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| To fix What's Not Broken by slaymesoftly |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | One | 03/23/2006 04:45 pm |
| ROFL!! I loved the humor of the ending. Nice way to use the power of the key ... a healer seems very appropriate. This would be a great story to start off more adventures and explorations for Dawn and the family as well. Enjoyed this one. |
I'm glad you liked it. Does leave room for more Dawn adventures, doesn't it?
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| Lilachigh | One | 02/22/2006 05:47 am |
| Loved it. Please write more. |
| LOL Thanks. If/when I can tear myself away from my new web page making.... |
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| vladt | One | 02/21/2006 07:31 pm |
| lovely, absolutely lovely. fun read. thanks |
| Thank you for commenting so nicely! |
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| Robyn | One | 02/21/2006 07:02 pm |
| This is really good. |
| I'm glad you think so. :-) |
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| MarzBar | One | 02/21/2006 05:28 pm |
| Nice story with a good ending! Thank you for sharing. |
| thanks |
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | One | 02/21/2006 03:12 pm |
| That was another sweet one Patti. It's not often that I see Dawn being used for something original. I liked it a lot. |
| thanks - yep,it's time Dawn started earning her keep,don't you think? |
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| Bite_Me | One | 02/21/2006 11:45 am |
| Lovely just lovely. |
| :-) |
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| UncagedMuse | One | 02/21/2006 11:11 am |
| I love how you used Dawn in this fic! Enjoyed very much. |
| thanks! |
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| sirc | One | 02/21/2006 10:43 am |
Loved it  |
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| Lou | One | 02/21/2006 09:20 am |
| Dawn's keyness was hardly mentioned after Glory and I did wonder where it went. A great idea beautifully done. |
| Thanks - yes, it's not like she was no longer the key just because Glory wasn't around to try to use her! |
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| maryperk | One | 02/21/2006 08:03 am |
| Cool story. I liked it. |
| thanks |
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| Irina | One | 02/21/2006 07:59 am |
| Loved the plot. What a wonderful glimpse into Spike and Dawn's frienship. Fantastic story! |
| Glad you liked it. I'm a sucker for Spike/Dawn friendship. |
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| kim | One | 02/21/2006 07:58 am |
Awww, that's it?
Loved Dawn here. LOVED it. |
| Thanks! |
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| jl1980 | One | 02/21/2006 07:52 am |
| that was lovely...your dialogue and characterization was perfect...i love your dawn in this...you moved me to tears with chapter two as well...you should do a sequel or continue this story...please?? loved it so much!!! |
| Thanks - if I get inspired to follow up on Dawn's keyness, then there will definitely be a sequel. But not right now. |
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| CutieSaiyajin | One | 02/21/2006 07:45 am |
| Great story! I always love it when fics end on a positive note. Awesome job. |
| thank you - me too! |
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| lilmamaday | One | 02/21/2006 07:37 am |
| Great story! I always thought there was more to be explored about Dawn's keyness! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Thanks - um, nothing will happen next until I start a sequel. Just forgot to mark it "complete." *head desk* |
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| just sue | One | 02/21/2006 07:15 am |
Just the thing to put a smile on anyone's face! Charming - even though a little bit of Dawn can go a really long way with me!
Thanks ever so, Patti. |
| Hee! Well, I put as little of Dawn in it as I could and still call it a "Dawn" fic. *g* |
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| jl1980 | One | 02/21/2006 07:05 am |
| i read chapter one, didn't have time to read the rest just yet...but this is so beautiful! I was crying with Spike and Dawn, like actual tears! i always love Spike/Dawn friendship stories..can't wait to get home today and finish this gorgeous story...!! |
| I hope you continue to like it. |
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