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| HPfan | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 08/06/2006 09:07 pm |
| Just discovered this fic. Very interesting, definitely different storyline. Love the way you're exploring the emotional depths of all these characters. Gotta say that Angel's weird mood swings are creeping me out. Can't wait to find out what's going on there. And really, really want to know if Buffy's carrying Spike's child. Especially anxious for Spike to make an appearance. You won't be all evil and keep us hanging for much longer, will you? lol |
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| Robyn | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 08/01/2006 04:52 am |
| Faith's prayer and the pain and fear it showed made me cry. I really like the thoughtfulness that Buffy showed in thinking of Giles and his loss as well. What an emotionally powerful chapter, thanks for the updates. |
| Just goes to show, those that seem the hardest and most in your face tend to be those with the most to hide. |
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| kim | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 08:19 pm |
Excellent chapter. Lost of heightened emotions.
I think Faith and Robin are going to be okay, and since he heard her, he's prepared now for when she does tell him. Their story is so sweet and tender.
In contrast to the sorrow, guilt, etc. that's all washing over the Scoobies again at seeing what they did to their hometown....it's a horrid mess. I hope they find things worth keeping. I always thought it was silly not to load their most precious possessions into the bus before the battle. There was no guarantee they'd be able to go back to the house afterwards. |
Well they had no clue that the town was going to fall into a huge crater.
Giles and Robin simply thought to give everyone a couple changes of clothes and a few personal things just in case their plan backfired and they had to get the hell out of dodge to regroup.
Faith is so due for sweet and tender. She's never really had that in her life and she's always kept everyone at arms length.
Her story is going to come out very soon. Just about everyone is going to have their lives spilled out for all to see...the good, the bad and the ugly. Think they're all gonna come away unscathed? |
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| duke6665 | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 06:21 pm |
great chapter. loved robin listening to faith pray,and her realizing that she loved him. can't wait for more...
spike in the next chapter??? please? lol |
| Spike very soon. Cross my heart^^ |
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| Lou | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 05:30 pm |
| I've only just caught up with this one and it's a treat to find such an original storyline. A gripping read. |
Squeeeeeeee! Thank you very much  |
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| Verda | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 04:52 pm |
| Glad for Faith, that was Robin's reaction. It will definately will be easier on her with his love and support. So many memories, So little time. Good thing that Angel went with Giles, less chance of him trying something with her when no ones looking. The tree was definately a reminder of her past from Angel to Spike and the back porch where they spend many hours talking or in silent repose, hope it's also there for her. Good memories. Wonderful update. Thanks for the great read. |
Yes, but will Robin admit to overhearing her and why was he looking so sad as he overheard??
More soon |
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| MarzBar | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 03:52 pm |
| Hmmm. Mommy Faith. What a development. What will Buffy find at her house? Is Spike there waiting for her? More story please. |
I love Faith. She was one of my faves even when she was a bit psycho.
As for the findings, not really sure. We'll have to see. |
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| jl1980 | Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep | 07/29/2006 02:10 pm |
| i'm so glad robin reacted like he did so far, though faith needs to know that he knows, and he still loves her...i feel so bad for buffy, how traumatic for her...can't wait to see what they find |
You are so sweet! I love reading all of your reviews! ^^
Wait until morning...morning is gonna bring A LOT of surprises. |
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| Robyn | Lost & Found Part II | 08/01/2006 04:42 am |
| There is such sadness with Faith’s uncertainty over how to prepare for a slumber party. I love how Dawn was able to include her and make her feel apart of things without it seeming unusual. |
| Yeah, poor girl had it rough. Now that the Scoobies have gotten ahold of her, there's gonna be a whole lot more changes for the dark slayer. |
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| vladt | Lost & Found Part II | 07/29/2006 11:27 am |
| very good update. dawn's timingwas perfect for faith. thanks for the read. |
| Indeed. Sometimes little pain in the butt sisters can kinda be a bit of alright, can't they? ^^ |
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| kim | Lost & Found Part II | 07/28/2006 10:39 pm |
Really well done capturing the emotions of the three Scoobies.
I'm so happy for Faith! It's great that she's finally getting these experiences.
War zone/disaster area...I want Spike to hurry up and come! Buffy needs protection, as well as all the other stuff. |
Poor Faith is in for an emotional rollercoaster.
Spike soon! ^^ |
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| Verda | Lost & Found Part II | 07/28/2006 10:21 pm |
| good that Angel's not all creepy, stalker guy around Buffy during the trip. Not a Faith fan but since she's had a hard life(most of it her own making) glad that she's having some before she had to contemplates motherhood. Buffy should be haunted by the memories of the best thing that's ever been in her life. thans for the update. another gret chapter. |
Kinda hard to be creepy guy when there are witnesses around ;)
Angel is gonna take a small turn for the worse really really soon.
Eh, as for Faith, her lefe before she was calling was not of her doing. What she did after, yeah she has a lot to atone for. Still...forgiveness is divine |
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| jl1980 | Lost & Found Part II | 07/28/2006 09:34 pm |
| wow..i love your faith...she's so hurting and broken, but finding healing slowly but surely...i have a feeling when she *does* tell robin, she's going to be in for quite a surprise at his reaction and a good one i hope great update |
I've always loved Faith. Even when she was all evil and I was wanting to punch her out, I could still see the vulnerability and the longing in her.
She just made me want to tug her into my lap and spank the daylights out of her before rocking her gently (and no, not in the pervy way). |
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| duke6665 | Lost & Found Part II | 07/28/2006 08:44 pm |
| another great chapter. loved the dawn/faith bonding. Can't wait to read more about sunnydale findings. and spike |
We are gonna see a lot of the old Faith, but with it, we are gonna see a lot of the newer Faith too.
She's got a big plotline about to come up.
Spike in the next chapter or two ^^ |
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| Robyn | Lost & Found Part I | 08/01/2006 04:30 am |
| Faith is pregnant, with her past I can just image how scared she might be at the whole situation, in particular being the same type of parent her mother was. |
Faith's past is about to be revealed and we get to find out exactly why Faith turned out the way she has.
She's a favorite of mine. I could relate to her on so many levels so I decided to bring her to the front and give her her due. |
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| duke6665 | Lost & Found Part I | 07/27/2006 11:54 pm |
| great chapter. can't wait for spike to join in. and to find out if buffy is joining faith on the mommy train. |
| We shall see ^^ |
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| vladt | Lost & Found Part I | 07/26/2006 02:23 pm |
| good to see an update to this fine tale. thanks for the read |
| Thank you! ^^ |
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| MarzBar | Lost & Found Part I | 07/26/2006 09:10 am |
| Where is Spike? Will she find him or the amulet in the pit? More story please. |
I'm nooooot teeeeeellinnnnnn...
....well yeah I am, but not here!
Muahaha! Spike in the next chapter or two, so soon! Cross my heart! |
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| Verda | Lost & Found Part I | 07/26/2006 12:15 am |
| Hey, great chapter. So glad that you've updated. These next chapters should be pretty hard for them. Thanks for Buffy and Angel's meeting being reserved. Hope you can update again sometime soon. Great read. |
| Next chapter almost ready to be posted ^^ |
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| kim | Lost & Found Part I | 07/25/2006 07:29 pm |
Nice to see you back.
Faith's got her confirmation...
And the team's on the drive to Sunnydale...still want to know what the heck's up with Buffy...and why Angel's leaning towards this side of evil when it comes to her.
We miss Spike, too, Buffy. |
Thank you! ^^ Already have most of the next chapter hammered out so look for another update really soon.
I think Angel's dealings with Wolfram and Hart are giving him some serious side effects.
Spike soon! ^^ |
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| jl1980 | Lost & Found Part I | 07/25/2006 05:26 pm |
| excellent update...love faith's part...i always had a bit of a soft spot for her, she was so broken, in spite of her facade...wonder what mommyhood will do to her, cant wait to see |
Same here. Faith is gonna play a good part in this first part of the story.
A lot of things will be found out about her and she is going to have a long, tough battle to face.
No demons more dangerous than the personal ones. |
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| Verda | Remnants Pt II: Aftershocks | 06/03/2006 01:17 am |
| WOW!!! Didn't see that one coming. So now the first Slayer is putting "sparks" into the Slayer's huh? Lets hope she stops before she puts "sparks" into the potentials as well. Interesting chapter. Update soon please. |
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| vladt | Remnants Pt II: Aftershocks | 05/30/2006 04:07 pm |
| enjoyed faith-robin scene. wonderfully told. thanks for the great update. |
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| Robyn | Remnants Pt II: Aftershocks | 05/29/2006 01:55 am |
| I really like how the back story you gave for Faith explains perfectly her desire for love and acceptance and her fear of letting anyone to close. I loved her reaction to Robin's declaration it was so sweet. Robin is so good for her. The slayer dream was very interesting. Thanks for the update. |
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| jl1980 | Remnants Pt II: Aftershocks | 05/29/2006 12:42 am |
| hmmm....love your rendition of faith, love her and robin's tender moments...intriguing slayer dream...great update.. can't wait for more |
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| kim | Remnants Pt II: Aftershocks | 05/29/2006 12:01 am |
The Faith - Robin scene was perfect.
Almost identical dreams at the same time....you're really liking the cryptic!!
I'm guessing Faith is reading up on a pregnancy test?
And Buffy...lots to deal with. |
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| fallen_angel | Remnants Pt I: Revelations | 06/22/2006 06:11 am |
| been gone a while and just cathing up. when do we get some spike? |
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| Verda | Remnants Pt I: Revelations | 05/26/2006 01:13 pm |
| Feeling sorry for the Xan man, now, let's see what's awaiting them in Sunnydale. Will he be able to say a finale goodbye to Anya? Will it make him feel any better? Update soon please. |
Xander is going to do some serious growing in this story. He's going to be Xander, but not quite Xander and its gonna take a trip or two for him to find himself again.
Still Xander...but just a little more wiser... |
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| kim | Remnants Pt I: Revelations | 05/24/2006 08:20 pm |
You're really not wanting to share what's happening to Buffy, are you?
Sunnydale unearthed...oh, boy...when does Spike appear? |
I will say the next 3 upcoming chapters are gonna toss out some really BIG surprises and twists and turns are gonna abound like mad.
Stay tuned^^ |
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| jl1980 | Remnants Pt I: Revelations | 05/24/2006 05:34 pm |
| i love your portrayals of both dawn and andrew...can't wait to see what they find in the remains of Sunnydale excellent update ;) |
| I'm considering a Dawndrew type thing...just maybe... |
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| Robyn | Remnants Pt I: Revelations | 05/24/2006 01:33 pm |
| I love how Dawn threatened Andrew into being good while everyone else was gone. And his response when she called it Space Wars had me laughing. Thanks for the great update, I was so happy to see it. I am really looking forward to what happens in Sunnydale and what they might find. |
| Gonna be surprises abounding around every corner. |
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| Verda | Dear Diary | 05/25/2006 04:06 pm |
| OMG!!!OK, went back to reread chap.2 and yes, we all know that Angel has no stamina, but raped in the time it takes to call 911? please say it was just his sick fantasy! That, what he tasted in her blood was Spike's child somehow. Pretty please!!! and if he did rape her, know wonder he's giving off weird vibes, the sick B!@#*&D. Keep it coming. |
| Im not gonna teeeeeell...well at least not for a bit yet ^^ |
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| vladt | Dear Diary | 05/25/2006 12:55 am |
| very good chapter. very cruel to leave us wondering whether is dream or real. thanks for the fine read. |
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| jl1980 | Dear Diary | 05/10/2006 08:03 pm |
| ugh...angel needs serious help before he really hurts somebody..you're doing an excellent job with this story, can't wait for the next update |
| Thanks so very much! |
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| MarzBar | Dear Diary | 04/29/2006 09:18 am |
| Yikes! Was that an Angelus dream? Buffy better be careful around him; seems he's starting to lose it. She needs a stake and a dust buster with her at all times. |
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| kim | Dear Diary | 04/29/2006 03:25 am |
Did he actually do it, or did he just dream it? And if Buffy was raped, wouldn't she have felt it when she woke up? Plus, the bite on her neck?
Please, no... |
She might have...then again she might not have. Slayer healing and all that...any aches and pains she winds up with pretty much burn themselves out rather quickly....
...besides, she was unconscious and got hurt in the process...she might have jotted any unusual owies down to her slip and fall... |
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| fallen_angel | Dear Diary | 04/28/2006 11:32 pm |
| ok bit confused here. Angel was dreaming right? just a dream? |
| maaaaaaybe.... |
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| nichole | Dear Diary | 04/28/2006 10:56 pm |
| ok call me confuse is he dreaming or did he actually rape her..did i miss that somewhere..i think Buffy's Prgenant but please ,please don't let it be Angel's..and if he did why doesn't she remember or does she...great chapter...N |
He might have...cant really tell you that now yet can I?
/evil grin |
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| Robyn | Dear Diary | 04/28/2006 10:52 pm |
| Angel needs to get away from Buffy now, before his dreams become reality. I wish Buffy would pay more attention to the uneasy feeling she gets around Angel. He is being way creepy. Thanks for the great update. |
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| Tamara | Dear Diary | 04/28/2006 09:41 pm |
Answer to Angel's question: Get away from her and get therapy!
No wonder Buffy's getting creeped out by him. |
| muahahaha! |
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| jl1980 | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 05/10/2006 08:00 pm |
| i wonder if it's creepy angel or someone else watching? great update...off to read the next! |
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| vladt | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/28/2006 12:16 pm |
| is angel lurking again? dustbuster! enjoyed the update. thanks for the fine read. |
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| MarzBar | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/28/2006 11:31 am |
| Is Angelus still hanging out and creeping around Buffy's place? What exactly is his purpose in this behavior? It is the usual "Buffy will realize she loves me" crap? More story please. |
Angel is always going to hold out for her. How can you not hold out for someone that holds your heart?
;) |
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| kim | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/28/2006 03:06 am |
| Don't scare me like that, suggesting that she might be carrying Angel's kid! That's sooooo eeeeew at this point, and Buffy's been through enough lately.... |
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| fallen_angel | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/28/2006 12:02 am |
| angel's watching i suppose. stupid git. maybe u should take the chance and dust him hoping he doesn't come back? |
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| Robyn | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/27/2006 09:39 pm |
| I really enjoyed this chapter. And the Buffy-Giles moment was very sweet. I hope she figures out what is going on with herself soon. And I hope something happens with Angel soon, he is being even more cringe worthy then usual. |
Yeah, Buffy and Giles are both emotionally reserved with certian people, including each other.
I figure with everything theyve gone through, by now, a hug shouldnt be too difficult to manage |
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| maryperk | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/27/2006 07:48 pm |
| cool chapter. |
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| kim | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/27/2006 07:18 pm |
Ack, more creepy Angel...
Yeah, Buffy will be fine in about 9 months. If she's not pregnant, you're sure doing a good job with creating the symptoms. |
| Angel is about to get creepier... |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | And It Was Thiiiiiiiis Big | 04/27/2006 06:48 pm |
| I love Girly!Faith.I'm also pretty sure Buffy's pregnant.It'd be cool if Faith & Buffy got pregnant at the same time.Update soon. |
| Faith is still gonna be the same sassy in your face chick...just gonna reveal some of her softer sides that she's never been allowed to show...til now |
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| jl1980 | Healing | 05/10/2006 07:58 pm |
| oooh...they know something...about spike? i love how you write faith, too...and angel's so creeping me out...more story now |
| LOL thanks...Faith has a secret thats gonna be revealed really soon ;) |
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| Verda | Healing | 04/27/2006 10:05 am |
| Just finished reading one-ten and it's really good. Love the idea of a pregnant Buffy and of course hoping that Angel will be the first one to know " Who's your Daddy"!!! Update soon. Thanks for the good read. |
The thing is...would you all kill me if the Daddy wasn't Spike? After all, the first 3 days after the Hellmouth closed, Buffy and Angel were around each other constantly and Angel has been doing some questionable things...
...we all know Liam wasnt above raping a girl... |
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| romero | Healing | 04/23/2006 01:12 pm |
| Great update. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
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| fallen_angel | Healing | 04/22/2006 08:17 am |
| AQngel is reading Buffy's letters! She gonna kill him! thanx 4 the update |
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| vladt | Healing | 04/21/2006 08:07 pm |
| fine chapter. can you dust angel, please. how about just severely maiming him, pretty please. ok i will quit. thanks for the excellent read. |
| LOL Angel is gonna get his sooooooon |
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| kim | Healing | 04/21/2006 05:17 pm |
How dare he read her private letters!! Bastard!
And Willow, if you're having dreams you think really mean something? Don't put off following what they want you to do. You guys are in the saving the world business, after all. Better to be safe than sorry.
And Buffy dressed to impress, eh? Well, it's nice that she's out with Faith. |
| Yeah, now if we could just get her to gain the weight back that she lost... |
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| Robyn | Healing | 04/21/2006 04:18 pm |
| I love that Buffy realized that her father doesn't hate her, and that she and Faith are getting along. I really hope that Angel somehow or another gets caught for sticking his nose where it doesn't belong. His complete disregard for her privacy is horrible. |
| Faith is going to get the chance to become the girl she never got to. She'll still be mouthy and in your face but she'll also realize the softer parts of herself that no-one bothered to see or nurture. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Healing | 04/21/2006 01:57 pm |
| Good chapter.Stupid Angel reading the letters.Either Buffy's pregnant(which was my original thought)or she's under a curse. Can Faith and Robin get engaged?I love those two together,even if he did try to kill Spike.Update soon. |
This is gonna be a huge story. its gonna cover everyone at some point or another.
Big twists coming up in the next few chapters. |
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| maryperk | Healing | 04/21/2006 01:39 pm |
| Cool chapter. Angel needs to be smacked up side the head with a mallot. Can Buffy please catch him doing something bad? |
I agree. Buffy's head seems to be a bit lost in her memories of Spike.
Hopefully now that her Father is owning up to the things he did wrong, Buffy will be able to see things more clearly. |
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| jl1980 | Letters I Forgot to Send | 05/10/2006 07:55 pm |
| okay....angel's gettin a little psycho here...spike needs to come back now!! love this story, did i mention that? ;) |
Neat! /blushing
Thanks so much! |
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| fallen_angel | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/21/2006 08:11 am |
And Angel the possessive comes forth. Seriously the guy needs to be told the meaning of'letting go'
Thanx 4 the update. |
Indeed.
I'm seriously considering a dusty end for this guy. Then again, he's been dusted only to come back again.... |
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| Tamara | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/21/2006 06:15 am |
| Well, that last bit can't lead to good. |
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| MarzBar | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/21/2006 01:40 am |
| Interesting about all those letters. Was money contained in any of them? Angelus is becoming dangerous again. |
Angelus has always been dangerous...he's just been somewhat contained...
...for the moment... |
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| kim | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/21/2006 12:09 am |
Uh-oh!
When will we get to why Angel's reacting so strongly to what's in her blood? When did it get there? |
| Soon...muahahaha |
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| Robyn | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/20/2006 10:38 pm |
| Thanks for the great update I hope those letters help Buffy with her anger at her father. And I really hope that Angel will be able to controll his demon before things go to far. I can't imagine Buffy being to pleased with him if he doesn't. |
Buffy and Dad definitely need to have a looooong talk.
Too bad the 'run away' complex was learned from the best of teachers...her Father... |
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| vladt | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/20/2006 09:27 pm |
| love the update. had to remove the first attempt to comment. my major dislike of angel was causing my comments to question why this,why that? so... i am an idiot. i enjoy the way you tell your story and then i am going to tell you how not to do it. that makes me an idiot. thanks for the fine read. |
Heehee...its my job to keep you on the edge wondering WTF is she thinking!!!
More to come soon^^ |
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| maryperk | Letters I Forgot to Send | 04/20/2006 08:21 pm |
| Oh no. Hurry back from the great beyond Spike. LOL. |
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| jl1980 | Cleveland rocks! | 05/10/2006 07:52 pm |
| who's the vampire? and oh my God, is Buffy pregnant?? on to read more and find out |
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| kim | Cleveland rocks! | 04/21/2006 12:14 am |
Just realized there were two chaps. in the update, so I'm reading this one after the last.
Buffy's pregnant! Oh, cool...when's Spike popping up? |
Tut, tut...Buffy's sickness and the darkness in her blood might not be related.
A pregnant Buffy? Hmm..there's a thought... |
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| MarzBar | Cleveland rocks! | 04/20/2006 12:02 pm |
| Evil, rotten cliffie writer! I just got caught up with this story and am wondering why they went to Cleveland instead of Florida. Still have no idea WTF Hank is. More story please. |
Muahahaha....got to tell the story as it swirls around in my brain.
I have a seperate pages with all of these ideas..its funny really. I started out with this story in my head and as I picked over parts of it, my mind took me on little detours here and there, thus giving the whole story an actual plotline and as believable as the actual lives Joss himself created with the show.
More soon |
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| falen_angel | Cleveland rocks! | 04/20/2006 08:26 am |
| is that Spike? is it? is it?common you can tell us. |
| You'll find out next chapter |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Cleveland rocks! | 04/20/2006 08:14 am |
| Good chapter.Is Buffy pregnant?Is Spike back?Is it Angel?Am I sounding like a commercial?Update soon. |
LOL To answer your questions in the order they were asked:
maybe/possibly/could be/not at all ^^ |
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| Robyn | Cleveland rocks! | 04/20/2006 12:49 am |
I loved this chapter and how it caught us up on where the Scoobies are. But the real questions are: why is Buffy sick, and who is the vampire. I have guesses on both counts and am eagerly awaiting to see if I am right.  |
| Oooooh...there's gonna be some MAJOR Scoobies action coming up soon. (be forewarned though..gonna be a LOT of angst too) but its all for the best...muahahaha |
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| jl1980 | Storyteller | 05/10/2006 07:48 pm |
| i can see both sides, i can see how it was hard for hank considering all the circumstances, but that doesn't excuse his abandoning her and dawn...can't wait for more ! |
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| fallen_angel | Storyteller | 04/20/2006 08:18 am |
| o.k. so Hank's not a vampire. is his mom one? wsa the doctor one? was the doctor evil?is Hank gonna answer the questions Buffy asked him? where's our vampire? |
/singing "I'm not gonna teeeeelll..."
You'll just have to keep reading to find out^^ |
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| kim | Storyteller | 04/19/2006 08:52 pm |
| Well....ouch... |
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| vladt | Storyteller | 04/19/2006 04:37 pm |
| great read. posssibly cathartic for buffy. thanks |
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| Robyn | Storyteller | 04/19/2006 03:36 pm |
| Wow you managed with just a few sentences to completly show the depth and reason for Buffy's pain and her anger at her father. This whole chapter was great, and the reason behind why Hank is the way he is was unexpected. Thanks for the great update. |
| Thank you. Stay tuned...its gonna get a bit weirder in a few chapters |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Storyteller | 04/19/2006 03:02 pm |
| Good story so far.Vamp!Hank is sorta like Blade,but different.I like that Buffy told him that he wasn't her father.Update soon. |
| Thanks muchly. ^^ I've got 3 more chapters already. Just tweaking and spell checking and such. Stay tuned ^^ |
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| jl1980 | The Ties That Bind | 05/10/2006 07:43 pm |
| wow...that was unexpected...so she repressed it completely? i need to hear the rest of the story now!! |
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| fallen_angel | The Ties That Bind | 04/20/2006 08:09 am |
| whoa... Hank's a vamp? how come Buffy forgot? how come Angel not sense him? how come Buffy didn't notice? is he evil? oh common don't killl us with all this suspense. |
| Sometimes traumatic events get locked away in our subconscious, as is the case with Buffy. It was the beginning of her emotional wreckage...Angel wasnt the first guy to scar her and break her heart. |
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| vladt | The Ties That Bind | 03/15/2006 12:32 pm |
| the tale keeps getting more interesting. as i mentioned before, you do have a special way of ending updates. thanks for the read. |
/grinning
thank you very much. some explanations coming up next |
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| lilmamaday | The Ties That Bind | 03/15/2006 11:07 am |
| Whoa! I wasn't expecting that! How come no one was able to pick up that he was a vampire? And when was he turned? I remember seeing him in the sun when he came to see Buffy in the Nightmare episode.....hmmmm...does he have a ring or amulet or something? Loving the story! |
| sneaky sneaky...gotta wait to find out ;) |
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| k | The Ties That Bind | 03/15/2006 09:36 am |
| well that was a shocker! Update soon |
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| Robyn | The Ties That Bind | 03/15/2006 05:50 am |
| Umm what? This is so interesting, more soon please. |
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| kim | The Ties That Bind | 03/14/2006 08:47 pm |
| Well...that's...okay, how was he a vampire and not trying to kill his family? I don't think Hank the shmuck would have resisted having that kind of snack if he was turned. |
| yeah but knowing his history it shows what a spinless turd he really is...I mean come on...when youre 14 year old daughter can kick your ass, you really dont want to have to explain any bruises to the ER doc ;) |
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| romero | The Ties That Bind | 03/14/2006 08:35 pm |
| Well, that was unexpected!! Gee, this story has me hooked. I can't wait to read more. |
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| MarzBar | The Ties That Bind | 03/14/2006 08:25 pm |
| WTF?!?! OK. He doesn't go out in the daytime and nobody noticed this yet? Because she's the Slayer he thought he should let her and Dawn starve or live on the streets? More story please. |
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| Shadow | The Ties That Bind | 03/14/2006 08:24 pm |
| oooo Hank Summers... a blood-sucker in more ways than one! FANTASTIC |
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| Karyn | The Ties That Bind | 03/14/2006 08:22 pm |
| oh wow, didn't see that one coming |
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| jl1980 | Roots | 05/09/2006 07:59 am |
| i hate her dad..go buffy...hit him again!!! love this chapter..i'll read more later |
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| fallen_angel | Roots | 04/20/2006 08:02 am |
| oops..i meant long time comming. so where's our vampire? |
| ^^ soon |
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| fallen_angel | Roots | 04/20/2006 07:59 am |
| can you believe it i missed 3 updates? like how did that happen? anways gr8 to see Buff punch Hank cos he had it long time soon. Still waiting for the bleached hottie. |
Patience is a virtue!
Luckily for me, I'm not all that virtuous! |
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| Kelly | Roots | 03/14/2006 12:43 pm |
| Hi ~ That was pretty amazing! I really felt how devastated Buffy was. Lonely even when surrounded by people. How she longed for Spike even in her dreams. Kuddos for you! The writing was just wonderful! Please update soon - I'm anxious to read more! Take Care ~ Kelly |
Neat! Thank you so much
more coming soon |
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| romero | Roots | 03/14/2006 01:48 am |
| Buffy..you go girl. Hank is such a jerk and now we're finding out more about him. Wow..Angel tasting the darkness and Spike. I want to know more. |
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| Karyn | Roots | 03/13/2006 09:48 am |
| woo hoo! go Buffy...lol, great update! |
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| lilmamaday | Roots | 03/13/2006 07:42 am |
Why did Angel's report state that he only had one daughter? Why did they leave out Dawn? Or is Dawn not Hank's kid? hmmmm...that would open up a whole new can of worms now wouldn't it?
Loved that she punched him! Stupid mob connected deadbeat rich dad! She didn't hold back on her slayer strength did she? |
| Yeah she did...a bit...couldn't break him yet cause he's gonna be around still a bit ;) |
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| Morrigan | Roots | 03/13/2006 03:32 am |
| Hehehehe... Well, I guess that showed him, huh? |
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| Robyn | Roots | 03/12/2006 09:35 pm |
| This has been an interesting story so far, and Buffy’s response to her father was perfect. I am very curious as to the reasons behind his current actions and his previous non-actions. I found Angel’s reactions to Buffy very interesting, his response to Spike in her blood, and his thought of reclaiming her. I am looking forward to reading this story, and I hope you update soon. |
| Updating soon Claiming abound soon...some without permission even! |
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| MarzBar | Roots | 03/12/2006 09:05 pm |
| Way to go Buffy!! He deserves worse than a face punch but that's a damn good start. WTF is he? He can't be human can he? More story please. |
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| vladt | Roots | 03/12/2006 08:56 pm |
| very entertaining and informative update. and you really have a special way of ending updates. fine read thanks. |
| youre welcome...more coming soon |
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| PyroChilde | Roots | 03/12/2006 08:30 pm |
| Well good for her! What an asshole! I still wanna know how he knows about the hellmouth and what the heck is going on though, lol. Update soon. |
| Real life popped up so the next chapter is up late. Not to fear though cause I also have 3 more chapters waiting to be posted as well |
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| kim | Roots | 03/12/2006 08:22 pm |
Okay, he seriously deserved that.
Still hinting at something left behind by Spike, eh? Going to be interesting when he shows up 19 days after the Hellmouth implosion. |
| Yeah he did because that is sure as hell what I would have done to my 'dear ol dad' had the circumstances been the same. |
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| jl1980 | Who Killed John Gotti? | 05/09/2006 07:56 am |
| i like the way you're writing angel..it's realistic,no bashing...i feel bad for him at times, and hate him at times...but just because of the annoying git that he is, not because you're making him out to be totally evil or something great update |
Yeah...unfortunately I kinda like Angel but Im not gonna paint him out to be a hero or anything.
I want him to be as realistic as possible...with just a little Angel bashing for good measure ;) |
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| lilmamaday | Who Killed John Gotti? | 03/02/2006 08:25 pm |
| Psycho much Angel? Or should we say Angelus? He is really acting weird and I don't trust him at all! I can't wait to see what they found out and what happens at the meeting! |
| Muahahaha...anyone feel like a blueberry muffin or something? |
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| fallen_angel | Who Killed John Gotti? | 03/02/2006 06:02 am |
| when is spike comming back? you are bringing him back, aren't you? |
Maaaaaaaybe.
Of course he comes back. Just gotta set the scene because come on! It's Spike and we all know how the Big Bad loves to stir it up! |
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| MarzBar | Who Killed John Gotti? | 03/01/2006 09:05 pm |
| Who or what is Hank Summers? If he's so rich and powerful, why did Buffy have to work in the DM Palace to take care of herself and Dawn, not to mention the freeloader friends? More story soon please. |
| Coming up soon |
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| vladt | Who Killed John Gotti? | 03/01/2006 07:35 pm |
| still do not like or trust angel. good update. thanks |
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| PyroChilde | Who Killed John Gotti? | 03/01/2006 06:55 pm |
| Kewl fic, update soon. |
| Thanks! |
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| jl1980 | Something Darker | 05/09/2006 07:54 am |
| *possessive growl at angel*..stay away! she's spike's!! it makes me mad how he was drinking her blood like that without her knowledge and is not being honest with her...grrr...love your writing of faith, by the way |
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| lilmamaday | Something Darker | 03/01/2006 07:34 am |
| So does this mean that Spike claimed Buffy? Or is he now part of her due to the amulet? Or am I totally off base as to why Angel was tasting Spike in her blood? And can I just say ewwwwwww....what was Angel thinking?! Buffy would have kicked him into next week if she had woken up and Angel was sucking on her cut! Is he even going to tell Buffy what he did and what he sensed? Can't wait to see what happens next! |
/sings
I'll never teeeeelll...I''k never tellll
Ok, well not really. I;ll fill you in...eventually... ;) |
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| gaillee | Something Darker | 02/28/2006 11:11 pm |
| Sweetheart? What does he think he's doing? Thanks for a fine update. Is getting curiouser and curiouser... |
Chapter 5 is gonna drop a HUGE bomb on all that is Buffy.
Stay tuned... |
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| Always_jbj | Something Darker | 02/28/2006 09:14 pm |
| Well that was... different. Ewww to being licked by Angel!!! Who I TOTALLY don't trust by the way! |
Love makes people do crazy things?!?
/grin |
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| kim | Something Darker | 02/28/2006 09:06 pm |
| Sweetheart! Since when does he call her pet names? Keep your mitts off, Angel. She doesn't belong to you. |
| Oooooh just wait...muhahaha |
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| vladt | Something Darker | 02/28/2006 07:48 pm |
| good update, even though i so hate angel. thanks for the read. |
Not to worry. Im not too big an Angel fan myself, but honestly, a lot of the times he did things that seemed sweet at the time...
...it was only until much later you found out his motives...muhahaha |
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| jl1980 | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 05/09/2006 07:51 am |
oh come on buffy...no fainting over angel allowed...lol  ... love the chapter, love how she scared the guy off like that...lol...off to read more now |
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| vladt | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 02/28/2006 07:41 pm |
| way to end and update! thanks for the fun read. |
| Thank you for reading! ^^ |
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| MarzBar | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 02/28/2006 01:55 pm |
| WTF?? Hank is supposedly helping his daughter, the Slayer, after all this time with the lousy jobs, etc.? We need more story please. |
I aim to please. More chapters forthcoming asap.
^^ |
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| Always_jbj | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 02/28/2006 01:28 pm |
Interesting developements.
lol... trying to intimidate a slayer? Not such a good move!!! Go Buffy. I'm assuming exhaustion and not just the sight of Angel's ugly mug was the cause of Buffy's swoon? |
| Youll have to read the next chapter to find out ;) |
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| gaillee | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 02/28/2006 10:47 am |
| Interesting start. I will be waiting for updates, eagerly. |
You aint seen nothin yet!
/evil laugh
Muahahahahahaha...
/grin |
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| lilmamaday | Oh My God, Chopsticks! | 02/28/2006 10:28 am |
| Wow! Looks like Buffy never really knew her father at all huh? I can't wait to see why she fainted and what awaits her, please update soon! |
Ugh! Wait til you get to see the side of Hank no-one knew about. Unfortunately, he's going to be pretty prominent to this storyline.
Hmm..maybe at the end I can have Anya reborn as the vengence Demon she used to be and grant Buffy a very interesting wish... |
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| Nikkole | When a Stranger Calls | 07/26/2006 05:02 pm |
| Ft Lauderdale huh? Cool! |
Eh, why not? Go from one sunny place to another. That and FL is filled to bursting with toursits and immigrants in addition to all of the 'locals'.
Easy pickings for hungry demons and vampires. ^^ |
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| jl1980 | When a Stranger Calls | 05/08/2006 06:23 pm |
| hmmm...very intriguing start...read more later |
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| fallen_angel | When a Stranger Calls | 03/02/2006 05:46 am |
| it's getting intresting so i'll rush to the next chapter. found a beta yet cos i'd luv to do it. never done it before but if you're interested, contact: crazy-insane-girl@hotmail.com |
If youre still wanting to beta, by all means
My email is DesiHannagan@msn.com |
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| vladt | When a Stranger Calls | 02/28/2006 07:35 pm |
| definitely a grabber of a beginning. thanks for the read. |
| happy to oblige |
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| PyroChilde | When a Stranger Calls | 02/28/2006 05:38 am |
Wow, this is a twist I haven't seen anywhere else yet, Hank Summers suddenly showing an interest. Interesting start, you've got me hooked. Update soon, I'd definitly like to see where this one is going.
*Oh, one quick thing, the epilogue thing threw me a bit. Is that supposed to be prologue? |
lol jbj said the same thing.
I used an epilogue because it was the end of Chosen. Since that story was over, I used the ending to lead into a brand new story. Sorry if it's confusing everyone 
And yeah...Hank's been a busy, busy boy. |
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| Always_jbj | When a Stranger Calls | 02/27/2006 10:44 pm |
Really interesting start! I look forward to reading more.
Just one thing... do you mean prologue? An epilogue comes at the end of a story... not the begining. |
I figured that was going to throw everyone off a tad.^^
I put the very beginning of this story as an epilogue. It was the end of Chosen so I used it to lead into a whole new story.
Hmm...maybe I should just go ahead and make it a prologue...
...aaaaaanyhooo...more to come^^ |
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| spikeslovebite | When a Stranger Calls | 02/27/2006 07:47 am |
| hmmm don't like this dreyfuss fellow. buffy's father paying attention so suddenly is a little hinky too. i like what you've started with and hope to see more soon |
Thanks! ^^ This story is going to hopefully take you all on a mad mad rollercoaster ride. So sit back and hang onto your socks! More soon.
~Desi |
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