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| Broken by Athenewolfe |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Ravished | 07/16/2006 04:04 pm |
| Dark, but well written. It always frustrated me about Buffy because she would say no and mean yes. No should mean no. How is a person to know when you actually mean it if you play this yes/no game all the time before. I can see how it would have basically driven Spike insane to know that he'd actually hurt her. |
| Thanks Tasha - I am glad that you found Ravished to be good. I always thought in a similar vein... kept wanting to explain to Buffy the concept of a safe word to her. I do think Spike would have broken himself if he had hurt Buffy so glad you see things similarly *HUGS* |
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| vladt | Ravished | 06/13/2006 12:28 am |
| dark and sad, but beautiful. love it. thanks for the great read. |
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| Maddy | Ravished | 06/12/2006 05:59 am |
That's so heartbreaking. But beautiful in it's darkness.
Great writing. So many emotions in not so many words. |
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| Tonia | Ravished | 06/11/2006 07:35 am |
| I just got an image of an insane Spike gently brushing a catatonic Buffy. Very sad and bittersweet image. Well done. |
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| deedo | Ravished | 06/10/2006 03:25 pm |
it's kinda depressing  but nevertheless excellently written |
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| GoldenBuffy | Ravished | 06/09/2006 10:29 pm |
The man vs. the demon, which one truly won? Or did they both lose in the end, have they lost Buffy for good?
Can't wait for more. |
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| Robyn | Ravished | 06/09/2006 08:12 pm |
| This is darkly beautiful, the last two lines in particular. You’ve done another excellent job. |
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| Verda | Ravished | 06/09/2006 08:08 pm |
| That was great! As much as he struggles, sometimes you just can't win but he will always love her. That's the tragedy that is Spike! |
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| delusional_harm | Ravished | 06/09/2006 07:44 pm |
| Whoa! Best angst I've read in years.. Great job with just two drabble. |
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| jl1980 | Ravished | 06/09/2006 07:37 pm |
whoa...again very powerful though very dark...this would make an interesting little series of drabbles, please keep it up  love it |
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| UncagedMuse | Ravished | 06/09/2006 03:42 pm |
| Beautiful in its pain! |
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| Spikez_tart | Ravished | 06/09/2006 02:29 pm |
| This is too heartbreaking. |
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| wall_flower | Ravished | 06/09/2006 02:29 pm |
| Tragic. But incredible. Your originality astounds me. |
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| spufette | Ravished | 06/09/2006 02:23 pm |
this is so sad, but you know i think it is something Joss would have explored had he gone ahead and allowed the inevitable to happen.
I have always felt that Spike would have claimed
Buffy if he had gone ahead and raped her. Turn her? Maybe, but claimed her yes.
Sad but very touching.
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Broken | 07/16/2006 04:03 pm |
| Wow, Steph. Catching up, and I know I read this before but there isn't a review here. This is just wow. |
| Thank you Tasha - I am glad you liked Broken - I have to admit I liked writing it - course I realy love the dark fic... just makes me think what if... |
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| GoldenBuffy | Broken | 06/09/2006 10:26 pm |
| Whoa! Can I say, wow. Really sucked me in! |
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| Verda | Broken | 06/09/2006 07:57 pm |
| WOW! that was dark, powerful and so sad and what else could he do? Evn in his darkest hour, he still thinks of only her. Loved it! |
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| Tonia | Broken | 06/09/2006 08:38 am |
That was raw. Stark, bleak, and raw. Damn good too.
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
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| Smokescreen | Broken | 06/08/2006 10:03 pm |
Omg...that's so sad. piercing... you've captured the "what-if" perfectly. if that had really happened...omg...
good work nice rhythm and flow of words. |
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| Ariel Dawn | Broken | 06/08/2006 09:39 pm |
| wow, that was powerful...good job! |
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| Always_jbj | Broken | 06/08/2006 07:57 pm |
| Wow! Very dark... and VERY good. Thanks |
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| Spikez_tart | Broken | 06/08/2006 07:44 pm |
| Very angsty AW. Hope there's more. Not sure Spike wouldn't have dusted himself if he'd actually raped her. |
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| jl1980 | Broken | 06/08/2006 05:14 pm |
| oh my gosh...that is so very powerful...dark but very well written and moving...i have no other words...this is incredible |
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| nat | Broken | 06/08/2006 04:01 pm |
| Loved this! It would make a great beginning to a much longer fic. I just want to know more. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Broken | 06/08/2006 02:26 pm |
| Ohhhh that is so saaaad |
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| Morrigan | Broken | 06/08/2006 12:44 pm |
| Uh! That was utterly gut wrenching. Just... wow. |
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| Kat | Broken | 06/08/2006 11:25 am |
| yikes yes that was dark. yet somehow moving. it was written really well. it kinda made my heart jump into my chest |
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| spikeslovebite | Broken | 06/08/2006 10:40 am |
| GAH! *runs and hides* powerful ficcie hun! *hugz* |
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| ms clawdia | Broken | 06/08/2006 10:21 am |
| Jesus! |
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| UncagedMuse | Broken | 06/08/2006 10:20 am |
| *sobs* Excellent piece. Perfect in its darkness. |
| thank you sweetie! I am glad that you liked broken! *hugs you* |
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| Robyn | Broken | 06/08/2006 09:11 am |
| Heartbreaking and oh so well done. You managed so much with so little. |
| Thank you Robyn, I am glad that you enjoyed Broken. *hugs* |
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| Maddy | Broken | 06/08/2006 08:22 am |
Awesome... the best dark fic i read in a long long time.
At first I felt like there should be a continuation. But after a thought... no. It's better this way.
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| thank you - I am glad that you liked it :-) *blushes* |
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| wall_flower | Broken | 06/08/2006 08:20 am |
| Scary, but so sad. Poor Spike, his lack of restraint finally caused him to lose his mind. Achingly wistful. |
| Thank you - I am glad that you liked it. I am having a lot of fun with my prompt table for dark fics. Just must be my twisted mind. |
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