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| A Penny for your.... by Jackofspikes |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 42 | 08/06/2006 07:14 pm |
| I love your Dru in this - really great chapter - I am glad that Darla is dust! Go Dru! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 42 | 08/06/2006 05:34 am |
I like the nice and simple way that Darla was dusted. I really enjoyed how Buffy letting her fears get to her lead to her and Spike telling the other how they felt. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.  |
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| Kimberly Adams | Chapter 42 | 08/05/2006 01:13 am |
Just read the new chapters and love them of this and the Paradox story. I love what Spike and Buffy share and never dreamed I would be so hooked on that couple! Even the old episodes aren't as good except to see Spike in "person" so to speak. Thanks so much for the fabulous stories and wonderful characterization!
from linnea2sweet@yahoo.com |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 42 | 08/05/2006 12:34 am |
| WOW! Buffy said it first; that's truly a first for me! Loving this tall tale. |
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| Verda | Chapter 42 | 08/05/2006 12:23 am |
| Brilliant Jacks! I'd never of thought that Darla would have retuned as a fledgling. You ROCK! Loved that Spike stood up to her and Dru dusted her. Let Angelus roar all he wants. Buffy really is just a fragil little girl when it comes to her heart, So glad Spike's there to make sure it doesn't get broken again. Now they know where the other one stands. Can they maybe get away for a little while before Angel/Angelus shows up? Another great chapter. Update ASAP. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 42 | 08/05/2006 12:20 am |
| Beautiful! Just beautiful! Very nice, loved it! Poor Buffy so insecure! Excellent update! |
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| Ella | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 11:23 pm |
The green-eyed-monster is in full force.  |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 09:13 pm |
awwwww thats so cute.. cant wait for the arrival of angel.. wait, no im not!  |
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| DarkBloodyMistress | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 08:31 pm |
| awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! cute! |
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| kim | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 08:01 pm |
LOL...Buffy's insane.
Dru dusting Darla...that's definitely a new one. |
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| vladt | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 07:35 pm |
| well done dru. sweet update. thanks for the very good read. |
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| golddrake | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 01:42 pm |
| great chapter |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 01:35 pm |
| Awwww....Spuffy break! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 12:57 pm |
OK so he handled that well, I'd probably be all hurt and wounded like that I was accused of leaving the girl I love for the ex- without any signs of me doing so...lol
I have to say the whole dusting of the great gandmummy who is also your child kinda took me by surprise, why sire when you have to dust them anyway? unless she sired then got a mesage of redemption and dusted the childe, then I guess it makes sense.
I thought you said Drusilla cannot be cured of her sanity? wouldn't the soul be pointless for her then? specially as she was driven crazy before she was turned.
Dude I know they say you can never have too much of a good thing, but they have 3 seers in their camp at them moment, 4 if you include Penny and her knowledge of the next couple of years, won't it get crowded in the I had a vision wing?
Well either way still loving it Jackers
Update Soon
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| Pulchra | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 12:43 pm |
(sorry for the empty one! my mistake!)
ooh I'm sorry Dru, but I'm sure grandmummy would've tried to do the same to your William and his love... You knew too didn't you? Miss Edith's proud of you, as am I... (yes, I graduated in Dru-speak! lol)
Buffy! You should have told him sooner ;-) although we all know it takes a while for something to break through that thick head of yours....
Keep the updates coming! please? |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 12:40 pm |
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| Irina | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 12:01 pm |
Awww... I really liked the unexpected way Spike and Buffy declared their love. And wow! Darla sure didn't last long in the fic... lol. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Loved the chapter!
Congratulations on your win at the Fang Fetish Awards! |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 11:56 am |
| Yeah, how could she not? I always wondered that on the show. If she just let herself love him, maybe she would have been happier. I like this Buffy, though. She finally got out whatever was up her ass...lol! Well, at least Darla is out of the picture now, getting staked twice by both of her sires. That has to suck, but I won't be losing any sleep over it. Now, I think we have Angel to deal with, or should I say Angelus? Either way, it can't be good. I'm glad Dru won't be causing any problems for the Spuffy. Well, it's good to see an update for this. Great chapter=) |
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| LisFayte | Chapter 42 | 08/04/2006 10:53 am |
| I am so happy that Dru dusted Darla! And Buffy and Spike saying they loved one another was the sweetest thing. I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
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| Delicia | Chapter 41 | 08/07/2006 06:15 am |
| Yay! Lovely chapter. I so wasn't expecting Ben/Glory's killer to be Dru. Very well done. And now to worry about Darla! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 41 | 08/04/2006 05:07 pm |
| I loved Buffy’s reaction to seeing Dru at the door. It was a perfect Buffy act before you think moment. I love the inclusion of Dru as I have a real soft spot for her. Spike’s reaction to finding out that Dru had re-sired Darla was great. |
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| LisFayte | Chapter 41 | 08/04/2006 08:14 am |
| Sorry Jack, I thought I had reviewed this chapter, but it turns out I didn't. Great work as usual, I love that Dru is getting her soul back. Is she still going to be crazy? It would be great if it made her sane, while the soul drove Angel(us) crazy. We all know the only reason it drove Spike crazy was because he was in the basement with the first. Please update soon, I am going into withdrawls. |
| I wish I could answer your questions, but if i did I'd be giving away some of the plot |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 41 | 08/01/2006 09:46 am |
Well i'm surprised I only missed one update
Wait I thought the knights of baloo killed the hellgod not Darla?
Hehee Angel is going to get a spanking from his mommy.teaches the guy right for not playing nice with the other kiddies.
So if Tara decides to become the gaurdian she'll be alive for like an age an then some, And I still don't know who Penny has her eyes set on.
Yeah your giving Drusilla her Soul back, I knew i'd wear you down eventually...though the chances are she'll be as crazy as that annoying frog on TV but she has a shrink to help her overcome her problems...maybe.
Well Penny still loving it
Update soon
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| Dru killed Glory |
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| Ella | Chapter 41 | 07/31/2006 09:05 am |
| Buffy really carry the color green well. |
| I always thought so |
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| vladt | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 03:00 pm |
| great update. thank you. dru killed glory, love it. darla's back and is pissed at angel, love it. and buffy's rage, fantastic. thanks again for the fun read. |
| Thank you for taking the time to read and review |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 02:12 pm |
| AHHH so that is who killed Glory! I love Dru! And Darla is back - shudders - although I kinda liked her in angel. Happy sigh - can't wait for more sweetie! |
| I'll try not to make you wait too long |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 12:21 pm |
Aw, bloody hell! Darla's back, Angel's evil and still no spuffy lovin'...I must correct myself, Angel's not evil Jack is *holds a cross up* back evil Jack back. *grins*
Keep up the wonderful work!! |
| Yay...Jack IS evil |
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| Dar | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 09:21 am |
| A souled Dru now that could be really interesting. I love the character can't wait to see what journey you have in store for her. Poor Spike having to switch back and forth from buffy speak to Dru speak, enough to give a vamp a headache. Another great chapter |
| Enough to give anyone a headache! LOL |
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| Verda | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 07:01 am |
| Loved how posessive Buffy got when she saw Dru. Darla, Angelus, Dru and Spike all in SunnyD. Four Master vampires, two good, two bad. This is most definately going to be interesting. Now I will beg for new chappies, I hate this, it's so good I don't want to stop reading it, want more, more would be good. Thanks Jack, guess I'll go to bed now. 32 chapters in one night. |
| Angelus isn't in Sunnydale...yet |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 04:39 am |
oooh I love this! I'm crazy about Drusilla and I love it that you've made her a part of this story... (don't ask me why but I love that girl)
keep it coming! |
| LOL...don't ask me why butI love her too |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 41 | 07/30/2006 02:37 am |
| Oh, out of the frying pan and into the fire! Good update. |
| LOL...good analogy |
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| Karyn | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 09:59 pm |
| hee! awesome!! |
| Thanks sweetie |
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| Emilee | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 09:31 pm |
| Thank you for updating. Drusilla was an interesting development. I can't wait to see more from here. |
| I will try to update soon |
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| Irina | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 09:11 pm |
| I had a feeling Dru was joining the party, but Darla's involvement in the story was a quite a surprise. I love the new twists in the plot. Fantastic chapter! |
| thank you...Darla was a surprise to me too |
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| golddrake | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 08:52 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 08:22 pm |
| Getting Drusilla into the mix, and maybe on the side of the light, is an intriguing development. Seems like Angelus is bound to be around soon if Darla is after him and he is all alone. Love this story. |
| Oh I think I can safely say that Angelus is bound to make an appearence |
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| kim | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 08:06 pm |
Hmmm....choosing just because it's right...good call.
Dru gettng her soul back...what's the ulterior of the Powers on that one?
Ah, Buffy...think before you act, sweetie. |
| LOL...you do remember it's Buffy, right? |
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| ct114 | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 07:29 pm |
| The Darla factor was a bit of a surprised. That will be intersting. Great story so far!!! |
| Thank you..Darla was a surprise to me too |
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| Lou | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 06:37 pm |
| Brilliant twist! |
| Thank you so much |
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| Shadow | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 05:42 pm |
OOOOO ME LIKES!
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| you are tooo cute |
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| DarkBloodyMistress | Chapter 41 | 07/29/2006 05:37 pm |
| Now why did Spike have to stop Buffy, eh? |
| lol...you'll see |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 40 | 07/30/2006 02:08 pm |
| I wonder who killed Glory - looks interested - who who - you terrible tease - I want to know what is going on! *hugs you* |
| Sweetie...if you IM me...I MIGHT tell you |
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| Verda | Chapter 40 | 07/30/2006 06:43 am |
| Got fatal errored again on that last chapter too. You know I loved it. Now that Angelus is on the way, Buffy might have to dust him herself this time, at least this will be the last of her boyfriends that she'll have to worry about. Glory maybe dead but the Knights are still looking for the Key, right? Great chapter, now lets see if this goes through. |
| it did and thank you. |
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| LisFayte | Chapter 40 | 07/29/2006 12:54 pm |
| Wow! Great chapter. I am really curious as to who killed Glory/Ben. I hope you update very soon, as the curiosity is killing me. Keep up the wonderful work. |
| Thank you so much, I will try to be quick |
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| Delicia | Chapter 40 | 07/25/2006 12:13 am |
Oooh, such an intriguing chapter!! Angel is majorly psycho! If it wasn't obvious already, this chappie proves it! Who killed Ben/Glory? Should I already know this? It's okay, I'm a bit slow. LOL.
I liked how Tara is called Daughter of Light, very fitting for her. |
| Thanks and Ben's killer will be unmasked in the next chapter |
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| Robyn | Chapter 40 | 07/21/2006 03:18 pm |
| Angel is so creepy acting, I am really looking forward to where you go with him. Thanks for the lovely update. |
| I have a plan for Angel, but you'll have to wait for it |
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| Ella | Chapter 40 | 07/18/2006 10:37 pm |
| Hmmmmm....... |
| Yes...totally hmmmm |
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| DarkBloodyMistress | Chapter 40 | 07/18/2006 02:32 am |
| eeek! |
| I agree |
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| Irina | Chapter 40 | 07/18/2006 12:17 am |
| I love the mystery surrounding Ben's death. Angel talking to himself definitely is not of the good. Loved Tara and Buffy's first meeting with The Guardian. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Fantastic chapter Jack! |
| Thank you so much |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 04:49 pm |
| ohhhhhhh, me likey |
| yeah, but you're easy! |
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| kim | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 04:49 pm |
Spike didn't take Ben's head, so who did?
I'm sure Guardian-lady has lots to share. |
| nah it's a Buffy story, she'll probably give something cryptic |
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| Lou | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 03:42 pm |
| Coming to the boil nicely! |
| I like to think so |
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| vladt | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 02:48 pm |
| great read, thank you. |
| great review, thank you |
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| Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 09:39 am |
| Wonderful update! |
| thank you |
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| Tamara | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 09:27 am |
| Yep. Angel's definitely cracked. |
| oh yeah! |
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| golddrake | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 09:25 am |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 09:07 am |
Ding dong the bitch is dead. Now the team needs to keep Dawn safe from the insane bazooka knights.
Looks like Angel has gone completely round the bend and is going to need dusting soon, maybe from Dru (if i'm anything i'm persistent) otherwise Joyce or Cordy, or Buffy or that crazy elf from your other story, it's all good. All this time W&H have been trying to corrupt the bloke and all this time the problem was he was already corrupt....sad really, such a waste of resources don't you think.
Well Jackers still loving it
Update soon
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| You are persistant Harry |
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| maryperk | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 08:42 am |
| Cool chapter |
| thanks sweetie |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 08:36 am |
| Good update, looking forward to more! |
| I hope you won't have long to wait |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 08:23 am |
 lions and tigers and bears OH MY!! please update.. im intrigued.. |
| soon...i promise |
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| Karyn | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 08:19 am |
| great chapter jack!! awesome! |
| You make a hard job easy |
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| sirc | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 07:58 am |
I wonder who the mysterious killer is?..
Great chapter |
| You'll smack yourself when you find out! |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 07:38 am |
| So who wasted glory? Angelus? |
| The question will be answered in the next chapter |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 40 | 07/17/2006 06:53 am |
ooh... now who was that person that killed glory?
let's see:
insane: check
arrogant: half-check
swift: check
deadly: check
okay, that describes half the citizens of sunnydale... so who is it?
please update soon! (why are all your stories so addicting?) |
| I'm sorry it's taking me so long to update, but hopefully I will be back on track soon |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 39 | 07/30/2006 02:05 pm |
| intresting vision with joyce and the oracles - I am really dying to know what is going on with the last part! great story! |
| Thank you so very much |
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| sirc | Chapter 39 | 07/16/2006 03:40 am |
| well done |
| Thank you |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 39 | 07/09/2006 08:03 am |
| hmmm.. whos is this 'she'? |
| sorry? What was that? |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 39 | 07/09/2006 02:46 am |
| Great Chapter Jacks! |
| Thank you sweetness |
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| Robyn | Chapter 39 | 07/08/2006 09:11 pm |
| I love it, as soon as we find out the answer to one mystery you give us more. I really like how well you did Angel's reaction, even though I did enjoy AtS he did have a belief that he knew more then anyone else and he often went against other’s good advice. I like that Joyce was able to see what happened, her blessing from the PTB’s, and her ability to respond quickly to what she saw. Of course her dislike and distrust of Angel does help |
| I know..evil arn't I? lol |
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| Ella | Chapter 39 | 07/08/2006 09:03 am |
| Where is Casper? |
| Um...with the Ghostly Trio? |
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| Irina | Chapter 39 | 07/08/2006 06:35 am |
| I liked the way the Oracles handled Angel, and I loved their talk with Joyce. Hmmm... a mysterious older lady, I can't wait to find out if it's the Guardian. Fantastic chapter! |
| Thank you |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 39 | 07/08/2006 01:14 am |
| Good update. |
| Thank you. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 08:14 pm |
| Hey! who was the person at the end?? akasha? lmao |
| Sorry...did you ask something? |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 08:05 pm |
| Can we smack Angel again I'll loan you Ares |
| five letter word, Red! |
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| letitia | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 07:26 pm |
| really when will Angel ever learn. Love that Joyce is a very active part of this. Great chapter. |
| Thank you very much. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 05:59 pm |
| ohhhh was that the Guardian? wonderful chapter as alway! *hugs* |
| just between you and me Karyn....not tellin'! |
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| Lou | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 05:24 pm |
| Love the mysterious feel to this. And Angel's decline is just fabulous!! |
| Thank you so much. |
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| vladt | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 02:57 pm |
| angel at his best. is it the guardian who waits? great chapter, thanks for the read. |
| Oh please, like I'm gonna answer that! |
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| kim | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 01:43 pm |
Hmmmm, a new "she" at the end...
Oh, Angel...you can do better than this...
So Joyce won't have Cordy's problem of the visions frying her brain. Very helpful. Having the Oracles be nice is quite special. |
| Joyce is special. |
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| carla | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 12:48 pm |
| this is a good story, the only thing i don't like is the way you write angel. i'm actually an angel fan and he just doesn't act like that. i feel bad that everyone keeps making fun of him when on the show he was really a good guy, just not without the soul, but other than that, good story. |
| Sorry dear, i guess it's just that I have a problem with pediphiles that are unwilling to take responsibility for their actions. |
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| Tamara | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 12:38 pm |
| Angel seriously needs major therapy. And possibly a straightjacket. |
| LOL...would it make a diference! |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 12:34 pm |
hm... who would she be?
Still loving this story!
"Oh Angel! My beloved! I'm so sorry! they just don't understand how important and wise you are!"*puke-puke* walks up to him "I'm soo sorry they won't listen, I'm so sorry they've lied to you! and I'm so sorry I'm doing the same..."Plunges the stake in his heart "Oh wait... no I'm not!"
*grumbling* he's such a loser! |
| Rofl |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 11:54 am |
| Whew! I just caught up and my tiny little mind boggles at the many plots and subplots within this tale. Was the last lady the current Guardian of the Scythe? |
| You wanted an actual answer, didn't you |
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| Pin1 | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 11:39 am |
| Great chapter and I like the direction Joyce's life is taking. Angel continues to be fascinating in his denial. Love it. |
| Angel's spiral is fun |
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| golddrake | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 11:37 am |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 11:23 am |
Sorry for asking the Joyce half-demon question again.I didn't see the answer until after I had reviewed.So the visions aren't killing her?That's slightly weird.
Update soon. |
| The protection from the Powers? Why? |
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| Delicia | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 11:22 am |
Oh, very nice! *sigh* Angel's such a pain, can someone knock him around some more? Please?
Joyce is so great in this, I'm glad she has the admiration of the Oracles!
I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! |
| It's a journey |
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| Hsrry 4Eyes | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 10:48 am |
Right no surprises there....except maybe the whole Joyce being there. Also not a surprise he's going to try to lie and tell them he was told he is the champion and try to manipulate the situation to his advantage. Ofcourse that isn't going to work.
Seriously Angel needs dusting. I've read fics where he has been dusted for less...lol That's four fics where he has deserved to be dusted and not even one where he actually has been...that's really taking the rip you know Jack?
Well will be interesting to he how this pans out, Angel might not be able to persuade the gang he's still the champ when he wasn't the only on in the room.
Update soon
Harry |
| And none of those four fics are finished yet Harry! |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 39 | 07/07/2006 10:24 am |
| Good chapter.Update soon.Are Joyce and Cordy half-demons now? |
| Neither. Cordy doesn't become a half demon until just after Conner is born and Joyce has been protected from the side effect of the visions by the powers. |
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| Verda | Chapter 38 | 07/30/2006 06:19 am |
| Are we gonna see Graham get smacked down? Is Joyce seeing the Knights, they're not going away that easy. Good to see the Scoobies taking Tara into the group and making her feel welcomed. Another wonderful chapter, except for Joyces vision. |
| Yes Joyce's vision is a bit of a worry |
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| sirc | Chapter 38 | 07/04/2006 07:44 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Robyn | Chapter 38 | 07/03/2006 03:12 pm |
| Thanks so much for the update, can't wait to find out what all Joyce is seeing. |
| Next chapter...I promise |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 38 | 07/02/2006 08:54 am |
| huh? im confused...tell me!! lol |
| Wait...it get's worse! lol |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 38 | 07/02/2006 02:35 am |
| ooohhh, I had forgotten about Joyc's visions. |
That's my aim...to always keep you on your toes!
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| vladt | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 08:12 pm |
| very good read and very evil chaptr ending. thanks, for both. |
| Well I have to keep my name for being evil current |
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| kim | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 03:20 pm |
Oooo, cliffie!
Short chapter, but definitely bringing up losts of questions! |
| The chapter length was pretty standard for this fic...I hope that doesn't put you off in the future |
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| Delicia | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 02:27 pm |
| You are evil Jack with the cryptic, I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Thanks for the great chapter! |
| I have never denied being evil |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 12:30 pm |
| Whew! This story is getting better and more intricate! Good job with the characters and their interactions. I'm always happy to see more of Tara and less of Riley. More story please. |
| Well Riley's dead...so not gonna be hard! lol |
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| Karyn | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 09:38 am |
| evil cliffhangy woman!! ugh! great update...lol |
| It's Wulfie's fault |
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| Irina | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 08:46 am |
| I love the new developments in the story. This chapter was really suspenseful what with Glory's mysterious stalker and Joyce's vision. Since Joyce loathes Angel he must be the individual in her vision... right? If he is I can't wait to find out what horrible thing he's gonna be up to. Wonderful chapter! |
| The details abot Joyce's vision will be in the next chapter |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 08:25 am |
| excellant chapter sweetie - love your story development |
| What? So complicated it makes my ears bleed? LOL Thank you sweet Stephy |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 08:21 am |
| Muahahaha, what did she see? |
| you know patience is a virtue...right? |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 08:21 am |
| Good chapter.I love that Joyce is a Seer now.Are both Joyce and Cordy now half-demons because of the visions?Update soon. |
| Joyce isn't a half demon |
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| Pin1 | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 07:20 am |
| Lots of new action - thanks! |
| I blame the Bunny |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 38 | 07/01/2006 07:01 am |
Nooooo... that can't be good, Really..Glory just had to decide to get a seer when Joyce suddenly got the gift...and um...Cordelia was in town....so she has two possible candidates. But Joyce looks like candidate number one.
hmm...what hapeening with Graham? he could end up a loose cannon so to speak, he want revenge for Riley and is about to find out how chipless Spike really is. The HellGoddess is bad enough but the initiative on top could be really bothersome.
Penny is going to go after.....Ben...OK probably not but my mind is completely blank if it isn't Giles.
Well Jackers still loving it
Update soon
Harry.
P.S And yes I did expect it to make it easy for me, I am a guy after all.
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| Suck it up Mister Man...heehee... you know Jack is evil |
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| Verda | Chapter 37 | 07/30/2006 06:10 am |
| Jacks where was no confusion about Spike dusting Riley. Spike handed Buffy the pen and paper to make a list and he went to dust him, since Buffy couldn't bring herself to do it, he had no problem. What kind of ghosty is in his house? He felt it before but ignored it. Thanks for having Tara stay with Penny. Great read. |
| Well some people missed the point in that scene...so thank you |
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| sirc | Chapter 37 | 07/04/2006 07:39 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 37 | 07/01/2006 08:23 am |
| lmao - how funny can't wait to see what you did next! |
| Heehee...I'm evil...I keep telling you this |
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| deedo | Chapter 37 | 06/30/2006 03:33 pm |
fantastic, especially Buffy getting all freaked out at the end (did Cordy bring Dennis?)
I hope Giles is going to ask joyce out soon, it's about time
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| Nope...it's not Dennis |
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| Emilee | Chapter 37 | 06/30/2006 08:57 am |
| Oooh ghosts. Wedgie, hmmm... can't exactly call that malicious, but still, I feel for her. Excellent update. Looking forward to more. |
| Thank you...remember they thought the amityville ghost was a playful pig at first! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 37 | 06/29/2006 03:02 am |
| I love that Penny suggested that Tara move in with her and the ending was so funny, I loved Buffy and Spike's reactions. Thanks for the update. |
| Thank you...I'm having a lot of fun here |
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| mts tyra | Chapter 37 | 06/28/2006 03:58 pm |
OMG! Willy sold Spike a HAUNTED house! He's so going to get it! *falls yet again off her chair laughing*
Jack, you rock, man! *smirk*
And finally Buffy starts to trust her heart... I see smut in the future ;) (right after the ghostly problem is solved)
Lots of things to look forward to in the next chappies (especially the Brooding Morons visit to the Oracles...)
Keep up the good work!
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| AHHH...the Oracles...now that will be...decisive |
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| vladt | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 09:23 pm |
wonderful read. thanks. two high points for me were tara being reassured and the ending scene “Don’t you dare laugh!”
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| I like Tara an I would have done a Spike too |
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| golddrake | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 06:16 pm |
| wedgie *snicker*. great chapter |
| there is nothing like a good wedgie |
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| Lou | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 03:05 pm |
| Frisky phantom? |
| Now that would be teling |
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| kim | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 02:31 pm |
But it's funny! This is a fun ghost.
Yes, Giles...ask Joyce out already!
One giant slumber party at Penny's... |
| that's what they thought in Amityville too...at first |
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| Delicia | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 01:41 pm |
| Nice! I love how you are having everything progressing. The events of the season would've been so much better this way! Can't wait to hear the explanation about the wedgie! LOL |
| lol..the wedgie seemed to catch the attention of more than just Buffy |
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| Roxy | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 01:09 pm |
| Great story! Although I don't really hate Angel, this fic makes me really want to hit him with several large and heavy objects. Thick-headed asshole...Don't kill me for saying this, but I think he's charactarized a little too extreme here, but I guess that could be that whole thing he was going through before he had the 'epiphany', not that I would know, since I don't really follow Angel...It is always fun to read how dumb Riley is like with those thoughts he had about being the perfect-all-american guy and all, priceless! And Harmony siring him, that was really brilliant, with the note! Ooh, I always wanted to read a fic where Giles and Joyce got together, hope it happens here! Please update soon!...man long review... |
| I agree that my characterization of Angel is a tad extreme in this fic but sadly it is still within the parameters of the character. Plus...I really don't like him so it's fun |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 07:40 am |
| aww.. lol great updates cant wait to see who the spook is.. |
| wha said there was a spook? |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 07:38 am |
| Good chapter.Hee.Buffy was funny with the wedgie thing.Update soon. |
| Thank you and as soon as I can |
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| Richard | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 06:25 am |
| Willow's getting off light and it's doubtful that the minimal intervention by Penny will have much effect at this stage. What Willow needs is to learn that some things are unforgivable and that actions have *permanent* consequences. In the show, only Tara and Warren's deaths did that. What Willow really needs is to have "I raped my girlfriend" tattooed on her forearm, where she'll see it every single day of her life. The fact that she's accumulated at least 5 major sins and no corresponding sacrifices ought to be made spectacularly obvious to her. |
| What Willow needs will be address by the covern. |
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| Gillypod | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 05:34 am |
| I am really getting into this story - please update again soon. Oh for Spike Wedgie!!!!! |
| Difficult...he doesn't wear underwear |
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| Ella | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 05:06 am |
| ROTFLMAO! OMG! LOL! That was way too funny. I'm liking Spike's housemate....the friendly ghost. Buffy freaked big time! Again, that was funny. Hehehehe |
| Friendly? you do know they're on the hellmouth...right? |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 04:55 am |
| LOL Funny update! Wonder what will happen with Angel? |
| Thank you...and you will see...I promise |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 02:31 am |
Oh boy, well atleast that explains why the last owner left before selling....a ghost who would use a thong as dentel floss...lol Sounds like this one likes playing pranks....poor lass had to have boyfriend who had a ghost who likes to play tricks.
So wait Giles is interested in Joyce now? So who is Penny interested in? oh i'm confused...more than before.
Penny is intersted in....I don't have a bloody clue :p
Next chapter we get to see Angel get his arse handed to him in a plate right? or the mystery wedgie phantom...both is good...or possably who Giles is interested in.
Oh Well Still loving it
Update Soon Jackers
Harry |
| Angel will be meeting the oracles...soon...ish |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 02:31 am |
Oh boy, well atleast that explains why the last owner left before selling....a ghost who would use a thong as dentel floss...lol Sounds like this one likes playing pranks....poor lass had to have boyfriend who had a ghost who likes to play tricks.
So wait Giles is interested in Joyce now? So who is Penny interested in? oh i'm confused...more than before.
Penny is intersted in....I don't have a bloody clue :p
Next chapter we get to see Angel get his arse handed to him in a plate right? or the mystery wedgie phantom...both is good...or possably who Giles is interested in.
Oh Well Still loving it
Update Soon Jackers
Harry |
| Harry, Harry, Harry (jack shakes her head) did you really expect me to make it easy for you???? |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 02:29 am |
*clims back on the chair after that* okay, Buffy? “Don’t you dare laugh!” never helps when you want someone to stop laughing... *gniffle* it only makes them laugh harder... believe me... I know ;-)
Okay, I hadn't expected that last bit, but who am I kidding? I didn't expect half of the story! Where do you get al those twists and turns? |
| I have no idea..but I blame Wolfie...HEY! it works for me |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 37 | 06/27/2006 12:09 am |
| Ooooo haunted house! |
| really???? damn and I thought I was being subtle. |
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| Tamara | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 11:43 pm |
| Well they do refer to thongs as butt-floss. |
| Andnot surprisingly that was where the idea sprung from :LOL |
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| slinkyPK | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 10:23 pm |
Spike tried. He really did.
“Don’t you dare laugh!”
Spike *does* plan on getting lucky sometime in the next century, right? Cuz, gotta say, the laughing at his honey is so not gonna lead to round the clock bouts of naked, sweaty monkey-lovin'. |
| Oh please...like you wouldn't have laughed too! |
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| Irina | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 10:15 pm |
| Uh oh! Seems to me like Spike has a naughty ghosty for a roomate. Poor Buffy, the mother of all wedgies sounds really painful. Laughing at Buffy was so not of the good... looks like someone's in hot water again. I loved how Penny encouraged Giles to ask out Joyce. And I think it's great she and Tara are becoming roomies. Wonderful chapter! |
| Thank you so much it gives me warm fuzzies when you say things like that |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 10:07 pm |
....whaa?
Great Chappie!! Can't wait to read more |
| Thank you..is it coming |
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| Shadow | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 09:49 pm |
| *giggle* OOOKAY who gave Buffy the wedgie.... |
| You're asking me? I just write this stuff! lol |
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| Karyn | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 09:16 pm |
lmao!!! poor Buffy!
and go Giles, you big stud-muffin, you! Go get her!
*giggles* |
| rofl...big stud muffin????? |
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| letitia | Chapter 37 | 06/26/2006 09:13 pm |
| okay now who just did that to Buffy??? ANd I am glad that Tara will have someone to talk with and live with while Willow is gone. And what will the LA crew be up to while Angel is being an idiot??? |
| yes it is good for Tara |
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| Verda | Chapter 36 | 07/30/2006 05:59 am |
| Hope they kick his ass, ram his head into a wall to get his attention first. One can only hope. Thanks for the great read. |
| but I still need him for comic relief |
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| sirc | Chapter 36 | 07/04/2006 07:35 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 36 | 06/24/2006 05:15 pm |
| I cannot wait to find out what the oracles said! Does happy anticipation dance! I am enjoying your use of supporting characters in this as well - Anya is quite lovely and all of them are intresting and entertaining! |
| Thank you...I am trying to follow all the advice mum, I don't want coal for christmas |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 06:27 pm |
| er, not really... cause spuffy smut would have to involve some willy at some point unless spike suddenly became a eunuch... |
| I don't write smut |
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| Ella | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 06:00 pm |
Just jump over an erupting volcano already, Angel! My God! he's pissing me off big time!
Btw, great update. |
| He tends to do that! lol |
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| vladt | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 12:58 pm |
| angel is an idiot. thanks for the fun read. |
| I agree, and thank you |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 07:57 am |
Sharp this Angel bloke isn't he? wouldn't surprise me if he came out of this visit with his balls handed to him on a plate...not that he really uses it anyway. really is useless for him, doesn't even need it to take a pee.
Awww...you put in a TV buying section. Good male bonding and drooling exercise.
Spike has casper the friendly ghost vesrion 2? Cordelia had one or still does right?
Well still loving it Jackers
Update soon
Harry |
| Yes Cordy still has Dennis |
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| Lou | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 06:39 am |
| Hopefully Angel will get put in his place bigtime! |
| We all hope so |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 05:00 am |
oooh Angel's going to be in trouble with the oracles...yay.
What I don't get though is the moving box. and Spike's Buffy smelling/hearing mistake...so much not told! Though I have no doubt that you'll be clearing it up in the next chappie? |
| Mayb not the next chapter...but soon |
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| Robyn | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 04:13 am |
| I loved the different tellings of the kiss that Spike gave Buffy, and his nickname for her was so cute. What's up with Spike's house? Angel is really a pompous fool and I can't wait to see what happens with him. Thanks for another great chapter. |
| Thank you for reviewing, Your questions will be answered in time |
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| Delicia | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 02:54 am |
Nice chappie! LOL over Mighty Mouse, that was just hilarious!
OMG, Angel's conceit knows no bounds! Dustage soon I hope!
Thanks! |
| Mighty Mouse did seem to fit! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 36 | 06/19/2006 12:50 am |
I hope they kill Angel, heehee
And when are we going to get to the spuffy smut so I can get my willy fix? lmao |
| ok...spuffy and willy are two totally diferent things...ewwww |
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| Tamara | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 11:48 pm |
Did the AI crew bring Dennis with them?
I don't think Angel's going to take what the Oracles tell him very well. |
| I have to agree |
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| Pin1 | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 11:42 pm |
| Delighted to see a new chapter. Looking forward to seeing what the Oracles have in store for Angel. Love this story! |
| Thank you, I update as often as I can |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 11:15 pm |
| I hope the powers smote his arrogant butt! LOL Excellent update. |
| I wish I could tel you the plan...might have to IM you |
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| carole | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 11:06 pm |
| great chapter. can't wait for the next one. |
| Thank you, I do try to update as often as possible. |
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| Emilee | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 10:56 pm |
| ooh ooh i smell sizzlin' vamp. Not quite as good as bacon, but infinitely more satisfying Can't wait for more. |
| EWWW...I'll never look at bacon the same way again! |
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| Irina | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 09:39 pm |
| Mighty Mouse, what a cute nickname for shopper Buffy... lol. I loved the conversations between the men and the women, especially the contrast between Spike and Buffy's take on their kiss. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for Angel when he confronts the Oracles. Wonderful chapter! |
| Men and women often have a diferent viewpoint over the same event. |
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| kim | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 08:19 pm |
Out of your hands now, Lorne. Let the Oracles deal with him. They certainly have the power to bring Angel to his knees, if they choose.
Seems that Spike's new house might be haunted. Will it be a Dennis type ghost, or a more malevolent one?
Yep, Anya always did need a friend, and she tried so hard. They were all too self-centered to ever give her a chance to fit in. |
| I think Anya and Tara could be very good friends. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 08:15 pm |
| Snorts Angel is a doofus. can we kill him yet |
| What we? ME it's all me! lol |
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| golddrake | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 08:10 pm |
| Man is Angel in for it. Great chapter. |
| He will be surprised at their response. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 07:54 pm |
| awesome chapter!!! great job, i so hope Angel gets kicked out on his ass! |
| LOL...me too |
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| Shadow | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 07:40 pm |
ANGEL SMACKDOWN! *grin*
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| Hell yeah! lol |
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| maryperk | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 07:10 pm |
| Great chapter. Can't wait to see what the Oracles tell the great glob of hair gel. |
| me either, loan me a bunny? |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 36 | 06/18/2006 07:07 pm |
| oh i cannpt wait to read thier reaction to his presumption. This is so funnY! |
| Thank you, I can't wait either! lol |
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| Verda | Chapter 35 | 07/30/2006 05:44 am |
| Good can't wait for the Powers to give him the 411, let his little world come crashing down on him. Glad that Willow's going after all. great read. |
| Angel has a jourey ahead of him. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 35 | 06/24/2006 05:16 pm |
| Can't believe Angel fired them in this time line as well. What a first class prick! I hope he gets a smack down and soon! |
| Steph...it's me...lol |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 35 | 06/17/2006 04:14 pm |
| Yeah, but that has nothing to do with any character *wiggles her brows* |
| ok...can I just say ewwwww |
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| sirc | Chapter 35 | 06/15/2006 03:48 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 35 | 06/14/2006 06:46 am |
| tsk tsk angel.. thats no way to speak to people.. just cause you cant get your own way.. *shakes head* i think you need a good spanking, and not the good kind either.. |
| lol...I can't quite picture the oracles doing that! lol |
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| vladt | Chapter 35 | 06/13/2006 08:13 pm |
| great read. angel, as usual, does not like what he hears, so ignores it. still not sure willow is convinced. thanks for the entertaining read. |
| Willow willget there |
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| Delicia | Chapter 35 | 06/12/2006 09:58 pm |
| That egomaniacal forehead!! Just to fire AI like that, someone needs to smack him; I vote for the PTB since, he won't listen to anyone else. Can't wait for more! |
| I will try and update quicker |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 35 | 06/12/2006 04:05 pm |
| Angel fired them??? Just flat out fired. *head desk* oh no |
| well, he is an idiot! lol |
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| Ella | Chapter 35 | 06/12/2006 05:01 am |
Can someone please kick Angel's ass? Please? Pretty please?
Can't wait for Buffy spending Spike's money. There better be a king's size bed from the shopping spree. :hee:  |
| He already had a bed |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 04:28 pm |
| can I say what an a**. Angel is losing it big time! great update! |
| Well, yeah...you did realise iot was me writing...right? |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 03:14 pm |
I meant William, you goof! *bops*
Die Angel, DIE |
| and yet you strike me as a willy lover |
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| Robyn | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 01:47 pm |
| I like that Penny helped Willow decide that going to England was good and helped her step out of denial land. What a great house for Spike, Buffy is going to have fun. I love Cordy and her very frankly putting exactly why Angel left. Thanks for the great update. |
| Again, thank you |
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| Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 01:47 pm |
| I like that Penny helped Willow decide that going to England was good and helped her step out of denial land. What a great house for Spike, Buffy is going to have fun. I love Cordy and her very frankly putting exactly why Angel left. Thanks for the great update. |
| You are welcome, I hope you continue to do so |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 01:45 pm |
my sweety is an English Springer Spaniel called Moon (lol lame I know but she has this drawing on her chest in the shape of a moon ;-P)
You do know you're evil, right? I just read the whole story again! and I still love it! |
cute breed.
and yes...I know...evil is my middle name |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 01:19 pm |
| Good update! |
| Thank you |
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| Karyn | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 01:17 pm |
| awesome update! ugh, Angel's such an ass! and Willow, still in so much denial. *sigh* |
| Yes, but Willow will come around |
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| golddrake | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 10:29 am |
| Great chapter. I always love seeing Angel get a little of what he deserves. |
| and maybe a little bit more |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 10:12 am |
| Good chapter so far.Bad Angel!I love this series.Update soon. |
| Lol...I will try my very best |
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| Shadow | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 09:26 am |
*giggle* Methinks Angel is sooooo full of himself... *awaits the smackdown from the Oracles*
FINALLY! Someone talks sense into "I'm all about control and I use magic to control others" *CHEERS*
Great Chapter! |
| lol...smackdown will come..just for you |
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| Tamara | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 09:09 am |
Penny was very clevver working her way around Willow's control freak tendacies.Good job!
Angel's going to be trouble. He's not dealing with a girl who froze her relationship in time with him in order to justify the deaths he caused. Even she grew past it but his crew are adults and have no desperate need to believe he's an icon of good. Does that make sense? |
| Yes it does! lol |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 08:45 am |
Strange I know I read the last part but have no idea why I didn't reply to it...unless it was Monday.
Anyways...I'm the only one who can get away with calling you Jackers? WooWhoo...just be greatful I don't call you Jackeroonie or Jackie. It's my charming personality right? lol
Hmm...so my guess about the forehead wasn't far off the mark...no surprise there, i'd have been surprised if he actually DID listen to the Green dude. He's really going to help his cause by sacking his team *rollseyes* what next he'll start taking payment Before he saves someone...'Don't worry ma'am i'll save you...but before i do that will be 29.99, I accept all major forms of credit cards'...lol
So is Riley dust? or did Spikey leave him with the stake in his heart meaning initiative can still find him? What happened.
Right Shopping time for Spike, he can let her decorate everything but needs to makes sure he buys a Tele himself, big 42" LCD/Plasma HD Ready TV with Dolby 7.1 yadda yadda yadda. Boys and their toys
Well Jackers loved the Updates
Update soooooon
Harry. |
| To be honest I didn't think Riley's dusting deserved any more than the hint it was going to happen. I really don't like him! LOL |
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| kim | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 07:34 am |
Well, he's a big boy that can make his own bed...Angel has to learn from the school of hard knocks. Stripped down to nothing where is only option is to climb up.
They're still going to have to watch to see that Willow gets on that plane.
And poor Spike's bank account is going to take a hard hit! |
| you're telling me! lol |
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| maryperk | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 07:24 am |
| Great Chappy, Jack! |
| Thank you, sweetness |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 06:08 am |
| Bloody Angel and his hard, hard head |
| just like yours? |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 05:56 am |
“The blond cupcakes, well, I think they surprised even the powers with their little dance, but you have to realize some very serious things, Angel. She wasn’t meant for you. You were supposed to help her, keep her safe, and not lose yourself and your soul in her. She is not your soul mate,” Lorne stated firmly.
“You’re wrong,” Angel snarled. This was not the way it was meant to be. “I’m going to see the oracles. I’m putting an end to this once and for all.”
Jumps up behind Angel and hits him with a scanner (What?! It was near my hands and I wanted to hit him with something! 1+1 equals 2! ;-) lolz... "So... where do we chain him... and can we play (read torture;-) before we burn him? ;-) pretty please?"
Lol! I love this story! (that was about the 163 time I said that wasn't it...) Jajks!... hang on... going to dry the dog, she's dripping on my laptop! |
| What type of dog? |
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| Irina | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 05:06 am |
| I enjoyed Penny's talk with Willow. It was a nice change to have Buffy be the one that needed an invite to get into Spike's house. Whoa! Looks like Angel's thickheadedness is leading him down a path of badness. I can't wait to find out what the oracles tell him. Wonderful chapter! |
| He has to get in to see them yet! lol |
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| Dihcar | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 04:58 am |
Good chapter, i disagree with willow being able to be Buffy's most powerfull ally, that's the main problem with post-chosen fics, they write willow as an invincible goddess destroying armies of demons, while she is still only human. Magic can also be counterd,stopped, and once you take the magic from willow all that's left is a sacred little girl. I would think that SPike is her strongest ally in your fic.
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| I'm fairly sure I didn't say she would be Buffy's strongest magical ally...what makes you so sure I was talking about magic? |
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| Lou | Chapter 35 | 06/11/2006 04:54 am |
| Bighead Angel is just going from bad to worse!! Excellent fun. |
| Thank you |
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| Verda | Chapter 34 | 07/30/2006 05:36 am |
| Yeah yeah, stupid Knights. Link must be severed, blah blah blah! Wow Tara's mom was a Seer too. Willow needs to go, I hope she does for all of there sakes. You know I love it. |
| Stupid nights indeed |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 34 | 06/24/2006 05:16 pm |
| Yeah for tara! |
| She has a major make over coming...and a little boost of confidence too |
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| sirc | Chapter 34 | 06/15/2006 03:44 am |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 34 | 06/12/2006 09:42 pm |
| I enjoyed this chapter! Buffy's dillema is difficult; I hope she'll think of something before something bad happens. The "singing" and "dancing" Angel did, ewww...*shudders*. I can see the spastic movements and it burns, it burns! I like how you're writing Tara. Making sure she is her own person and not an extension of Willow. Well done! |
| Thank you, as always |
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| deedo | Chapter 34 | 06/10/2006 03:54 pm |
oh boy, that is even worse then him singing Manilow, at least there I didn't have the imagers of him "dancing" popping up in my mind *shudders*
for someone so smart Willow was always kinda dense when it came to magics
I especially liked the interaction between Buffy and Spike and that Tara stood her ground against Willow |
| Willow has always opted for the easy way out |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 34 | 06/09/2006 07:42 am |
Good chapters.Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile.I hope Riley gets staked soon and Willow's able to do that on her own.I've now completed my Angel DVD collection.I got season two yesterday at Barnes & Noble.Now I have every single season of Buffy,
the movie,(Which I haven't watched and won't watch.)and all five seasons of Angel.My favorite part of season two is the Pylea episodes.I haven't started watching season two yet,because I also got X-Files,and I need to watch the last episode of season one of Everwood.Update soon. |
| Riley is dusted! lol |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 34 | 06/08/2006 02:04 pm |
*is silenced*...drama...tension...and we still don't know who Penny's going after...and Tara's being strong and coming into herself, good for her. ...Willow...poor Willow...all she wants is power, not Control but power.
Wonderful, keep up the good work. |
| Oh no...this Willow wants control too |
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| Lou | Chapter 34 | 06/08/2006 07:58 am |
| God, Willow can be such a pain - you've captured her exactly! |
| LOL...Thank you for that |
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| vladt | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 10:44 pm |
| very entertaining chapter. it is a tie for the highlight: tara being assertive; angel torturing lorne. thanks for a very good read. |
| You are very welcome |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 07:32 pm |
| Sorry, Carlton was a character on "The Fresh Prince of Bel Air." He was obsessed with Tom Jones and everytime he heard that song, he would do this retarded dance. It was always hilarious. I guess I just figured that everyone used to watch that show...lol! Again, great chapter=) |
| LOL...And the light goes on! OK I have seen it, I just didn't know what it was called so thanks for clearing that up |
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| letitia | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 06:49 pm |
| Hope they can get through to Willow.. And love Spike being solid on what they need to do with Riley.. And just so kuch going on... |
| I do try |
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| Robyn | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 06:35 pm |
| I love how Buffy bribed Spike with buying her lingerie, and his reaction, she has a great thing going there. Poor, poor Lorne having to listen to Angel. I feel bad for them all, but mostly Lorne, Cordy had the right idea leaving. Thanks for the update, it was very enjoyable. |
| She didn't go far |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 12:23 pm |
oooh interesting.... *starts thinking about things to happen;-)*
and I know I shouldn't drink during stories but come on! 23 hours without some liquid? that's cruel! ;-) lolz... naahh... was just a little mistake on my part... had to read and eat breakfast in a hurry 'cause I was going to Italy and I didn't think I could check the site over there... anyway... keep it up! |
| I'd be drinking too! LOL |
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| Tamara | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 10:43 am |
“It doesn’t say I turn evil,” Willow shouted defensively.
“You’re right. It says that you lose all control of your magic and try to destroy the world,” Anya replied happily.
Yep, I think that qualifies as evil, all right! |
| I thought so |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 05:56 am |
| great update as always sweetie!I likethe journal - very cool! |
| Thank you...I'm trying to remember all your lessons Yoda |
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| Irina | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 05:50 am |
| Love all the new interesting developments in the story. LMAO... The picture you painted of Angel's Tom Jones impersonation was hysterical! Wonderful update! |
| Thank you...that song is never going to be one of my favorites! |
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| Ella | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 02:51 am |
| Please let Willow go. I'm not liking that she's torn. Oh and Buffy spending Spike's money, what sane woman would pass an apportunity like that? |
| I sure as hell wouldn't |
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| Neart | Chapter 34 | 06/07/2006 01:25 am |
ouch! my ears are bleeding. You are evil, I have that song and Angel hips stuck in my brain now! HELP!!!
OOOOOOHHHH THE BADNESS |
| um...oops |
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| kim | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 11:26 pm |
Good, good, good....except for the freakin' knights! Idiot!
Yay for Riley never waking up. Yay for Tara sticking to her guns. Yay for Willow going bye-bye. |
| Yay for Jack??? |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 11:15 pm |
| awww.. great great GREAT update love it!! |
| Thank Thank THANK you |
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| golddrake | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 09:58 pm |
| great update |
| Thank you |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 09:40 pm |
| Oh my god, Angel singing to Tom Jones is just friggin hilarious. I have tears in my eyes from laughing so hard. I picture him doing the Carlton...lol! And I'm just grateful that it wasn't Manilow. I definitely needed a good laugh right about now, so thanks for that=) |
| Once again, I am forced to ask...What the bleedin' hell is the carlton?? |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 08:51 pm |
Bad knights, bad! You will die!
And hopefully Angel wasn't doing the Carlton *shudders* |
| what is the carlton? |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 08:28 pm |
| Glad to see the update. Thanks! |
| you are most welcome |
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| Karyn | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 07:55 pm |
| awesome update!! poor willow just doesn't understand...and poor Lorne, *goes to get him some tylenol* hee hee! |
| and a barf bag |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 07:51 pm |
lol, Angel sings Tom Jones. The guy
Will now probably lose his vegas contract.
Damn good chappie |
| Well he's old...he'll get over it |
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| maryperk | Chapter 34 | 06/06/2006 07:44 pm |
| Great chapter, Jack, as always. |
| Thanks sweetie, as always I couldn't do it with out you |
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| Verda | Chapter 33 | 07/30/2006 05:25 am |
| Couldn't review the last chapter, it fatal errored. Hope this one goes through. Harmony got him, eewwww, can you imagine having Harmony as your Sire? What's Lorne going to say to the Poof, and will he believe him? Good for Giles, Willow's almost as bad as Angel when it comes to magic. Keeping my fingers crossed. |
| I promise all qustions will be answered...eventually |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 33 | 06/24/2006 05:18 pm |
I like how you discuss magic in this chapter - although I do have one question/problem with it... How did you come up with the ten fold? Wiccian and many pagans have a three fold rule is why I am asking....
Just a random thought.... |
| The ten fold rule was actually used by many of the older societies that believed in magic. The variation came because magic 'practitioners' were put into two different groups. Those who had actual power and those who used the more standard 'power of positive energies', At the time it was believed that those with actual power should be held at a higher level of consequence. Active power got ten fold passive power got three fold. I figured Willow was an active power girl |
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| sirc | Chapter 33 | 06/15/2006 03:39 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 33 | 06/12/2006 09:26 pm |
| Whoa! Giles certainly scared Willow, and rightfully so! If Riley didn't have enough to worry about being a vamp, to have Harmony as a sire *shakes head*, good luck! Great chappie as always, thanks! |
| Thank you so much, really appreciate it |
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| vladt | Chapter 33 | 06/02/2006 07:02 pm |
| harmony, got riley, hilarious. willow still does not understand. then she always was tied for most egocentric with giles and xander. thanks for the very enjoyable read. |
| I think Angel had them all beat! |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 33 | 06/01/2006 11:29 am |
"You've got to be kidding me!" *falls of the chair ROFLMAO* "That's just priceless! Riley... a minion of... Harmony!!"
*cough* sorry *cough* laughing and drinking... not mixy..;-)
anyway keep it up! I love it! |
| You should know by now not to drink during my stuff! |
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| mts.tyra | Chapter 33 | 06/01/2006 03:43 am |
OMG!!! *Falls on the floor laughing*
Of all the peop... ummm... vampires it had to be Harmony!!! I somehow think that Riley won't be "normal" after that encounter.
I'm really looking forward to the time when our blondes meet (and kick the ass of) the ULTIMATE BLONDE...
Keep up the good work Jack!
-mts.tyra-
mts.tyra@gmail.com |
| Thank you...yes I believe the day of reckoning with Harmony will be interesting |
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| Neart | Chapter 33 | 06/01/2006 02:50 am |
| Thanks for that! I was in dire need of a laugh and Harmony's note hit the spot. Looking forward to Lorne's reading of Angel, should be a scream, hope their ears don't bleed too much! tee heee. |
| His choice of song will be unusual |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 33 | 06/01/2006 02:22 am |
OMG!!!! Demon Hunter extrodanaire, defeated by the mighty undeated Harmony....well he definitely cannot be dusted now, he needs to be cursed with a soul and pointed and laughed at. maybe we should let him spend time with his sire...should be cruel and unusual punishment I think.
Yep Buffy got her priorty straight slaying exboyfriend and then shopping using somene elses money...priority sorted
I thought Willow already had the intervention about her magic? or was that another fic? oh well it's can't hurt to be told more than once definitely considering Willow is a season away from being the big bad.
Angel get's his reading...personally don't see the point, the hunk of junk is not going to listen any way and if he does he'll only pick out the relevent parts to him. 'like if you change your ways you can still be champion for the powers' and he'll hear, the champion of the powers'..lol
Well Jackers Love the update
Update soon
Harry
lets see if this posts once or twice. |
| ONCE! go Harry! I can honestly say no one has ever got away with calling me Jackers before you...you are a lucky bugger! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 33 | 06/01/2006 12:03 am |
| Anya wanting to hear Giles chewing out Willow had me laughing. I like how Penny pointed out to Giles the seriousness of Willow’s casual attitude towards magic. The note Harmony left for Riley had me laughing, as did the gift. Thanks for the update. |
| You are most welcome, I hope you continue to enjoy |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 11:54 pm |
*snerk* Harmony? Harmony's Riley's Sire!! *falls off chair laughing,sits up and wipes eyes* That's bloody brillent!! Keep up the great work Jack!
Jace
P.s sorry about long time no review! |
| Welcome back Jace |
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| Irina | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 11:35 pm |
| LOL... Harmony's note was hysterical! I hope Willow does talk to Anya about the journal, cause i'm really curious about what's in it. Great update! |
| The information about the journal is coming...soon |
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| Opal | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 10:40 pm |
| LOL...Bloody Unicorns... |
| bloody Harmony! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 10:07 pm |
| Ewwww Harmony.... |
| Ewwww Riley... |
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| Malaya | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 09:04 pm |
| Wow! Being turned by Harmony. Now that is the ultimate insult |
| well yeah...but it was Riley! |
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| letitia | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 08:00 pm |
| Harmony??? Now that was just too funny. I don't even know why Graham thinks he can do anything about this.. Love Buffy and her shopping goodness..I hope Penny can really get through to Giles about Willow and soon. |
| Thank you, I hope so too |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 07:58 pm |
lol. Like so totaly Harmony, you know.
keep it commen. Liven for the read. |
| I thought so |
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| Kat | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 07:26 pm |
| that was great. but still no history on the jornal. lol great chapter |
| Journal is coming...soon |
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| Tamara | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 07:15 pm |
I don't blame Anya, I wanted to hear Giles tell Anya off too!
Definitely Harmony's style of laying out a new vamp.*grin* |
| I do love Anya |
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| kim | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 07:06 pm |
Oh, how did I know! Of course, it had to be Harmony. It's too universally perfect. So, stake him now?
Ah, good...addressing Willow's crazy control issues. Time to go bye-bye before things go kablooey.
Hee hee...Giles doesn't want to talk about Willow...what do you want to talk about, Rupert? |
| I'm glad you are enjoying it |
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| Ella | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 06:45 pm |
| LMAO! Harmony and Riley? You're too evil! |
| Bless you...heehee I am arn't I |
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| Richard | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 06:43 pm |
| This is so wonderfully in-character. Even, or especially, dumb Harmony. Love it. |
| Thank you, I appreciate it |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 06:16 pm |
| lmao - harm turned riley - that is bloody priceless! |
| I aim to please that is ...when I'm not being evil |
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| Dar | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 06:09 pm |
| Great Chapter enjoyed every paragraph. |
| thank you so much |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 06:06 pm |
| lmao. ya know you are evil.... right?? |
well...yeah...I have been saying that all along
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| Karyn | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 05:54 pm |
| awesome chapter! heh!!! i just love Anya!!! giggles that Harmony's the one that got Riley! |
| it seemed poetic |
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| maryperk | Chapter 33 | 05/31/2006 05:49 pm |
| Harmony! She sure does get around, the little tramp. |
| lol...she does at that |
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| sirc | Chapter 32 | 06/15/2006 03:34 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 32 | 05/31/2006 06:12 pm |
| giggles love it - riley chipped would be funny but then again riley anything painful is funny - good update! |
| lol...i do love consistancy |
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| Delicia | Chapter 32 | 05/30/2006 02:19 pm |
Uh oh. I hope Riley is found before he can do any damage. It's not nice for him to interrupt with his stupid vampiness when happiness is going on!
I hope the house Willy found is suitable for Spike and meets their expectations, for his sake! |
| Welll lets just say the hose is truly beautiful. |
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| vladt | Chapter 32 | 05/29/2006 08:09 pm |
| good read. love buffy's line to willy. thanks for the fun read. |
| you are most welcome |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 32 | 05/28/2006 05:36 am |
“Oh! Did I forget to mention that his chip doesn’t work anymore?”
*snigger* That's soo Buffy! ;-
) Love it! *Gives Spike a big hug* "Congrats with the new house, cutie!" ;-) |
| The house wil be a bit of a surprise. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 11:57 pm |
| oooh im hoping he lied LOL |
| LOL..you are nearly as evil as I am! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 09:33 pm |
| ooooo domestic spuffy! yay |
| coud be |
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| Lou | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 06:12 pm |
| Home sweet home! |
| Maybe...or...poor willy |
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| kim | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 05:27 pm |
Aww, poor Willy...LOL!
Of course, it would be a Victorian. I love Victorian houses. I live fairly close to several that have been perfectly restored, part of the historical society.
Honestly, I think Graham would just dust Riley. Better from an old friend, you know? |
| Would he...or would think that his friend is dead and that the demon in charge of the body is the animal that killed him? |
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| Kat | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 03:03 pm |
| nice chapter and now tara and willow are with penny and giles. well and anya so maybe we will get to figure out excatally what the deal is there |
| Maybe you remember I'm evil, right? |
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| Karyn | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 11:35 am |
| awesome update jack!!! grrr, hope they get to Riley first! |
| yeah but what are they gonna do with him then? |
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| Irina | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 11:28 am |
| I enjoyed reading Buffy's musings. Spike's compassion really shined in this chapter. I can't wait to find out who gets to Riley first. Spike's new house sounds quite posh and very roomy, i'm really looking forward to Spike and Buffy's first look at the property. Fantastic update! |
| Spike's commpasion will be explored |
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| Robyn | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 11:10 am |
| I loved Buffy's parting shot to Willy, what a way to make him sweat. I am really looking forward to how things are resolved with Riley. Thanks for another great update. |
| Thank you...The Riley situation is a strange one |
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| Ella | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 08:17 am |
| Riley and Graham are idiots. Spike the home owner. Oh and update soon. |
| I will try my hardest |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 07:48 am |
| excellent chapter |
| Thank you...I have a very special chapter for you coming up |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 07:17 am |
It's a family of super heroes, a Seer, a super stong Slayer, a mystical key who can open portals to other universes and the son in law who is a Vampire...sounds like a comic from Marvel lol
Wow that was a quick purchase...i'd have atleast had a quick gander at the property before paying a few hundred k on it.
I don't know if I want Riley to get caught so he can be on the receiving end of the torture the souless demon population had to endure on his and the initiatives hands or have him dusted by Spike after forcing him into submission ofcourse afterall he is just a lowly fledgling right?
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| What can I say...Spike is impatient...and rich...and able to hurt Willy! lol |
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| deedo | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 07:14 am |
love the new chapter, jack 
if they wouldn't use him to do god knows what I wouldn't mind letting Riley taste some of his own medicine in the initiative labs and getting a chip shoved up his brain
nice to see Buffy is considering to talk to Penny about previous "obsession" with wanting normal |
| Riley's fate is not sealed |
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| maryperk | Chapter 32 | 05/27/2006 06:51 am |
| great chapter! |
| Thank you sweetie, you are an inspiration to me |
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| Verda | Chapter 31 | 07/30/2006 04:58 am |
| At least Joyce doesn't have the headaches like Cordy. Need to find out what's going to happen next. Great chapter. |
| Yes...no headaches for Joyce |
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| sirc | Chapter 31 | 06/15/2006 03:29 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| deedo | Chapter 31 | 05/27/2006 07:07 am |
great update
Buffy got her very own seer now?? wonder what Tara and Willow found out?? |
| It will all become clear...in time |
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| Ella | Chapter 31 | 05/27/2006 01:34 am |
| Just finished reading this amazing story in one sitting, smiling like mad ever since. Loved it and hope you'll update soon |
| I try to update quickly. I am so happy that you are enjoying my litl fic |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 31 | 05/24/2006 05:50 pm |
| Oh oh oh I can't wait to see Buffy's reaction!!! *excited* |
| It might not be what you expect |
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| Silver | Chapter 31 | 05/24/2006 12:10 pm |
I just read the entire thing in ONE go. Absolutely Brilliant. I adore this and simply cannot wait for the next installment. -especially all the Angel and Riley bashing going on.
usually I dislike the thought of Xander and Spike as friends but you have managed to make the transformation pretty seamless. Congratulations, it's a feat. |
| Thank you...but I blame the bunny for that, I certainly didn't want it to happen! |
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| Lou | Chapter 31 | 05/23/2006 05:05 am |
| Moms are used to doing the tough stuff - such a cool Joyce! |
| I always thought so |
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| kim | Chapter 31 | 05/23/2006 02:25 am |
Oooo, fun...
What's in the book???!!!!! You awful tease, you...
Spike pretty... |
| Now that would be telling ...and I'm Evil |
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| Robyn | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 09:45 pm |
| What a surprise that the Riley incident was instead a prophetic dream. I love the gift that Joyce has been given, and from the sounds of it her dreams are much more clear then Buffy’s. Glad that the notebook was mentioned again, I am really curious about it. I adored the Buffy/Spike moments, they were so sweet. Buffy’s reaction to her moms flirting was cute and Joyce’s thought about men is so true. Thanks for the great update. |
| I don't think oyce would have put up with cryptic!lol |
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| Delicia | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 09:40 pm |
| Whew, it was just a dream (so far). I'm glad you're giving Joyce an even more active role in Buffy's slaying life. Buffy and Spike being couple-y is so sweet! I can't wait for Tara's revelations, I bet it's gonna be great! |
| Well it's certainly going to be a revelation! |
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| Kat | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 08:56 pm |
| lol great ending. loved the chapter especially the inner thoughts of the people |
| I do like getting into their heads |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 08:52 pm |
lmao, yes we men always pass off the distatseful jobs if we can
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| Well that explains your writing style ...or from what I can tell with the minimal amount I have to go by...Am I being too subtle, or do you get that I want an update from you? |
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| vladt | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 05:37 pm |
| go joyce. with the flirting, not the dreams. good update, thanks for the enjoyable read. |
| I don't know...I like the dreams being part of it too |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 03:27 pm |
| Good lord, she has one dream and now she thinks she has a gift from the powers... |
| That would be because they let her know that she had been given a gift from the powers. There is power in subtlety. |
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| Irina | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 03:27 pm |
| Jack you sneaky little devil... I never would've guessed Joyce was dreaming. I think it's great Joyce has been given this gift from the Powers, she's gonna make a wonderful member of the team. Awww... I loved the sweet Spuffy moments in this chapter. So Joyce is flirting... I can't wait to find out if Giles is flirting back. Fantastic update! |
| Heehee...jack is evil |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 02:16 pm |
| good update - go joyce with the dreams |
| Thank you, Joyce deserves some fun |
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| maryperk | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 01:50 pm |
| Cool chapter, Jack. |
| Thanks sweetie, you help keep my bunnies talking |
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| Karyn | Chapter 31 | 05/22/2006 01:32 pm |
Awesome, giggles @ Joyce grossing Buffy out with the flirting. *grin*
Poor Spike, so unsure of himself, just wanna snuggle him, of course i wanna do that anyway...lol |
| Rofl...but sweetie if I let you snuggle him then Buffy has to kill you in the next chapter |
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| Verda | Chapter 30 | 07/30/2006 04:49 am |
| Oh yay! Buffy gets to dust him. Thanks for the laugh, leave it to Anya to notice his hard-on, and of course mention it to everyone. Another one for the plus column. If I could, I'd start giving you gold stars. |
| ooooh...I like gold stars |
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| Delicia | Chapter 30 | 05/22/2006 09:31 pm |
| Yeah, Slayer's blood did the trick. Did a few other things as well ;). *shakes head* Angel is such an idiot. |
| I am not going to argue with you, Angel is n idiot! |
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| deedo | Chapter 30 | 05/20/2006 04:37 pm |
vamped Riley, I hope Joyce will dust him good and proper
do we get some Lusty Buffy now, with Spike all better?? *pout* |
| You can wait! |
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| sirc | Chapter 30 | 05/20/2006 02:43 am |
| great chapter |
Thank you
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| vladt | Chapter 30 | 05/19/2006 02:58 pm |
| very good chapter. riley threatening dawn, what a way yo make a legion of enemies. and joyce might be the scariest. thanks for the fine read |
| Joyce can be scary |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 30 | 05/19/2006 09:51 am |
*shakes head at Riley* *sigh* "Don't you ever learn Riley? You just don't mess with a Summers Woman, it has bad consequences for your health...oh wait never mind, mess with them as much as you like, but don't expect me to hold back an 'I told ya so!' lol"
Love this! this is going to be goooood....! |
| Riley is a problem |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 30 | 05/19/2006 12:26 am |
| Joyce, Dust that creapie little Riley fledgling! :fight: |
| Rofl...wait for it! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 11:06 pm |
| Go, go Mama Summers! |
| LOL...oh boy are you gonna kill me |
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| Robyn | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 10:57 pm |
| I do love Joyce and how protective she is of her family. If I was Riley I think I would already be running in the opposite direction. I also loved the humor and interaction in the rest of the chapter. Thanks for great update. |
| You are most welcome...there are some surprises coming though...be warned |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 09:08 pm |
| argghhh!!! omg!!! |
| Truely...it's not what you think |
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| kim | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 07:46 pm |
Whoa! Wasn't expecting that at the end! Go Joyce...
Everything else was totally laugh out loud! |
| Thank you...but you have a surprise in store |
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| Irina | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 07:36 pm |
| LOL... I loved the feeding scene, looks like Buffy should've fed Spike in private. It's not surprising Angel learned nothing from his session with Penny. Cordy is right though going up against the Scoobies is a losing cause. What an exciting ending to the chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next. Great update! |
| Thank you...It's not what you think |
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| Kat | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 06:41 pm |
| oh no poor dawn. yikes and yay for Joyce. That was a great chapter. stupid angel |
| Stupid Angel indeed! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 04:27 pm |
| RILEY?? LMAO!! |
| I wonder how you'll react to the next chapter (Jack gives evil laugh) |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 04:05 pm |
| Eeeeek!! Joyce needs an axe to use on Cardbored's head. Angelus is getting more dangerous and Spike is doing much better with the Scoobies. What does Riley want with Dawn? More story please. |
| Soon...I promise |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 03:37 pm |
| Oooo vapire Riley? Let the staking begin! And, leave it to Aya LOL gotta love her and her bluntness. |
| I do love Anya |
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| Tamara | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 03:06 pm |
Angel in denial mode (Poor Lorne having to hear him sing)
A horny Spike and Buffy left alone together.
And a vamped out Riley facing a pissed off Joyce.
Next chapter promises to be action packed.
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| Well it promises something |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 02:43 pm |
About bloody time he woke up, it's been ages sinse he was turned...or it could be just the movement of time has not been that much these past few update.
'THE AXE JOYCE!!! THE AXE!!' gotta respect a women who knows how to handle a axe..lol
Lousy sod that Angel, he really has no brains in that large cranium of his i'd say sawdust but wood is not good for vamps right...so foam wI guess. Poor Lorne bad enough having to endure Angels singing, he'll have a task on hand persuading what he read was true and not bad eyesight.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| I have to agree...poor Lorne |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 02:43 pm |
About bloody time he woke up, it's been ages sinse he was turned...or it could be just the movement of time has not been that much these past few update.
'THE AXE JOYCE!!! THE AXE!!' gotta respect a women who knows how to handle a axe..lol
Lousy sod that Angel, he really has no brains in that large cranium of his i'd say sawdust but wood is not good for vamps right...so foam wI guess. Poor Lorne bad enough having to endure Angels singing, he'll have a task on hand persuading what he read was true and not bad eyesight.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| Actually, riley got bitten earlier that night...think about that! |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 02:33 pm |
| Riley a vampire! *is not really shocked then pauses before a large smile appears* RILEY DUSTAGE ahead!!! YES!!! *is happy* |
| Oh Jace, I hope what I've decided to do makes you happy |
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| Lou | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 02:12 pm |
| Yikes - that's not a pretty picture! |
| Hmmm, there is soo much I could say to that, but I don't want to give away the plot |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 01:00 pm |
| Well that's interesting. More please. |
| coming soon...I promise |
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| Pin | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 11:26 am |
| You've vamped Riley - how fantastic! I love the way you have Angel ranted - what a hoot. Thanks again for a great story. |
| You are most welcome...but remember things are not always what they seem |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 11:08 am |
| riley is a vamp - cool |
| Thank you...but...? |
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| Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 09:49 am |
| "moving with the speed and grace of a slayer.' More,more need Riley dust |
| Rofl...I will try |
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| maryperk | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 09:38 am |
| Wow, busy chapter. Awesome. |
| Yup...it's gonna get worse too, so much is about to happen |
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| Karyn | Chapter 30 | 05/18/2006 09:33 am |
| awesome jack!!! eck! quick somebody kill Riley! ..god i love saying that..rofl |
| Not as much as I love doing it! lol |
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| Verda | Chapter 29 | 07/30/2006 04:37 am |
| Poor Spike! I'd forgotten about his broken hand. Can't wait to find out what's in the book of Tara's, gotta love Anya. Great read Jacks. |
| YES...Poor Spike |
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| deedo | Chapter 29 | 05/20/2006 04:29 pm |
great update
poor Spike and I'm happy to see that Xander has become such a good friend in such a short amount of time |
| Xander has been a real surprise in this story...I blame the bunny |
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| vladt | Chapter 29 | 05/19/2006 02:48 pm |
| love anya, love the update, love the tale. thanks |
| Thank you...that was really sweet |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 29 | 05/18/2006 11:03 am |
| lovely chapter - can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Thanks sweetie, shouldn't have too long to wait |
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| sirc | Chapter 29 | 05/17/2006 11:22 am |
| great chapter. I loved ANya's line :d |
| Thank you...I do like Anya |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 29 | 05/15/2006 03:46 pm |
| Damn you! You teased me with the smuttiness then snatched it away! You're EVIIIIL!!! |
| I never denied it...in fact I think it's written on my business cards |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 29 | 05/15/2006 12:07 pm |
I love the changes that Xander is having. I love the fact that he is growing *wipes tear* I'm so happy.
*chuckles* keep up the good work
Jace |
| Thank you Jace, It's so nice to see you again |
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| Lou | Chapter 29 | 05/15/2006 07:20 am |
| Nice Xander is still nice Xander - who'd have thunk it? |
| I KNOW... I really am going to have to have a chat with my bunny over that! |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 29 | 05/15/2006 02:39 am |
"Me 2!" Xander has really grown up in this story! It's great!!!
-xoxo- |
| Thank you, I don't know how it happened |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 29 | 05/15/2006 12:32 am |
LOL omg...hahaha thats funny..
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| Thank you (Jack takes a bow) |
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| Irina | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 07:19 pm |
| Go Xander! He certainly is proving to be a great friend for Spike, and he definitely deserves all the happies Anya is probably gonna give him. Should be interesting to see how Spike reacts to the drinking from his Slayer. Can't wait to find out what's in the mysterious notebook. Wonderful update! |
| Spike's reaction will be typical |
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| kim | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 07:04 pm |
Anya's reaction was classic.
Oooo, what's in the notebook?
Need more, need more! |
| That notebook has many things in it |
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| Bigbird | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 02:59 pm |
| Oh I think I like this Xander!! first time for everything! |
| It surprises me too! lol |
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| Delicia | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 02:39 pm |
| Great update! Poor Spike, I hope Slayer blood does the trick ;)! I wonder what was in the journal? I know, I know. Patience! I am really enjoying the changed attitude from Xander! Thanks. |
| I still have no idea how the heck that happened! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 01:58 pm |
I am too! Good boy, Xander! here's a cookie.
And what is it in that notebook? |
| The notebook has many things in it |
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| Kat | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:37 pm |
| great xander moment yay and anya hehehe |
| LOL...glad you liked it |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:35 pm |
“Alexander Lavelle Harris! Are you suggesting Buffy willingly offer her blood to a vampire?” Anya looked beyond shocked.
“Only that one,” Xander burst out defensively.
**dies laughing**
Good,Xander! Somebody deserves a special treat! |
| I think Anya will give it to him later! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:34 pm |
Hey there was nothing wrong with DC...with the exception of the main charactor being the worst main charactor ever and the inconsitencies and D/Jo soulmate crap, and some pretty lame storylines...OK so the show was pretty lame, but as I said I watched it mainly for the banter between Pacey and Joey.
Now onto this fic....Poor Spikey going to be so embaressed, got knocked out from the pain from his hand just when he was about to get lucky....he'll be forever humiliated with that...lol
Well that's a good idea from Xander...now how do you feed a Vampire who'se unconcience? put some slayer blood under his nose and let the smell arouse him, like sea salt or something?
Wonder what was in that notebook...I know Tara is supposed to be the gaurdian for the slayer, the White witch by the side of the Slayer helping her and guiding her...member of the clan that created the Scthye? I think that's the combination of three fics there...but it is possible right?
Well Jackers great stuff
keep it coming.
Harry. |
| You've given my plenty of ideas there Harry, I think I'll have to play follow the bunny on it though |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:32 pm |
| LOL, Xander acualy being nice???? geeze must be a sign of an appocolypse |
| I blame you! LOL |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:15 pm |
| You know, I'm pretty proud of him, too. I'm surprised that Xander would have suggested that. He really has changed in this. I'm glad to see a story where he isn't a jerk. This is very refreshing. Anyway, hope that Spike gets better soon. He needs both of his hands. Great chapter=) |
| I blame the bunny for Xander, I have no idea where else it could have come from! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 12:06 pm |
Poor Spike he finally gets the girl right where he wants her and ouch, lights out. I absolutely love the change in Xander and his concern for Spike, even though he still has the habit of jumping to conclusions, but them he wouldn’t be Xander if he didn’t.  Real curious about the notebook now, but then real curious about a lot of things. Thanks for the update. |
| I know I have a lot of irons in the coals, but they are necessary |
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| Joyce | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 11:32 am |
Now I'm really interested in the contents of the tome by Tara's mom. I'm guessing it will make for more of a plot bunny.
Nice subdued magical addiction to come for Willow. |
| Thank you, I think Willow has some problems that Penny needs to help her with. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 11:31 am |
| *giggles* great chapter, but poor spike *sigh* and no lusty buffy...lol |
| LOL...Spike will find a way |
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| maryperk | Chapter 29 | 05/14/2006 11:16 am |
| ouchie, poor spike. |
| I know...sucks to be him! |
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| Verda | Chapter 28 | 07/30/2006 04:26 am |
| It has been a rollercoaster ride of a day. Yup, he wants to see Lusty Buffy, and so do we, on to the next chapter. Great read. |
| Lusty Buffy wants to see him too |
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| sirc | Chapter 28 | 05/17/2006 11:18 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 28 | 05/14/2006 02:30 pm |
| Nice! That was certainly a lot of mood swings for a short amount of time! Glad she's being playful and not pissed, or maybe she is? I don't like to guess, 75% of the time I'm wrong!! |
| lol...not in my stories! |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapter 28 | 05/14/2006 03:27 am |
| I just started reading this fic. It's great! Very interesting idea. Will be looking forward to more chapter. |
| Thank you so much, I hope you continue to enjoy it |
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| deedo | Chapter 28 | 05/13/2006 04:17 pm |
I loved how Spike described the hormonal hurricane that is Buffy
wonder how he will like Lusty Buffy?? |
| He's a guy! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 28 | 05/13/2006 10:02 am |
| haha lusty buffy.. OMG please tell us about penny's crush |
| Um...when the time is right |
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| vladt | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 11:17 pm |
| that was hilarious. thank you for the great read. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 01:56 pm |
| very cute chapter sweeite |
| Thank you so much |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 10:45 am |
| I hope Lusty Buffy and Spike have fun. She's still living in Denial with the 'I'm not temperamenetal thinking and the gets a little cross bit. More story please. |
| Buffy is still Buffy |
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| Joyce | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 10:12 am |
| That was a nice air clearing between the two. |
| We hope |
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| Kat | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 09:53 am |
| hehehehe great one there. I understand spike's feelings but lol Buffy is in an intresting mood. YAY great chapter |
| Thank you...Buffy's moods can be fun |
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| Karyn | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 09:20 am |
| giggles! finally! lusty buffy! lmao!!! great update!!! |
| You are sooooo gonna kill me Karyn |
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| Neart | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 08:23 am |
Whoa Spike, it has been a crazy twisty turn-y, chop and change sort a day,eventually all Buffys lead to lusty Buffy!  |
| We hope |
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| Irina | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 05:46 am |
| I love the way Spike expresses himself, hormonal hurricane is a perfect description of Buffy's mood swings. I also enjoyed reading Buffy's thoughts throughout the chapter. Fantastic update! |
| Thank you soo much |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 05:06 am |
Good chapter.I love Multiple Personalities!Buffy.She's funny.
Update soon. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Robyn | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 02:43 am |
| I think Spike's going to really enjoy Lusty Buffy and I really enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the update. |
| You are most welcome...I think he'll enjoy lusty Buffy too |
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| kim | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 02:40 am |
Uh-oh...lol.
Little short.  Want more!
And he's right about the mood swings...we women understand mood swings, but Buffy would still drive me insane. |
| She does have that gift! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 02:19 am |
Right so Spikes gone from Drusilla who was clearly insane and with one twisted personaility, to Harmony who has no personality, to Buffy who has multiple persenalities...Bloke certainly knows how to pick them doesn't he?
Hey there is nothing wrong with Dawson's Creek...well Season 3 and parts of Season 4 and a couple of Episodes of Season 6, Rest I didn't watch anyway. Besides only watched it for Pacey and Joey's relationship, and to bash Dawson Leeky. Besides if no DC I would not be reading fanfiction.
Well anyway loved the update
Update soon
Harry |
| Thank Harry |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 02:19 am |
Right so Spikes gone from Drusilla who was clearly insane and with one twisted personaility, to Harmony who has no personality, to Buffy who has multiple persenalities...Bloke certainly knows how to pick them doesn't he?
Hey there is nothing wrong with Dawson's Creek...well Season 3 and parts of Season 4 and a couple of Episodes of Season 6, Rest I didn't watch anyway. Besides only watched it for Pacey and Joey's relationship, and to bash Dawson Leeky. Besides if no DC I would not be reading fanfiction.
Well anyway loved the update
Update soon
Harry |
| He does have a soft spot for the nutters! LOL...Pacey and Joey were the only bit worth watching |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 01:51 am |
| Come on, that is so not a fair place to leave it. What are you doing to me here? I wanna meet Lusty Buffy...lol! This chapter was way too short for me. I'll just have to keep in mind that you're a pretty fast udpater, but I must have more soon. And maybe she's dealing with so many moods at once because it's that time of the month? Then again, I'm sure Spike would have sensed that. Great chapter=) |
| Nah...She's just buffy the moody slayer |
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| Tamara | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 01:51 am |
| I think Lusty Buffy will make him very happy or exhausted or both. |
| Actually.... you'll jaust have to wait and see |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 01:26 am |
| GREAT CHP, HUN! More soon please. |
| It's coming as soon as I can, Thank you for reading it, I know how busy you are |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 28 | 05/12/2006 01:25 am |
| Ooooo SMUT????? |
| Oooooo No! |
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| Verda | Chapter 27 | 07/30/2006 04:18 am |
| Joyce has a lot to be thankful for. Poor Spike he tried so hard not to tell Buffy about Clem, but we all know Buffy, she doesn't let anything go, and where is he taking her? Great chappie, thanks for the read. |
| Buffy is insistant! |
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| sirc | Chapter 27 | 05/17/2006 11:13 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 27 | 05/10/2006 08:00 pm |
| lol |
| Thank you |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 27 | 05/09/2006 01:36 am |
Awwwww...Spike is pissed off he can't play with his poker buddies anymore...that and the broken hand. Now where is he taking her and why that's my question...i'd have thought it would be the Slayer who would be dragging Spike to have his arm healed.
Well Penny does have a point, Joyce should enjoy life a bit more she's got herself another chance she should grab it with both hands and have fun.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| I think it was the swinging mood swings that did it rather than the refusal to accept kitten poker |
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| Kat | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 09:39 pm |
| uh oh buffys in trouble now lol. great chapter |
| and completely clueless! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 06:31 pm |
| I really liked how Penny helped Joyce deal with the shock that without Spike's help she would have died. And Spike finally taking some control with Buffy's mood swings, I am really looking forward to what happens next. Thanks for the great update. |
| Thank you, I hope you enjoy it |
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| vladt | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 05:56 pm |
| fun read. oh spike is planning something. that always works so well for him. thanks for the entertaining read. |
| Rofl...sarcasm is good! lol |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 05:12 pm |
| LOL they're funny |
| Thank you |
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| Neart | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 04:51 pm |
| tee hee, what's he gonna do? |
| next chapter you'll see |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 03:52 pm |
| Where's he taking her?? And tell Penny to stop bothering with Joyce so we can find out who she likes!!! Do you want more bad smut??!! |
one of those questions will be answered in the next chapter
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| Irina | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 03:32 pm |
| I'm glad Penny was there for Joyce, I liked their talk. LOL... I enjoyed Spike's explanation of the kitten poker. Good for Spike getting all forceful like that, can't wait to find out where they're headed. Great chapter! |
| Thank you, I am so glad that you are enjoying it |
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| deedo | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 02:43 pm |
poor kittens and poor Spike fighting with a broken hand
I wonder what he has planned for Buffy
nice to see that Joyce seems to feel better |
| I don't know that Spike even knows himself |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 01:29 pm |
ok so where's spike taking Buffy?
and how come she gets to order him to stop playing kitten-poker? i mean spike snacks on pig blood but the kittens get protection cos they are cute and piggies aren't? Don't mind me i just being stupid and i am vegetarian so piggies and kitten all alike for me. |
| I might use that as his argument! lol |
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| Karyn | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 01:12 pm |
yay!! i love cave!spike ... giggles, show her whos boss!! and omg, the kitten poker...lmao
poor joyce, its' a lot to process! |
| Tony Danza! |
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| kim | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 12:55 pm |
| Ooooo, Buffy's gonna get it...where's he going? Huh? Huh? |
| Next update will tell you that |
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| Delicia | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 12:49 pm |
| Great chapter! Spike explaining about the kitten poker was too funny! The scene with Joyce was very good and I'm glad Penny was able to help her. I wonder where Spike is taking Buffy? |
| Next chapter you'll find that out for sure ! |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 12:34 pm |
| Good chapter.I love Clem.I'm on day eight of a headache that's lasted eight days.Not even Advil helped.This always happens once a year.Update soon. |
| I hope your headache is gone soon |
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| Nova | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 12:17 pm |
| interesting, I wonder what Spike has in mind, been reading this for a bit, looking foward to more. |
| Thank you...I hope you enjoy what I've come up with |
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| maryperk | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 12:15 pm |
| Good chapter, Jack. Ouchie, Spike fought with a broken hand. He needs some Slayer healing. LOL |
| well he need something! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 11:43 am |
| giggles how funny! Me likey! |
| lol...thanks sweetie |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 27 | 05/08/2006 11:32 am |
| Teeheehee! Will Spike spank Buffy? The PTB know she deserves it. More story please. |
| Spike spankage....hmmm I like it! |
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| Verda | Chapter 26 | 07/30/2006 04:06 am |
| Nice of Xander to offer Spike refuge. That won't have been pretty if Buffy found Harm there. Wonder if Penny will try and feel out Joyce to see if there's anything between her and Giles. Thanks for the wonderful story. |
| I think Penny is there for a different reason |
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| Delicia | Chapter 26 | 05/08/2006 12:40 pm |
| Willie being useful? With no backstabbing intent? Who knew!! I guess he really wants that realtors' fee! I'm enjoying the friendship between Xander and Spike. Hope that Spike can explain the kittens and Buffy won't be mad. I don't think so, but I can hope. |
| Can you seriously think of any scenerio where Buffy wouldn't be mad at Spike over kitten poker? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 26 | 05/05/2006 02:10 am |
| Kittens and house shopping hurray! |
my thoughts exactly! lol
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| sirc | Chapter 26 | 05/04/2006 10:17 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 26 | 05/04/2006 08:08 am |
| Well in THAT case, it was totally random after having Penny go on about going to out to get that person she liked! Which I need to know! |
| UM...Actually, Penny thought she needed a man...she picked the one she thought was the best choice. She certainly didn't 'go on about it'. Like any woman worth her salt, she will make him work for it...not the other way around. And things like that require time. Plot is important in a fic that is not porn. And plot need character development. |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 26 | 05/04/2006 06:23 am |
"Shouldn't you guys be thinking about patrolling rather that swapping spit?"
loved that part. Totally love Anya and Spike-Xand friendship. Can't wait to see spike try to get out of the kittens thing. oh and Buff and Spike did a Dru and Spike gesture? |
| What gesture? It must have been unintentional |
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| Pulchra | Chapter 26 | 05/04/2006 05:44 am |
'yeah, spike, what kittens?' *evilsmirk* Love this!
I really love how you are letting William out without really changing Spike's character! |
| Oh Spike will come out too...soon! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 07:22 pm |
| LOL be free kittens.. scamper away LOL it would be funny if he did pay with them hehe |
| Can you imagine the amount needed to buy a house? |
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| Kat | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 06:55 pm |
| oh goodness i cant wait to see her reaction to that lol |
| All I'll say is that I had a blast writting it! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 06:27 pm |
| *snort* damn Spike. You see women get like this at times they just want to piss you off |
| I wonder if the little elf does that to the sasquatch? |
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| Joyce | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 06:15 pm |
| Loved how you snuck that last line right in there! Waiting for more. |
| Spike's not stupid! |
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| vladt | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 05:35 pm |
| fun read. and it did not take spike very long to step on a land mine. waiting, impatiently, to read his tap dance of an answer. thanks for the enjoyment. |
| And what a merry dance it is too! |
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| deedo | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 04:52 pm |
have I mentioned that I like the Spike/Xander friendship lately??
Poor spikey, just saved from the Harmony-debacle, survived the ganging up on the girls and now the kittens *rofl* how's he gonna distract her now??
nice to see that Penny remembered to cheer up Joyce a bit, having barely avoided death must have left her quite shaken, I know I would be
to sum it up, great update, as always
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| Thank you, it's nice to know someone else thinks Joyce needs to be looked after |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 02:49 pm |
| Penny likes JOYCE?? *looks confused* |
| NO! Penny is a psychologist, Joyce just went through a potentially traumatizing event, Penny is there to help. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 02:38 pm |
Good chapter.I love the Spike/Xander friendship so much.
Hopefully,Buffy will take one of the kittens.I love cats.I do have three cats(and two dogs),and they're all adorable.Update soon. |
| I don't think Spike actually plans on letting her near enough to the game to see the cats! |
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| arba | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 02:36 pm |
Nice story.
PS. In the summary it should read CANON. Cannon means something completely different. |
| Thanks for the correction, I think the problem is fixed now |
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| Irina | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 02:02 pm |
| Smart move on Spike's part to get Buffy away from Willy's, but not so smart of Willy to even bring up the kitten currency infront of the slayer. Great chapter, I really enjoyed it! |
| He probably thought she knew, it's not like it was ever a secret |
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| Neart | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 12:20 pm |
| Tee heee, Spike had better be swift with his tongue to distract from the kittens... hmmm wonder how he'll go about it? Still loving this fic. |
| I don't think you will guess this one! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 11:23 am |
| Teeheehee! Kitten poker is one of the silliest things ever in the Jossverse. What are Penny and Joyce getting up to? More story please. |
| I promise you won't have to wait long |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 10:27 am |
| uhoh spikey is in trouble *giggles* |
| yup...it's amazing just how much trouble that boy can in to! |
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| firebird234 | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 10:07 am |
| Gee wonder how Buffy will react to the kittens as currancy considering the last time she got drunk and set them all free. I wonder if Spike will ask Buffy who was in her body when she(Faith) made that speech, it would be funny to read Buffy's reaction. |
| I think I can pretty much promise that there will be reactions! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 09:58 am |
I thought Penny only recently qualified or was still in Uni so a young lass, no older that 25. Besides didn't you say she did her thesis on Buffy Charactors so recent Graduate...Oh who cares, atleast not as disturbing as Katie Holmes and Tom Cruise *shudders* Besides I could be wrong and Penny is really after Joyce
Sooooo...how much money does Spike have? lol. should be quite a bit i'd imagine 120years worth of investment with no withdrawels, should be a few million Quid atleast I should imagine. now if it was Angel he'd have spent most of that on Hair product alone.
Well loved the end part with Willie, will be interesting how he explains the Kitten Poker..and Anya such typical reaction when cash involved.
Loved it like always
Update soon
Harry |
| I said fixer upper, Harry. Our Joyce is a work of art, LOL |
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| Robyn | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 09:42 am |
| Kittens, cute cuddly kittens, poor Spike after everything that Buffy's found out that evening and it's kittens that just might make him get it, but then Spike's lips just might work on deflecting her again. I loved Xander’s and Spike’s double team of the girls, and Spike really had the perfect solution to stop her getting after him. Thanks for the great update. |
| Kissing her to take her mind off being pissed? Oh yeah, works for me! lol |
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| kim | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 09:28 am |
Tough being Buffy's boyfriend.
Good ol' Anya...those ears always perk at the sound of 'money'.
And Penny's psychic, what with showing up exactly when Joyce needed company. |
| Nah...she's a psychologist and figured her services would be needed! |
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| letitia | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 09:05 am |
| great chapter. I am just so glad to see Spike and Xander working together.. LOVE how Spike is all knowing to Buffy and her moods.. Kittens..... |
| And how long do you think he'll put up with it? |
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| Karyn | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 08:52 am |
| giggles!!! some things buffy just doesnt' really want to know..lmao, great update! |
| Thank's Karyn...got to agree with you on that one |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 08:48 am |
| Very good update. I love how Anya knows all the good stuff - and who knew Willy could actually help out. The thing about the kittens - still funny. |
| Willy can be...versatile? |
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| maryperk | Chapter 26 | 05/03/2006 08:47 am |
| LOL, Go, be free, little kittens. |
| Rofl...I wish it were that easy! |
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| Verda | Chapter 25 | 07/30/2006 03:54 am |
| Of course the Knights are coming. I thought that Giles and Joyce would get together now that she wasn't going to die. Sell what was left of the treasure through Joyce's gallery and add it to the investments from your family estate. Another wonderful chapter. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Verda | Chapter 25 | 07/30/2006 03:54 am |
| Of course the Knights are coming. I thought that Giles and Joyce would get together now that she wasn't going to die. Sell what was left of the treasure through Joyce's gallery and add it to the investments from your family estate. Another wonderful chapter. |
| I have to agree with you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 25 | 05/04/2006 10:24 am |
| Great chapter! Way to stake your claim, Buffy (no pun intended). Spike having some money is agreat great idea! |
| Shopping is of the good! lol |
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| Joyce | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 07:18 pm |
Ooh! Rich Spike!
Wonder what you have planned for Graham? Waiting to see what happens to this group. |
| I do have plans for Graham, but it might not happen for a little while...there's alot going on |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 04:36 pm |
Good chapter.I love Jealous!Buffy.
I would have updated earlier, except that I was grounded for four days and just now got it back.I was totally going through withdrawal though,to the point where I was crying because I didn't have the computer.And I have no idea why I was crying about that.Update soon. |
| Hey I'd cry if I got grounded and somebody took away my computer too! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 09:57 am |
| oh lovely - so many ways of having money - yippee - hehe - can i have some? *giggles* |
| You think there will be any left when Buffy's done shopping? |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 02:17 am |
| wow... thats.. just.. wow.. |
| Thank you...I think? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 12:43 am |
| 100 some odd years of intrest, hmmmm.... How much could that be? |
| More than I could spend in an hour...which is a bloody lot! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 25 | 05/02/2006 12:21 am |
| I think i know who Giles is thinking of. STOP BEING EVIL AND JUST TELL US WOULD U! U'VE GOT LIKE 3 CLIFFIE LIKE THING GOING ON: WHAT'LL SPIKE DO? WHO'S PENNY THINKING OF? AND WHO'S GILES DREAMIN OF? HOW MUCH DO YOU THINK WE CAN HANDLE?......um ... er.. great chapter. |
| I'll try to answer one of those in the next chapter |
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| Robyn | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 11:50 pm |
| Okay, still living in cliff-hanger hell. When are we going to find out about Penny's man? I loved Buffy going all possessive with Spike and Xander's comment on the engagement. Thanks for the great update. |
| What? You think Penny's man is important? (Jack flutters eyelashes innocently) |
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| deedo | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 07:56 pm |
great update!!
jealous Buffy is just too cute
and Giles daydreaming of Joyce (if 'shining strands of spun gold’ is any give away) I think they are lovely as a couple
I liked how you worked Graham and the Knights into the story, almost forgot about them |
| LOL...most votes have gone for Penny! |
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| letitia | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 07:46 pm |
| love jealous Buffy. And what in the world does Graham thinks he is doing. Giles with the guitar was awesome. Spike with money would be interesting... just so much in this chapter. |
| I know the chapter jumped to alot of different places, but I needed to set all the pieces in their places |
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| vladt | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 06:34 pm |
| jealousy causes buffy to forget, spike is unliving a charmed exsistence at the moment. very good update. thanks for the fun read. |
| Key term is 'at the moment'...this is Spike we are talking about |
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| Irina | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 06:09 pm |
| Luck must've been on Spike's side, looks like Buffy forgot all about the Harmony incident. A lot of interesting new developments in this chapter, i'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Good update! |
| Thank you...but don't count on his luck holding! |
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| Kat | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 05:38 pm |
| that was great. I like the idea of him having money from his human days but I really cant see a problem with the Amara stuff either great update |
| I don't think Buffy could either, she was just interested in knowing all the options |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 02:52 pm |
Giles? isn't he a bit old for our Penny? I did consider him but thought that Penny was around 22 or something and Giles is like mid forties to early fifties so biiiiig age difference, which might not be big deal if one is not aging but when they are..kinda ewww factor going on.
So is Spikey still in the dog house didn't figure with the whole jealous Buffy marking her terotory. an all...poor Graham going to find himself the first meal for captain forehead....well they do say first time should be with someone you trust...lol
Seriously? I think Spike should do all three...take his share from Angelus donate the money to charity for the homeless or something, how come Angel never felt guilt from using that money?...and sell the treasure and live off his investments...and invest in Google
Well Loved the update.
Update soon
Harry |
Our Penny has two PhD's I think she's a bit older than 22
Side note: Thank you, I haven't heard the term 'our Penny' or 'our Jack' since my dad died...it brought back some fond memories |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 02:48 pm |
Spike groaned and bucked his hips into Buffy harder, going crazy at the feeling of her hot little quim. Her nails dug into his shoulders and he growled, shifting into game face before burying his fangs in her neck. The pain went straight to her core and she came with a scream. He lifted his head with a roar as he followed right after her over the edge. "Mine!"
(told you i'd leave smut in your reviews!! LoL) |
| I get embarrassed reading the stuff I write...stop making me blush! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 02:34 pm |
| awesome chapter jack!!! bet that one will blow buffy away...lol |
| It would make me forget I'm mad! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 02:32 pm |
| Gadz! Buffy thinks she should be able to make the rules about Spike's money and Spike is going along with that? Weird. |
| No, Buffy told him 'if in doubt, ask'...he was in doubt, he asked |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 02:27 pm |
| Who does Penny like????? Why are you making me wait????? |
| LOL...'cause I'm evil...You know this |
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| Richard | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 01:37 pm |
| Bringing Graham into the pot? Genius. Gregor? |
| You think I shouldn't have introduced Gregor? Hmmm |
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| sirc | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 01:14 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| kim | Chapter 25 | 05/01/2006 01:08 pm |
Well, it's his money to claim, and the treasure was, too. Wow, 120 years of interest...that's a lot of dough.
Graham, I don't think Riley's coming home...at least not how you left him last.
Giles, eh? |
| Yup...I see some spending goodness on the horizon! lol |
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| Verda | Chapter 24 | 07/30/2006 03:37 am |
| I'm sitting here trying to think of someone? Ethan? no, to old. Maybe Graham? Too young? Drac? guess I'll just have to wait. Bet Buffy makes sure that Harmany's gone from Spike's crypt. Like she said, she doesn't share. Great read, thanks. |
| You are certainly doing a lot of reading...thank you for that |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 24 | 05/03/2006 10:29 am |
| hmmmm who is this mysterious man... *pouts* how come I don't know... whimpers ... stalks off to find Jack |
| *HeeHee...Jack's hiding* |
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| deedo | Chapter 24 | 04/30/2006 06:28 pm |
lovely update
Harmony's exit was quieter than I expected, but not less dramatic
hmm a fixer-upper for Penny?? One of the geeks? Ethan (that would be way creepy)? or that guy from Buffys birthday, Richard?? Okay I obviously have absolutely no clue, so I'm waiting patiently (yeah right ) for the next chapter |
| and what makes you so sure I'll tell you in the next chapter...I'm evil remember! |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 24 | 04/30/2006 01:15 pm |
| Hmmmm I wonder, will Spike tell Buffy about his little run in with Faith when she was in her ody and the speach Faith made. Unless this story happens before that happened. Becasue I deffinitly think Spike figured out who was in Buffy's body when she left the Bronze. |
| Actually I hadn't even thought of that...hmmmm...I'll have to see how it goes |
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| sirc | Chapter 24 | 04/30/2006 05:48 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Joyce | Chapter 24 | 04/29/2006 10:51 am |
| Hmm..fixer-upper, eh? Now whom could she mean? Hee hee. |
| Trust me when I say, you'll never guess |
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| Delicia | Chapter 24 | 04/28/2006 04:36 am |
| Great chapter!! I'm glad Harm didn't stay for too long. I wouldn't want Spike to get into trouble! It's nice to find out more about Penny. I wonder who's a fixer-upper? I probably should know this, but I have no clue. Can't wait for the next update. |
| Oh don't kid yourself...ol' Spikey is in trouble! lol |
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| Lou | Chapter 24 | 04/28/2006 03:28 am |
| Tease! Who is it?? |
| Evil! and no! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 11:32 pm |
| ok who's Penny thinking of? |
| now that would be telling |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 10:48 pm |
| hmm. i wonder who it is.. |
| hmmm..not tellin' |
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| vladt | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 08:45 pm |
| great update. penny is up for a challenge. wes? if he loses the frad sweepstakes; gunn, same; giles? will be fun to read what happens. thanks for the enjoyment. |
| no even in the ballpark Vladt! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 06:51 pm |
| Thanks for the great update. I loved the whole scene with Harmony, it was so funny. And I really loved Buffy telling 'Spikey' that she doesn't share. I am looking forward to when we find out who Penny has set her sights on, until then I'll be living in cliff-hanger hell. |
| so...you'll live until the next cliffie? |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 03:00 pm |
| Good chapter.I wonder how Spike's going to react.Update soon. |
| me too |
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| Irina | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 02:43 pm |
Should be fun to see how Spike charms his way out of this mess. I enjoyed learning a little something about Penny's former life. I think it's great she's setting her sights on getting a boyfriend, can't wait to find out who the lucky guy is. Wonderful chapter!
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| THank you...all I will say is that I think there will be surprises all 'round! |
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| Kat | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 01:49 pm |
| oh now who is she thinking of hmmmmmmmm i wonder oh how i wonder |
| I ain't tellin' |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 01:40 pm |
| A little Harm bashing, a little Glory minions scheming and what man does Penny have in mind for herself? Excellent chp! |
| I love being evil! |
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| Dolau | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 01:30 pm |
| great update, never really thought of Penny's feelings before (other than what she expressed towards the others), can't wait to see who the fixer-upper is... Can think of a few worth fixing... :-) And just love the scabby minions.. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 01:00 pm |
Okaaaay *thinks back to all available males on the how that might be appealing to Penny* errrr...let's see we have...the dweebs, um...Robin, and Ben. Can't be Ben due to the Hell God attached to his arse, can't be Robin because he's going to be with Faith and also he's a couple of years away, can't be Warren as he's a Megalomaniac, can't be Andrew because he's Gay...or possably in love with Dawn if all the fanfics are to be belived that leaves Johnathon he's kinda a wimp but a nice bloke if somewhat short and kinda lemming like with following Warren an all...so I don't know, unless you're thinking of Gunn from Angel then I don't know...maybe the Lawyer dude...the one with the girls name. Maybe it's that guy that gets turned into a vampire by Spike and Buffy uses him as a shrink before dusting?
OH well who knows, what's this jinx up to anyway? is he looking to aquire the goods required to pull the snake demon who can detect the key spell? or something else, because if so we could be looking at some possible problems for the PTB's great plan. could be fun
Spikey got some groveling to do, chocolates, flowers and shiney weapons in order here me tinks. hehe Maybe even some poetry ofcourse he can blame it on france...afterall Harmony did always want Spike to take her to Paris...see it's all France's fault.
Well good luck to him on that.
Update soon
Harry |
| Harry you are either gonna kick yourself or blame the french! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 12:13 pm |
*dies laughing over the harmony scene* "She’s gonna make you pay.” giggles!!
and the 'he’s a definite fixer-upper' ohhhh runs through list of potentials in my head...hmmmmmm
great update! |
| Thank you Karyn, you made my day |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 11:58 am |
*lifts eyebrow* who the H*** is she talking about?
"Harmony, if you were the one that broke up with Spike you'd be dust!" *rolls eyes* Airhead...
Keep it coming!!! ;-D |
| I will try |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 11:52 am |
| Who's Penny's fixer-upper? Glad to see Penny back in the mix here. Not happy to see Jinx and friends snooping around. More story please. |
| MarzBar you seriously don't expect me to give that little peice of information away do yóu? |
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| Pin | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 11:26 am |
| Who? Who? Who!! I'm thinking Giles, but who am I missing? No way Xander, too young and not smart enough....Who?! |
| Like i'd tell you! lol |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 11:26 am |
Oh Spike's definitely in for it now!
Penny's on a man hunt! (I now have the song "Man Hunt" from the Flashdance soundtrack in my head) lol |
| You and songs...dangerous! Oh boy is he |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 10:52 am |
| Oh god, do I even wanna know which one she's set her sights on?? Considering the only guy I like is Spike? *whimpers* |
| It's not a guy you like |
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| Tamara | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 10:45 am |
| Ok , now I'm curious. Who is she talking about? If it's Xander then that means that Anya could be with Giles. |
| Penny and Xander...can I just say ewwww |
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| kim | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 10:21 am |
Oh, dear....okay, Penny's scaring me right now, LOL.
Buffy really shouldn't be too upset with Spike, since he's hardly had time to stop back at home to deal with Harmony. 2 days ago, he never would have thought that Buffy would like him, let alone want to start a relationship.
And where did Jinx go now? |
Kim I want you to think about something for a moment...she's Buffy!
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| maryperk | Chapter 24 | 04/27/2006 09:41 am |
| Great chapter, Jack. |
| Thank you for keeping me sane sweetie! |
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| Verda | Chapter 23 | 07/30/2006 03:24 am |
| You've thought of eveyone! This is going to be great! Really liked the speech that Spike gave to Xander. It was well deserved. Gotta go, need to see how he handles Harmony. Thanks. |
| You are so welcome |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 23 | 05/03/2006 10:30 am |
| I hope wes gets fred ... *sigh* |
| I am leaving that possibility open! |
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| sirc | Chapter 23 | 04/30/2006 05:43 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 07:29 pm |
| HAhahahahahahaha oh hehehe ehhe Harmony, Spike was so concentrating on Buffy he forgot about his current girlfriend, Oh Spikey is in trouble. |
| Oh boy is he! LOL |
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| kim | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 04:46 pm |
Awww, give the guy the chance to do the break-up...LOL.
Jinxy getting ambitious..uh-oh. I knew the Glory thing wasn't completely done with. |
| Yep...Glory is still around! LOL |
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| Delicia | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 04:36 pm |
| *sniffles* The interaction between Xander and Spike was wonderful! Please tell me you have something dusty planned for Harm! |
| Now that would be telling! |
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| Irina | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 01:15 pm |
| I love how Spike and Xander's friendship is progressing, nice dialogue between the two. If I was Buffy i'd be pleny mad too... lol. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between the three blondes. Hmmm... I wonder if Penny has an opinion on Harmony, or some advice for her? Great chapter! |
| Thank you, it won't take long |
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| Karyn | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 12:33 pm |
“Blondie Bear!”
eck!!! run spike run! rofl, great update...lol...ohhh jealous buffy...me likey! lol |
| Pay back Buffy...Spike will NOT be happy! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 11:38 am |
| Eeeeep! Spikey has been caught by everybody's favorite airhead. Nice bonding with Fang Face and the Whelp. |
Thank you...I do like the way the friendship is shaping up
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 10:44 am |
*Sq..!* (looks around quickly) nobody heard that right? nope, there was no sqeaking... no sqeaking here, no siree...
Love this update! ooh can't wait for the 'harmony'-factor to come in in all her air-headedness... is that even a word??? |
| we'll use it as one! |
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| deedo | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 10:05 am |
uh oh, I totally forgot about Harmony,too!! That's gonna be fun (most likely not for Spike though)
I really like the development in the Spike/Xander friendship
great update, can't wait for more |
| Thank you...the Xander/Spike thing...blame the bunny |
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| Bridget | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 09:30 am |
| Great chapter. Good way to get rid of the seriousness in the previous chapters. I am sure that Harmony will provide some comic relief. |
| I needed some! lol |
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| Mr. Chaos | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 08:48 am |
I ahve to say, I enjoyed this fic alot. It is an interesting way to do it, to call each charecter out on their emotional and mental problems. We've handled Buffy, Spike and Xander (Not really with Xander that much,but he's changed enough that I don't see what else he needs). Anya got a bit of help, but could use a bit more.
I look forward to seeing Giles learn to let go, Tara get confidence, and Willow to learn that she isn't in control (I sense an Angel comparison to teach her that she can't control everyone.)
Please update soon. |
| I don't think Penny isfinished with Buffy, Spike or Xander yet, there are still some unfinished issues |
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| Shadow | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 08:00 am |
*GRIN* Angel is brooding over having his ass kicked by Spike... and cant seem to remember everything that Penny told him... Good thing he has Cordelia to remind him!
Loved the Riley dissage *GRIN* stake him? *giggle*
utoh, yup Spike is about to be dusted... either that or Buffy is gonna rip Harmony's head off...
Great Chapter Jack... MORE! |
| There is another option...but Spike's not gonna like it! |
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| Mali | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 07:52 am |
| Haha! Spikeyness, not Spikeness, but Spikeyness! |
| Oh yeah...and a not to happy spikey |
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| letitia | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 07:51 am |
| glad Angel might finally have a clue. And it is great to see that Buffy acting like a jealous girlfriend but why on their first night out with the gang??? LOVE THE CHAPTER. |
| Um...'cause I'm evil |
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| Lou | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 07:31 am |
| Oh NO! Wrong time,wrong place! |
| Not for us! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 06:26 am |
| On Harmony! Forgot about her.where was she all this time? UM had Spike broken off with her already when this story started? |
| Was he actually with her, or was he offering her a place to hide in return for sex...it's the sex bit that's gonna be a problem for buffy, isn't it? |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 05:50 am |
| Damn Spike, I have soooooo been there |
| and yet, not so surprising |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 05:23 am |
| Good chapter.I love the Xander/Spike friendship.Update soon. |
| Thank you, that friendship shocked the hell out of me |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 04:48 am |
| HAHAHAHA LOL thats funny.. bringing her into the mix.. *snerk* |
| I had to...the bunny wanted to see her |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 04:19 am |
You know really need to dump your bit on the side before you get yourself a girlfriend, it makes things very messy...well not necceserily messy as i am pretty sure Spike would be quite easy to dust up when he is staked...lol Should be interesting to see how he handles this one, because not the sharpest tool is Harmony now is she?
Ofcourse Penny can always suggest to her to go to Angel as she is employed by the brood master in the future...lol two birds with one stone.
Btw. Spike does know he has his own place and not living with the Slayer so he really need to sleep on Xanders couch?
Well loving it still
Update soon
Harry |
| Technically she wasn't his girlfriend, but I'm not sure she knew that! lol...Blame the French |
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| maryperk | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 04:09 am |
| Great chapter. Spike's in trouble now. |
| Oh boy is he |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 02:52 am |
//...and to top it all off, she had a new, totally drool-worthy boyfriend who was…
So gonna be dust if he didn’t take care of that little problem with the quickness!//
Soooommmmebody's in troubllllle. CATFIGHT!!
Looks like our favorite fanged hottie's all kindsa busted. **smirk** Better deal with the simpering simpleton, Spikey! Cuz the green-eyed Buffy-shaped monster's got a sharp stick with the airheaded vamp's name carved in the side. |
| But she never does stake her! LOL...I never could work that out |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 02:13 am |
| RUN SPIKE RUN!! |
| not really sure that that would work! |
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| Kat | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 01:26 am |
| oh no not Harm. lol heheheheh oh goodness it is going to crack me up |
| I hope so |
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| vladt | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 01:19 am |
| fun read and hilarious ending. thanks for the enjoyable read. |
| You are most welcome...Hope I can keep up the funny stuff |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 01:08 am |
| Harmony! Oh roflmao, Poor spikey1 lol omg! He better think of somthing realy realy quick. |
| that never ends well! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 01:03 am |
| That last section really left me laughing, and I loved both Buffy's and Spike's thoughts of him being dust because of the ex showing up. I love the camaraderie between Spike and Xander, and Spike’s explanation of why he doesn’t treat Xander as if he’s inferior. Thanks for the great and funny update. |
| You're welcome, I'm glad you are enjoying it |
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| Dolau | Chapter 23 | 04/25/2006 12:46 am |
Yay, Harmony.. :-) really looking forward to what's gonna happen next. I bet it's gonna make me laugh.. :-)
Great update. |
| I will try |
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| Verda | Chapter 22 | 07/30/2006 03:12 am |
| Glad you used that dialogue, it felt so good to hear it again. The fight ended way to soon for me. And the nerve of him thinking he would be basking in Spike's pain being seperated from his family, arrogant ass. Another fantastic chapter. |
| Thank you...I actually went for a short fight because I believe that Spike would far outclass Angel in that way |
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| deedo | Chapter 22 | 04/24/2006 03:13 pm |
yeah, I'm getting my Penny-fix again, so good to be back ^_^
Spike delivered Angel the beating he deserved, and not even his own gang wanting him back, thats just great
Xander humming the Star Trek tune, I just loved that *humming herself*
keep up those fantastic updates |
| Thank you so much...I really appreciate it |
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| sirc | Chapter 22 | 04/24/2006 04:27 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank's sweetie |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 22 | 04/23/2006 05:44 pm |
| Good chapter.I like that Fred is Wes's soulmate.I just got Season 1 of Angel on DVD today,and it was the first time I saw the pilot.Power went out earlier,so I couldn't review. |
| She didn't say they were soulmates Just that she was destined to be the love of his life! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 22 | 04/23/2006 10:53 am |
| excellant everything is coming together! |
Slowly...but surely
Welcome home *HUGS* |
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| Phishie | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:48 pm |
I'm looking forward to some post-challenge comforting. Methinks Spike earned some good old TLC, but I've got a feeling the *ahem* new Riley will be making an appearance. Hopefully he won't be catching Spike alone while he's recovering from the severing of familial ties.
Ohnoes! |
| So you think Riley's been turned...hmmmm???? |
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| vladt | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 10:47 pm |
| great update to a great tale. the great rating is only slightly influenced by the fight scene. love the fic. |
| Thank you sooo much...you just made my day |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 08:56 pm |
| awww.. great fight.. loved it.. and aww fred hehe |
| I love Fred, have to do something about her! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 08:40 pm |
| Damn! No dustage??! |
| Nope...and what does that tell you??? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 08:39 pm |
| Grate Fight! If you can call it a fight, So totaly one sided, 1 fighter, 1 doofice, Sike so kicked that poofs sorry ass! |
| I tried but Angel gets stubborn when he underestimates someone |
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| Kat | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 05:37 pm |
| awwwwwwwww yay for spike and all the scoobies. That was an amazingly written chapter. |
| Thank you...It was amazingly tough to write |
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| mts.tyra | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 04:35 pm |
*is exhausted from jumping and cheering, waving her pom-poms*
Way to go Spike! You showed that arrogant SOB his place!
That was an intense battle Jack (btw what does the Jack of Spikes look like?), I really saw it happen before my eyes. Words really are your friends. Can't wait to read the next chappie.
-mts.tyra-
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| A Jack of Swords with attitude |
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| dragontiff | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 03:07 pm |
| woohoo!! im so proud of spike. i love the way you have written angel in this. (i have never liked him)... keep up the great work. |
| I think the fact that I don't particularly like him makes me write him this way |
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| Irina | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 02:50 pm |
| Loved the fight. It was very sweet of Xander to add an inspiring soundtrack... lol. It's great Penny gave Cordy the heads up on Fred. Wonderful chapter! |
| Penny has to earn her place with the scoobies, she isn't there yet! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 02:30 pm |
| Good chapter. Hopefully that is the last of Angel. I suppose Riley will be up next. |
| LOL..at this point in time, I couldn't tell you...'cause that would be giving away the plot |
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| Shadow | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 02:24 pm |
*CHEERS!* Spike kicked Angel's pedophiliac ass all over the place! *CHEERS!*
Great Update Jack! MORE!
(now that we had angel kickage, we need spuffy smut!) |
| I don't know what's harder to write the fight or the smut! |
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| kim | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 02:20 pm |
Oh, how I love you...let me count the ways...*grin*
Just perfect, using some of the "Destiny" dialogue to best effect. And of course, Spike would study different techniques throughout the years. I'm so glad you included that, too.
And Yay! Fred and Wes, sittin' in a tree....
Speaking of Kirk and Spock, did you hear about the proposed movie of their early days? Who would they get to play them now? |
| They'll probably use someone totally inappropriate...like Will Smith or something! |
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| me | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 02:14 pm |
| hmmm...i was hoping for more ass kicking :-) great chapter. |
| Sorry, that's all she wrote |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:37 pm |
| Love the fight scene! Excellent chap and will be waiting for more. |
| Thank you sweetie...you are too good to me |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:25 pm |
| Ahh Spike kicking Angel's ass, I enjoyed it the first time in the Season 5 episode and I enjoyed it now. And I always belived Fred was Wesley's true love to begin with and that Gunn mucsled in when he shouldn't have. |
I really do need to do something about Gunn
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:13 pm |
*Does a little victory dance* Oh yeah! that's what we call style! Never thought that Spike could controll his temper, did you Angel? You should have known, being a part of spike's 'family', that Spike never does what you expect him to do!
Loved the fight! more please?
(wow, you're great at keeping all the characters like themselves and still so different! it's great! :-D) |
| Thank you soo much...you just made my day |
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| letitia | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:12 pm |
| WOW... I am glad that Angel was able to see the group comfort Spike once he was released... Angel still has so much to learn. Love the chapter. |
| Personally I think he's a lost cause! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:06 pm |
Fantastic fight scene. I love how Angel was foiled at everything.
Cordelia's line is as funny as hell. |
| Thank you, it was harder to write than it looked |
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| Pin | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 01:06 pm |
| Great fight sequence. I hope this means that we are done with Angel....please! |
| For the moment! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:57 pm |
| Spike won! oh yah! ofcourse we had ne doubts. Go Jack! See I knew u weren't evil. |
| Of 'course he won...I'm evil not insane! |
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| FetchingMad Scientist | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:51 pm |
| Yay Spike!! |
| I agree |
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| Randi Giles | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:45 pm |
| WOW!!!! I so wish there was actual screen footage of this fight...that was exellent but i just wanna hit rewind and play repeatedly |
| Think Jackie Chan meets Howdie Doody...that'll give you a visual! LD |
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| Isabel | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:41 pm |
| What a satisfying fight! That put me in a good mood for the rest of the day lol |
| I amd so pleased, just don't ask me to do it again in a while! lol |
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| Eva | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:27 pm |
I really love this story and the latest chapter made me do a happy dance.GO SPIKE, show that Neanderthal who the real warrior/champion is!
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| I have to tell you I was pulling for Spike...he's kinda a favorite of mine |
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| Shelly | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:24 pm |
| I loved the total geekiness of Xander. Great fight scene. Laughed my ass off. I can still see that Angel doesn't get it. He is still so self absorbed in his "greatness". His ego is unparalled. Can't wait for more!!! |
| Thank you, I wish I could write faster! lol |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:17 pm |
| Bloody excellent can we beat up Angel again?? |
Sure...It's why I didn't dust him! lol
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 12:16 pm |
Fred....oh yeah she's stuck in that other dimension or is going to be, wonder where Gunn disapeared to. Maybe he doesn't turn up until later.
Well that was a pathetic fight...really you'd expect the lunp of lard to put up a better fight than that, we all knew he was going to lose but you'd have expected a better fight...but then again I guess this is what happens when you underestimate your opponent, as far as fight scenes go, this was half bad not an easy thing to right these fight scenes, as you have to describe the movement of each fighter as well damage done, etc not an east task so well done.
So I take it Angel could very well find himself back to his early days of pathetic and alone?
Well loved the update
Update soon
Harry |
| Thank you Harry, I'm gonna take that as a compliment! and Nah, Cordy will still want to talk his ear off! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:58 am |
| OOps...I meant BEAT Angel. Sorry. |
| I was with ya! lol |
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| Delicia | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:57 am |
| Great fight! I knew Spike could be Angel. In my opinion he is the better fighter. I wonder what Wesley reaction is going to be! |
| What would yours be being told that? lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:45 am |
| Cool fight scene! Spike is so much more of a Master Vamp than Angelus ever was or could be. More story please. |
| Can I get over the fight first? lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:45 am |
| That was a really great fight scene and a really great chapter. Loved how Spike constantly goaded Angel, and Xander's Star Trek music. Thanks for the great update. |
| Thank you, it was a scene I was dreading |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:44 am |
**leads a standing ovation**
Well done! Excellent fight scene! Excellent use of the AtS dialogue! |
| Thank you soooo much...it was my first real fight scene too |
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| Lou | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:39 am |
| A wonderful vanquishing! |
Thank you, I didn't think I'd ever get it done! LOL
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| maryperk | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:38 am |
| Great chapter. Can't wait to see where you go next. |
| Neither can I...any idea's? lol |
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| Dolau | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:36 am |
| Oh yeah, that's the good stuff. And the Xanderhumming.... so funny :-) |
| Thank you...all thanks relating the humming must go to OHolly |
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| Karyn | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:23 am |
| *giggles* yay, wes! lol, great update! love that he kicked Angels ass!!! and of course Xander being his geeky self and the Star Trek thing was too cute!! |
| Thanks Karyn, I have to thank OracleHolly for the Star Tek advice |
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| Nova | Chapter 22 | 04/22/2006 11:04 am |
Very good. I like how you worded everything and now how the AI team don't want Angel back. I would laugh but I don't know whats going to happen next... see pause in laughing.
I'm wondering what is going to happen next in the Buffy/Spike situation next. Espically after all this talk of her taking him into her family. I'll keep looking for more updates.
Nova |
| I try to update every other day |
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| Verda | Chapter 21 | 07/30/2006 02:57 am |
| When the writer's of AtS wrote "Destiny" it almost made up for Sarah's refusal to sign-up for anymore years with BtVS. If she had signed another contract, I wouldn't have got to see Spike kick Angel's ass and let Spike have his say about his Grandsire. It alway's has pissed me off that all Angelus did was kill a girl, nothing to be proud of, but Spike fought for his, for love, and there never was any comparison...EVER! Thanks for letting me get that off my chest. Now to see Spike kick his ass again. Thanks. |
| LOL...glad you approve |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 21 | 04/21/2006 08:46 pm |
| Go Spike Go Spike, FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT, poor poor wittle Angel, he probably thinks he can kick Spikes deliciously bitable ass, hmmm *starts to drool* huh oh urm *shakes head*, what he doesn't know is that Spike has been fighting strong Demons and getting strong himself. I can't wait to read Angel getting his ass handed to him on a golden platter. |
| I hope it is all you wanted and more |
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| Lou | Chapter 21 | 04/21/2006 03:14 pm |
| I anticipate a mighty showdown!! |
| I hope you enjoy it |
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| kim | Chapter 21 | 04/21/2006 12:58 pm |
No, I don't expect a dusty ending now.....more that that's what Penny told them to prevent - Connor's arrival via Darla, so Angel's future as we knew it is going to be drastically different if his team makes sure to carry out Penny's directions.
Just thinking about stuff again.... |
| Some things have to happen...I wish I could get around them! lol |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 21 | 04/21/2006 08:42 am |
| poor Dru! |
| She loses either way |
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| Delicia | Chapter 21 | 04/21/2006 04:25 am |
| Gah!! The evilness of cliffhangers!! :biggrin: It was a wonderful chapter, in any case. Love the rallying behind Spike wanting to challenge Angel. |
| I am evil and cliffhangers are in the rulebook |
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| sirc | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 10:51 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:06 pm |
A fight, a fight! I wanna see, Hurry Hurry!
update soon please. |
next chapter, promise
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 04:46 pm |
| Now why would I want smut with the poofter? Ew... |
| Did I say it had to be with him???? |
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| vladt | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:16 pm |
| very good update and very evil place to end the chapter. thanks for the fun read. |
| I keep telling people I'm evil and they don't believe me ! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 12:22 pm |
| and I'm starting to hear the strains of the "Star Trek Fight Music" (Spock vs. Kirk) and away we go! *grabs popcorn* I'm ready for the fight. Go Spike! |
| can I join you...somebody else can write the scene (Jack hits head on desk) |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 12:16 pm |
| *Here come the pom-poms* Go Spike!! |
| You'll need them next chapter |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 12:12 pm |
Never?! Who the hell does he think he is? The F*cking Devil itself!? That little arrogant, impotent, idiotic son of a bitch... oh no wait... that would insult his mother 2... hm... what should we call "Angel" how about 'bastard'.. no too nice, asshole? no... hm... damn! can't find it?! there has got to be a word to describe him?! I guess we should just take... hm... nope not that either... help??
Loved the update! |
| For insult purposes, I always find 'insipid little grommet' works well…does that help? |
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| mts.tyra | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 10:14 am |
I've loved this story from the beginning and now.
*gets her pom-poms ready*
GO SPIKE! Kick that poofters ass!
I really like your writing style, Jackofspikes. Keep up the good work.
-mts.tyra-
mts.tyra@gmail.com |
| Thank you so much, thats a lovely thing to hear |
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| Karyn | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 09:57 am |
| ohhh, great update!! get a tear in my eye at everyone saying 'and me' *sniff* just hope it's not too hard on him...and i hope it's plenty hard on angel! lol |
| Rofl...well I know who you're barracking for |
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| pretty_in_fangs | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 09:20 am |
| Ah. Poor Dru. |
| Yup...she loses either way |
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| me | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 09:01 am |
| that was sweet of joyce....and go spike! |
| Thank you...I do love Joyce |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 08:51 am |
| oh yah go Spike! fight! fight! fight! and WIN! then let's dudt Angel!oh and was that Dru crying? stupid insane vamp she never deserved Spike! |
| Yes it was Dru...but who do you think she was crying for? |
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| Shadow | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 08:21 am |
Angel is a dumbass. Period. Glad Cordelia is callin him on it. And PLEASE dont let him sing where people can hear it.. my ears will bleed!
*Cheers Spike on* KICK THE BASTARD'S ASS!
Poor Dru... I almost feel sorry for her...
Great Chapter Jack... MORE! |
| Thank you...I promise there will be no singing from Angel in this story |
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| Kat | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 08:18 am |
| oh dear poor dru. But I love how you show angel without actually changing him from canon. it is great fun to read. |
| Thank you...I try to make the characters act withing the confines of the way they were depicted on the show |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 07:51 am |
| I'm so glad I finally got to catch up on this fic this morning! I was missing it so much! OMG! I can't wait to see how badly Spike kicks Angel's butt! Fantastic! |
| Thank you sooo much Sweetie, you just made my day |
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| letitia | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 07:13 am |
| Will Angel never learn. I am glad that Spike has Joyce, Buffy and the rest of the gang. I am keeping my fingers crossed here... And poor Dru, she is going to lose also in this fight. Love the update. |
| Penny said it would take something big to get his attention...I tend to agree with her |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:57 am |
Round 1...Fight!!! right in the red corner we have Spike with his trainer Buffy Summers giving him last minute advice, and look at the support he has with him, the whole arena is chanting his name, Never in my life have I seen such a fan base. And in the Green corner we have Angel, on his own with no supporters and being booed by the crowd..never has this reporter seen such a pathetic display...back to you Bob.
heheee Sorry always wanted to do that. Ha I was right about Spike being both happy and sad...but it was pretty obvious so I won't brag about it ;)
I would put my money on Spike, not only does he want it more, he's actually been a warrior for allot longer than Angel has, who has been fighting for 5 years where Spike has been about the fight for 120 years, Slayers Demons humans all fair play for him.
Maybe Spike should put a claim on Angel making the forehead his whipping boy for once, turn arounds raid play or something like that.
Well looks like we have an interesting update coming up. fight!!!!!!
I loved when Cordy pointed out how Buffy was the Chosen Champion and he was a Vamp who got cursed with soul because of his eating habits...nothing beats logic when arguing with someone.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry. |
| Harry you said you'd put money on the outcome of the fight...but would you bet Spike's duster??? |
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| Pin | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:47 am |
| I am so excited - Spike is going to pound him into pudding! Love this - Thanks! |
| I'm getting scared now...I've never written a fight scene! |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:22 am |
| Good chapter.Stupid Angel.Do you watch "Bones"?Update soon. |
| Thank you and No...I seldom have time to watch telly these days. I usually update this story every other day |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:19 am |
| ARGHH!! it's dru right?? lol GREAT UPDATE.. loving this story rite now!!! |
| Yes it was Dru having a bit of a weep |
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| Dar | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 06:14 am |
| GO SPIKE! Riveting chapter but it left me wanting the next one now! |
| I was always told it was good to leave your audience wanting more |
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| Irina | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 05:31 am |
| The heartfelt conversation between Spike and Buffy was wonderful. I loved the way Cordy got in on the Angel bashing. It's no surprise Spike would choose to fight his own battle. Can't wait for the Angel pummeling to begin. Excellent chapter! |
| Thank you...next chapter, promise |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 05:22 am |
| read it again and got to say 'stake the bloody bastard |
| Rofl...guess that answers that question |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 05:10 am |
Kill him Spike, dust the Bastard
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| You really think I should? |
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| Dolau | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 04:08 am |
Can't imagine anything but a glorious victory for Spike and serious humiliation of Mr. Broodalot next update.. Right?.... please.. :-)
Glad that Spike is going for independence.. Really looking forward to next fix .-) |
| It is definately the next chapter |
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| just sue | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:45 am |
*gulps*
Go, Spike! My loathing of Angel just keeps notching higher and higher. What a ....[please supply rude word of choice]!
Loving this and looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
I picked a really good one
Thank you soooo much for your review...now update your's
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| MarzBar | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:33 am |
| Hey! We want to know the outcome soon! Will Spike beat the crap out of Angelus on the way to independence? More story soon please. |
| That situation will be addressed in the next chapter...I promise |
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| kim | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:17 am |
Yeah, this would be tough on Dru. One of the Drus in her head cares for Spike, no question.
It's a shame to prevent Connor's birth, since it's not the kid's fault. Parenting would have taught Angel a lot, if they'd been able to go through the natural life-span instead of suddenly facing an angry 16-year-old. Angel's like one of those guys who has the money, and the job, and the cars, and all the other crap - thinking he's on top of the world - and the only way he'll come to appreciate the things that really matter in life is to lose it all, or come close. Those guys have to have the proverbial brick smash upside their heads to realize that family, and compassion, are the keys to lasting happiness. Yes, it's definitely time for Lorne to come.
And this is definitely the right decision for Spike. Any male ego, really. |
| So you are assuming there will be a dusty end to the fight are you? |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:00 am |
| Oh yeah... and if somehow this kills Dru too... won't miss her at all |
| She really hasn't been in the story much. But don't let that hold you back on the requests, I will consider the options |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 03:00 am |
| KILL HIM! KILL HIM! HUMILIATE HIM! KILL HIM!!! |
| What? no smut? |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 02:49 am |
//“Chosen champion? Buffy's the chosen champion, you dumbass. You're just a vampire with a shaky soul and broody disposition. It's not like you asked for the soul or went through anything to get the soul. For god's sake, you ate a frigging gypsy,//
Mark one up for the cheerleader! Is it bad that I'm totally fangirl-ing one Miss Cordelia Chase at the moment!
Classic!
OOh! It looks like I put the popcorn away a bit prematurely. This is gonna be a helluva show, yeah?! |
| The fight scene is definately the next scene...popcorn is mandatory |
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| Robyn | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 02:39 am |
| I loved what Joyce said, and in doing so, gave to Spike. I love how completely the group is in Spike's corner, and how when Buffy was talking to him she listen, understood, and supported him. I really enjoyed Cordy ripping into Angel and I am looking forward to Spike’s fight for independence. And I love that Dru was able to be included again. |
| Which one do you think she was crying for? |
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| akarinacj | Chapter 21 | 04/20/2006 01:49 am |
| Yes, yes. More, more. I want to read about the fight!!!!How long do I have to wait!!!!!Please update soon. Great chapter. |
| I promise the next chapter will have the fight scene in it...but I can't tell you when the chapter will be written |
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| Verda | Chapter 20 | 07/30/2006 02:40 am |
| Still trying to get through to Captain Forhead I see. Oooo Spuffy kissage! I can go for more of that. Yup, he may get really pissed but then again, he agree since he's starting this new life as part of Buffy's world. another great chapter. |
| Thank you |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 20 | 04/21/2006 08:33 am |
| hehe i can';t wait to see how Spike reacts to the claim |
| There are bets availale for this! lol |
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| Delicia | Chapter 20 | 04/19/2006 12:05 pm |
| Lovely! Nice kissage. I hope he isn't going to be upset about the claim idea, somehow I don't think he will. Ha! Penny is sure pissed at Angel, with good reason, he's so dense! |
| Penny does know how to speak well while pissed, I never could |
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| Dolau | Chapter 20 | 04/19/2006 07:04 am |
| Yay, love it when you update. Great chapter :-) |
| Thank you sooo much |
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| vladt | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 05:20 pm |
| good update. thanks for the read. as to the ending question, 5 to 1 it does both. |
| LOL...I like your odds |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 03:00 pm |
| I may be the only one, but I'm betting Spike will be happy. Okay, not blisfully, but all he's ever wanted is a family; somewhere to belong. |
| Guess we'll just have to wait and see! |
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| Kat | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:19 pm |
| lol i cannot wait to see spike's reaction. yay amazing chapter |
| I'm waiting for that too! |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 12:30 pm |
*inches closer to the screen* oooh this is gonna be good... *grins evilly*
and nooo I'm not going to use the 'B'-word! :-) see! I didn't! :-D Loved this update... (rolls eyses: I love all your updates so duh! ;-) |
| Thank you so much...you've just made my day |
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| sirc | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 10:47 am |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 09:44 am |
LOVE PENNY! Go Penny Go!
enjoyed how Xander of all people had the thought that spike might want Buffy to fight his battles! Such growth.
Nice Spuffy kissage with the nod to Something Blue. But uh oh, Buffy's got some 'plainin' to do. |
| Actually I don't know how it happened, but I think Xander grew up somewhere in this fic |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 09:42 am |
//“Obsessive?” Cordelia repeated to the vampire, incredulous. “That’s all you got out of that whole speech?”
“Well, no,” Angel mumbled, embarrassed. “She said some other stuff.”
“Some other stuff?” Wes squeaked in disbelief. “Among other things, she called you a pedophile, Angel!”
“Well yeah, but she wasn’t serious,” Angel hastily assured the ex-watcher.//
ooh! While this bit is absolutely hysterical, what's even better is just picturing the looks on all their faces.
**reaches for popcorn and sits back to await the show**
oh yeah, this is the good stuff... |
| LOL Thank you sooo much, Penny does get pissed! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 09:15 am |
| *giggles* wonderful update!! *sigh* loved the smoochies!! and just enough angel bashing to keep me snickering! |
| I aim to please sweetie |
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| Shadow | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 08:18 am |
GO PENNY! Kick him in the balls too... *GRIN* bring him down to size *hands Penny an Axe*
I vote on a happily pissed Spike...
And YAAAAAAAA Spuffy kissage!
Good Chapter Jack... MORE! |
| Thanks Shadow, spuffy kissage is always of the good! |
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| Pin | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 07:16 am |
| Neat! I love the way Penny talks to Angel - saying all the things we so wanted to hear. Looking forward to seeing how the claim issue sorts out. |
| claim decisions should be the next chapter...I hope! |
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| Lou | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 07:00 am |
| A mixed reception would possibly cover it? |
| Hmmmm, can I answer that with out giving away the plot...NUP |
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| Dar | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 06:52 am |
| The Happy Dance chapter I adore all that's going on in this chapter...YEAH! |
| Thank you...I have a soft spot for the spuffy bits! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 06:00 am |
How can anyone with an IQ above that of a cabbage think that someone is joking when they call you a pedophile? It's not something most normal people would joke about and even if said as a joke it should be ause for worry because you must have done something close to what can be referred to as immoral. Moron...he should be dusted as an example to all other idiots think they know it all but really know nothing.
I get the feeling Spike will be both happy and seriously pissed off, I know i'd be, one way it's flattering they like him enough to think make him officially part of the family and pissed off for not thinking him strong enough to take pouf on himself. He should be able to kick angels Arse for his right to join the Slayers Family. That way he gets best of both world, he gets to kick Angels butt and be part of a family were he would dust himself to save any of the member of said family.
Well Buffy and Spike moving at a nice steady pace so no chance of getting off on the wrong foot, or the building collapsing around them, though that could be a good metophor, distruction of the building meaning they can start from scratch and buold a stronger sturdy new relationship.
Well still loving in Jack
Update soon
Harry |
| Harry you're giving away plot points! lol...Well done |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 05:45 am |
| Good chapter.While I don't agree with Penny,I see where she's coming from.I wonder how Spike will react.Update soon. |
| I don't always agree with Penny either, but unlike me she always knows what to say! lol |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 05:44 am |
Angel is really thick isn't he? maybe it's the hair.
Dawn really knows Spike doesn't she? i really do like her in this fic. Can't wait for Spike's decision. |
| I tried to make Dawn a little less angsty, but she's a teenager so you never know! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 05:40 am |
| Lovers it, but you knew that |
| YUP...heehee |
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| Irina | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 05:29 am |
| Wonderful conversation between Spike and Buffy. I loved the sweet Spuffy kissage. Should be fun when Angel finds out they're dating. Angel is so thick headed I wonder if he heard Penny this time. Buffy sure knows her guy, can't wait to find out how things turn out. Fantastic chapter! |
| Angel was told...I just don't think he believed it! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 04:28 am |
| aww... mutual respect.. gotta love it |
| I always think so! |
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| kim | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 03:41 am |
Well, they're not ready for the eternity the claim involves, for one, just starting out and all. Two, Dawn and Xander are definitely right about Spike wanting to fight his own battles. He needs to take care of Angel on his own. And he can, because he wants it more, and because he's better trained.
And Penny's got some major work ahead of her. |
| OH boy has she! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 03:17 am |
| Hmmm. How will Spike take to being the one claimed? Is it a familial claim instead of a mating claim? More story please. |
| The next update should answer that question..I say should! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:42 am |
| I am so looking forward to the conversation between Spike and Buffy. I love how she prefaced it. Cordy and Wes's reaction to Angel was great. Thanks for the update. |
| Buffy is definately being careful! |
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| akarinacj | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:40 am |
| Great chapter. More please. |
| Won't be long...I promise! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:31 am |
| And I hope for really happy with a side of hot steamy smutpiles |
| And repeat |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:31 am |
| And I hope for really happy with a side of hot steamy smutpiles |
| It's me EAS, I have to do it slow, which means you have to wait and call me evil! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 20 | 04/18/2006 01:01 am |
“Well yeah, but she wasn’t serious,” Angel hastily assured the ex-watcher.
*snicker*
Completely in character for the delusional one. |
| Thank you, I was hoping somebody would think that! |
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| Verda | Chapter 19 | 07/30/2006 02:28 am |
| I guess that means Riley's toast and maybe he'll be turned and than Buffy can stake him, love that idea. Good for Willow. She can claim him since she does have a vampiric demon in her and what's Angel going to do? Challenge her and try and beat her down, I would so like to see that too! Great read Jacks. |
| Thank you, but nope |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 19 | 04/21/2006 08:32 am |
| grin - me likey me likey! hehe |
Well I likey that you likey
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| Delicia | Chapter 19 | 04/19/2006 11:57 am |
| Great! I love Anya having something to contribute to the gang. Willow'suggest that Buffy claim Spike was brilliant! |
| Brilliant ideas come with consequences |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 19 | 04/18/2006 09:37 am |
lol After all Penny said to Angel, all he could latch onto was - You think I'm obsessive? lol
I love ephiphany Willow! |
| I couldn't think of him reacting any other way LOL |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Chapter 19 | 04/17/2006 06:05 pm |
| Good story.I was reading this on "Vampire's Kiss",but thought it was over here and wanted to review it on here.I like Angel, but Angel-bashing is okay.I prefer Angel with Cordy in a couple-y way.)Of course,Angel usually ends up insane in my stories post NFA.Or he's traumatized.(Which could be a form of Post Traumatic Stress Disorder,now that I think of it.)I like Penny.Update soon.This is a really good story. |
| Penny has a very strong opinion of Angel |
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| Robyn | Chapter 19 | 04/17/2006 05:34 pm |
| Thanks for the great update. I loved what Penny said to Angel and Willow's idea at the end. |
| Thank you, it is nice to be appreciated |
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| Bridget | Chapter 19 | 04/17/2006 03:49 pm |
Good chapters. Hopefully Riley is gone for good but I know we would not be that lucky. It will be interesting to see what happens next with Buffy and Spike.
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| Everything takes time to be set up, I hope you will find it worth the wait! LOL |
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| Tamara | Chapter 19 | 04/17/2006 01:33 pm |
“You think I’m obsessive?”
Gee, you think?
*snicker* |
| He's a bright one that one! |
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| Kat | Chapter 19 | 04/17/2006 12:13 am |
| Good old willow, when she was still 'good old willow' gotta luv the inquisitive mind. Ok the only thing that i am a bit confused about is this: has Penny 'seen' futher into the future then they are right now? |
| Penny had seen and studied all seasons of BtVS and AtS, so that's a big yep! |
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| vladt | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 08:14 pm |
| good read. angel doesn't hear anything anything anyone says to him. forget red's suggestion and let spike pound him into submission. thanks for the fine read. |
| Thank you, I think Spike will chose the option that best suits him |
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| Karyn | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 07:30 pm |
| rofl! leave it to willow to just blurt something out..*grin* great update!! |
| Thanks...Willow is like that isn't she??? |
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| daisy | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 06:16 pm |
| can't wait to see what they say to that. more soon please |
| I Promise! |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 02:17 pm |
| Good question Willow. Anya? |
| Spike's reaction will be funnier! lol |
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| Dolau | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 12:25 pm |
Go Penny.. What a girl :-)
Love this story, hate/love the cliffhanger... Grr :-) More please. |
| Sorry about the cliffies, but...I'm evil |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 11:30 am |
| Oh, how kewl! Buffy claiming Spike as her family, that would be so awesome. |
| Well, lets see what happens then? |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 11:00 am |
///“Personally? I despise you! I think you are a pedophile and I would be happy to see you disintegrate into dust. Professionally; I think you have an unhealthy obsession over a young girl that you have mentally never allowed to grow up. You hear only what you want to hear, you have delusions of grandeur, and are suffering from emotionally arrested development complicated by a God complex. Teams of psychologists could work with you for years and I don’t believe there would be any discernable difference. I am only here to assist in your anomalous concept of redemption. So stop wasting my time.”///
Go, Penny!! Everything we always wanted to say to the Poof, but never had the opportunity! I bow before Penny! Penny for President!!
we're not worthy...we're not worthy...we're not worthy... |
| I have to admit that paragraph has a special place in my own heart! |
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| Richard | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 08:42 am |
| It figures that Angel can't absorb more than 1 negative word about him for every 10 spoken. |
| You didn't really expect him to do otherwise, did you? |
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| Neart | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 08:21 am |
Can Penny use shock tactics on Angel? Tazer shocks preferably.
Yeay for Willow's brainy brain. *bounce bounce* |
| Tazer shocks...hmmm...I'll think about it! lol |
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| Shadow | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 08:19 am |
----
I think you are a pedophile and I would be happy to see you disintegrate into dust. Professionally; I think you have an unhealthy obsession over a young girl that you have mentally never allowed to grow up. You hear only what you want to hear, you have delusions of grandeur, and are suffering from emotionally arrested development complicated by a God complex.----
You took the words right outta my mouth! God I love Penny. *grin*
ooo slayer claimage of spike... *drools* does it involve spuffy sex?
Keep em coming JACK! MORE! |
| I only write this for your reviews, you know that, right? I just love your reactions. |
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| Irina | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 06:43 am |
| I loved the Penny/Angel interaction. I'm really looking forward to Spike's reaction to Willow's suggestion. Wonderful update! |
| Thank you so much, Spike reaction will be interesting. |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 06:26 am |
| Briliant idea... why is everything suddenly briliant... I'm making myself crazy with that word! *spins around drusilly-style* loved the update though! |
| Thank you so much, it was brillant of you! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 06:00 am |
| aww.. GREAT UPDATE!!!!! *nods* yes claim him as family!! |
| HMMMM....maybe! |
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| sirc | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 05:55 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 05:52 am |
| i was thinking along the same lines as willow. oh i usually don't get to say this with fanfictions but i love Dawn in this fic! |
| Thank-you, Dawn can be diffiult to write for me, so I appreciate your compliment. |
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| kim | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 05:37 am |
And Spike says, "Wha'?"
Gee, Penny, tell him how you really feel. LOL And the first thing he pulls from that is "You think I'm obsessive?" LOL |
| I call 'em as I see 'em! |
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| akarinacj | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 05:01 am |
| Yes, could she claim him??? Can´t wait to hear the answer. Please update soon. |
| Soon, I promise |
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| dihcar | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 04:45 am |
Spike should challenge angel to a fight. Just letting himself be claimed by the slayer is pathetic, it's something that the coward angel would do.
And also that phedophile needs to get his comeupn's.
seeya |
| Guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out what he does! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 03:59 am |
You can't plagerise your own idea of the slayer claiming Spike...you could get in trouble with yourself...lol
LMAO at Angel, the bloke gets called a pedophile, with delusions of Granduer and her only picks up on whole obsesive part? Dust the lousy bugger he's of no use, the powers don't need him, they got plenty of Chamions, this one is beyond help, they need to cut all ties, let the ship sail, se la vie, asta la vista, Aureviour ...goodbye...dust in the wind and all that. Better to cut their loses now rather than later...lol
Personally I think Spike needs to take option one and Fight Angel for a claim to his branch out on his own, He needs to do it on his own, not have someone else fight his battles for him, besides Angels deserves a good swift kick up the butt for what he tried to do a couple of updates back by trying to make him subdue, definitely the best option in my opinion.
I have to agree with the jury Spike only wants to train Xander so he can legitelly kick his arse to the ground, and maybe help the bloke build up his own confidence so he doesn't mock the peeple who can't fight back and become a younger version of his old man.
Well loving the update
Update soon
Harry |
| Harry you are a star, I was trying to subtly show that Angel only hears what he wants to hear and you picked it up...thank you, it's nice to know my thought processes are being recognized! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 02:04 am |
| Did Willow just come up with a way to liberate Spike from Angelus' dominance without a fight to the death? More story please. |
| Yes she did...but really...where's the fun in that? |
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| maryperk | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 01:52 am |
| Great chappy. Cant wait to see what happens next. |
| Neither can I the damn bunnies won't shut up! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 01:40 am |
| LOL, very damn good chappie me likey |
| Yay...I do like to please! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 19 | 04/16/2006 01:35 am |
| Ewww, brother? lol |
| Not quite! lol |
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| Verda | Chapter 18 | 07/30/2006 02:18 am |
| You had him drained by a vamp? You are gloriously evil girl. I'm still laughing. I can't get over it, just hysterical. Trying to be all stealthy and figuring out how to get back with Buffy through Harris, he gets nabbed by a vamp. If it's Spike I know he wont drain him, if not, he's toast and not a bad way to go considering all that he's done in the name of science. Great job, just love it. |
| All I can say is it's not Spike |
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| Joyce | Chapter 18 | 04/29/2006 10:08 am |
| Re Riley's last thought: It's amazing how obsession can cloud judgment, isn't it? |
| Obsession can cause a great deal of problems |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 18 | 04/21/2006 08:31 am |
| *grumbles* he would think it was buffy's fault! |
| Well yeah...who else is there, it's not likw hw can blame himself! lol |
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| Delicia | Chapter 18 | 04/19/2006 11:43 am |
| Great chapter! I hope the L.A. gang and Penny can he knock some sense into Angel. Yay for more bonding between Xander and Spike!! |
| We can live in hoper |
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| Lou | Chapter 18 | 04/16/2006 05:18 pm |
| Good old Riley - I couldn't be happier!! |
| LOL...I think he could! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 18 | 04/16/2006 12:16 am |
| omg! him being an idiot is Buffy's fault...*slaps him as he's being drained!!* |
| Well of course...who else would he blame? |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 04/15/2006 07:44 pm |
| oh my! the xander/Spike conversation was my favorite part of this chapter. I like the friendship bond that they're developing. The end with the vamp sucking on Riley -- (1) ewww, poor vamp will get indigestion and (2) this doesn't bode well - if he's turned, and (3) Who in their right mind would turn or even bite Cardboard? |
| At some point I'll probably answer all those questions! Maybe |
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| maryperk | Chapter 18 | 04/15/2006 11:24 am |
| Stupid Riley. Always blaming his problems on other people. |
| He is not suffering from an overabundance of intelleact! ;) |
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| Morrigan | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 10:50 pm |
| Hehehe... Well, at least Riley's final suck job was a freebie! |
| ROFL! it certainly was |
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| vladt | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 03:18 pm |
| great update. even the uncertainty of riley"s fate is a win/win. thanks for the fun read. |
| You are most welcome! |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:45 pm |
perhaps with lot of tiny words Penny can help Angel.
One Riley problem gone, or perhaps made worse. |
| I'm not sure if Penny knows many little words! lol |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 12:23 pm |
| Oooooh, someone was hungry. "Riley Bites" yum! Is "Mummy" watching? I hope whoever it was leaves him drained. Vampire Riley wouldn't last one night. He's just too stupid. *grin* |
| Now if I answer any of that I'd be giving away stuff...so... |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 11:23 am |
| That's a briljant analogy!! :-D Never thought of it like that... |
| Thank you...don't know if it's accurate, but it works for me! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 09:50 am |
| Now what's eating Cardbored? I am enjoying Spike and Xander's new found friendship but really don't care who or what offs Riley unless, of course, it helps the story. |
| SOOOOO beautifully put! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 09:35 am |
That's it, Riley. It's all Buffy's fault. She tossed you out knowing you would stalk Spike and Xander as they went to get food. She knew you would hang out in the shadows so focused on the two male Scoobies that you would be completely oblivious to your own surroundings. In fact, she even paid that vampire to sneak up behind you and turn you into a human slurpee.
**snicker**
But, hey, buck up, big guy! If ya get dead, you won't have to worry about those men and their little white coats. |
| rofl...not necessarily! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 08:21 am |
Angel is a spoilt brat. He needs a spanking... preferably with 12 strands of barbed wire twisted together...
I think between Wesley's moral compass and Cordelia's "do it or I'm gonna bitch" attitude, they MIGHT be able to keep Peaches in line... maybe.
I LIKE the Spike and Xander friendship thing thats happening... *grin*
How in hell can Riley being bitten be Buffy's fault? SHE didnt send him out to follow Spike and Xander... asshole shoulda gone back to the frat and had a circle-jerk with his "buddies".
Great chapter Jack. *GRIN* Keep em comin! |
| 'cause she hadn't already killed all the demons silly! |
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| Irina | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 05:31 am |
| I liked how Spike answered Xander's question, great conversation between the two. Hmmm... The unexpected twist at the end of the chapter has me wondering if a certain mad vampiress has joined the party, guess i'll have to wait to find out. Wonderful update! |
| Thank you...you will have to wait, sorry! |
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| kim | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 04:25 am |
Whohoa! Didn't expect Riley to end up a snack! Will Spike hear it?
Kind of felt sorry for Angel, there, when Buffy snapped at him. If someone asks a polite question, the least you can do is be civil back. Oh, well. About time Penny moved things along, anyway.
Steering the ship while watching for a mutiny - perfect analogy. At least all sides of Spike are affectionate. That has to help. |
| consider all that Buffy has learned over the last few days and tell me that you wouldn't snap too? |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 04:17 am |
Now now we can't have some fledgeling kill Riley, that would not be fair on Spikey, so maybed what we need is Spike saving his arse and then getting his arse kicked by said vamp and have him run off to wherever he ran off to last time. Unless ofcourse you are thinking of turning Lil Riley into a Vamp and then he'd have to face Spike one on one and see just what it means to be a Master Vampire when he is nothing but a lowly fledge...either option is good, as long as he gets his arse kicked by Spike.
*sigh* I somehow don't think that the talk between Penny and Angel is going to go well, the dude never did take instructions very well, he has to be in charge no matter how bad his judgement is, as long as he made the decision it's the right one. Well maybe he needs to be beaten into submission by the cheerleader she looks like she might be able to handle the Bulky Vamp.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| Thanks Harry, you've given me some good options there! |
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| sirc | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 03:58 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Richard | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 03:22 am |
| Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy. Rather unexpected but very fitting. |
| I do like to surprise. |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 03:04 am |
*Looks excited* death of Riley!!! yay!! *then pauses and thinks* awe shit...Riley Vampire option...*grins* AWESOME
Keep up the great work....*thumbs up*
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| Thanks Jace. Heehee I do love options! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 02:51 am |
| Oooo is someone finally killing Riley? Yay... and what did the note to Giles say? |
| Guess you'll just have to keep reading to see! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 02:16 am |
| As nasty as Cordy could be, she is the best thing that ever happened to Angel. It is the very bitchiness of her that allows her to push Angel rather then him doing the pushing, and that is exactly what he needs. Angel was very easily able to manipulate Buffy, and that was one of the things that made their relationship unacceptable. On the other hand Angel really can't manipulate Cordy and that is what makes their relationship that of equals. And I love how you showed that here, from the beginning of their working relationship, even before they became friends, if she felt strong enough about something she made him do it. I really love the friendship between Spike and Xander, I could see how those two could have truly made good friends on the show, if only Xander could have seen Spike for who he became. I love what ended up happening to Riley, there is a definite humor to it. Although he now might become an even bigger threat. With you I take nothing for granted. Thank you for the great chapter, you manage to convey much, and give much to think about each time you post. |
| I think the manipulation factor need to take Buffy's age at the inception of their relationship, it set the stage for the positions they held within the relationship even as she grew older. Cordy never suffered the self doubt that Buffy did |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:49 am |
LMAO, I love being one of those "in the know"
Great chappie |
| Thanks sweetie...you do manage to get your own way alot! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:35 am |
| Buffy's fault? right Buffy told him to stalk Spike and Xander. seriously, i thing G.I. git needs a brain transplant and ofcourse the attitude tranplant that's been wanted for a long time now. thax 4 the gr8 update. |
| I have to agree...but then again I always thought he was a bit light in the loafers! |
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| Dolau | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:34 am |
| Great update.. :-) |
| Thank you |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:30 am |
| hehehe!!! yay!! riley got it good.. is he dead? please tell me he's dead!? lol it would be awesome if it was just by some random vamp.. lol *looks at glares* what, it's what he deserves.. lol Great chappy hun |
| You really don't expect me to answer that do you???? |
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| Kat | Chapter 18 | 04/14/2006 01:26 am |
| oh yeah riley its buffy's fault that you are a moron. hmmm I wonder who it will be. hmmmm I am defentially needing to read the next chapter to find out. |
| Then I'd best write it! |
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| Verda | Chapter 17 | 07/30/2006 02:02 am |
| Doubt if it'll get through his thick skull but maybe. Dru didn't think so, if I got her meaning. I hope Spike does hit him, won't that be fun! So good Jacks, you must be so proud. Thanks for leaving it out here for all to enjoy. |
| Wow...you know you're making my day ...right? |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 17 | 04/14/2006 01:26 am |
| i wanna ask the same thing, can i hit him? Gr8 chap. |
| If you wait, you might find a better solution! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 17 | 04/13/2006 07:54 pm |
| LMAO - oh please please please let spike hit him. or Xander or spike and xander both hit him |
| LOL...Maybe we can make a new game of it??? |
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| PyroDeScorpio2 | Chapter 17 | 04/13/2006 04:56 am |
| please continue! |
| I'll see what I can do! |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 10:55 pm |
Another thing to blame Angel for "Riley" the living Angel subsatute.
I wonder, if you traced Rileys family tree back, hmmmm.. Riley-Angel, Angel-Riley, Kissing cousins? How could 2 men be soo excesivly dence? It could most defanatly be genetic. |
| I think they just two of many |
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| kim | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 06:15 pm |
Oh! I wasn't trying to give advice so much, as live in the psychology brain. I used to counsel people, so it's easy to just fall back into it, LOL. I was thinking about what Angel probably needs at the moment, not making a specific suggestion to your writing.
It was late when I read the chapter, so I guess I didn't think to make that clear. Carry on! |
| It's amazing how alike we do things! lol |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 03:56 pm |
| LOL, excellent chappie |
| Thank sweetie...I love picking your brain for ideas! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 01:36 pm |
Yay, Xander is all insightful!! Angel is having a hard time understanding how wrong he's been. But, if Penny thinks he can be saved we'll have wait and see.
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| Penny's heart is too big...I wanted to dust him! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 10:08 am |
| Thanks for the update, I loved Xander being all insightful. In that one paragraph he managed to really hit one of Angel's main problems right on the head. And I love the control that Spike showed, Penny is really helping everyone grow up so nicely. With luck she might even be able to help Angel a bit. And Riley, he really is clueless. I am looking forward to the final showdown with him in whatever form it takes. I am also really looking forward to the interaction between him and Xander, with all the positive changes Xander has made it is going to be interesting. |
| You say interesting...I say hard! Getting into the head of those two...'nough said! |
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| sirc | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 09:33 am |
| Great chapter. You've hit bullseye with Angel and Riley |
| I'm trying too! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 09:24 am |
| Good chapter. I am glad that Spike and Xander are friends in this story. It is all so tiring reading about Angel and Riley who never seem to learn anything. Hopefully, Angel will be up for it in the next chapter. Love the story. |
| We'll see what happens! |
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| Kat | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 09:04 am |
| lol who is wanting to do the hitting now. and Riley and Angel could be mirror images of stupididy lol. |
| Guess you're gonna have to keep reading to find out! lol |
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| Richard | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 08:23 am |
You really dislike Riley, don't you? I think everyone else here does.
You did an excellent job making Angel be pathetic in his own mind without any hint of pathos and without verging into parody.
You did the same with Riley when he was wishing for Maggie back to all but do his thinking for him. Now though, you're sliding into parody. I wonder if there's a way to recoup that, assuming you even want to. |
| Actually, no, I don't dislike Riley. From a psychological point of view, all behaviour displayed is in keeping with the personality of the character. Parody is an exageration of said character traits. |
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| Shadow | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 08:21 am |
Let Spike hit him... PLEASE! just once? *Snicker*
And Angel needs a swift kick in the balls for pulling the whole "I'm pathetic, feel sorry for me, I dont understand" crap.
*lends you the hammer*
GREAT CHAPTER! |
| Shadow, I promise that I will try very hard not to disapoint you |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 08:15 am |
| I say...let Spike hit him. Does that make me a bad person? |
| Not at all...I want Spike to hit him too |
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| Karyn | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 07:31 am |
“So…can I hit him?”
giggles!!! yeah jack! can he hit him? lol, great update!! |
| Thanks sweetie, your wish and all that rot! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 06:57 am |
| haha.. would love to see some more angel and riley bashing.. hehehe.. yay i got 2 penny chapters this week |
| I'll have to try for three! |
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| Lou | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 05:11 am |
| Gotta love King Riley the Deluded! |
| can I just say...ewwww! |
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| Dolau | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 04:56 am |
| So much denial, so little time :-)seriously Lol in this chapter. Can I hit him? Please? Just a little, won't even leave a mark... much.. :-) Love your story. More please. |
| Thank you...I'd say yes, but then is it fair to take away Xander and Spikes fun? |
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| Irina | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 04:54 am |
| I like how you portrayed Xander in this chapter. I hope he does get a chance to hit Riley. Fantastic update! |
| Thank you...we'll see! |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 02:23 am |
| LMAO Okay Riley is such an a**! Yes, Spike you can hit him. I love your work! You write such great stuff. More as soon as you can please. |
| Thank you, you just made my day! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 02:16 am |
OK so now it's Spike acting like a hyper active kid after a suger rush? Well it would only be fair if he is allowed to hit the bloke a few times for what he has done to Spike. Of course I was hoping moe a one on one with Riley wetting his pants and running away like a pansy that he is.
Well this fic proves something, those large foreheads definitely do not equal a high IQ as both the Captain Forehead and Cardboard have proven, they both as thick as a 4 by 4 if not thicker.
I can't believe Angel doesn't still get it and EVEN Xander does, that is saying something, the guy walked in on Spike/Buffy loving and didn't even put 2 and 2 together....naked press ups...really.
Well still loving it Jack
Update soon
Harry |
| Rofl thanks Harry, as always, it is a pleasure to hear from you |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 01:54 am |
| Are we killing Riley and Angel in a very painful and hilarious way?? PLEEAAAASE???? |
| That would be telling! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 01:22 am |
| Can I hit him, too? Spike and Xander could be pretty funny together if Xander has smartened up. I don't see any hope for Cardbored. More story please. |
| It's coming...but I don't like to see you without hope! |
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| gaillee | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 01:14 am |
| Thanks for another of your fine chapters. Love the Spike and Xander interaction. |
| Thank you I appreciate your comments |
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| kim | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 12:37 am |
Good stuff here.
I think it's important to point out that Angel probably didn't understand some of those things that would have helped him be more human again. A simple one-on-one conversation, with compassion, with Angel once he's calmed a bit would probably be best for getting through to him. Blunt insults will only make him defensive. He needs the chance to ask for clarification of what he's not getting, and support in finding the right answer.
Love the Xander/Spike interaction, and Riley being so cluless to it. The poor boy was always in beyond his depths when it came to the supernatural. |
| It might be best to wait for the conversation to be over before you give advice...you'll think that I'm just following your suggestions, when I am truely following my own plot! LOL |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 12:36 am |
//“So…can I hit him?”//
Big. Dumb. Clueless. Yep, looks like a Buffy ex to me. Seriously, does Riley honestly believe he's being stealthy with the following? Welllll, DUH! See above, re: Dumb and clueless.
Oh, hey, let's look on the brightside! If Riley gets eaten by something, the sheep in Iowa will be very grateful. |
| Rofl..lucky sheep! |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 17 | 04/12/2006 12:33 am |
*nods sagely to Spike* Yes Spike you may hit him...hard and many many times. *snerk*
Awesome chappie Jack...keep up the good...GREAT work.
Jace |
| Bless you Jace...I will continue to try! |
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| Verda | Chapter 16. | 07/30/2006 01:39 am |
| Well that was some jam packed. Angel, Ben and Riley. Hopefully Ben gets his chance at having a "normal" life and be a doctor, Riley's still not got a clue, but maybe Angel's starting to see the light. Gotta love Cordy! Awesome read. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 16. | 04/13/2006 07:49 pm |
| LMAO I love Cordy's line. Of course she is thinking about Penny's hair. *giggles uncontrollable* |
| It was a Cordy thing to do! |
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| sirc | Chapter 16. | 04/12/2006 09:27 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Kim | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 06:02 pm |
| OMG!! I am loving this story. I can't wait to read more. |
| It's coming...I promise |
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| Neart | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 12:19 pm |
| great chapeter again. Loved Cordelia 's last thought. |
| She's Cordy...what can I say |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 10:06 am |
| "Wel duh, cordy! she's penny! she's great all around!" ;-) lol... I really love penny! she's all that was needed to bring the scoobies back together in the show! *sigh* if she'd only been there...;-) |
| If she was...I'd be rich! LOL I wish too |
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| FetxhingMadScientist | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 09:59 am |
| Yay, Penny! Doing things because you know, or think you know, you'll get rewarded doesn't count! |
| Truth can hurt! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 09:07 am |
| Good chapter. Great explanantion about redemption. |
| Thank you |
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| me | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 08:35 am |
| go joyce!! great chapter |
| Thank you so much! |
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| dihcar | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 06:13 am |
Good chapter, while i liked Buffy,Joyce,Penny and the scoobies sticking up for Spike, i find it hard to believe that he wouldn't do it himself. "It's my right as his grandsire to discpline him"??? Spike can defeat angel if he wants it bad enough, just like those two slayers and angel/angelus in the episode destiny. He was never afraid of him.
seeya |
| You need to stop reading my mind! LOL |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 05:32 am |
| *'God, she's got great hair'.* Well Cordy will always be Cordy and that's the way we like her. GR8 CHAP |
| Thank you...Cordy is such fun! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 05:11 am |
Yay Joyce, I should have guessed that it would be her with the stake on Angel. This is a really great chapter, and I love the point that Penny raised on redemption, Angel truly never did understand, and the reactions of Anya and Cordy were great. I like that Cordy and Wes still believe in him, they just realize that his attitude needs a complete overhaul. Riley worries me, though now that Spike is chipless not as much as before, as he has enough information to really betray Buffy and he is angry over how things have changed. Thanks for the great update
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| Yes Riley could be a problem. |
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| Lou | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 05:05 am |
| Angel the Duh - very droll! Loved the last line!! |
| thank you, Cordy makes it easy! LOL |
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| Delicia | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 04:35 am |
| Another wonderful chapter! I hope that Penny and the gang can get through to Angel, but if not...stakeage!! It was a great speech, you have such a way with words! |
| Thank you sooo much, you've made my day! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 03:10 am |
| lol @ Cordelia's last line |
| Thank you I just love Cordy! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 16. | 04/10/2006 02:35 am |
| Let's hear it for stake weilding mammas! Love Joyce standing up to Angel. A vamp just doesn't stand a chance against a Summers, does he? As for Riley, I'm sure he's gonna get Buffy alone and "make her understand". Yep, and when reality gives him a swift kick in the moral ambiguities, I fully expect to see Dawn selling tickets in the parking lot. Joyce won't have to pay a dime to send her youngest off to college. |
| Rofl...I really shouldn't read reviews when I'm eating.... |
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| gaillee | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 10:26 pm |
| Thanks for another super chapter. |
| To are most welcome |
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| kim | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 09:34 pm |
| Ah, good, the attempt is being made to get through to Angel. Thank you. |
| You asked! I had to try...but no promises! |
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| Irina | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 08:12 pm |
| I just love how it turned out to be Joyce that came to Spike's rescue. Penny's wise words were so heartfelt, leave it to Cordy to only notice her hair... lol. I can't wait to find out if Angel is gonna be smarter than Riley and actually get what Penny just said. Wonderful update! |
| Thank you, to tell you the truth I have no idea about Angel myself! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 06:52 pm |
| LMAO at Cordelia's last thought. How long is Angelus going to hang out and try to control what he has clearly lost, let alone controlled? Is Cardbored going to try and get back into the Scoobies? Yuck! I never could understand who would want him. More story please. |
| soon, I promise...more story anyway, not real sure about answers though! |
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| Dolau | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 06:19 pm |
| Go Joyce.. Love the story, love the chapter. Ending cracked me up... :-) Gotta love Cordy. All in all, very wellwritten. Thanks |
| Thank you sooo much, I really appreciate the review. |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 05:03 pm |
| Will what Penny said sink into Angels thick skull? Hmm, lets hope. Awating your next update. |
| I have no idea...it's always hard to tell with Angel! |
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| Kat | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:58 pm |
| hmmmm i wonder if angel will get it or not. Yay for Joyce. Stupid Rylie |
| Angel is teetering on the edge at the moment! LOL |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:58 pm |
ARGH!!!! Why does this review box hate me so much today, it deleted my review again.
Right so Riley, I hope all the questions he was asking was not a dig at me and my constant questions, because if they are, your going down girl...lol All that corn has turned that poor boys brain into popcorn...nothing but air up there, that's why he was so east to mold ito the perfect soldior.
Poor Poor delusional Angel, really should have realised that he is not the sharpest tool in the box when it took him a hundred years to start helping out, and only then after he was prompted and got a hardon from looking at a 15 year old flaky cheerleader. Anyone else would have after being cursed cried for a couple of years and then realised, wait a minute i'm a master Vampire from the strongest line in history, I can try to redeem myself by helping fight evil, no he went back to mummy and acted like nothing happened and then cried over his rats milk for the next hundred years *rolleyes* And people wonder why we think Skipe is the better of the two charactors.
Go Joyce, didn't realise it was her even if I need recognise the words from the Spike intro episode, but somehow didn't make the connection.
Typical Cordy with the last line, loved it, Classic.
Well loved it (so much I wrote this review twice.)
Update soon.
Harry |
| Sweetie, I would never make a dig at you...I enjoy your reviews too much! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:49 pm |
rofl @ cordy...all that and all she got was ‘God, she’s got great hair’ *dies laughing*
great update!!
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| Thank's Karyn...I can't seem to keep Cordy focused on others for very long! LOL |
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| Yzba | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:45 pm |
| God she's got great hair???? That's Cordy;) |
| LOL...Yup! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:28 pm |
Wonderful chapter. That last line cracked me up - so typical Cordelia !
Enjoyed the scenes outside the MB also - Riley's thoughts and Ben's reaction to an apparent Glory temper tantrum. It would be interesting to see what both of them do next. |
| If you've got any ideas...pass em on...there is so much Penny has to fix...maybe if we all work together we could come up with something great! Email me if you have any thoughts OHolly...Please! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:03 pm |
| Great chapter. Love it. Go Joyce!!! |
| Thanks sweetie, you're a doll! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:03 pm |
ooo you got right to the heart of the problem I have with Angel... You cant be "redeemed" if you are looking to a reward at the end. *Smacks Angel with a hammer... and for good measure smacks Riley too*
Good Chapter Babe. Kepp going!
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| I still need to borrow your hammer! lol |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 16. | 04/09/2006 04:01 pm |
| Uhhhhhmmm, Angel I really don't think Joyce ever liked or respected you, first impressions and all |
| NAH!...You're kidding right??? LOL |
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| Verda | Chapter 15. | 07/30/2006 01:29 am |
| Still still laughing from Buffy's comment to her mom about Giles. That a way Joyce, stick it to the ponce. He's so arrogant and for him to try that Sire crap on him was down right low. So glad you had Spike struggling his demon into not responding, he is stronger then that. Great chappie. |
| Thank you.. do like to show the difference between Spike and Angel |
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| Lou | Chapter 15. | 04/10/2006 05:01 am |
| Ha!!! That's telling him! Excellent. |
| Thank you Lou, I'm feeling rather satisfied now!lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 15. | 04/10/2006 04:45 am |
I loved everyone's reaction when Angel told Buffy she wasn't serious about him not coming to Sunnydell. And Buffy picking Spike and admitting that he was the one she always wanted was totally unexpected, and so cool. I think and hope that Angel pays for trying to humiliate Spike, thank goodness Spike controls his demon far more then Angel, even with a soul, could ever imagine. Thanks for the great chapter.
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| Buffy took a risk, she doesn't usually do that! LOL |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 15. | 04/10/2006 03:05 am |
| DUUUSSSTTT HIIIIIIIMMMM!!!! |
| You know I'm evil, right? LOL |
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| sirc | Chapter 15. | 04/09/2006 05:59 am |
| great chapter |
| Again I thank you for your review |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 10:14 pm |
| CHants more more more more - good update swetty - I loved it *grin* can;t wait to see if he gets staked or not! |
| neither can I ! LOL |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 07:40 pm |
| ooooh wonder who said that?!?! lol |
| hmmmm...next chapter! lol |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 03:34 pm |
| STAKE HIM NOW!!!! I sooo hate Angel!!! Bastard. Yay for Penny! |
| lol....but I'm having sooo much fun with him! lol |
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| Bridget | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 03:17 pm |
| Good chapter. Angel is really unlikeable in this story. I will be glad when he is gone but I am sure this is not the end of him. |
| you'd be right about that! lol |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 12:00 pm |
| *standing in front of Angel with the stake* ;-) lol... keep the angel-trashing coming!!! love this! |
| tnank you |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 05:45 am |
See that's another problem with Angel, he keeps on forgetting Spike is 120 year old Vamp not the 20 year old he last saw him as before he got cursed with a soul.
The guy fails to grasp the concept of people changing, he still thinks of Spike as a Fledge, he still thinks Buffy as a 16 year old who will love him for eternity, he probably still thinks Giles as a stuffy shirt who follows the book, and Willow as the tech geek who see's the good in everything. He needs to embrace change.
Gotta love the logic of a teenager, "Uh, duh…’cause you’re an idiot,” Who needs to go in symantics when a kid can explain it in a simple sentence? Well except me but I like the um...sounds of the clicks of the keyboard.
So who has the stake pressed firmly against his chest? My money would be on Buffy but it could be anyone in that room, maybe except Wesley and Cordy because they still need the gelled one to pay their wages. That's another thing surely his money cannot be legit so how come he feels no guilt about using blood money?
Gotta love a chapter full of Angel Bashing.
Update soon
Harry
P.S What is a Stevedore? According to Wikiedia, A stevedore manages the operation of loading or unloading a ship. So good with hands? |
| Stevedore: man employed in loading and unloading ships...it's an old fashioned way of saying 'a stud'! |
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| Kat | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 04:39 am |
| what an amazing chapter. wow. I am impressed. love Buffy this chapter so much |
| thank you sooo much |
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| Delicia | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 04:09 am |
I love how Buffy said Angel was a substitute for Spike, that was so cool! Ha! Angel ya big dork. You should know better, *shakes head*.
Great chapter! It was loads of fun. |
| Thank you...I enjoyed writing it |
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| Bigbird | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 03:18 am |
| Yay dust him!!! teach him to be such an ass... and leave spike alone too! Good fic I like it ;-) |
| Thank you, I appreciate the review |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 02:16 am |
//“Now, can I dust him?” //
Pretty please? Pick me! Pick me! I'll do it! Oh, c'mon, it'll be fun! Oooohhh...y'know, they could always set the git on fire and roast marshmallows over his flaming carcass for the few precious moments before his ever-growing, overbearing, lying, manipulative, cradle-robbing hide bursts to so much ash!
...To bloodthirsty?
Sorry.
No, not really. |
| Don't hold back there! |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 12:39 am |
| GO JOYCE! LOL I just can't say enough how I LOVE THIS FIC! |
| But really...you could just say that over and over again...I wouldn't mind. |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 15. | 04/08/2006 12:21 am |
| GO DAWN! GO PENNY! GO JOYCE! GO XANDER! GO GILES! GO BUFFY! GO CORDY! GO WES! wow so many hilarious people in one chapter! |
| Thank you...I love to know I make people laugh |
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| letitia | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 11:54 pm |
| GO BUFFY for standing up to Angel. And he so better watch his step. |
| this is soooo true |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 11:41 pm |
| Ooo, I can't wait....*on edge of seat* |
| LOL...not long ...I promise |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 11:03 pm |
| Who's got the stake on Angelus? Is it Joyce? Teeheehee He's having a hard time, poor widdle souled poof. More story please. |
| The answer to that question will definately be in the next chapter |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 09:18 pm |
| Hmm, I'm sensing a little of Angelus there. Yeah, that'll get them to trust him. He really is an idiot. I'm guessing that was Buffy in the end. I like that she chose Spike in front of everyone, but hopefully it wasn't just to get back at Angel. I'm actually against the staking of Angel. I don't think it's right because he actually does do a lot of good in LA, even though he's an idiot. But I wouldn't be against him getting smacked around a bit more. That can always be fun. Can't wait for more=) |
| lets see what I can do!! |
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| jeanie | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 08:53 pm |
| "uh,duh...'cause you're an idiot" that was just hilarious!!! great chapter. can't wait for more. |
| Thank you, Dawn doesn't hold back does she? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 08:38 pm |
Stake Him! Stake Him!
Raa Raa Raa
:cheer: :cheer: :cheer:
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| You know if I stake him, I can't bash him! |
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| Irina | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 08:26 pm |
| Absolutely wonderful, I loved this update! Keep up the great work! |
| Thank you, yuo are too kind |
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| vladt | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 08:13 pm |
| excellent update. angel bashing always adds pleasure to a read. thanks for the fun. |
| you are most welcome, It always adds plesure to the writing too! |
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| Pin | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 07:28 pm |
| Great chapter! I love the dismissing of Angel, although I'm sure that between Angel and Riley - their troubles aren't over. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. THanks! |
| OH Pin, you know me too well! |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 07:27 pm |
| Yahhhhhhh at last Spuffyness, I love my spuffy, spuffy, spuffy SPUFFY. And soo agree with Xander Angel needs to be dusted, I don't think he has any brain cells left in his head. Can't wait to read the next chapter, I Love this story. |
| Thank you sooo much, you have to build up to spuffy, anticipation makes it better! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 07:20 pm |
| Bloody excellent fic. It was inspiring. But you know I love your stuff. |
| Thanks wulfie, you inspired me first! lol |
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| kim | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 07:16 pm |
Wow, that's quite the turnaround for Buffy...would she really? Cause Spike annoyed her independently of what she had going on with Angel. It's not just that easy, since he would have had to prove himself trustworthy to her, just because he was a vampire, even if Angel had never come to town. But, saying all that in front of Angel, true or not, is pretty dang funny.
Just have Queen C unleash her full fury on Angel. He'll be meek as a lamb in no time. He could never stand to have her seriously mad at him. |
| The dating is so they can build trust between them. Angel's future is not yet written! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 07:03 pm |
| wonderful update, jack!! cackles laughing!! loved it!! |
| Thnaks for letting lu brainstorm you! *HUGS* |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 06:58 pm |
| Squeeee! *Kisses Jack* I love you! You get that, right? |
| oh absolutely! LOL Jack loves kisses |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 06:33 pm |
| Excellent chapter! |
| Thanks sweetie...now update for me! lol |
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| Shadow | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 06:32 pm |
I'm with Dawn... stake the arrogant asshole.
Great chapter babe. Love the supporting of Spike *grin*
AND best of all... Buffy telling Angel he was a substitute for Spike!
GO JACK! |
| Thanks Sweetie...but you always want me to stake Angel! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 15. | 04/07/2006 06:30 pm |
| Awesome chappy. Oh yeah, I've said so before haven't I? LOL |
| I couldn't have done it without you! |
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| Verda | Chapter 14. | 07/30/2006 01:12 am |
| Thanks for the laughs. It was certainly Xander's moment to shine. I like that you gave him to opportunity to knock out the idoit and not Spike. If he's not dusted in the next capter maybe he needs to have a talk with the Powers, seeing that they aren't so pleased with him anymore, get his priorities straight. Another wonderful chapter, thanks for the read. |
| I hope you'll trust me to give Angl exactly what he deserves |
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| Joyce | Chapter 14. | 04/29/2006 09:42 am |
| "When did she get so skinny?" I fell on the floor laughing since this was introduced so Anya like. |
| Thinking before speaking is something that can cause all sorts of problems |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 14. | 04/10/2006 02:59 am |
| Yes, BYE BYE! |
| Rofl...decisive arn't you! lol |
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| sirc | Chapter 14. | 04/09/2006 05:53 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you...you are sweet! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 14. | 04/08/2006 10:11 pm |
| loved it - angel is such a jerk I hope they dust him. It would only be a good thing. *hugs* |
| But it's sooo much fun to bash him! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 14. | 04/08/2006 04:02 am |
| I totally agree with Cordy..."moron" indeed. Now Dru is in the picture, and could she be seeing the future? Saying goodbye to Angel? I'll have to read the next chapter to find out...*runs*. |
| LOL...it might be a bit longer wait for you...sorry! lol |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 14. | 04/07/2006 03:16 pm |
| GO PENNY! GO SPIKE! GO XANDER! GO GILES!LOVE THIS! Oh and go Cordy 4 clling Angel a moron. |
| well when she's right she's right! lol |
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| Jessica | Chapter 14. | 04/06/2006 11:04 pm |
| This is an amazing story also. And I gotta say how much I adore Penny. We should all love her for getting rid of Angel and Riley and their smothering personas. Can't wait for more. |
| Thank you sooo much |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 14. | 04/06/2006 10:59 am |
| Just to clear up I meant eating rats not Spike, that would have a completely different and perverse meaning. pathetic and eating mice and rats. That's what I meant. |
| It's ok Harry, I kinda figured that out...lol...it did give me a laugh though! |
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| Lou | Chapter 14. | 04/06/2006 03:39 am |
| Wave the white flag, Angel, before it's too late! You're well bashed. |
| Isn't it already too late? |
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| gaillee | Chapter 14. | 04/06/2006 12:58 am |
| This just keeps on getting better. Love the Angel confrontation. Especially, like the espirit de corps joining Spike and the Scoobies. Superb! Thanks ever so much. |
| Thank you...its nice to know someone gets my humour! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 14. | 04/06/2006 12:29 am |
***"Stake him again Buffy, please?" Xander whined
"Oi, let me get a better view first, luv," Spike requested.
"Can we take pictures?" Xander begged.***
ROFLMAO!!!
Can I just say, again, how much I love this fic? Penny is so freakin' awesome!
**dies laughing and goes back to reading**
**dies laughing all over again** |
| Thank you must be said to Mary, Karyn, Tam and Steph...our brainstorming helps me write this sort of thing. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 10:23 pm |
| rofl..great update! loved drus little thing at the end...bye, bye daddy...ohhhhh yeah!! |
| I humbly bow in the presence of the master Dru writer...I needed help with her! lol |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 10:23 pm |
| arghh dru.. wat is she here for?!? lol damn her cryptic messages.. |
| I have no idea...blame the bunny! |
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| Irina | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 10:20 pm |
| Angel was such a misguided moron to think he could take on Penny. Loved the chapter, and everything that took place in it! Can't wait to find out what exactly Dru is talking about. |
| Neither can I ...the bunny just told me to include her, didn't bother to tell me why! |
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| Kat | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 09:51 pm |
| awww you put in Dru i love dru. you wrote her amazingly most people cant and yet you had her marked with just one paragraph |
| I give all credit for Dru to Maryperk...she helped me capture her. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 07:29 pm |
| I loved how Spike spoke up for Xander when Angel was rude to him. I really, really love the camaraderie that Spike and Xander have. Now that they are friends the way they play off each other and most likely the banter they will have between each other is terrifically humorous. And Buffy hitting Angel with the stake and warning him to treat her ‘team’ with respect was completely unexpected and totally great. And after Angel’s horrible comment to Buffy, I thought it so funny that the only thing that saved him was Penny stepping in front of him. And Penny, well we all know how wonderful and great Penny is. I loved the standing ovation that Spike, Xander, and Giles gave her after her little ‘talk’ with Angel. Cordy walking in and hitting Angel on the head was so funny, and her and Wes apologizing for him was very nice on their parts. And Angel letting loose Angelus acting the fool and ending up being knocked out by Xander was the perfect ending to the scene. And thanks for including Dru. She might be totally crazy and completely evil but I really love her, and I am looking forward to understanding everything she said concerning Angel. As you can tell I really love this story, thanks for the great update. |
| the bunny made me add Dru...I think she still has something to say...but I'm not sure! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 06:49 pm |
*grin* Ego much Angel? Bout time someone called him on his holier than thou attitude!
PLEASE let Xander stake him. Or better yet... chain him to the wall and use him for target practice *grin* with plastic stakes!
You even have Dru turnin her back on her "Daddy" *grin*
GO JACK! |
| Thanks sweetie...bit you have to know that letting Xander dust him woiuld be too easy! |
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| kim | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 06:40 pm |
It's too easy just to dust Angel. That lets him off the hook.
And, okay, he's a bit exaggerated here for comedy's sake. Still, before finding out about the Shanshu Prophecy, he was on a decent path. That's what could be done! Remove any memory of hope for a reward at the end of the tunnel for the lunkhead, with a spell that wouldnever let him remember if he heard about it again. |
| Do you really think that Angel was ever on any path that didn't lead to Buffy? |
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| FetchingMad Scientist | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 06:38 pm |
| *Stands to join the boys in their applause* Brava! Brava! Take a bow, Penny. Boy, do I wish *I* could dust that Lord-of-Hair-Gell! |
| Why dust when you can Bobbitt? |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 05:45 pm |
stupid Angel. I so love Cordy!
Can I hit him too and call him moron? Or can I join with Xander and dust him too? Oh mother, may I? I've been ever so good.
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| Yes sweetie, you can hit him...but what makes you so sure Xander gets the honours?? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 05:33 pm |
| another grate chappie. Hope they dust Angel, save the world a lot of grief. |
| ROFL...I'd prefer to see him suffer! LOL...but then I'm evil! |
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| firebird234 | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 05:03 pm |
| *shakes head* poor poor misguided neanderthal forheaded Angel thinks he's a gift from the powers that be to everyone. Can't wait to read what happens to him next maybe he gets his butt kicked around by Buffy *grins* Hmmm Angel kickage, always delightful to think about. |
| Angel is certainly not a happy camper, and I can't see that changing in the near future! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 04:48 pm |
Ahhh Xander and his constant 'Can I dust him' like a child on journey of 'are we there yet' very amusing but probably gets annoying after a while, He should just go and dust him and see if the powers still send him back, atleast then Angel will know for certain if he is the tool for the powers or just a plain simple fool.
OK was not expecting the stakage from the Slayer, that was soo cool, gotta love that, and moron, telling Buffy she looked like a famine victim, OK she was thinner in season 4 but that was mainly because she lost all her baby fat, so she didn't look like a little girl anymore...lousy pervert...bet if he was human he'd be working as a janitor in high school.
What's with the Dru part? someone going to let Xander dust him at last or was she refering to the fact now that he no longer is a champion for the powers and no one thinks he's gods gift to the earth he'll go back to being pathetic and eating Spike, which in itself proves how much better Spike is compared to Angel he got better less than a year after he got him Soul and that after the constant taunting from the first and Angel was a pathetic excuse for a vamp for a 100 years after.
Yeah two fills of Jack fics in one day.
Update soon
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| So many questions, Harry, guess telling you to keep reading is sorta redundant! Bless you for making my day |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 04:46 pm |
| LOL, I loved this chappie |
| you know, I'm seriously thinking of rationig you again! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 14. | 04/05/2006 04:32 pm |
| Bye-bye Daddy?!? Surely the Whelp doesn't get the privilege of dusting Angelus. His main crime is the forehead; brain is rattling around in there. More story please. |
| Guess you'll just have to wait and see! |
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| VWAlk | Chapter 13 | 08/01/2006 01:31 pm |
I love the fact that Xander is the first one who spoke up to support having the chip removed. And I'm glad that you had it removed. I must admit I like the chipless Spike better because it more clearly shows that it was his conscious (hehehe) decision to change.
Curious as to what is going to make him want to get a soul since he's probably not going to be attemting to rape Buffy in this dimension.
Good story |
| That is going to be addressed |
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| Verda | Chapter 13 | 07/30/2006 12:58 am |
| Excellent! Spike made it a group decision. I forgot about Glory, guess that settles that, for now. And Riley, we know that he wont give up that easily. Now for Angel. This is so much fun, I'm glad that I'm behind so I can keep reading this fantatsic story. |
| Wow...you really are making me all pleased and squidgy |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 13 | 04/10/2006 02:53 am |
| There will be Angel stakage, yes yes?? |
| you know that means no more bashing...right? |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 13 | 04/04/2006 08:07 am |
Hmm...talk about as predictable as a smelly fart in a crowded room, you just know it's going to happen no matter how much you wish it didn't...lol
Stupid Riley, obviously he was only in University because it was a cover, he does not seem to have the brain capacity to be in Uni, specially and a TA for a Phychology class, need advance analysis for that one. I wonder how the will work out now? Will Glory still think it's Penny who is the key like planned or is Dawn suddenly in danger?
Good thinking from Spike, making the whole group decide so they would still trust him after the chip, because they think it's their decision so if he goes on a killing spree it's the scoobies fault.
Well this was my 4th attempt at writing a reply, yesterday got as fas as the first line and got called away and never finished it. make that 5th, bloody thing gave me 'page cannot be displayed error' good thing I copied before hand.
Loving it
Update soon
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| lol...again Harry thanks for your insights! LOL |
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| gaillee | Chapter 13 | 04/04/2006 12:09 am |
| Wonderful! I love the interaction going on here. I get so much joy out of reading this story. Thank you so much. |
| Thank you for saying that...you've made my day |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 08:08 pm |
| That new name for Cardbored will be difficult to forget. WEG Poor Angelus. The Scoobies are on a roll and he's about to get mashed. This story is so much fun. More soon please. |
| I have to be honest the term 'Captian Tiny Tool' was offered to me by Redwulf50 |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 02:33 pm |
awesome chappie - I do like it *big happy stephy grin*
have to say LOVE this fic |
| Thank you sweetie and I have to say thankyou for letting me bounce my ideas off you and for all the help and advice you've given me |
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| Yzba | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 11:09 am |
| Have I told you that you are a genius????? Every chapter makes me laugh;) |
| Bless you...you just made my day! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 10:55 am |
| so that is angel at the door? love penny. buffy called Riley garbage. Xander is nice to spike.Buffy and Spike kissage. is there anything more to ask? oh love xander in this fic. |
| Xander was a surprise to me! LOL |
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| Tamara | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 10:44 am |
| I wondered when he would show up. |
| it was a given! lol |
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| daisy | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 10:32 am |
| can't wait for angels smackdown. lovely story can't wait for more. |
| Thank you...I'm kinda looking forward to that too! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 10:29 am |
| Captain Tiny Tool! ROFLMAO!!! Way to go Penny with her handling of Glorificus. Xander! I never thought I would say this... but Xander, how I adore thee. |
| It surprises me too...I blame the bunny |
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| sirc | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 10:15 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Neart | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 09:11 am |
Ya know I don't actually hate Riley or Angel, so why is it ya think that I get *very* satisfied when you give 'em what for?
heh heh heh, looking forward to the next satisfying chapter. |
| lol....and it's coming! |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 08:50 am |
| I don't blame Buffy a bit. I think my brain would be stuck on Spike kissage too! |
| ROFL...My fantasy is a great place to live! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 08:38 am |
woooot... kicks glory's arse... tosses riley out with the trash...
and NOW possible Angel stakeage...
STAKE THE POOF!
*grin* Great Chapter Babe! |
| thanks sweetie..I do love your reviews! |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 03:40 am |
| *scratches head* huh? who? what? I'm lost who came to be staked...Riley...or is Angel making an appearance...*crys anime tears* I don't like being confused...*whines* |
| The group didn't bother to look, they just assumed it was Riley, but Xander looked and greeted him Deadboy...Angel has entered the building! LOL |
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| Robyn | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 02:37 am |
| I loved how Xander got upset with Buffy when he thought that she had decided not to remove the chip, and that they all agreed that it needed to be gone. Loved how Spike tested it also. Also love that Riley doesn't know that it is gone. Penny's meeting with Glory was great, and the research party so that Spike can have the choice is perfect, I love that it all comes down to personal decisions. Thanks for the great chapter. |
| you're welcome...thank you for the review |
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| kim | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 02:24 am |
Ah, so Angel's there now.
Okay, so Dawn isn't the Key in this one? Did I forget that, or somehow miss it?
Spike get his soul NOW? Kinda early...thing is, with people encouraging good choices, he doesn't even need it. He already knows the difference between right and wrong. It's just all about the choices.
'Cause getting the soul? Not easy, during or after. He's going to be a mess from the sudden guilt over all his victims even without the First possibly using him. Though, the First won't have its power window now that Buffy's not dying and being brought back. That's what created the imbalance in the first place. |
lol...guess you'll have to read it from the start again! heehee
I mean I could tell you about the key...but...I'm evil! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 12:56 am |
| Nice!! This chapter was so much fun. Now Angel's there, this is gonna be great!! |
| maybe not for Angel! lol |
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| Irina | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 12:45 am |
| Great confrontation between Penny and Glory, I like the way Penny got all Spike-like on her. I loved Spike's Captain Tiny Tool nickname for Riley. Penny getting to bash Angel in person is gonna be so much fun. Fantastic update! |
| thank you sooo much |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 12:17 am |
| arrghhhh!!! i knew he would come!!! stupid ass!!! lol stake him 25 ways til sunday!!!! |
| LOL..such enthusiasm...all for little ol' Angel??? |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 13 | 04/03/2006 12:09 am |
| Oh, oh! I'll stake him, Me! Me! Let me do it, Please! |
| Stand in line! LOL |
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| Kat | Chapter 13 | 04/02/2006 11:59 pm |
| oh oh oh angels here. lol nice work cant wait to see all the reactions |
| neither can I! |
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| firebird234 | Chapter 13 | 04/02/2006 11:56 pm |
| Let me Guess....ummmm...ANGEL. Stupid vampire never learns. |
| lol....true! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 13 | 04/02/2006 11:35 pm |
| rofl, yay Xander...lovin' him right now! great update, jack! *squishes* |
| Thanks sweetie...he's not to bad at the moment is he??? |
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| Verda | Chapter 12 | 07/30/2006 12:39 am |
| Wow! Love this story, giving him the chance to be free, can't wait to see what he's going to say. Luckily, I don't have to. Ha ha! Great chappie. |
| Thank you...I am so glad you are enjoying it |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 12 | 04/10/2006 02:47 am |
| no more chip! no more chip! |
| we'll see! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 12 | 04/03/2006 10:45 am |
| i think i need to get myself a Spike. He rocks! How can Buffy not fall head over heels for him? |
| I would! |
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| Lou | Chapter 12 | 04/03/2006 09:28 am |
| What a good lad he is! |
| lol...he is isn't he |
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| sirc | Chapter 12 | 04/02/2006 09:56 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 12 | 04/02/2006 08:05 am |
| This story just keeps getting better and better! I love how Spike is already showing his love not just for Buffy but for the Summers women! I can't wait to see what Spike has to say and what Buffy's answer will be! |
| next chappie...I promise! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 08:08 pm |
| What's Spike going to say, please I need to know. You are just evil with cliff-hangers like this. Thank you for a fantastic chapter, I was so happy when I saw this update. So like Spike to be willing to sacrifice everything for someone he loves. I love that he didn't even hesitate in any of the challenges, but just always went for it a quickly as possible. I also loved that Buffy kissed Spike as part of her thanks. So sweet. |
| Yes it's true...I'm evil! LOL |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 06:58 pm |
| Awesome story, and great chapter! more please? |
| thank you...soon! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 03:14 pm |
| ugh!!! evil cliffie!!! whimpers... great update, jack! very awesome! |
| sorry...but you see...I'm evil! Its to be expected! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 02:21 pm |
| Good chapter. I am glad the you did not go into too much detail about the trials. I am sure that Buffy will say take the chip out but I am guessing that Spike will want her to think it over. He is so honorable. Maybe Buffy will realize that she trusts him. |
We'll just have to wait and see
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| Delicia | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 02:17 pm |
| Great chapter! He passed the trial much quicker than Angel, hah!! I hope the decision is in favor of the chip removal. |
| LOL..so do I! |
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| Emi | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 01:57 pm |
Hi!
I'm crazy about this story, everytime you update it isn't enough for my poor addicted brain. I want more!
And than I force myself to be rational and remember how often you update.
So a thousand thanks for this story, I always wanted to see something like this.
xxx |
| Thank you you've made my day! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 01:37 pm |
wooo way to go SPIKE! *grin*
*starts chanting... remove the chip... remove the chip*
Great Chapter hun! |
| LOL...thanks sweetie |
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| vladt | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 12:46 pm |
| very good chapter. what objection can spike have? thanks for the fun read. |
| guess you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out! LOL |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 12:43 pm |
| You are an evil woman for making me wait. At least I know it wouldn't be that long. I can guess that Spike doesn't want the chip taken out. He doesn't realize that he just doesn't need it. Well, it's Buffy's decision, not his, so he's just gonna have to deal because I know she's going to have it taken out. I'm pretty sure, anyway. I'm glad he passed the trials, but of course I knew he would. Yay for Joyce not dying. Buffy does need her mother around. Great chapter and the banner is just lovely=) |
| Thank you so much...spikes chip???? hmmm |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 12:10 pm |
| Spike is a fabulous and courageous warrior. He is, however, prone to silliness which makes me afraid he'll refuse the offer. Cute cliffie, BTW. More story please. |
| lol...it's coming! |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 10:53 am |
| Enjoyed! Can't wait for more. |
| It won't be long...promise |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 05:27 am |
| Oh yeah I'm loving this fic |
| you just wait...something's coming for wulfie! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 04:37 am |
"Wait."
Us too? |
| yup...heehee! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 03:50 am |
What did he mean by Wait? Does he want or does he not want to have his chip removed? or does he want his soul before he accepts the terms to have his chip removed!!!! Dude this Cliffhangers are not fun...well they ar, as they raise a whole bunch of questions and gets everyone all hot and bothered, but they are Not fun...because they frustrate you.
OK the tasks for the soul were more difficult than these in that they seem to be much more difficult, but not as easy as you are playing russion roulette with someone elses life so the pressure is higher....so I guess that it puts both tasks at even stevens.
Well anyway this task has gone past, do we get a little bit of Angel bashing soon? afterall they are in LA and as they say..when in Rome...um order Pizza? Idon't know the rest of the saying.
Well Jackers love the update
Update soon.
Harry |
Harry I have to post cliffies...I'm evil! Did you miss the memo? lol
I think some of what you want will be addressed in the next chapter...so keep reading!
Thanks for the review, as usual it made my day. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 03:29 am |
| jack is evil!!!! please update i wanna know!!!!! |
| Jack is evil! heehee |
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| kim | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 03:14 am |
| Whoa!!! Wow, i wasn't expecting the chip to possibly be removed already...quite an offer. I bet Spike's going to refuse, though. I bet he wants to earn the right to have it removed, the trust. Granted, after what he just did for Joyce, I think Buffy's pretty much in the 'yes' category, but he'll still have something to say about this. |
| He did do a good thing! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 03:05 am |
| nicely done sweetie *hugs* |
| Thank you...I love hugs! |
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| gaillee | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 02:32 am |
| Another fine chapter. Thank you. |
| ou are most welcome. |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 02:28 am |
| *weeps* I love Spike, I loved him before but that's beside the point. *wipes tears* Buffy had a thought, many thoughts actually. yay for growing feelings of non-resentment. *sniffles and smiles* healthy Joyce. Yay to healthy Joyce. |
| I just can't kill Joyce, sorry. |
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| Irina | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 02:24 am |
| Awww... Sweet moment between Spike and Buffy. I love how she rewarded him with a kiss. Can't wait to find out what Spike has to say. Great chapter! |
| Thank you, and you shouldn't have too long to wait. |
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| Kat | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 01:57 am |
| Hmmmm I have to wonder what his request will be. Although I think that I can make an educated guess. I loved how he went through the trails and never even paused in his decisions. It was wonderful |
| Thank you...It was a fun chapter to write. |
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| Yzba | Chapter 12 | 04/01/2006 01:51 am |
| more penny, more more more penny, pretty pretty please??? |
| lol...it's coming, I promise |
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| VWalk | Chapter 11 | 08/01/2006 01:22 pm |
As if Spike would hesitate to do anythign for Joyce.
Great chapter
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| True |
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| Verda | Chapter 11 | 07/30/2006 12:25 am |
| Now that Buffy understands her origins, maybe she can understand her attraction to Angel and Spike. This is going to be interesting to see exactly what powers she has yet to tap into. How wonderful to give William peace of mind regarding his mother. He can help Joyce? Just love it! You're quite a web-weaver Jacks. Great read. |
| Buffy still has a lot of issues to deal with |
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| Joyce | Chapter 11 | 04/29/2006 09:20 am |
| It's wonderful how you took an element from Angel that didnt't work and transfer it to a situation that will work. Genius. |
| Thank you, I believe that had there been any type of comunication between the two groups this situation could have actually been a possibility |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 11 | 04/10/2006 02:39 am |
| bleh... Joyce saving... why does everyone have to save Joyce? |
| I don't know about everyone else, but I did it cause I miss my own mum! |
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| sirc | Chapter 11 | 03/31/2006 12:49 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| Lou | Chapter 11 | 03/30/2006 08:51 am |
| Fab!! I'm loving this more each chapter. Can't wait for Xander to get what for! |
| Thanks so much |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 11 | 03/30/2006 05:10 am |
omg!! that is so great! i cant wait to read the other chapters!!!
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| lol...they're coming! |
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| fallen_angel | Chapter 11 | 03/30/2006 03:13 am |
| was Buffy jealous? looking forward to the trials |
| I don't know...was she???? |
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| gaillee | Chapter 11 | 03/30/2006 12:44 am |
| I truly love every single chapter of this tale. Thank you so much. I am so eager to see more... |
| Thank you for your kind review, I update every other day so yuo won't have long to wait! |
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| kim | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 10:19 pm |
Whoa...the trials for Joyce? Didn't see that coming, but yeah, he wouldn't hesitate one bit on that subject. Much with the ouchie.
Buffy's going to have a while before she falls asleep, I'm sure. Lots to think about. And Penny is so right about how denying her power makes her weak. She could and should have been so much more as a warrior. |
| I couldn't agree more |
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| vladt | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 09:09 pm |
| so spike. good chapter, good read. thanks |
| youre very welcome |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 07:51 pm |
| Weeping here. What a wonderful message for Spike. More story please. |
| OOOOH I made you cry...Yay, go me! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 06:47 pm |
| You know I love this, right??? |
| It crossed my mind! |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 06:29 pm |
| Spike is a true champion! I am really loving the way that this story is going and how wonderfully you are writing the characters! |
| Thank you so much...thats quite a compliment |
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| Isabel | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 06:10 pm |
| I was bored and decided to start reading a new fic to help with that little problem. I'm glad I chose yours. You really got me hooked. Amazing original character, interesting story. I'm really enjoying it, in case I didn't make it clear with my other reviews ;) I especially loved the ending of this chapter. How she comforted Spike about his choices with his mom and gave him a solution to help Joyce. I'm disappointed that I don't have more chapters of this great story to read right now. I'm hoping for an update soon. Great job! |
| I usually update every other day so the wait should be that long! |
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| Irina | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 05:32 pm |
| Penny totally rocked in this chapter! Loved her private conversation with Spike. *grabs some pom poms and joins the cheering section* I'm so happy Spike is gonna save Joyce! Fantastic chapter! |
| I'm pretty happy about that too! |
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| deedo | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 04:18 pm |
hmmmm....my (almost) daily dose of penny and everything is well
I really liked that Penny was able to pass Spike a message from his mother to give him some much needed closure
and Spike is gonna save Joyce
can't wait for more |
| Well it is coming...soon! |
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| FetchingMadScientist | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 04:17 pm |
| Spike gets a chance to save Joyce? *Shakes cheerleader pom-poms and does a zippy cartwheel* Go, Spike!!! |
| LOL...YAY |
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| Pin | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 04:01 pm |
| WOW, Penny is a busy little font of information! Spike gets to do the trials for Joyce - excellent. I'm starting to wonder what will happen to Penny after she's 'fixed' everything. I want her to be happy, too. Another great chapter. Thanks. |
| Penny's future...hmmmm? |
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| Richard | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 03:35 pm |
| That's rather ingenious, though I was imagining a vamped Joyce for a few moments there. |
| lol..nope I like joyce! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 03:21 pm |
| Nice chapter! I'm glad Penny told Buffy not to be looking for normal;I never understood her fascination with normal. Have I mentioned I love Penny! She's not mean and was willing to wait for a private moment with Spike to explain about his mum. He's gonna save Joyce,Yay! |
| Thank you sooo much |
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| Karyn | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 03:01 pm |
wonderful chapter jack!!
can't wait for Buffy to hear that he's risking the trials for her mother...sigh!!!! wonder what she'll think of that...lol |
| what would you think???? |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 02:50 pm |
Ahhh the trials that have been mentioned in so many fics yet I have never actually seen take place, besides what was the point of an episode of someone going through a bunch of trials and then telling them 'sorry can't help her, thank you for visiting and do come again' never made any sense to me.
So let me get this straight Spike has to take these trials for Joyce and then he has to go to Thingamejib...sorry Africa to take the trials to regain his soul? Bloody hell hope he's got a full tank of Petrol, he's going to need it I think.
Hehee Buffy got all jealous, wonder if she followed at a safe distance and spied on them, she's probably in her bedroom right now with a pair of binoculars spying on them, lol...well wishful thinking on my part anyway..lol
So if the Slayer is a normal girl who's merged with the vampire demon soul? if somebody were to jump start Spikes heart, would it mean that he'd be a like a Male slayer as his human self has already merged with his Vampire self? Well it's a thought anyway.
Still loving it
Update soon.
P.S. got bored so I made a banner for Paradox, (not that you don't have a great banner already, which I can't see because of my PC security settings) it's not one of my greatest pieces, (infact almost ashamed to publish it.) but I haven't made a proper banner for a fic in over two years, so I can be forgiven right?
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| Harry, you are too sweet for words |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 02:30 pm |
| the message from Anne to Spike was a wonderful touch. And Yay! Spike's going to save Joyce. |
| Spike deserves his chance to shine! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 02:25 pm |
| Okay, this chapter ended with my crying. I love how Penny was able to help Spike with his conflict about what happened with his mother. And his willingness to do anything for Joyce, that is one of the many things that make Spike so loveable. It is so great that someone finally pointed out to Buffy that she will never find happiness in normal. On the show Spike tried to tell her, but of course his telling was all sorts of mixed up. It’s nice that Penny is there to help her find the balance that she needs to truly be at peace with herself. |
| Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm not gonna lie...I'm really not sorry you cried, it was the response I hpoed for. |
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| Tamara | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 02:21 pm |
| Great way to deactivate the trigger the First would use on him . And it makes sense that the Trials would work for Joyce when they wouldn't work for Darla since Joyce isn't on her second chance. |
| Thank you...That was the bunny's idea! |
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| daisy | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 01:41 pm |
| wow. i just started to read this story and i'm really interested. can't wait for more. i love penny, more soon please |
| I try to update every other day, so the wait is not long |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 01:06 pm |
| *wipes tears* That was beautiful. *weeps* I love Spike and Penny is totally kick ass awesome. |
| Thank you...you've made my day! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 12:40 pm |
Spike's gonna save Joyce! Hurrah!
I think Buffy is jealous of Penny, but wont admit it!
Great chapter hun. |
| Thanks sweetie, you really think that??? Hmmm |
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| Kat | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 12:17 pm |
| AWWW spike working for Joyce. gotta love that. Penny is an intresting charater. for an OC she fits in seemlessly. this was an amazing chapter |
| Thank you...I appreciate it! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 12:17 pm |
| *grin* I like this of course Spike will do anything for his girls! *hugs* |
| He is the bestest! ;) |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 11 | 03/29/2006 11:57 am |
| Another great chp!! |
| thank sweetie |
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| Verda | Chapter 10 | 07/30/2006 12:06 am |
| No wonder Anya knows so much about the Council. Guess that's why they left Nikki Woods to survive, because to her demons were demons, the mission was her mission, no grey area for her. Penny does bring up a good point about the title of the slayer. Why not "Demon Slayer". This is fantastic Jacks, your one hell of a writer. |
| Thank you so much...I'm blushing |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 10 | 04/10/2006 02:32 am |
| Yes, why indeed? Why have I never thought of that before?? |
| Um...cause the writers didn't let them? |
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| sirc | Chapter 10 | 03/31/2006 12:44 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 10 | 03/29/2006 06:25 pm |
| This story just keeps getting better and better! I think that our blonde duo might just be the ones prophecised about! Off to read the next chapter! |
| Thank you...you never know, you might be right...yuo might not be too! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 10 | 03/29/2006 02:26 pm |
| I sense a major reveal about to happen. Again, lovely use of Anya's history -- and all this policy change because of a vengeance spell & a prophecy! |
| it's getting complicated! |
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| Marena | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 02:04 pm |
| wow, just -wow. |
| thanks, just -thanks |
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| Delicia | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 01:41 pm |
| Nice! Lovely way you had the gang willing to help Spike. It's good that you have Anya explaining the Council, it gives her a place to shine. |
| Thanks I like Anya, I think she was wasted in the show! |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 10:38 am |
| Ooh cliffhanger....meanie *smiles* love it...can't wait to read more. |
| yup..thats me ...evil! thanks muchly for the review |
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| gaillee | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 10:33 am |
| Ah hah! Here comes another major revelation. And...the slayer and the champion? Super good update! Thanks! |
you are welcome
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| Lou | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 06:40 am |
| Love the thickening plot! |
| lets hope it doesn't get too thick! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 04:37 am |
| excellant story sweetie - I am intrigued. I can;t wait to see where you are taking this. |
| Thank you...neither can I! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 03:39 am |
| hmm... ? i know there is some hidden message behind that last line.. but i can quite put my finger on it.. |
| guess you'll have to wait to find out! LOL |
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| Robyn | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 02:58 am |
| I knew the council was evil. Actually I guess we all knew that the council was evil. I loved the explanation of why the council tries to get rid of its slayers so young, which is the only thing that makes sense with something like the Cruciamentum. I am really looking forward to Penny's explanation of why Buffy is called a vampire slayer. Really loved Anya in this and I really loved how Xander was the first to speak up for Spike, and that they all had no problem with his request. Loved also Buffy's one demand which makes perfect sense, and will help Spike out even more. Thanks for the great update. |
| You are more than welcome, thanks for the great review! |
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| kim | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 01:28 am |
Heh, heh...good question, Penny.
Can't wait for her answer to that one.
And joining for Spike and Buffy...gee didn't see that coming. ;P |
| LOL...humour loving the concept! |
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| Irina | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 01:08 am |
| Intriguing prophecy... can't wait to learn more about the joining between the Slayer and the champion part of it. Great chapter! |
| Its not smutty...well not much! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 12:47 am |
Vampire Slayer? Well that's a new take on it, so she's part vampire who is a slayer? would make as much sense than any other theory.
Wait a minute, if the prophesy was about a slayer and a champion wouldn't Angel be on the hit list? he has afterall been prancing around calling himself the champion of the people?
This prophesy sounds mighty similar to the prophesy from your last story Jack, could you be accused of plagerising your own work? naughty naughty...lol
Well loving it.
update soon
Harry |
It's Buffy ..of course theres a prophecy! As to similarities...well I think that all you'll find is the similarity that Buffy and Spike were destined...and really was there any doubt about that?
As I don't think Angel is a champion I didn't catch that little problem....hmmmm, have to fix that.
as always,
loving your reviews
Jack |
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| Neart | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 12:20 am |
| Dun dun dunnnn! oooohhhh does buffy get fangs?? |
| lol...it's a thought |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 12:07 am |
I guess it's good to know the Watchers' Council wasn't always the Wankers' Council. Penny is a good mouthpiece for the PTB. More story please.
BTW, awesome banner!! |
| Thanks MarzBar and the banner is thanks to Karyn. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 10 | 03/28/2006 12:01 am |
| great update jack! and yay for no licking of Riley...rofl!!! |
LOL...I'm still laughing at the imagry of that one!
Thanks Sweetie |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 11:11 pm |
| OH OH Tell us why she is called the vampire slayer please! LOL I love this fic. |
| lol...you silly! Thanks sweetie, you've made my day. |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 10:13 pm |
My mouth hangs open as a read the last sentance on the page and fall off the edge of my seat, as I am asulted by yet another dromatic cliff hanger. :grumpy:
More please. |
| Sorry...but, hell who am I kidding...EVIL! |
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| vladt | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 09:50 pm |
| good question penny, delightful chapter. thanks for the read. |
| you are more than welcome! |
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| Kat | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 08:25 pm |
| oh good question. I loved Buffy's stipulation. It makes perfect sence. and oh wow i cant even think of the right words but i wait impatiantly for the next update. |
| Should be long, I update Penny every alternate day! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 08:23 pm |
oooo more powers for the buffster.
And can I just say... BLOW UP THE COUNCIL! *grin*
*gives Jack a nekkid spike drizzled in chocolate* |
| All you want...doesn't mean its gonna happen though! Heehee...evil! lol |
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| deedo | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 08:16 pm |
nice to see that Anya is finally allowed to contribute some of her knowledge
the prophecy seems to be similar to the one from the Guardians, wich worked out quite nicely
I like the direction the story is heading with Pennys last question can't wait for more soon |
| Its not meant to be like the guardians prophecy...damn I'll have to fix that! |
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| Shelly | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 08:14 pm |
| Hmmm? Interesting. I always felt that Anya was not used to her fullest potential. I loved that everyone is willing to give Spike a chance. The male bonding between him, Giles and Xander is priceless. You are doing great with this fic, can't wait for more!!! |
| Thank you so much. |
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| Tamara | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 08:12 pm |
| Excellent question, Penny.I wonder what Buffy's answer is gonna be. |
| Me too! heehee |
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| Bridget | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 07:54 pm |
| Very interesting. I always knew Anya could have offered more to the show that just talking about orgasms. Will anyone ask the question what does it mean to have the slayer and a champion joined? |
| You'll see! |
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| maryperk | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 07:53 pm |
| Cool chappy |
| thanks sweetie...couldn't do it without you! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 10 | 03/27/2006 07:45 pm |
| excellent as always, but can we lick Riley again?? |
| You want to LICK Riley. Can I say ewwww! |
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| VWalk | Chapter 9 | 08/01/2006 01:11 pm |
So does Spike get to kick some Angel ass in the near future? Here's hoping so.
Great story. |
| You'll just have to wait and see |
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| Verda | Chapter 9 | 07/29/2006 11:35 pm |
| Sorry it took me so long to get back to this incredible story. Oh ya, the poofer will definately be there. So great to see Xander be a man for a change and except Spike for what he is to them all now. Always hated that Spike was so isolated from the other males. Another great chapter. Great read. |
| Thank you...I don't actually know how the Xander/Spike friendship happened...I blame the bunny |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 9 | 04/10/2006 02:24 am |
| Ohhhhh my poor Spikey *pounces him and hugs him tight* |
| Hugging is good! |
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| sirc | Chapter 9 | 03/31/2006 12:39 pm |
| great chapter |
Thank you
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 9 | 03/29/2006 02:21 pm |
| Love the reveal of Angel-as-human day. Can I say OUCH about Spike's hand? AWWW Xander got Spike chicken wings. |
| I KNOW...blame the bunny! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 9 | 03/27/2006 02:55 pm |
| i likey the chapter *hugs* |
| thanks sweetie...That makes me soooo happy! |
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| Lou | Chapter 9 | 03/27/2006 04:52 am |
| Ahhh - bless him! |
| he is sweet! |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 9 | 03/26/2006 08:08 am |
| awwwww! *gives Spike a big hug... and sneaks a kiss in 2* ;-D I am totally in love with this fic! Penny Rules! |
| I'd like to give him more than that! lol Thank you for you review |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 11:41 pm |
| AWESOME! Love it. |
| (Giggles)Thank you (jack's gone all shy) |
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| Robyn | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 09:19 pm |
| I love, love, love the change in attitude everyone is having towards Spike. And one of my favorite lines in this chapter was “With that one look, Xander let go of past prejudices and became a man.” When is read it I did my own little happy dance. And Buffy’s ‘valley girl persona’ so perfect for reviewing what Angel had told her and informing him that he was not needed as she had Spike. And I loved how she told Angel that his ‘get-out-of-jail-free card just expired’ and that he was not welcome in Sunnydale. And her wanting to be friends with Spike having enjoyed the camaraderie that he had experienced with Xander and Giles. And Spike always there for Buffy, even when that meant having a crushed hand. And I love how Penny gave Spike back his dignity, and that he chose to be a champion. I love how Spike always chooses to be a champion rather than have it forced upon him. Thank you for another fantastic chapter to this story. |
| You're welcome, thanks for the fantastic review |
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| Karyn | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 08:53 pm |
| wonderful chapter jack!! just great! |
| Thanks sweetie...wonderful banner, I just love it! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 08:31 pm |
| Great chapter. I hope that is the last we hear of Angel, but I am sure it isn't. Angel is so sure he knows what is right for Buffy. The ending was perfect. Yeah Spike. |
| Thank you...you are most kind |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 08:11 pm |
| Spike is already choosing the hard road?!? More story please. |
| That's spike...the trail of the champion! |
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| vladt | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 07:31 pm |
| good update, angel bashing, buffy praising spike, and xander... well, two out of three. thanks for the read. |
| lol...sorry about that...don't know what happened with xander there! blame the bunny |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 07:16 pm |
| aww.. thats great.. if the poof turns up i cant wait to see him blowing in the wind.. lol the banner is awesome!! |
| thank you...many people want Angel dust! lol Thank you about the banner too, Karyn did an awesome job |
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| Irina | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 06:20 pm |
| What a lovely end to a wonderful chapter... I really enjoyed it! p.s. Very pretty banner you added, I like how mysterious Penny appears in it. |
| Thank you...Karyn did a wonderful job on the banner didn't she! |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 05:56 pm |
**Xander let go of past prejudices and became a man** Wow! This definitely must be a fictional story because this never happened on the show!lol. I always hoped that they would let Xander be the goofy non prejudiced guy that we met in the very beginning of the show and not the one in later seasons!
I really loved Buffy's reaction to what Angel told her! I could so see Angel showing up though (for her own good of course) to make her understand that he is a champion and everything he does (like seduces a teen, running away, messing with people's minds) was all for his love for her. I so hope that he gets the crap beat outta him!
Loving the story and how everyone seems to be taking the information in stride and actually is listening! I see some good things coming of this on the horizon! |
| I do apologise for the whole Xander situation...I really have no idea how it happened! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 05:24 pm |
I vant to be champion, well he could always football for Manchester Uniter...well that wouldn't work what with his sun alergy..heheee
Right so no doubt tall dark and forehead will be making an appearence soon, You have to wonder what's in that large craniom of his don't you?Sawdust no doubt.
Spike wants to be a Champion so he is going to go fight for his soul sooner rather than later. Knowing spike he'll probably do it singing Queen 'We are the champions'
Buffy won't have to sacrifice herself because Glory thinks the key is non tangible so no self sacrificing, which in turnmeans no abusive Buffy and back from the dead Buffy so no weakening of the gateways of dimensions, so no The First meaning no need for Spike to sacrifice himself and end up as a ghost at W&H...cool amazing how changing one thing like the person who Glory thinks is the Key can change the entire structure of season 6 and 7, you can probably also add Willow not going all end the world because with them being friends with the gang Spike needs not make a BuffyBoy and Warron can run away like he originally planned.
well still loving it, off to bed now.
Update sooooooon
Harry
P.S I like to speculate and waffle on, ti doesn't mean I expect getting answers to all my questions. unless ofcourse they don't give away the plot. been reviewing like this for five years now. |
| Its great Harry, I really do like to read your reviews...they give my great joy! |
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| Kat | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 05:12 pm |
| Oh wow nice Spike thoughts there. And total angel bashing right on |
| Thank you. |
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| Delicia | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 04:55 pm |
| Nicely done! I love the friendliness the Scoobies are showing to Spike, especially Xander. I'm almost hoping Angel does decide to go to Sunnydale, that way Buffy can show him she wasn't kidding. |
| I don't how the Xander thing happened...damn bunny! |
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| deedo | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 04:51 pm |
it would be a surprise if Angel isn't going to show up to "rescue" Buffy from Spikes evil clutches
I always thought all Spike needed was a little support and some pointers in the right direction and he would have been that champion years ago
I'm glad Buffy is not only accepting of all the facts Penny provides, but also tries to act on what she learned, no vaction for Buffy in egypt this time around
great update |
| I don't know that she's accepting them all straight away...Buffy does like to take her time! |
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| Fetching Mad Scientist | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 04:34 pm |
| AWW,Xander's all growed-up. It's good to see. Spike seems to be the embodiment of the saying, "Cold hands, warm heart." He didn't even flinch when she crushed his hand, now *that's* love! |
| I know, wouldn't it be nice to know that kind of love!(Big Sigh) |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 04:24 pm |
And so a new champion is born....
More please!
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| It's coming...I promise |
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| kim | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 03:51 pm |
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That last bit from Spike was the best. |
| Thank you...I liked it! |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 03:49 pm |
| Yeah, he better say that. Stupid Angel, this fiction makes me wanna smack him, too...lol! If he does show up in Sunnydale and I have a feeling he will, maybe one of them can do it for me. Good chapter, I was all happy to see an update=) |
| I am so pleased I could make you happy! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 03:42 pm |
I think Angel will show up too. He never knows what he's supposed to leave alone and what he is supposed to deal with.
Great bit where Buffy tells him him everyone likes Spike and he's a better fighter. Hee!
And Wes is definitely the right person to pick to get rid of Angel if necessary.
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| Thank you...I think I agree with you and Penny! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 03:42 pm |
ohhh poor spike... that had to hurt!
Champion Spike! GO SPIKE!
*sets dustage trap for angel when he shows his forehead in sunnydale* |
| ROFL...always a pleasure Shadow! |
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| spikeslovebite | Chapter 9 | 03/25/2006 03:37 pm |
| is it wrong of me to hope Angel shows up? LMAO |
| Nope...I'm hoping he does too! lol |
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| Chapter 8 | 08/01/2006 01:03 pm |
| its always been a sticking point with me that Angel was only doing the right thing because of the promise of redemption. Thank you for addressing it. Also - "...apparently the moment of happiness that Angel experienced, when he took the virginity of an underage child wasn’t matched by the birth of his son.” THANK YOU FOR THAT! roflmao. |
| You are most welcome, It always upset me that no one pointedthat out in the show |
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| Verda | Chapter 8 | 07/18/2006 05:18 am |
| Oh, he is so busted, love this Penny. Great job, thanks for the read. |
| Thank you...I do admit to having a giggle or two at Angel's and Riley's expences |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 8 | 05/28/2006 12:28 pm |
| Yep Pedophile Liar Murderer what else is Angel capable of |
| pretty much anything! |
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| Joyce | Chapter 8 | 04/29/2006 08:50 am |
| And the light of truth keeps coming! Great points on selfishness versus redemption. |
| Thank you, I'm surprised more people don't get that |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 8 | 04/10/2006 02:17 am |
| ooooooooo, heh heh heh... I vote for Angel dustage... solve a lot of problems... yup |
| There are other options...I have a favorite! Can you guess? |
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| Isabel | Chapter 8 | 03/29/2006 05:40 pm |
| In your teeth, Angel! OK, this story is making me childish. That conversation with Angel got quite a few giggles out of me. So fun to see him squirming. I'm so glad the powers sent a smart, eloquent, Spuffy shipper from the other dimension instead of sending an Angel worshipper ;) Go Spike! (See what I mean?.. Childish! lol) |
| Penny is definately a spuffy lover! |
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| oracleholly | Chapter 8 | 03/29/2006 02:14 pm |
| So so good... I'm just speechless with how good this is |
| well as long as you can still write! LOL |
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| Delicia | Chapter 8 | 03/25/2006 04:42 pm |
| I'm loving Penny more and more! She is awesome. She's right too, how can Angel protect Buffy when he's in LA. And he didn't think that was her decision anyways? Oh, that's right he never did. |
| Rofl...Silly you, Buffy allowed to make her own decisions? What were you thinking! LOL |
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| sirc | Chapter 8 | 03/25/2006 02:02 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| deedo | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 09:18 pm |
“Buffy lives in Sunnydale, Angel. How can you protect her from L.A.?” Penny quietly asked.
I always wondered about that myself!! I mean it obviously did worlds of good to Buffy and kept her save for the rest of her life.... wait no, she faced off against a hellgod, without Angel even offering to help her, and died..... human Angel could have accomplished that, but who am I to argue with the allknowing TDF
I loved the Giles/Spike/Xander bonding over mocking and tormenting Angel
btw can't read that fic at work anymore  Penny's me almost rolling on the floor laughing everytime!!! |
| Sorry about that...I didn't mean to get you in trouble! lol |
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| deedo | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 09:10 pm |
| >> “Buffy lives in Sunnydale, Angel. How can you protect her from L.A.?” Penny quietly asked. |
| thats what i wrote! lol |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 01:22 pm |
Penny is my new hero! I love how she laid it all out on the line without any bullshit and called it like it was! I can't wait to see how Angel deals with all the revelations and if Buffy kicks his tail or not! Then again, maybe it will be Cordy, she is much closer, lol.
I about fell out of my seat myself with the antics of Giles, Xander and Spike! You write them so well and I can just see the 3 of them acting just like that! Oh please update soon! |
| Thank you so much...I try to update every other day...so soon! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 11:04 am |
| Great chapter. Great Angel bashing. In your story Angel's motives are purely selfish. I was watching an episode of Angel the other day and it appeared to me that every thing Angel did was so that he received credit for it. I wish there had been an episode in BTVS that had been written like this. |
| so do I...so do I. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 10:20 am |
| wonderful chapter jack! i'm voting for angel dustage...rofl |
| Most people are Karyn...and thanks sweetie |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 09:52 am |
*looking for a virtual axe that can reach Angel* Here, kitty, kitty! Come on Angel... I'm not going to play hide and seek with you forever... I'm gonna find you! *lol* Angel? please die a horrible death ;-)
That repeating thing... soo not my fault that was the mouse! (A) |
| Rofl...I'll try to work in an axe for you! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 05:50 am |
| I love this story sweetie - it was great to see Angel exposed as the selfish being he is... wonderful fab! |
| Thankyou...I couldn't do it without you! |
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| Lou | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 03:13 am |
| I always wanted that to come out! Excellent. |
| me too! thanks |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 03:06 am |
| Penny is ripping up the Buffy/Angel verse something fierce! I always hated the line about protecting Buffy and then she died soon after with not a glimpse of Angelus. More please. |
| It's coming...soon! ;) |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 02:10 am |
ahhhh so Darla got pregnent after she was turned...see I didn't know that, I don't watch Angel so wasn't sure how that happened. Thanks for clearing that up.
Angel is in sooo much trouble, maybe Buffy should go over to LA beat the snot out of him, he had her mind altered that is belived by many to be a form of mind rape, (It's things like this why so many people dislike Angel/Buffy pairing.)
Stupid excuse that was anyway how can you claim to protect someone who is stronger, faster and smarter than you from a hundred miles away? someone who doesn't need protecting in the first place, who according to Spike needs a reason to live so they can protect themselves...wanker.
YEAH I was right about the moment of happiness part...lousy peodophile should not be allowed near kids, if he comes to SunnyD make sure he stays away from Dawn *shudders*...lol amazing how something that was perfectly acceptable in the show can be made to sound so dirty and wrong isn't it? I guess it's all about the angle you look at it.
I personally vote for the *snip* *Snip* ;) just so he can't reproduce even if he did become human
Well still loving
Update soon
Harry |
| Rofl...Harry I love your reviews! |
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| kim | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 02:05 am |
Uh, one thing...Cordy knows about that day. Angel told Doyle, and Doyle told Cordy.
So, Spike's going to seek his soul even without the event that happened in SR? If Riley leaves, and Buffy doesn't die because Penny is there to help, then their whole destructive affair won't take place. They have the chance to start a healthy relationship, if Buffy can grasp internally how Spike is a different kind of vampire. Isn't it more important that he has her acceptance without the soul? |
Guess you'll just have to read to find out! LOL
Thanks for the correction..I wasn't aware of that!
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| Irina | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 01:14 am |
| LOL... The Bobbit line was great and I liked the boys reactions to it. Penny was awesome in this chapter as always. Wonderful update! |
| thank you...it'd good to know when others appreciate my sense of humour! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 01:11 am |
| This is such a fantastic chapter, and I love how all the half truths and flaws in Angel’s reasoning are being brought forth. And Buffy so deserves to know the truth of her lost day. Thanks for the great update. |
| You're welcome, thanks for take the time to review |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 12:35 am |
| Uh oh...Angel's in deep shit...yes Buffy realizes some things...YAY! |
| It's about time! lol |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 8 | 03/24/2006 12:22 am |
*gasp* poor buffy.. i bet she's outraged that he *used* her for his own pleasure..
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 11:52 pm |
| Man, I'm out of chapters. I was really getting into it. I just started reading this story now and I'm loving it. This Penny chick is awesome and so insightful. There are a lot of good points that I never even considered before. I'm really glad I decided to read this. Can't wait for more=) |
| It won't that long a wait...I promise! |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 11:40 pm |
| Go Penny, go, go! Verbaly kick that poof's butt! Ha! |
| lol...people seem to be having a mild problem with Angel! LOL |
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| kat | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 11:21 pm |
| Oh no poor buffy. Oh dear this one could hurt |
| just a little! |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 11:03 pm |
| OMG! I just made it home tonight and had to come check out your fic to see what I have been missing all week. COMPLETELY FANTASTIC! |
| lol...I am so glad you are enjoying it...I always enjoy yours! |
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| vladt | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 10:50 pm |
| great ending to great update. thanks for the read. |
| you're welcome...thanks for the review! ;) |
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| Tamara | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 09:27 pm |
Excellent question, Penny! I always wondered about that one myself.
Wesley's question makes sense. The reason Wesley believed in the fake prophecy is because he credited Angel with more depth than Angel is capable of.After all, most new parents who thought they would never be able to have a child would get a moment of perfect happiness from thier child's first smile, thier first word, when thjey learn to walk.
Good idea Bobbiting Angel. I thought it would have been better to have Angel have excruitating genital pain instead of losing his soul over a moment of happiness. That would definitely knock the happy right out of him. |
| rofl...always a pleasure to knock the happy right out of Angel! |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 09:11 pm |
“You could Bobbitt Angel.”
Wanna borrow my giant, rabid mutant squirrels? |
| rofl...nice image! lol |
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| Fetching Mad Scientist | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 09:02 pm |
| Angel is sooo BUSTED! I like watching him squirm. I wonder how they'll all react when Penny tells them who the real Champion is? I can't wait!:-D |
| lol... so glad you're enjoying this! |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 08:49 pm |
| Yesss All of Angel's lies and secrets are being revealed, I love this story. |
thank you sooo much
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| Shadow | Chapter 8 | 03/23/2006 08:36 pm |
ooo I love Penny. no holds barred with that girl.
*awaits the stakage of the pedophile* |
| you'll have a while! lol |
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| VWalk | Chapter 7 | 08/01/2006 12:36 pm |
| I love to hate Angel, so I'm really digging this chapter. Will the Angel torment continue? Let's hope so. Great story. I really like Penny. |
| Angel will be a bg part of the story |
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| Verda | Chapter 7 | 07/18/2006 05:10 am |
| Oooo, She's cold-blooded,I like her. No pussy-footing around with her. Excellent story. |
| Thank you...she likes who she likes |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 7 | 05/28/2006 12:24 pm |
| LOL damn Penny put him on the spot |
| she's good...what can I say |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 7 | 04/10/2006 02:06 am |
| *howls laughing* More busting his chops! YAY! |
| It is fun! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 7 | 03/29/2006 02:10 pm |
| Oh my... Yay for the infusion of Cordy.. I love how she just cut to the meat of the matter. And Penny...again. I LOVE HER |
| LOL...she's a pistol |
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| sirc | Chapter 7 | 03/25/2006 01:57 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 7 | 03/24/2006 01:17 pm |
| Go Penny! (Starts doing the snoopy dance with Spike and Xander!) God I love this story! Off to read the next chapter! |
| Thank you...you've made my day! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 7 | 03/24/2006 12:59 am |
| This chapter was so great, I love how Penny told Buffy that her pout didn't work on her. And Spike and Xander's happy dance and general humor sharing is so great. And Cordy jumping in and giving information was fun and Buffy ignoring Angel was so perfect. Love this story. |
| thank you so much |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 7 | 03/23/2006 03:03 pm |
You know I like this Penny lass she's got a way to get under Angel's skin...I can't believe I never thought of this but why does someone who was evil and is claiming to be still feel guilt and seeking redemption go by the name Angel? surely that would be an insult to real Angels, if I was a PTB i'd be royally pissed off I tell you, it's kind of condesending and suggests he all good and great and always has been and we all know what a wanker he is. False advertising I tell you, could be sued for that you know.
Anyway where was I? no idea, so if Angel was getting them hallucinations (needs to change his blood supplier sounds like) does that mean he's already done the business with Darla, so she is already pregnent, and if Drusilla doesn't kill her to turn her does that mean she'll die before giving birth because she was going to die as she had some form of STD?...Hey I just realised she really was a whore so Spike was calling her what she was not being insulting.
You know what i've realised? A: I think waaaay too much and B: There are waaaay to many variables when you are writing Alternate History Fics which is why I don't write fics...that and I never finish my fics.
Well this was obviously the appitiser before the main course of Angel bashing is serve, can't wait ;)
Well update soon
Harry. |
Darla was dying of an advanced case of syphillus, she was on deaths door when Dru turned her in the show...so even if she was pregnant...she would have died before it was born had she not been turned.
As I understood the situation, Darla got pregnant after she was turned it was the time she had sex with angel after he had tried to burn up her and drusilla. Then he lied about it to the AI team.
I'll keep writing...you keep reading! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 7 | 03/23/2006 01:34 pm |
Ohhh me likey me likey ... more more more more ... please I ask nicely *hugs*
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| lol...it's coming...I promise |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 10:56 pm |
| I Love this story, can't wait to read more Angel bashing. |
| It's coming! |
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| k | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 02:58 pm |
| another awesome chapter! |
Thank you so much
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| Ashley Granchester | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 11:35 am |
I forgot, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE HAPPY DANCE FROM SPIKE AND XANDER . . . I always thought that pair can be hell of fun if they combine their forces.
Ash. |
| they both have the same childish sense of humour! lol |
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| Ashley Granchester | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 11:35 am |
I forgot, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE HAPPY DANCE FROM SPIKE AND XANDER . . . I always thought that pair can be hell of fun if they convine their forces.
Ash. |
| me too! LOL |
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| Ashley Granchester | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 11:31 am |
I really, really, really love this story . . . YAY for Penny an all the revelations, I'm 100% in Riley being out of the picture for his judgemental behaivour and simply because I really hate him in the show, and also YAY for kicking Angel's ass.
I so can not wait to read what is going to happen next, so please keep it up soon and let us know what the brooding one has to say to defend himself (I'm gussing somethin like "I did it because I love you . . . blah blah blah" nothing new, just the same old excuses).
Thank you for giving us this really amazing and original story.
Ash. |
| Thank you Ash...you've made my day! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 09:01 am |
| Another great chapter. It is good to read how petulant Angel is. |
| Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it. |
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| Lou | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 03:42 am |
| Sock to the old git! |
| lol |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 01:40 am |
| *sits back after joining spike and xander in their happy dance* ;) lol! explain that one angel! |
| REPEATING |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 01:40 am |
| *sits back after joining spike and xander in their happy dance* ;) lol! explain that one angel! |
| DENIAL! lol |
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| Neart | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 01:39 am |
| just incase I haven't made this clear, I'm really enjoying this fic and Penny is deadly. |
| She's a sweetheart...that is if your sweetheart is a cobra! |
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| Neart | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 01:33 am |
| *howl* How could you leave it there? I've been a good girl, patiently waiting with my comfy cushions and popcorn for the big pervert to be flayed but you just teased me with it! pls flay, I mean update soon! |
| Um...cause I'm evil! I thought this was a known fact!LOL |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 12:59 am |
| hahaha "Shes prolly to old for him?" < hilarious!! anyway.. great chapter.. lol the broody one wasnt too happy about that and GO PENNY for bringing up the day he took back, is she gonna give buffy those memories back at all? hmmm *ponders* |
| She doesn't have any magical powers! lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 12:43 am |
| ROTFLMAO!! Angel comfort!?! Gotta love the insistence that Cordelia and Wesley listen in to help cut down on Angelus lying to cover his ass. More story please. |
| It's coming...promise! |
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| Kat | Chapter 7 | 03/22/2006 12:22 am |
| oh no angel is in trouble now yikes. YAHOO lol |
| you think????LOL |
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| Tamara | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 11:23 pm |
It fits that Angel would try and manipulate even a simple thing like a phone call.
And ohhhh, the day he took back with a lame ass excuse for doing it. He is so toast. |
| lol...lets see how Penny handles it! |
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| vladt | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 11:12 pm |
| that's the way penny. good update, fun fic. thanks |
| thank you...glad you're enjoying it |
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| gaillee | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 10:50 pm |
| I so luuuv this tale. Thank you...Thank you...Thank you! I am rolling on the floor at Angel. I love how well Buffy is handling this...also, Spike and Xander having so much fun...Great job! |
Thank you...I am having fun
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 10:18 pm |
“I believe that the subject at hand is far more important than your need for trivialities, but if you’d prefer to waste time on such matters, perhaps we should start with the day you had the Powers take back?”
**is bowing at Penny's feet**
Hell yeah! Penny RULES! |
| LOl...thank you |
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| Jamie | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 09:49 pm |
| Oh this is so cool, I just about squeed at that last little bit, exceptional chapter cant wait for more |
| thank you...I am sorry about the sqeeing though...I'll try to keep that in mind! lol |
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| Irina | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 09:19 pm |
| LOL... I liked the way Cordy summed things up. Penny vs. Angel is gonna be so much fun. Great chapter! |
You think Angel stands a chance???
Thank you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 08:39 pm |
| Ooh, now Angel's really gonna get it *does the happy dance with Spike and Xander*. Keep up the great work!! |
lol...angel lives to backpeddle!
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 08:06 pm |
| LOL Go, Penny! |
| Thank you so much...heehee |
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| kim | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 07:58 pm |
| Once again...I LOVE PENNY!!!! |
| So do I...my sister's name is Penny! lol |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 07:45 pm |
| Oh man, oh man is he soooo busted!! roflmao! cant wait for the next chappie. |
| lol...coming soon: Angel backpeddling! |
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| aspikefan | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 07:36 pm |
| You can't update this story fast enough for me. This is very good story |
| thank so much...I try, but I have two running at once so I can only update every two days! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 07:35 pm |
| wonderful...at first i was confused cause i thought 'ive read this already' and then i remembered...cause i did...lol....great chapter! |
| lol...that'll teach ya! thanks sweetie! |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 07:09 pm |
| oh..go penny go penny go penny. Angel needs to be smacked!! *pouts and whines* can we smack him please?? I'll be good and I'll give you a cookie. |
| LOL...but I don't eat cookies sweetie! |
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| Shelly | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 06:42 pm |
Can I just say that I LOVE Penny.
What a great concept. She is the one that we all hoped for during the series to bring out the delusions the Scooby group lived under.
Keep up the updates! I look forward to them. |
| Thank you kindly, I will try to keep them coming! |
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| spikeslovebite | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 06:26 pm |
| ARGH!!! *flails some more* honey you gotta quit with the cliffies...my old heart can't take it lol |
| lol...but I'm evil! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 06:26 pm |
*CACKLE*
“She’s prolly too old for him.” Spike offered innocently.
I LOVE IT! Nothin like a lil dig at a pedophile.
Here's hoping Penny knocks Angel off his "holier than thou" perch. |
| we'll see! lol |
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| Sarah | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 06:21 pm |
| I love this story! |
| thank you so much |
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| Yzba | Chapter 7 | 03/21/2006 06:19 pm |
| Go Penny!!! |
| lol |
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| VWalk | Chapter 6. | 08/01/2006 12:23 pm |
Anya is so refreshingly Anya (...I'm not paying for the call if its not Magic Box business.") Actually all of the characterizations are very real.
Still loving the story. |
| Thank you...I try to keep within the psycology of the character |
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| Verda | Chapter 6. | 07/18/2006 05:02 am |
| She pulls no punches does she. Yes let's talk to the pedophile. This should be interesting. Great job Jacks! |
| Thanks...I have to agree, but then I modelled the character after my sister...she doesn't pull her punches either |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 6. | 05/28/2006 12:21 pm |
| dumm da dummm dumm dummm or Hey Angel it's for you. |
| rofl...sensing some hostility there! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 6. | 04/10/2006 02:01 am |
| Muahahahaha, bust his chops! Bust his chops!!! |
| lol... you seem like you are enjoying this? LOL |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 6. | 04/08/2006 10:08 pm |
| Riley is such a jerk. I am so happy that Penny showed just what type of a man he was. Excellant sweetie! |
| Thank you...I have to agree that Riley is a jerk! lol |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 6. | 03/29/2006 02:06 pm |
| oh Jacks, I'm so enjoying this. I love Buffy's dismissal of Riley, Penny's consolation to Xander about Jesse.... Xander finding out he & Spike had Darla hatage in common. It's wonderful. |
| Thank you...I love her too, this one's my baby1 |
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| sirc | Chapter 6. | 03/25/2006 01:52 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| D.K. | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 09:25 pm |
| This is going great. Penny is a line them up and knock them down type I enjoy. Keep those chapters coming. |
| I will attempt to do just that! lol |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 08:33 pm |
Angel's gonna get it! Hee hee! (claps hands in glee) I can't wait to see what happens when they get him on the phone and Penny reveals all!
I am really glad that Buffy kicked Riley to the curb! It was also really surprising to see how Xander reacted to the news, I am actually starting to really like him in this story! |
| I'm starting to like Xander too!..It's really squicking me out! Thanks for the review |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 07:20 pm |
| Careful here, Jack. Spike and Xander could get to be friends. |
| I know...blame the bunny! |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 06:57 pm |
An interesting turn - and "good-bye, Riley".Always good! LOL
I can see why Penny has been called a Mary Sue; only the fact that she actually is omniscient due to her background and Whistler's help might help you get around that. |
| I'm thinking of annoucing her name as Penelope Suzanne...lol |
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| Shadow | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 06:41 pm |
Buh-bye Riley! *GRIN* *sing-song* Angels in the doghouse....
Greaet Chapter Jack... keep em coming! |
| thanks Sweetie, I still haven't forgiven you for the images of Dru and the Chaos Demon...might make you wait! lol |
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| jamie | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 03:14 pm |
Oh my, this fic kicks arse to, cant wait for tour next chapter.
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| It's coming! lol |
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| ahigh | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 02:24 pm |
| Really enjoying the story so far. Love how Penny is putting everybody in their place. Great writing, keep it coming please! |
| thank you...you are too kind...but keep it up! |
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| vladt | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:55 pm |
| excellent update. can we have as much fun with angel? please? thanks for the read. |
| I'll try |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 11:17 am |
Hit the road Jack and don't you come back no more....OK i'll stop singing, or writing down words to songs because not actually singing.
Bloody Brilliant got rid of our good friend Captain Cardboard, or fish boy or whatever.
You in trouble Mr Angel, and knowing the forehead wonder he'll decide to comedown himself so he gets a face to face verbel beating...lol hey here's a thought how can someone loose their soul after having sex with a 17 year old, yet not lose it when he holds his newborn son for the first time, I'm not a father but I have plenty of nephew and neices and when I held them for the first time, it was the best feeling in the world...that gotta say something about Angel right?
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
Harry...stop giving away my plot points! lol
I thought you were telling me to hit the road at first! lol...and I thought...well no more Penny for Harry! |
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| Tamara | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 09:29 am |
Angel's gonna get it! Angel's gonna get it!
I love this story more with every chapter. |
| LOL...I'm so glad! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 08:30 am |
| Good chapter. I suppose now that Buffy will find out about Angel and Darla (i.e. Connor) This will be interesting. It was always amazing to me how Buffy never found out about Connor. Good riddance to Riley but it could have been harsher. |
| soooo...you think Riley will go without a fight????? LOL |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 07:16 am |
| oh I loved Spike's reaction! and I love your update speed! |
| lol...thanks I'll try to keep it up! |
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| Irina | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 06:03 am |
| Loved the Riley dumpage and Penny's talk with Xander. I'm really looking forward Penny's phone conversation with Angel. Should be especially fun since everyone is gonna be listening in. LOL... Leave it Anya to be worried about who's gonna pay for the phone call. Great chapter! |
| Anya is one of my favorite characters |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 05:09 am |
| very good chappie |
| LOL thanks for the advice! |
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| Robyn | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 04:06 am |
| I love, love, love how Buffy broke up with Riley, not because of Penny, but because of his inherent cruelty shown by the plastic stake. Penny's help with Xander's guilt over Jesse was great and the information about Darla being back and Spike's reaction and Xander's reaction to Spike's was fabulous. And Anya always worried about money. Update soon please. |
| I will try! |
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| Lou | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 03:49 am |
| They've all been unusually accepting of Penny's info. |
| you think?? |
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| gaillee | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 02:52 am |
| Yeah!...Angel!...'Bout time! Do I get to see him get his next? Love that Xander finally sees some common ground with Spike...And getting rid of Riley like that? Superb. Thanks for an exciting and satisfying update. |
| I'm guessing that Angel flaying is like the pasttime of preference or something! lol |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 02:32 am |
| Oh. Hell. YES! I think I'm in love! Can I have my very own Penny? Chick rocks! I must have more Penny! |
| LOL...she is cool |
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| Delicia | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 02:12 am |
| Yay Riley is gone! Nice showing Xander the proverbial light when it came to Jesse. I think that's most of his problems with vampires come from. Penny is so fun, but I know with the call coming up *singsong* someone's in trouble. Great job! |
lol...I'm getting the feeling that Riley just isn't a popular guy...and Angel just isn't popular
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| Neart | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 01:50 am |
| silly me, thinking Penny was done with Angel. Right, I have the comfy cushions and popcorn all ready to enjoy the Angel flaying, so update away!! ;) |
| LOL..ROFL...I may just make you wait now! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 01:23 am |
| eeekkk!! lol go the riley dumping! i was right huh?!? lol and haha cant wait till the next chapter so i can read about Angel, Oh Broody One! |
| and its coming...lol |
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| Kat | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:47 am |
| Oh wow more and more intresting. YAY riley has left the building |
| LOL...I am amazed at how many people like Riley bashing! |
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| Birdman45 | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:41 am |
| Who here thinks Angel will A) Hang Up B) Tell them it is none of there Business C) Have to prompted to tell or D) All of the above. |
| Not tellin' |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:33 am |
Done tu dunt dunt.... lol
lovin it, of corse! |
| thanks sooo much |
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| Richard | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:32 am |
I'm going to love THAT conversation. Angel's chickens are coming home to roost.
It's nice that Xander is being open-minded and actually dealing with his issues. |
| Thanks Richard |
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| Firebird234 | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:31 am |
| Yah Riley is Gone, Captian Cardboard is gone yahh. Although I dought Angel is going to reveal anything with out being promted to and I can't wait to read if Buffy calls Angel a sick old man for his obsession with her, and oh I bet Penny reveals about the Day that Angel had taken back. |
lol...we'll see
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| Karyn | Chapter 6. | 03/20/2006 12:21 am |
| *Squeak!* we're calling Angel? ... oh my ... *bites nails* ohhhhh, what's she gonna do now?...rofl...is anyone safe? |
| NUP! |
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| VWalk | Chapter 5. | 08/01/2006 12:17 pm |
Riley is such a buffoon. Kudos on such a realistic and logical way to make the gang see the error of their thinking.
I'm loving this story. |
| Thank you...I thought a little logic might confuse them...who knew! |
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| Verda | Chapter 5. | 07/18/2006 04:54 am |
| Wow, that's bad! and I love it. At least Willow's asked for forgiveness. Who will be the next? I think Giles or Xander.Amazing chapter. |
| Thank you so much |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 5. | 05/28/2006 12:19 pm |
| Riley is a monster neener neener neener |
| didn't you call him lickable? |
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| Silver | Chapter 5. | 05/26/2006 10:49 am |
| Must say, The ending was impeccble. A wonderful climactic tie up ending. |
| Thank you so much, you've just made my day |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 5. | 04/10/2006 01:58 am |
| LoL, can we kill Riley? *nods* |
| *sigh*...he's human...truly! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 5. | 03/29/2006 02:02 pm |
| OMG!!! I so love PENNY!!! HOLY crap! She is the bestest!!! |
| Rofl...you just made my day! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 5. | 03/20/2006 01:20 pm |
| go penny go penny go go penny - I love the whole pycholoigical profiling going on and the riley scenes - wonderful wonderful wonderful! Damn! I love this story *giggles* |
| thank you sweetie...I couldn't do it without you!lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 5. | 03/20/2006 03:55 am |
| Penny is so... perfect. I loved Willow's apology to Spike, Buffy's realization that she knew that demons could love, her realization that Riley (is a jerk) doesn't like her friends, and Penny's point of how monsterous Riley can be. This story is so great. |
| Thank you...you've made my day! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 10:29 pm |
| I KNOW!!! *jumps up and raises hand* ITS RILEY ITS RILEY THE SICK BASTARD!!! lol |
| LOL! |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 10:03 pm |
| Damn! I am really liking this Penny woman! I am glad that she seems to be getting thru to the guys that Angel/Angelus really warped their thinking and that they were wrong about the soul vs. unsouled deal. I also like how she got them to think that she was talking about Angelus when she was talking about Riley! Buffy did have some really bad taste in guys and look one more thing that they have in common! Will Penny drop the bomb about the Vamp whores too? Or is it too early for that? |
| guess you have to wait and see! lol |
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| FetchinMadScientist | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 05:16 pm |
| Love this story. I have always thought that blind devotion to Angel was disgusting! And the whole,"That wasn't me...it was Angelus" thing was a crock! I made some of these exact points in one of my own stories. Penny is just more blunt, I guess. And, I do so love her for it! Keep up the good work. And don't worry so much about the MS factor, I LOVE PENNY! |
| lol...bless you...MS factor forgotten! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 05:06 pm |
| Careful here, you made Xander look good. |
| sorry! lol |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 04:22 pm |
Mate I love this fic, the way you have taken the story of Buffy TVS and put forward a case as to why allot of fans dislike Riley and Angel, yet the writers themselves don't seem to have picked up on it.
That part where you pointed out how Vampires cannot be classed Evil just because they killed humans to feed, I myself have the same view, We humans kill allot more animals than Vampires do, Cows, Chickens, fish, duck, heck we also have a few canibals on this planet yet we don't classs them as evil. In my opinion you are not evil for eating something you require to survive but your actions, (if you take into consideration Vampires need blood to survive and humans can survive on fruit and veg yet we still eat meat, that would make us more evil than Vampires right?) i.e torture, causing unneccesary pain and feeling no remorse.
I love how you making both Angel and Riley look bad, Seriously how can anyone not find a 240 year old being love with a 15 year old disturbing? If Angel looked his age we'd all be grossed out no doubt, (but then we could say the same for Spike I guess, but he is half Angel's Age and he fell in love After knowing the girl and she was legal.)
God and Riley, talk about boring and racist. Seriously how could anyone who'se job was a secret government operative demon hunter be so dull?
Wow i've been on one hell of a rant
well i'll shut up now.
Love this.
Update soon
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| LOL...ah...yep, I agree! |
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| W | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 02:17 pm |
True,some cultures in the mid-east do believe that erroneous premise. However, your character is from Australia and to state that Australia or the rest of the world believes that is incorrect. Please ask any woman who has been raped.
This really is a good story, just this one area prepetrates an untruth. Would you really want to continue this untruth? What if, heaven prevent, someone you know would ever get attached? Would you believe they had a choice?
I'm sorry you think I'm attacking you personally, because I'm not. I've enjoyed your stories before and hope to continue to do so in the future, but to see that is very surprising and disconcerting.
The following is the National Institutes of Health URL about rape. http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/rape.html
Maybe you could clarify the statement about rape in your story, with the condemnation it needs and to add how wrong those assumptions are? Also, along with women, children (and men) are raped.
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Actually had you read what I said in context, you would have understood that Penny was pointing out the differences between cultural beliefs. She was not commenting on whether the attitude was right or wrong, she was simply stating the existence of that particular belief in some cultures.
As an Australian woman I am well aware of the fact that a woman does not ask to be raped and at no point in my story do I suggest otherwise. Perhaps this will help you understand my point; I wrote -
“Some cultures believe that if a woman allows herself to be raped it is well within her family’s rights to stone her to death, for bringing the family shame.”
Please note the clearly written words at the beginning of the sentence… ‘Some cultures believe’…It does not say Australians believe, or women believe, or I believe…it says some cultures believe, and the fact of the matter is, that some cultures actually hold this disgusting belief. The rest of the sentence relates to the start of the sentence. It is not an ‘untruth’ to them.
I also wrote: “There are even human cultures that believe that a male child’s first sexual experience should be given to them by an adult, so the child’s first sexual experience is to be sodomised.”
The thought of this belief horrifies me…but that doesn’t change the cold hard fact that that particular tribe follows that tradition.
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 10:45 am |
| *Meow!* Touché! that was a good one Jackofspikes... can't wait to see what happens next! |
| LOL...I'm sooo evil |
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| gaillee | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 10:27 am |
| Love this so much! Glad everyone is getting to see the truth of how they've treated Spike. Also, great that they get to see the comparison of characters with Angel and Riley. Thanks for another wonderful update. |
| you're welcome |
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| Bridget | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 09:00 am |
| This story just gets better and better. Great explanation of Angel's behavior. I always thought that in the show he never really helped Buffy fight demons. He rarely ever fought demons only if he was forced to. Hopefully we will see the end of Riley soon. I am glad that you have portrayed Buffy in this chapter as someone who can at least look back at things that have happened with some insight. Please update soon this is a great story. |
| Sadly, in reality I seriously doubt the character of Buffy would be able to move past her own denial...thanks god for AU! |
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| yangchencen | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 06:42 am |
BRILLIANT!
Your reason is wonderful! You must be a great person to see through smoke and fog to the truth! Do you have a psych degree too? I think you deserve one! |
| LOL...No just a highly developed bullshit detector! lol |
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| sirc | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 05:06 am |
| great chapter |
| I'm glad you approve! |
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| Bigbird | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 04:01 am |
| Another great chapter I really am enjoying the arse kicking of the verbal kind these lots are getting... well done |
| Thank you |
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| Neart | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 03:13 am |
| All I can say is, I just lay back with a contented smile and watch Penny work. |
| lol...I know the feeling! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 5. | 03/19/2006 01:54 am |
| Very well done! This just keeps getting better. Love the idea that Riley is being compared to Angelus. I'm thinking he should leave, or at least, Buffy should beat the tar outta him for the fake stake! |
lol...guess you'll just have to wait and see
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| kat | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 11:20 pm |
| Oh wow I love penny. I meen i love her |
| lol...I love her too! |
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| vladt | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 11:18 pm |
| another marvelous discourse, go penny. love the chapter. thanks |
| your welcome...loved the review. thanks |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 11:01 pm |
| Go Penny!! Way to take Cardbored apart in front of the Scoobies. He was a cruel and stupid bastard. More story please. |
| LOL...it's coming |
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| aspikefan | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 09:36 pm |
| Your good tuned angel and riley into the bad guys and spike into the good guy in a single breath lol. Your so good I could cry with happiness |
| OOOH thats sooo sweet...thank you |
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| Richard | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 09:31 pm |
| Oh this is good. And so canonical. I can think of no other plausible scenario than Riley carrying a torture stake 24/7. Any other explanation for Riley's having it later on, and several have been tried, just doesn't gel. A kudos to you. |
thank you...now if I can just fix those other little problems you mentioned! lol
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| Tamara | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 09:11 pm |
| Excellent chapter all around. |
| Thank you I appreciate it |
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| Karyn | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 08:44 pm |
| rofl, great job! dum dum dum dum! and the answer is? *smirk* |
| LOL...at least it wasn't a cliff hanger! |
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| Pin | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 08:30 pm |
| I continue to love this story. I don't care if they never do anything but listen to Penny dismantling their belief systems - I'm going to cherish every word! |
| lol...thankx so much |
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| Megan | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 08:24 pm |
| OMG!! Loved this chapter, Jack. You've taken so many points that we all have seen and wanted to smakc the characters over and you've actually done it. Brava!! Looking forward to more. |
Jack bows to the master and gushes her unworthyness at the praise!
But damn it makes me feel good! lol |
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| Irina | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 08:22 pm |
| Such a wonderfully written chapter. I'm enjoying this story so much! Can't wait to find out what Penny will say next. Fantastic update! |
| Thnak you...Penny is opinionated! |
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| Dar | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 08:00 pm |
| BRILLIANT |
| thank you |
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| kim | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 07:52 pm |
Oh, YES! Go Penny!
Buffy's really not going to look at Riley the same again...hee hee hee.
More more more! |
| Would you! lol |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 07:34 pm |
| LOL, I think everyone BUT the scoobies always knew Riley was a monster |
| Well they didn't realise he was an idiot either! |
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| k | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 07:32 pm |
damn do i love this story!
“It’s alright, Buffy, don’t worry about it, I understand that they’re your friends. We seem to be learning a lot about your lack of judgement, but I can help you with that.” -- What a complete ass!
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| I never thought he had a clue! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 5. | 03/18/2006 07:31 pm |
Angel AND Riley bashing in the same chapter... YOU ROCK GIRL!
More?!?!?!?!?!? |
| what can I say...I was inspired! lol |
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| HEE | Chapter 4. | 08/01/2006 12:31 pm |
| Angel! The schizophrenic,egomaniacal pedophile - revealed! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! |
| LOL...glad you approve |
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| VWalk | Chapter 4. | 08/01/2006 12:00 pm |
Great job.
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| Thank you |
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| Verda | Chapter 4. | 07/18/2006 04:40 am |
| Yes! Angel's now being seen as the pervert that he is. Great chapter. |
| Thank you, I always saw him as creepy |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 4. | 05/28/2006 12:17 pm |
| yeah he's a bloody pedophile |
| did you just agree with me? |
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| Joyce | Chapter 4. | 04/29/2006 08:15 am |
| You nailed Angel. Right on! |
| Thankyou,I do like to nail Angel |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 4. | 04/10/2006 01:53 am |
| GILES EATS BLOOD! VAMPIRE! lol |
| I always wanted to mention that! lol |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 4. | 04/08/2006 10:07 pm |
| i didn't review this last tme - so quick note - freaking awesome chapter - that last line is a classic! I love it love it love it! |
| Thank you sweetie...enjoy the conference |
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| Isabel | Chapter 4. | 03/29/2006 05:06 pm |
| OK, now I'm officially in love with this woman. Gay me up, Willow! lol This is amazing. I think the Scoobies' brains might explode Need to go read more. Now. lol |
| ROFL...thank you for making me laugh! |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 4. | 03/29/2006 01:57 pm |
| Damn this is so good, Jacks. |
| thank you...its fun to write! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 4. | 03/19/2006 05:01 pm |
| Ewwww and how is Buffy supposed to know which vampires to dust? |
| learn the truth! lol |
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| gaillee | Chapter 4. | 03/19/2006 10:25 am |
| Thanks for the best explanation of Angel I've ever seen. I've never understood the hero worship of the Angel portrayed in the series. |
| Thank you...thats quite a compliment. |
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| Cewcew | Chapter 4. | 03/18/2006 05:13 pm |
| OMG! More, more, more! |
| it's coming...lol |
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| W | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 07:30 pm |
| Very good story. Unfortunately, a woman doesn't have any choice to be raped or not. So she can't allow herself to be raped. Rape is force, not a choice. |
But that is in your cultural beliefs...there are some cultures that say the woman is to be blamed and let it happen because she was too immodest and asked for it, thereby shaming her family. I may not believe that but unfortunaly some culture still do.
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| Robyn | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 05:54 pm |
| This is one of the most concise and well thought out explanation I have ever heard on the different types of vampires. It is very similar to what I have always thought, but unlike my thoughts which tend to be muddled, yours are very clear. It also clearly explains the different types of vampires that we met in Joss’s world. Harm was the perfect example of this. And your characterization of Liam-Angelus-Angel was so correct, with a big yuck when you really think about that last line. I so look forward to the updates of this story, and how sad it is that I am a bit jealous of Penny who gets to do what I have always wanted to do to the characters of BtVS. |
| It certainly sooths the soul! |
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| pfeifferpack | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 12:28 pm |
I think your analysis on vampiric nature in general is quite on the money. Your character assessment of Liam/Angelus/Angel is also spot on.
I have always seen the great "road to redemption" of Angel as non existant. He spent all those years after the curse doing only two things (aside from brooding and the guilt the curse ensured)he stopped killing humans for food and he avoided humans as much as possible (because he WANTED to kill them for food and sport, as shown on the show Angel). He had no desire to lift a finger to help humans and regretted the few times he did try. It was the sight of Buffy, dressed like a little girl and sucking on a LOLLIPOP that made him rush to "help"... That help consisted of stalking her, making vague warnings and watching her fight!
Okay, off my soapbox for now. You said it well in this chapter.
Kathleen |
but I enjoy you on the soapbox!
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| Avalon'sMysteries | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 12:26 pm |
| Wow, this is amazing! Love your stories. Penny is a great character, love her explanations. Looking forward to next chapters. Update soon, please! |
| I'll try...Penny is fun to write! |
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| Richard | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 11:07 am |
| Some events in canon (Spike's getting a soul and his mother's turning) would be difficult to explain in this framework. Or any framework for that matter, since the show isn't self-consistent. I hope you don't worry about them too much. |
| Luckily little problems like that don't exist in my AU...heehee |
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| k | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 08:58 am |
| wow..just wow. |
| lol ...just lol |
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| sirc | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 07:16 am |
| great chapter |
| thanks, as always |
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| Megan | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 07:13 am |
| Oh my, that was the most amazing chapter. I loved it. And now you've left me sitting on the edge waiting for the meaning of that end sentence to sink in because IT IS SO RIGHT! Well done. |
| Thank you, from you that is high praise indeed! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 04:38 am |
| You really put a lot of valid points into this chapter! I am enjoying reading this. Penny is wonderful with her explanations of vampire and human customs. I think she is enjoying knocking Angel off the pedestal Buffy has him on, rightly so. |
| Penny is not the only one enjoying knocking Angel off his pedestal! lol |
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| kim | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 02:16 am |
Ah, yes...and now we get to the part of hoboAngel being enraptured with a little blonde cheerleader. From the time he left the people in the hotel to die from that demon, Angel was on the road to the gutter, finally deciding to live as a bum feeding off rats after he fed off the dying man in the diner in the '70s. He spent over 20 years like that until Whistler enticed him to help by showing him Buffy.
And there is good in Angel, if he's nurtured properly in that direction. He showed it in Season 1 of AtS with Cordy, Doyle, and Wes - the first real friends he'd ever had. He lost the point of the mission once the Shanshu Prophecy was discovered, though. Then losing Cordy as his compass - well, we all know how that ended up.
Poor Spike doesn't get to keep all his secrets here, but it's for the greater good, since they might start looking at him like an equal, finally. Shame it had to be pointed out like this, though.
Just waiting for Buffy to speak up about what she's hearing about Angel. You know her mind has to be going a mile a minute on where Penny might be going with this. The truth will set you free, sweetie, if you can bear to accept it. |
| You are going a little more indepth than I was! lol |
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| Neart | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 01:57 am |
Gah! how could you end it there! You big tease, gimme more of this fic pls. Oooooh I love that last sentence! the big perv. *** vote penny for president***
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| Penny would accept the vote...but I'm evil! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 4. | 03/17/2006 12:24 am |
| wow.. they way you have written this has changed everything.. angelus is a bastard and he only wanted to "be good" cause of his adult lust to a attractive *young* and probably virgin child!! thats amazing how you potray the events of angels path to redemption and the fact that you have explained everything so indepth and with great knowledge, truly makes this story magnificent!! keep up the GREAT work!!! |
| Thank you for your kind words |
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| UncagedMuse | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 10:57 pm |
| OMG! I LOVE THIS FIC! You are doing an magnificent job with this. I will be waiting patiently for more!!! |
| Thank you...as I also thank the muse |
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| Karyn | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 10:32 pm |
| very nice... lol, dish it girl! |
| More to come! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 10:27 pm |
| That's a great lecture by Penny. Will the Whelp scream and swear and stomp out now? More story please. |
| The whelp is in shock i think! lol |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 10:27 pm |
Ewwwww....so Liam liked them young....eww..... I really hope that for once Buffy really listens to what someone has to say about Angel/Angelus/Liam without making excuses or diving head first into the river (de)nile! Still loving the story!
***And Giles forgetting to take notes? That is so out of character, I think that Giles takes notes in his sleep (lol) |
| almost forgot to take notes! lol |
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| vladt | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 09:04 pm |
| go penny! great read, thanks |
| thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. |
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| Irina | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 08:32 pm |
| I loved this chapter, you did a fantastic job with it! Can't wait to read more. |
| Thank you... you are too kind |
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| Bridget | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 08:24 pm |
Great chapter. Good explanation of Angel/Liam/Angelus and Spike.
I can't wait to read more and everyone's reactions. |
me either!
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| aspikefan | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 07:53 pm |
| You are officially my favorite author now. You have said what should have been said in 99.99 percent of these stories. This the best story I have read yet. Please update soon and keep up the good work. Other authors this how spike should be defended and explained. |
| Thank you so much...that is really high praise and you've made my day |
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| Pin | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 07:46 pm |
| Fabulous! I am fascinated by your reasoning for the demon-human hybrids that are vampires, and adore the fact that the issue of Angel's unhealthy attraction to a 15-year old is finally being addressed. Thank you so much! Looking forward to seeing the reactions to this new persepctive. |
LOL...glad you approve...I'm looking forward to the reactions myself
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 07:46 pm |
| Oh yeah The Wulfe screams "Angel is a pedophile" |
| lol...people seem to be stuck on that word! |
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| Shadow | Chapter 4. | 03/16/2006 07:42 pm |
toldja... Angel is a pedaphile *smirk*
I LOVE IT... bash him somemore... *hugs* |
| lol...I will see! |
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| VWalk | Chapter 3. | 08/01/2006 11:49 am |
Ahhhh!!!
Time to rip those damn rose colored Angel glasses off of Buffy. Can't wait to see how you do it.
Great story
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| Yes the glasses that time forgot |
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| Verda | Chapter 3. | 07/18/2006 04:23 am |
| Damn Fatal error, that's the third review tonight. Love it. Trying again. |
| Yay, thanks for perservering |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 3. | 05/28/2006 12:13 pm |
| no, she won't and Buffy might not accept the answers |
| true |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 3. | 04/10/2006 01:51 am |
| Ooo Ooo yes, burst Buffy's bubble! |
| You have a little cruel streak, don't you! LOL |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 3. | 03/29/2006 01:49 pm |
| Oh this is so good. I really appreciate how you've written Anya. I loved the character of Anya, and I don't think she was given her due in the series... except for a few moments. *claps* |
| I love her too...she was the most underused character they had |
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| vladt | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 05:35 pm |
| go penny! fun read. thanks |
| glad you enjoyed it, and you're welcome |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 02:32 pm |
| oh do tell do tell me now now now! |
| um...no! lol |
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| lilmamaday | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 11:01 am |
| Great story! I love how the Scoobs are getting a dose of reality! I can't wait to see how she explains Angel/Angelus and everyone's reaction to that! |
| I can't wait either! I have no idea what I'm doing! lol |
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| Bridget | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 10:03 am |
| This is a great story. It is very interesting that you had Penny come from another dimension where Buffy is a television show. I can't wait to read where this story will lead. |
| LOL...repeating |
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| Bridget | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 10:03 am |
| This is a great story. It is very interesting that you had Penny come from another dimension where Buffy is a television show. I can't wait to read where this story will lead. |
| and repeat! |
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| Bridget | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 10:03 am |
| This is a great story. It is very interesting that you had Penny come from another dimension where Buffy is a television show. I can't wait to read where this story will lead. |
| Truthfully...neither can I! lol |
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| gaillee | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 10:03 am |
| Wow! What a great beginning to a new tale! Thanks so much, now I'm hooked. I can hardly wait to learn more... |
| I hope I can keep you interested then! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 09:49 am |
| great update! ohhh i'm sure she won't like any answers given...lol |
| me too! lol |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 09:10 am |
OO! OO! I want to know! I want to know!! Tell us!
Ok, I am REALLY into this story! I can't wait for more! There is a lot of very good information in here, is this possibly something you have majored in, in college? Or maybe something you are just very interested in. Either way, VERY insightful! |
| Thanks, I like to think I'm insightful! lol |
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| sirc | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 08:52 am |
| great chapter |
| thank you so much |
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| Shadow | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 08:37 am |
Bah, I can tell you whats wrong with Angel... he's an egotistical, self-worshipping pedophile with delusions of grandeur who was an ass as a human, a bigger ass as a vampire and with the soul he thinks he's god...
NICE CHAPTER! *waits for the Angel bashing* |
| ROFLMAO |
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| Pin | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 06:47 am |
| Another excellent chapter! I can't wait to see the explanation for Angel. Loving this so much. |
| I'll tell you a secret...I have no idea what I'm saying! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 06:10 am |
| This is so good, and I love how the truth had to be dragged out of Anya, her reasoning for not wanting to say anything is so true. And Buffy, no matter what proof is thrown at her, always believes Angel. I am really looking forward to where you take this. |
| So am I...any ideas?...lol |
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| Irina | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 06:09 am |
| Penny is such a great character, i'm liking her more and more with each chapter. Great update! |
| Thnak you...she's fun, I like her too |
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| Richard | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 05:30 am |
| Sigh. We need to clone you so each of you can concentrate on one fic and write longer chapters. :p Nice touch with Rupert berating himself. |
| lol...sorry I'll try for longer! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 05:11 am |
| lol, of course Riley will leaver soon, and of course Angel is a wanker |
| I know...Jack hangs her head in shame...this isn't a story...I'm just stating the obvious...But it's fuuunnnn! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 04:42 am |
excellent chapter..
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| thank you... |
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| kim | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 03:14 am |
Thank you! About bloody time someone came in with the scientific approach to those numbskulls. Willow, of all people, being Miss Science Brain, should have made the proper hypothesis, but even she got caught up in what Giles and Angel pounded into their heads from the very beginning.
The Council only maintains those suppositions so that their girls won't have crises of conscience about staking and killing demons. Who'd WANT to be a nightly executioner to sentient beings?
That stuff always bugged the hell out of me because it wasn't LOGICAL. It didn't make sense! You can't observe Spike and not come to the conclusions that he's both sentient and capable of emotion without being seriously delusional, even deranged. Even if vampires only "acted" the emotions they used to hold as a human, that would still imply intelligence and conscious thought to carry out that act. They inhabit a human brain, people...duh...what do you think it's going to be capable of? |
| lol...you're welcome! |
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| Neart | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 02:01 am |
great story idea, I love how you are laying it out. What's that? you feel the sudden need to update this story immediately? Well, how nice of you!
*smirks quietly, my thrall finally worked* |
| LOL... you wish...I'm evil! Glad you're enjoying the story though. |
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| Megan | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 01:07 am |
| Gahhhh, where's the rest? I love your ideas, though the beta in me has to point out that you used a 'loose' in place of a 'lose' again, and you could do with some help with your punctuation. If you want a one off I could look at a chap for you. |
Thank you Megan...I'll be doing another edit...And I hereby admit freely..my punctuation sucks and I am lost to understanding why. Please expect an email.!
Thankyou, by the way! lol |
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| Tamara | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 01:01 am |
| I just realized I put in a ? after great update when I meant a ! . And that bit about the soul not making you good or evil is why i thought Buffy comparing Spike to a serial killer in prison made no sense. |
| that Penny does make you use common sense doesn't she...LOL |
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| Pulchra Nex | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 12:51 am |
| oh that's just great! I love Penny already! ;-) too bad this is a Spuffy site... lol... nah... still think Spike+buffy is better... hm... (off to lala-land, thinking about your story) |
| lol...trust me Penny and Spike is a bit *Squick* |
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| Delicia | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 12:36 am |
| Very great chapter! Oh, Buffy is really not going to like the answers to her questions. I like Anya as the one with the answers. Glad to see them actually listening to her for a change. If you can give Wulfie 'Thanks' for the "masturbation magazines", so very frickin' funny. |
| lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 12:34 am |
| Yahoo!! Go Penny!! Is she going to hit Riley soon? He certainly deserves it. I hope she manages to penetrate Buffy's intentional stupidity somewhat. More story soon please. |
thanks...and its coming
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| Tamara | Chapter 3. | 03/15/2006 12:33 am |
| Gee , I wonder why Penny would think denial girl wouldn't likeit? I can't wait to find out. Great update? |
| lol..thanks |
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| kat | Chapter 3. | 03/14/2006 11:46 pm |
| This story is amazingly catching. I am caught hook, line and sinker. And I cannot wait to read more |
thank you..it's coming
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| delusional_harm | Chapter 3. | 03/14/2006 11:13 pm |
| She's so not going to like the answers. Hehe. Very well-written. |
| thank you...she really isn't! |
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| Yzba | Chapter 3. | 03/14/2006 10:41 pm |
| Once again, thank you, great chapter (a few typos but hey, it happens) I just love to see someone shake them all up;) |
| Typos? lol...missed those |
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| VWalk | Chapter 2. | 08/01/2006 11:33 am |
Its about time someone pointed out Gile's hypocritical nature with regard to swallowing the Council line without question.
Of course I love any read the makes Riley look like a buffoon. But yours was hysterical.
Great chapter? |
| Thank you...I think Riley is a fool, so I guess I don't tend to hold back on him |
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| Verda | Chapter 2. | 07/18/2006 04:08 am |
| Guess I'm staying up a little while longer. I'm not surprised, you're a great writer and this looks to be another great story. Thanks for the read. |
| Wow...you just made my day |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 2. | 05/28/2006 12:09 pm |
| Are we sure Riley is sentinet?? |
| sadly! lol |
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| Joyce | Chapter 2. | 04/29/2006 07:55 am |
Ooh, you are really painting Giles as hard nosed here..very two dimensional for Season 5. Is it because of the TV show aspect rather than the actual character because I think at that time Giles had mellowed some especially after being a demon himself.
However, I am loving this fic. What a very original idea! |
| Giles will come around |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 2. | 04/10/2006 01:49 am |
| Yes, let's ask Anya! That always turns out really amusing! |
| but informative! lol |
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| Isabel | Chapter 2. | 03/29/2006 04:46 pm |
| Woah! I'm seriously loving this Penny chick lol Smart bird. This chapter was totally satisfying. It's so great to see her putting them all in their place so easily lol Love it. |
| Thank you, I appreciate it |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 2. | 03/29/2006 01:44 pm |
*rubs hands in glee*
Oh my! I love your Penny! Just what the Scoobies all need a swift kick in the ass into "reality"...
And go Tara. |
| LOL...penny doesn't hold any punches! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 2. | 03/19/2006 04:52 pm |
| Good Tara speech. More more more. |
| coming, coming, coming! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 2. | 03/15/2006 02:28 pm |
| Oh great chappie - hit em over the head with logic! Fabilicious! |
| logic is of the good! |
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| Nikkole | Chapter 2. | 03/15/2006 09:03 am |
| Nice! I am really liking this story! |
| thank you...I'm glad |
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| Stacy | Chapter 2. | 03/14/2006 09:52 am |
| Oh this looks like it's gonna be fun! Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing. |
| you are welcome...I'm haveing fun writing it! |
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| Delicia | Chapter 2. | 03/14/2006 02:19 am |
| Yes, I am really liking Penny. You gave a lot of thought to what points she was gonna make. Most of which we have all had at one time or another. Nicely done. |
| I kinda thought they were obvious...never understood why Giles didn't twig! lol |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 09:08 pm |
| um... wow.. thats very.. thats a lot of info for one chapter.. bery good one in fact.. lol in reply to your reply to my review in chap.1 -- *WE* do ROCK.. *nods* |
| lol...Lots more to come too! he he |
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| Robyn | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 07:08 pm |
| This was the perfect summation chapter. It pulled apart many false beliefs of the group using their own intelligence and definitions. It also made great use of Tara’s gift and pointed out the most underutilized character when it came to questions about demons, Anya. I also thought you did great, with the use of Penny, pointing out the problems with Giles always backing everything the council says even though he doesn’t trust them. I am really looking forward to this story, please update soon. |
| I will try, and think you for your kind words. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 06:19 pm |
LOL, roflmao, Kickem in the balls some more the group of bigoted idiots
Lovin this one |
| thanks sweetie, I'll try to kick 'em hard again! |
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| kamille | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 05:40 pm |
| This is a great story. It always botherd me that Buffy and crew could over look the holes in their demon beliefs and that they hate the council but believe everything the council says. |
| It always bothered me too! lol |
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| Shadow | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 04:25 pm |
OMG I LOVE PENNY! *grin* she really blasted holes in the whole "vampires are things" routine the "idiot brigade" (ie - riley and xander) have goin on.
GREAT JOB!
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| More in store for Riley! lol Penny's only just started! |
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| vladt | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 03:58 pm |
| penny is fantastic. love the chapter. thanks for the fun. |
| thank you...I had fun with it |
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| zanthinegirl | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 03:48 pm |
| Well, pretty blatant Mary-Sue; but a lot of fun anyway! |
| Um...what's mary-sue? |
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| Bigbird | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 03:47 pm |
| Oh slap down!! I like it! xxxx |
| lol...I'm glad |
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| Irina | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 02:26 pm |
| Penny is a fantastic character. I enjoyed the way she interacted with the Scoobies, especially Riley. Wonderful chapter! |
| thank you...more interaction coming! lol |
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| Richard | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 01:41 pm |
| Oh, this is good. This is very, very good. I saw her being from the Real World, but I didn't see her being a psychologist until just before she announced it. This is GREAT. I am enjoying their shock and squirming with a great deal of malicious glee. |
| lol...and people say I'm evil! |
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| sirc | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 12:41 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 11:28 am |
| Good on Penny! She's not making them happy in their land of denial but maybe she's saving their lives from their own stupidity. Hope she helps get rid of Cardbored sooner. |
| I hope she'll get then out of egypt! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 11:00 am |
| lol, great update! |
| Thanking you |
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| Tamara | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 10:41 am |
| I LOVE THIS! I've always maintained that the Scoobies could use some therapy. |
| Deep therapy! lol |
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| 0809 | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 10:28 am |
| I. Love. Penny. |
| she is cool! |
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| aspikefan | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 09:43 am |
| I like this character penny she saying everything I been think since I got into this buffy and spike thing. I like your story.. Please continue |
| thank you...and I will! lol |
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| Yzba | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 09:18 am |
| I love you, you are my hero!!! Finally a character that tells what every fan has been thinking;) Go Penny;) This is just too good!!!! Keep up the good work, because I can't wait to read more! |
| Thank you...this ones my baby, so thank you for helping her grow. |
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| Pin | Chapter 2. | 03/13/2006 09:12 am |
| I adore this! I love Penny and think she may be one of the best original characters I've read. I love her arguments and look forward to seeing the total disintegration of the Scoobie belief system. Thank you!! Looking forward to more. |
| Thank you...I think Penny is the voice of reason in an unreasonable time! lol |
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| VWalk | Chapter 1 | 08/01/2006 11:30 am |
GREAT PREMISE!
There were so many times during the show when I wanted to jump in the screen and knock some sense into someone. I am excited to see where you go with this.
Good chapter. |
| Thank you so much |
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| Verda | Chapter 1 | 07/18/2006 03:57 am |
| Thought I'd give this a look see and of course it's fascinating, so I'll read what I can this morning and finish later. Very interesting, but you know it is. Thanks for fine read. |
| Thanks for the lovely review |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter 1 | 05/28/2006 12:00 pm |
| Can we kill Angel and Riley yet?? |
ROFL
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 1 | 04/10/2006 01:46 am |
| "please don't poke me, Agent Finn" lol... sure that's not the first time he heard that! lol |
| rofl...never thought of that! |
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| Orsacleholly | Chapter 1 | 03/29/2006 01:39 pm |
| Excellent beginning... such promise. The ending line -- so great. |
| thank you...ít'll be an interesting ride! |
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| Spikez_tart | Chapter 1 | 03/19/2006 04:47 pm |
| Love Whistler stories. Say, if the PTB are rich enough to throw around the deeds to houses, why does Buffy have to work at the Doublemeat? That's really scary. |
| yes...and sad too! lol |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter 1 | 03/19/2006 09:51 am |
| ROFL - interesting premise! Can't wait to see where you go with this. |
| I hope you enjoy it...I'm having fun! lol |
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| Lou | Chapter 1 | 03/16/2006 06:14 pm |
| Heee! Interesting. |
| lol...thanks |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 1 | 03/15/2006 02:23 pm |
| Very intriguing.... runs to next chapter to see what is going on. |
lol...i hope you enjoy
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| Nikkole | Chapter 1 | 03/15/2006 08:54 am |
| Interesting! And yet, very cool! |
| thank you |
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| Delicia | Chapter 1 | 03/14/2006 02:11 am |
| Very cool. Penny is definitely gonna be fun! |
| thank you...I like her |
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| Jace Nox | Chapter 1 | 03/12/2006 08:15 pm |
| *laughs* that's good...real good. *snerk* can't wait to read more! |
| tomorrow! lol |
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| sirc | Chapter 1 | 03/12/2006 12:25 pm |
| *giggle* Great chapter |
| giggle...thanks |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 1 | 03/12/2006 05:18 am |
| ARGHHHH!!! i love this!!! its so awesome!! and the fact that she's from aussie.. well thats just the icing on the cake!!! |
Aussie women are awesome! we rock
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| jl1980 | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 11:13 pm |
| well that was an unexpected twist...but should be good...i'm wondering how many seasons penny has seen??? hmm...this could get super interesting... |
| here's hoping! lol |
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| Robyn | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 10:15 pm |
| This sounds like it’s going to be a fun and interesting ride. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
| so am I...lol |
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| vladt | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 08:16 pm |
| fantastic start. i'm sure you have grabbed everyone's attention. thannks, this should be fun! |
Thank you, I hope so
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| firebird234 | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 06:18 pm |
| I like this story, can't wait to read what the scooby gang, Spike, and Riley's reactions are. |
| predictable! lol |
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| neo_trinityknot | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 05:50 pm |
| Fake world fic! YAY! |
| lol |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 05:50 pm |
| OMG! Seriously AU here. BtVS the TV show and Penny is here to help the actors. More story please. |
| What was a tv show in her dimension is real in Buffy's, so she's here to help buffy! |
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| Irina | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 02:54 pm |
| Looks like you've got another entertaining story in the works. Fantastic start! |
| here's hoping! |
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| ct114 | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 02:31 pm |
| very intersting. i sooooo want to see where this goes. |
| me too! |
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| Yzba | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 01:45 pm |
| Can't wait to see where you are going with this one! |
| neither can I! lol |
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| Richard | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 12:09 pm |
| This is cool. I've only seen this premise used once before and it wasn't used well. But just how many fics do you have started now? |
| I have two running at the moment, but as both are complicated in different ways, I'm taking turns so I don't get bogged down in the metaphysical stuff! |
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| Karyn | Chapter 1 | 03/11/2006 11:40 am |
| um, okay didn't see that coming...lol |
| LOL...that was the idea! |
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