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| Creep by Megan_Tam |
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| Verda | Four | 08/08/2006 02:20 am |
| That was a great chapter, Tam. I guess you'll be taking over now? I like how this story is being rewritten. We know that after that little steamy scene, that Riley'll never measure up. If she does try to be imtimite with him again, she'll notice to much of a difference. Thanks for the fun read. |
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| Oracleholly | Four | 08/08/2006 01:45 am |
| delicious chapter - god, Glory and Riley have THE WORSE timing...but Spike was able to bite into Buffy -- I know "pleasure" and all; however, Buffy is surely going to be thinking about that later on and wondering if the chip is out...won't she? |
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| Lynda | Four | 08/07/2006 11:51 pm |
| I am hooked and I want more. No. Make that I need more. |
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| gotkona | Four | 08/07/2006 07:30 pm |
| I am so glad you updated. I love this fic. |
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| Karyn | Four | 08/07/2006 04:03 pm |
ugh! Riley just had to show up when the getting was getting good *smirk* great update!
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| golddrake | Four | 08/07/2006 03:52 pm |
| great chapter |
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| Jessica | Four | 08/07/2006 02:06 pm |
| Loved it so far. I like how and where you changed it and decided to go your separate way. Excellent job. ; ) Looking forward to more. |
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| UncagedMuse | Four | 08/07/2006 12:57 pm |
| Ummm me likely! Me likey a lot. Ready and waiting for more. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Four | 08/07/2006 04:43 am |
| fabulous chapter! I love the way you are twisting canon here! And I really love your Spike in this one. PERFECT!!! |
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| kim | Four | 08/07/2006 02:57 am |
| Wow...so much in one chapter. I like Buffy being more friendly to him from the start of the season. They'll do even better at protecting Dawn when she trusts him from the start. |
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| vladt | Four | 08/07/2006 02:38 am |
| fantastic read, thank you. come on buff grt rid of riley. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Four | 08/07/2006 02:11 am |
| Just send Riley packing already!! *flails* |
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| jl1980 | Four | 08/07/2006 01:09 am |
oh she should just tell riley to take a hike!! love the rewrite of that episode, very well done..can't wait for more  |
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| slinkypsychokit | Four | 08/07/2006 12:39 am |
| Excellent, Tam! Hot, sexy, fun. And Bitey! What more could I ask for? You even had Angel and Riley bashing! Have I mentioned lately how much I love this fic? |
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| Braat44 | Three | 07/31/2006 12:02 pm |
Yay, they love each other! Now if they would just tell each other everyone could be happy (except Riley).  I hope there's more soon. |
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| jl1980 | Three | 07/31/2006 07:48 am |
| i like the twist on the episodes in question...great chapter...love how she wants him but doesn't want him to know, and wants him to want *her*, but doesn't want him to know...excellent |
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| Lou | Three | 07/31/2006 07:13 am |
| Sweet and funny. I love it. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Three | 07/31/2006 02:20 am |
| Okay, they're just nuts. LoL |
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| Verda | Three | 07/30/2006 11:33 pm |
| Excellent little twist to the original, please tell me that they're going to give in soon, so could use some Spuffy lovin'.Great chapter, thanks for the read. |
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| MarzBar | Three | 07/30/2006 10:18 pm |
| I enjoyed the "woe is me" bit about Captain Cardbored. Never could see him as Buffy's love interest; Xander maybe. |
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| Cas | Three | 07/30/2006 09:48 pm |
| Still very cute. Love how you weave dialogue from the show into your story. |
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| kim | Three | 07/30/2006 09:28 pm |
| Wacky! |
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| redwulf50 | Three | 07/30/2006 09:15 pm |
Bloody excellent chappie. You ladies are great  |
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| Karyn | Three | 07/30/2006 08:58 pm |
| lmao!!! "Okay" that's all he gets? bet he's plenty confused by now! great update!! |
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| Verda | Two | 07/30/2006 11:22 pm |
| Nice rewrite, liked your version better. Thanks for the read. |
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| redwulf50 | Two | 07/19/2006 06:59 pm |
| hmmmmmm, damn good chappie, but is their more anywhere??? *Looks under computer* |
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| Araedhel | Two | 07/17/2006 07:38 am |
| I love your story so far. Please write more. |
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| sirc | Two | 06/11/2006 01:01 pm |
| great chapter |
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| deedo | Two | 06/10/2006 07:51 am |
| nice turn of events, can't wait for more |
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| Lou | Two | 06/07/2006 11:43 am |
| "Please, no..." Shurely shome mishtake> "Please, yes..." |
| LMAO |
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| Athenewolfe | Two | 06/02/2006 06:29 pm |
oh yeah me likey this story! Nice writing girls!
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| thanks! *hugglez* |
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| vladt | Two | 06/01/2006 03:31 pm |
| wonderful chapter. thanks for the fun read. |
| thanks glad you enjoyed it |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Two | 05/31/2006 12:51 am |
| Heehee, cute... and can we kill harmony soon? |
| not really sure that's where we're headed with this one, but we'll think about it lol |
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| Jackofspikes | Two | 05/30/2006 06:17 pm |
| absolutely brilliant. The same but with just the rigt amount of variation to make the chapter work. Love it...more please. |
| glad you think so LOL *hugz* thanks sweetpea! |
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| Robyn | Two | 05/30/2006 05:06 pm |
| I love how you made use of this episode. Thanks for the lovely update. |
| You're very welcome and I'm happy you enjoyed it |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Two | 05/30/2006 02:26 pm |
| Nice way to rewrite those scenes to fit this fic. I love this one. |
| i was kinda antsy about this one LOL |
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| slinkypsychokit | Two | 05/30/2006 01:22 pm |
| Fun, fast-paced and scorchingly hot! Yeah, I'm totally loving this fic! |
| oh good! i was wondering when you were going to find us LOL |
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| pfeifferpack | Two | 05/30/2006 12:51 pm |
"Visions of him crawling all over her body while giving her a tongue-bath a cat would envy sent her heart rate through the roof. "
Me too sister!
Lovely hot continuance......keep it up (not originally intended as a pun but, hey, it works for me that way too *G*).
THIS is what the world needs more of.....well written PWP! Well, my world at least.
Kathleen
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| glad to know we live in the same happy world lol thank you kathleen, you always leave the most wonderful reviews! |
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| UncagedMuse | Two | 05/30/2006 12:51 pm |
| Love the way Buffy can't help but be distracted by Spike. Who could resist? LOL More! |
| your wish is my command sweetie LOL |
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| Opal | Two | 05/30/2006 09:15 am |
| I love this fic so far. First chappie was funny, I forgot all about chinese sunburns! |
| so did I LOL |
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| gotkona | Two | 05/30/2006 08:30 am |
| Very nice. Definitely like your version better then the real one. HEHE |
| thanks! i was afraid it read too much like the script LOL |
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| Niamh | Two | 05/30/2006 08:25 am |
| *snickers* Love this little look. . . . . is there more? Please tell me there's more. . . . |
| oh yep there's more |
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| jl1980 | Two | 05/30/2006 07:48 am |
| love the twist on the actual episode...very nicely done...very sexy...can't wait to see what happens next |
neither can we! LOL neither one of us work from an outline, we just start sending stuff back and forth thru IM's and hope for the best!
so glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! |
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| Karyn | Two | 05/30/2006 07:02 am |
| hee! I love it, just the right amount of snark and lusties! And wow, you'd almost think Harm had the gift of sight or insight...or hell just plain eyeballs. *grin* |
if she only had a brain...
LMAO
Thanks Kar! |
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| maryperk | Two | 05/30/2006 06:43 am |
| Good chapter! |
| Thanks!! |
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| redwulf50 | Two | 05/30/2006 05:21 am |
| lol, pooor Spike, should have just killed the bint |
| don't make me get my newspaper after you pup |
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| spikes mrs | One | 07/31/2006 06:09 am |
| okay i could get addict to this fic real quick i hope riley going to get the flick |
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| Verda | One | 07/30/2006 11:07 pm |
| Wow! don't know how I missed this, I read everything of yours! Well I've got it now. So love how Buffy's belittling her sex life with Riley. Captain Whitebread just not doing it for her in the sack, so I guess the slayers going to be looking for someone to fill the void? Maybe something in the way of a very sexy blond vampire? Great way to start a story. Thanks for the fine read. |
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| Cas | One | 07/30/2006 09:30 pm |
| I don't know how I missed this before. I love the tone you have set, starting from the title and moving on. A great break from the usual fare. |
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| sirc | One | 06/11/2006 12:51 pm |
| Loved this Great start |
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| Athenewolfe | One | 06/02/2006 06:26 pm |
| lmao - poor annoying riley - someone buy that boy a clue! |
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| UncagedMuse | One | 05/30/2006 12:42 pm |
| Love Buff's thoughts on her annoying boyfriend and oh my, the nice imagery of Spike at her neck. Love it! |
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| Niamh | One | 05/30/2006 08:18 am |
| I missed this? How did I miss this? You snuck this in while I was comatose or something. Not fair, really. You have to give a girl a warning, ya know. I'm laughing at the image of Buffy going ballistic over Mr. Potato head. . . . and her drooling over spike oogling. . . Love it. |
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| vladt | One | 05/29/2006 07:53 pm |
| that was a hilarious read, thanks. |
| you're most welcome! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | One | 05/29/2006 01:25 am |
| Looks like a good start to a new one. Look forward to more you guys. |
| Thank you, Tasha. There should be more soon. |
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| slinkypsychokit | One | 05/28/2006 01:31 am |
Sorry, hun, what my earlier review was supposed to say was:
HOT DAMN! Another kick-ass ficcie from the Dynamic Duo! Ya got the Riley bashing and the inadvertant Angel bashing by extension. And ya got teh HOTNESS already working! Ooh! And comedy! What more can a girl a girl ask for besides MORE MORE MORE?!?
Um...pretty please? |
LOL, this was actually the first thing we ever wrote together. We just hadn't planned to post it till it was done, but thne so many other things happened and we got majorly sidetracked. But yes, got all the elements in there, the Riley bashing particularly.
More is coming--there's no need to beg! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | One | 05/27/2006 09:49 pm |
| Ewwww, icky Riley sexage *gags* |
| Hey! Not like I'm graphic or anything--unlike the show. He'll get the boot soon enough. |
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| Lou | One | 05/27/2006 05:30 pm |
| That was one hot nibble! |
| Well, hopefully they'll get both hotter and nibblier! Good to have you on board for this tale. |
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| slinkypsychokit | One | 05/27/2006 04:16 pm |
| I love it already! |
| Whoot! Now I KNOW it's a winner! You've got me all excited now. Good thing I've been in a writing mood lately. |
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| Kat | One | 05/27/2006 03:14 pm |
| wonderful imagry just wonderful. just dump the stupid angel look alike there buffy. lol great start |
| Oh, Buffy's waking up to a world of possibilities! Don't you worry. So glad you liked it. |
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| gotkona | One | 05/27/2006 01:35 pm |
| Love this. |
| Thank you. More soon, I hope. |
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| neo_trinityknot | One | 05/27/2006 01:14 pm |
| Hee! Buffy talking to herself is so amusing. |
| It was an incredibly fun chapter to write. I think this might have been one of the first light and fluffy things I'd tried to do. Now we just need to get it moving again. |
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| Karyn | One | 05/27/2006 11:28 am |
| awesome, the UST is thick tonight...lol |
| And don't you love it? |
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| jl1980 | One | 05/27/2006 10:02 am |
| lol...i just watched that episode yesterday, so i love the spin on it...i love the end "four minutes of relaxing sex"...lol...excellent beginning...can't wait to see where you take this story |
| Wow, great coincidence! I'd almost forgotten that we even had this fic going. It stalled so long ago (and was my fault) but hopefully with some encouragement we can get it moving again, especially as Road is so close to the end. Thanks for the review. |
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| pfeifferpack | One | 05/27/2006 10:02 am |
Lovey start. That was always one of my favorite Spike scenes capturing all his elements in one act...from a genuine threat to quite endearingly funny and unlucky. Looking forward to more.
Kathleen |
| Hi Kathleen! It was an incredibly cute and funny episode. I don't know why it's never been twisted before. Actually, the more I think on it, the more I love that episode. I really need to sit down and watch season five again from beginning to end. I'm glad you enjoyed our beginning. We just need a medium-sized push to get it going again.<.i> |
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| Robyn | One | 05/27/2006 09:47 am |
| She is such an idiot. This is really a great start and I am looking forward to more, in particular when she dumps Riley on his rear. I’m really looking forward to the next update. |
| Buffy's an idiot? NO! LMAO. This is an old fic we've had in our files for a very long time. I cna't even explain how it stalled, but hopefully with everyone's encouragement it will get back on track. I know I'm keen to wipe up all my lingering fics. Really glad you liked the first chapter. |
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| Pin | One | 05/27/2006 09:20 am |
| I love Buffy's thought regarding Riley - perfect. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the new story. |
| I can't tell you fun this was to write, way back when we actually wrote it. I cna't believe Tami and I have written a number of collabs and never posted this when it was our very first. So glad you liked it! |
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| redwulf50 | One | 05/27/2006 07:43 am |
| Riley is a dud and not even a milk dud |
| well, he could be a ded milk dud. Would that work for ya? |
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| kim | One | 05/27/2006 05:20 am |
Oh, this is funny! "four minutes" LOLOLOLOLOL
sings *bet she's got a hickey...* |
| Well, I was trying to be generous to Riley. If it went on longer than four mintues, Buffy wouldn't be happily saying how relaxing it was, lol! |
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| maryperk | One | 05/27/2006 05:04 am |
| Nice! Wow! More? |
| There is more! Tami's turn next, so look out for it. Glad you liked. |
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| meli1_77 | One | 05/27/2006 04:00 am |
| Fantastic start, I am looking forward to more. |
| And there is more! LOL. We'd actually written four a half chapters about a year ago. Hopefully this will get us moving back on it again. |
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