Fixing the Factors by ImmortallySpuffy
 
VerdaDay 1308/04/2006 04:08 am
Oh no! what happened? Here I was laughing at another Angel dusting by the Red Wolf Co. and then Buffy and Spike are all alone and to top it all off, I have to wait for an update! Oh I like the Spike quotes from GotR Live CD. I know he had to of said them at sometime during the series but I don't remember which ones, I only know that they are on the CD. Here I'm saying a prayer that neither you nor your beta's become ill, no computer crashes and the server accepts your story on time. Impatiently watching for your update. Great chapter, thanks for the read.
 
pretty_in_fangsDay 1308/03/2006 04:43 pm
Emotional whipilash. I was still laughing from Spike and Giles when I got all depressed with Buffy. How sad.
 
EmilyDay 1308/03/2006 03:56 pm
::pout:: I don't like it when they aren't together. But yay for updatey-ness!
 
BridgetDay 1308/03/2006 02:14 pm
Good chapter. Thanks for the update.
 
VWalkDay 1308/03/2006 12:50 pm
This was a GREAT chapter. The Giles and Spike Drunk Comedy Show was hilarious. I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. Too bad the gang won't remember what's happened. We've had Oz dust Angel (or Angel dust himself depending on how you want to look at it). Who's next?
I also love the fact that Buffy is the one who's all for the relationship and Spike is in denial. Its nice to see the reversal.
A little concerned about Buffy going to bed and Spike waking up alone. Is that the effect you were going for or am I just a paranoid wanker?
Oh by the way I'm so glad that Spike and Giles have developed a solid friendship - I always thought that if they could get over the animosity, they'd have a lot in common.
Great job....
 
letitiaDay 1308/03/2006 10:46 am
I just hope that Buffy and Spike do come to some type of understanding between the two of them. They have now had so much time to get used to each other and them pulling away is only going to hurt them. But with that said, I just LOVE Giles and Spike relationship and the way he cut Buffy off on the drive. He is so going to pay and see how Buffy felt when she woke up alone.
 
JaciaDay 1308/03/2006 10:17 am
More please!
 
vladtDay 1308/03/2006 02:23 am
hilarious read, thank you. what changed on the reset, that spike woke alone?
 
kimDay 1308/03/2006 01:55 am
That was the most hilarious thing I've read in a while. Drunk Giles and Spike!! OMg!!
 
LisFayteDay 1308/02/2006 11:26 pm
Are yhey getting punished for Spike not getting with the program? I love this fic, but I am a little disapointed that they didn't get to make fun of Riley, but the "Angel Dust" was good. Seriously though, this is one terrific fic
 
MarzBarDay 1308/02/2006 11:17 pm
Uh oh! Is it is new day now? More story please.
 
golddrakeDay 1308/02/2006 11:02 pm
great chapter
 
EmileeDay 1308/02/2006 09:53 pm
So what's gonna have to happen to convince Spike that it's NOT just the spell causing their feeling? Excellent update, can't wait for the next chapter.
 
EstherDay 1308/02/2006 08:36 pm
That was the most hilarious---bwaaa---I flove your Spike/Giles scenes!!! Sooo damn funny--most especially their little 'plan' and what actually happens. Gah!! I love it!!! Fantastic job!!
 
redwulf50Day 1308/02/2006 08:36 pm
ROFLMAO You guys are great
 
ShadowDay 1308/02/2006 07:56 pm
Spikey is in trouble!
 
VerdaDay 1208/04/2006 03:17 am
Thanks. Xander got to dust him too! I like that Xander is getting along with Spike, but will he remember in the morning? or did Giles do a spell on him too? One more chapter to go and I have to starting begging for new updates as well, and believe me I don't mind begging for what I want. Great chapter.
 
Harry 4EyesDay 1208/02/2006 04:05 pm
OK so will Xander remember any of this conversation or will they have to redo the whole thing again? like that case of deja vu Angel gets, or maybe because of that spell that allows certain things to carry through when the day repeats itself? So even though Xander won't remember why he feels different but he still will? It's all very confusing.

Yeah Xander got to dust the forehead to, that leaves basically...Wesley as the only one who might still want to dust him, ofcourse if I was Spike i'd waste a few days just dusting Angel, then get on with all the tasks in hand, like befriending Tara, and Xander and help Anya adjust to being human (Though I don't remember if thats an actual task they have to carry out.) um...Help Willow somehow...maybe, Get the twerps away from Warren, something about Riley break up and something else about him and ofcource Adam. and maybe something else as well I can't remember.

Busy busy day I really wouldn't want to be the person who has to write the entire day for all that that's for sure.

Well still loving it
Update Soon
Harry
Thanks!
 
Harry 4EyesDay 1208/02/2006 04:05 pm
OK so will Xander remember any of this conversation or will they have to redo the whole thing again? like that case of deja vu Angel gets, or maybe because of that spell that allows certain things to carry through when the day repeats itself? So even though Xander won't remember why he feels different but he still will? It's all very confusing.

Yeah Xander got to dust the forehead to, that leaves basically...Wesley as the only one who might still want to dust him, ofcourse if I was Spike i'd waste a few days just dusting Angel, then get on with all the tasks in hand, like befriending Tara, and Xander and help Anya adjust to being human (Though I don't remember if thats an actual task they have to carry out.) um...Help Willow somehow...maybe, Get the twerps away from Warren, something about Riley break up and something else about him and ofcource Adam. and maybe something else as well I can't remember.

Busy busy day I really wouldn't want to be the person who has to write the entire day for all that that's for sure.

Well still loving it
Update Soon
Harry
*sigh* Sadly they will have to do again. Sorry about the confusion, *g* Mostly they're testing out the problems and the solutions right now. Yup, lots and lots to do,lol. Thanks so much!
 
RobynDay 1208/01/2006 03:04 am
I like that Spike was able to reach Xander and the huge difference it made in him. I loved Giles’ thought that Buffy’s ability to live in denial is infectious and Spike’s actions are certainly supporting the idea that he has moved there. Thanks for the very enjoyable update.
Yup, just like Cooties, Denial can spread, lol

Thanks so much for the review and support!
 
LisFayteDay 1207/31/2006 05:17 pm
I am loveing this fic. The dailey dusting is so funny, why can't we have a daily killing of Riley? Maybe Lorne can dust Angel next.
rofl, daily killing of Riley would be sooo much messier, rofl, at least Angel turns to fertalizer *g*
 
EmilyDay 1207/28/2006 08:42 pm
Nice little role reversal here. Spike being the one in denial and running away from his problems would be quite be funny if it wasn't horribly frustrating. Love it, and waiting for more
hee hee! If you're frustrated just imagine how Buffy feels, rofl Thanks!
 
saraw128Day 1207/28/2006 07:08 pm
Absolutly great story so far!! I just came across it and can't wait for more!
Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the rest!
 
JessicaDay 1207/28/2006 04:08 am
Such a cute chapter. Spike's reaction to the kiss was excellent. It's good to see Buffy waiting for Spike to come around for a change, even if she already knows the outcome. ; ) Can't wait for more.
Yup, we wanted a Buffy falls first type of story for a change! Thanks so much!
 
LushaDay 1207/27/2006 04:45 pm
This is so much fun to read! I'm looking forward to more!
Thanks ! Glad you're enjoying!
 
HEEDay 1207/27/2006 03:31 pm
This story is a treasure. There are so many great relationships in it; the lighter side of Buffy and Spike; Giles and Spike and now Spike and Xander.
(Oh and I didn't review at the time but that line in the previous chapter "We'd invite you in but....we really don't like you" had me on the floor laughing.)
The daily Angel staking is priceless. I can't wait to see whose turn it is next.
Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Thanks so much! So glad you like it! We've had a lot of fun writing this one!
 
VWalkDay 1207/27/2006 03:25 pm
The continuing theme of Angel Stake-age is hilarious. I'm so curious as to who will be the next one to stake Angel. Who's left? Anya? Clem?
I really really like the way you brought Xander out of his hatred of all things demon. The bonding between him and Spike was touching.
He and Spike could actually become good friends.
This is a great story and I'm so glad I stumbled upon it. I know you're updating regularly, but it still seems so long in between.
Great job.
Thanks so much, we did have a one week stumble but we're back on track now, *crosses fingers* Thanks again!
 
HelenDay 1207/27/2006 02:04 pm
I just found this through the LLGA site. Wow. It's truly fabulous. I have to admit that Groundhog Day is one of my favourite films so the nods to it are great. This is really well written. I love the structure of a day per chapter and the fact that you're making the scoobies work through all their problems. And dusting Angel every chapter with no angst. ROFLMAO!!

Really wonderful story, I await the next chapter with eager anticipation

~*helen*~
It's one of my favorites too, i laugh now everytime I see it come on, and of course sit and watch! Thanks so much for the wonderful review, glad you found us!
 
spikes_wishDay 1207/27/2006 04:11 am
another great chapter. Are Buffy and Spike eva gonna talk about the kiss? silly spikey....
Thanks so much! Not if Spike can run fast enough, rofl
 
LouDay 1207/27/2006 02:20 am
Spike, Spike, you're such a dope! Still I'm sure it will be worth the wait. Nice turnaround for Xander and another happy dusting! Great chapter.
rofl, i'm sure Spike wouldn't agree, he's just trying to be a 'good friend' even if he is clueless, Thanks!!
 
EmileeDay 1207/27/2006 01:45 am
Nice role reversal with Spike being in denial and Buffy being the pursuer. She's gonna have to do something about that. I like the Xander/Spike interaction too. Please don't wait so long before the next update. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Yup, now Buffy can see how it feels, rofl. Thanks, sorry about the wait, hopefully we're close to being back on track!
 
jessDay 1207/26/2006 11:55 pm
Gahh!!! Please god let this get to the less suspensful stuff soon. OMG I can not wait for you to update again!
rofl, Thanks so much! Sorry for the stress, hopefully we'll have some less suspensful chapters soon! *g*
 
EstherDay 1207/26/2006 07:46 pm
*hugs* This just gets better and better!!! Gosh, what to say--I loved it!! From Giles' 'Buffy and denial' comment-to Xander/Spike scenes (soo great!!)--to Xander dusting Angel *YIPPEE*--to that ender. WOW!!! I really can't wait for the next one!
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it so much! Hope you enjoy the rest!
 
MarzBarDay 1207/26/2006 06:30 pm
This is definitely a change everythng day. Xander gets some smarts and Angelus gets dusted. How will that come out? More story please.
rofl, Thanks...not sure about the Xander gets 'smarts' part, but his eyes definatly opened a bit.
 
kimDay 1207/26/2006 06:07 pm
Oh, that's hilarious - Spike being in more denial than Buffy. Who'd ever thought that would happen?

Awww, Xander's feeling useful again...the boy so needed guy friends.

Giles' eyes opened further...very good.
Yup, Spikes swimming the Nile with the best of them, *g*
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 1207/26/2006 05:49 pm
Fantastic! I think I kinda like Xander getting a bit of Angel dust for himself.
Thanks, yup couldnt end it before Xander got a turn! lol
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 1207/26/2006 05:17 pm
Yippee! The new chapter. {Does a dance all around}

Go Buffy with her realizations. Even though she doesn't know why Dru would want it ... she realizes it and has no problem with it. Whoo hoo ... now to get Spike out of Egypt, and we'd all be fine.

The way you went through a lot of things in the scene with Buffy, Spike, and Giles as a way to "Test" the reactions to what should and shouldn't be done was an excellent wrap up and seguay. A very creative way to put a lot of information into the story all at once and have the flow work.

ROFL to Giles' line about Spike being a good impersonator ... the spoiled child routine. LOL.

I hope they did something to keep Xander's memories. So they don't have to go through thta all again with Xander every day. it would make it easier for them.

Yeah!! Another Angel dusting. LOL. That will teach Angelus to attack Spike. When all of this is over, I wonder how bad Angel's body is going to feel. It's been dusted so many times. LOL
*giggles* Yup, Spike's happily or rather not 'happily' in denial, lol

They're mostly testing the waters, to see the actual problems and solutions, Thanks!
 
DizzyBDay 1207/26/2006 05:15 pm
Ya know, dusting Angel just doesn't get old! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next day!
rofl, nope doesn't get old for us either, glad you liked!
 
pretty_in_fangsDay 1207/26/2006 04:55 pm
Giles was struck by a single thought, ‘Apparently, Buffy’s ability to live in denial is infectious.’
I nearly fell off the couch laughing! I love it.
I also adored the Spike/Giles relationship. You portray it really well.
rofl, yup Denial is catching, Thanks!
 
Ashley GranchesterDay 1207/26/2006 04:10 pm
I was anxiously waiting for the new chappie. Oh boy, I really love it. Specially since is now Buffy the first that realized about feelings and sharing them.

It was pretty funny to have Spike in Denial (its a first regarding feelings hehehe), but I really hope Buffy can take him out of there soon.

I'm also glad that Spike made amends with Xander and that he got to stake Angel. Oh I'm so envious about it, how would I love to be able to do that.

Please keep it up and post soon the next chappie. I can assure you that you will make us really, really, really happy.

Ash
Thanks for much! We wanted to go at it with a 'She falls first' approach, glad you like!
 
golddrakeDay 1207/26/2006 03:41 pm
great chapter
Thanks!
 
letitiaDay 1207/26/2006 03:15 pm
Okay if you didn't get my email yet IGNORE IT... I was so excited to see this new chapter. I can't believe that Buffy is going to pull Spike back from denial land. Great to see Spike being the one to get through to Xander. And love how Buffy was trying to play the questions.. LOVE LOVE LOVE the chapter.
rofl, yup we got it, at the time the chapter was with beta, Glad your still with us and enjoying!
 
UncagedMuseDay 1207/26/2006 03:12 pm
Enjoyed! Thanks ladies for the great read.
Thanks so much!
 
redwulf50Day 1207/26/2006 02:53 pm
Bloody excellent chappie
but when does the groinfest start
*huggles wulfie and then slaps him* no groinfest! lol
 
deedoDay 1207/26/2006 02:38 pm
great update

and finally, I've been anxious and twitchy all week, waiting for the new chappie I'm totally addicted to this fic

Poor Spike, isn't it usually pretty sunny in Egypt? But it's really cute, too. I hope it won't take Buffy too long to coax him out of his denial.
I'm glad to see, they worked out some more issues, especially Xander. And Angel dusted once again, always a good way to end a day!

So thanks for another lovely chapter and keep up your fantastic work!
Sorry about the wait! and Thanks so much for the wonderful review!
 
BridgetDay 1207/26/2006 01:52 pm
It is really funny how Angel keeps getting dusted. I am glad that Xander has seen the light. It is also a nice change that Spike is the one in denial. Thanks for the update.
*g* I dont' think anyones tired of the Angel dustage yet, rofl Thanks!
 
VerdaDay 1108/04/2006 02:49 am
Hell you know this is grrreat! And was Loren trying to hit on Spike? or does he just appreciate beauty no matter what form it comes in? See ya, gotta see if she kisses him. BFN Love this! *hugs*
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 1107/26/2006 05:02 pm
OUCH! Getting hit while trying to kiss someone would hurt like heck. The antics were amusing though. Stake ... ROFL ... That's a good one.

I loved Pete calling Spike Lord Jamison. {grins} I know I told you guys that before, and I do love it. The whole scene at the magic shop in LA was priceless with the soul and the mating, etc.

Them meeting Pike and Buffy seeing her father with another pregnant woman were great additions to the timeline. I felt sad for Buffy to see Hank like that. I'm glad that Spike allowed his more "WIlliam" side out to comfort Buffy.

I absolutely adored the addition of Lorne into the mix. He fits so well, especially with what they needed to know. Spike's choice of song ... {sighs softly} ... I can just hear his voice singing it, and it gives me good goosebumps.

Score one for Cordy dusting Angel. LOL
Hee, it just seemed a great song to use, and Lorne is sooo much fun!
 
PamDay 1107/23/2006 09:27 pm
Update soon. I need to know what happens with the kiss and the rest of the story.
rofl, sorry about that, next chapter is up! Thanks for reviewing! Hope you enjoy the rest!
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 1107/21/2006 04:03 pm
Yummy, I needed that. Great chappie!
*grin* Thanks!
 
RobynDay 1107/19/2006 02:55 am
Cordy staking Angel really left me laughing. I enjoyed their hunt for information in L.A. and how in cumulated with Spike singing 'their' song to Buffy. The emotional impact of Buffy seeing her dad was fantastic. Thanks for the lovely update.
Thanks so much, we didn't want a total angstfest but wanted it emotional as well, glad you liked!
 
fanxstitchDay 1107/13/2006 08:42 pm
This is wonderful and I hope you'll update soon.
Thanks! next ones up! lol
 
CassieDay 1107/13/2006 07:19 am
Great chapter
Thanks!
 
vladtDay 1107/12/2006 11:29 pm
fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again
Thanks!
 
vladtDay 1107/12/2006 11:29 pm
fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again
Thanks!
 
vladtDay 1107/12/2006 11:28 pm
fantastic read, thank you. cordie staked angel, hilarious! and buffy taking the chance to kiss him again! wonderful read, thanks again
*grin* Yup, it's stake angel week here at IS, hope you enjoyed the show! lmao!!!
 
EstherDay 1107/12/2006 10:35 pm
Ooh, this was awesome!! Kudos for adding Pike, Hank S., and the Fang Gang!! Aww, felt sorry for Pike, too. The rest was just fantab!! More, please!!!
Thanks! yeah, it's sad when the cool guy isn't cool anymore...lol, Thanks!!
 
DizzyBDay 1107/12/2006 09:01 pm
Hah! Absolutely love the repeated Angel stakeage...and it never gets old! Isn't that funny? More, soon? PLEASE!
lmao!! yeah, you'd think we'd get bored staking angel...but nope, doesn't happen! *grin*
 
redwulf50Day 1107/12/2006 07:25 pm
So how are you going to skip the kiss this time????
*evil laughter* wouldn't you like to know...well, now you can, next chapters up! lol
 
letitiaDay 1107/12/2006 04:44 pm
what a way to start the day both times.... Hopefully she won't be head butted this time when he wakes. Great tidbit on the soul and what is up with Lord Jamison?? Spike is keeping some big secrets.
*grin* yup, he's got some secrets, hopefully we'll learn them soon! thanks for the review!
 
duke6665Day 1107/12/2006 03:42 pm
lol so it was cordy's turn huh? great chapter
*grin* we like to share! lol
 
Mark EvansDay 1107/12/2006 02:52 pm
Thanks for this chapter . I loved the randomness of it, Pike? I'm looking forward to the next installment.
*grin* i hope randomness is a good thing, we just don't want you to get bored..lol Thanks!
 
Harry 4EyesDay 1107/12/2006 02:04 pm
Gotta give the girls her kudo's still not given up even after she got her nose head butted last time....must be love..lol

Yeah for Cordy, she definitely needs a to dust Angel for the future treatment she gets from him with the headaches she receives from her visions yet still not getting the credit she deserves,and then ending up in a coma, Angel supposed to be in love with her but snogs Buffy first time he see's her and then moving onto wolfgirl , you know for someone who is supposed to be in love with Buffy he's dated quite a few girls in the meantime.

Hmm...wonder what's with the lord Jamison all about...big improvement from Lord Prat...as is the given name for William for some reason.

I'm surprised that Spike didn't make a big deal about when her father made an appearence.

Well another interesting chapters, they are going to work their arses off with the amout of tasks they have to complete by the end of the day.
Loving it
Update soon
Harry
Yup, Cordy needed some stakage...lol

*shudders* yup, we like Jamison better too

*grin* more about the looping day soon*
 
NeartDay 1107/12/2006 01:51 pm
great chappie, all that 'Angel dust' just give me a high.
rofl, hope you 'come down' long enough for the next chapter!
 
EmilyDay 1107/12/2006 01:19 pm
Great chapter I love the way you made Buffy's attempted kiss into mayhem, and you were able to write that mayhem very clearly. Also, YAY LORNE!!! Lorne is one of my fav characters, and it was great to see him. Can't wait for more, keep it up
Thanks! glad you could see the mayhem ...had lots of fun with that one!
 
Pin1Day 1107/12/2006 01:14 pm
Excellent chapter - full of great info! Love the cliff hanger endings. )
Thanks! glad you're enjoying it!
 
nightshiftDay 1107/12/2006 11:22 am
I'm really enjoying this story. Complex plotlines, and well written and beta'd. Angel dustage is always of the good. Repeated Angel dustage is even better.
Thanks!

rofl, yup sometimes the plotlines are so complex we have trouble keeping it all straight, especially since there's 3 of us.
 
jodiDay 1107/12/2006 10:53 am
Another fab chapter. LOL.
Thanks you! glad you liked!
 
MarzBarDay 1107/12/2006 10:47 am
Is she going to get her nose bonked by Spike this time? What factors are left to fix before their time can move on? More story please.
Thanks! hopefully more explaination soon!
 
golddrakeDay 1107/12/2006 09:47 am
great chapter
Thanks!
 
TamaraDay 1107/12/2006 08:53 am
Yeah, kiss him already!
*giggles followed by an evil laugh* hope you enjoy the next part!
 
EmileeDay 1107/12/2006 08:21 am
Finally some romantic action!! Although that wake up from this morning was kinda funny. I would think that Buffy could tell a stake from a 'stake'. Texture and all. That was the cutest blonde moment ever. Interesting development with the soul. I liked your take on it, frankly something I never understood about the show was why a soul should feel guilty when a demon was responsible for the actions. I can't wait for the next update.
we'll just blame the 'stake from a stake' thing on her just waking up...rofl, Thanks for the great review!
 
ShannaDay 1107/12/2006 08:20 am
Well...you are even more evil with this kissy cliffhanger!!!! Argh!! Great chapter and update. I'm all twitchy, so I need another update asap!!!!
Thanks!
 
ShannaDay 1107/12/2006 08:19 am
Well...you are even more evil with this kissy cliffhanger!!!! Argh!! Great chapter and update. I'm all twitchy, so I need another update asap!!!!
what can i say? we've always been bad! lmao!!

Thanks so much!
 
LouDay 1107/12/2006 07:10 am
Fabulous chapter! And what a tease you are - I thought we were getting some yum twice there!
*grin* yup, we're evil! lol Thanks!
 
pretty_in_fangsDay 1107/12/2006 07:03 am
Eeeee! Actually kissage. Such an improvement over almost kissage. ::grin:: This was a great update: all sorts of information and bonding experiences.
And annother Angel dusting. ::smirk::
*giggles* um, we said we were evil right? I put that in the disclaimer? oops, better go add that! *grin*
 
kimDay 1107/12/2006 06:37 am
Hey, attempt #2 is working!

Okay, this L.A. day was freaking hilarious!!!!!! Even Cordy's gotten to stake Angel, though she wasn't sure that he was still just Angel. Spike's soul reattached itself, eh? That's a new way to approach it...but, hey, if the Powers want to help out along the loopy day...

And Riley's chip has been activated...nasty, nasty Adam.

And Buffy's dad has a new family...that's always a tough thing to learn about.

Can't wait for the morning!
Thanks, yeah, Buffy had a hard time with the dad thing, but she's got support, and we like to share the stakage...it's not nice to not share *grin*
 
VerdaDay 1008/04/2006 02:08 am
This is a gem. So love the Angel bashing. Poor Xander he didn't get his chance at dusting Angel. Hate that I'm catching up, that means I'll have to wait for updates just like everyone else. It's a fairly simple story but it's so well written and the humor is just the topping on the cake. Be very proud of yourself, this is amazing!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 1007/26/2006 04:47 pm
{holding her sides} Man this is bad. Every time Angel dusts in this I laugh harder and harder at how you guys make it come about. Willow didn't directly do it, but it was still because of her.

I don't think Giles or Spike would ever get tired of dusting Angel. Go Giles!
Thanks, and nope. I think Giles would happily dust him forever! lol
 
CassieDay 1007/13/2006 07:18 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
MarzBarDay 1007/08/2006 12:13 pm
Eeek! Kissing cliffhanger! Don't Spike and Buffy have to complete the mating before the spell will break? Get to the smut!
nope, the mating and loopy day are totally different spells, Thanks!
 
OpalDay 1007/05/2006 12:52 pm
*begs* for the next update! ...leaving us at "just one...little..kiss"....evil cliffie
*giggles* didn't they tell you? we've evil...lol, Thanks!
 
EmilyDay 1007/04/2006 07:02 pm
OOh! I cannot wait until the next one. Lips of Spike await im sure
rofl...um, sorry? forgot to put up the Disclaimer: We're evil!
 
RoxyDay 1007/04/2006 05:00 pm
This story is really amazing! Groundhog day is the best movie everrr! Oh man, the staking of Angel is so hilarious, and probably very therapeutic for everyone OOh jay, hoping for Spuffy kissage!!!
*grin* Thanks, glad you're enjoying it!
 
RobynDay 1007/04/2006 09:59 am
I love Willow making a frozen Angel I just feel bad that she hasn't gotten her chance to dust him, after all he did kill her fish. Although I loved Giles's goodnight to Angel, it was the best. I am still laughing because of it. I am really enjoying Buffy’s ‘bad’ thoughts about Spike and she should know with Spike ‘just one little kiss’ can never be enough. Thanks for another great update.
*Grin* Thanks, Giles was feeling a bit naughty, rofl, Glad you liked it!
 
letitiaDay 1007/03/2006 11:09 pm
loving the day. And Angel just can't seem to be able to make it through the day.... Spike is scared of Buffy and her moods. He better think of a way to continue to get through to her and love how they left Gile's flat together.
rofl...thanks, they loved annoying angel..and yup he seems to have some trouble staying undusty for a whole day...lol
 
vladtDay 1007/03/2006 09:22 pm
wonderful read, with bonus praise for dusting angel, again. thanks for the enjoyable read.
lol, thanks!!
 
EstherDay 1007/03/2006 07:29 pm
SQUEE!! Great update!! Ok, first and foremost: I love all the creative ways you've written the dusting/bashing of Angel. I swear, besides the Spuffy love, I look forward to whatever it is you're gonna do to Angel next. Out of it all, the Giles/Spike co-conspirators against Angel is the funniest!! Oooh, and we've got Buffy with the touchy-feelies at the end. Can't wait for more!!!
Thanks, yup we love the dustings too...rofl...and nothing like Angel dusting to bond Spike and Giles, Thanks!!
 
Mark EvansDay 1007/03/2006 06:41 pm
Oooh, what a great cliffhanger . Thanks for the update!
*grin* what can i say? we're evil...lol
 
AzelmaDay 1007/03/2006 04:37 pm
Hee! I hope she kisses him! And I love how everyone keeps torturing Angel. So amusing.
*grin* Angel torture consquence free...what's better? lol, Thanks!
 
kimDay 1007/03/2006 03:22 pm
Aaaah! Cruel ending! When does he wake up?

Bad Giles, hee hee hee...poor frozen Angel, LOL.

This fic is so much fun!
Thanks so much!!! giggles, yup we're evil...lol
 
OnyxDay 1007/03/2006 01:54 pm
hehehehe....Don't we all wish we had a Spike to Perv on while he sleeps. Great chapter!
*sigh* I know i do...lol, Thanks!!
 
BridgetDay 1007/03/2006 01:15 pm
Thank you for the kiss. I have been waiting for it. Good chapter.
Giggles, don't thank us yet...lol, Thanks!!
 
Harry 4EyesDay 1007/03/2006 12:53 pm
Just one cornetto give it to me.....OK Hm....wonder if he'll wake up or if he'll wake up but not act like he's actually woken up...oh well find out next week on...What's the fic called again? Many ways to dust a foreheaded ego?

I have the feeling that Buffy is going to need to give Xander's talk a few goes before she can tweak it to perfection...and maybe some hypnotising before he accepts Spike. And sure he can dust Angel and feel better, Angel kept on getting the case of Deja vu, maybe Xander will get that elated feeling of dusting him even if Angel isn't dusted.

Brilliant Tara needs some fixing too, hopefully it will be Spike that will befriend and help her and Buffy will handle Willow. Always love Tara/Spike friendship fics.

I'm dissapointed with Willow, I was hoping she'd turn him into a frog. infact when she said the spell that was my first thought....Actually he reminds me more a toad, don't Toads always look like they are brooding?

So we have....1) renew and refresh spell from Willow, 2) Rerepeat not fade away spell from Dru 3) Mr friend my chew toy spell again from Dru, 4) You better Recognise spell from Giles, 5) and You better recognise and remember spell from Giles. All running at the same time? OK spell 4 probably ran out of fuel. but the other four are still running. Hopefully all spells are compatible otherwise we could be looking at system meltdown...lol

They should grill Andrew, he'll squel like a pig in mud...or whatever the saying a actually is.

Well still loving it
Update soon or next Monday either is fine.
Harry.
lmao!! You always bring up so many points i don't know which ones to answer..lol

Glad you still like it, yup lots of spells but i think it'll be fine, *pictures Andrew squeeling like a pig and shudders* lol

Yup, Tara fixage is definatly on the menu!!

Thanks again!!
 
redwulf50Day 1007/03/2006 11:49 am
Rip off his clothes Buffy and make him your everlovin manbitch
*snorts*
 
TamaraDay 1007/03/2006 11:47 am
Great chapter.

I especially love what was done to Angel. Giles certainly is enjoying himself dusting Angel.
Yup, Giles is having great fun with it...lol, Thanks!!
 
redwulf50Day 1007/03/2006 11:42 am
Rip off his clothes Buffy and make him your everlovin manbitch
*raises eyebrow* everlovin manbitch???
 
pretty_in_fangsDay 1007/03/2006 11:39 am
Do it, Buffy. Do it!
rofl, Thanks!!
 
golddrakeDay 1007/03/2006 11:30 am
great chapter
Thank you!!
 
AthenewolfeDay 1007/03/2006 11:19 am
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I loved it! Love it! love it! love it!
*giggles* thanks!!!
 
EmileeDay 1007/03/2006 11:03 am
You are EVIL! The UST is killing me here. I liked Giles secret staking of Angel. It would be awful hard to resist wouldn't it? ;) Can't wait to the next update. Keep up the great work.
*giggles* i know i couldn't resist...lol, Thanks so much!!
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 1007/03/2006 11:02 am
I am so involved in this fic, its truly got me mesmerized. Great work as always!
Thanks, we're trying hard to keep it interesting, glad your mesmerized *grin*
 
ShannaDay 1007/03/2006 09:48 am
Oh...now that was a cruel ending!!!!! Shame on you! You had better post the next chapter immediately to end my pain!!
Sorry about your pain, not sure if this next one will hurt or help...lol Thanks!
 
redwulf50Day 1007/03/2006 09:42 am
Giles did it didn't he, he staked Angel again
yuppers, nothing gets past you does it? lmao!!! thanks waffle!
 
AthenewolfeDay 1007/03/2006 09:40 am
Oh I loved this chapter! absolutly fab sweeties! *hugs you*
Thanks Steph!! *hugs back*
 
LouDay 1007/03/2006 09:32 am
Angel statue! What a hoot. This is brilliant. It's sweet how they are with each other, and taking things slow ain't hurting!
Thanks, we hate rushing it, just doesn't feel natural, glad you like it!
 
VerdaDay 908/04/2006 01:26 am
Just love the humor in your story. Don't know why she didn't take a peek under the sheet though, I would have! Good to have Giles there to help and now that he remembers he can enjoy the memory of dusting Angel. Another very sexy dream for Spike to have this time. Nice to have Tara accepted into the group and I thought I was gonna die when I swa the word that she used, recognized it immediately as our word to pulverize; grind into powder= DUST. LMAO Don't forget Xander, he's hated Angel from the git go. A second day of waking up in bed with a naked Spike and she still didn't try to peep. I'm highly disappointed. This story ROCKS! just fabulous.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 907/26/2006 04:39 pm
ROFLMAO !! Spike trying ot have a talk with his member ... telling him to calm down because Buffy is just a friend basically was funny.

You guys mix the right amount of snark, budding romance, and humor in this one.

Oh, and I forgot to say in the last review that I loved that kick ass dream in the last one. I loved this one too.

LOL that Tara was the one to dust Angel today. All they need is Xander, Anya and Willow to get a shot. LOL
rofl, just a round robin stakage huh? giggles, Thanks, and the dreams were sexy weren't they? the girls did a wonderful job on them, and Tam helped to sex them right up! lol
 
CassieDay 907/13/2006 07:18 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
bdsldyDay 907/03/2006 01:48 am
Great story! Hard to find good ones these days...keep the updates coming!
Thanks so much!! Glad you're enjoying it!
 
deedoDay 906/30/2006 10:00 am
great update and isn't Spike just the sweetest *sighs happily*
come to think of it, he probably never had a real friend and it's really heartwarming to see how he treasures his new found friendship with Buffy and even the tentative bonding with Giles
Tara's turn to dust the Poof *giggles* I think Joyce deserves a nice little Angel-dustage, too
Well that might be hard with Joyce out of town...lol...and yes isn't Spike sooo sweet.

Glad you're enjoying it!
 
RobynDay 906/28/2006 03:40 am
I love that Spike used his insight to help Buffy figure out how to fix things with her friends and I love the added benefit of Giles being able to remember the days with them. I love that Tara got her turn to dust Angel, his dusting is a fun treat. The call from Dru was great and I like that Buffy realized that she needed to treat her with respect to get any answers. Loved Spike’s Dream, and how fun that it happened in front of Buffy and Giles. Thanks for another great update.
Thanks so much for reviewing!

Yes Spike is a master at observation and wasn't the dream just to die for goo thing he doesn't blush...lol
 
DeliciaDay 906/27/2006 01:48 pm
Yay! Wonderfully erotic dream! And I love how you had Tara stake Angel, she so didn't get to do enough of that in the series! Dru is coming across exceptionally well, usually she's just there as a foil to the Spuffy, but y'all are doing great with her character!
Thanks so much, glad you like Dru, she's my specialty, lol
Glad you're enjoying!!
 
EstherDay 906/27/2006 03:29 am
Finally caught up and I must say that this just gets better and better. I loved all the Angel dustings (freaking hilarious) and the friendship brewing between Spike and Giles. Ooh, those Spuffy dreams are just....drool enducing. Still drooling, btw. Can't wait for more!!
*hands you a towel* Thanks glad you're enjoying it still!
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 906/26/2006 09:20 pm
Great chapter! Spike's dream was REALLY hot. ;) And Tara dusting Angel was great, lol. Can't wait for more!
Thanks!! Glad you liked it!
 
vladtDay 906/26/2006 06:11 pm
excellent update, thanks for the fun read.angel gets dusted, again. simply wonderful. thanks, again
Thank you!!! for continuing to read, glad you're enjoying!
 
NovaDay 906/26/2006 04:16 pm
Interesting,

I'm looking foward to next monday.
Thanks! Glad you're with us!
 
Mark EvansDay 906/26/2006 03:57 pm
The updates on this fic make my Mondays worthwhile .
awwwww!!! Thanks so much!
 
golddrakeDay 906/26/2006 10:58 am
great chapter. I take almost everyone is gonna get to dust Abgel before the story is done.
maybe not 'everyone' but we'll have to see...lol, Thanks!
 
ShadowDay 906/26/2006 09:02 am
Now we need Willow to dust Angel... and hey if we can arrange it... Riley killage? *snicker* not like he'd stay dead forever...

Great chapter!
rofl!! um, not sure if Riley killage is a good idea, but we'll see....lol
 
zanthinegirlDay 906/26/2006 08:52 am
This is such a fun story! Enjoying it immensely.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
 
NeartDay 906/26/2006 08:08 am
Love the interaction between Giles, Buffy and Spike. Poor Angel, so many dustings tee heee. Good on ya Tara!

*grin* Thanks! glad you're enjoying it!
 
Harry 4 EyesDay 906/26/2006 07:32 am
Well technically neither xander or Anya have dusted the poof either, as much as I like dislike Xander, e needs to dust the forehead once atleast, it will help him with his many issues that he has and Anya...well um I guess nostalgia of all the chaos she caused as a vengence demon.

I find it highly perplexing that they both insist that they are just friends, yet they have no problem being married and belonging to the other...lol denial would be an understatement but it would work non the less

I like the fixing factor conundrum, they have to fix the factors that they themselves believe are the factors that need fixing...brilliant piece of work there.

Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry
It would be hard for dusting Angel to help Xander with issues if he doesn't remember doing it....lol

And yes they're both in denial but the teasing is just that - teasing- and it's not like they can do anything about the claiming until they fix everything else, they're just taking it in stride 'rolling with the punches' so to speak and both with thier insecurities about the opposite sex don't 'hate' the idea of having someone to belong to.

Glad you liked the 'fixing factor conundrum' Thanks for the awesome review as always!
 
kimDay 906/26/2006 05:12 am
Love this...

Good one, Tara! LOL...

And that was some dream. Good thing Spike can't blush, though that doesn't help much when he already gave so much away. Hee hee...he's a kept man, now.
rofl, yup he's a housebroken vamp...lol, glad you're enjoying it!
 
jessiDay 906/26/2006 01:34 am
Awesome story! I hope you continue writing it and update soon!
Thanks and as promised updates every monday.
 
EmileeDay 906/26/2006 12:22 am
I gotta say, I really like your dream sequences. Now if they could just get their heads out of their butts they could be having that for real. And poor Angel (not really but if things keep going this way, then he'll end up permanently dusted when they finally do break the spell.
Yup, they do have the denial going on pretty strong don't they? Glad you're enjoying it!
 
CewcewDay 906/25/2006 08:42 pm
this is so one of the bestest story out there right now! keep it coming and I'll keep it read!
Thank you so much, glad you like it!
 
CatDay 906/25/2006 08:10 pm
I'm loving this story more with each chapter! Enjoying the hell outta dusting the Poof!!! LMAO! ;)
*grin* yup it seems to bring enjoyment to many...lol. Thanks!
 
TamaraDay 906/25/2006 07:56 pm
Xander hasn't dusted Angel either.

It looks like Tara will be on thier side. Great chapter. Love these smuttly little dreams they keep having.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
 
slaymesoftlyDay 906/25/2006 07:27 pm
Another fun chapter! They're getting closer all the time, aren't they?

ROFL at all the Angel dustage!Go Tara!
Thanks! And yes they do get closer and closer. Now if we can just get the denial factor down...lol
 
DreylinDay 906/25/2006 07:13 pm
Great Fun! I can't wait to see the next way Angel gets offed!
*giggles* yup, he's just a dust bunny waiting to happen! lol
 
BridgetDay 906/25/2006 07:11 pm
Great chapter. I love this story.
You write Buffy and Spike well.
Thanks!! Hope you keep enjoying it!
 
EmilyDay 906/25/2006 07:07 pm
I love the banter and 'ship between buffy and spike. you guys play it out wonderfully, and i cant wait to see some more factor fixing
Thanks so much! Glad your enjoying it, more fun to come!
 
jeanieDay 906/25/2006 05:56 pm
i take it everybody eventually gets to stake angel. that's bloddy hilarious! can't wait for willow and xander's turn. also need more spike and buffy smoochies.
Maybe not EVERYBODY...but it might be close...lol, glad your enjoying!
 
DarDay 906/25/2006 05:46 pm
Wow even Willow gets to dust Angel. Great Chapter
Thanks!
 
LouDay 906/25/2006 05:11 pm
They're so smart together!
Much better together than working apart that's for sure! Thanks!
 
pretty_in_fangsDay 906/25/2006 05:05 pm
closer and closer...
yup, closer day...lol. Thanks!
 
AthenewolfeDay 906/25/2006 04:55 pm
excellant chapter - this story is so fab!
Thanks so much! *hugs*
 
redwulf50Day 906/25/2006 04:28 pm
LOL, bloody excellent chappie, but ya know don't tell anyone I told ya
*whipsers* your secrets safe with me...and thanks...i think. *g*
 
maryperkDay 906/25/2006 04:14 pm
Great chapter. Loved the dream.
The dream was yummy wasn't it? lol
 
VerdaDay 808/04/2006 12:30 am
Wow! what a chapter! First let me say that was one damn erotic dream she had. Second, thanks for letting Giles have a go at Angel and third, great way to turn that last line around and her say it this time. Don't worry about the pace it's just fine, no need to rush it. Fantastic story, just love it.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 807/26/2006 04:26 pm
Yippee!! She didn't wake up in the bus station this time. Glad that Giles is in on this now. Freaks me out that it was Warren that was seen with Jonathan. {shivers}
rofl, nope no stinky bus station for her! Thanks!
 
CassieDay 807/13/2006 07:17 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
DeliciaDay 806/22/2006 01:49 pm
Great chapter! Had everything I love; exposition, hot dreams with bitey goodness, and Angel-dustage!! I hope Gile's memory spell works! Loved the last line, LOL!
Thanks. Glad you loved the chapter, Delicia. Hot dreams are our favorite, too.
 
Harry 4EyesDay 806/22/2006 04:53 am
Um...so how did they end up in the in a completely different location to where both of them fell asleep. This would suggest they are still repeating the day again, but something went wonky.

Would I be completely off if I speculated it had something to do with Giles spell? A rememberence spell added to a mix of three other spells can have dire consequences. I'm gonna hazard a guess that the memory spell added to the mix somehow had a physical manistation as well so what they did also stayed to a certain level, yet everything still got reset. or something like that. so If Buffy went out robbed a bank, the money would still be with them the next day but it would also be back at the bank...well i'm speculating which I like to do. Something Jackers will no doubt vouch for

Well I am really liking this, one, amazing I only just found it.
Update soon
Harry
Thanks. Glad you liked the chapter.
 
RobynDay 806/21/2006 07:00 am
When Angel showed up at Giles' door I hoped that he would get his chance to dust Angel and I loved that he did *cheer*. Giles wanting to remember and the memory spell were great. I loved that Buffy woke up with Spike in his bed and can't wait to see where it goes from here. Thanks for another great update.
We figured that Giles deserved a turn at dusting Angel. Glad you liked the chapter.
 
jodiDay 806/20/2006 09:29 pm
Love the yearbook part. Everybody stake Angel It's therapeutic.
The yearbook part was fun to write. Glad you liked the chapter.
 
EmilyDay 806/20/2006 07:29 pm
How can you leave us hanging like that??? I WANNA SEE SPUFFY! Oh, and tee why the plot is moving like this, what has broken the chain, and whether angel will stay dead, and give congrats for the great chappie, but mostly, I WANNA SEE SPUFFY!!!!
We're evil. We love the cliffies. We'll get to the Spuffy... eventually.
 
Mark EvansDay 806/20/2006 07:20 pm
I'll never get enough of the Angel stake-age ! Monday can't come soon enough.
We feel the same way about Angel dustage and we're having fun in this story with it.
 
DizzyBDay 806/20/2006 04:56 pm
Hah! Giles dusted Angel. I love that he's been dusted 3x now and won't remember it. Does anyone else get to dust him? Can't wait till the next update. This is most definitely one of my favorite fics out there at the moment.
Wait and see. Glad you're enjoying the story.
 
slaymesoftlyDay 806/20/2006 02:46 pm
LOL Things are looking up! Had to play catch up on this fic, but here I am, all caught up and waiting for the next chapter! This was a great idea for a plot - and you're doing a really good job with it.
Thanks, Patti. We're so glad you like the story.
 
AthenewolfeDay 806/20/2006 12:19 pm
i love this story! It rocks so much! great touches throughout and generally great read!
Hey Steph. Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
 
Ashley GranchesterDay 806/20/2006 10:24 am
I love this fic, since I starte to read it a few days ago I couldn't let go until I got to the las chapter published.

It is so not fair for you to leave it there, just when the good stuff is beginning, but I guess I'm going to have to wait until next week to find out what is going to happen. I can hardly wait.

Congrats and please keep it up. I'm really looking forward to read the next chapter.

Ashley
So glad you found us and have enjoyed the story. Catch you next Monday.
 
LouDay 806/20/2006 07:58 am
Wonderful - they are so cute together. May I just say it's a treat to read something happy and pain free!
Thank you. We love our Spikey boy too much to hurt him.
 
selyneDay 806/20/2006 03:21 am
This is a great story. Oh and maybe after this story is complete you could write one in the 'verse from Buffy's dream this chapter? Pretty pretty please with a caramel covered Spike on top?
Hmm, interesting idea. We'll take it into consideration, but we have lots of other ideas swimming around our heads right now.
 
Pin1Day 806/20/2006 01:53 am
I love this story! Everyone gets to stake Angel and Buffy has the best dreams. Great fun - THanks!
You're welcome. Thanks for the review.
 
ilpopiDay 806/20/2006 01:44 am
Great chapter. I hope Giles is now on the loop too. I'm guessing that some of the needed "factors" are now fixed and that caused the changes when they woke up.
Our blond duo are working on it.
 
DreylinDay 806/20/2006 01:10 am
Great fun, as usual!
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
 
UncagedMuseDay 806/19/2006 11:53 pm
The dream was drool worthy! Giles dusting Angel had me laughing and Buff asking if he was naked had me rolling! Excellent.
Thanks, Rae. Glad you love it. We adore dusting Angel, too.
 
prettyin_fangsDay 806/19/2006 11:10 pm
heeheehee. Ah, this fic is such fun.
It's fun to write, too.
 
fanxstitchDay 806/19/2006 10:20 pm
This is a very cute story and I have enjoyed it immensely. I look foward to more of this.
Thank-you. Glad you liked it.
 
kimDay 806/19/2006 10:08 pm
A whole week? Torturous, you are!

Yay, another Angel dusting, hee hee...definitely be helpful if Giles can remember things the next day.

The dream was hot, and those claimy feelings are becoming harder to ignore. This friends thing is so cute! And yeah, Buffy, he's very naked under there...yum.

Hmm, figuring out the identity of the trio now instead of much later...hmmm...big help to head that off at the pass.
Yes, our blond couple are very good at the denial thing. More to come.
 
TamaraDay 806/19/2006 09:37 pm
Interesting mix in this chapter. Buffy drools over Spike's ass, she has a porntastic dream and Giles the wonderfull cathartic feeling that comes from dustin Angel. I hope he does remember it the next day. New twist with them ending up in bed together without knowing how. Maybe the spell's rewarding them for figuring some things out.
Pornatastic. LOL. Lovely word.
 
EmileeDay 806/19/2006 09:27 pm
Yay more Angel stake-age! So now things have changed. Can't wait to see how it goes from here. Monday can't come fast enough.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
 
DarDay 806/19/2006 09:20 pm
Great everyone is getting a turn to dust Angel and he's feeling it. a week of naked Spike under a sheet what an image to be stuck with for a whole week.
Thanks.
 
DarDay 806/19/2006 09:20 pm
Great everyone is getting a turn to dust Angel and he's feeling it. a week of naked Spike under a sheet what an image to be stuck with for a whole week.
Thanks.
 
DarDay 806/19/2006 09:19 pm
Great everyone is getting a turn to dust Angel and he's feeling it. a week of naked Spike under a sheet what an image to be stuck with for a whole week.
Yeah, naked Spike. Yum.
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 806/19/2006 09:12 pm
Yum, I am in heaven, great chappie! Can't wait for more!
Thank-you. Glad you enjoyed it.
 
vladtDay 806/19/2006 08:42 pm
very good update. bonus points: angel dusted again. did giles' memory spell change somethings or is somethingelse causing the pleasant morning. thanks for the great read.
Angel dustage is quite liberating, isn't it?
 
BridgetDay 806/19/2006 08:37 pm
Loved the chapter. I really like the interaction between Buffy and Spike. This is how there relationship should have developed. Can't wait for the next update.
Glad you liked the chapter.
 
golddrakeDay 806/19/2006 08:30 pm
Love this story. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what else has changed. Loved Buffy's dream too.
Thank you. Buffy's dream was fun to write.
 
redwulf50Day 806/19/2006 07:41 pm
*snorts* damn good chappie
When is it Wulfie's turn to dust Angel
We take bribes.
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 806/19/2006 07:25 pm
Whoa, holy heck! What changed, exactly, and why did they wake up together?

This is really interesting, I can't wait 'til next Monday!
You'll just have to wait and see. Catch ya next monday.
 
CewcewDay 806/19/2006 07:17 pm
Glad we made you happy.
 
AzelmaDay 806/19/2006 06:57 pm
I adore this story. I love the slowly building relationship between Buffy and Spike. It's perfect. And your Giles amuses me to no end. :squeezes Giles:

I loved the end! Naked Spike is always nice. Hee. Can't wait until the next chapter!
Giles can be fun when he's not being an uptight prig.
 
SciFi_GKDay 806/19/2006 06:53 pm
I love this story! And Buffy gets to say the "are you naked under there?" line. I love it!

Can't wait for more.
Yes, that line was perfect for the scene.
 
maryperkDay 806/19/2006 06:18 pm
Wow, hot dream. Does Spikey get one, too?
Thanks, Maryperk. It was a fun dream to write.
 
VerdaDay 708/03/2006 09:06 am
Yup Buffy, grt nice and cosy with the sexy vampire. Love how the story is progressing. Thanks for the read.
Hee! Thanks, i think we're killing some people with the slowness, but it doesn't feel natural to rush!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 707/26/2006 04:12 pm
Another excellent chapter. There was a lot of information bonding in this one towards the goal of trying to figure out how to stop the day from repeating.

Freaked me to think about who the other boy that met Jonathan was. I had my suspicions even when I first read this, and I shivered then too.
Hee, sorry about the shivers, hopefully we can make some changes! Thanks!
 
VWalkDay 707/20/2006 05:14 pm
I'm really enjoying the Buffy and Spike interaction. It feels very real and true to the character. Great story.
Thanks so much! Very great compliment! *sniff* now i'm all weepy!
 
CassieDay 707/13/2006 07:16 am
Great chapter
Thanks!!
 
vladtDay 706/13/2006 11:53 pm
seems dru spell has greatly over powered red's. spike and buffy are growing much closer. i do not remember adam making a lot of noise entering the crypt (actually there are a lot of things i do not remember, but that is an entirely different matter.) thanks for the fun read. another wonderful chapter. thanks again
Thank you!! Glad you're enjoying the story!
 
DeliciaDay 706/13/2006 01:49 am
Yay, definitely a wonderful chapter! I love how this is flowing. Thanks!
Thank you, glad you like it!
 
OpalDay 706/12/2006 08:34 pm
I just caught up on this whole fic...I love it. I can't wait to see how it continues on.
Thanks! Glad you're on board with us! Hope you enjoy the rest as well!
 
UncagedMuseDay 706/12/2006 11:43 am
This fic is so fantastic! Update as soon as you all can please.
Thanks Rae!! glad you're enjoying it! Updates every Monday, as promised...lol
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 706/12/2006 08:19 am
Great chapter! Can't wait to see who crashed into Spike's crypt there at the end.
Thanks!! glad you're liking it!
 
KittenunoDay 706/12/2006 02:34 am
The most amazing and funny story. Seeing Buffy and Spike trying to cope with their unfortunate repeat-o day is wondrous! I could read the part where Angel gets staked over and over again until the next millennium! Thank you Immortallyspuffy. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Thank you for your wonderful review! Glad you're enjoying the story!
 
ToniaDay 706/12/2006 12:40 am
“Bleedin’ hell. If someone had told me I could make Harris cry, I would have changed side’s months ago,”


Hee-hee! That is so Spike. Anything to make Xander cry.
Great story.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! rofl, yup anything to upset Xander *g*
 
DreylinDay 706/11/2006 11:47 pm
Great chapter. Keep it up!
Thanks so much!
 
kimDay 706/11/2006 10:38 pm
Loved Day 7! They made a lot of progress.
Yup, hopefully more progress to come, thanks!!
 
time of changeDay 706/11/2006 09:49 pm
Love this.
Thank you!
 
EmileeDay 706/11/2006 09:06 pm
Awesome chapter. Great character development. I really like how things are progressing between Spike and Buffy. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you! Lots more to come!
 
EmilyDay 706/11/2006 08:35 pm
Great story, great chapter. I cant wait to add this to my 'must watch' list
ohhhh we're on the list...yay!! lol, glad you're enjoying!
 
Mark EvansDay 706/11/2006 07:37 pm
Ooooh, a cliffhanger . This fic gets better and better, keep it up.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
 
golddrakeDay 706/11/2006 07:32 pm
another wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks, glad you like it!
 
TamaraDay 706/11/2006 07:05 pm
If I had to guess , I'd say it's either Angel , Riley or both of them. They certainly need fixing one way or another.
i think those two will benefit for more fixing after the spells ends than before..lol, thanks!!
 
RobynDay 706/11/2006 07:01 pm
I loved and laughed at Spike’s comment of switching sides to make Xander cry and I enjoyed his comment on what they spend ending up right back in their pocket the next morning. I loved Buffy’s contribution to the research materials and her falling asleep on Spike. And Spike finally realizing the discomfort and disorientation that Buffy goes through every morning. Thanks for another great update.
Thank you so much! and it was about time Spike got to see how it felt...lol
 
LouDay 706/11/2006 06:08 pm
Excellent chapter. Full of funnies and interesting steps in their understanding.
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it!
 
AthenewolfeDay 706/11/2006 04:24 pm
love the Groundhog day reference 0 this is a great fic! I love the "Now I know why the Slayer is so damned cranky." line - perfect!
rofl, that's Steph glad you like!
 
redwulf50Day 706/11/2006 04:01 pm
LMAO, these two should just shag for "Old Glory" and the "Union Jack"
rofl, give them time...geeze *g*
 
maryperkDay 706/11/2006 03:58 pm
Awesome chappy.
Thanks mary!!
 
VerdaDay 608/03/2006 08:40 am
Yes! Spike got to dust him too, the staker jerk. Loving the way that she's finding out about everything too. Really enjoying the story. Thanks for the read.
Thanks! and wouldn't be fair if Spike didn't get his turn *g*
 
JessicaDay 607/28/2006 01:26 am
I love this story so far. This chapter especially. The best part was when they were teasing each other about them cheating on each other. Good point about them still technically being engaged. Very squee! On to the next part.
rofl, Yup,they never actually called off the engagement. Glad you're enjoying it!
 
Soul of the RoseDay 607/26/2006 03:31 pm
*Applauds* That was just lovely! Wonderful interaction between the two of them. The slow build of their relationship is divine. Also enjoying your Angel characterization here - he he. Loved when Spike gets his turn to dust Angel & then Buffy wakes up to coffee from him - so sweet! Love this story!
*blushes* Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying our 'angel' even if he spends most of his time as dust, rofl
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 607/26/2006 02:41 pm
LOL ... "Now is that any way to greet the nice monster that brought you coffee." Classic and perfect line to come out of Spike's mouth. I can practically hear the teasing taunt in it.

Go Spike all with the being conscientous and thinking things through here in this chapter. Him saying that he and Buffy just need to sit and talk about everything, try to learn to trust each other, etc. Good one.

I can so see Spike bouncing in his chair saying "can I dust him too?" LOL.

St. Viagra ... {dies laughing} "Think you're mixing up your rituals with your relations". ROFLMAO!! Oh gosh ... this still kills me to read, it's so funny.

Their banter back and forth was priceless. From the Willow's spell ending comments to their whole Cheating on me with Riley and Harmony comments ... Loved it.

I will never get tired of seeing Angel stakeage in this fic. At this point in time, Angel was a real ass to Buffy. He deserved it big time.

Dru's bit about weave and tighten was an interesting facet of the story. I liked it.
Thanks so much! Leave it to Buffy to mix up her rituals and relations *g*
 
VWalkDay 607/20/2006 04:07 pm
Yay! More Angel staking. Love it. I actually had to bite my lip to keep from laughing out loud - because I'm at work and am pretending to be a responsible adult.

Love the story.
*giggles* nope don't want you to get in trouble at work, glad you're still enjoying it!
 
CassieDay 607/13/2006 07:15 am
Great chapter
Thanks!!
 
DeliciaDay 606/13/2006 01:20 am
Beautiful chappy! Just teeming with the Spuffy goodness! Love Spike staking Angel, that was brilliant! Dru's voice is coming through so vividly. Thanks!
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! glad you liked the Dru voice!
 
deedoDay 606/10/2006 10:06 am
what a way to repeat one day for all eternity, dusting Angel over and over again!
I love the new chapter, please update soon
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it! new chapter is up!
 
LouDay 606/07/2006 05:46 pm
Nice progress!
Thank you, glad you're still with us!
 
LuisaDay 606/07/2006 05:28 am
So love your story can't wait for the next part. I can't wait to see what happen next
Thanks! Glad you're excited about it, and the update is up!
 
BigbirdDay 606/06/2006 04:14 pm
Yeah I like it... please continue
Thanks glad you're enjoying it!
 
vladtDay 606/06/2006 03:30 pm
that was a wonderful read. it is always fun to 'see' angel dusted. spike and buffy are having a good time with the repeated day.love dru. thanks for the great read.
Thank YOU for the great review, you always have the nicest comments, hope you enjoy the newest chapter!
 
jodiDay 606/06/2006 12:30 pm
Like this story bunches. Update soon.
Thank you! New Chapter is Up!
 
AthenewolfeDay 606/06/2006 02:44 am
Giggles you staked angel again. This is such a thrill... heheh ...now wouldn't it be a shame if they staked him and the day didn't undo itself... oh woe is me Angel is dead ,.. oops lol *giggles* great update as usal girls~
lmao!!! yup, that would be a shame wouldn't it? not! Thanks!!
 
DreylinDay 606/05/2006 11:29 pm
Great chapter! This is one of my favorite WIPs. I'm really kind of surprised no one's used the 'Goundhog Day' premise in Buffyfic before - at least not that I've read. I think this may be the only time I've seen Buffy and Spike acknowledge 'Something Blue' in a friendly manner without them having already gotten together.

I'm really enjoying the banter between Spike and Buffy in this chapter. You've got them down so well. I hope you string us along a bit before getting them fully together. I'm enjoying this too much for it to get to a fluffy conclusion too soon (though I hope that's in the cards eventually).
Thanks!
 
DreylinDay 606/05/2006 11:27 pm
Great chapter! This is one of my favorite WIPs. I'm really kind of surprised no one's used the 'Goundhog Day' premise in Buffyfic before - at least not that I've read. I think this may be the only time I've seen Buffy and Spike acknowledge 'Something Blue' in a friendly manner without them having already gotten together.

I'm really enjoying the banter between Spike and Buffy in this chapter. You've got them down so well. I hope you string us along a bit before getting them fully together. I'm enjoying this too much for it to get to a fluffy conclusion too soon (though I hope that's in the cards eventually).
Yup, i think our couple will be in denial a bit longer. Glad to hear we're one of your favorites *blushes in trio* rofl, Thanks for the wonderful review!
 
neo_trinityknotDay 606/05/2006 11:27 pm
YAY! you killed Angel again!
Hee hee! Yup, everyone loves the Angel stagage! Thanks!
 
CewcewDay 606/05/2006 11:10 pm
So enjoying this story.
Thanks for reviewing, glad you like it!
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 606/05/2006 09:40 pm
Hee! I'm glad to see that they're finally putting their heads together on this and getting closer. Buffy letting Spike stake Angel was just priceless. Can't wait for more!
Thanks! Yup, lots more Angel fun to be had...rofl
 
letitiaDay 606/05/2006 08:29 pm
okay now I just loved how Buffy stepped aside so Spike could stake Angel. Maybe they can become really honest with each other. Wonder how long it will before they figure out the problem..
Hopefully their getting close to some answers, thanks for reviewing, glad you're enjoying!
 
DizzyBDay 606/05/2006 07:52 pm
This story just gets funnier with each chapter. I laughed my ass off when Spike finally got to stake Angel - and with Buffy's blessing! Great stuff. Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying all the fun, we're having a blast with this one!
 
CarolDay 606/05/2006 07:15 pm
I absolutely love this.
Thanks so much!
 
RobynDay 606/05/2006 06:35 pm
I loved how Spike greeted Buffy both at the beginning and again at the end of the chapter, and the attitude changes for them both. I really like the new information gleaned because of their talk, both from the sharing and from them realizing new things. And Spike being the one to stake Angel this time and his reaction was perfect. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.
Thanks so much for the wonderful review! Glad you're enjoying the story and hope we keep you interest for the rest of it!
 
StacyDay 606/05/2006 05:59 pm
This one so made me smile. You're doing a great job changing up the days so the story doesn't get boring. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
Thanks for reviewing. We're trying hard to keep it fresh and exciting!
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 606/05/2006 05:46 pm
I am so happy now, I really love this fic. Such talent!!!!! More please!
*blushes in trio* Thanks, we're glad you're enjoying our efforts! Thanks for the review!
 
CordykittenDay 606/05/2006 04:38 pm
Awe, Spike came bearing gifts.. (breakfast, yay) ;-) He knows how to get Buffy to listen. Buffy feels Spike's emotions now? I guess it has something to do with the dream-bite. And it works like a charm for Buffy. She is starting to see Spike different, even though he and she are not willing to declare that they are in love. Ah, Willy told Angel about Buffy. Not nice, keeping tracks on Buffy this way. Loved Spike begging with his eyes to stake Angel *grins* Loved the 'weaving of souls'. Awe, nice Spike is back with coffee.
Yup, the way to Buffy's heart, lol. More explainations coming! Glad you're enjoying! Thanks!
 
redwulf50Day 606/05/2006 04:35 pm
*snorts* damn interesting chappie
*snorts back* Thanks!
 
Mark EvansDay 606/05/2006 03:02 pm
Wow, this story just gets better and better. Hurry with the next chapter, lol .
Thanks! Glad you're stil enjoying! New Chapter is up!
 
chomodogDay 606/05/2006 03:00 pm
I am definately enjoying this story now.Particularly liked this chapter with them becoming closer
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying! Lots more fun to come!
 
ilpopiDay 606/05/2006 02:24 pm
Great chapter. Growing closer and getting rid of Angel once again.
Thanks for reviewing! Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story!
 
TamaraDay 606/05/2006 01:41 pm
Can we stake Riley, too?

I love his new classification as the soon to be ex.


Hee! I'm not sure about staking Riley, but i'm sure we can work in some nice humiliating things for him somewhere! Thanks for reviewing!
 
wall_flowerDay 606/05/2006 01:09 pm
Aww- love the change of tone. Such a lovely, sweet chapter. And hoorah for Buffy letting Spike kill the grand poofter- classic :]]
Hee, everybody needs to have at least one shot at him...lol, Thanks for the great review!
 
pfeifferpackDay 606/05/2006 12:55 pm
Lovely, simply lovely. Dear Dru taking matters in hand like this *G*. Love Spike getting a chance to make grandpa fit in a Dirt Devil (what a perfect resting place come to think of it).

Bring on more please.


Gotta say you all collabrate seemlessly...you can't tell who is contributing which chapter it flows perfectly. Congratulations!

Kathleen
Thanks, we're trying hard to make it all flow well, and Tam does a wonderful job helping us make sure we don't override something that was done before. Thanks for the review!
 
kimDay 606/05/2006 12:19 pm
Ooo, fun....Dru's so crafty, hee hee hee....just a matter of time.
Yup, getting closer to ... something...lol. Thanks!
 
YzbaDay 606/05/2006 12:07 pm
Just love this story, I want more, Pretty prettty please???
Glad you're enjoying, Update is ready!
 
PinDay 606/05/2006 10:57 am
Great chapter! I love the evolving relationship and the way you are recycling the day. Dusting Angel twice - great catharsis. Interested in Dru's big plan. Looking forward to more.
Thanks for the great review! We're trying hard to keep it fresh! New Chapter Up!
 
maryperkDay 606/05/2006 09:54 am
Angel got staked two days in a row. Too bad he won't remember it. LOL
Yup, it's sad, but i'm sure they'll love to tell the stories of how it happened once the spell breaks!
 
golddrakeDay 606/05/2006 09:50 am
great chapter. I love it when Angel gets dusted. Thanks.
Yup, us too! Glad you liked!
 
LoriDay 606/05/2006 09:37 am
Love the new chapter. Please update soon. Thanks.
Thanks glad you liked! New Chapter up now!
 
KatDay 606/05/2006 09:33 am
awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was an amazing chapter. angel staked times 2 yay
hee, glad you liked! Thanks for reviewing!
 
EmileeDay 606/05/2006 09:27 am
Excellent. Nice touch with letting Spike stake Angel. I bet that felt gooood. They're still being stubborn and ignoring exactly which "hidden truths" they have to acknowledge to break the spell. I mean really, Dru kinda drew them a big diagram and they're still fighting it. Eagerly awaiting more.
Yup, more denial headed your way...lol, so glad you're enjoying!
 
VerdaDay 508/03/2006 08:18 am
To bad it was permanent, staking Angel. Spike got to make up his mind and accept Buffy or be doomed to a life of repeat-o-vision. Really good chapter thanks for the read.
*grin* Thanks so much, and yes teamwork is the key, lol
 
Soul of the RoseDay 507/26/2006 03:17 pm
Fantastic! Loved the ending with her staking Angel & waking up next to Spike. This is so creative & well written. Just fabulous
Thanks so much, we're glad you're enjoying it, is lots of fun for us to get to write together!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 507/26/2006 02:15 pm
ROFL ... Spike's line about staking the poof. Good one. Most of the time Angel is acting like an overbearing and overprotective jerk. I love that Buffy got to dust him, and hey no consequences because all returns again the next day. Kudos on this chapter.
Yup, the perks of a consequence free day, rofl. Thanks!
 
VWalkDay 507/20/2006 03:41 pm
I LOVE THE STAKING OF ANGEL! "...at least he won't remember this tomorrow." You're characterizations are spot on. This is a great story. Excited to see where it goes.
Thanks, glad the characters are 'ringing true' with 3 authors it's hard to get everyone's style's to blend. Hope you enjoy the rest!
 
CassieDay 507/13/2006 07:14 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
DeliciaDay 506/13/2006 12:36 am
Yay for teamwork! The dream manifestations were a great addition! Great chapter all around! Glad for Angel-dustage eventhough it's only temporary!
But being only temporary means we get to do it again...rofl
 
zanthinegirlDay 506/06/2006 10:38 am
Bwaa! Really enjoying this story; it's a hoot. I love Angel, really i do, but that just made me snicker madly!
Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the review!
 
wall_flowerDay 506/05/2006 12:49 pm
Ooooh- she staked him! How wicked of her! Loved this chapter- completely fantastic!! Keep this up!!
Thank you! Yup, pissed off Buffy is in the house..lol, glad you liked!
 
vladtDay 505/30/2006 10:17 pm
wonderful read. and the the last line was hilarious. thnak you for the great read.
*grin* glad you liked...and thank YOU for reviewing!
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 505/30/2006 06:27 pm
I am so happy!!! This is getting good, I am begging very sweetly for more.
lol! Thank you, glad you like! more will be up next monday!
 
LindaMDay 505/30/2006 05:11 pm
This story is so much fun. Especially the staking of Angel.
LOL, Angel stakage seems to be the highlight of everyones day! Thanks for reviewing!
 
Chanel 5Day 505/30/2006 03:28 am
I'd love to see them just have a day of fun together, making mischief
hmmmmm...mayyyyyybeeeee...lol
glad you're liking it!
 
RobynDay 505/30/2006 01:31 am
How did Spike know that she staked Angel? Familial link gone? And I totally loved that she did, he so deserved it. I always hated how condescending he could be towards her. Loved how she took care of Forest this time and I like the help that Jonathon gave her. Thanks for the update I really enjoyed it.
Thank you, glad you liked it! Yup, he was getting annoying wasn't he?
 
CewcewDay 505/30/2006 12:29 am
Today, tomorrow, yesterday. Still loven this story!
Thanks for reviewing!! *grin* Glad you love it!
 
Mark EvansDay 505/29/2006 09:46 pm
Oooh, what a great ending! Next chapter please .
rofl, a vamp's gotta make an entrance...lol, next chappie up bright and early monday!
 
letitiaDay 505/29/2006 08:29 pm
WOW... Give it to Dru to try and get things through to Spike and Buffy. And how about Spike knowing that Buffy staked Angel... Great update.
Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it!
 
neo_trinityknotDay 505/29/2006 07:16 pm
Can Angel stay dead? Please?
*giggles* Um, well no...but we can stake him again...would that help? LMAO
 
kimDay 505/29/2006 06:40 pm
Ho, ho! He felt it...and the bites are linking them in the repeato-day now. Bet Spike has some interesting things to say.
Yup, they should have lots to catch up on...Thanks for reviewing!!
 
pfeifferpackDay 505/29/2006 05:32 pm
WOW staked Angel (Wulfie must be purring!). Still enjoying this story so much. Clever girl your Dru.

Kathleen
Yup, wulfie was in heaven! Thanks so much...and yes Dru may be crazy but she's still got it!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 505/29/2006 05:12 pm
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can I just say YIPPEE ... although the day starts all over again, DAMn, but I loved seeing Angel dust. I like how Spike came to the terminal as well and he knew. Cut of the familial link and all. That was SOOOOOOO fricking awesome!!!!

MORE MORE MORE MORE
Thanks, glad you liked it!!!
Yup, he'll be back....but that just means we get to dust him again! yay!
 
bloodshedbabyDay 505/29/2006 03:47 pm
hee, she staked angel. Good!
Thanks! Everyone needs to stake him at least once! and we've got the opportunity for some major stakage!
 
EmileeDay 505/29/2006 03:28 pm
Nice. I was wondering how long it would take her to stake that pompous fool.
*grin* now the question is 'how many stakings can they get in before the spell breaks* thanks for reviewing!
 
TamaraDay 505/29/2006 03:28 pm
She staked Angel. YES!

Too bad the day repeating again means Angel will undo it.

He is such an ass. Saying that she's shirking her duties because she wants to be alone without her friends crawling all over her.
Yup, he deserved the staking...and him being back just means she might get to stake him again! lol
 
AthenewolfeDay 505/29/2006 02:26 pm
lmao that was so freaking amazing - you staked angel = does dance of joy
*dances with you* Wasn't it so much fun...everyone should stake Angel at least once!
 
KatDay 505/29/2006 12:13 pm
HAHAHA that was great. especially that that sentance. hmmm things are changing if Spike is at the bus stop. and the marks stayed yay lol.
Thanks for the review! and yay for vamp speed! lol
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 505/29/2006 11:57 am
Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Can't wait to read more soon!
You can mention it as much as you want...lol
Glad you're lovin' it!
 
DizzyBDay 505/29/2006 11:13 am
I love this story. Buffy's reactions in particular make me laugh out loud. Love that she staked Angel! Hah! Keep up the good writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing! Glad your finding the story amusing...lots of fun to be had yet! See ya next monday!
 
maryperkDay 505/29/2006 10:57 am
Cool chappy.
Wasn't it wonderful? Everyone really seemed to enjoy it very much!
 
redwulf50Day 505/29/2006 10:48 am
roflmao. You staked the poof????

do it again, do it again
we've got all the time in the world for Angel stakeage...pace yourself! *GRIN*
 
VerdaDay 408/03/2006 07:39 am
Guess he might as well go to see Dru, he'll just wind upwaking up in his own bed again. Buffy's at least thinking about Spike now and getting more upset with Riley by the minute. Good chapter thanks for the read.
rofl, yup...he got pretty far, just not far enough! Thanks!
 
Soul of the RoseDay 407/26/2006 03:03 pm
Nice ending there. Great banter - fun & snarky with just a little touch of emotion. The sympatico between them is growing. Love the way you're building everything up slowly between them, but keeping the story fast paced & exciting. Very well done
Thanks! Having 3 authors tends to make things move more rapidly i think, lol

Thanks again!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 407/26/2006 02:09 pm
And so Dru enters the picture ... nice one.

This gets funnier as each day passes. I agree with Spike. Maybe Buffy is finally just noticing how wrong Riley is for her. Having to deal with his actions day in and day out in this way can open up her eyes. Let's hope.
*crosses fingers* yup, pretty sure buffy will be plenty sick of Riley, lol
 
VWalkDay 407/20/2006 03:30 pm
I love the punch to Angel's face. "Why couldn't you just bite her?" Hilarious.

Great job.
lmao! Thanks, glad you're enjoying!
 
CassieDay 407/13/2006 07:12 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
DeliciaDay 406/13/2006 12:03 am
Great chapter! I hope Spike's plan works!
Hee Hee! Do his plan ever work out? lol
 
EstherDay 405/23/2006 01:40 am
Oooh, this is great!! I love the progression and that Spike/Buffy are the only ones that know what's going on with the wonky day. Can't wait for more, especially Spike in South America.
Yup, they're the only ones to know. It's gonna take a bit of teamwork..let's see how that works out for them. lmao!
 
Mark EvansDay 405/22/2006 11:57 pm
Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one .
Thanks! glad you're enjoying!
 
wolf116Day 405/22/2006 06:51 pm
I just noticed this fic, and I'm loving it. I don't think I've laughed this much in a long time at a fic.

Can't wait to see what the day from hell brings next.
Yup a different day a different revelation...glad you're 'loving it' lots more goodies to come!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 405/22/2006 04:32 pm
Very funny. Loved that Buffy knocked Angel on his arse. LOL. I like this story. Now buffy and Spike both know about the day. Since their memories don't erase, they won't forget that. Can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder how many days or weeks it will take for those two to get it right.
*grin* knowing Buffy and Spike...it will take them a while! grin, glad you are enjoying it!
 
wall_flowerDay 405/22/2006 12:47 pm
Hah-hah; loving the phone call. I love your Drusilla too- veryvery accurate. And Herbie; you gotta feel sorry for the poor guy :] This is fantastic- looking forward to next monday now!!
Thank you, Dru's one of my favorites. Yup, gotta fell sorry for Herbie living with Dru day in and out...lol
 
pfeifferpackDay 405/22/2006 08:52 am
This is still so much fun....now a plane trip and Dru to add to the mix. Lovely stuff.

Kathleen
Yup, let's see how far he gets...rofl

Thanks for reviewing, our duo has got lots more miles to go.
 
kimDay 405/22/2006 05:23 am
Ah, finally getting to talking about their repeato day.
yup, they're finally in the same room...lol, thanks for reading.
 
LauraDay 405/22/2006 05:17 am
I just started reading this story and I love it. I can't stop laughing.
Thanks so glad you like it! lots more fun to come!
 
RobynDay 405/22/2006 04:23 am
I love how Spike deliberately did or said things to aggravate Buffy, Buffy hitting Angel was fun, and the phone call from Dru added and interesting little twist to the day. Buffy really does have the worst of the deal, Spike at least gets to wake up in his comfy bed each morning. Thanks so much for the update, I was so happy when I saw it posted.
Yup, poor poor Buffy! And didn't Spike always aggravate her? rofl Buffy needed someone to lay her anger on and Angel seemed a prime target. Thanks for reading!!!
 
LouDay 405/22/2006 03:28 am
Not sure he's going to get very far! Can't wait for more.
*grin* he might get farther than you think, he's got hours and hours to burn until the day resets. glad you like it!
 
zanthinegirlDay 405/22/2006 02:57 am
This story is such fun! Aside from that I'm enjoying the reset. It's really a cool concept-- if you could do it over, what would you change?"voices". Your Buffy in particular hits all the right notes for me; very in character for her at this point in the series.

looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you, lots of fun to be had with a day that never ends, lots of things you'd never do that you could with no consequences!
 
AthenewolfeDay 405/22/2006 02:35 am
oh i love it - such stubborn people they are! great story !
rofl Yup, but when they're stubborn we get to hit them around the head with the UST! ssssoooo much fun...lol
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 405/22/2006 02:31 am
Lol, Dru using a telephone just cracked me up for some reason.

Can't wait to read more!
Giggles, yes Dru used it relucatanly of course with Herbie holding it for her...lol
 
vladtDay 405/22/2006 12:34 am
this update and the tale are a fun read. spike has a plan! thanks for the read.
Thank you for reading, and yes he has a plan, but how often do those work? lol
 
KatDay 405/22/2006 12:23 am
good chapter. I enjoyed the dru part
Thanks, Dru can be so much fun!
 
Bookchick of the Novel ClanDay 405/21/2006 10:36 pm
Great update! I am getting a kick outta this.
Thanks so much! Glad you like!
 
redwulf50Day 405/21/2006 10:14 pm
lol, poor dumb Spike lol
lol, hey a vamps gotta try *grin*
 
maryperkDay 405/21/2006 09:30 pm
Great chapter. Loved it. Smack Angel around some more!
Thanks mary, lots of Angel smackin' to come! lol
 
VerdaDay 308/03/2006 07:21 am
I like that she's having some fun with this instead of letting it make her lose her mind. Now to talk to each other. Enjoying this story. thanks for the fun read.
*g* Thanks!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 307/26/2006 01:59 pm
Sorry but the "eau de bus terminal" line cracks me up every time I read it.

Buffy deciding that she'd have to go with the Powers option because she didn't want to talk to Spike was amusing. Especially since he was the only other person who really knew what this was all about or rather that he was experiencing it too.

ROFL About questioning Forrest's orientation. LOL. Does make you wonder, eh?

I really liked the bonding between Spike and Giles. It's too bad that Giles won't remember it in the morning. {frowns} Spike needs someone that isn't going to scoff at him when he wants to change.
*giggles* glad you liked it!

Yup, with both of them running around not knowing it's affecting the other...lots of fun there! Thanks!
 
CassieDay 307/13/2006 07:11 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
DeliciaDay 306/12/2006 11:17 pm
Nice chapter! Buffy and Spike gotta figure out this together; hopefully soon, but they're both so stubborn!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
 
wall_flowerDay 305/22/2006 12:45 pm
'Get coffee, then think!'- this had me chuckling!! Another fantastic chapter- I'm glad she's already getting irritated by Riley and Angel. Maybe she should kill them, just for fun, since they'd only be back again the next day anyway... *shifty eyes*... I'm loving this a lot
*looks nervous* kill Angel and Riley? um why would you say that? *more figeting* We would never kill off our two favorite guys *cough-snort-cough* glad you liked it, more next week!
 
Mark EvansDay 305/18/2006 04:22 pm
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love this fic .
Thank you...next chapter will be up tonight...hope you like it!!
 
jeanieDay 305/16/2006 06:45 pm
great story! can't wait for spike and buffy to get together and compare notes. also more angel and riley bashing, that is always of the good.
I have to agree with you there, Angel and Riley bashing are always of the good
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 305/15/2006 11:20 pm
Loved the update. INteresting the talk with Spike and Giles. I hope he really meant it. Buffy is starting to figure little things out. I look forward to more.
Spike meant it at the time, but Buffy isn't the only one to try living in Egypt
 
pfeifferpackDay 305/15/2006 06:54 pm
I dearly loved the conversation between Spike and Giles. Giles mentoring Spike into the ways of good choices is a perfect job for the Watcher at large. Spike having the epiphany that his demon isn't against the white hat was unexpected and perfectly wonderful too. I love this story. Great update.

Kathleen
Thank you, I like the Spike/Giles combination...they would work well together
 
CewcewDay 305/15/2006 06:16 pm
I cant wait for Buffy to run into Spike. I shall await the next update.
Next Monday...promise
 
RobynDay 305/15/2006 04:37 pm
This is really an excellent day to use, so many possibilities. I am looking forward to when Buffy and Spike finally talk about them both repeating the day. I enjoyed Buffy distraction of Forrest, he always irritated me. I really enjoyed the update, thanks.
Forrest really irked me too!
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 305/15/2006 04:16 pm
LOL, great chapter! Spike's thinking of becoming a permanent white hat, woo! And now that he's pretty sure that Buffy's involved in the time-loopyness, hopefully he'll team up with her instead of trying to figure it out alone. Can't wait to read more!
That's what I hope too
 
LouDay 305/15/2006 02:10 pm
Really enjoying this. Nifty thinking on Buffy's part! Giles being kind to Spike. Riley the jerk. All good fun.
Riley has some interesting times ahead!
 
AthenewolfeDay 305/15/2006 12:33 pm
LMAO - I loved this chapter as always girls - i loved the Forest as gay and the revelations Buffy is having. Spike with Giles was wonderful to - great job cant wait for nxt week's updates!
I always wondered about Forrest
 
Thursday NextDay 305/15/2006 12:03 pm
Interesting so far. Looking forward to more Buffy/Spike interaction.
That will be coming, we have discussed it at great length
 
kimDay 305/15/2006 11:53 am
Oooo, major progress, thinking-wise!

Very well done.
It was hard work for her too
 
redwulf50Day 305/15/2006 11:33 am
HEY, Need more NOW!!!! ( evil women

*sniffsniff*
Get it right dogboy...Jack is evil, Karyn and DOS are nice
 
UncagedMuseDay 305/15/2006 10:48 am
Great chp! I can't wait for more.
Thanks Rae, the next one should be really cool
 
KatDay 305/15/2006 09:40 am
Great chapter i loved Giles and spike talking and buffy just not staying around.
Thank you, I had fun with this chapter
 
maryperkDay 305/15/2006 09:30 am
Cool chappy. Love the banner
Thanks sweetie, I'll be sure to pass that on to Karyn
 
VerdaDay 208/03/2006 07:08 am
Enjoying this a lot. Didn't take Buffy long to get tired of this looping thing. Those were odd statements about Spike, maybe she'll remember to act on them to very soon. Good chapter, thanks for the fine read.
Thanks, and yes, Buffy's statements about Spike were kinda 'heat of the moment' lol
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 207/26/2006 01:50 pm
Oh, out of curiosity ... which banner belongs to whom?

Youchie with Buffy calling Giles a drunk. That hurt him big time. The second day is already more entertaining than the first. {giggles}

Spike using a term of respect to Angel ... you know there was another motive behind it. He just loves to agitate Riley. LOL
*g* Thanks!

Yup, Buffy's frustration kinda got the better of her. And Riley agitation is alway good. *g*
 
VWalkDay 207/20/2006 01:49 pm
I love the fact that Buffy was so mad that she acknowledged Spike's status in the group.

Great sotry, great update. I'm definitely hooked on this story.
*grin* Yup, you never know what she could say when she's mad, Thanks!
 
CassieDay 207/13/2006 07:10 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
TimeofchangeDay 205/22/2006 06:48 pm
That was me, trying to leave a review and hitting enter too soon. Sorry. What I wanted to say is that I am really enjoying this story.
Thank you, glad you like it!! We've got lots more good stuff to come!
 
TimeDay 205/22/2006 06:47 pm
 
wall_flowerDay 205/22/2006 12:43 pm
Yay- Buffy calling Spike a fringe-y gang member. So pleased!! This fic is great *off to read chapter four*
Glad you liked that, lots more fun stuff in store for later. Thanks for the review!
 
CewcewDay 205/09/2006 12:24 am
You know, Groundhogs Day is like one of my fav movies. Totaly digen the Men are Hogs day Buff is haven and haven, and haven....

I can sooo see this is going to be a grate story. loven it so far.
Thanks so much! Yup, Buffy's about sick of men at this point..hopefully it will get better...lol
 
MarzBarDay 205/08/2006 10:53 pm
I see things are changing a little now. What was Willow's spell? More story please.
More changes and some revelations in the next couple of chapters! Glad you enjoyed!
 
KatDay 205/08/2006 09:33 pm
I love this story have i mentioned that yet. oh this is getting more and more intresting
yes i believe you mentioned that...lol...so glad you're still with us, lots of fun stuff to come!
 
Day 205/08/2006 06:22 pm
LOL, poor Buffy, You guys actualy make me feel sorry for her
lol, yup poor Buffy, it's only gonna get worse...or better depending on how the day goes...lol
 
RobynDay 205/08/2006 06:11 pm
This was a great chapter and I loved the last line, it's so true. I really enjoyed what Buffy said about Spike and what Spike said about Buffy to Angel and Riley. And I'm looking forward to how Buffy's statement is going to affect Spike.
Great! so glad you liked it, Buffy's the best at rants! And yes, i believe Spike will get some mileage out of that statement!
 
AthenewolfeDay 205/08/2006 05:04 pm
lmao wonderful day 2 I cannpt wait to see what she does for a reapeat ... oh no write faster!'
lol, glad you liked, lots more fun to come!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 205/08/2006 02:28 pm
The looping is getting funnier. I loved Buffy's little speech and Spike's taunting of Riley with Angel.
Thanks! Yeah, lots of fun to be had with a Spike getting to wreak havoc over and over and...lol
 
vladtDay 205/08/2006 02:25 pm
that was fun, can't wait to do it again. thanks for the great read
Thank you for reviewing, so glad you liked, lots more fun to come!
 
DeliciaDay 205/08/2006 01:32 pm
That was really great! I like Buffy calling Spike 'her' vampire and the confusion left by that statement. I'm sure Spike is gonna call her on that!
Yup, he's a fringe-type vamp..lol..so glad you enjoyed!
 
kimDay 205/08/2006 01:09 pm
Progress, but still no solution. Hilarious.
Yup, they still have a little more to figure out before they can start getting to the progress part! Thanks for reviewing!
 
zanthinegirlDay 205/08/2006 12:49 pm
This story is such fun! I really enjoyed the confused confrontation between Angel, Riley, and Spike. Hee!

Looking forward to next monday!
Thanks!
 
zanthinegirlDay 205/08/2006 12:48 pm
This story is such fun! I really enjoyed the confused confrontation between Angel, Riley, and Spike. Hee!

Looking forward to next monday!
ROFL, yup Spike likes to bring as much confusion to Riley and Angels worlds as he can! Glad you liked!
 
jessDay 205/08/2006 11:32 am
please please continue this! I love where this is going and how you keep it real and funny at the same time!
Thanks so much! Lots of stuff going on in this epi, about to throw some more into the mix!
 
CutieSaiyajinDay 205/08/2006 10:20 am
I'm really loving this fic. I hope Buffy and Spike meet up soon, can't wait to see what happens.
Glad you like it! I think they'll be meeting up before too long...thanks for reviewing!
 
maryperkDay 205/08/2006 09:41 am
Great chapter. Love how Buffy said that Spike was a fringe Scooby. Wonder how that will affect how he reacts in later days.
Thanks mary! So glad you liked it, this was a really fun chapter! lots more goodies to come!
 
VerdaDay 108/03/2006 06:53 am
Now for them to figure out how to change it. I've got no idea how they're going to do it. Good chappie, this should be fun. Thanks for the read.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
 
Soul of the RoseDay 107/26/2006 02:28 pm
Liked the ending - nice reference. Things are definitely getting interesting. You've got me wondering how you're going to bring our two heroes together. Looking forward to reading more
Thanks so much! And bringing them together one day at a time! (or should i say one repeated day at a time) rofl
 
~*~Tasha~*~Day 107/26/2006 01:45 pm
I liked how each of them found out that it seemed like the day was repeating itself.
Thanks! Yup, confusion all around. lol
 
VWalkDay 107/20/2006 01:31 pm
So was it Willow's spell or Dru's intereference that is causing the day to repeat? Great chapter. I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to see how it goes and how Spike and Buffy come to figure out that they're the only two who are aware of the repeat.
It was a little bit of Willow with Dru using the power of the spell to add to her own, Thanks so much for the great reviews!
 
CassieDay 107/13/2006 07:09 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
wall_flowerDay 105/22/2006 12:42 pm
Terrific- love this. And what a sucky day to have to keep living over and over.
LOL, yup we picked a good one! Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
 
pfeifferpackDay 105/15/2006 06:29 pm
Groundhogs day gone Spuffy (wonderful combo)...I am loving this tale. Can't wait to see where it all leads as our favorite couple get their acts together and then themselves *G*. LOVE Dru's proactive mojo for her sweet William! Yeah Dru!!!

Kathleen
Yup, she's a giver...rofl, i just love Dru she's so much fun and we still have lots more stuff to put our favorite couple through before they're done...lol
 
DeliciaDay 105/08/2006 01:15 pm
Wow! This is so fun!
Thanks! Should have lots more fun coming up!
 
AthenewolfeDay 105/08/2006 11:57 am
excellant girls can't wait to see what you come up sith for Day 2
*grin!* the funs just starting! lol
 
LouDay 105/01/2006 01:09 pm
Excellent fun. I wonder how long it'll take them to get wise.
Don't think it will take long to figure out something is wrong...they just have to figure out why...lol
 
letitiaDay 105/01/2006 08:16 am
great chapter. Love her singing "tomorow"....
rofl, glad you liked it...just seemed appropriate!
 
kimDay 105/01/2006 07:42 am
"Groundhog Day" is a really funny premise! It's going to be interesting to see what changes Spike and Buffy will make.
Thanks!!...it should get pretty interesting before we're done! Lots of fun to be had!
 
EstherDay 105/01/2006 01:46 am
I love it! Glad that the cycle's already beginning and both Spike/Buffy are already getting weird vibes. Can't wait for more!
Yup, it's not hard to figure out that something is not right...now just to figure out what it is...lol...glad your enjoying!
 
bloodshedbabyDay 105/01/2006 12:43 am
Ha! Loved the first day! I actully like this episode of Buffy a lot. Angel made me laugh in it. Now come on, you can post quicker than weekly, can't you? Pleeeeze?
*Le sigh* Actually i think i'm (Karyn) the one dragging down the average...lol...maybe if we get ahead a little we can post more often *bites nails* maybe...lol
 
zanthinegirlDay 104/30/2006 10:58 pm
Oh, this is great fun! Really enjoying this so far. I have a deep fondness for "Yoko effect" and the scoobie starting to deal with the different places they are heading. And even when he can't be full-out evil Spike is just so much fun when he creates chaos. This is one of the last times we seeing him try to be evil, it's almost time for Out Of My Mind!
He's so cute when he's evil...rofl..so glad your enjoying it! Lots of fun stuff yet to come!
 
vladtDay 104/30/2006 10:47 pm
the time loop is funny. buffy's frustration will probably be monumental. fun read, thanks.
yup, don't think she's gonna handle it well *grin*
 
RobynDay 104/30/2006 09:56 pm
I really liked the way the first day played out, almost exactly the same, with them acting somewhat on the déjà vu, but not making any changes. I am really looking forward to day '2'.
Things are gonna be getting wacky...as they figure out that the deja vu is a little more than what they thought *grin*
 
KatDay 104/30/2006 09:27 pm
oh dear poor ones are in deep trouble yikes
Yup, lots of trouble...as they're about to find out! lol
 
redwulf50Day 104/30/2006 08:54 pm
ROFLMAO, poor Buffy and Spike.....NOT
rofl..glad you liked it!!
 
maryperkDay 104/30/2006 08:49 pm
Cool chapter. Now I have to wait a whole week for an update. *MP pouts.* Love it.
Thanks mary!! Think you'll like the next one!!
 
VerdaPrologue08/03/2006 06:36 am
Very interesting beginning. As long as Dru's not trying to get Spike back I have no problem with her. What kind of spell did Willow think she had, a cleansing and rebirth, sounds a little hinky to me. Very good start, thanks for the read.
Thanks so much! *g* At this point spells are playtime to Willow.
 
Soul of the RosePrologue07/26/2006 02:18 pm
Good start - very intriguing. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. I like the idea of Drusilla as a (sort of) good guy -helping Spike meet his destiny. Nice job
Hee! Yup, Dru's playing matchmaker...and loving it! Thanks!
 
~*~Tasha~*~Prologue07/26/2006 01:36 pm
Dru and Willow both doing magic spells. Now that is an accident waiting to happen. {chuckles} I loved the opening banner for this one. Karyn, you do awesome banner work.

I have read this while I was putting it up on Jack's site, but I hadn't reviewed here. Naughty me.
Thanks so much Tasha! *hugs*
 
VWalkPrologue07/20/2006 01:22 pm
This is a great beginning. I love fics with Willow's wonky magic, especially if she gets her comeuppance in the end for trying to be controlling. (That wasn't a hint

Can't wait to see how this goes.
Thanks! Glad you liked it! and yes, willow just doesn't learn *grin*
 
CassiePrologue07/13/2006 07:09 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
 
tg1982Prologue06/26/2006 02:26 am
I have finally got around to reading this. It's really good.
Thanks!! hope you enjoy the rest as well.
 
TimeofchangePrologue05/22/2006 06:29 pm
What a delightful beginning!

>>Magic always took so much out of a ghoul, after all.>>

Hee.
*grin* yup, magic is tiring stuff...glad you liked it! Dru's one of my favorites!
 
wall_flowerPrologue05/22/2006 12:41 pm
Fantastic premise; can't wait to read more of this *trundles of to chapter two*
Thanks, lots of fun to be had with a scheming Dru...lol
 
DeliciaPrologue05/08/2006 01:01 pm
Oh, I'm so excited by this story! Can't wait to read the next chapters, which I will do right now!
Yay!! glad you liked it! should have lots fun stuff coming up!
 
AthenewolfePrologue05/08/2006 11:51 am
Wonderful beginning girls... I am looking forward to this story! It looks so intriguing!
Thanks, should be lots of fun, we have a bunch of ideas going..lol
 
KatPrologue04/30/2006 02:46 pm
I will defentially be wating on mondays for updates. I can see that this has great promise in a story. And I loved dru here
Forgot i have an appointment in the morning and i dont want to make anyone wait...so i'm updating tonight!
hope you like it...and yes Dru is lots of fun!!!
 
JoycePrologue04/30/2006 07:37 am
Willow's first statement nailed the character perfectly. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I love time loop ala Ground Hog Day type stories.
Well hang on cause its getting ready to start...lol...hope you enjoy!
 
zanthinegirlPrologue04/30/2006 04:00 am
I think this has to be the only fic I've ever read where the drippy antler's demon was a main character! Interesting idea. You're probably right about Drusilla's chars though. They'd have to be pretty momorable to make up for her nuttiness!

Wonderful start! What a clever idea; and I'm impressed with your sensory details. Very evocative. Also well done capturing both Willow and Drusilla's character-- they 're some of the tougher character's to write well; but you've got them both spot on.

Looking forward to more!
Thanks, have been told i have a talent for Dru and Willow....not sure what that says about me..rofl..new one up soon!!
 
RobynPrologue04/30/2006 02:34 am
I loved Dru's analysis of Willow, she was right on with her description. I really like the idea of Buffy and Spike repeating the same day until they get it right. This fic looks very interesting and I am looking forward to following it.
So glad you liked, hope you continue to enjoy!!
 
MarzBarPrologue04/29/2006 11:40 pm
Intriguing start. What will Drusilla's spell do to Willow's spell and WTF does Willow think her spell will actually do to her friends? I hope the first Monday update is May 1st.
Willow, like always, just thinks she's 'helping' but don't worry, her spell isn't going to be anything like she thought it was...*evil laugh* and yes next update is on the 1st and then every monday! hope you enjoy!!
 
letitiaPrologue04/29/2006 08:27 pm
love the start of the story. I wonder what did Dru put in place as well?? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Dru put in place a nasty little spell that lets us have lots and lots of fun...lol...glad you liked, next chapter up monday!
 
EstherPrologue04/29/2006 07:48 pm
Wow, what a great intro!! You've got Willow and Dru down so well, I would swear you were one of the Buffy-verse writers. Very well done! Can't wait to find out more!
Well, you wouldn't be the first to tell me that...i don't know what that says about me though...*grin*
 
vladtPrologue04/29/2006 07:09 pm
very intriguing start. always loved dru. she and tara were the two most under writen characters in canon. really enjoy this. hope for a lot more. thanks for the fun read.
Yes, i love Dru and Tara as well, we're gonna have some fun with this one, hang on for the ride! lol
 
LouPrologue04/29/2006 05:43 pm
Nice start - this could be fun.
Yes, we're planning on having some fun with this one! Glad you enjoyed the start! Lots of stuff to come!
 
CutieSaiyajinPrologue04/29/2006 04:57 pm
This was a great start. I can't wait to read more!
Next chapter will be up Monday! Hope you like it!
 
redwulf50Prologue04/29/2006 04:43 pm
bloody excellent it is
thanks wulfie! lots of riley/angel bashing to come! get ready!!!
 
maryperkPrologue04/29/2006 04:09 pm
Great start. Can't wait to see where you are going.
Thanks mary, think you'll like what were going to do with it! lol
 
bloodshedbabyPrologue04/29/2006 04:03 pm
so like.... an update in two days? *looks hopeful* Sorry it took so long to get put through! I'll put this name on the validation list though so the cahpters wonn't get held up. *nods*
Yes, Day one is all beta'd and ready to go, thanks for the validation! Don't worry about it taking a while, i had seen last night you were having virus issues! hope you get it sorted out...and hope you like the fic!