Slayer in Chains by Temptation
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanChapter 205/09/2006 06:02 pm
I like this so far, Wes as a big bad is a good idea. I can't wait for more.
 
slaymesoftlyChapter 205/08/2006 06:49 am
Woo hoo! LIC update and tension goes up! Can't wait for next chapter....
 
kimChapter 205/07/2006 03:35 pm
Ramping up the action....good job. And Doyle had a vision...yay!!

Wes struck out at the Council? Whoa....that's one vamp with serious anger issues. Seriously, an evil Wes is a scary thing to contemplate. He's way too smart, with way too many axes to grind.
 
vladtChapter 205/07/2006 03:32 pm
good read. they all ignore anya and she is usually the most knowledgeable of them all. enjoying the tale. thanks for the read
 
LouChapter 205/07/2006 03:04 pm
Lots to juggle with here.
 
Spikez_tartChapter 205/07/2006 01:34 pm
good story. Not sure I believe that Anya would ever keep her mouth shut when there was something on her mind. LOL
 
CewcewChapter 205/07/2006 10:42 am
Wesley seems afully strong for a fledgling. I wonder who his sire is.

hope you'll be updating soon. realy enjoying this story.
 
MarzBarChapter 205/07/2006 09:39 am
Hmmm. With Joyce in a state of hysteria and threatening to call the police, Angelus is now thrown into the pot. More story please.
 
SpaceLordChapter 205/07/2006 04:42 am
Well things are certanly moving along here. Now when will Spike show up? I want some Spike action.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter 205/07/2006 02:46 am
Someone gag Joyce...... and stake Angel while you're at it....
 
jl1980Chapter 205/07/2006 01:08 am
very interesting...can't wait to see how spike comes into this, where you take the story from here...this is one of my new favorites
 
pfeifferpackChapter 104/05/2006 01:13 pm
Oh my yes, bring this one on!!! I don't think I've ever read a fic that had a smart vampire think about this option regarding the Slayer. Strange because now that I've read this it all seems so rational, logical and just plain smart. Hum, Wes as a vamp....interesting (did Angelus do the deed?). REALLY looking forward to reading this one as you put it out here. Excellent, compelling start. Utterly believable too.

Kathleen
Thanks you so much, Kathleen, you've made my day!
 
slaymesoftlyChapter 104/04/2006 07:43 pm
Great new chapter, Temp! I hope you are writing busily, what with all that vacation at the beach time. lol. And that your cold is gone....
Thanks, Patti! lol, do you really think that I could write anything with all the fun and sun... not to mention the two noisy room mates,*looks sheepishly towards Mef and C.*
 
CarolChapter 104/04/2006 07:38 pm
Wow, how is she going to get out of this mess? I'm looking forward to Spike, the hero, showing up (at least I hope he's the hero!). Very good story so far.
*zips lips* you'll just have to wait and see
 
Spikez_tartChapter 104/04/2006 06:32 pm
Great story concept. More more more, evil writer.
**Laughs evilly and runs away**
 
neo_trinityknotChapter 104/04/2006 12:51 pm
Cant wait to see where you go with it.
Thanks, Neo, happy to see you enjoyed.
 
NeChapter 104/04/2006 12:50 pm
 
bloodshedbabyChapter 104/04/2006 11:19 am
Heh. I look forward to seeing how Spike enters into this story!
Spike? Who said Spike was in this story? LOL
 
SpaceLordChapter 104/04/2006 10:49 am
Hmm so who turned Wesley, I take it this is happened before he began to work for Angel in the Angel show.
You know, I have no idea who turned Wes. Your guess is as good as mine LOL Thanks for the review.
 
MarzBarChapter 104/04/2006 10:41 am
Wesley is a vampire, Faith is in a coma and Buffy is in college. What else is AU here? Will Spike find her? More story please.
I guess you'll just have to wait and see.
 
rayanChapter 104/04/2006 10:38 am
ooo pooor buffyy...when is spike comin into play i miss him alreadyyyy...........good chapters keep it up
LOL, he's coming, he's coming!
 
slinkypsychokitChapter 104/04/2006 08:22 am
Very, very nice! Can't wait to see where you go with this! (hopefully it'll lead to a very dusty Wes)
 
slinkypsychokitChapter 104/04/2006 08:22 am
Very, very nice! Can't wait to see where you go with this! (hopefully it'll lead to a very dusty Wes)
Thanks, happy to see like it.
 
jl1980Chapter 104/04/2006 07:50 am
congratulation...you have managed to make wimpy wesley truly terrifying!! excellent villain! i feel so bad for buffy i want to cry, and i am hopelessly addicted to this story already, can't wait for more!
Thank you! I must say writing evil Wes is fun, I'm glad that I've made him a convincing villain. Thanks for your reviews; they make the muse very happy.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter 104/04/2006 07:26 am
Muahahaha, apparently you didn't know I was psychic *wiggles fingers* And no worries *zips lips and won't tell all your dirty secrets* lmao
Oh... so you know about the llama and the priest. **hangs head low and slinks away.**
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter 104/04/2006 07:14 am
Hmmm let's see.... he'd kill Wesley and his minions so he could kidnap Buffy for himself, cause the slayer thing is his gig... then he'd shag her eight ways to sunday! ^.^
Ok, who are you and how did you get hold of my plot notes? LOL
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter 104/04/2006 06:50 am
Poor Buffy... is Spike going to come save her?
Thanks for the reviews, Elizabeth. All I can say is, what do you think season 4 Spike would do?
 
vladtPrologue05/07/2006 03:11 pm
very good start, wes evil and using the council's knowledge. thanks for the read.
 
Spikez_tartPrologue04/04/2006 06:24 pm
Arrrgggh Not the needle. Who's the big shot vampire? Could it be??
 
bloodshedbabyPrologue04/04/2006 11:12 am
oh awesome start! Soooo glad you are back with the writing goodness! *rushes to read next chap*
 
jl1980Prologue04/04/2006 06:58 am
awesome chapter!!! have a feeling i'm gonna love this
Thanks you! I'm so glad that you’ve enjoyed the story so far… lots more to come.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersPrologue04/04/2006 06:04 am
Oh NOES!!! What're they going to do with her?