Paper Promise by Jess Marie
 
RobynI Can't Get Behind That04/18/2006 03:11 am
Buffy and Spike need to be locked in a room where they can't touch each other but only talk, maybe that way they will both finally figure out things and stop hurting each other. Thanks for a great fic, I am really enjoying it.
 
slaymesoftlyI Can't Get Behind That04/17/2006 09:07 pm
Oh, was so pleased to see an update of this fic - but this one is a heartbreaker! And so like them to be miscommunicating when they both actually want the same things. *sobs* Fix it, please!
 
pfeifferpackI Can't Get Behind That04/17/2006 05:41 pm
DAmn...powerful chapter! Even though you've let us see that Buffy isn't the cold bitca she still appears to be to Spike it sure captures how she DID treat him onscreen. The misunderstanding between them just as Buffy is starting to actually SEE Spike is rather like all of S7 for that matter.

I am so glad you are adding chapters. I was hooked from the first one where Buffy had the sense to begin making that list on his precious gift of blank paper.

Bring on more soon, please!

Kathleen
 
redwulf50I Can't Get Behind That04/17/2006 03:34 pm
And once again Buffy acts liker a Bitca even when ashe was wanting to be nice
 
Spikes Slayer2I Can't Get Behind That04/17/2006 07:48 am
aww.. and buffy was really trying too.. Great updates!!
 
fallen_angelI Can't Get Behind That04/17/2006 05:02 am
these two have issues! they seriously need to talk it out like adults but considering that they are Buffy and Spike that'll never happen! Nice update.
 
vladtI Can't Get Behind That04/16/2006 11:47 pm
another excellent chapter. if they keep this up, even someone with your skills, will have diificulty bring them together. thanks for the fine read.
 
KarynI Can't Get Behind That04/16/2006 10:05 pm
oh my, *weeps* it's went so far that even when she tried tenderness, he won't allow it...*sad sigh*
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersI Can't Get Behind That04/16/2006 09:34 pm
Jerk.... and Xander must die a horrible painful death as usual
 
RobynCommon People04/18/2006 02:49 am
If only Buffy could learn to think before she spoke perhaps she would be less likely to hurt those around her, and just maybe she would be able to communicate what she is really feeling. I love that she admitted that Spike brings kindness to her life and helps her keep going.
 
UncagedMuseCommon People03/14/2006 11:41 am
Wonderful chap! I can't wait to see what you do next.
 
MarzBarCommon People03/14/2006 10:04 am
Isn't it time to kill Warren and run the other two idiots out of town?
 
Spikez_tartCommon People03/14/2006 10:03 am
I'm almost feeling sorry for Warren here. He's surrounded by morons. Cruel Buffy. She needs a spanking.
 
KarynCommon People03/14/2006 09:37 am
great update! ugh! buffy stupid mouth outrunning her brain again!
 
Spikes Slayer2Common People03/14/2006 05:30 am
aww...
 
redwulf50Common People03/13/2006 11:45 pm
Oh yeah damn good ficcie, is Buffu actctualy waking up???
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersCommon People03/13/2006 11:43 pm
she's getting so close.....
 
BloodyTearsOfLifeCommon People03/13/2006 11:39 pm
Aww. Poor Spike. All he's doing is trying and Buffy has to keep kicking him. Hope she learns something soon. Great chapter!
 
jl1980Common People03/13/2006 10:24 pm
nice insight there, buffy...too bad you didn't think of it *before* you hurt him *again*... *sigh*...wonderful story...buffy makes me mad though...poor spike...
 
RobynFamiliar Love04/18/2006 02:36 am
Very interesting chapter, I am looking forward to where you go with the demon boy and girl.
 
DeliciaFamiliar Love03/14/2006 12:23 pm
Nice chapter! The evil duo is more like the annoying twosome!
 
Spikez_tartFamiliar Love03/14/2006 09:57 am
I hope you can arrange for Spike to beat the daylights out of Andrew. Chip dispensation?
 
BloodyTearsOfLifeFamiliar Love03/01/2006 10:55 pm
Oh no, not the Debbie girl again. Oh well. Guess that gives us some answers at to what the two nerds were up to. Great chapter.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersFamiliar Love03/01/2006 10:44 pm
Hehe and who are the demons??
 
MarzBarFamiliar Love03/01/2006 10:07 pm
WTF did the nerds conjure up?
 
maryperkFamiliar Love03/01/2006 09:51 pm
uh oh. Thats the two from season 3, isnt it? When angel came back from you know where. LOL Good chappy. Can't wait to read more.
 
KarynFamiliar Love03/01/2006 09:27 pm
rofl @ the christmas special! great update! ohhh, they brought back Pete and Debbie wow! great choice Andrew...not! lol
 
jl1980Familiar Love03/01/2006 09:25 pm
lol..i saw it..a nightmare i would like to erase...lol...so...why does "debbie" sound familiar... are they the same couple from the episode about the abusive boyfriend? it was very touching, the way you wrote spike's response to his treatment of her, relating it to how buffy had treated him...i'm very much into this story by now... great update
 
RobynIt Hasn't Happened Yet04/18/2006 02:29 am
I loved how much it meant to Buffy when Dawn told her thanks.
 
DirktavianIt Hasn't Happened Yet04/17/2006 02:14 am
"Far easier to kill this slayer than to love her. Angelus was a whole pisser of wrong about that one. She’d been killed twice. He wasn’t sure he’d ever seen her well-loved. She wouldn’t let him, wouldn’t let anyone." I think this is one of my all time favorite paragraphs in the Spuffy realm-- so much pain and love within that thought. I was glad to see you had updated the story, so I went back and re-read the first two chapters for old times' sake, and they really are great.
 
Spikez_tartIt Hasn't Happened Yet03/14/2006 09:53 am
LOL re Buffy's cooking skills. Poor Spike, so smart about every body else. So clueless when it comes to Buffy.
 
DeliciaIt Hasn't Happened Yet03/14/2006 03:46 am
Great chapter! Buffy is being wonderful with Dawn. I think we have a case of misunderstanding between what Buffy saw the empty list as and what Spike did. I hope they can get it right soon.
 
UncagedMuseIt Hasn't Happened Yet03/01/2006 10:37 am
Fantastic chap! More as soon as you can please.
 
ComedyofErrorsIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/27/2006 04:45 pm
Just read these first two chapters and enjoyed them very much. I like the concept of Spike's list and Buffy's addition to it. I also like Spike's thoughts in this second chapter.
 
vladtIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/27/2006 04:37 pm
very nice reversal of positions. love the story. thanks
 
KarynIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/27/2006 09:35 am
great update! your Andrew-voice was fantastic! Love it!
 
MarzBarIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/27/2006 02:38 am
Spike the Big Bad is the wise man for the Summers. They're lucky to have him; just don't get it.
 
BloodyTearsOfLifeIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/27/2006 12:20 am
Ohh, I'm so wondering what Andrew is up to. Probably no good by the sounds of it. And now I'm all anxious over what Spike thinks has to change. Hope to see more soon!
 
jl1980It Hasn't Happened Yet02/26/2006 11:52 pm
hmmm...this is getting quite interesting...he's right, it's bad that she didn't care about dawnie that night...glad he made her do the right thing anyway...but he's wrong about how she meant the rest of it! She needs to go find him! Still loving this story by the way!
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersIt Hasn't Happened Yet02/26/2006 09:35 pm
Eeep, what's he going to do?
 
RobynThat's Me Trying04/18/2006 01:47 am
Spike's gift to Buffy is absolutely wonderful. I love what she added to the list, and how she saved it with her other special mementos.
 
mamaddThat's Me Trying03/14/2006 12:40 pm
wow!
 
Spikez_tartThat's Me Trying03/14/2006 09:47 am
This is really sweet Spuffy. Loved it.
 
DeliciaThat's Me Trying03/14/2006 02:48 am
Nice chapter! I love the piece of paper idea. It's so sweet. I was wondering about Dawn's dream. Was that a prophetic type dream? With the Cheeseman, I was thinking so. But feel free to tell me if I'm just an idiot and totally wrong.
 
OnyxThat's Me Trying02/24/2006 09:50 am
Great story, and very well written. ^_^
 
KarynThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 07:08 pm
what a wonderful story! this is great ! brought tears to my eyes even..lol
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 07:05 pm
Gah, I hate Dawn... very much... did I mention I hate her?
 
das_confusionThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 06:32 pm
OMG, that was so sweet. Very original, too. Kudos.
 
vladtThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 05:29 pm
sweet, wonderful story. thanks for the enjoyable read
 
Time of ChangeThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 03:41 pm
I remember this story, and it's just as lovely on second read as on first.
 
pfeifferpackThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 03:34 pm
Lovely.....so much said so beautifully! Wonderful tale. Ah but if only Buffy HAD understood the depths and reality of his love.

Kathleen
 
BloodyTearsOfLifeThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 03:25 pm
I really like this. It's was really sweet. Glad Buffy didn't knock Spike down. I hope to see more of this soon.
 
UncagedMuseThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 02:59 pm
Love it!
 
jl1980That's Me Trying02/23/2006 02:57 pm
wow...i am absolutely in awe...this is beautiful writing, with an emotional depth that is stunning...the very concept of that paper is so gorgeous and touching...i am absolutely, totally hooked on this story and really, really hope it's not just a one-shot...please??
 
CopyKweenThat's Me Trying02/23/2006 02:56 pm
I really like this so far! Can't wait to see how you involve the Trio later on