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| Carefully Everywhere Descending by Dark Eyed Seer |
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| Robyn | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/24/2006 08:41 am |
| I love that Will spoke to Buffy and how Spike found his car. Thanks for such a lovely update. |
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| VWalk | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/18/2006 10:56 am |
I have to be frank in that the twincest really squicks me out. This was actually my least favorite of the three choices you gave, but I decided to give it a chance.
The storyline is good but I find myself skipping over the squicky parts. Still think you're a great writer... would just have loved to see that applied to either or both of the other two.
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| Lou | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/18/2006 05:10 am |
| Wise move, Buffy! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/18/2006 02:19 am |
| stop being a butt, spike! *smacks him a few times* |
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| neo_trinityknot | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/18/2006 01:55 am |
| Squee! Get-togetherness |
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| Tonia | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/18/2006 01:32 am |
| I love this story. =) |
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| jl1980 | Long and Dark, Shiney and Black | 07/17/2006 11:26 pm |
oh this should be fun! but seriously, it might give the three of them the chance to bond a bit...very much enjoyed this update...poor spike, getting his heart all broken ...  i hope buffy can somehow get through to both these hurting boys  |
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| Robyn | Mostly Harmless | 07/24/2006 08:34 am |
| I enjoyed Will's thoughts about Spike and his behavior and how they mirrored Spike's about Will and his behavior from an earlier chapter. |
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| Lou | Mostly Harmless | 07/17/2006 01:06 pm |
| Buffy's in for some surprises! |
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| Dar | Mostly Harmless | 07/16/2006 12:38 pm |
| Great Chapter |
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| jl1980 | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 05:44 pm |
| mean old watchers...yes, spike definitely has adhd...a bit of mixed feelings as to the whole Spike/william thing...not sure what i think about that...but overall a very moving chapter...looking forward to the next ;) |
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| neo_trinityknot | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 02:56 pm |
| YAY! I love updates on this! |
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| akarinacj | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 09:58 am |
| This story can not be updated fast enough. This last chapter almost burned my PC. Wow. Are we going to have a thresome????? (I hope so. Very hot...VERY) |
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| Sharon | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 07:55 am |
| My, it's warm, isn't it? |
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| LadyYashka | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 05:21 am |
| I'm so glad you updated! I love your stories. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Mostly Harmless | 07/14/2006 02:04 am |
| ooooooooo very hot *drools* |
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| Robyn | Modern Living | 07/03/2006 01:22 am |
I love the promise of the last line.
I loved Joyce being all mothering towards the boys, Buffy might have found them a better place to stay but Joyce might really be what they need. Thanks for the update. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Modern Living | 07/01/2006 01:48 am |
| Mmmm, I wouldn't mind having them living with ME, heehee |
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| neo_trinityknot | Modern Living | 07/01/2006 01:42 am |
| Squees! Cant wait for more! |
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| jl1980 | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 07:18 pm |
| what a wonderful turn of events! so glad the boys are moving in with her...i feel so bad for them...physically they may be next to invulnerable now, but emotionally, they're so hurt! poor babies! excellent chapter |
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| deedo | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 03:32 pm |
I'm glad they decided to stay
I'm looking forward to find out what's going to happen next |
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| Lori | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 10:55 am |
| Thank you for the update. Joyce is the best! Can't wait for more. Thanks!! |
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| Kay | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 09:42 am |
| Love it! I wish you'd get a beta just to check for spelling errors and typos, but the foundation of your story is excellent. I've read a ton a Buffy fanfic (who hasn't!!) and you should be commended for coming up with such an unique plot. |
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| golddrake | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 09:24 am |
| great chapter |
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| Tina | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 07:16 am |
| Thank you! I so look forward to your updates & I'm impressed by your managing more than one story at a time. More please! |
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| Lou | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 05:02 am |
| Interesting isn't the word!!! |
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| fallen_angel | Modern Living | 06/30/2006 04:17 am |
| I LOVE Joyce! |
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| I prefere this fic... will it be posted here aswel | Purple Haze | 06/27/2006 07:36 pm |
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| Robyn | Purple Haze | 06/27/2006 06:06 am |
| I refused to vote because I loved all three stories so much; I admit it I am a fic whore. I am so glad that we get two of them with the possibility of the third being co-authored. As for this fic, I find the premise very interesting, and I loved both Buffy’s and Willow's reactions to what they found was the councils attitude. As for Giles, hopefully he can be shown a better way. |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Purple Haze | 06/26/2006 03:00 am |
| Yay! You're continuing this story!! *happy dances all over* And stoner Spike... omg *falls over laughing* |
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| Tonia | Purple Haze | 06/26/2006 02:12 am |
Honestly,
I'm glad your doing both stories. I think your a wonderful writer and so far I've read every story you've written. Keep up the good work! |
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| jl1980 | Purple Haze | 06/26/2006 01:00 am |
| wow..that chapter was incredible...love how will took up for spike...excellent progression of the story and i really hope buffy can make this right...now that the decision is made i can be more open with my loving of this story without fearing that it would make you not write "Intolerable Beauty" ... hehe...they're both awesoem!! |
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| Cewcew | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 08:56 pm |
| hmmm, And how does Buffy recognise that smell.... lol loven it! |
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| neo_trinityknot | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 05:45 pm |
| YAY! So happy this one will be continued. I love how the twins are with eachother |
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| Dar | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 05:23 pm |
| How cruel to treat them as attack dogs. No wonder they turn to drugs to ease the pain. Hope they find help but it looks like Buffy maybe using her head this time. |
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| Lou | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 04:44 pm |
| Go, girl! She's the only Scooby with any sense |
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| SpaceLord | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 02:48 pm |
I'm just putting in that I probably won't be following this story at all. I might read it when it's done but not at the moment. Not really interested in the twin thing, just feels wrong.
I'll read your other stories though. |
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| fallen_angel | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 01:48 pm |
| The boys do srugs? Drugs bad, tree pretty. |
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| Sharon | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 01:21 pm |
Oh, the joys of being evil. We get two wonderful stories.
I love the Scoobies reactions to the council's attitude, and I'm proud of them. (Can we smack Giles?)
Thanks for another great chapter! |
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| Pam S | Purple Haze | 06/25/2006 01:14 pm |
Go ahead Buffy... The boys do drugs??
Update soon. |
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| fallen_angel | School Days | 06/25/2006 01:40 pm |
| poor Will. |
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| Alexis | School Days | 06/23/2006 10:20 pm |
Those two boys are so cute together! Giles better not try to split them up out of some mistaken human morality - they're not human so our rules should apply to them. Of course, if he tried to split them up then Spike would just get snarky and mean and threaten not to help Buffy any more. That would be funny.
All *three* fics get my vote! C'mon, you can't just let two of them wither and die, they're all too good! |
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| duke6665 | School Days | 06/23/2006 01:28 pm |
great chapter
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| Lori | School Days | 06/19/2006 03:50 pm |
| LOVE the new chapter. Please update soon. Thank you. |
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| neo_trinityknot | School Days | 06/18/2006 01:16 pm |
| I hope you'll decide to continue on with this one, I love it. |
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| Dar | School Days | 06/18/2006 08:10 am |
| I hope Giles tries hard to be a parent not just a watcher, they need family. |
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| jl1980 | School Days | 06/18/2006 06:33 am |
| awww....poor will the stupid council insisting that they're not actually "people" ... makes me so mad... man, all three of these stories are incredible! i wish you could do all three, though my ultimate vote still goes to madness...but this is a close second |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | School Days | 06/18/2006 06:14 am |
| Oh, poor William *pets* I'm always protective of William, too |
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| redwulf50 | School Days | 06/18/2006 04:12 am |
excellent read I loved it  |
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| fallen_angel | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/25/2006 01:34 pm |
| Jamie? kindda cute. maybe you shold use it sometimes in the story. |
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| vladt | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/15/2006 07:41 pm |
| very good read. great potential. thanks for the read. |
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| VWalk | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/15/2006 07:08 am |
I haven't read the other two intros but this one has definitely gotten my attention.
I like the concept a lot. After all who could turn down two Spikes.
Looking forward to the third segment.. and reading the other two intros. |
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| RJ | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/14/2006 03:05 pm |
| The only thing better than one Spike is two! I like the twist you've put on this story. Hope it keeps going. FYI - there are just a few typos here and there (sorry, I'm a grammar grouch). |
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| Lori | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/14/2006 06:44 am |
| Please continue this fic. I'm liking it so far. Thanks. |
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| Cewcew | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/14/2006 12:12 am |
| lol this looks like is going to be a winner. cant wait for the next chapter. |
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| Ravenor | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 08:49 pm |
| Okay twin Spikes... sigh... now it is even harder to choose and I simply can't!! Any chance that you will maybe continue all three... or maybe do one and then another and then another:-) ?? Yes I am greedy what can I say but your stuff is just so great!! |
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| neo_trinityknot | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 08:35 pm |
| Please! Continue this one, I have a weakness for twincest! I love your take on the twins so far. Apparently everyone else likes 'Madness', but I dont see it |
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| neo_trinityknot | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 08:35 pm |
| Please! Continue this one, I have a weakness for twincest! I love your take on the twins so far. Apparently everyone else likes 'Madness', but I dont see it |
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| Sarah | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 08:24 pm |
| You're making my life difficult, I like this story, too. I wish you could keep writing all three of the new stories! |
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| jl1980 | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 07:52 pm |
| love this second chapter too... this should get interesting...which one will he choose? *if* she chooses ;) excellent update...still voting for madness though |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 05:54 pm |
| Mmmm two Spikes, always a big hit with me!! Only thing better than two Spikes is three spikes, muahahahahaha *imagines her own male harem made out of spikes* lol |
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| Dar | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 04:08 pm |
| Twins twice the every thing. love the idea |
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| daisy | Not in Kansas Anymore | 06/13/2006 03:26 pm |
| ohh, yeah another chapter. can't wait for more. soon please |
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| fallen_angel | This Land Is Your Land | 06/25/2006 01:29 pm |
| So Spike is James? New name for him. |
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| vladt | This Land Is Your Land | 06/15/2006 07:36 pm |
| very good read. thanks |
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| Tonia | This Land Is Your Land | 06/13/2006 08:24 pm |
| Yup,it is offical. I'd like to see all three continued. |
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| jl1980 | This Land Is Your Land | 06/13/2006 07:01 pm |
| wow...this one's awesome, too...you're all about the spike/William thing, aren't you? excellent choice...still, ,madness is my first choice, this a close second |
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