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| The Girl Answers the Question by missus_grace |
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| Gillypod | Part Four | 06/25/2006 03:45 pm |
| I always like a story where B/S claim each other - well written and executed |
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| jl1980 | Part Four | 05/27/2006 08:43 pm |
the conversation with angel about whether or not she was happy -- very well done and sweet...you wrote angel well without bashing...loved this entire story, excellent chatper  |
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| Delicia | Part Four | 05/09/2006 02:20 am |
| Oh! I loved this ending! Everyone fighting together, it's inspiring! Thank you so much! |
| You're welcome. I'm glad you stopped by to read and leave a comment! |
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| Harriet | Part Four | 04/28/2006 05:30 am |
| Wow this is such a wonderful; beautiful, story, i love it. If you haven't already though about it Ithink you should consider writting a sequel. |
| No sequel is forthcoming at this point because I have so many other stories I want to tell, but thanks for enjoying it! |
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| MarzBar | Part Four | 04/24/2006 06:04 pm |
| Lovely story about Spike and Buffy becoming mates. Thank you for sharing. |
You're welcome!
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| techmuse | Part Four | 04/24/2006 03:45 pm |
Very enjoyable....The characterizations were very well done and flowed well from the show. I agree this should have been how it ended up.
Thanks for a great read! |
| I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for reading! |
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| deedo | Part Four | 04/24/2006 02:54 pm |
Wow, a really great story!! I loved how Buffy left everything behind to get her vampire back as soon as she found out!!
And nice to see that everyone (even Riley) came through for the big fight in the end! It would have been great if events had taken a similar turn in the show, definitely a fantastic ending!
Thanks for sharing |
It would have been a great season if Spuffy fans had been in charge, eh?
Glad you liked! |
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| btvsfreak@yahoo.com | Part Four | 04/24/2006 11:42 am |
Perfect ending! You should have written for the show.  ) |
| I wish...but then I'd have written myself into the show as a Mary Sue and started a passionate affair with James; I mean Spike! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Part Four | 04/24/2006 09:45 am |
| OOOOOOOhhhh .... even Riley was there, and he was fighting on the right side this time. Awesome. I loved how you ended this fic. All four chapters were great to read, and it was a nice fic from start to finish. |
| These reviews mean a lot to me. Thanks for reading! |
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| Robyn | Part Four | 04/23/2006 10:09 pm |
| I really loved how everyone showed up, Giles, Xander, Willow, and the other slayers, Riley and his men, and Connor, there are so many people who would fight for good, they just needed to know when and where. I really loved your ending, it is so much more preferable to the ending on the show. (And I still got teary over Wes's death.) |
| I wish I could have saved Wes, but I actually wrote the ending late in AtS s.5 and never thoght to change it. Next time we'll save him! |
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| vladt | Part Four | 04/23/2006 10:06 pm |
| fun read, but i signed up for a long, long tale. really enjoyed what you did. if you wish to be kind your next tale will increase proportionaly, as this one did over the first. please! thanks for the enjoyment. |
| Sorry this wasn't longer. I do have some long stories, but I need to come closer to finishing them before I post. However, your kind words inspire me and I will try to hurry them along! |
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| SinisterChic | Part Four | 04/23/2006 09:17 pm |
| I liked Spike and Dawn making up. I also liked Buffy's speech about why she gave the cookie-dough analogy. |
| Someone had to explain the lameness of that speech! |
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| Karyn | Part Four | 04/23/2006 08:15 pm |
| very nice!! loved this story, was great !!!! |
| Thank you! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Part Four | 04/23/2006 08:12 pm |
| Ohhhhhhh they win right???!! |
| Don't you hate authors who make you think of your own endings! |
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| nichole | Part Four | 04/23/2006 07:49 pm |
| i really enjoyed this story and really hate to see it end...look forward to more from you...N |
| I'm working on the next story as we speak! Thanks for the encouragement. |
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| Kat | Part Four | 04/23/2006 06:54 pm |
| great ending. great story. I quite enjoyed it |
| Thank you so much for reading! |
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| maryperk | Part Four | 04/23/2006 06:43 pm |
| Great finish. nice story. |
| I'm glad you liked it! |
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| jl1980 | Part Three | 05/27/2006 08:41 pm |
| how very sexy and sweet and very powerful chapter ;) |
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| Delicia | Part Three | 05/09/2006 02:07 am |
| Sorry, I fell behind! I loved this chapter so much, so many emotions. Not only was it hot, I loved the sweet claiming words! |
| This was a tough chapter to write, so thanks for the positive feedback! |
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| btvsfreak@yahoo.com | Part Three | 04/24/2006 11:35 am |
Guh....guh.....guh
Bloody wonderful darling! |
| Just the reaction I was hoping for! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Part Three | 04/19/2006 07:08 pm |
| Beautiful ... poignant ... excellent chapter. The intimacy was written well and steamy. The mating bond was perfect. I loved this chapter. |
| Feedback like that makes my heart swell. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Part Three | 04/19/2006 06:33 pm |
| aww.. they mated.. *giggles* |
| 4 evah! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Part Three | 04/19/2006 06:20 pm |
| OH! Sweet claimy goodness!! |
| You betcha! |
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| Kat | Part Three | 04/19/2006 05:20 pm |
| That was absolutly beautiful. wow I meen WOW. Great writing and so much feeling. |
| Thank you very much! |
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| Robyn | Part Three | 04/19/2006 04:21 pm |
| This chapter was so sweet. I loved her confessions, first when she told him that she wanted to marry him, and then when she told him about the cookie dough incident. And their claiming of each other was very beautiful, I loved their vows to each other. And you sex scenes were the perfect balance of detail and sweetness. |
*Exhales in relief*
Thank you for the feedback. I didn't know ff I could pull off writing "erotica," but if you all are enjoying it, then I guess it's okay. |
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| vladt | Part Three | 04/19/2006 03:21 pm |
| great update. wonderful mating scene. can't wait to read angel's reaction. thanks for the read |
| I'm glad you're reading! |
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| whitesaphyr | Part Three | 04/19/2006 02:03 pm |
| oh my god ! i so love your version of "the girl in question" ! why wasn't it like that in the show ? buffy and spike vows were so sweet... |
| Don't you wish they could have said those things to each other? |
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| maryperk | Part Three | 04/19/2006 01:30 pm |
| I thought it was a great chapter. |
| Thank you! |
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| jl1980 | Part Two | 05/27/2006 08:38 pm |
| love that reunion...so very sweet...now buffy and company need to save the day so everybody makes it through the big battle ok |
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| Delicia | Part Two | 04/23/2006 12:20 pm |
| Very nice! I like how you put all their emotions upfront without trying to hide anything. |
| That's what bothered me about the show. They all hid so much... |
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| Karyn | Part Two | 04/16/2006 09:36 am |
| wonderful story!! love it! |
| Thanks for your kind words. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Part Two | 04/15/2006 12:36 am |
| Excellent update. I liked the timing and place that you picked for their reunion. I look forward to where you take us next. |
| I always wished in canon that someone had been at the Poetry Slam, supporting our brave-hearted, vampire poet. |
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| vladt | Part Two | 04/14/2006 06:49 pm |
| enjoying this buffy. calm, knows who she is and what she wants. enjoyable change. thanks for the fine read. |
I'm glad you like my Buffy. I love having the power to make my characters do what I want!
Bwah ha ha ha! |
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| Kat | Part Two | 04/14/2006 11:17 am |
| oh oh oh this is an amazing chapter. I just wow i love it. And Buffy telling Giles that he just has to trust her is perfect |
| Giles has to know by now the Buffy does know best, eh? |
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| MarzBar | Part Two | 04/14/2006 10:03 am |
| Nice, quiet reunion. Buffy didn't even break his nose. More story please. |
| I just hate it when she goes for his nose, so I made her behave. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Part Two | 04/14/2006 05:20 am |
awesome.. cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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| Thanks for commenting! I'll try to get it up soon. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Part Two | 04/14/2006 03:43 am |
| Oooo is there going to be happy hot spuffy smut?? *looks at you pleadingly* |
*Gulps*
Yes, there will be, but I've never published smut before, so I could use some con/crit about how believable/hot it is. I love to read the stuff, but writing it is harder! |
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| Robyn | Part Two | 04/14/2006 03:38 am |
| I love that Buffy got to the bar in time to hear her poem, and that she very clearly showed Spike how happy she was to see him, before she called him on making a decision for her. I really loved this update and can't wait for the next. |
| I'm almost ready to post the next part. Thank you for the specific feedback. It's nice to know what people like about the story, exactly. |
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| Esther | Part Two | 04/14/2006 03:23 am |
| SQUEE!!! I loved it!! More, please! |
| It'll be done in one, maybe two more parts. Thanks for the encouragement! |
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| maryperk | Part Two | 04/14/2006 03:15 am |
| Great chapter!! Love it. |
| Glad you like it so far! |
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| jl1980 | Part One | 05/27/2006 08:31 pm |
| love this chapter, excellent start...you wrote the Immortal sort of how i imagined him..can't wait for buffy to see spike again |
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| Delicia | Part One | 04/23/2006 12:07 pm |
| Great first chapter! I'm thrilled that you're rewriting GiQ. It so needed a heaping helping of Spuffy! Yay, go Buffy (telling off the Immortal). |
| Don't you wonder what she was even doing with him? Thanks for reading. |
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| vladt | Part One | 04/14/2006 03:28 pm |
| great beginning. when did buffy become civilized? thanks for the read. |
| 'When did Buffy become civilized?' I'd like to think that she grew up after Spike's sacrifice-maybe she started the night everyone threw her out of the house and he came to her. I'm glad you're reading! |
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| MarzBar | Part One | 04/14/2006 12:42 am |
| Good beginning! I thought she should have punched the Immortal but maybe she's mellowed out. |
| I might have dropped the ball on that one, but when I was writing it made sense. I'm mostly really tired when I write, so maybe I should get a good night's sleep first! I do want my Buffy to stop hitting her men (vampires). Thanks for the feedback! |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Part One | 04/13/2006 10:01 pm |
| arrghh!!! omg update please?!?! i love this!!! |
| This feedback is music to my ears! Thank you for reading. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Part One | 04/13/2006 08:31 pm |
| lay the smack down on the butt! lol |
| Hee hee! She's a woman on a mission! |
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| me | Part One | 04/13/2006 08:23 pm |
| great start..looking forward to more. |
| Coming right up! |
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| kim | Part One | 04/13/2006 07:40 pm |
| Good beginning. |
| Glad you liked it! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Part One | 04/13/2006 07:22 pm |
| Nice start to this one. I hope that she gets to LA in a hurry. I have faith that this will turn out to be a nice Spuffy fic. {Smiles} |
| You can count on most of my fic being fluffy Spuff. Or Spuffy fluff. Minimal angst and little S/other and B/other. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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| Robyn | Part One | 04/13/2006 05:44 pm |
| This is a great start, and I love that you address the issue of how the men in Buffy's life keep things from her 'in her best interest', I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Thank you for your feedback. Next chapter soon! |
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| maryperk | Part One | 04/13/2006 05:12 pm |
| Good start. |
| Thank you! |
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| Esther | Part One | 04/13/2006 04:53 pm |
| Hot damn, great intro!!! Ooh, this is how it should've gone on the show!! MORE!!! Please? |
| Have patience, grasshopper. More will be coming soon. |
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