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| Yellow Brick Road - Book II: Nemesis by Holly |
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| Robyn | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/28/2006 09:46 am |
| Vindictive bitch is right. I loved the intensity of this chapter and I felt so sorry for Spike and even Angel for the way Buffy was treating them and taking out her hurt and guilt on them. |
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| vladt | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/19/2006 06:50 pm |
| very good read. thank you. angel and this buffy deserve each other. |
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| Verda | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/19/2006 03:03 am |
| I understand that she's a little confused but does the word "bitch" come to mind, never the less, if Spike didn't love her so much I wished that he did leave again and this time for good. So tired of seeing him get the short end of the stick, always in pain and getting his heart broken. Love the story, but hatin' Buffy at the moment. |
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| jl1980 | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/18/2006 07:29 pm |
yeah...a lot of good those two words do after she's crushed him and run...poor spike...he really did just do as she asked...and yet his heart is broken again...cant wait for your next update, this one was intense, and beautiful  |
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| Shanna | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/18/2006 07:00 pm |
| Whoa, harsh chapter!! Poor stupid Buffy...still a confused emotional wreck that slashes through everyone. Here's hoping Spike realizes this and doesn't give up on her. I sometimes wonder if it is worth loving someone who is so confused and lives in denial? This always bothered me in S6 and S7 of BTVS despite my Spuffy love....and Spike endured this treatment for a year and a half on BTVS. Damn. |
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| kim | Part Seven: Empty-Handed | 07/18/2006 04:02 pm |
Evil little bitch! That lying little whore...stringing them both along, then lashing out with bitterness and lies. She doesn't deserve either vampire, and it would serve her right if they both dropped her like a hot potato. She's been horrid to everyone in her life...selfish, stupid....
Let's everybody ban to together for a "Buffy Sucks" club. They all have cause to say it, feel it. |
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| vladt | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/19/2006 05:04 pm |
| excellent chapter, thank you. hit first and then think. loved. thanks again. |
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| Verda | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/19/2006 02:19 am |
| Leave it to Buffy to knock him on his butt instead of taking him in her arms. Let Faith have Angel for all I care. One more chapter to catch up. Love it, but you know that. |
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| Robyn | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/03/2006 04:54 pm |
I loved this update. Buffy’s realization of how she really feels towards Angel and Angel with Faith was great. And what a way to great Spike, I can’t wait for the next update.  |
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| MarzBar | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/02/2006 12:37 pm |
| Uh oh indeed. Are they coming to a truth-telling time? Will Spike's arrival help Buffy push Angelus completely out of her life? More story please. |
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| Karyn | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/02/2006 12:05 pm |
| awesome chapter! eeee!!! now i'm all nail-bitey girl! lol |
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| Mali | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/02/2006 05:07 am |
| I love the last sentence, xD. |
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| Paxton | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/02/2006 02:19 am |
| "The bane of her existence. The pinnacle of her aspirations." OK, gotta confess, totally a fangirl for your fic. Your writing is the first thing I check out everytime I go online. Loved this first time around, squeeing it the revisit. Thank you so much for all your trips to the Verse. |
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| jl1980 | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/01/2006 10:44 pm |
| wow..this should be quite the confrontation...excellent update...love their reunion, so typically them...angel might actually fall for faith this time around, eh? great chapter |
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| kim | Part Six: When The Night Is New | 07/01/2006 10:01 pm |
Hahahahahahaha.....! Run, kiddies!
Faith looking for help, hmm? Angel admitting the truth to himself is good.
I'm thinking the books are already with the Mayor by now, if the little demon can't be found...
Buffy and her stupid temper. Ever think before you act, girl? That is not the place to hash this out. |
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| Verda | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 07/19/2006 01:21 am |
| Great dialogue for Spike and Buffy as they sorted out there feelings for one another. Giles isn't stupid, he knows that there was more to her encounter with Spike than she let on. Love this series. |
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| Robyn | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/28/2006 11:35 am |
| I loved Spike's thoughts and how he had to make sure that he wasn't acting like Angel and I can't wait until he and Buffy run into each other again. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it. |
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| vladt | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/26/2006 11:58 pm |
| very good read, thank you |
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| jl1980 | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/26/2006 08:33 pm |
oh wow...she's gonna be ticked when they finally do see each other..if she's not too busy ripping off his clothes and screwing him senseless...i vote for option number two  |
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| Azelma | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/26/2006 06:11 pm |
| Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when they meet! |
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| kim | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/26/2006 12:40 pm |
| You said you wanted time - not how much. Shouldn't have given that little crumb of a possibility if you never wanted to see him again, Buffy. You have no right to be a bitch about him wanting to see if you've thought about the two of you...made a decision. |
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| Karyn | Part Five: Beyond the Looking Glass | 06/26/2006 11:55 am |
| awesome chapter as always!! loved it! |
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| Verda | Part Four: Patrol | 07/19/2006 12:58 am |
| Don't understand why she just doesn't let Angel go, yeah I know she feels guilty but it's not doing either of them any good. Still don't like Faith, can't wait til she's gone. Another great chapter. |
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| vladt | Part Four: Patrol | 06/23/2006 04:45 pm |
| buffy seems to have stopped blaming spike. excellent read, thanks |
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| Robyn | Part Four: Patrol | 06/23/2006 04:29 am |
| Loved the description Faith said Wes gave of the Vampire who he ran into. I enjoy Buffy’s rambling thoughts about Spike. She and Angel know it’s over, why don’t they just save themselves the discomfort. Can’t wait to see what happens when Spike and Buffy run see each other again. Thanks for the update. |
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| Morrigan | Part Four: Patrol | 06/23/2006 04:13 am |
| sings, *I don't want anybody else, when I think about you I touch myself* *snort* Hehehehehe! Great chapter! |
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| kim | Part Four: Patrol | 06/23/2006 03:07 am |
Yep, the wait's over. *grin*
It's foolish to try to hang on to what was with Angel after all the Angelus crap. Too much trauma under that bridge. It'd never work, even if Spike had never shown up again, so just give the guy, and yourself, some mercy, and end it. Relief to all.
Hmmm..Faith's still being a bad girl. Will Buffy get to meet with the little smelly demon again? |
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| jl1980 | Part Four: Patrol | 06/22/2006 11:10 pm |
| love how you write faith...an excellent update...can't wait for them to see each other again |
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| Karyn | Part Four: Patrol | 06/22/2006 10:45 pm |
| lmao!!! great chapter! ugh, i guess Faiths still evil right? sigh, lol |
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| Verda | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 07/19/2006 12:04 am |
| Yay! Spike's back! Wes hasn't got a clue to the late night visitor, and he's a watcher? Great chapter as alway's. Thanks for the read. |
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| vladt | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/23/2006 04:30 pm |
| wonderful entrance spike. spike, at least, is not as confused as buffy. great read, thanks |
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| Lou | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 02:07 pm |
| Vivid thoughts. |
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| Robyn | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 08:46 am |
| Yes Spike's back and I loved his entrance right down to the watcher 'falling' at his feet. I really loved this chapter and his thoughts. |
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| Karyn | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 08:21 am |
| awesome! love it! poor Spike, so whipped...rofl |
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| jl1980 | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 07:18 am |
| i love this little look into spike's mind...very intriguing and interesting...poor boy, he's absolutely lost to her hehe and the new slayer's not quite the pushover he's thinking, is she? another excellent chapter, can't wait for more |
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| Shanna | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 07:14 am |
| A new chappie!!!! **Does happy dance** Good chapter. Can't wait for Buffy and Spike to meet up again. |
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| Shanna | Part Three: There's No Place Like Home | 06/20/2006 07:13 am |
| A new chappie!!!! **Does happy dance** Good chapter. Can't wait for Buffy and Spike to meet up again. |
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| Verda | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 07/18/2006 10:19 pm |
| Thanks for the flash backs from book 1, it's been a while since I read it. After a night like that how could she think of anything else. Great chapter. |
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| sirc | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/15/2006 04:56 am |
| great chapter |
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| vladt | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/14/2006 08:10 pm |
| loved it. it's all spike's fault. right. really enjoy all those thoughts of spike while out with angel. thanks for the great read. |
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| Robyn | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/13/2006 08:50 am |
| I love how well you showed her conflicted feelings. She knows things are over with Angel but she doesn’t want to break up, to truly end things. I love how she keeps thinking of Spike and then reminding herself that she hates him. Thanks for the great update. |
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| redwulf50 | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/12/2006 06:35 pm |
LOL, I love it you are my hero
can Angel be any more of a shit?? |
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| Shanna | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/12/2006 11:42 am |
| I was so happy to see this chapter up. Thank you. Can't wait for Spike's return...because you just know he will make his entrance. Next chapter soon please. |
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| Shanna | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/12/2006 11:41 am |
| I was so happy to see this chapter up. Thank you. Can't wait for Spike's return...because you just know he will make his entrance. Next chapter soon please. |
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| Karyn | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/12/2006 09:36 am |
Poor Buffy, stuck with the brooding wonder, sigh
Come back Spike come back! *weeps*
*g* Great Update! |
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| Lou | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/12/2006 03:22 am |
| More of the brilliant reworking - heaven! |
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| kim | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/11/2006 10:58 pm |
| So frustrating! Just get on with it and make the break-up official, Buffy! You'll feel better afterwards. It'll be a relief, and a relief to Angel, too. He's obviously as uncomfortable with her as she is with him. |
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| jl1980 | Part Two: Dinner and a Show | 06/11/2006 10:14 pm |
| angel's a jerk..she needs to dump him and go find back...loved this update lots, but when is spike gonna come back?? please make it soon! excellent story |
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| Verda | Part One: The Shrew | 07/18/2006 09:30 pm |
| This second book looks like it's going to be as good as the first. Love how she's trying to convince her that is all Spike's fault when she knows that it isn't. Great start Holly, thanks for the read. |
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| sirc | Part One: The Shrew | 06/15/2006 04:40 am |
| great chapter |
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| Dirktavian | Part One: The Shrew | 06/04/2006 01:11 am |
| I am hooked (as usual) on your fiction. I read the rest of Book I: Cupidity, and I absolutely loved it. Can't wait until the bleached wonder makes an appearance-- will her actions give away her feelings. I just love your fics, you naughty thing, you! Makes me feel right at home! ;) |
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| vladt | Part One: The Shrew | 06/03/2006 02:24 pm |
| excellent chapter. it is all spike's fault. thanks for the fine read. |
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| delusional_harm | Part One: The Shrew | 06/03/2006 02:03 am |
| Great start I thought no fic would be as wonderful as the first book. But it seems like it'll be much better, if that's possible |
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| Shanna | Part One: The Shrew | 06/02/2006 07:51 am |
| I'm such a happy camper that Book II is posted!!! Hehe...how could anyone forget a night with Spikey? Looking forward to Spike coming back because he can't stay away. Thanks for the fast update....and can we have another one asap? |
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| Shanna | Part One: The Shrew | 06/02/2006 07:50 am |
| I'm such a happy camper that Book II is posted!!! Hehe...how could anyone forget a night with Spikey? Looking forward to Spike coming back because he can't stay away. Thanks for the fast update....and can we have another one asap? |
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| Karyn | Part One: The Shrew | 06/01/2006 11:09 pm |
| omg, that was an awesome update! sigh, poor buffy, wants to hate him so much...but he only did what she told him to, big sigh! |
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| jl1980 | Part One: The Shrew | 06/01/2006 10:57 pm |
oh please hurry and get there spike!! she needs you badly! she's wrecking her life with her treatment of her friends! i feel bad for poor willow  great chapter, can't wait for you to updte ;) |
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| kim | Part One: The Shrew | 06/01/2006 08:46 pm |
Ah, the tantrums of the self-absorbed.....
Grow up, Buffy. Being an adult is about owning your decisions. Your 18, so it's time to stop blaming everyone else for you being a bitch. |
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| Robyn | Part One: The Shrew | 06/01/2006 08:34 pm |
| I have been anxiously waiting for this second book and I am so happy to see that the first chapter is here. I love the start and how distracted Buffy has been since her birthday with her feeling that she can’t share with anyone what happened. I am really looking forward to how this book goes. |
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