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| Softer World by Constance |
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| Robyn | Chapter Five | 07/24/2006 03:32 pm |
| I am really enjoying this story. The interaction between Spike and Buffy seems perfect given their past history and the way they have been communicating of late. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's interaction in the bar and what Dawn said to Spike and Buffy out on the terrace. |
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| vladt | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 09:55 pm |
| fun read, thank you. don't worry about the lack of negative reviews. there are a couple of reviewers on this site who point out, in great detail,what is wrong with stories. i have yet to find any of their tales to review. thanks for the fine read. |
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| Immortal Beloved | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 08:31 pm |
I like your way of getting Buffy and Spike to transition from "the bathroom scene" to having an intimate relationship again. I completely believe that no means no. However, Buffy told Spike "No," a million times and then had sex with him once for each emphatic "No."
Calling Buffy a necropheliac is hillarious. She's a nymphomaniac necropheliac.
And lastly, since you want criticism, you may want to Americanize the American characters' speach. For example, we Americans don't say "snog." We'd say "making out" or "hooking up."
All in all, a nice read so far. |
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| Lynda | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 08:08 pm |
| I love the believable way you wrote the characters. I wish Spike and Buffy would have had that kind of epiphany. Please continue. |
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| Yzba | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 12:04 pm |
| Looking forward to reading more, |
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| Tamara | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 08:56 am |
| Apocalypses have such a bad way of killing a good mood. |
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| Sharon | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 08:48 am |
I have to say, if the show had gone in the direction you're taking this story, I do believe that Buffy and Spike would act very much like your portrayals. I'm liking this story very much.
And, if you want meaner reviews, start writing worse, it's your own fault! |
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| kim | Chapter Five | 07/18/2006 05:50 am |
Gotta give Spike points for trying...how can he be sure of his footing, where Buffy's concerned...but she's making efforts, so...
So much for more romance in bed...more apocalypse talk to deal with. The mood might be ruined, but they can still cuddle. |
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| Robyn | Chapter Four | 07/24/2006 03:11 pm |
| I read your note at the end and honestly couldn't think of anything mean to say. The characterization feels good and if there is anything else off, well I am so into the story I am not noticing it. I truly love the conversations between Spike and Buffy and how they are each helping the other work through issues. |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter Four | 07/18/2006 05:38 pm |
| I sent you an e mail. Enjoying the story, BTW |
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| Robyn | Chapter Three | 07/24/2006 02:59 pm |
| I hope things are going to get better between Spike and Dawn although I do like that they talked and that there seemed to be a bit of a thaw. |
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| Robyn | Chapter Two | 07/24/2006 02:46 pm |
| The interaction between Spike and Buffy as well as the air being cleared a bit was just gorgeous. |
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| Megan | Chapter Two | 06/01/2006 10:26 am |
| I've read this fic before but I'm loving the trip down memory lane. Hopefully you have much more of it in hiding? |
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| jl1980 | Chapter One | 05/31/2006 11:36 pm |
so very sweet...and very in character for both of them ... excellent chapter  |
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| Robyn | Chapter One | 05/31/2006 10:02 pm |
| I really enjoyed the sweetness of this fic. You did a great job of showing the closeness that they had started to achieve by this time. |
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter One | 05/31/2006 09:02 pm |
| Very sweet and typical of them. |
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| Kat | Chapter One | 05/31/2006 07:21 pm |
| I really liked this. quite a nice thought actually |
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