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| Menehune and Night Marchers by gotkona |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 9 | 05/23/2006 01:37 am |
| An excellent fic ... especially for a first fic. {Smiles} Congratulations on a job well done. A very sweet and loving ending. Thank you for that. |
| Thank you. It means something special when it comes from an author that I enjoy reading. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 9 | 05/09/2006 05:49 pm |
| raelly cute ficcie |
| Thanks so much for the comments on each chapter. It makes a first time author feel really good and it makes me want to write more. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 9 | 05/06/2006 12:44 am |
I like how you filled us in on Buffy, Spike, and Dawn's lives. You did a good job with this fic thanks for posting it.  |
| Thank you for your kind words. |
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| vladt | Chapter 9 | 05/05/2006 09:31 pm |
| fine tale and a fun read. thanks for the tale. |
| Mahalo. |
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| Kat | Chapter 9 | 05/05/2006 09:17 pm |
| amazing story from start to finish. loved it all |
| Thanks fo the wonderful review. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 9 | 05/05/2006 08:21 pm |
| awww.. what a wonderful ending!! loved it!! |
| Mahalo |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 9 | 05/05/2006 06:00 pm |
| Thank you for the tropical tale of wishes gone right. No vengeance in sight. |
| You're welcome. |
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| ahigh | Chapter 9 | 05/05/2006 03:59 pm |
| Just read your story and its good, especially for a first fic! I really enjoyed reading about the Hawaiian culture. Hope to readmore of your fic in the future. |
| Thanks so much. Hawaii is truly a magical place with lots of folklore. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 8 | 05/23/2006 01:35 am |
| {claps and cheers for Spike} YEAH!! He made it!! |
| Go Spike. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 8 | 05/09/2006 05:48 pm |
| neat trials! |
| Thanks. |
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| Kat | Chapter 8 | 05/05/2006 12:08 am |
| amazing chapter loved it |
| Thank you. |
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| vladt | Chapter 8 | 05/04/2006 09:09 pm |
| good chapter. trials handled quickly and efficiently. time to get back to buffy in the hot tub. thanks for the read. |
| Thanks for the review. Only one more to go. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 8 | 05/04/2006 06:27 pm |
| What interesting trials for Spike, I'm glad he had the strength and presence of thought for them. Thanks for the update. |
| Thanks for the review. One more chapter to go. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 8 | 05/04/2006 11:54 am |
| Nice fights but not enough to defeat Spike. I think Buffy and Dawn should be pretty happy to see him with his new amulet. |
| Well you know we wanted him to win so they had to be easy for Spike. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 7 | 05/23/2006 01:31 am |
| Never hurts to have an extra zap of Slayer's blood to give you a burst of energy. Very touching words from both of them over the worry of what is to come. Good chapter. |
| Mahalo (thanks) |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 7 | 05/09/2006 05:46 pm |
| nice update! |
| Thanks. |
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| vladt | Chapter 7 | 05/04/2006 09:01 pm |
| very good read. am sure it took spike's mind of tommorrow night. thanks fot the fun read. |
| Thank you |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 7 | 05/04/2006 01:22 am |
aww.. so cute.. i wanna know whats gonna happen with spike..
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| Stay tuned for today's chapter and thanks for the review. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 7 | 05/03/2006 06:17 pm |
| Nice smutty interlude. I hope she personally feeds him more before the trials. More story please. |
| Thanks for the your comments. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 7 | 05/03/2006 12:22 pm |
Nice little interlude before the big test and what a way to help yourself get a good nights sleep.  |
| A little Spike loving before bedtime is always good. ;) |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 6 | 05/23/2006 01:28 am |
| Although it was disheartening for them to hear that he would still be a vampire, it is excellent news if Spike can pass the trials. I'm sure he can. If the Menehune thought Buffy's was worthy enough to have her wish granted ... I doubt they would let someone unworthy come back. |
| Menehune are very fair about who they bring back. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 6 | 05/09/2006 05:45 pm |
| intirigiung concept - can;t wait to rad the rest |
| thanks. |
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| vladt | Chapter 6 | 05/03/2006 05:24 pm |
| good read, enjoying the tale. it is easy to understand spike attitude toward trials, been there, done that, got the t-shirt. thanks for the fun |
| Thank you for reading and reviewing. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 6 | 05/03/2006 07:29 am |
| oh my.. i really love this!!! please update!!! |
| Thank you, I will soon. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 6 | 05/02/2006 06:18 pm |
| Thanks for the update. I like that they are so used to prophecies that falling into another one doesn’t even faze them, they just ask what they are supposed to do. |
| Thanks for your comments. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 6 | 05/02/2006 04:12 pm |
| Ow! More trials for Spike. Apparently Africa, collapsing the Hellmouth and various and sundry tortures doled out by the Initiative, Angelus and Buffy aren't enough. More story please. |
| I'm terrible for putting him through more trials. Hopefully these won't be so bad. |
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| Kat | Chapter 6 | 05/02/2006 12:29 pm |
| Great chapter. and really why would they want spike to be human really then he wouldnt be that helpful with training. hmmmm oh well great chapter |
| Thanks. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 5 | 05/23/2006 01:23 am |
| Good and bad news indeed. Glad to see that Buffy was not going to go for the whole leave Spike there and only visit. {smiles} She loves him very much, and it is nice to see it showing in deed and words. |
| Who would only want to visit Spike? Not me. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 5 | 05/09/2006 05:40 pm |
| really cute - i can;t wait to se everyone'e reactions to this new plan! |
| Thanks. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 5 | 05/01/2006 07:11 pm |
| Poor Spike stuck with the love of his life in paradise, but not able to fully enjoy it. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it. |
| Mahalo. You will have to wait to see if he will get to enjoy it.;) |
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| Kat | Chapter 5 | 05/01/2006 05:33 pm |
| good chapter. i enjoyed it |
| Mahalo |
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| vladt | Chapter 5 | 05/01/2006 03:22 pm |
| enjoyed the update. it is difficult to work up sympathy for being tied to a tropical island. this is a very good read, thanks |
| Thanks for your comment. I did have someone who said they couldn't imagine being stuck on an island. Sorry, I can think of worse things to happen to me. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 5 | 05/01/2006 03:13 pm |
| Drat! How awful for poor Buffy; she's stuck in Hawaii with Spike for the rest of her natural life. I'm just not sure I could stand the torment. WEG |
| Wasn't that awful of me to do?;) |
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| pfeifferpack | Chapter 5 | 05/01/2006 01:13 pm |
Excellent...I could handle paradise with Spike (oh the horror.....forced, I say forced to live in the garden of Eden with the sexy vampire....POOR Buffy *G*). Of course lots of honeymooners don't get out to enjoy the paradise outsid in the sun there either.
I have hopes for the resolution of this and can just see Spike on the beach with Buffy one way or another in time. Yup yup.
K |
| You're so right about that. Since we plan to retire there someday, I have no problem being stuck there with Spike.;) |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | chapter 4 | 05/23/2006 01:18 am |
| Those two just can't keep their hands off of each other, and I think that is wonderful. I love seeing a loving and good relationship between the two of them. So rewarding and relaxing. Of course not overly relaxing with all that sexual tension building up from reading such nice intimate scenes ... but you know what I mean. LOL |
| I am a total fluffy person. Thanks for the review. |
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| Athenewolfe | chapter 4 | 05/09/2006 05:32 pm |
| I wonder what dawn found out hmmm.... |
| Keep reading and thanks for reviewing. |
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| pfeifferpack | chapter 4 | 04/28/2006 06:15 pm |
Oh oh....why do I have a fear that this happy circumstance may be in jeopardy! What news does Dawn have? Can't wait to find out.
Excellent.
KAthleen |
| Thanks. I may not be able to update till Monday since the kids overtake the computer on the weekend. |
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| Robyn | chapter 4 | 04/28/2006 06:01 pm |
| Thanks for the update, this was both cute and hot. And some of the lines had me laughing out loud. I am looking forward to the information that Dawn found. |
| Thank you. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | chapter 3 | 05/23/2006 01:14 am |
| Wonderful claiming. Excellent chapter. |
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| Athenewolfe | chapter 3 | 05/09/2006 05:30 pm |
| nice claiming |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 10:40 pm |
aww they're claimed..  |
| Well, I do like Spike when he bites. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 10:37 pm |
| hehe, more yumminess |
| Got to love nakkid Spike;) |
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| vladt | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 09:31 pm |
| great chapter. sweet, sexy and hot. wonderful read, thanks. |
| Mahalo (thanks). |
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| Robyn | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 07:51 pm |
| Thanks for the great updates. This chapter was very hot, with a very sweet ending. After everything they have both been through, once they realize how strong and real their feelings still are, I can see them rushing the relationship to permanence. |
| Mahalo (thank you in Hawaiian) |
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| Kat | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 06:26 pm |
| oh yum hot chapter. wow *fans self* lol it was amazing |
| Thank you for your kind words. |
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| MarzBar | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 05:39 pm |
| Whew! Nice wish granting by the fairies. Hot juicy smut ensues. Gotta go smoke now. |
| Thank you |
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| maryperk | chapter 3 | 04/27/2006 04:07 pm |
| Still love this story. So sweet. |
| You are always so kind with your reviews and for my first fic you made me feel more at ease. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 2 | 05/23/2006 01:10 am |
| Awesome chapter. You really have Spike down pat with this. His playful snarky attitude that we loved so much. Nice way for Buffy too. I like this Buffy much better than the bitchy Buffy that we've been getting in so many stories lately. It's nice to get a respite from that. |
| I like nice Buffy too though most of the time she was bitchy Buffy. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 2 | 05/09/2006 05:29 pm |
| very interesting way to bring him back - i wonder what Buffy will do with him.... |
| Do you really wonder?;) |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 2 | 04/27/2006 10:36 pm |
| ooooo yummy! spike... gah |
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| Robyn | Chapter 2 | 04/27/2006 07:38 pm |
| This chapter was very nice, I loved that you had Buffy confused and off balance but as soon as it really hit her that Spike was back she jumped into his arms and kissed him. It was a move that I could really see her making. |
| Thank you for the nice review. |
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| tina | Chapter 2 | 04/27/2006 05:30 pm |
| This is nicely written but the plot seems a bit too rushed. The idea behind it is amazing, the wishing thing, but maybe... giving spike and buffy a little time to get to know each other again before they throw themselves at each other? You don't need to cheapen this intricate plot by obligatory smut, right off the bat. I usually do not review but I felt like I should say something here. I mean no disrespect, btw and I hope it's not taken that way. |
| No disrespect taken and btw this is my first attempt at writing so timing isn't a strong point with me yet. It's a rather short fic too so things do move a bit fast here. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 05/23/2006 01:06 am |
| Ooo yeah! I remember reading this story elsewhere before. I loved it there, and I'm enjoying the rereading of it now. I waited until you had it fully posted to the BSv before I started rereading and reviewing. |
| Thanks for rereading it. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 1 | 05/09/2006 05:27 pm |
| Very intruiging start to your story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next and how this story evolves |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Chapter 1 | 04/27/2006 10:35 pm |
| cool! i used to live in hawaii... so nice there |
| Lucky. We want to move there when we retire and I was inspired by our last trip to write this. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 1 | 04/27/2006 02:10 pm |
| Eh. This chapter looks mightily familiar... |
| It should. You read it over for me about 6 months ago. Just took me a while to get it beta'd and post to your site. |
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| Spikes Slayer2 | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 10:57 pm |
| OMG I LOVE THIS please update!!! |
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| vladt | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 09:26 pm |
| don't know where your going, but definitely along for the ride. very good start. thanks for the fun read. |
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| pfeifferpack | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 09:24 pm |
Tweak away if it will make the Menehunes bring Spike back *G*. Great beginning.
Kathleen |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 09:11 pm |
| What fun, little magical people in this yarn! Don't mind me, I don't know anything about Hawaiian legends so keep up the story telling. |
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| Robyn | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 07:50 pm |
| I really like this, it's a great start. I am looking forward to following this fic. |
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| Kat | Chapter 1 | 04/25/2006 07:45 pm |
| oh this could be fun. yay for fun. hmmm gotta wonder what will happen. |
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