewolfe | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 08:32 am |
LMAO that is so funny - so funny -- so so funny
HEHHEHEHEHHEHHE |
| thank you |
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| Morrigan | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 04:55 am |
| Darn those 13 year old tramps! *L* |
| LOL, yeah where were they when I was thirteen??? |
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| dihcar | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 04:44 am |
oh, that buffy is such a concerned mother. I like how she is so scared for her little boy.
seeya |
| oh yeah a bit too scared |
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| Richard | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 12:49 am |
| As entertaining as this is, it's a bit too PWP for my tastes. I hope you continue with Karma soon. Karma has the potential to be as delightfully maniacal as Time Tossed was. In contrast, these vignettes don't have any plot between them so their energy just dissipates instead of building to a towering crescendo. And that's what makes your stories so fun to read, seeing the energy of a dozen writers pouring out of one person. |
| thing is, I am using this series of ficlet's to bring forth some of the plot to the Time Tossed/Love Lost series, Like Will's favorite weapon, a spike he got from his papa and Buffy's resentment of Toni. |
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| slinkyPK | Will's Mum | 03/14/2006 12:05 am |
Oh, Shit! Hell hath no fury like a thoroughly brassed Slayer. That it's her only son, himself barely straddling the fine line between pre and teen...oh, yeah. I'm just gonna be thankful it isn't me interested in dating Will.
(just so we're clear, yes, I LOVED it!) |
| LOL, well yeah Buffy can be a bit much |
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| Robyn | Will's Mum | 03/13/2006 10:13 pm |
This was so fun, the whole fudge talk was hilarious, and I love how upset Buffy was at just the thought of her ‘baby’ being hurt. And of course Willow making sure that Buffy knew she wasn’t involved, Faith wondering about her blood pressure, and Dawn and Spike at the end. Perfect. More please?  |
| lol, just one more chappie and it bridges straight into LL/TT |
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| Jackofspikes | Will's Mum | 03/13/2006 09:29 pm |
poor poor Will...Buffy as a mom! LOL
Almost as scary as Spike as a dad to Erin and Joyce...let them date soon please please oh great wolfman! |
maybe  |
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| Karyn | Cooking for Dummies | 06/03/2006 09:12 am |
| awwww, young william in lurveeee, giggles! |
| lol |
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| jl1980 | Cooking for Dummies | 05/19/2006 12:38 am |
awww...it's so sweet...i just love this little story  |
| thank you ma'am |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Cooking for Dummies | 03/31/2006 01:00 am |
| Love/Hate teasing are so close together. There really is a fine line between love and hate. You captured it well with Toni and William. |
| Toni is nicer than you think |
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| Athenewolfe | Cooking for Dummies | 03/14/2006 08:31 am |
| I love it as always - such a cutie My william is |
yeah, should I tell Toni you are homing in on herr man?? Or Buffy you wanna do naughty things to her son??  |
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| Morrigan | Cooking for Dummies | 03/14/2006 04:41 am |
| sings *Why must I be a teenager in love?* Hehe  Great chapter. |
| lol |
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| sirc | Cooking for Dummies | 03/09/2006 12:24 pm |
They're so much like Buffy and Spike |
| lol, are supposed to be |
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| romero | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 04:11 pm |
| I love Spike as the proud popa and sire. Will is a sweetie and Toni is seeing him in a different light. It does remind me of Spike and Buffy.. I hope you continue with this story as I love the series. |
| only one chappie left |
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| letitia | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 10:53 am |
| isn't he just so cute and shy. She better not mess this up. Do I want it to end? NO!!!!! But I am only along for the ride. :-) |
| lol, thank you |
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| Jace Nox | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 10:29 am |
| *snerk* reminds of Spike and Buffy...except younger |
| true, very true and Toni is nicer |
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| Shady | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 08:23 am |
Better not be the end, you wanker.
I heart this series.
More! |
| lol, one chappie left |
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| Judy | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 06:50 am |
| More please!! |
| of course |
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| Always_jbj | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 05:06 am |
| Love it!! Nice sweet ending. Well done, Pup. |
| ending?? vas dis ending??? |
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| dihcar | Cooking for Dummies | 03/08/2006 04:44 am |
good chapter redwulf.
I like your verse alot.
seeya |
| thank you I like it too |
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| Robyn | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 10:27 pm |
| Toni trying so hard and messing it up, but finally getting it right with some help, the uncertainty she and Will feel, it all came together perfectly. This has been so cute and so fun, I really hope you add to it. |
| I will, but only one more chappie |
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| vladt | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 08:47 pm |
| first: well done. very good read. thanks. second: what do you mean? the end? come on, you know you can still do fantastic job continuing this. either way thanks for the fun read. |
| one more chappie |
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| vladt | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 08:39 pm |
| first: well done. very good read. thanks. second: what do you mean? the end? come on, you know you can still do fantastic job continuing this. either way thanks for the fun read. |
| thanks |
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| slaymesoftly | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 08:33 pm |
| Just catching up - so, Will has a girl friend? Some cool ideas - "born a master" and the mixture of powers - |
| thank ye ma'am |
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| spikeslovebite | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 08:03 pm |
*immensely* and add incessantly to that
*snerk* |
| always, but I live just to anoy you, mattress monkey |
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| MarzBar | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 06:52 pm |
| Toni burns kitchens, too? Is that a reqirement for being a slayer? Certainly worked for Buffy. This is so enjoyable. |
| lol, Toni was just very nervous |
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| Jackofspikes | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 06:17 pm |
| Again...I love these characters...thanks for sharing them. |
| always love sharing them |
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| maryperk | Cooking for Dummies | 03/07/2006 06:16 pm |
| Cute chapter. |
| thanks |
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| Karyn | Little Slayer | 06/03/2006 09:07 am |
| hee hee! god not another buffy...rofl, great chappie! |
| nope but Buffy thinks she is |
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| jl1980 | Little Slayer | 05/19/2006 12:37 am |
lol...history repeating itself maybe?  |
| Maybe, as you will see Toni is her own woman. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Little Slayer | 03/31/2006 12:58 am |
| That was delightful! I'm laughing good over here. "Nice doggie" That was good. |
Weeeellll loook who his role models are.  |
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| Judy | Little Slayer | 03/08/2006 06:50 am |
| Love it. |
| thanks |
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| Always_jbj | Little Slayer | 03/08/2006 05:00 am |
| LOL... Buffy was never THAT annoying! Although the whole denial thing... yeah! Toni sooo needed that butt kicking! |
lol, Buffy was more annoying thank you very much  |
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| Robyn | Little Slayer | 03/07/2006 10:21 pm |
| I love Toni and Will's banter, how much he is like his father, him doing to her what she said she was going to do to him, and the best was what Spike said to Buffy at the end. Perfect. |
| lol, Buffy lives in denial. still, but Sp0ike is dragging her kicking and screaming out of it. |
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| Athenewolfe | Little Slayer | 03/06/2006 03:40 am |
| LMAO - funny heheheeheh i like will hehe if I cannot have spike can I have will? |
no  |
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| slinkyPK | Little Slayer | 03/02/2006 05:57 pm |
| ROFLMAO!! Yes, Sir! Like father, like son! Don't tell Holly, but I think I'm starting to perv a little on young Will. It's the smacking and the biting...ya can't just say things like that... |
| It realy is Toni you should worry about, thr kid can be a mite posessive of Will. |
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| Morrigan | Little Slayer | 03/02/2006 03:58 pm |
| *L*  Too funny! |
| Thanks |
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| dihcar | Little Slayer | 03/02/2006 02:02 pm |
ohh, it seems like Toni likes the boy who has tamed her.
seeya |
you said--
ohh, it seems like Toni likes the boy who has tamed her.
and Wulfe replied
Weeeeeelllllll she is a slayer and they are a bit strange |
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| letitia | Little Slayer | 03/02/2006 09:59 am |
| I so love the way Will just played her. And I am glad he was vindicated. And how about Toni's attitude now. Just love this glimpse. |
On Will's papa 3
you said---
I so love the way Will just played her. And I am glad he was vindicated. And how about Toni's attitude now. Just love this glimpse.
and Wulfe replied---
Not realy a change just the first time we saw her |
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| Jace Nox | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 11:54 pm |
*snicker snort* I love it redwulf, I cannot, cannot wait for more! *cheers and bounces excitedly waiting*
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on Will's Papa 3
you said---
*snicker snort* I love it redwulf, I cannot, cannot wait for more! *cheers and bounces excitedly waiting*
and Wulfe replied---
Tam has the next chaplet  |
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| MarzBar | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 09:31 pm |
| Teeheehee!! Nice fight. The little slayers don't know about hybrids? |
On Will's Papa 3
You said---
Teeheehee!! Nice fight. The little slayers don't know about hybrids?
and Wulfe replied---
They know but some have seletive hearing  |
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| vladt | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 08:00 pm |
| wonderful update. thanks for the fun. |
On Will's Papa 3
You said---
wonderful update. thanks for the fun.
and Wulfe replied---
It is a fun ficto write on |
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| Tamara | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 07:53 pm |
| Looks like the arrogant little slayer has been taken down a peg or two . And likes the guy that did it. |
On Will's Papa 3
You said---
Looks like the arrogant little slayer has been taken down a peg or two . And likes the guy that did it.
and Wulfe replied---
Well you know Slayers are a bit strange  |
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| maryperk | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 06:20 pm |
| Will's being naughty. |
On Will's Papa 3
You said---
Will's being naughty.
and Wulfe replied---
and this suprises you....why?? Look who his dad is. |
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| Jackofspikes | Little Slayer | 03/01/2006 06:14 pm |
| LOL...loved it...thanks for the update...I love these characters! |
On Will's Papa 3
You said---
LOL...loved it...thanks for the update...I love these characters!
and Wulfe replied---
Me too, they are fun to write  |
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| Karyn | One more? | 06/03/2006 09:02 am |
| uh oh, somebody's gonna get hurt...lol, cool chappie! |
| Well yeah |
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| jl1980 | One more? | 05/19/2006 12:36 am |
excellent love this so much  |
Thank you ma'am
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | One more? | 03/31/2006 12:55 am |
| LOL. William is going to kick someone's arse. {grins} |
oh yeah Will is a bit rough  |
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| Judy | One more? | 03/08/2006 06:45 am |
| Really, really like this. Wonderful stories. |
thanks  |
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| Always_jbj | One more? | 03/08/2006 04:53 am |
| ROFL. Go Will!! I LOVED the description of Spike's connection with his kids being that of both father and sire! |
| thank you ma'am |
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| Robyn | One more? | 03/07/2006 10:18 pm |
I love this, William's thoughts and the exchange between Buffy and Spike. Very well done so much with so few words.  |
| thank you very much |
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| vladt | One more? | 02/07/2006 09:01 pm |
| masterful set up, but please continue the scene. thanks for the, as always, great read. |
on Will's Papa - One more?
you said---
masterful set up, but please continue the scene. thanks for the, as always, great read.
and Wulfe replied---
LOL, they are fun character to write |
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| Athenewolfe | One more? | 02/07/2006 06:32 pm |
| I will help Pulchra! It has been like 12 hours or so and you haven't posted the next scene. I need the scene ... you can't hold out on me here... Wulfieeeeeee............ |
| Bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha |
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| Joyful Dayz | One more? | 02/07/2006 05:34 pm |
| Wonderful! I loved both parts. You really need to add a 3rd part, yes? |
might be a part three, some day  |
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| slinkyPK | One more? | 02/07/2006 05:34 pm |
| you're so bad. **giggle** almost as bad as Kat with the cliffies! |
thank you. my Dark sensei has trained me well  |
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| Nichole | One more? | 02/07/2006 01:10 pm |
| NOOOOO!!!! Wulfie that was mean i wanted to see William put the smack down on her.....N |
lol, might right more I just wanted to show Will in his element or one of them  |
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| dihcar | One more? | 02/07/2006 12:41 pm |
hehe, damm funny.
You can really see that Spike is very proud of his son and familly.
seeya |
| He is, he has a gift he never expected to recieve. |
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| Tamara | One more? | 02/07/2006 11:19 am |
| Kick her ass! |
He will  |
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| Pulchra Nex | One more? | 02/07/2006 10:21 am |
That was just mean, Wulfie! go back to writing! you can't do this! you'll know we'll get back at you... hm... maybe some ****? *evil-snicker*
I bet Athenewolfe would want to help me... did love the update though! |
| bwahahahahaaha |
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| MarzBar | One more? | 02/07/2006 09:03 am |
| Hmmm. |
| lol |
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| Dar | One more? | 02/07/2006 07:41 am |
*snickersnort* you know true evil. Want more...Please
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| lol, I might could be presueded |
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| letitia | One more? | 02/07/2006 06:57 am |
| GO William. I am glad he came into his own and I know Spike wanted to just jump for joy. Great update. |
lol, Spike knew he could do it.  |
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| Athenewolfe | One more? | 02/07/2006 05:42 am |
| Wulf pup - get your a** back here and update this right now... I want MORE! |
| again bwahahahaha |
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| Karyn | Will's Papa | 06/03/2006 08:56 am |
| awesome beginning! poor will! *sniff* |
| lol |
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| jl1980 | Will's Papa | 05/19/2006 12:35 am |
| that was simply heart-warming...beautiful chapter ;) |
| thank you very much |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Will's Papa | 03/31/2006 12:53 am |
| Ohhhh ... that was precious! I loved it. |
| But I hate Scmoop gahhhhh |
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| Robyn | Will's Papa | 03/07/2006 10:14 pm |
Spike is the best and I love how he knew just what his son needed to hear. This is very sweet. |
| Thank you |
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| Judy | Will's Papa | 02/07/2006 03:44 am |
| Very nice. |
| Tank ye |
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| Jace Nox | Will's Papa | 02/07/2006 03:30 am |
*wipes a tear* that was beautiful. *sniffles and holds a thumb up* Good work Redwulf
Jace |
| lol, thank you very much ma'am |
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| Always_jbj | Will's Papa | 02/07/2006 01:08 am |
*squishes you and thnks you for my b'day pressie!*
You already KNOW that I love it... but I just wanted to tell you again! It is so lovely... the father son bonding is just gorgeous. Poor Will is soooo like his father! And before you say it, YES, I KNOW Spike is about to get very well laid!!! *rolls eyes at pup* |
your you very much and if Spike plays it right he might get laid more than one night  |
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| vladt | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 09:42 pm |
| very well done. thanks |
| tank ye |
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| letitia | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 09:14 pm |
| Leave it to Spike to know exactly what to say and do for his son. I am just so glad to see this glimpse of their life before they had to all go back. |
| Spike understands almost to much and it makes Buffy feel guilty |
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| MarzBar | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 07:57 pm |
| Sniffle, sniffle. Who rejected Will? |
| Toni did not very smart girl |
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| Niamh | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 06:33 pm |
| schmoooooppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! |
| LOL, that makes one of us |
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| Nichole | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 05:42 pm |
| hey wulfie great story...that Joy has to be like Buffy..she a firecracker...i like how all the Scoobie women reacted..i liked how Spke related to Will..N |
Joy has a bit of a temper  |
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| Sevvy | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 05:32 pm |
| Aww, I love that family. Very sweet. =) |
Thank you  |
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| dihcar | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 04:10 pm |
good drabble, Redwulf50.
I always enjoy reading about the spuffy family in your timetossed verse.
seeya |
| I have a sort of sequal to it that I hope to post friday. |
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| Sylvia | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 03:43 pm |
| Loved it. What a sweet, sweet little story! Thank you for posting it and brightening up my afternoon :-). |
| Thank you for reviewing it and brightening mine |
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| Athenewolfe | Will's Papa | 02/06/2006 02:46 pm |
| happy happy sigh sigh... *smile* me likey! |
| GoTS????? |
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