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| Araedhel | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 07/05/2006 11:07 am |
| Please, Please write more. |
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| hotlipedjen | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 06/28/2006 05:30 am |
| Would really like to read more! Very good story. |
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| Gillypod | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 06/25/2006 09:30 am |
| Oh God! Wonderful - please update soon |
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| VWalk | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 06/14/2006 02:23 pm |
This is an incredible story. I'm so excited that someone is exploring Angel's original soul.
I love your characterization of Buffy and Spike... and even the Cordy.
Here are more wishes for a speedy smoothing out.
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| Roby | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 06/05/2006 11:15 pm |
Not to put any pressure on you or anything, you know... but this story is AWESOME!!! Hope that rough spot will get smoother soon.  |
| pfft i do the pressure thing all on my own, so no worries lol thanks for the vote of confidence. hope i can get back to it soon also |
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| Verda | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 05/26/2006 10:32 pm |
| Good Lord!! what a chapter! Love Spuffy, but Angel. You were not kidding about it being graphic. My gut's still in a knot. Can't wait for Angel to get his. Update soon, it's a great story. |
| hit a rough spot with this one, hope to get back to it soon |
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| Bite_Me | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 05/22/2006 10:41 pm |
| I really hope you continue with this story! |
| kinda stalled right now but i'll get back to it (soon i hope!) |
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| sandyrah | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 04/28/2006 07:07 pm |
| more more more |
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| redwulf50 | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 04/24/2006 04:38 am |
could really use more of this fic  |
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| Bookchick of the Novel Clan | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 04/16/2006 11:09 pm |
| Good Lord, edge of the seat kinda writing, can't wait till we get an update! |
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| Robyn | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 04/12/2006 05:30 pm |
| Staking is to good for Angel. I hope he really gets what he deserves and that Cordy gets to be a part of it. I really love the Buffy and Spike interaction and communication. |
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| Roby | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 04/01/2006 06:41 pm |
| Me too! I *love* this fic and I've been waiting for an update pretty much religiously since last September... Should we keep poking you every so often, or beg... maybe light candles & stuff? :eg: |
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| redwulf50 | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 02/13/2006 03:51 pm |
| OH my gawd I love this fic, when do we get more?? |
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| Rebelbaby | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 02/08/2006 11:04 am |
| I love the story so far can't wate to see the next update you put out. and hope to see more of it soon or as fast as you can please update i love love the story. |
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| JustaGirl | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 02/06/2006 02:17 pm |
| Cant wait for the update |
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| Henrietta | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 12/30/2005 08:32 pm |
| more please |
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| Confused Muse | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:43 pm |
| 09/14/2005 @ 05:55 pm
Emotional, detailed and very realistic. Well done on having the courage with the last chapter- incredibly well written and completely on the edge.
Of course, this means I'm going to nag a lot now for updates.
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| Steph | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:43 pm |
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Scary
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| Richard | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:42 pm |
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I literally couldn't read that chapter. I'm amazed you could write it. It's a very good fic though and I'll continue to enjoy it.
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| Elizabeth | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:41 pm |
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Poor Cordy, Angel is soooooo dead....make him hurt. GRR...no one deserves to be raped...*shakes head and murmers* poor Cordy
Amazing story, really really powerful. VERY intense. Keep up the good writing.
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| MarzBar | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:41 pm |
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So, poor Spike had to go to hell instead of Angel. Now we have the real Angel and the PTB had to send Spike back. After the Cordy rape, Angel needs to be seriously hurt before he gets dusted.
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| Opal | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:40 pm |
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Must have been a hard to write chappie, yet it was very well done. I hope Angelus gets whats coming to him
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| Nikkole | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:40 pm |
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Wow. And not a good wow. That was powerful and disturbing. It was a very good way to show that there is not to much of a line between Angel and Angelus. I hope the next chapter is not so sad. Good work.
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:39 pm |
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I feel so bad for Cordy. Angelus needs to die, and to that end I'm glad that Spike was with Buffy when they found her. He'll know the scent
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:38 pm |
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You know, I've never felt for Cordy because she's such a brat but I really did feel for her in this scene. And I can't imagine what Buffy's reaction is going to be. Update soon!
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:38 pm |
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Glad to see the warnings on the chapter. You wrote this chapter very well though too. Those types of scenes are very hard to write, and they can play havoc with the writer's emotions as well as the reader's. Hope you are okay.
Look forward to the next update. Buffy is so going to dust his ass when she finds out from Cordy that Angel did this.
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| mary | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:37 pm |
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Poor Cordy. Great update.
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:36 pm |
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Gawd! I hate Angel soooo much! Much with the slayage on his pasty flabby ass!!
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| Esther | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:36 pm |
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Oh wow, never have I hated Angel more in my life. Poor Cordy...I'm so glad that Buffy and Spike found her in the end. I hope Buffy wreaks the worst kind of torture/bloodshed/pain on Angel's worthless ass. You did a great job capturing the malicious nature of Angel, Cordy's pain and defilement, and her final peace at being found. Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter and for them to find out it was Angel that did it. Great job!
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| Stephanie | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:35 pm |
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Blinks in shock. You do know that Angel must die? That was a really good chapter, poor Cordy. We have to kill Angel now. Tortue? Please? Perhaps Cordy could strike the final blow. AHHH... Okay that was really good writing but I must have some dusty Angel. Good job Tam!
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| Rae | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:35 pm |
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You already know how great I think this chp is. Just wanted to tell you again.
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| Oracleholly | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:34 pm |
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Somehow I'm hearing that creepy organ music from old horror movies complete with the 'dun..dun..dun' at the end.
Creeping Angel overlooking Spuffy sex just like what he did with Cordy and Connor. EWWWWW.
Can't wait to see what you have cooking in that brain of yours dearie.
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| vladt | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:33 pm |
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great update to a wonderul fic. thanks
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| Tasha | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:33 pm |
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Wonderful claiming chapter. Excellent writing, Tam. Definitely in top form.
Evil Angel. Not Angelus, but still Angel. Man ... I felt a chill go through me at his little tirade in his thoughts.
Look forward to more.
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:32 pm |
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Awesome chapter Tam. I can't wait to find out why Spike is back. And Angel seems up to no good. Update soon!
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:32 pm |
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icky Peeping Angel...
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| Rhonda | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:31 pm |
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Wonder what Angel is up to. Glad that Buffy and Spike had some type of conversation... Can't wait for more.
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| slaymesoftly | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:30 pm |
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Great new chapter,Tam! Hope the new words mean you are feeling better and getting back to normal. Scary- Angel/Angelus? Guess it doesn't matter as pissed off as he obviously is. Poor Buffy and Spike!
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| Oracleholly | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:30 pm |
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Oh yay finally got a chance to read chap 6! Spike's coherent & knows what he's doing.. not that I didn't appreciate the fine attributes of feral Spike. Yum.
Now, that you're back baby, may we have more of this tasty dish soon?
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| Dee | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:29 pm |
| 08/20/2005 @ 10:22 pm
I love this story and I am anxiously waiting for updates. Great plot and I don't think I have seen this done before.
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| Roby | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:29 pm |
| 08/18/2005 @ 05:25 pm
... I *love* this fic... Update, please? ... Preeetty pleease... cherry on top?
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| Steph | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:28 pm |
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Man this is a great fic! you are doing a bang up job...very hot.
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:27 pm |
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Well, you finally got Spike in chains. I so know you were envisioning yourself in that scene. Great chapters, glad that Spike is coming around, though savage Spike is very very hot. Update soon!
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| Jessica | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:27 pm |
| 07/30/2005 @ 03:06 am
Wow! This is an excellent story. I just found it and its wonderful. Btw, I loved Feral Spike. Very hot. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
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| chanel 5 | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:26 pm |
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Yay for spike - and this is so hot, I can feel the heat all the way to South Australia
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| txjmfan | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:25 pm |
| 07/27/2005 @ 12:11 am
Oh man! This is gonna be good. Can't wait to Spike is able to communicate on a less ferral level...although, kind of enjoying his "ferral" communications with Buffy. Update soon please!
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| Esther | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:25 pm |
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Oh my God...have I mentioned how much I absolutely LOVE this fic? The more I read, the more I fall in love with it!!! Ch. 6 just made me want to be Buffy more...because that claiming scene...yeah for sexy, claimy Spuffy smut!!! Hot damn!!! I almost fell off my chair! Feral Spike just...gah...can't write anymore cause I'm still awash with images of naked Spike...feral, naked Spike...more...please? I beg you....
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:24 pm |
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Muahahaha, I can't wait to see Angel's face either! Heehee!
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:23 pm |
| 07/26/2005 @ 06:37 pm
Continuing strong! Great idea to bring in the dream like that. Please keep writing!
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| Nikkole | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:23 pm |
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Very nice! Getting more interesting by the chapter! Keep up the great work!
~~~Nikkole~~~
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| Misha | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:22 pm |
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nope, still not liking this fic, LOVING it is closest to the mark!! Gimme more!! Hope there is lots more of the pouncing still happening even though Spike is now more coherent....thats too good to give up!
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| Superstes Diligo | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:21 pm |
| 07/26/2005 @ 04:29 am
Aww come on! that's so evil! it's like sying you'll give us a whole cake and then just giving us a crumb!... we want more! ... please? Loved the update!
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| spikes_niblet | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:21 pm |
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Wonder what'll happen with Spike and how Joyce will react to Buffy
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| s.p. hudson | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:20 pm |
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***pant,pant,pant*** Bad Spike! Naughty Spike! I think he deserves a spanking. I'll do it!!!
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| Oracleholly | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:19 pm |
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Love all grrry Spike! So hot! Much goodness, **sighing with happiness**
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| Mariana | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:19 pm |
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lol!! so love this spike!! his motto being: want take...which it's perfect for buffy cos he doesn't give her enough time to run!! lol!! anyhow...love this story!! you're a very talented writer
thanx so much! hope you update soon ;)
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| Superstes Diligo | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:18 pm |
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OOhh! More! that was soo much fun to read! (fine... i had a bit too much caffiene... so what?) You're gonna update soon... right? Love Spike al Feral!
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| samson28 | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:17 pm |
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Lovely chapter, adoring Spike in his feral state.
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| Adriana | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:17 pm |
| 07/22/2005 @ 02:01 am
More please...now!
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| Esther | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:16 pm |
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Have I mentioned that I'm panting just thinking of being bitten and claimed by a feral Spike? HOT DAMN!!! He's sexy as hell when he's himself, but once he turns growly...GROWL!! I want to be Buffy...damn!!! What can I say except that I want some more...please?
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| Always_jbj | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:15 pm |
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Loved the update Tam! YUMMY!!!
Oh boy is Buffy gonna be in trouble for handcuffing Joyce! lol.
I love petulant Spike...sooo cute! Can't wait for more.
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:15 pm |
| 07/21/2005 @ 08:43 pm
I check every day to see if this has been updated. I love Buffy's precaution of bringing handcuffs; since Spike has his priorities, it was a darn good idea.
Too bad Buffy isn't ready to repeat the claim yet, but obviously feral Spike knows what he wants.
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| chanel 5 | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:14 pm |
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I love this.I wish it had happened on the show- though it probably wouldn't have made it past the censors ;)
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| jodi | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:13 pm |
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more more more
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:13 pm |
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Mmmmmm, very good! Waiting for more!
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| Nikkole | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:12 pm |
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Interesting. I like where the story is going, and am looking forward to updates. There are a few different ways you can go with this, and I am anxious to see where you take it!
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| Steph | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:11 pm |
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Fantastic!!! WOW...it just doesn't get any better!...I love it!
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:11 pm |
| 07/21/2005 @ 02:04 pm
This just keeps getting better and better...keep 'em coming ;)
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| Always_jbj | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:10 pm |
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Mmmm... **purrs** That was bloody brilliant Tam!!! Hot and steamy and oh-so intriguing... can't wait for the next chap!!!
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| Stacy | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:09 pm |
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Wow! So intense and really good! I sure hope you're still writing this story. It's very well done and the plot is fascinating. Thanks for writing.
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| romero | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:09 pm |
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Oh, don't stop there! Can't wait to read more.
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| Mariana | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:08 pm |
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wow!! that was HOT!! can't wait for more...i love the way you write...love your stories...and this one is not an exception...it's just awesome!! thanx!! hope you update soon..
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:07 pm |
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Ok, so I think I was in a cave for the first apparance of this story. But now I'm free and I have found it, and I'm in love. OMG, this is great. Love that Liem is back. Cause this was one thing that always bothered me, why did he ever come back instead on Angel, after Angelus, ehh.
Loved the Spuffy, very good! Can't wait for more.
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| Steph | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:07 pm |
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WOW. THAT'S HOT!
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| Opal | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:06 pm |
| 07/13/2005 @ 09:45 pm
Beautiful update! Love feral spike claiming buffy!
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| demonica mills | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:05 pm |
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Tam! This was awesome!!! I can't wait for more.
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| Anne | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:05 pm |
| 07/13/2005 @ 06:24 pm
Wow it was really great, updating more
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:04 pm |
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Whew, Tam! Awesome update/chapter. *fans self* Even feral Spike is good in bed. Who knew? LOL Can't wait for more.
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| jodi | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:03 pm |
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oh i love primal spike.
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| Rhonda | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:03 pm |
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Now that was just SO!!!!!!!!!.... I can't wait to read more. I hope that when he comes back to himself he doesn't take out his thoughts on how things happend on himself. Great update.
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| Misha | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:02 pm |
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Wow feral Spike, another fantasy to add to the list!
What's that you said? You're going to update very very soon? I should hope so, after that blistering chapter I need more soon...
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:01 pm |
| 07/13/2005 @ 09:39 am
Fine update, even Feral Spike is interested in Buffy. So he came back at the factory, which was originally his lair?
Love the Spuffy lovin'.
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:01 pm |
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Oooo yes, loved it. Great update!
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters Five ~ Eight | 09/24/2005 03:00 pm |
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Oh WOW, that was, hmm... *dopey smile*. I got to the end and I was like, where's the rest? Want more now. And can I just tell you I'm so liking Savage Spike.
But please more, soon.
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| Verda | Chapters One ~ Four | 05/26/2006 08:54 pm |
| OMG!!! this story is awesome!!! and a claiming story too. Angel with his original soul... priceless. Can't wait to finish it. Thanks for this story. |
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| Robyn | Chapters One ~ Four | 04/12/2006 05:03 pm |
| I am really enjoying this story. I love that Willow restored Angel's original soul, which has him acting like a complete jerk, out of her being an over-achiever. I am looking forward to what will happen with this new less-improved Angel. And that Spike came back, saved Buffy, then claimed her all at the complete control of his demon. I don’t think any other proof would ever be needed at how completely he cares for her. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapters One ~ Four | 02/13/2006 03:21 pm |
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| spikette55 | Chapters One ~ Four | 01/01/2006 10:29 am |
| This is really good!!! Please update soon. I love how you have Angel with his real soul, and how Buffy can see the real him.
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| slaymesoftly | Chapters One ~ Four | 11/23/2005 04:11 am |
| You are going to continue this, right?????? |
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| txjmfan | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:38 pm |
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Wow! Just wow! Wonderful chapter!
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| jennifer | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:37 pm |
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Great update! I love growly possesive/protective Spike. So very yummy
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| Superstes Diligo | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:37 pm |
| 07/13/2005 @ 01:59 am
More! want some more updates! Love your look on things! please update soon?
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| mary | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:36 pm |
| 07/13/2005 @ 12:25 am
WOW!!! HOT!!!! MORE!!!!! Thanks for the great story.
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| Esther | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:35 pm |
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OMG!! I think it's safe to say that that was HOT!! So glad that Spike appears in this chapter, and boy howdy, does he appear!!! And then the end...my goodness!!! I'm panting from the heat of those two, and hoping that there will be more soon....please?
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| redwulf50 | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:34 pm |
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freakin awesome chappie more please
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| Spike_spetslayer | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:34 pm |
| 07/11/2005 @ 07:32 pm
MORE!!!
*that's another way of saying, very good, and would you please write a sequel?*
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| Mariana | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:33 pm |
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i love this story!! all of them actually. you're such a talented writer...please please update soon...i want to know when spike is going to make his appearance...thanx!
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| Richard | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:33 pm |
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Very nice. Very good characterization.
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| txjmfan | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:32 pm |
| 07/10/2005 @ 05:47 am
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Great chapter. Love Whistler and glad to see him again. Can honestly say that I don't know WTH the PTB have planned and what Spike has to do with it. You've got my curiosity peake. I'm already anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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| Always_jbj | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:32 pm |
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This is soo good Tam! I can't wait to see what happens with Spike... and I am dreading Willow's delusting spell... Willow's spells always seem to have a way of going so terribly wrong!
Arghh...Liam! What a joy!
Can't wait for the next update!
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| Adriana | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:31 pm |
| 07/09/2005 @ 03:29 pm
Interesting turn of events. Skanky Angel (bleah!) I like the part of the overachieving best friend...heh heh heh..leave it to Willow!
So...what's next???
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:30 pm |
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LoL! Loved this update! More soon!
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| desertrose | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:30 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 05:02 pm
Oh that just cracks me up! Liam in the modern world. He must be having a ball. How funny! Too bad Buffy has to put up with him.
But oh boy that poor ramdom soul that was shoved in with Angelus for 100 years.
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:29 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 01:39 pm
Another great chapter. I like your explanantion of Angel's behavior, and it pretty much eliminates any further interest in him from Buffy.
Now the question is: are the Powers still looking for a vampire to complete their plans, a different one, now that Angel is out?
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| Rhonda | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:29 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 09:53 am
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Willow just had to out do herself and give him back his original?? Wonder what Buffy is going to do with this information. And asking Buffy to not give Angel a "happy" or even Smoochies should not be a problem. I don't think she is too fond of him at the moment. But what all does that have to do with her realistic dreams of Spike??? Can't wait to find out more.
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| Stephanie | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:28 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 07:17 am
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Great update Tam! I loved the whole gypsies cursed angel with a random sould but willow justhad to be specefic and cursed him with him. I always thought the difference between him as a human and him as a souled vamp was a bit much. I love where you are taking this. So fab. I hope Spike comes back soon and saves the day.
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| Diabola | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:27 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 06:31 am
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Yay! That's exactly what I thought had happened to Angel. And the theory about the human personality deciding the kind of vampire one becomes is what I always suspected too. You only have to think of Harmony to realize it makes a lot of sense.
Great chapter, I'm really loving this. Can't wait to see where it goes next.
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:27 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 01:53 am
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Haha! So Buffy finally got a true taste of who exactly Angel was. And Willow and Xander are already making with the smoochies? At least Willow wasn't dumb and tring to cover it up. Great chapter Tam, can't wait for the next one.
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| BAKAMAN | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:25 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 12:06 am
So the soul that Angel was cursed with wasn't his own? Okay, that would make some sense of his radical changes in his persona when he's switching from good to evil. And if your going for a good plot twist, your probably going to have the soul that Angel was cursed with was Spike's! Also, if you've revitide Angel back to his Liam persona are you going to hook him up with Faith!?
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| Esther | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:24 pm |
| 07/08/2005 @ 12:02 am
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Great chapter!!! I love the "fuzzy end of the lollipop" reference...reminds me of the movie 'Some Like it Hot' with Marilyn Monroe and Tony Curtis.
Thanks for explaining Angel's behavior as well...knew something had to go wrong and Willow's spell was it. I was just talking with Tasha about Willow's need to fix everything with magic, and I'm glad that you showed it here with the de-lusting spell...I had forgotten about that.
More soon? Please?
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| FlexSis | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:24 pm |
| 07/07/2005 @ 11:01 pm
I KNEW IT!! After reading Chap. 2, I just KNEW he had to be Liam again! WAY cool - can't wait for more!
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| Dee | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:23 pm |
| 07/07/2005 @ 06:46 pm
I like the beginning of this story. Can't wait to see how Spike reached Buffy from hell. Looking forward to updates.
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| PyroChilde | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:23 pm |
| 07/07/2005 @ 03:16 pm
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Awesome fic, great chapter, more soon please!!
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| txjmfan | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:22 pm |
| 07/07/2005 @ 12:56 am
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Love it so far! The hickey definitely has me intrigued. Eagerly awaiting more.
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| K.T. | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:22 pm |
| 07/07/2005 @ 12:27 am
You have left me drooling for more! Yummy! Please continue soon!
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| Esther | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:21 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 11:42 pm
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I have absolutely no prob. with S2 ending in this way...especially if it's the exact thing that happens in Ch. 2...GREAT JOB!!! I love the exploration of Angel's 'other' side and the crudeness that he displayed at times, Buffy's guilt and her sense of right/wrong, and the instant chemistry between Buffy and Spike. You've captured those two sooo well, and their attraction is HOT!!! I can't wait for more...especially with an ender like that...more...please?
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| jodi | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:20 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 11:22 pm
awesome. more please.
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| Mariana | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:20 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 10:29 pm
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love it!! absolutely love it!! great story!! wonder what soul is inside angel this time...bet the one before could be william's...can you imagine that?? anyhow..fantastic work!! keep it up..thanx!!
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| Adriana | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:19 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 08:48 pm
Just found this and loved the chappie's end!
Must have more and soon!
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:18 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 08:33 pm
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Heehee, Spike hickey! Loved it, update soon!
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| BAKAMAN | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:18 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 08:21 pm
Great Story! Please keep writing.
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:17 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 06:08 pm
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Gah! More! More! More!
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| Steph | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:17 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 05:32 pm
Damn. Your Good. *S* write more please?
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:16 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 05:07 pm
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Tam, you so rock. That dream was just wickedly yummy. Makes me wonder if Spike dreamed it too. Would love to see how Spike is doing in hell and what his thoughts are.
So I'm guessing the way the spell went, they actually gave Angel back his soul so now he's Liam? Hope Buffy dumps him. Would be great to see her tell him that he needs to go this time.
This chapter was good. But I need more now. So please update soon.
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| Anne | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:16 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 03:18 pm
It was good chapther, more spuffy.
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| Milva | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:15 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 01:51 pm
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Y E S S S !!!!!God,Tam,now I need more,much much more!Be a good girl-I know you can be that-and give me my "daily-fix" of Spuffy. You're great as ever.
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| Skybound | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:14 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 11:18 am
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*bounces* Can I just tell you how excited I am! Makes me so happy to see people willing to write this challenge. Really evocative start you have here, looking forward to more :-D
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| Honey | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:13 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 10:29 am
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Tam!!!!! This story is awesome so far! I like the premise of having Angel come back wrong. And the dream sequence...WOW!
Can't wait to see what's in store.
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:11 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 08:36 am
Great dream sequence. Nice idea, Angel coming back wrong. It's a tricky spell, afterall. I'm glad Buffy is realizing that there is a nicer side to Spike, even if it is through dreams.
I like the imps too, by the way.
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| Rhonda | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:10 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 07:57 am
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Cool, dream sex. GREAT..
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| Peyton | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:01 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 07:29 am
COOL! Love your Hell!
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| Spikeschilde | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 11:00 pm |
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Great update! I can't wait for more! Love what you've done so far
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| Superstes diligo | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:59 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 05:03 am
Love it! keep it up! hope you update soon!
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:54 pm |
| 07/06/2005 @ 02:05 am
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WOW, wow, wow, is all I can say. Can't wait for more.
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| Peyton | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:53 pm |
| 07/04/2005 @ 11:13 pm
It's nice to see that someone else decided to write this old challenge. I look forward to seeing where your interpretations will differ from mine.
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| Jordy | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:52 pm |
| 07/02/2005 @ 02:09 pm
wow. almost stunned speechless. It's great so far. very interesting idea. I am quite curious as to how you'll proceed from here.
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| Rae | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:51 pm |
| 07/02/2005 @ 12:41 am
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Soooooo glad you decided to start posting this. Look I told you everyone would love this. It is soooo amazing and really really can't wait until you write more. Notice I didn't say update. *giggles*
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| Shady | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:50 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 08:17 pm
Wow Tam, you really are the "challenge whore" arent you?
Awesome start, made me cry though, which was not cool!
Can't wait to see some more of this, but you knew that already
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| Anne | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:49 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 06:58 pm
Really good, more updating.
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| romero | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:48 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 03:36 pm
I really like your story and can't wait to read more.
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| Kat | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:46 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 01:31 pm
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Oh wow. What a wonderful begining to what promises to be a sensational story. I will be on the look out for more chapters.
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| Cas | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:43 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 12:33 pm
Just wanted to say that I usually HATE reading replays of scenes that have been filmed and aired, but you did a really excellent job of it -telling what happened but adding just enough POV to make it seem fresh. Great job!
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:42 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 09:40 am
A wonderful beginning. I'm glad you had the reconciliation with Joyce so quickly.
Good for Spike, cocky to the end.
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:40 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 08:59 am
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OOOh great beginning, Tam. Can't wait to see where you go with it -
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| Esther | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:39 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 01:23 am
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Ok, it's official...I LOVE THIS!!! I'm totally hooked and panting for the next chapter as I write this...oh man, I love the plot...everything!!! More soon? Please?
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| ElizabethAnneSummers | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:39 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 01:20 am
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Oooo sounds good so far! Can't wait to see more!
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:38 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 01:04 am
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I loved Spike in this chapter, especially the whole winking at her thing.
So you're doing another challenge? This so doesn't mean you get to slack off on mine. so get cracking on that one too!
Anywho, I really loved this first chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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| vladt | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:37 pm |
| 07/01/2005 @ 12:34 am
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hooked. reel me in. great start. thanks
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| Dee | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:37 pm |
| 06/30/2005 @ 11:51 pm
Love this. Can't wait for more. I hope you are able to update regularly.
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:36 pm |
| 06/30/2005 @ 09:48 pm
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This is a pretty awesome start to the challenge. Nice job, Tam. The emotions you captured here were excellent. I like Joyce's outlook on things. Angel is as self-centered as always of course. The touch with Whistler was nice as well.
I look forward to the update of this and OPN. You are challenge gal now, eh?
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| redwulf50 | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:35 pm |
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Freakin awesome fic start Tam, you have Angel spot on
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| Willia | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:34 pm |
| 06/30/2005 @ 07:55 pm
*sniffle* when are you updating?..
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| Dark Dreamluver | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:34 pm |
| 06/30/2005 @ 07:45 pm
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I love this! that line "It was foolish to assume that she could simply forget the heartbreak that his presence had brought to her life. Certainly Giles and her friends wouldn’t be able to." was simply priceless! Why Joss couldn't see it that way is beyond me! Can't wait for updates on this and your other newbie!
Making me feel lazy!
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| mary | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/23/2005 10:33 pm |
| 06/30/2005 @ 07:34 pm
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Great start!! Cant wait to see how this unfolds.
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapters One ~ Four | 09/22/2005 04:19 am |
| It says that you posted Ch 1-4 in the one post, but I only see chapter 1. Did something go wrong? Just don't want to miss any of this story. I loved it at the old BSV, and you can be sure that I'll follow it wherever it gets posted again. |
| Chapters One ~ FOur are posted together now . Just had a small issue with four that needed to be dealt with. Thanks! ~Tam~ |
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