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| Something Borrowed by Thursday Next |
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| Clare | 8-9 | 07/20/2006 03:01 pm |
| This story rocks! Pleeeeaaase update? |
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| sirc | 8-9 | 07/15/2006 02:13 pm |
| well done |
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| Verda | 8-9 | 07/06/2006 10:07 pm |
| Damn Riley! Hope Buffy broke his jaw. Glad to see that both the friends accept the others relationship. Another good chapter, thanks for the read. |
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| Lou | 8-9 | 07/06/2006 05:14 am |
| Poor Spike has to suffer before his reward - I get that! |
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| D.K. | 8-9 | 07/06/2006 01:00 am |
| Thanks for such a wonderful story. Please take out Riley's buddies too. I love the punch to Riley weak jaw. |
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| 8-9 | 07/06/2006 12:58 am |
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| Robyn | 8-9 | 07/06/2006 12:20 am |
I never did like Forrest, I know Buffy doesn't kill humans but I certainly would love to see her beat him and Riley, when he wakes up, to a bloody pulp. I do love that she did knock out Riley.  I like that Willow is helping and not fighting Buffy on this. Thanks for the update, I am really enjoying this story. |
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| fanxstitch | 8-9 | 07/05/2006 11:52 pm |
| Fantastic story, keep it up. |
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| vladt | 8-9 | 07/05/2006 10:26 pm |
| very good update, with the added bonus of buffy smacking riley. thank you for the fun read. |
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| golddrake | 8-9 | 07/05/2006 05:55 pm |
| great update |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 8-9 | 07/05/2006 03:43 pm |
| Death to Riley... and his little GI Joe buddies! |
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| sirc | 6-7 | 07/15/2006 02:02 pm |
| well done |
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| Verda | 6-7 | 07/06/2006 09:40 pm |
| Lovin' the role reverseal in this story. What's going to happen to Spike when Finn discoveres that his girlfriend is in love with her husband? Nothing good for Spike, I'll bet! Good chapter. |
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| Robyn | 6-7 | 07/04/2006 01:16 pm |
| Buffy and Spike really need to learn how to communicate. They are so worried about being hurt that they are actually hurting each other and themselves more because of it. Although she did tell Spike the truth about wanting him to kiss her. Thanks for the update, I am really enjoying this story. |
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| vladt | 6-7 | 07/04/2006 12:15 am |
| very good update. thanks for the read. |
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| golddrake | 6-7 | 07/03/2006 10:10 pm |
| great update |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 6-7 | 07/03/2006 09:05 pm |
| Spike can be such a wanker... |
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| Lou | 6-7 | 07/03/2006 03:28 pm |
| Deludogirl or what! |
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| Verda | 4-5 | 07/06/2006 08:51 pm |
| Evil Initiative, locking up poor Spike again! Liked how you changed the situation around so that Buffy and Spike reversed roles. Did she put the ring on her wedding finger? Thanks for the fun read. |
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| sirc | 4-5 | 06/05/2006 06:30 am |
well done  |
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| vladt | 4-5 | 05/26/2006 12:45 am |
| love it. light, entertaing and confused buffy, growing less confused. thanks for the fun read. |
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| Spikez_tart | 4-5 | 05/25/2006 08:10 pm |
| Am I really that desperate - of course she is. Good story |
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| wall_flower | 4-5 | 05/25/2006 01:52 pm |
| Ooh, I wonder how Spike will respond to seeing Buffy wearing her wedding ring. Verycutestuff:] This is a delightful little fic- can't wait to see more of it :] |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 4-5 | 05/25/2006 08:54 am |
| Oooo, she's wearing the ring! |
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| lOU | 4-5 | 05/25/2006 03:33 am |
| Nice turnabout with the dialogue! |
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| Robyn | 4-5 | 05/25/2006 03:15 am |
| I like that Buffy is starting to admit to herself, even though she is still fighting it, how she feels about Spike, it's a step from being in complete denial. Thanks for the update, I enjoyed it. |
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| Verda | 1-3 | 07/06/2006 08:15 pm |
| Really cute story, love how they can't keep their hands off each other. With Spike' toe curling kisses Riley doesn't have a chance. Thanks for the entertaining read. |
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| Richard | 1-3 | 07/03/2006 09:08 pm |
| You do write brilliant dialogue. |
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| Richard | 1-3 | 07/03/2006 08:59 pm |
The story is fairly interesting except for the annoying bit where Buffy & Co fail to punch Riley's lights out, tie him to a chair and torture him until he talks.
It's a failing when a writer knows what happened in canon without understanding why it happened. In canon, Buffy told Riley about being the Slayer since it endangered only herself, Riley was her boyfriend, and Buffy has a hole in her head where boyfriends are concerned.
Long story short, none of the reasons why Buffy felt safe to spill the beans in canon apply in this story, which makes her doing so in this story extremely unrealistic. All the time I was reading them, I kept waiting for Buffy to punch Riley's lights out, tie him to a chair and have him tortured until he talks. |
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| wall_flower | 1-3 | 05/25/2006 01:42 pm |
| Superb. The right mix of hillarious one-liners and romantic smile-y-ness. Veryvery cute and succeeding in making me chuckle regularly. I like that Xander called the pair of them 'cute' :]] *goes off to read the next chapter* |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 1-3 | 05/25/2006 08:55 am |
| I love the banter! |
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| sirc | 1-3 | 05/19/2006 01:47 pm |
This fic is a bit familiar. You wouldn't have happened to post it on the old BS Central, now would you?
I like it, by the way |
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| MarzBar | 1-3 | 05/18/2006 11:31 pm |
| This is an interesting take on the marriage spell. Will Spike actually get out of town? That would seriously distress Buffy and she wouldn't even be able to tell anybody why. More story please. |
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| Spikez_tart | 1-3 | 05/18/2006 08:49 pm |
| ROFLMAO. This is outrageously funny. I love having Willy the Snitch as one of their witnesses. Heh heh. And, why is that idiot Spike still sleeping in the bathtub? |
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| vladt | 1-3 | 05/18/2006 07:19 pm |
| entertaining read, thanks |
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| Robyn | 1-3 | 05/18/2006 03:09 am |
| You got the back and forth of Spike's and Buffy's relationship beautifully. You also got her gift of denial down. I like that even though there are feelings on both sides Spike is still the one to admit to things first, or tried to. I am really enjoying this fic and am looking forward to the next update. |
| Thank you! It is a little rough around the edges soince it was my first fic from way back but I'm quite fond of it |
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